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20:36 <Kert> : 03:42:981 (9,10,11,1,2) - 
20:37 <Jenny> : suggestion?
20:37 <Kert> : What bothers me a little is
20:37 <Kert> : 03:43:322 (1,2) - 
20:37 <Kert> : This small spacing
20:37 <Kert> : After that jump
20:37 <Jenny> : it's 1.0
20:38 <Kert> : 03:43:049 (10,11,1) - 
20:38 <Kert> : This is all 1.5
20:38 <Jenny> : yo
20:38 <Jenny> : backforth-jump
20:38 <Jenny> : well, other way around but
20:38 <Jenny> : you know how that's meant i geuss
20:38 <Jenny> : *guess
20:38 <Kert> : It would feel more natural if there will be the same spacing jump to this
20:38 <Kert> : 03:43:458 (2,3,4) - 
20:39 <Jenny> : so you mean spacing these on 1.5 aswell?
20:39 <Kert> : Yes
20:39 <Kert> : http://puu.sh/k3uK
20:39 <Kert> : Like this
20:39 <Jenny> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/261471 mh...
20:40 <Kert> : Though it looks bad because they are almost on the straight line
20:40 <Kert> : Browser loading
20:40 <Jenny> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/261472 feels better
20:41 <Kert> : Well (5) is too close to 2,3,4 then :<
20:41 <Jenny> : mh...
20:42 <Jenny> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/261474 that'd be 1.5-1.5-2.0-1.5 then
20:44 <Kert> : Can you update quick to let me see?
20:44 <Kert> : I can't understand from the pic :<
20:44 <Jenny> : did
20:45 <Kert> : Just put them 
20:45 <Kert> : I mean 2,3,4
20:45 <Kert> : So they 1.5 from the previous note
20:45 <Kert> : And 1.5 from the next one
20:45 <Jenny> : did now :x
20:46 <Kert> : lol this is cool too
20:46 <Kert> : Just a random try
20:46 <Kert> : http://puu.sh/k3wp
20:46 <Jenny> : huh?
20:46 <Jenny> : nah
20:47 <Kert> : But yeah, it's now better then it was before anyway
20:47 <Kert> : And one more place
20:47 <Kert> : 01:11:549 (6,7,8,9,10) - 
20:47 <Kert> : This felt like a little clusterfuck for me :S
20:48 <Kert> : If you like it like that, leave it of course
20:48 <Kert> : If you don't really mind, I'd suggest changing it somehow lol
20:48 <Jenny> : feel free to suggest
20:49 <Jenny> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/261484 like this better?
20:50 <Kert> : Spacing is the same? If yes than it's better
20:50 <Kert> : Though you can still add one repeating slider somewhere if you wish
20:52 <Jenny> : removed the 2 notes after kickslider, felt awkward
20:53 <Jenny> : slider has now 2 aditional reverse-arrows, next note is a jump (well, it's 1/4 so it's not that far)
20:53 <Kert> : Yep cool
20:53 <Kert> : Jump is fine I think
20:53 <Kert> : Let me check quick
20:53 <Kert> : I think I've seen one strange stack somewhere in the map
20:56 <Kert> : Ah
20:56 <Kert> : While I am at it
20:56 <Kert> : 03:25:186 -
20:56 <Kert> : Have you thought about adding a note here?
21:00 <Kert> : That's all from me \o/ Everything else is pretty fine :3

Good job!

Jenny

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Jenny 2012-03-09T14:14:02+00:00

^first kudos of map /o/

Snepif

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Snepif 2012-03-09T21:05:36+00:00

A new mp3 of this song has been released on the band's official website (better quality). Do you have it already or you want me to give it to you?
Edit: here you go -> http://puu.sh/k68s
Can't wait for the album :c

winber1

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winber1 2012-03-09T21:30:27+00:00

Legend

00:19:595 (1) - makes more sense if the new combo was on 00:19:868 (5) -
00:26:276 (2) - i've always found this a little weird when playing this. THe main beat is in the imiddle of the slider. I would either remove one repeat and add a note, or just get rid of the slider completely. Though itisn't a big deal.
00:34:049 (4) - i would add a new combo to emphasize the change in rhyhtm
00:47:822 (9) - remove 1 repeat.
01:16:186 (7) - I also found this a little odd since it starts on a blue tick. better on a white tick imo.
02:17:686 (11) - whistle sounds a little loud here ._.
02:44:277 (4) - better like http://puu.sh/k6cX so that you map the quarter note in the guitar solo. just fits better imo.
03:00:504 (5) - ahhh, you should remove two repeats and add two notes. It is easier to read and feels better. it also makes more sense imo.
03:01:322 (14) - new combo here not on the next note
03:01:732 (4) - the slider should be here. not on the white tick http://puu.sh/k6eu
03:03:504 (3) - it would make more sense if you followed your original pattern with the new combos everything three 1/2 ticks.
04:01:595 (9,10) - combo 9 and 10 just seem too close to each other. you could either space them out, or add notes at 04:01:663 -
04:02:140 (1,2,3,4,5) - not a perfect star

also maybe it's just personal preference, but it's alittle annoying that the new combos don't always lie on the vocals (or some melody) or the main beat. they are sometimes on the fourth beat or 2nd beat or something and it's a little weird.

yea im lazy. hopefully this helps a bit, despite me being a little tired/not wanting to do anything right now. BUT AT LEAST MY MOD CAME AFTER U ASKED ME SO MANY TIMES \:D/

Jenny

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Jenny 2012-03-10T12:26:46+00:00

^changed few things, thanks~

Jenny

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Jenny 2012-03-10T17:11:02+00:00

Just a thing I wanted to say...

00:17:740 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5) - OMG THIS IS HARD

hi Derekku

Suimya

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Suimya 2012-03-10T17:24:35+00:00

ok then seems good to me ~

#1 MAT bubble~

Jenny

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Jenny 2012-03-10T17:25:24+00:00

/me throws a rock at Sekai

Suimya

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Suimya 2012-03-10T17:26:40+00:00

Jenny wrote:
/me throws a rock at Sekai

orz xD

p3n

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p3n 2012-03-10T17:50:40+00:00

Still wont mod this (yet) but looks "challenging" so it might be fun for the tablet guys (and girls). Have this

ShaggoN

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ShaggoN 2012-03-10T18:03:34+00:00

The ultimate crazy stuff we saw before with raised bpm??? i give up xD too hard for me. but i dont care. it's awesome anyways

also i like new vocalist

BleachFTW

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BleachFTW 2012-03-10T18:10:38+00:00

Awesome map

Jenny

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Jenny 2012-03-10T18:18:58+00:00

dat feedback - naisu! D:

eldnl

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eldnl 2012-03-10T18:43:34+00:00

[Legend]

Delete the first timing section, is useless.
HP Drain Rate +1
00:34:376 (2) 1 Grid to the left, because the spacing here is inconsistent and seems very bad.
00:37:376 - Up the volume to 45% please, I almost can't hear the hitsounds. (To be honest, in my opinion, 60% in the entire song is enough)
00:46:103 - ^ Same as above
02:43:103 (10) This slider is totally hidden.
03:02:467 (7) Add a new combo here, because with the white color I can't see the ticks and is harder to read the slowdown.
03:30:558 (7) Different number of the repeats than the other sliders is really hard to read (at least to me) hope you can fix it.
03:39:012 (1) Up the volume here.
04:02:740 (5) Move this note (and the previous 12) one grid to the left and one grid down to fix the star.

Good luck ~

Jenny

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Jenny 2012-03-10T22:46:38+00:00

Hey, this is now app-ed on test build \:D/

http://ha.ppy.sh/b/281

JappyBabes

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JappyBabes 2012-03-11T12:46:09+00:00

Very nice map ^.^ <3 Jenny.

Katsuri

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Katsuri 2012-03-11T15:48:00+00:00

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DarkStoorM

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DarkStoorM 2012-03-11T23:07:04+00:00

If this will be approved, gonna play it whole day and whole night to pass it.
It's just BEAUTIFUL

[and a dem edit]I'm getting goose bumps every time I play it. It just proves that this song is SO AWESOME. Map too :3 it's so nice to play it. And of course, so much fun! KEEP IT UP!

[2nd dem edit]DEM PASSED (Taiko)! Thank you Jenny for this map!

SPOILER

LKs

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LKs 2012-03-12T05:19:23+00:00

From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

General

Actually combo colour is a bit confusing, with the dark blue BG. I‘d suggest a red colour to make this more readable and clear

Legend

00:45:967 (9) - no whistle
00:47:603 (6) - whistle
00:47:876 (9) - whistle on the end
00:55:649 (5) - whistle
02:11:467 (5) - no whistle
04:01:785 (1) - NC

this is tiring, I'm tired out in this weary afternoon (look at my avatar

good map anyway, GL

Jenny

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Jenny 2012-03-12T13:18:36+00:00

I think combo colors are fine (at least noone who testplayed it for me complained and neither do I); anyways, applied the other things you mentioned~

thanks~

XripztEr

XripztEr 2012-03-12T21:38:42+00:00

~~awesome shag's playing~~
orz 220bpm

Jenny

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Jenny 2012-03-12T22:19:59+00:00

I can't even play this myself \:D/

Cristian

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Cristian 2012-03-14T19:35:31+00:00

Can you put it more bigger the circle sizes to 4?

Jenny

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Jenny 2012-03-15T21:18:48+00:00

No.
I won't map CS4 like everyone else does - I love CS5, it's lovely for flowmapping and streaming, get along with it, this is part of my map and mapping.

Circlesize 4 is unfitting to this, so I won't use it - k?

Bobo_old

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Bobo_old 2012-03-17T02:08:49+00:00

Hi

[Legend]

01:25:376 - I'd remove the kiai burst here, doesnt look good.
03:16:308 (11) - I'd replace this with two hitcircles and place them under (10).
03:25:240 - I would add a note here to keep the flow even though there's nothing in the music that indicates it.
03:40:649 - I expected to see kiai here.

:L

EDIT:

Could you mod my Ascension map please? Link's in my sig.

Jenny

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Jenny 2012-03-17T12:53:28+00:00

changed kiaifontain and did little slider-adjustments, thanks for poking there

AngelHoney

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AngelHoney 2012-03-22T04:27:26+00:00

legend

blue bg use blue combocolor o_o http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/271511

03:10:240 - add note ?

nice mapset , really , and it remind me of lesjuh XD ~~(4.5stars ._.; )~~

Jenny

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Jenny 2012-03-22T13:39:26+00:00

AngelHoney wrote:
legend

blue bg use blue combocolor o_o http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/271511

03:10:240 - add note ?

nice mapset , really , and it remind me of lesjuh XD ~~(4.5stars ._.; )~~

i changed the blue color to a more cyan one, added the note and rearranged a part of the guitar solo-kiai (you'll notice)~
thanks~ <3

AHO is moe~

hi there Auto~

lol @AIMod

ORLY?!

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GladiOol 2012-03-22T14:19:12+00:00

00:26:262 - add note. make a 1/4 x 3 stack.
00:34:103 (1,2,3) - Looks weird, with the spacing being diffrent than before.
00:36:285 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - looks/plays bad. the music doesn't ask for 1/4 jumps. keep it with steady spacing.
01:51:558 - the whole speed up here really doesn't work well ><

02:39:421 (12,1) - Don't put anti-jumps inbetween two death streams. It almost looks like 1/4 jump now. Increase spacing by a lot please.
02:40:376 (9,1) 02:41:467 (13,1,2) - I don't know about these... I would increase spacing on these as well. Or simply add one more reverse arrow to the sliders.

02:56:603 (10) - Add one more reverse arrow. Don't stop the stream~
03:02:467 (1) - This slow down doesn't work. Keep it at regular speed and make it a long slider (or just notes).
03:23:740 (3,4,5,6) - these play really bad and look bad.
03:24:830 (3,4,5) - Same ^

04:02:194 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is a very bad looking star formation D: Simply make everything rotate by 72 degrees. This way you get a perfect star (72 x 5 = 360 degrees)

Jenny

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Jenny 2012-03-22T15:06:15+00:00

GladiOol wrote:
00:26:262 - add note. make a 1/4 x 3 stack. - i prefer it this way
00:34:103 (1,2,3) - Looks weird, with the spacing being diffrent than before. - k, applied
00:36:285 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - looks/plays bad. the music doesn't ask for 1/4 jumps. keep it with steady spacing. - k, applied
01:51:558 - the whole speed up here really doesn't work well >< - tbh, i don't think so

02:39:421 (12,1) - Don't put anti-jumps inbetween two death streams. It almost looks like 1/4 jump now. Increase spacing by a lot please. - nobody had problems with playing it like this and it's quite fine imo, even though i get your point
02:40:376 (9,1) 02:41:467 (13,1,2) - I don't know about these... I would increase spacing on these as well. Or simply add one more reverse arrow to the sliders. - these are fine, at least me and my testers think so

02:56:603 (10) - Add one more reverse arrow. Don't stop the stream~ - k, the "caused jump" is no problem I guess since it's a sliderjump and effectively... changes like nothing there
03:02:467 (1) - This slow down doesn't work. Keep it at regular speed and make it a long slider (or just notes). - k, adjusted following circles aswell
03:23:740 (3,4,5,6) - these play really bad and look bad. - i like them quite much~
03:24:830 (3,4,5) - Same ^ - i like them quite much~

04:02:194 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is a very bad looking star formation D: Simply make everything rotate by 72 degrees. This way you get a perfect star (72 x 5 = 360 degrees) - didn't do star-patterns much before, thanks for advice, adjusted

TicClick

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TicClick 2012-03-22T16:22:37+00:00

You should fix placement of new combos in some places. They should be mostly on big white ticks to follow music, because big white tick is the place where a new part of it comes in. For example, add it to 00:19:922 (5) and remove from 00:19:649 (1); add it to 00:26:467 (3) and remove from 00:26:194 (1) and so on.
00:36:762 (8,9,10) - why stacked?
00:39:694 (2) - if you wanna follow vocals, start it 1/2 earlier, instead of previous note
00:41:740 — here you can increase volume because of vocals. Make it 80%, then add inherited offset to return volume back to 60% on next blue tick
01:01:376 — I think just a fountain is enough
1. Don't forget to remove other offset on 01:03:490 as well
01:05:740 — you better put a note or a slider here because of vocals, so make 01:05:467 (8) two times shorter
01:07:649 — start new repeating slider here, there's no need to make 01:07:376 (9) longer than previous one
01:08:058 (2) - the same about following vocals. Start it instead of previous note
01:08:740 (5) - and once again, its end lays on big white tick but there's new part of lyrics. It's illogical to use old slider, put something new on 01:09:012 instead
02:30:558 (5,6) - I hope it's comfortable enough for playing
02:33:830 (2,3,4) - the way too loud. Increase it by 10 percent, not by 20
03:24:830 (3,5) - too close to hp bar, consider moving them down
03:30:558 (7) - uhh, you better remove two last repeats and move 03:30:967 (8,9) 1/2 back, it will follow music better
03:32:876 (9,10,11) - #10 looks like it fell down
03:40:649 — no kiai.. quick, turn it back!
03:43:308 — I hear that you should put a note here

So epic, I haven't heard DF for a long time.

Jenny

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Jenny 2012-03-22T20:33:30+00:00

TicClick wrote:
You should fix placement of new combos in some places. They should be mostly on big white ticks to follow music, because big white tick is the place where a new part of it comes in. For example, add it to 00:19:922 (5) and remove from 00:19:649 (1); add it to 00:26:467 (3) and remove from 00:26:194 (1) and so on. - fixed some, you might take a look and tell me if you mind the ones that are probably left over
00:36:762 (8,9,10) - why stacked? - changed
00:39:694 (2) - if you wanna follow vocals, start it 1/2 earlier, instead of previous note - changed
00:41:740 — here you can increase volume because of vocals. Make it 80%, then add inherited offset to return volume back to 60% on next blue tick - changed
01:01:376 — I think just a fountain is enough - changed
Don't forget to remove other offset on 01:03:490 as well
01:05:740 — you better put a note or a slider here because of vocals, so make 01:05:467 (8) two times shorter - changed
01:07:649 — start new repeating slider here, there's no need to make 01:07:376 (9) longer than previous one - changed
01:08:058 (2) - the same about following vocals. Start it instead of previous note - changed
01:08:740 (5) - and once again, its end lays on big white tick but there's new part of lyrics. It's illogical to use old slider, put something new on 01:09:012 instead - changed
02:30:558 (5,6) - I hope it's comfortable enough for playing - it is, imo
02:33:830 (2,3,4) - the way too loud. Increase it by 10 percent, not by 20 - changed
03:24:830 (3,5) - too close to hp bar, consider moving them down - changed
03:30:558 (7) - uhh, you better remove two last repeats and move 03:30:967 (8,9) 1/2 back, it will follow music better - changed
03:32:876 (9,10,11) - #10 looks like it fell down - saywat (explain more)
03:40:649 — no kiai.. quick, turn it back! - actually it feels better without
03:43:308 — I hear that you should put a note here - i hear that i shouldn't put a note there
So epic, I haven't heard DF for a long time. - ikr

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