Ritaka wrote:

Random mod-wave coming your way~

[General]
-Try 180.02 as the BPM and 855 as your offset. (Although it might not be exact, as I'm not a pro at offsets.)
-Don't use anything above 1/4 Beat Snap Divisor unless you absolutely need to. Therefore, you'll probably need to re-map most of this song using this method.
-Delete both Inherited Points at the very beginning of both difficulties. Those aren't really needed.
-For the tags, you should add things like DECO*27, Vocaloid, Hatsune Miku.
-As for the audio in both difficulties, I'd probably keep the hitsound volume at 80%. It doesn't seem loud to me, but someone else might think differently.

[Easy]
-Turn the Slider Tick Rate down to 1. 3 is way too much here. (Although you could possibly use 2.)
-Spacing in this difficulty needs to be fixed. Try using Distance Snap while placing notes to get an idea of where to place them. (Using AIMod will also tell you if the distance from two beats is too far, but I don't recommend using it for every single note.)
-The notes in this difficulty aren't really following the vocals (which I'm assuming you were trying to do). Make sure that every beat you place goes along with either the song or the background music when mapping a song.
-Re-snap the notes in this difficulty. (Timing > Resnap All Notes) Be sure to do this every time you add a new timing section to a song, and make sure your notes sound the same afterwards.
-In the song setup, make the Approach Rate a little higher, but not too much. Everything else there seems fine.

[Insane]
-Turn the Slider Tick Rate here down to 1 too. 3 is too much.
-In the song setup, I'd lower the Approach Rate and the Overall Difficulty a bit. Also lower the HP Drain Rate by 1.
-Resnap the notes in this difficulty too.
-Gotta fix the spacing in this difficulty too. Remember, Distance Snap is a pretty vital tool in Beatmap making.
-Earlier, I mentioned not using AIMod on certain combos/notes. 00:45:165 > 00:45:850 is a good example of this. You can probably space these notes out, but I wouldn't space them out as far as they are now. Try making them closer.
-00:50:349 - 00:50:904 > This stream isn't really necessary.
-Notes in this song don't seem to be following anything in this difficulty too. Make sure to test your map again and again while fixing things to make sure notes sound absolutely right.

Just a few more things here.
You can find a guide to make some pretty awesome sliders here.
All you need to do is do some re-mapping, spacing and whatnot, and ask others for modding to make this map better and better.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Please don't use a black combo color, it's hard to see. Also, watch some of your spacing on Hard, a few parts are either too close or too far.

winber1 wrote:

Here you go. Good luck on rank. I'll check this map every once in a while on my own time, so when you get maps, you don't have to consistently call me. If you still want to tell me I dont mind.

I'll be disappointed if it doesn't get ranked

winber1 wrote:

oops. I totally forgot to tell you that I used a custom soft hitclap.

Just place it in the folder. apparently i can't send .wav files over the site, so it's a zip file now

Wiinter wrote:

[Winber1's Insane]
00:06:187 (1) - remove new combo? doesn't fit much imo just following my previous pattern so i'm keeping it.
00:28:851 (1,2,3) - this anti-jump didn't fit imo. i suggest you to use regular spacing here i'll see. If people keep complaining about this I'll change it.
00:33:518 - 0,50x on sliderspeed? x_x it's too much.. specially without a warning. for players who already know the song it might be ok, but for the one who doesn't this will be really confusing. i suggest you to either use 0,75x instead or add some warning Well, there's a reason why i put substantially less notes, so people can understand what I did here, and I really feel that it fits. I don't feel a warning or anyhting is needed. The player should definitely be able to realize what's happening in a measure that requires the player to press/click twice
01:19:512 (1,2,3,4) - anti-jump doesn't fit as i said earlier i kinda want more input on this before changing it.

This map is a little more experimental with spacing i guess, and well i really would like to keep the spacing on this map. I've begun to dislike how even my spacing had usually been in previous songs, so I kinda wanted to deviate from that original way of mapping a bit.

Unsnapped slider end 01:42:177 (1) k

winber1 wrote:

Also you should really stop giving me kudosu >_>. You should only give kudosu to mods

(actually you weren't even supposed to give me kudosu for the guest diff, but that's ok.)

Garven wrote:

All fixed. Keep that itchy trigger finger at bay, nekonomitsu.

Also: Good song choice to map. I look forward to seeing it later~

winber1 wrote:

yay i lost my kudosu :T

now everything is back to normal

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

Random Mod, yeah
[easy]
00:30:145 (1) - New combo?
00:36:811 (4) - remove New combo
00:45:143 (1) - delete it?
00:45:976 - delete kiai time
00:46:143 - add kiai here please lol
00:49:476 (1) - NC
00:50:142 (2) - REMOVE NEW COMBO.
00:52:809 (5) - ^
01:06:807 - - useless green line
01:18:139 (1) - NC
01:18:806 (2) - remove nc
If you think you're right.You can skip my post aha.
It's
Beautiful D:

BeatofIke wrote:

Thanks for the kudosu. I'll use it to star your map.

Lolicore Flandre wrote:

Mod Request Complete, sorry for the delay, lazy lazy
Use what you want!

[General]

The video isnt playing in any difficulty.Could be from me I dont know...
Winber1's Insane HAS BOOKMARKS, THANK YOU KAMISAMA ;A;

[Easy]

00:49:476 (1) - remove clap
00:50:809 (3) - remove clap at the end and add a clap at the beginning of the slider
00:52:142 (1) - remove clap
00:54:809 (2) - ^
01:55:468 (1) - add finish
01:58:801 (4) - remove clap
01:56:802 (3) - remove the clap from the middle and add one at the end of the slider
02:03:134 (2) - remove clap
02:04:134 (4) - ^
02:04:801 (1) - maybe lower the volume here to 50%?
02:04:801 (1) - make it end at 02:12:467

[Normal]

00:01:314 (2) - this note isnt needed imo, consider removing it?
00:02:648 (2) - ^
00:03:981 (2) - ^
00:06:647 (5) - ^
00:07:980 (2) - ^
00:09:314 (3) - ^
00:24:479 (5) - ^
00:29:811 (6) - ^
00:39:810 (6) - ^
00:46:143 (1) - add finish
01:55:468 (1) - ^
02:04:801 (1) - make it end at 02:12:467

[Hard]

00:01:814 (3) - NC
00:05:314 (6) - ^
00:38:144 (7) - ^
00:46:143 (1) - add finish
00:51:476 (5) - NC
00:51:809 (1) - remove NC
00:52:142 (1) - ^
00:52:475 (5) - NC
01:42:137 (4) - ^
01:44:470 (1) - remove NC
01:45:303 (4) - NC
01:52:802 (1,2,3) - these notes dont fit with the music imo, consider changing them
02:00:802 (5) - NC
02:01:134 (1) - remove NC
02:01:801 (5) - NC
02:06:134 (1) - add the finish

[Winber1's Insane]

I like this diff!

00:06:187 (1) - remove NC
00:06:187 (1) again - this note isn't consistent with the previous spacing, move it closer.
00:10:686 (3,4) - move them farther from 00:09:854 (1,2) -
00:28:851 (1,2,3) - notes are too clo-oh new combo colour thats fine =w=....
00:32:684 (1) - NC maybe ?

Extra Suggestion for END
02:06:341 (1) - shorten the spinner to 02:08:174
02:08:507 (x) - add a circle here
02:08:840 (1) - make a new spinner that ends at 02:11:507 and add finish if you want

Thats it, yoku dekimashita!! Hmmm have a star~
Good luck!

Lolicore Flandre wrote:

[Winber1's Insane]

I like this diff!

00:06:187 (1) - remove NC no sorry.
00:06:187 (1) again - this note isn't consistent with the previous spacing, move it closer. it's fine. and it's perfectly readable
00:10:686 (3,4) - move them farther from 00:09:854 (1,2) - again, it should be fine. more experienced players can understand this
00:28:851 (1,2,3) - notes are too clo-oh new combo colour thats fine =w=....
00:32:684 (1) - NC maybe ?not exactly sure, but there's already a new combo there? :S

Extra Suggestion for END sorry i just like having one spinner
02:06:341 (1) - shorten the spinner to 02:08:174
02:08:507 (x) - add a circle here
02:08:840 (1) - make a new spinner that ends at 02:11:507 and add finish if you want

Thats it, yoku dekimashita!! Hmmm have a star~
Good luck!

winber1 wrote:

Lolicore Flandre wrote:

[Winber1's Insane]

I like this diff!

00:06:187 (1) - remove NC no sorry.
00:06:187 (1) again - this note isn't consistent with the previous spacing, move it closer. it's fine. and it's perfectly readable
00:10:686 (3,4) - move them farther from 00:09:854 (1,2) - again, it should be fine. more experienced players can understand this
00:28:851 (1,2,3) - notes are too clo-oh new combo colour thats fine =w=....
00:32:684 (1) - NC maybe ?not exactly sure, but there's already a new combo there? :S

Extra Suggestion for END sorry i just like having one spinner
02:06:341 (1) - shorten the spinner to 02:08:174
02:08:507 (x) - add a circle here
02:08:840 (1) - make a new spinner that ends at 02:11:507 and add finish if you want

Thats it, yoku dekimashita!! Hmmm have a star~
Good luck!

Thanks for the mod! nothing changed, but mods are always appreciated :3 ~~

Nekonomitsu, I don't know if you have seen what i wrote earlier, but have you checked out offset 830? It seems to work better. If not, then I can change my offset back. (you can just select all the green timing lines and move them by 15 ms, then resnap all the notes. Just an easier way to change the offset if you didn't know already)

Backfire wrote:

Nobody asked to make a taiko? Can I make a taiko?

Backfire wrote:

Mmmmk, taiko is done.
I'm a little slow.

Jacob wrote:

From my queue.

[General]

• You don't need "vocaloid2" and "VOCALOID2" in the tags. Just leave "vocaloid2".
• In "Backfire's Taiko Oni", the tags are different from the rest of the difficulties. Please fix this.
• Delete the unused .osb file.
• In all of the difficulties, there are many unsnapped timing sections, meaning that timing sections are not on any one tick. Please move them to the nearest tick (1/2 or 1/4 depending on the difficulty)
• Since you are a new mapper, I'd stick to larger grid sizes like 1-3 until you really get the hang of it.

[Easy]

• There are a lot of 1 note combos. Normally, this would be okay, but Easy difficulties generally shouldn't have too many combos.
00:02:163 - Whistle (this creates a nice effects with the pitch changes in Miku's voice.) feel free to ignore any of them
00:03:163 - ^
00:04:829 - ^
00:05:496 - ^
00:07:163 - ^
00:08:829 - ^
00:09:829 - ^
00:11:496 - Finish
00:28:163 - Do this (current layout is unaligned) -

SPOILER

00:36:163 - Whistle
00:38:163 - Finish
00:39:496 - Whistle
00:43:643 - ^
00:45:976 - ^
00:46:829 - Clap
00:49:496 - ^
00:52:163 - ^
00:54:163 - If you do my clap suggestions, remove this clap
00:54:829 - Clap
01:55:496 - Very inconsistent hitsounds (claps specifically) starting here. Try starting the claps on 01:56:163 and follow the pattern I gave in my mods for your claps above.
02:04:829 - Instead of starting the spinner here, start it at 02:06:163 and map out the part before it.
02:08:496 - End the first spinner HERE, make it silent, and begin a second spinner at 02:08:829 and make it silent also.

[Normal]

• Follow the hitsound suggestions that I gave while modding your easy difficulty. Currently, your map is really empty in terms of hitsounds.
• Once again, there are very inconsistent claps. (I'm going to try to focus on the actual map now instead of the hitsounds.)
00:34:163 - Resnap this to the grid using distance snap (click it and drag it just a bit with distance snap on)
02:04:829 - Please follow the spinner suggestion I gave in the [Easy] mod.

[Hard]

• Hitsounds in this difficulty are better, but still somewhat inconsistent.
00:24:163 - Why not do something like this (plays out better, also remember to look at the beat timeline in the screenshot) -

SPOILER

00:28:829 - ^
01:12:829 - Please fix this slider like so (as it is slightly unaligned) -

SPOILER

01:13:496 - ^
01:27:496 - Fix this slider -

SPOILER

01:42:163 - Try this (this is on the left side of the grid) -

SPOILER

02:06:163 - Remember my spinner suggestions, please.

[Winber1's Insane]

00:13:828 - How these notes overlap the slider isn't very good looking.
00:23:994 - ^
01:08:739 - Try a pattern like this (this is less confusing and plays out well) -

SPOILER

01:11:322 - ^
01:13:988 - ^
02:06:316 - Please check the spinner suggestion I made while modding the [Easy] difficulty.

Jacob wrote:

[Winber1's Insane]

00:13:828 - How these notes overlap the slider isn't very good looking.
00:23:994 - ^ at first i thot u meant the stack looks bad, but then i realized u just inherently don't like this, but i still do
01:08:739 - Try a pattern like this (this is less confusing and plays out well) - i don't really see how it's confusing, and at first the vocals actually play this note which is weird, but i still like following the vocals so I did but then it makes my first feel weird if I don't do it multiple so I decided to do it three times. I don't think there's much of a problem here.

SPOILER

01:11:322 - ^
01:13:988 - ^
02:06:316 - Please check the spinner suggestion I made while modding the [Easy] difficulty.I've been told a few times and I thought about it. I just don't like having two spinners like that. I would rather map the first half and put a spinner if worse comes to worst

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's see what i can find.

General:
The lead in time is inconsistent. make sure it's the same for all diffs.
Remove the audio of the video to reduce the filesize.
You forgot to add the video on the BG. to do it go to design, click on insert background and click on the video to insert it.

Easy:
00:11:496 (4) - unstack this because beginners won't expect stacked notes as they might hit too early or late.
00:23:830 (3) - ^
00:28:829 (2,1) - spacing error. it's at 0.92 and the regular spacing is at 0.8.
00:32:163 (2,3,1) - same as 00:11:496
00:46:163 (1) - ^
01:12:829 (1,2,3,4) - 2 problems. unstack (1,2,3). same reason as above and for (4), beginners won't know when this slider will end. to make it easier end the slider at 01:14:829 and add a repeat. it's a lot easier and follows vocals nicely.
01:40:496 (2) - same as 00:11:496

Normal:
i'm concerned about the breaks about this. because it needs to be even in some parts.
00:19:829 - what the...why did you stop here? please add notes here. you wer doing so good until this came up.
01:02:163 (1) - if you want to keep the breaks consistent then delete this note.
01:12:496 (4) - i don't see a reason why a clap is here.
01:29:163 - like i said about the breaks.

Hard:
again with the breaks.
00:04:496 (3,4,5) - remove (5) because it's not following anything. suggest that you replace (4,5) with a 1/1 slider to flow with the vocals properly.
00:43:496 (1,2,3) - replace all this for a slider with a repeat. it's easier IMO
01:02:163 (1) - same as normal.
01:16:996 (3) - delete this note. it looks like it isn't following anything.
01:29:163 - same as normal

Winber1's Insane:
00:35:829 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - how about making all this a star pattern? it would make a nice challenge for players. here are the 1st few notes as a reference.
01:25:163 (1) - how about making a curved slider to form a blanket around (5)
01:47:163 (4,5) - i was expecting this to align to (1,2). IMO it looks nicer and should be like this

this is the best i can do. GL

R a r e wrote:

All suggestions~
You can ignore if you don't like it.

Easy
Drain or OD -1
01:18:163 (1) - I prefer to finish. remove clap
01:31:829 (1,1) - remove new combo
01:38:163 (1) - ^

Normal
00:05:329 (2) - remove whistle
00:19:496 (6) - this is way too weird.Why the hitsounds change to Soft all of a sudden when the song hasn't changed in anything?
00:24:663 (1) - remove spinner. Don't need this.
00:27:496 (1) - add finish to start of the slider

Hard
00:19:829 (2,3) - more large spacing
00:27:496 (1) - add finish
01:40:829 (x) - add note

Winber1's Insane
00:39:159 (2) - remove clap to 2 repeat point

nice map~
no kd pls because personally I don't like Modding

Byakugan249 wrote:

Winber1's Insane:
00:35:829 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - how about making all this a star pattern? it would make a nice challenge for players. hmm, it's logical, but i kinda want to first go in a circle first. just personal preference i guess. here are the 1st few notes as a reference.
01:25:163 (1) - how about making a curved slider to form a blanket around (5) again, personal preference and opinion. i just like how the line sliders are on opposite sides of combo 5.
01:47:163 (4,5) - i was expecting this to align to (1,2). IMO it looks nicer and should be like this This was a ctrl+H and ctrl+V of the other side ._.

Beren wrote:

Hi/


[Easy]
00:00:829 (1) - add whistle
00:07:496 (1) - ^
00:38:829 (2) - ^
01:26:830 (4) - NC
01:30:829 (1) - remove NC
02:01:496 (3) - add clap

[Normal]
00:00:830 (1) - add whistle
00:05:496 (3) - remove whistle
00:22:163 (1) - add finish
00:48:829 (1) - ^
00:55:163 (1) - tune down the volume
01:07:496 (1) - add finish
01:07:496 (1,2,3) - remove clap
01:18:163 (1) - add clap
01:48:163 (1) - tune down the volume

[Hard]
00:35:496 (4) - add finish
00:38:163 (1) - ^
00:40:163 (1) - tune down the volume
00:45:496 (2) - add finish
01:42:163 (1) - like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/260626
01:47:829 (1) - tune down the volume

[Insane]
00:40:830 (1) - x:290 y:284

GL~

Barney Stinson wrote:

From queue, sorry for delay

Generals: Cut mp3 file if u're not going to map it for song's total lenght. Also, I don't think is a good thing copy-paste whoole sections of timing

Easy:
nothing

Normal:
00:13:163 (2) - add clap
00:15:829 (2) - ^
00:16:163 (4) - remove it
00:16:829 (1) - Add clap
00:18:496 (2) - ^
00:18:663 (3) - Remove it
00:29:829 (6) - Remove this note, feels better
00:39:829 - ^
00:54:829 (6) - make symmetrical with (3)

Hard:
00:06:829 (5) - remove it

Insane:
nothing.

That's all. Such a good map!

1. 160kbps .mp3? Wow, pretty unique Well, it's rankable though. And if you don't want to map this song until the end, just cut it so that the size of the .osz will be smaller.
2. The .mp3's filename has "Two Breaths Walking" being the title of the song, so why use "Nisoku Hokou" here?
3. There's a video inside the song folder, and yet it didn't appear when I modded this. Don't know if this is just me or what...

1. 02:06:163 (1) - End this spinner at 02:08:163?
2. 02:08:829 (1) - Begin this at 02:08:496?

1. 00:16:496 (5) - Clap?
2. 00:19:829 (1,2) - ^, and for the slider, only add it to the end.
3. 00:21:163 (4) - ^
4. 00:21:829 (6) - ^
5. 01:42:163 (1) - ^, at the end.
6. 01:43:829 (3) - ^
7. 02:06:163 (1) - Same as Easy
8. 02:08:829 (1) - ^

1. 02:06:163 (1) - Same as Easy
2. 02:08:829 (1) - ^

1. I don't know why the mapper writes his own name with a capital letter there while the guy knows that his (CMIIW) name is all-lowercase. Whatever, don't really care
2. 01:12:830 (1) - Remove NC?
3. 01:13:163 (2) - NC? (Only do this if you're doing the above one.)

Hinsvar wrote:

[*]The .mp3's filename has "Two Breaths Walking" being the title of the song, so why use "Nisoku Hokou" here?

winber1 wrote:

I resnapped the notes and that's it. I don't think the new combos suggestion makes that much sense, and that slider is in a good place imo.
and for anyone who ever asks me why i capitalize the first letter, it's just what i do. can't really explain why. It looks weird to me if i don't capitalize it, yet i hate it if my username is capitalized. let's just say i'm weird and leave it at that.

If you change the BPM to 180 i will be glad to resnap my notes again for you.

Mythol wrote:

Hey neko! :3
Request from our queue.

[General]
woof~ :3

[Easy]
00:01:830 (2,3) - Is there a reason why these aren't distance snapped while similar ones right after it are?
00:36:496 - I think there should be a note here. http://puu.sh/mwbL <Placement suggestion, don't use if you have a better idea or don't agree with it.

[Normal]
00:35:163 (5) - Replace with 1/1 slider?
00:40:829 (1) - Maybe shorten this to the previous blue tick, and start another spinner from where this used to end? And end the 2nd one on 00:44:829.
00:55:496 (1) - End where kiai ends?
01:13:829 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - That's an awful lot of notes in a row.. can something be done? :/
01:37:496 (7) - Replace with 1/1 slider?
01:43:829 (3) - 1/4 slider?
01:48:829 (1) - Same as the spinner suggestion above.

[Hard]
00:13:329 (6) - I don't think this fits very well. Use same length as 5 and start on the white?
01:17:330 (3) - 1/1 slider and remove 4?
02:01:163 (2,3,4) - ctrl + r 3 and 4?
Nice hard.

[Insane]
00:29:993 (1,2) - Very confusing... reduce spacing please.. (x2.56) orz
Really confusing insane.. but not bad at all.

Mitsuneko wrote:

randomshitbecauseiaccidentlypostedtwicesoignorethisposttoo

384,288,24830,6,12,B|480:312|536:200|480:88|384:112,2,320

288,240,36830,6,4,B|336:216|408:240|424:288|424:288|408:336|336:360|288:336,1,320,0|4

232,192,24163,2,0,B|180:188|156:224|156:224|108:216|68:236|40:276,1,210,8|8

Unrankable if in red and bold
Consider if in bold only
Suggested if in normal font

• • Open all .osu files and change... (you can add other colours if you want to, for example a darker red)
  

  [Colours]
  Combo1 : 177,124,109
  Combo2 : 201,54,54

• • 00:36:830 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 00:38:829 (2) - Add "New Combo".
  • 00:40:829 (1) - End this spinner at 00:43:163 (white tick). Start a new spinner at 00:43:496 (white tick) and end it at 00:44:829 (white tick). Delete 00:45:163 (1) and add a circle at 00:45:496 (white tick).
  • 01:26:830 (1) - Delete this slider. Add a circle here. Move 01:28:163 (5) at 01:27:496 (white tick) and add a repetition.
  • 01:32:829 (5,1) - Delete (1) and add a repetition.
  • 01:38:829 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 01:41:496 (x) - ^
  • 01:48:163 (1) - Start this spinner at 01:50:163 (white tick) and end it at 01:52:496 (white tick). Start a new spinner at 01:52:829 (white tick) and end it at 01:54:163 (white tick). Delete 01:54:496 (1) and 01:55:163 (3). Start a slider at 01:48:163 (white tick), end it at 01:48:829 (white tick) and add a repetition.
  • 02:06:163 (1) - End this spinner at 02:08:163 (white tick). Start a new spinner at 02:08:829 (white tick) and end it at 02:11:496 (white tick).

• • 00:43:996 (x) - Start a slider here and end it at 00:43:996 (white tick). Add a circle at 00:44:829 (white tick).
  • 01:06:829 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 01:07:163 (x) - ^
  • 01:38:829 (x) - ^
  • 01:48:829 (1) - Start this spinner at 01:50:163 (white tick). Start a slider at 01:53:163 (white tick), end it at 01:53:496 (white tick) and add 2 repetitions. Start a slider at 01:48:829 (white tick) and end it at 01:49:496 (white tick).
  • 02:06:163 (1,1) - End the first spinner at 02:08:163 (white tick) and start the second spinner at 02:08:829 (white tick).

• • 00:03:163 (7) - Add "New Combo".
  • 00:03:829 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 00:08:496 (6) - Add "New Combo".
  • 00:08:829 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 00:09:829 (1) - ^
  • 01:48:829 (1) - Start this spinner at 01:50:496 (white tick). Add a slider at 01:48:829 (white tick), end it at 01:49:496 (white tick) and add a repetition.
  • 02:06:163 (1,1) - End the first spinner at 02:08:163 (white tick) and start the second spinner at 02:08:829 (white tick).

• • 01:06:829 (x) - Add a circle here. Start a slider at 01:06:996 (red tick), end it at 01:07:079 (blue tick) and add a repetition.