tutuhaha wrote:

【笨蛋一般矜持的阿黄】
唔打起来感觉不错，很流畅也很帅哟！=w=
阿黄这个难度的letterboxbreak没关哟fixed
阿黄要小心的是你的slider有些可能碰到了HP条，不管是213的modder还是213的那些啥啥啥一般都会挑这种
很无聊对吧！等他们挑出来再改吧233 我也觉得213的modder十分欠扁

01:16:883 (1) - 从这里开始我还是建议你多一点变化
这一段有点像反震最后一段，全部都是围绕中心点进行单一性的对称啊之类的，有点缺乏变化
因为我感觉我一直在↑↓而没有←→【...】
然后最后这一段可以适当的加一点note，感觉前面节奏都很饱满然后到这里就松散了许多 没事 这样就可以了
[u]


Kanon
两个音效方面的修改了 whis多的地方我当做一首歌比较高潮的地方来看的

kirinoimouto22 wrote:

Hi, from ~ Suzutsukikanade & kirinoimouto22 Modding Queue ~

Lol you chose the same music as me to map but i can't submit ><
This seems fun to map.

[General]
Source: Kill me Baby
But in Myanimelist says "Baby, Please Kill Me" so if you want to change ok, ok if you do not want to change too. But I think that would put "Kill Me Baby." I am still not sure.. as you said, I can got both those sources on the Internet so I still not sure which one I should keep, so I may keep it for now and waiting for further suggestions~

[Insane]
AR+1? AR9 is too high for this map, AR8 works much better imo.
00:47:690 (2): Spacing.I guess it is fine.
Good job here, follows the vocal and instrumental perfectly, really enjoyed it.


[BakaHard]
00:28:929 (8): I think you should remove this note, but it's just a suggestion. For me deleting this would be better. Ah yes, i think the spacing here (8,9) is not very good.
00:43:247 (3,4,5,6,7): Switch to a slider? I think it would be better, and I think this is more of an Insane than for a Hard.
00:48:020-00:49:156 (1): The use of the spinner here is unnecessary, at least for me.
00:51:656-00:52:792 (1): ^
01:14:156 (3,4,5,6,7): Same as 00:43:247.
01:25:747 (5): Start the spinner here.

[Gu's Normal]
Why the snap distance is 0.6x?
00:10:292 (x): Add a note here, suggestion only.I guess it is not that necessary
Nice diff.

[fanzhen's Easy]
01:15:520 (2): Spacing? seems fine.

Nice Map. I hope I have helped in something.

kirinoimouto22 wrote:

[BakaHard]
00:28:929 (8): I think you should remove this note, but it's just a suggestion. For me deleting this would be better. Ah yes, i think the spacing here (8,9) is not very good.put(8) under (7)
00:43:247 (3,4,5,6,7): Switch to a slider? I think it would be better, and I think this is more of an Insane than for a Hard.
00:48:020-00:49:156 (1): The use of the spinner here is unnecessary, at least for me.
00:51:656-00:52:792 (1): ^
01:14:156 (3,4,5,6,7): Same as 00:43:247.
01:25:747 (5): Start the spinner here.

thanks

Leorda wrote:

Gu's Normal[/b]
01:00:520 (1) - Too far from spinner for normal diff, you need to make it closer K
01:13:247 (1,2,3,4,5) - I wouldn't reccomend that 1/2 clicks in Normal diff. So I suggest you to change the pattern for this change 2 circles to a slider.
01:25:860 (1) - I suggest you to change the samplesoft from Normal to Soft. It's weird having a tock song in low volume leave to nymph

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO

BakaHard
00:08:474 (2,3,4,5) - Hmm, the approach circle would be messy, after 1/2 click and then 1/4 click in one stack. This could be confusing for players while gameplay, or just me.... put (1) under (2) now I think it is better XD
00:45:974 (1) - Sudden slow slider is makes confusing.... Try to decrease the spacing? already add nc?
00:53:247 (1) - I think sudden fast slider makes confusing for players. Since this slider is on calm part in song, consider to make this slider slowly ok fixed
01:26:315 (1) - I suggest you to change the samplesoft from Normal to Soft. It's weird having a tock song in low volume

thanks

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO

General
* Your offset +10ms late fixed
* Set a custom combo color? nah I think default are okey.
* Set the kiai from 01:00:520 ~ 01:16:883. Do it for all diffs I don't really think there could be called as kiai time, it doesn't fit imo, so I didn't set it.


Easy
* Map this diff until end of song please, like others diff okey

00:53:247 (1) - Too soon from spinner, or the beginners will can't reach the head slider after spin the spinner move it nearer to the center of the screen


Gu's Normal
01:00:520 (1) - Too far from spinner for normal diff, you need to make it closer
01:13:247 (1,2,3,4,5) - I wouldn't reccomend that 1/2 clicks in Normal diff. So I suggest you to change the pattern for this
01:25:860 (1) - I suggest you to change the samplesoft from Normal to Soft. It's weird having a tock song in low volume


BakaHard
00:08:474 (2,3,4,5) - Hmm, the approach circle would be messy, after 1/2 click and then 1/4 click in one stack. This could be confusing for players while gameplay, or just me....
00:45:974 (1) - Sudden slow slider is makes confusing.... Try to decrease the spacing?
00:53:247 (1) - I think sudden fast slider makes confusing for players. Since this slider is on calm part in song, consider to make this slider slowly
01:26:315 (1) - I suggest you to change the samplesoft from Normal to Soft. It's weird having a tock song in low volume


Insane
01:25:747 (1) - I suggest you to change the samplesoft from Normal to Soft. It's weird having a tock song in low volume I am not sure what this means, cuz the spinner is almost silenced, I think it is alright? didn't find anything weird.


Nice map~

Teru21 wrote:

Hi! from my mod queue.. an epic song lol

[fanzhen's Easy]
00:22:792 (1) - x:376 y:224 I think current is better
00:38:701 (3) - the 3rd point slider , 1 grid right I think they are the same?

[Baka's Hard]
00:32:679 - add circle not necessary I think

GL and have my star~ X3

osuplayer111 wrote:

[BakaHard]

01:26:325 (1) - End this spinner at 01:27:120 like the other difficulties. ok,deleted the last slider and change the spinner.

[Insane]

00:43:257 (3) - New combo. added.
Good job!

BakaHuang wrote:

应该把我的那行换成屎黄色

Haneii wrote:

Artist field shouldn't be the names of the anime characters but the voice actors who sing the song ;~; - Mutsumi Tamura & Chinatsu Akasak. "Yasuna" and "Sonya" should havebe in tags instead ().

Also, @ Yasuna to Sonya - Since when do we use Japanese (other than the artist name of course) in the artist field?

Please don't see this as me attacking the map (It's a nice set, and I love the song. Thank you for mapping it ^_^), I'm just pointing it out in case it's easy to fix (Although artists are in tags so it isn't a big deal when it comes to search)/bring attention to it so it doesn't happen again.