1. Collab (5 stars, 758 notes)

Miya wrote:

collab eh? :3
Good luck!

LKs wrote:

as pre mod request via in-game PM, mod#1 here.

General

mapset is clean. but maybe make the offest 923, the present one sounds a bit late. Fixed

Collab

00:08:192 (3) - move this to 00:08:348 and adjust the position of note (2)&(3). triplet begins on whitle tick will make your rhythm a bit confusing. Fixed
00:36:239 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - for keep the feeling of consistency while playing, my suggestion is http://puu.sh/iz43 Fixed
00:40:614 (4) - move this note a bit left, you used flip horizontally though. it just forms a collimation error that you were setting this too far from the y axis Fixed
00:53:426 (1) - remove whistle on the beginning
00:57:489 (6) - add whistle
00:55:301 (9) - move the whistle to the end of the slider
00:57:489 (6) - remove whistle on the end
00:58:426 (1) - remove whistle on the beginning
01:01:551 (3) - 00:55:301 (9) - move the whistle to the end of the slider
01:10:926 (7) - make this remotely upon 01:10:145 (5,6) - (increase spacing)
01:24:520 - clap
01:24:989 - clap
01:25:458 - clap
01:25:614 - clap
01:25:926 (1) - move the the section here

02:23:427 (1) - this convert of NC1-C2 sounds so suddenly, I find nothing in the music that supports your do, anyways
02:55:302 (6) - I personally suggest move this whistle to 7

GL

W_Force wrote:

처음해보는 모딩이라 깔끔하게 무시하셔도 됩니다 ;ㅁ;

Suggestion

Collab

00:28:891 (4) - 노트 추가 (배치는 가운데에 해주시는게 좋을듯 해요 'ㅁ')

00:29:516 (4) - ^

00:45:610 (2,3,4,5,6) - 이런 배치는 어떠세요? http://puu.sh/izvM

01:06:235 (4) - 디스탠스 스냅만큼 밑으로 내렸으면 좋을듯 해요. <- 이거 하나 바꿔서 쿠도스 드림.

01:48:110 (7,8,9) - 중앙 배치 >_<

02:09:829 (1,2,3,4,5) - 밑에서부터 올라오는게 좋을듯 한데요 'ㅁ'? http://puu.sh/izAZ

한번 더 찾아볼깨요 ;ㅁ; 위에는 그냥 제안이므로 무시하셔도 됩니다.

Miya wrote:

i will mod this map when i have a time :3
just call me okay?

Miya wrote:

irc mod :3

log

20:39 <Asgard> : hi~
20:39 <Asgard> : now i'm here in my house
20:39 <Miya> : ah ok
20:39 <Miya> : after i finish update my diff okay
20:40 <Asgard> : ok
20:51 <Miya> : asgard
20:51 <Asgard> :
20:51 <Miya> : ready?
20:52 <Asgard> : sure
20:52 <Miya> : 00:03:422 (1) - i think this spinner have heavy beat on the end. It's better to put finish on it
20:52 <Asgard> : oh wait i didn't change skin
20:53 <Miya> : huh? o.o
20:53 <Asgard> : ok
20:53 <Asgard> : so add finish? right?
20:53 <Miya> : yup
20:54 <Miya> : 00:29:828 (2) - weird clap sound, seems off >.<
20:54 <Miya> : my suggestion is to remove that clap, and add clap here 00:29:672 (1) -
20:54 <Miya> : also here 00:29:984 (3) -
20:55 <Asgard> : keep going XD
20:55 <Miya> : okay
20:55 <Miya> : 00:45:454 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
20:55 <Miya> : this is really break the flow >.<
20:55 <Miya> : add circle here to fix it 00:45:610
20:56 <Miya> : 00:45:610-
20:56 <Miya> : ups sorry worng timing > 00:45:532-
20:56 <Asgard> : so.. http://puu.sh/jgEK
20:56 <Asgard> : like this?
20:57 <Miya> : yup, make it stream instead
20:57 <Asgard> : ok
20:57 <Miya> : 00:36:860 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - why the clap sound stops here?
20:58 <Miya> : umm, better to put a clap here to fix that > 00:37:485 (6) -
21:02 <Miya> : about the timing
21:02 <Miya> : it seems your offset is 20ms late
21:02 <Miya> : well ask another person to clarify this
21:03 <Asgard> : hmm..
21:05 <Miya> : 02:29:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - reduce the distance between the jump please
21:05 <Miya> : it's too fast compared to other jump
21:05 <Miya> : i always got 100 or 50 at this note > 02:30:297 (6,7,8) -
21:06 <Miya> : also, there's no point in giving new combo here > 02:30:610 (9) -
21:07 <Miya> : 01:25:922 (1) - a finish here would be good, since it's have a heavier part like your previous finish rythim
21:10 <Miya> : 02:27:172 (1) - add a finish at the start since you have a finish rythim before
21:11 <Miya> : 02:45:922 (1) - umm, the startpoint has a heavy beat, better to add finish there
21:13 <Miya> : 03:42:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - this one is too fast too >.<
21:13 <Miya> : reduce the spacing a bit
21:15 <Miya> : 01:02:016 (5) - put a whistle here, it's a whistle gap >.< not good
21:17 <Asgard> : ok
21:18 <Asgard> : i talk with star stream about these mod
21:18 <Miya> : 03:43:110 (1) - remove this new combo, since it still on the same rythim with previous note >.<
21:18 <Miya> : there's no point putting a new combo here
21:18 <Miya> : like before
21:21 <Miya> : 02:55:922 (1) - put a finish at the start, there's a gap here between finish rythim
21:22 <Miya> : hmm, maybe that's all from me :3
21:22 <Miya> : really cool map and song x)
21:22 <Miya> : i'll star it again
21:23 <Asgard> : Thx~
21:23 <Asgard> : so done
21:23 <Asgard> : ?
21:23 <Miya> : yup
21:23 <Asgard> : ok
21:23 <Miya> : i post the log ok?

star :3
Really cool map and song~
Ganbatte and good luck!
I like this x)

1. KIAI TIME - Suggestion: add KIAI end 03:00:979 ( become quiet once here ) and add KIAI start 03:03:401
   and I think that last KIAITIME end do not match. i think last KIAI end 03:20:901

1. 00:03:401 (1) - to fit the BGM, gradually increase the volume. try like this: http://puu.sh/jmsA
2. 00:57:463 (6) - remove whistle to slider body
3. 01:40:901 (1,2,3,1) - I think that some repeated blows of here do not match. Suggestion: 2,3 remove. and 01:41:135 (1) - spinner start to 01:40:979. and 01:40:901 (1) - remove clap
4. 01:47:932 (6,7,8,9) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/jmLU ( piano? follow )
   
   
   
5. 02:01:526 (3) - maybe spacing too close. In the same way as others. use DS1.1x
6. 02:09:807 (1,2,3,4,5) - Here is a better fit I think there is no whistle
7. 03:03:401~03:05:744 - I want you to add a whistle in the same way as others >x<;
8. 03:04:494 (9) - add NC
9. 03:20:744 (11) - add whistle and 03:20:901 (1) - remove whistle to start of the slider ?
10. 03:40:901 (1) - remove whistle

1. If you accept suggestion of KIAI TIME ↓change like this

kosiga wrote:

hi~ Asgard , Star Stream ~

Thank you for the request ~

here my mod ~

[General]

1. KIAI TIME - Suggestion: add KIAI end 03:00:979 ( become quiet once here ) and add KIAI start 03:03:401
   and I think that last KIAITIME end do not match. i think last KIAI end 03:20:901

[Collab]

1. 00:03:401 (1) - to fit the BGM, gradually increase the volume. try like this: http://puu.sh/jmsA
2. 00:57:463 (6) - remove whistle to slider body
3. 01:40:901 (1,2,3,1) - I think that some repeated blows of here do not match. Suggestion: 2,3 remove. and 01:41:135 (1) - spinner start to 01:40:979. and 01:40:901 (1) - remove clap
4. 01:47:932 (6,7,8,9) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/jmLU ( piano? follow )
   
   
   
5. 02:01:526 (3) - maybe spacing too close. In the same way as others. use DS1.1x
6. 02:09:807 (1,2,3,4,5) - Here is a better fit I think there is no whistle
7. 03:03:401~03:05:744 - I want you to add a whistle in the same way as others >x<;
8. 03:04:494 (9) - add NC
9. 03:20:744 (11) - add whistle and 03:20:901 (1) - remove whistle to start of the slider ?
10. 03:40:901 (1) - remove whistle

[SB]

1. If you accept suggestion of KIAI TIME ↓change like this

SPOILER

[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Asgard.png",320,240
L,50905,64
S,1,0,312,1.5,1.6
F,0,4655,4967,0,1
M,0,4967,,493,354
S,0,4967,,1.5
M,0,110592,110905,493,354,492,473
F,0,110592,110905,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Star Stream.png",320,240
L,111217,63
S,1,0,312,1.5,1.6
L,180905,108 ⇒ L,183401,56
S,1,0,312,1.5,1.6
S,0,110905,,1.5
M,0,110905,111217,453,274,456,348
F,0,110905,111217,0,1
M,0,222936,223248,456,348,457,469
F,0,222936,223248,1,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples

GoodGood map~　>w< Star☆~

Good luck~

• Hi Asgard~ request from my queue~ ( Star Stream's ask )
  　
  General :
  　

1. Nothing I can find
   　
   Collab :
   　
2. 00:59:182 (4,5) - Ctrl+R , it is more comfortable for me to play XD
3. 02:15:119 (8) - NC here because of the spacing
4. 02:22:463 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - why don't you make the spacing the same?
5. 03:43:088 (1) - Ctrl+J?
   　
   
   You must to read~!

   Red : I think you must to fix. Bule : need to discuss. Black : just suggest.

App's map is too hard for me to mod... Sorry for that
Good Luck :3

bossandy wrote:

• Hi Asgard~ request from my queue~ ( Star Stream's ask )
  　
  General :
  　

1. Nothing I can find
   　
   Collab :
   　
2. 00:59:182 (4,5) - Ctrl+R , it is more comfortable for me to play XD Fixed
3. 02:15:119 (8) - NC here because of the spacing
4. 02:22:463 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - why don't you make the spacing the same?
5. 03:43:088 (1) - Ctrl+J? Fixed
   　
   
   You must to read~!

   Red : I think you must to fix. Bule : need to discuss. Black : just suggest.

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App's map is too hard for me to mod... Sorry for that
Good Luck :3

S h i a wrote:

Hi Asgard & Star Stream o/
mod as you requested in my queue

[Overall]
clean

[Collab]
Asgard:
00:36:057 (1) - remove this newcombo? and add new combo to 00:36:213 (2) - and yes strong recommend you move this note somewhere else like this?

SPOILER

really hard to read now.
01:42:307 (1) - suggest remove this note
Star Stream
02:00:588 (9) - move this note somewhere else? really hard to read ;_; (suggest x304 y244)
02:45:588 (3) - sudden spacing change. so a new combo here would be very nice.

That's all
Cool stuff~ good luck on getting approval

sorry.. nothing changed

wmfchris wrote:

[Collab]
duplicated timeline: 214651

00:37:307 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - it sounds like xxx x x x x is better than x x xxx x x, otherwise the 1/1 breat at the end sounds a bit odd. changed
01:40:901 (1) - not sure why it's NC here ._. changed
02:04:182 (2,3,4) - (1,2) should be in larger spacing too (though I don't know why you hv to make the spacing here larger), try this

SPOILER

02:04:963 (5) - I prefer NC this due to spacing change changed
02:09:338 (3) - place at (172,48) --- make a complete rhombus
02:23:088 (9,10) - spacing
02:29:651 - try sth like

SPOILER

?
02:30:901 - making the slider end softer sounds nice.
02:49:963 (4,8) - clap changed
02:59:651 (9) - finish?
03:10:901 - how about stop kiai at the slider instead of 1 beat eariler
03:38:401 - make it gradually louder would be nice.

the deafult whistle sounds good individually, but does not sound very fit with the other custom hitsounds. The rest is excellent.


EDIT: you should change WIP to pending!
I can't move to pending because only 1 diff pending need 2 diff and i don't want taiko

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's see what I can find. Mod requested by star stream.

General:
CLEAR!

Collab:
00:10:588 (8) - remove the repeat because i think putting that would be too easy. instead add a circle and stack it under (8) to make it a challenge for players. Fixed
00:26:838 (5) - hmm how about putting it at the left side. in other words stack this on (3), or move (5,6) here(6 is stacked on 2) so that it'd look like a parallelogram.No
00:26:994 (7,8,9) - make the pattern like this if you follow the suggestion above. i think these 2 suggestions play nicely.No
01:21:838 (3,4) - remove the repeat and add replace the ends for circles. same reason as 00:10:588 Fixed
01:23:088 (6) - Ctrl+R to make it more challenging?No
01:27:151 (7) - *nazi* adjust this slider so that it doesn't touch (6)Fixed
02:00:744 (10,11) - how about stacking this on (1) to make it less confusing?No

This is the best i can do. I'd star this but there's too many stars so i think it's fine. GL

giO- wrote:

Hello from my queue~

Collab

some suggestion

00:10:588 (8) - move this on x:376 y:188 with 1.5x distance spacing
00:10:901 (1) - move this on x:256 y:96 with 2.0x distance spacing and add new combo http://puu.sh/lf4z
00:45:432 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - it look better unstacked, maybe like this? http://puu.sh/lf6W
01:09:338 (6,7) - move on x:256 y:156 ?
01:30:588 (3) - this is not symmetrical with 01:29:963 (1) - so move on x:412 y:192 changed this
02:31:057 - make this pause start from 02:31:213 -
02:59:651 (9) - new combo?
03:15:276 (8) - why you don't reverse selection of this one to make it different from 03:14:963 (7) - and 03:15:588 (9) - http://puu.sh/lfbo
03:19:338 (3) - move on x:176 y:192
03:43:244 (2) - i think you can delete this note


Good Luck~

Shana Aisaka wrote:

Lolz.. So many star you spend?? XD
Just some random mod!!
Anyway.. here some of my suggestion.

[General]
All seems fine ~

[Collab]

Map/Hitsounds :
01:24:651(2,3,4) = add clap? only the head
02:22:463(5,6) = why not stack together with the 1 ? >.<" (well this is just a suggestion...)
02:40:901(1,2) = add clap? only the head . Sounds much better ^^"
02:42:151(1,2) = ^
02:44:651(1,2) = ^
02:45:901(1) = add finish
03:43:244(2) = add clap

Well... no much to said..
Anyway Nice song so Star!!
Ganbatte Asgard!! >w<"

iMercurial wrote:

Nice map.

About the "SB".

1- The name of the mapper doesn't need to appear during the breaktimes as 00:11:057/00:19:494, 01:11:057/01:19:494 and 02:31:057/02:40:774.

2- On the final part of the beatmap, the "Star Stram" SB name disappears before the end of the song... I suggest you change the time of "desappair" at 03:43:244.

That's all.

Mythol wrote:

Still no bubble?

Quilt wrote:

fight Asgard!!!