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Renard - Take Me To Space And Back

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Rewondernard
371 posts
Joined February 2010
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Rewondernard
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 12 декабря 2011 г. at 4:04:29

Artist: Renard
Title: Take Me To Space And Back
Tags: Breakcore LapFoxTrax VULPvibe This Place will Grow
BPM: 130
Filesize: 11208kb
Play Time: 03:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4,92 stars, 413 notes)
  2. Sane (4,52 stars, 207 notes)
Download: Renard - Take Me To Space And Back
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 4th map.
Sane - wip.
Insane -think is ready.
Mod needed!!!.
Last edited by Rewondernard , edited 27 times in total.
Lidan
268 posts
Joined February 2011
Lidan
Hey.

Nice map even though I don't really like those small breaks. Would be nice if you could put something there.
I started mapping a guest diff btw.
Rewondernard
371 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
Rewondernard
(lidan69) diff

fix :!:

00:44:446 - 00:46:062 - savage hell!!! :evil:

00:47:619 -> 00:47:735

01:15:254 -> 01:15:196 and add circle to 01:15:658

01:43:177 - 01:44:908 add Break Period

01:45:369 - 02:13:754 too long Break Period: add anything...

fix ending

CircleSize: 5 -> 4

add tags!
Lidan
268 posts
Joined February 2011
Lidan

SniperSAR wrote:

(lidan69) diff

fix :!:

00:44:446 - 00:46:062 - savage hell!!! :evil:

00:47:619 -> 00:47:735

01:15:254 -> 01:15:196 and add circle to 01:15:658

01:43:177 - 01:44:908 add Break Period

01:45:369 - 02:13:754 too long Break Period: add anything...

fix ending

CircleSize: 5 -> 4

add tags!
fixed

Download: Renard - Take Me To Space And Back (SniperSAR) [lidan69].osu
Rewondernard
371 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
Rewondernard
too many inaccuracies (
you have a lot of work ...
Compare your card with the my and fix bugs.
enumerate, and correct all the mistakes, i can not...
Raimon
295 posts
Joined December 2010
Raimon
:D like itttt
jekasa
7 posts
Joined April 2011
jekasa
недурно, недурно - Лови звезду (хлоп...)
luckynekokami
5 posts
Joined July 2010
luckynekokami
I like this map :3
KingKrishna
285 posts
Joined October 2010
KingKrishna
Hey I started working on the guest diff
:o just wanted to say


And Star :D
KingKrishna
285 posts
Joined October 2010
KingKrishna
update :P

Download: Renard - Take Me To Space And Back (SniperSAR) [Mebinsane!].osu
Rewondernard
371 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
Rewondernard
oh
First:
Approach rate-> 8
Use Distand Snap!!
Your spacing,to be honest,awful.remake it!
make jumps on the map must be within reasonable limits...
I did a short piece at the beginning of your difficulty. The same it should be to continue...
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I can not fix everything himself. map is created for a long time, and if you do not correct mistakes,
i can not use your difficulty in the final version. I'm sorry.
There are still pretenders to guest difficulty.
These difficulty are more accurate and correct.
I can not wait for a long time.
map must be completed.Sorry once again

Download: Renard - Take Me To Space And Back (SniperSAR) [Mebinsane!].osu
NekoMimiMode
99 posts
Joined January 2011
NekoMimiMode
;)
KingKrishna
285 posts
Joined October 2010
KingKrishna
It took me a while but i did it >.<
If theres anything else please post!

Download: Renard - Take Me To Space And Back (SniperSAR) [Mebinsane!].osu
Rewondernard
371 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
Rewondernard
Yes, everything is fine at the beginning
but then!
I don't see the normal spacing!
00:50:388-03:42:600 what is that?

Now in one place a lot of circles and now in another :/
There is no clear rhythm. Why not compare with the my diff?
KingKrishna
285 posts
Joined October 2010
KingKrishna
UPDATE!

Update!
07/29

i was wondering if i can keep the dif at 9 tho because it makes it more challenging on ctb and more intense on standard o.o.

Download: Renard - Take Me To Space And Back (SniperSAR) [Mebinsane!].osu

Download: Renard - Take Me To Space And Back (SniperSAR) [Mebinsane!].osu
Rewondernard
371 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
Rewondernard
I'm sorry, I cannot use your difficulty in the final version of the map.
a lot of inaccuracies and errors. all the more the card is already in Pending
Orkel
osu! Alumni
450 posts
Joined September 2008
Orkel
Insane diff is pretty damn fun, giving you a star for it.

And just how long does this message have to be, damn limits.
KingKrishna
285 posts
Joined October 2010
KingKrishna
A Update!
lets hope this one is a little better >.>Download: Renard - Take Me To Space And Back (SniperSAR) [Mebinsane!].osu
BCI
1,081 posts
Joined May 2011
BCI
renard *^*
i want to ranked it
nice map and nice song :3
favorite~
knjiga
164 posts
Joined February 2011
knjiga
Nice map :D. I like the skin very much. Subtle but effective and most importantly doesn't interfere with gameplay :D.


Modding: (Most of this will be my opinion so you don't have to change everything. But you should take it in consideration)

General:
All difficulties should start and end at the same time. That means it would be nice if you mapped the rest of the sane diff. If you want to keep it shorter for the sake of difficulty at least end it at 02:44:273 then. If you planned to map it already, then ignore this :P.

Kiai times should be consistent throughout difficulties. That is, they should be same in both sane and insane.

Sane:
SPOILER
AR should be 7.

OD should be 6.

Add a 1/2 tick long reverse slider in 1/8s here - 00:16:350. Break will then start at 00:16:581.

00:32:619 - notes on blue ticks should be avoided. The way you did them doesn't sound wrong to me but you may still want to change some/all of them since some people find them weird. If you don't want to, just ignore those suggestions :P. This one should be moved 1/4 tick later.

00:38:158 - again, blue tick. Move the slider(2) 1/4 tick earlier then place the (1) so that it overlaps the start of the slider (or something similar).

00:40:696 - remove this small break here and extend the kiai to 00:43:350 or 00:43:812.

00:47:388 - move this slider 1/4 tick earlier and extend it 1/4 tick. You can change the spacing to adjust to the bigger hole or add a single note at 00:47:273.

01:00:888 - remove the kiai time from this section. There is not enough difference in music to justify it and it makes you have two kiai times with only a break between them.

01:31:350 - move this slider 1/4 tick earlier and extend it appropriately.

01:31:350 - blue tick again. Move it to 01:35:273 and add another note at 01:35:504 or turn it into a slider.

01:37:235 - again, move it 1/4 early and extend.

01:39:081 - move (4) 1/4 later.

02:17:850 - move (7) and (8) 1/4 tick earlier and make (8) to be reversed.

02:19:696 - (3) 1/4 later.

02:21:542 - move (2) 1/4 later and make it 1/4 shorter.

02:25:581 - shorten this spinner to 02:27:427 and make the other spinner start at 02:27:658.

And lastly, once again. Map the sane to the end 8-) . or at least to 02:44:273.
Insane:
SPOILER
01:04:004 - Move (3) and (4) 1/4 earlier and reverse (4).

01:07:696 - move (1) 1/4 earlier and adjust the combo.

01:15:196 - this slider should be in 1/8s not 1/4s. Also, extend it 1/4 tick.

01:30:196 - add two notes. one between (1) and (2) the other between (2) and (3). That should be a 1/8 stream (effective bpm 260 8-) but too short to be a problem for most players).

01:34:927 - remove (2)

01:50:735 (1) - make this spinner start 1/4 later.

02:25:119 - move (3) and (4) 1/4 earlier and make (4) reverse

02:28:927 - move the (1) 1/4 tick earlier and add another note to 02:29:042.

02:32:619 - move (7) 1/4 tick later, shorten it and add a note at 02:32:504

02:34:119 - extend (3)

02:38:965 (8) - should be a 1/8 slider instead of 1/4

01:30:196 - I would remove this kiai time. Simply because it doesn't make sense for it to end so early and it would be too long if it lasted fully.

02:59:042 - This kiai time should also be removed, along with a break at 03:05:850 since it feels unnatural.

Now, I think it would be better if you mapped the whole song and extended the last kiai to the end. The end parts is the most intense and you skipped it completely. (If you map the rest of the Sane and then add this part to insane, don't forget to add it to the Sane too)

Good luck! ;)
Rewondernard
371 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
Rewondernard
Thanks :)
Fixed and updated!
Thank you all for help!
work is finished. I hope 8-)
Rewondernard
371 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
Rewondernard
Work continues again
lightningfear
4 posts
Joined September 2011
lightningfear
I Really like this map! The timing is so great i would be happy if this map is rank ready!
Rewondernard
371 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
Rewondernard
resurrected
marshallracer
1,601 posts
Joined December 2010
marshallracer
Add "This Place will Grow" to Tags, since it's from this Album?

Nice map, maybe I'll mod this when I'm not too busy~
marshallracer
1,601 posts
Joined December 2010
marshallracer
Renard <333

[General]

marshall_racer wrote:

Add "This Place will Grow" to Tags, since it's from this Album?
- half BPM? as from what I've seen it seems ok, but still ... strange to me x3
- Silenced Sliderticks : don't know if they're even allowed, ask a BAT to be sure though
- empty Comboburst : rly? maybe try to find a nice little one or delete the file completely :/

[Sane]
- why does the map end suddenly?
- quite nice Hard diff., Hitsounding rocks <3

[Insane]
01:15:196 (1) - lengthen by one repeat and make it end with a finish
01:33:196 (3,4) - make them like this
some sliders look ... strange
Hitsounding <333


well, sorry, but the map is good, can't find much ;D
Rewondernard
371 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
Rewondernard

marshall_racer wrote:

Renard <333

[General]

marshall_racer wrote:

Add "This Place will Grow" to Tags, since it's from this Album?
- fixed
- half BPM? as from what I've seen it seems ok, but still ... strange to me x3 :?
- Silenced Sliderticks : don't know if they're even allowed, ask a BAT to be sure though - I ask the bat soon
- empty Comboburst : rly? maybe try to find a nice little one or delete the file completely :/ - I specifically did so, but okay, I'll create a new just right for the skin

[Sane]
- why does the map end suddenly? -my mistake. I will finish
- quite nice Hard diff., Hitsounding rocks <3 -Thanks :)

[Insane]
01:15:196 (1) - lengthen by one repeat and make it end with a finish- fixed
01:33:196 (3,4) - make them like this
some sliders look ... strange- I do not know how best to arrange them. remade this way. I think it is now a little better.
Hitsounding <333 :)


well, sorry, but the map is good, can't find much ;D
-you helped me a lot, thank you!
Mattoi
58 posts
Joined October 2009
Mattoi
Well, as far as I know, silenced sliderticks aren't prohibited. It's your option, perhaps.

I haven't had much time to mod as I told you I would, will try to finish modding and mapping my difficulty tomorrow. EDIT: slept all day long, will now try to finish them this week at least.

EDIT: Modding. Needed; suggestion

Get an Easy/Normal difficulty (yours or guest). It'll only be ranked with one

Sane

-Change slider tick rate to 2
-Redo the hitsounds. Almost every beat has a clap in most sections and it's annoying. Also, some have whistle with clap, what sounds strange
-Change slider speed to 1,70 and then remap everything. The whole map looks all with small spaces between notes, feels bad


-0:00:196 (timing section) Change volume to 65%. Looks too loud for this part of the song
-00:55:119 (6) - make it a little lower. It shouldn't hit the health bar
-02:27:773 (the end) - ends too suddenly, maybe mapping until 02:44:273 ?
-02:27:773 (1) - Snap it to the next red ticker and finish where it is
I think it's all for this diff.

Insane

-Again, redo the hitsounds. Oversounding will only make it awful to listen while playing
-Use only a maximum of 3 slider velocities through the difficulty

-0:00:196 (timing section) Change volume to 65%. Same as above
-01:58:696 (timing section) - Change volume to 70% until 02:12:773


And a tip, I don't recommend you criticizing the errors in other people's maps. Modding is here for fixing mistakes. I think you should give people a chance whenever you can. Also, check your difficulties in AIMod every now and then c:

Other than that, nice map, I think just these few changes and it'll be rankable. If you want to wait for my diff, no actual preview.

EDIT: Star :3
ErMac_old
12 posts
Joined April 2010
ErMac_old
Прелесть! Like it :3
XEPCOH
529 posts
Joined February 2011
XEPCOH
Лови звезду! Работай дальше над картой, и будет тебе счастье!
Juiicey
26 posts
Joined July 2011
Juiicey
Nice map :)
Rewondernard
371 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
Rewondernard
Total update soon!
XEPCOH
529 posts
Joined February 2011
XEPCOH
Waiting for you:)
F m L_old
405 posts
Joined March 2011
F m L_old
Just little point out

SPOILER
[General]

Your mp3 is 320kbps which is unrankable
Change it to 128-192kbps

I would star but i dont have any :(

Good luck anyways!
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