Soror wrote:

각 난이도 태그에 L i a, Mapper 31 추가해주세요. ok

BG 사이즈가 850x708로 4:3의 비율이 아니네요. 적당히 잘라서 800x600으로 맞춰주세요. ok

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아래는 전부 제안입니다.

[Merry (Beep) Mas!]

00:07:563 (5,6) - 1/4로 읽히기 쉬운 패턴입니다. 5,6,7에 뉴콤보를 하시는게 어떨까요. 1 1 1로는 이상해 다르게 수정

00:53:729 - BPM 체인지를 이용한 슬라이더 감속은 랭크 불가능입니다.

00:52:230 (1,2,3,4) - 이런 식으로 서로 겹치지 않게 하시는게 어떤가요. ok


01:05:644 - SB 엘리먼트가 화면 아래쪽에 잘려서 나와요. 그리고 나타나는 시간이 박자에 맞지 않는데, 의도하신 건가요? 가사를 가리기위해 튀어나오는거고 가사를 가리면 되니까요 박자랑은 상관없습니다

01:21:561 - ^

01:21:561 - 여기 박자가 비는데 의도하신 건가요?브레이크타임 이니까요

01:47:060 (1) - 왔던 자리로 다시 돌아가는 슬라이더는 랭크 불가능인 것으로 알고 있습니다.


[L i a]

별로 문제 없어요.


[Hard]

AR이 BPM에 비해 낮게 느껴집니다. 7로 세팅하시는게 어떨까요.ok

00:11:229 (1) - 1/2 앞으로 이동?no

00:53:729 - 빨간 줄 삭제

01:36:228 (1) - 뉴콤보ok

01:47:061 (1) - 제자리로 돌아가는 슬라이더 (^, 사실 슬라이더가 매우 느린 경우에 랭크된 케이스가 있긴 합니다…….)

[Normal]

00:21:063 (5) - 1/2 앞으로?ok

00:53:729 - BPM 체인지 (^)

01:24:228 - 박자가 비어요. (^, 휴식타임 위치가 살짝 부자연스럽게 느껴져요.)


[Easy]

00:57:563 (1) - 간격이 멀어요. 수정

justnobody wrote:

[General]
no easy?! and no hard?!!

[Easy]
00:52:229 (1) - end in 00:53:563done
01:45:563 (1) - end in 01:46:896^
putting notes after spinners without enough time is nooooooo good for beginner players...and for a easy diff.uhh. thanks


[Normal]
unsnapped objects here. refer to AIMod plz.GOD.. resnap all now
00:01:563 (1,2,3,4) - spacingdone
00:04:896 (3,4) - ^^
00:08:729(x) - i would like if there is a note heredone
00:12:229 (2) - NC?^
00:20:229 (4) - ^?^
00:33:229 (5) - end in 00:33:896done
00:49:229 (1) - make it 1 beat, not 1/2 * 2ok
why nothing between 01:24:396 ~ 01:25:396?! map something here! or use a break(like in the hard, though i don't suggest this...)
ok..

[Hard]
01:14:561 (4,5) - sounds not fit. i would suggest use one slider only.done

well...i just can't mod insane maps for now...

so this mod ends here.That's too bad（◞‸◟）

P.S. WHY "だが男だ！"?!

だが男だ

http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm14239853

don't tell me that the vocal is... a boy.
こんな可愛い子が女の子のはずがない。ないよねぇ

blissfulyoshi wrote:

After talking to some other BATs, we decided you should probably put a warning in the op about song/video being NSFW (not everyone will get it straight off with the XeX) NSFW is inserted
Why are the 2 blue combo colors next to each other? I advise you rearrange them. Dark Blue colored combo deleted

Getting offset of 220, so please find someone to verify that. (Make sure to fix the kiai after you fix this. Not all of your diffs are exactly aligned either so be careful)ok. fix. agreed and checked by L i a and mapper 31

Easy:
00:02:229 (3,1,2) - it follows the music better if you add a new combo to both 3 and 2 and remove 1's new combo ok
00:36:229 (2,1,2) - add a new combo to both 2s and remove the new combo from 1 to follow the lyrics done
00:59:563 (1,2) - add a new combo to 2 and remove the new combo from 1 to follow the lyrics ^
01:03:563 (4,1) - add a new combo to 4 and remove the new combo from 1 to follow the lyrics ^
01:08:230 (3,1) - add a new combo to 3 and remove the new combo from 1 to follow the lyrics ^
01:13:563 (3) - new combo done

Normal:
01:06:230 (2) - overlaps with the hp bar are aesthetically unpleasing, so please change this changed
01:24:729 - the break here felt sort of random, I would just map it and have no breaks in the map remove break time. and add notes


Hard:
00:24:229 (1) and 00:27:063 (5) - make these 2 consistent please (easiest fix is remove 1's new combo because it is consistent with the other combos later on) ok
00:35:396 (4) - overlaps in general are not great to look at, so please rearrange this pattern (you don't have many of them in your map so I just want to suggest that you fix them ok. changed pattern
00:55:063 (2,3) - ^ ^
01:14:563 (4,5) - ^ ^
01:14:563 (4,5) - As with normal, this break still feels random, I suggest you just map it. ok
01:30:229 (5,6) - overlap changed
01:57:063 (4) - this note is really hard to see under a 300 from 1 changed pattern

31's Taiko: You might want to align the kiai with the other diffs, but taht is up to you modify all maps kiai time

L i a's X Mas:
00:33:229 (5,6,7) - try to get around the stacking and make this a straight line ok
01:56:229 (5) - new combo for lyrics fix
02:05:396 (5) - ^? ^

Merry (Beep) Mas!:
Maybe it is just me, but this feels easier than L i a's diff yet worth 2 million more I Think too
00:18:896 (5) - new combo to be consistent with 00:13:563 (1) ok
00:32:229 (1) - Why is there a new combo here? Your current combo pattern has a new combo every 2 large white ticks bacially (there is a slight variation because of the lyrics, but looking at previous combos, this new combo doesn't fit) remove new combo
00:40:563 (1) - ^ remove new combo
01:02:896 (6) - new combo for lyrics? ok
01:12:063 (5) - ^ ^
01:22:080 - Like with the other diffs, I found this break random. I advise you just map it.ok
02:05:396 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 01:54:563 (5) ok

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Not exactly sure what to say. I don't exactly want to bubble this. There seems to be quite a few things in here that show signs that this map hasn't been modded enough. Oh well, if you show me a good enough map after fixing everything, I might consider bubbling. (At least find someone to verify the timing)

blissfulyoshi wrote:

No need for kds since this is a remod.ok

Remove 31's Taiko letterboxing for consistency (no affect but for the sake of the program xD)
Adjust 31's Taiko kiai sections to snap to the beat
Adjust the ending of Hard's kiai section to match your other diffs
Adjust L i a's X Mas 's last kiai section so it falls directly on 8
rechecked. all fix

Hard:
01:58:553 (4) - Why is this the only slider without the red anchor point in this combo? Did you forget it?it's a my style （ `・ω▼）

L i a's X Mas:
00:29:469 (5,1,2) - Just want to warn you that the change in timing interval between 5 and 1 and 1 and 2 is a little hard to readdone


Talked with Sallad4ever and we agree that Merry(Beep) Mas is easier than L i a's diff yet worth far more, so see if you can make them equal in score or make L i a's worth more. (increasing L i a's hp drain by 2 will net you a nice score boost (not enough though T_T))
L i a's Xmas HP drain +2.

Aleks719 wrote:

SB
time between NSWF pic and 1st note is too short, increase it, cuz 1st note places on sb pic :　ok. Correction

example

only 2/3 of dame pic is used. Cut it.deleted 'dame.png'

General
Tickrate 0,5 is unrankable wh.. ok
Add L_i_a to the tags, because searching is not working for one letter.
add mapper_31 to the tags. same reason.
Two "spaces" between L i a and Mapper 31. Reduce to one in all diffs. done
only 80% of mp3 is used. Cut? I tried to cut mp3, but I can't make it natural. This is my best.
Video.. Hum... Content is *okay, guys. questionable for me, but* fine. My video player says that :

And 2nd xmas.mp3 really work, okay i know why.
I replace video to another folder and video was without sound then. But aaaaaaaaaanyway :

Bug or not, don't know, just picked up.I understand hardly, but I changed BGA
Set Audio lead-in 0, cuz you have SB for "late start" .ok

It's enough atm, Fix it firstly, call me back after for full mod.

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"NSFW.png",320,240
 F,0,-4113,,0.06399995
 F,0,-4113,-3779,0.06399995,1

Aleks719 wrote:

SB
if you have a dime, fix it please.
It happens because of Diff. Specific.
You have link to this image here and there (*.osu and *.osb)
also code:

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"NSFW.png",320,240
 F,0,-4113,,0.06399995
 F,0,-4113,-3779,0.06399995,1

0.06399995 should be 0.

General
Preview point set on unused part of mp3 )

L i a's X Mas
00:09:553 (1,1) - questionable for me
00:35:553 (6,7,8,9) - imo, better, don't forget to fix timing section.

01:16:063 [T] - remove this section

Merry (Beep) Mas!
do you hate hitsounds? low quantity of them here. especially whistles :\
00:09:386 (1) - start it from 00:09:553
00:09:386 (1,1) - also still questionable.
00:32:219 (8) - add nc
00:53:720 (1) - end should be here : 00:54:719, even fits more. also 5% is too quiet, set 20% here and for next 5% sections too

Hard
same about whistles, but ok
00:33:720 (5) - replace nc here from next slider
00:52:219 (1,1) - as before, 5% is too quiet, set 20% here and for next 5% sections too
00:54:886 (1) - new combo bug, add nc on this note
01:25:303 (1) - start it from 01:25:386

Normal
OD-1
5% -> 20% for all sections and that's all here

Easy
AR-1
00:01:220 (1) - remove nc
00:33:553 (3) - replace nc here from next slider
5% -> 20% for all sections

Breeze wrote:

thumbnail was broken, try full submit once to see if it could be fixed?

phonic wrote:

As for you, congratulations on first Ranked　

Ryafuka wrote:

o sry wrong post ;_;　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

fanzhen0019 wrote:

so cute voice >w<

and gratz for 1st rank map~ XD

Hinacle wrote:

omedeto~!!

korede chata mo Ranked mapper dane!!

gorlum wrote:

And how exatly this is NSFW?

Backfire wrote:

Alright, no offense, but this song is probably the worst thing I have ever heard.

Backfire wrote:

Catchy like AIDS.

Backfire wrote:

Alright, no offense, but this song is probably the worst thing I have ever heard.
Probably. But most likely.

It's pretty terrible.

Also because you claim this is NSFW over lyrics, i'm going to assume the "singer" is "singing" about putting santa's big fat **** in her mouth.