1. Complex Dream (4.85 stars, 400 notes)
2. First Dream (0.53 stars, 121 notes)
3. Generic Dream (3.99 stars, 265 notes)
4. Suika and Yuugi's Dream (4.89 stars, 1152 notes)
5. Ultimate Dream (5 stars, 712 notes)

1. Didou <Taiko Oni/Mirror .osu only>

1. (wait.. i forget...)

nanda2009 wrote:

ne... Shooting Star ☆彡
[Easy]
[00:46:576] (2) and (3) were too close..
and there still many error spacing, learn to use AIMod
[01:42:774] move slider (1) 1/4 beat backwards
and remember.... make sure you use Distance Snaping... probably 0.7 or 0.8 will work...
and... make sure you can play your beatmap.... ( except Rhythm, maybe.... )
Your Indonesian, right? go to Sallad4ever's Beatmapping Tutorial Thread =)

[Normal]
[00:18:193] (6) and (1) were collided.... and far
[00:28:907] slider (6) overlap them itself...

[Rhythm]
since it was the hardest one on your mapset, I think it's ok to make some error spacing....

I love this song you know <3 Reimu daisuki
sorry if my mod was kind of... bad, this is my first time modding.... how about check a mod queue and post there....

Nivalis wrote:

Mod Request Via Queue

[General]
-> Coba cari BG yang ukurannya 800*600 atau 1024*768
-> mp3 max. yang diperbolehkan itu 192 kbps
-> Delete "Touhou" dari tags soalnya udah ada di source
-> Kiai-nya diakhiri di 126490ms

[Easy]
00:25:136 (2,3,1) - Spacingnya kenapa tiba-tiba menjauh?
01:25:136 (2,3) - Usahakan jangan bikin stack note di diff Easy, terlalu menjebak buat beginners ><
-> Secara keseluruhan spacingnya masih berantakan, coba klik File -> Open AIMod terus evaluasi mapnya berdasarkan apa yang disebut AIMod

[Normal]
00:07:314 (4) - Di sini jangan ada hitsound, terus di not selanjutnya (5) tambahin clap
00:20:171 (4,5,6,1,2) - Overlap... Bakal susah kalau di-hidden xD
00:28:907 (1) - Slider bentuk begini nggak disarankan, karena susah dibedain ke kanan atau ke kiri arahnya kalau snaking slider dimatiin
01:16:462 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Mundurin 1/4

[Rhythm]
-> Rhythm? Menurut gw nama diff "Ultimate Dream" atau "Nightmare" lebih pas sama lagunya xD
-> Kiai Time disamain untuk setiap diff, jangan ada diff yang kiainya beda sendiri
00:01:647 (6,7,8) - Mundurin 1/4
00:45:411 (8,9) - Spacingnya jangan tiba-tiba mendekat
00:57:938 (1) - Panjangin 1/2
00:58:845 (2,3,4,5) - Mundurin 1/4

Gw sangat menyarankan untuk mengikuti advice AIMod, kalau udah yakin betul silahkan cari modder yang berpengalaman.
Good luck xD

Evil_Twilight wrote:

offset: 1602

Ultimate Dream is very crazy #_#

TheVileOne wrote:

General

SPOILER

Use Evil's Offset.

That blue storyboard text at the start is too hard to see with the background. Fix this please. hmm.. maybe give the transparent white box?

Also why does the ... sequence in the storyboard appear twice. it's from the game, check "japanese.english.txt" on "SB" folder, it says the ellipsis 2 times.

Don't really care for your background images. Storyboarding could be better.

Uncheck Enable Countdown in all difficulties. since it was unused, yup~

Grey and white colored combos are awfully similar IMO. The contrast isn't very large. i'm give try a match with the character

Kiai check
Kiai time should start here 01:25:997 - yep, maybe should be fixed, and this is mostly from old-changes mess that forget to changed.

Easy

SPOILER

Grid 2 is screwing with your spacings. Turn grid snap off and fix some of them. Spacing differences are more notable when the spacing gaps are large. some of your spacings I think are fine like this for example 02:12:151 (2,3,1) -

Patterns could vary more. The copy pasta is just lazy mapping. actually i'm not great to set a very various (in case: neat pattern, for some scrambled pattern maybe can be made... (in risk))

00:08:195 (2,3,1) - Spacing feels weird. Note 1 feels forced to me. Fix the spacing? Some other triples feel fast. I can hit them just fine, but I'm not sure about new players. At this point I'm only requesting that you go through and find the ones that play fast and make them easier to hit.

00:24:019 (2,3,1) - 3,1 looks weird being unsymmetrical. Resnap to 0.8 and make it look nicer? the 3,1 is having half-beat earlier than 2,3

00:31:931 (2,3,1) - Turn grid snap off and fix this spacing. Also you may want to curve the notes? curve-diagonal maybe enough

00:34:569 (2,3,1) - This is not lined up with the pattern mentioned above. You can just copy the previous pattern, delete these notes and then flip the pattern horizontally. flipped

00:37:206 (2,3,1) - Spacing. Turn grid snap off and fix it. should be similar with last? since it still using diagonal-based

00:44:788 (2,3,1,2,3) - I think you should break up the same pattern you've been mapping for the past 40 seconds. There's different variations you could map here.

01:18:580 (1) - Empty note. Remove this. it was the "3rd" sound of "bang bang BANG"

01:16:602 (1) - Maybe end here? 01:18:250 - hmm... 1 beat spinner and half-beat interval for next circle.

01:21:547 - I think a note should go here. created.

01:23:360 (1) - This slider is weird looking. Maybe use a more standard looking slider? straightened

01:23:360 (1,2) - This stack is awful. moved.

01:28:470 (1) - I don't like the hitsounds here. vanished clap
01:33:744 (1) - I don't like these hitsounds. vanished clap
01:39:019 (1) - Same hitsounds on the same slider. vanished clap

01:30:942 - Add note? The reduced spacing is conflicting with this sound and I keep hitting early.
If you do this. do the same for the other sequences. Anyways I think the reduced spacing is a tad too hard for an easy transition.
hmmm.... it doesn't match the sound (compared to Final-Dream section)

02:21:876 (1) - Empty note. Delete. it was the "3rd" sound of "bang bang BANG"

02:19:898 (1) - Maybe end here? 02:21:547 - (or a half beat earlier?) hmm... 1 beat spinner and half-beat interval for next circle.

02:26:656 (1) - If you changed the design of the first slider make sure you do the same for this one. OK!

Normal

SPOILER

00:01:602 (1,2) - This is awkward. I would prefer that the snap be changed to 1.0 if you are going to have such a transition. wow.. it's getting further!

00:03:580 (5,1) - Use 1.0 snap. it's getting further!

00:05:558 (2,3,4,5) - Fix spacing discrepancies? fixed

00:14:459 (6,1) - Horrible spacing. yeah i think so.

00:19:733 (6,1) - Unrankable. It is too hard to recognize when the slider starts. Plus all the overlap is ugly and annoying. also the spacing is ugh Bad! rotated.

00:22:700 (1,3) - I don't like this overlap. hmm.. at least still visible apart..

00:25:008 (6,1) - More bad spacing. yeah i think so.
00:27:975 (1) - I don't like how this slider plays/looks. Feels too fast to me. hmmmm.... hmm...

00:30:283 (6,1) - Spacing. fixed.

00:30:448 (1,2) - Too close together. fixed.
00:30:448 (1) - Another weird slider that feels too fast. fixed.

00:34:239 (2,3,4,5,6) - Clap spam >.< vanished.

00:34:898 (4,5,6) - Spacing... ... isn't it still same with the 2,3,4 ?

00:40:832 (6,1) - Spacing. fixed.
00:40:997 (1) - I find it hard to hit the next notes when the sliders curve weirdly like this. It could be because of the awful spacing you put before them though. fixed.

00:40:997 (1,2) - Too close IMO. fixed.

00:42:151 (2,3,4,5) - Clap spam fixed.
00:44:459 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ (Please hitsound better) fixed.
00:50:063 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ fixed.

00:51:382 (6,1) - spacing. fixed.
00:55:338 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Spacing. fixed. (with harder dist. but match)
01:00:612 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ fixed. (with harder dist. but match)
01:02:261 (1,2,3) - ^ fixed. (with harder dist. but match)

01:11:656 (4,5) - Undermapped IMO. I think you should use more of the beat here. Besides the reduced spacing doesn't work and plays bad. it fits for me..

01:18:085 (1,2,3) - This plays awkward to me and doesn't sound much like the beat. I suggest that you delete note 1 and move note 3 here 01:18:662 - What do you think? it fits the triplet bang.

01:19:404 (1,2,3) - This also doesn't feel right. Something is wrong. Try finding another beat to map there. i've checked the triplet bang and it fits with last. (maybe the bang effect... (like used on Ultimate-Dream ? the 123-456-789 with crazy space.))

01:25:997 - 1.5x is awful IMO. The sliders are too fast!! I suggest you get this checked over for more opinions. hmm.. i'll try to open m4m-q for this..

Kiai rhythm is a mess. Please recheck note placement through here. (0.75x plays a lot better)

02:08:195 (1) - Ugly slider. in order to escape from straight from "last pattern"

02:14:953 (4,5) - I still think you should do something else with this rhythm. hmm.. fixed like the "last-one"

02:21:382 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Please do something else with these like before. it still fits.

Final Dream

SPOILER

Drain -1 it much longer to me to stay in fresh (higher bar), thanks~

00:03:909 (8) - I think this sounds and plays better here 00:03:860 - lol, i only fixed it in ulti-ones

00:04:074 (1,2) - Spacing is too close? fixed.

00:06:217 (7,8,9) - small spacing issue lower time interval, (and it feels easier)
00:11:492 (7,8,9) - ^ lower time interval, (and it feels easier)

00:34:569 (4,5,6) - The snap feels too slow. Increase spacing? trying to match the end of slider 4 (and the 5, is shortened cause some over-length)

00:36:876 (7,8) - Spacing! further~

00:38:525 (1) - remove a lot of the unnecessary move points. They clutter up the .osu. i feel smoother slider.
00:40:997 (1) - ^ (Go through and do this to all the sliders. I don't have to mention each one.) i fix the non-smooth slider only.

00:43:799 (1) - Make this part of the previous combo. i feel the new instument attacks is the start of a new combo, like most used on slider first 20 second.
00:44:459 (2) - New combo.

00:54:184 (9,1) - Spacing. rotated a bit.

00:56:821 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Confusing spacing gaps. confused? hmmm.. i don't feel so.

01:03:250 (9) - New combo? for certain case, this map should have at least 1 short combo, thanks

01:10:997 (2,3,4,5) - spacing too close? moved 1 grid.

01:16:601 (2,1) - Awkward as hell spacing. Fix this (lol, i still able to pass, but.. yeah.. maybe reduced 2 combo is okay)
01:18:744 (1,1) - better spacing than before, but still awkward. (makes me always slider break, but.. it lasts longer 1/4 beat.)

01:26:904 (4,5,6) - You just can't have spacings like this. (gonna steal a pattern, but it feels right, and easier for ctb ones)

01:25:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - Break this combo up. It's too long. (hmm... the combo should be easier...)

01:27:975 (8,9,10) - Doesn't play right to me. I think note 9 needs to go here 01:28:305 - and note 10 should go here 01:28:552 - . Fix the spacing afterwards. audio lead-in maybe cause this.

01:31:107 (19,1) - The spacing is already confusing enough without this half note jump. Eh might be fine. Same for all the other times i mentioned this. (lol, mistyped "9" of "19") (this is challenging!)

01:31:272 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - Combo is too big. half-break.

01:34:239 (11) - I feel this note belongs here 01:34:321 - I could be wrong.

01:36:382 (19,1) - Same for 1:31

01:36:547 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - Combo is too big.half-break.

01:34:239 (11,12,13,14) - This is just awkward and horrible to try to read.

01:37:206 (3,4,5,6) - More horrible spacing.

01:38:772 (9,10) - Same for 1:27?
(Do the same for the other beats for this?)

01:41:656 (19,1) - Same for 1:31 and 1:36

01:41:821 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - Combo is too long.

01:44:788 (11,12,13,14) - Same for 1:34

01:46:931 (19,1) - Same for 1:31, 1:36, and 1:41

01:47:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - Combo is too long.

01:47:755 (3,4,5,6) - Same horrible spacing as 1:37.

01:52:371 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - Combo is too long.

01:54:596 (9,10) - Same as 1:27 It doesn't sound right.

01:55:338 (11,12,13,14) - Same as 1:34 and 1:44

01:57:645 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - Combo is too long.

01:58:305 (3,4,5,6) - Same as 1:26 and all the other times you repeated this.

02:02:920 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - Combo is too long.

02:05:887 (11,12,13,14) - Same as 1:34 and all the other sequences like this.

(bored copy pasting comments, lol)

02:14:294 (2,3,4,5) - Too close? fixed as before.

02:19:898 (2,1) - Same awkward spacing. fixed as before.
02:22:041 (1,1) - ^ fixed as before.

Ultimate Dream

SPOILER

Hitsounds are way too loud to be overmapping like this. 51% lowered.

Drain is too high. -2 Drain too sadistic right?

Combos get too high.

00:01:602 (1,2) - Spacing.

00:04:074 (1) - clap on the end sounds bad. (for taiko mode, attack with katu!!)
00:06:876 (1) - ^

00:05:558 (10) - New combo.
00:08:195 (10) - New combo.
00:10:832 (10) - New combo.

00:11:904 (16,17) - Sounds like a repeat slider would fit better.

00:16:766 (10,11,12) - Just no. Do something else with this. Same with all other parts like this.

00:22:288 (11,12,13) - Bad spacing and sounds overmapped to me.

00:27:563 (11) - New combo.
00:27:975 (1) - Remove new combo.

00:36:547 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - overmapped. Please fix the beat.

00:45:777 (10,11) - Spacing like this after a fast stream is awkward. a bit refresh ... (fixed)

00:46:766 (13) - just delete. makes CTB gets harder too (LOL)

00:59:129 (9,10,11) - Spacing.

01:02:591 (12,13,14,15,16) - WTF spacing.
01:13:964 (18,19,20) - More WTF spacing.
01:15:365 (10,1) - Spacing again.
01:18:003 (19,1) - ^

01:18:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - No. Remap.

01:20:393 (1) - Randomly sped up slider? effect from the 1------------ 2,3,4--19 1,2,3 12345678.123-456-789

01:25:338 (1) - Unrankable spinner. Osu needs to get 2000 off the spinner.

02:12:810 (8,9) - fix this stack.

02:17:261 (18,19,20) - WTF spacing.

02:18:662 (10,1) - Spacing.

02:19:733 (7,8,9,10) - Spacing.

02:19:898 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,1) - Spacing shouldn't vary so much.

02:22:041 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - No. Remap.

02:23:689 (1) - Same random speed up.

02:26:656 (1) - slider is a bit lumpy. Fix it up a bit? effect from the 1------------ 2,3,4--19 1,2,3 12345678.123-456-789

02:28:140 (4,5,6) - Spacing...

02:28:634 (1) - Unrankable.

I didn't give a very thorough mod to this difficulty. The hitsounds need a lot of work. It's too loud in places. Also I think its too hard to be ranked in its current state. Although I'm unsure about that.
approval only?

Once you get through my mod I can then start picking at all the other things I missed when modding this map. It's going to be a very long time before I star this mapset. okay, i'll mod it (with all my power of mod)

TheVileOne wrote:

You better have fixed those WTF spacings. It can be made rankable easy enough. I would say it would be if you would remap that 5.00 jump that is random in any sense of the word, any 1/4th notes that exceed 2 .00 distance snap (maybe as their own combo they would work, but in combo is a big No.) and Those streams I told you to remap. Those things are impossible to hit and just spam the screen.


Hopefully the state of the map is well enough for me to pick at the smaller things that need to be covered. Maybe it will get a star from me sooner than I thought. Maybe.....


Also where is my kudosu.

CoroQuetz wrote:

Artist should be 'danmaq'. danmaq is only for the title screen theme, the others run by Myon.
[Final Dream]
1:29, 1:40 etc. The 5-6 jump is too far, even for a hard map. oh i see, fixed a part and others.
1:33, 1:43 etc. 3-4-5 & 8-9-1 jump a bit too far, consider moving slightly closer together? moved by 4 grid to center

[Ultimate Dream]
0:30, 0:32, 0:38 9-10-11-12 spacing is not consistent okay,
General tip for streams: don't backtrack, it's not fun D8. Keep your notes in order moving forward, otherwise spacing problems may arise (even if they don't, they're not very intuitive.) i'll try.

gtrholic wrote:

haha keren banget lagunya.. mappingnya juga keren + cepet o_o s t a r

Elize wrote:

Nice Song❤


Rnked GoGo!!!!


Star★

Zlew wrote:

General mod
- You can't use "Touhou" as source because this theme is NOT from Touhou series. i see, because it was a fanmade right ? --> changed into {the game name}
- You should add "danmakufu tag. ok

Miya wrote:

Hei Rei_fan49, thx for m4m with me..

Here some suggestion for you :

General
Compress this BG please, you can save up some file size if you compress this image
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[attachment=0:cb92b]av.PNG[/attachment:cb92b]
also, if you use the photoshop and merge those pic it can save some file size (graphic and text lol)
Why the source is not Touhou? This is touhou song right? lol the ones with the post above... also sometimes Touhou songs's Source is not Touhou itself

Easy
So many circles, change some circle to slider to add some variation in your map >.<
About hitsound, don't mix clap and whistle together, Lilac and me said it's weird.. Use constant clap or constant whistle.
I don't know your preference so i'll give this option to you

00:03:610 (2,3) - better to change into slider
00:08:884 (2,3) - ^
00:12:181 (3) - 3 grid up
00:14:159 (2,3) - change into slider
00:17:456 (3) - 1 grid right
00:19:434 (2,3) - change into slider
00:22:730 (3) - 2 grid right
00:24:708 (2,3) - change into slider
00:29:983 (2,3) - ^
00:40:533 (2,3) - ^
00:56:357 (2,3) - ^
01:01:632 (2,3) - ^
01:07:401 (3) - 1 grid down
02:10:697 (3) - 1 grid down
i see your point about conversion for 3/2 beat space..

Normal
00:14:653 (1) - add whistle at the end of slider
00:16:467 (4) - 4 grid up while using distance snapping
00:17:456 (1) - add whistle
00:19:928 (1) - remove whistle but add whislte at the end of slider
01:03:610 (3) - move 4th point of the slider 1 grid down
01:32:785 (3) - 3 gird left
02:09:874 (4) - 2 grid up
i hope from this mod, the star can lower at least 1% pts

Final-dream
01:18:115 (1) - remove new combo it's new rhythm
01:18:610 (3,1) - remove new combo from 1, add new combo at 3 i don't feel lol~
01:23:390 (1) - rotate by 9* clockwise (Use ctrl+shift+r) lol i know the "s"
02:08:225 (1) - rotate by -1* clockwise
02:26:686 (1) - move the center point 2 grid right
02:28:252 (3) - 1 grid up
02:28:500 (4) - 2 grid up
This difficulty is fun to play.. Nice work on this diff xD ありがとうございます。

Ultimate Dream
01:15:478 (1) - Rotate by 5* clockwise
01:23:390 (1) - Rotate by 3* clockwise
01:47:126 (1) - remove new combo because automatic shift into jump-section?
01:47:456 (2) - add new combo
OMG very insane map xD yes! and this map is easier than before

Udah ah capek ngomong inggrisnya lol.. lol gw juga XD
Segitu dlu aja ya fan.. good luck on this map :D

Yasora-chan wrote:

setar saja >w</ go go ranked~

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

random modding = =

[final-dream]
00:03:280 (6,8) - remove claps
00:05:588 (5) - whistle
00:05:917 (6) - delete whistle
00:06:247 (7) - whistle. no clap
00:06:494 (8) - delete clap
00:10:862 (5) - clap
00:17:044 (8) - no clap
00:19:104 (6) - no wbistle
00:19:681 (8) - ^
00:19:928 (1) - add whistle on the head
00:21:741 (6,8,9) - no clap?
00:22:730 (1) - only whistle on head i feel dull
00:24:379 (6,8) - no whistle
00:27:016 (6,8,9) - no clap
00:27:593 (8) - whistle?
00:32:291 (6,8) - no whistle
00:33:280 (1) - add whistle on the head
00:42:840 (6,8,9) - ^^^
00:59:241 (7) - no clap
00:59:489 (1) - remove clap on end
01:00:642 (3,4) - no clap
01:01:302 (6) - clapon head
01:02:126 (8) - whistle?
should add some hit sounds after this point ok
01:29:324 (2,3,4,5,6) - spacing?
02:19:928 (1) - looks great ^^
02:15:313 (6) - The previous slider covers the reverse arrow, it's hard to read...

150471... lol whats this ?

Loli Cjj wrote:

Great map.
Only a thing that bugging my eye - the opening bg color make me eyes hurts ;w;
Either change the bg color, or change the conversation color... (except for the blue one - although it hurts my eyes, but it's better)
I'm not to pro at modding but I only can handle the sb.
Oh look, shooting star!~ Down there v

nicholascjj wrote:

Tarik ucapan m4m, gapapa kok ^^

Gatyaa wrote:

Ultimate Dream:
01:16:615 (2) - Put the clap at 3rd, 5th, 7th, 9th, 11th, 13th, 15th and 17th repeat
01:26:010 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - some claps heard like it's misplaced
01:32:604 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - ^
01:36:560 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - ^
01:41:834 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - ^
01:50:076 (9) - clap?
01:51:230 (14,15) - clap?
01:53:043 (5,9,13,15) - ^ (for the slider at the start of it only)
01:55:845 (6,8) - ^ (^)
01:57:329 (13,15) - ^ (both)
01:59:884 (14) - ^
02:01:285 (8,13,14) - ^ (start only)
02:03:840 (6,14) - ^
02:10:351 (10) - ^
02:13:153 (9) - ^
02:14:801 (6,10,11,12) - ^ (start only)
02:28:812 (3,5,7) - ^

The .osu

Edit : found more mistakes but i don't want to double post :V

1. 00:03:280 (4,5) - why not ctrl+r them? I think that more easier following wtih diamond pattern
2. 00:06:906 (1) - delete whistle in slider's beginning and slider's body, that weird to heard imo, and since you add at 00:04:104 (1), maybe that will connected
3. 00:16:137 (3,4,5) - this pattern is make confused a bit and then that not same spacing (in other word not consistencty) fix the spacing between (4) and (5).
4. 00:19:434 (5) - here, zig-zag pattern like this making confused for newbie players, I'm sure if you use this, that make more easier to read
5. 00:26:357 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - here again, don't zig-zag like this, not good for normal difficulty imo
6. 00:47:456 (2) - add clap?
7. 00:54:379 (1,2) - change them into one slider? more following the rhythm instead the circle imo and in here no need new combo, but add in 00:55:368 (3)
8. 00:58:664 (3) - not good to look if the slider is a bit overlap, use distance snap to fix this
9. 01:14:159 (2) - why not stack this circle with (1)? for more easier clicking by players since in here 1/2
10. 01:16:632 (1) - honestly, this spinner is too fast for normal, then (1,2,3) is fast too for normal diff
11. 01:22:730 (5) - move this clap into (6), should in there for comfortable heard when play
12. 01:27:511 (3) - this slider is overlap with (5) and cutting (5)'s shape, try to change the pattern or the slider shape
13. 01:29:324 (6) - add new combo?
14. 01:36:412 (9,1,2) - ah the pattern make confused again, change to another pattern?
15. 01:38:061 (3) - same think as 01:27:511 (3)
16. 01:39:874 (6) - add new combo again?
17. 01:47:785 (2,3,4) - here, make confused again because the stack is awkward. use normal spacing in here for fixing this
18. 01:49:104 (5,6,7) - ^
19. 01:51:741 (1) - hey, spacing :3
20. 01:58:664 (2) - I think use normal spacing more better since that 1/1
21. 01:59:653 (3,4,5,6,7) - change this pattern into flower shape? seems hard imo
22. 02:03:610 (4) - new combo in here?
23. 02:04:351 (1,1,2,3,1) - I don't think these pattern for normal difficulty, hard to following imo, maybe for reduce some 'hard', change circle (1,2,3) into one slider?
24. 02:17:291 (1,2) - same think as 01:14:159 (2)
25. 02:19:929 (1,1,2,3) - same as 01:16:632 (1)
26. 02:26:027 (5) - same as 01:22:730 (5)

Yasora-chan wrote:

hi mod (only normal) by request via In-game PM

Normal

1. 00:03:280 (4,5) - why not ctrl+r them? I think that more easier following wtih diamond pattern ^^ no spacing changes after reversed~
2. 00:06:906 (1) - delete whistle in slider's beginning and slider's body, that weird to heard imo, and since you add at 00:04:104 (1), maybe that will connected ok~
3. 00:16:137 (3,4,5) - this pattern is make confused a bit and then that not same spacing (in other word not consistency) fix the spacing between (4) and (5). ok~
4. 00:19:434 (5) - here, zig-zag pattern like this making confused for newbie players lol, i this is normal near plus~, I'm sure if you use this, that make more easier to read i see
5. 00:26:357 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - here again, don't zig-zag like this, not good for normal difficulty imo without zig zag abit hard to make lol
6. 00:47:456 (2) - add clap? yes
7. 00:54:379 (1,2) - change them into one slider? more following the rhythm instead the circle imo and in here no need new combo, but add in 00:55:368 (3) add new combo ?
8. 00:58:664 (3) - not good to look if the slider is a bit overlap, use distance snap to fix this ok
9. 01:14:159 (2) - why not stack this circle with (1)? for more easier clicking by players since in here 1/2 at least
10. 01:16:632 (1) - honestly, this spinner is too fast for normal, then (1,2,3) is fast too for normal diff argh i don't know which to remove~
11. 01:22:730 (5) - move this clap into (6), should in there for comfortable heard when play okay
12. 01:27:511 (3) - this slider is overlap with (5) and cutting (5)'s shape, try to change the pattern or the slider shape ok
13. 01:29:324 (6) - add new combo? uhh.. even near 1 years of that combo number i miss it, no~
14. 01:36:412 (9,1,2) - ah the pattern make confused again, change to another pattern?
15. 01:38:061 (3) - same think as 01:27:511 (3) wait till i copasta!
16. 01:39:874 (6) - add new combo again? wait till i copasta!
17. 01:47:785 (2,3,4) - here, make confused again because the stack is awkward. use normal spacing in here for fixing this 0.8 spacing here
18. 01:49:104 (5,6,7) - ^ ^
19. 01:51:741 (1) - hey, spacing :3 ^
20. 01:58:664 (2) - I think use normal spacing more better since that 1/1 hmmm i don't know D:
21. 01:59:653 (3,4,5,6,7) - change this pattern into flower shape? seems hard imo okay
22. 02:03:610 (4) - new combo in here? no?
23. 02:04:351 (1,1,2,3,1) - I don't think these pattern for normal difficulty, hard to following imo, maybe for reduce some 'hard', change circle (1,2,3) into one slider? i hope surprise slider would work~
24. 02:17:291 (1,2) - same think as 01:14:159 (2)
25. 02:19:929 (1,1,2,3) - same as 01:16:632 (1)
26. 02:26:027 (5) - same as 01:22:730 (5)

LunarSakuya wrote:

hi ^^

[General]
- The background pic for First Dream and Generic Dream is 640 x 480, make it 800 x 600 or 1024 x 768 ok
- Source should be "Touhou"..Many remixes here have the source Touhou, even my map ok.

[First Dream]
00:03:610 (2) - Delete Finish at end
00:18:774 (1) - NC NCing non spinner huh ?
00:58:994 (2,3) - Make a slider instead, might be hard for beginners to get the rhythm at first yup~ ^^
01:03:610 (1) - Move somewhere else so it's not underneath the slider?
01:20:752 (1) - Add finish ok
01:33:939 (5) - NC to signify the multiple reverses ok ^^
01:35:258 (1) - Add finish at beginning lol i don't feel it
[Spinner NCs - Fixed]
01:44:489 (1) - NC!
02:05:588 (1) - ^
02:18:774 (1) - ^
02:26:686 (1) - ^

[Generic Dream]
00:30:313 (6) - Move out a bit, like the ones you had previously hmm sometimes stack would be better ?
00:54:379 (1) - Delete NC new section, and also i want to separate it from others
01:53:390 (2,3) - Make a slider instead? nope
01:58:664 (2) - Don't stack
[Spinner NCs - Fixed]
01:16:632 (1) - NC! (Spinners must have NC or else it's unrankable)
02:06:906 (1) - NC
[Post Spinner NCs - Fixed]
02:21:659 (1) - NC, unrankable bug

[Complex Dream]
00:06:906 (1) - Add finish at beginning ok
00:43:829 (1) - Try to line this up with 00:43:170 (7) ok
01:19:434 (1) - Spacing (lol i added more challenge here)
01:47:126 (1) - Delete NC no, this is the beginning of the new section of the song (arrangement list between Reimu8 and Reimu1+Reimu8)
02:19:928 (1) - I'm questioning the rankablility of this, but I'll leave it for now xD looks cool hehe ^^
[Spinner NCs - Fixed]
01:49:846 (1) - NC
01:57:758 (1) - NC

[Ultimate Dream]
00:27:016 (8,9,10) - Spacing ok
00:37:401 (8) - NC (wait for next similar mod) since it near the end of the section
00:47:785 (12) - NC ^
01:00:972 (6) - ^ ^^ nyan
01:03:280 (11) - ^ (you actually read my NC mind by using "11" instead "16" lol) ^^ nyan
00:40:697 (10,11) - Don't stack underneath (9) ok
01:04:599 (19) - Place in the middle so the slider before makes a nice blanket over it http://puu.sh/nqxl i forgot puush wasnt working ok
01:16:632 (2) - NC to indicate speed change ok
01:30:890 (10) - NC i don't want to break the combo feeling near the next pattern start (song , not objects)
wow that stream...
01:49:104 (7) - NC ok
01:51:082 (1) - need to hear some sound priiiit~
02:08:060 (5) - Don't stack, hard to read after the huge stream ok
02:11:522 (2) - Delete note? ok
02:14:159 (2,3) - Spacing raised
02:22:730 (2) - NC ok

Good luck!!

Gatyaa wrote:

Hi

[Generic Dream]
00:01:632 (1) - Whistle ok
00:06:906 (1) - ^
00:09:379 (1) - ^
00:28:005 (1) - ^

[Complex Dream]
00:02:950 (5) - Whistle
00:08:225 (5) - ^
00:19:434 (7) - Clap instead of Whistle
00:19:681 (8) - Clap
00:21:412 (5) - Whistle instead of Clap
00:24:708 (7) - Clap instead of Whistle
00:29:653 (6) - Remove Clap
00:29:653 (6) - Clap instead of Whistle
00:40:203 (6) - Remove Whistle
00:51:082 (7) - Clap instead of Whistle


[Ultimate Dream]
01:04:928 (1) - Add a whistle
01:06:247 (5) - Whistle at the start of the slide
01:06:906 (8) - ^
01:07:153 (10) - Clap
01:07:401 (1) - Whistle
01:08:884 (6) - ^
01:09:544 (8) - Clap
01:11:522 (6) - Clap at the start of the slider
01:12:016 (8) - Clap at the reverse arrow
01:20:752 (1) - Whistle
01:22:071 (5) - ^
01:22:730 (6) - Clap
02:09:544 (5) - Whitsle
02:09:873 (7) - ^
02:10:203 (9) - ^
02:10:368 (10) - Remove Clap here
02:10:450 (11) - Clap
02:10:697 (1) - Whistle
02:12:181 (5) - ^
02:12:840 (7) - Clap
02:15:313 (8) - Clap at the reverse arrow
02:25:368 (5) - Whistle
02:26:027 (6) - Clap

Sorry for not modding First dream. Too lazy to mod an easy it's ok

Loli Cjj wrote:

#modreqs perasaan gw stop modreqs jam 5an deh lol

=General=
1. Di pg.2 kan pernah tuh aku singgung soal warna bg awal yang menyakitkan mata, rekomendasi (tenang, ga jelek" mampus kok) warna bgnya (R,G,B) = (66,20,8). Imo, meski gelap tapi tampak lebih bagus. (Itu aku pake color picker di gambarmu, sih! ) hmmmmm
2. Tiap spellcard bonus (atau ga tiap kali) SV multiplier kan nambah, cobalah buat warning kayak sv up atau apalah. Kalau tanpa peringatan, jadi kesan map buat trolling doang. ga selalu naek lol... toh spellcard itu variant ^^

=First Dream=
1. 01:09:544 (2) - Jangan yang begini dong slidernya D: imo keliatan jelek, karena hitcirclenya besar. itu belok sesuai lagu
2. 01:19:928 (1) - Pindah ke 01:20:093 sorry
3. 01:22:730 (4) - Satu grid small ke kiri dan ke atas 1 grid right.
4. 01:30:642 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1) - Imo terlalu susah untuk level Beginner. Cari variasi yang mudah. erased some 1/1s

=Generic Dream=
1. 00:17:456 (1) - Overlap sama 00:16:467 (4,5), yang membentuk hasil yang kurang menarik hati. ok
2. 00:26:686 (3,4,5,6) - Buat pattern diamond yang cantik. http://puu.sh/rP9L ok
3. 00:28:005 (1) - Buat yang simetris? ok
4. 00:30:478 (1) - Buat yang sedikit lebih melengkung? Biar kayak ngeblanket 00:29:983 (5) (dan biar terlihat seksi Bl) http://puu.sh/rPaS
5. 00:46:467 (1) - http://puu.sh/rPbW ok
6. 01:03:610 (3) - Overlap sama 01:02:126 (1) ok
7. 01:59:653 (3,4,5,6,7) - Kebanyakan pemain baru engga ngerti pake zx, jadi imo mending jadi repeat slider. (soalnya imo spacing juga rada jauh gitu)
8. 02:04:351 (1) - Setelah spin di sini... kenapa kamu kasih sb hitcircle... 3 2 1 GO! , itu sih signal sebenernya

=Complex Dream=
1. Complex Dream ini diff Hard, bukan? Kalau iya, turunkan AR. AR 8 itu sudah batas Insani. http://puu.sh/sykL
2. 00:12:181 (1) - Simetriskanlah. http://puu.sh/rPhH ok
3. 00:14:653 (1) - http://puu.sh/rPiI ok
4. 00:26:192 (2,3,4,5) - Bentuk melengkung mungkin cocok.
5. 00:28:005 (1) - Buat ujung slider stack sama 00:27:346 (7) ok
6. 00:51:577 (1) - Buat yang mirip sama nomor 3? ok
7. 01:31:302 (1) - Ganti sudden jump ini. Berlaku juga buat 01:41:851 (1) ok
8. 02:05:588 (1,1,1,1) - Spacing ganti ke 1.3 - 1.5x 1.42x

=Ultimate Dream=
1. 00:14:653 (1) - Kasus yang sama dengan Complex Dream nomor 3? ok
2. 00:18:774 (5) - Spacing
3. 00:37:401 (8) - Satu grid small ke kiri atas 1 kiri
4. 00:37:566 (9) - Satu grid small ke kanan atas 1 kanan
5. 01:16:632 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2) - Tidak ada peringatan SV berubah drastis. Imo annoying. added SB ^^ , no text filesize near limit
> 01:16:632 (1) - Bisa distack sama ujung slider 01:15:478 (1) memang pengen di tengah
6. 02:11:686 (2,3,4) - Spacing. greater ^^
7. 02:12:675 (6) - Satu grid kanan dua grid atas. ok
8. 02:19:928 (1,1,2,3,1) - Perubahan SV drastis lagi... added SB ^^ , no text filesize near limit

=Taiko Dream=
Kalo buat bagian (00:12:181) dst. ga terlalu terpikat sama suara gitar dan bikin pattern drum(d k ddk atau d k dkd) pattern drum di awal lagu, bisa aja combonya lebih banyak lho, dan sekalian biar mengikuti flow musik. sebenernya di spellcard itu gw tulis gini ... "Taiko Futsuu" "Taiko Oni" "DS Warning" "Taiko Muzukashii" "Taiko Ura Oni" gw post SB patchnya deh

Makin cantik. Berjuanglah.
(Dan kalo kata"nya ga sreg di hati, tolong maafin ya >n<)

496,176,34599,5,0
420,84,35258,1,8
304,120,35917,1,0
312,240,36577,1,8
428,276,37236,1,0
312,240,37895,2,0,B|240:204|164:244,1,150

160,32,45148,5,8
128,132,45807,1,0
156,232,46467,1,8
256,272,47126,1,0
356,232,47785,1,8
384,132,48445,1,0
352,32,49104,1,12

00:43:829 (3) - In your arrangement of hitsounds clap should be on (2), not (3).
00:46:467 (3) - Add finish and new combo please! (Finish - because song have it and new combo because it fits with sense. )
00:49:104 - Delete clap and add finish. (Listen to song. )
00:54:379 (3) - Whistle? But song haven't it. May be finish is better than whistle?
00:55:697 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Why hitsounds on similar objects is different? Please change it! ( Also whistles don't suitable for this moment, i think. )
01:07:401 (3) - Add finish? (Because song have it. )
01:09:544 (2) - Finish for it! (Because song have it. )
01:10:203 - 01:12:511 This time shouldn't stand empty. Can you map it? Oh, the lazy!
01:22:730 (4) - Add whistle?
01:31:302 (1) - May be delete whistle on middle of slider and add whistle on all slider like 01:28:664 (2) ? (My request. )
01:41:852 (1) - ^ same?
01:47:291 - 01:49:681, 01:49:846 - 01:52:318 - This time shouldn't stand empty. Can you map it?
01:52:401 (1) - Whistle? For what?
01:57:675 (1) - ^ same?
02:02:950 (1) - same as 01:31:302 (1) and 01:41:852 (1).
01:47:291 - 01:49:681, 01:49:846 - 01:52:318 - This time shouldn't stand empty. Can you map it?
02:13:417 - 02:18:692 - ^same?

TheVileOne wrote:

General
Ultimate Dream has a different combo color than the other difficulties. changed the color from other diffs, well too bright combo color here lol..

First Dream

SPOILER

Modder Comments
It's better than I first remember it being. There are some areas where I felt you made the beat too simple. There should be at least some rhythm in the patterns even in an Easy. Also I realize that tickrate 0.5 is unrankable. I think that the difficulty would be worse off if you raised it to 1.0. You might have to unfortunately. If you do, you can use a silenced custom slider tick and use a transparent slider tick. what i actually think in here, is about taikosu! mode.. well, i really care for this kantan-ness of taikosu, because slider tick 1 breaks the harmony of the kantan taikosu in here..


00:34:599 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't think this works to a rhythm. It's harder to read. If you say added notes to where the strongest ticks are or replaced some of the notes with sliders. Also it may sound better on red ticks. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/331042 i feel the beat is a bit complex hmmm...
00:45:148 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Beat is too simple IMO. It's easy yes, but it really just sounds nothing like the beat. It bothers me a little.
00:56:357 (2) - You should work on the shape of this slider. ok
00:58:994 (2) - I think this sounds better extended to the long white tick. nope
01:09:544 (2) - You should break this up into notes. I don't think it plays nice as a slider. as the slider turning, it follows the song~
01:21:412 (2) - Move one grid to the left nice eyecatch!
01:21:741 - I don't really care about maintaining easy spacings, adding a note here would make it sound and play so much better. It plays so weird skipping over it. relax diff btw =w=
01:30:642 (3,1) - Grid snap off and fix spacing? no, it was correct spacing anyway.
02:23:390 (1) - This note threw me off the first time. Maybe there's a more fitting way to portray the beat. How about this? Add a note here 02:22:730 - and make the note here 02:23:390 - a slider that ends on the note long white tick. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/331073 the 02:23:390 is off beat, remember previously... i put O-3/4-O-3/4-O there.., and also adding note i cannot do it because it very near with the end of the spinner...

Generic Dream

SPOILER

Modder Comments

You should lower the volumes of the ticks near the start of the difficulty. Other than that there's a whole lot of things to mention about this difficulty. I still found some beats to be too simplified. There were strange sliders and area for fluid rhythms that were either ignored or mapped in a way that didn't take advantage. The hitsounds in areas were downright bad. This difficulty took so very long to mod.

00:04:104 (1) - Very hard to place. How about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/331125 (It's on the screen)
00:14:489 (6) - Move back to the blue tick. That's where the sound is. since there's 2 sound there, and if i change tick, i can't find more stable pattern there..
00:17:126 (6) - ^ (More closer to the main rhythm) ^
00:17:456 (1) - Strange slider. I suggest you just use a simple curve. =w= no 39
00:19:928 (1) - Strange slider. Please change it. just flipped the shape
00:22:401 (6) - blue tick. Do so for all of these.... i just feeling that i cannot make another better pattern and the normal should not be very complex... sorry
00:22:730 (1) - Make the U slider symmetrical i just thinking about that anyway,
00:25:203 (1) - This slider can be made better if you remove some of the move points. =w=b
00:33:115 - Add note here, remember to move note before it back 1/4th.
00:40:862 - Don't have to move this back 1/4th IMO.
00:43:500 (6) - ^
00:43:829 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - clap pattern is meh. I think it could be a lot better. Here's what I came up with. I made this 00:43:829 (1) - end here 00:44:489 - , added a repeat. Then I repositioned the next three notes. I removed any claps that were on the slider.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/331150 i detected jump there... lol just remove the ending clap on the (1)
00:49:104 (1,2,3) - Claps don't work. Also I think the beat is too simple and it's hurting the flow. I highly recommend you extend this 00:49:104 (1) - to here 00:49:928 - and then place the other notes like this on the timeline http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/331155 no, i follow the long notes..
00:51:577 (1) - Slider doesn't look nice. Try to make sliders symmetrical or even on both sides. fixed into a J
00:56:851 (1) - Perhaps make a S slider and position it more towards the top of the previous note?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/331161 (Positioning may not be the most ideal) another better slider ahead =w=
00:59:489 (1) - Extend half a beat? no
01:00:642 (2,3) - if there are claps on any of these you should remove them.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/331164 some claps removed
01:04:928 (1) - I think this sounds better if you extend to 01:05:917 - no
Once that is done, remove the clap on the end, remove the clap here 01:06:247 (2) - , add clap to 01:06:577 (3) - , add note here 01:07:153 - and add a clap. no(te)
01:09:544 (5) - This slider ends weirdly compared to the beat. It's strange that you end it at a start of a chord and then completely skip over the chord. If you could somehow map that chord. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/331171 < maybe (up to you) rest part anyway
01:18:362 (2,3) - I don't agree with this starting on a blue tick. Here's my suggestion for this part: extend the spinner to the long white tick. Get rid of the blue tick start, and just keep the last note. actually the spinner SHOULD ENDS at next downbeat, but since this is a normal, well i should have some rationality to give recover time to some players... also the blue tick is from O-3/4-O-3/4-O don't forget it.
01:20:752 (1) - The curve of the notes after this should complement the slider's curve. I suggest you make the curve of the slider similar to that of the notes. ok
01:31:137 (9) - Add whistle? Then remove whistle from start of next slider. I think it sounds better. :?
01:41:687 (9,1) - ^ :?
01:47:785 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Awfully hard for a Normal difficulty and it sounds kind of bad. I suggest you do something else. I tried to find the beat and I think I found a nice rhythm. It starts here 01:47:621 -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/331189 <timeline i'm following Eternal Miko instrument here, not Maiden Cappricio ones or mixed even... also, it can be accomplished by HOLD 1/2, HOLD 1/2, and CLICK~
01:53:060 (1,2,3,4) - It might play better in this configuration. Try it and decide for yourself. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/331193 < timeline (Note 3 could also work as a repeat slider) ^
01:54:379 (4,5,6,7) - Spacing can be made nicer. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/331195 hmm fixing some...
01:58:664 (2) - I don't think this is mapped to anything. I hear sounds at 01:58:500 - and 01:58:829 - Remove repeat and start the slider there and extend to 01:58:829 - . It plays much better that way still on Eternal Miko, listen to it, there's another arrangement there...
01:59:653 (3,4,5,6,7) - This is too hard and the claps sound nothing like the beat. Okay first off, I think the gap is too large before it, and there's just too much clicking. I suggest that you add a note here 01:59:324 - and break up that pattern. Changing it to a repeat slider for the last three notes makes it a bit easier. (or you could lower the spacing between the notes) spacing -20%.
02:06:906 (1) - Harsh spinner for such a difficulty. I suggest getting red of that slider, and ending the spinner on that white tick. You can then make some form of pattern with the remaining notes in that combo. as the approach circle of (1) shrinking after the spinner, the sound is decaying on that time...
02:17:291 (1,2,1) - I like the pattern for First Dream better really. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/331211
02:19:929 (1) - Same suggestion for this spinner as the first instance of this pattern. nope.

Complex Dream

SPOILER

Modder Comments

I think there is too many slider variations in this difficulty. I feel that there's a lack of consistency in patterns overall in this diff and that's the most notable flaw with it. (Some of the patterns just look like experiments rather than a coherent attempt at a beatmap.) Speed up section sliders is too fast for the pacing. I recommend making the sliders slower.

The intro should contain more volume changes so it's not just lots of thumps.

Here's something you could do
00:02:456 - Normal- 50%
00:02:785 - Normal 70%
00:04:928 - Normal 50%
00:05:423 - Normal 70%
00:07:730 - Repeat above pattern
00:10:203 - ^

00:06:741 (9) - Replace clap with whistle?
00:10:368 (2,3,4,5) - Could you make sure all of these are equally spaced in the pattern? yes
00:19:928 (1) - This is a weird slider. Change? ok
00:22:730 (1,2) - If you could fix this overlap. hmm?
00:33:280 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - There's like no symmetry here. Add some! ??
00:36:906 (7) - End half beat later? no
00:41:027 (1) - Position it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/331237 < It also looks slightly uneven. not flip?
00:54:379 (1) - Make more symmetrical? ikr
01:07:401 (1) - Odd looking slider. I suggest that you make the curve start leveled more with note 8. ?
01:11:357 (4,5) - Place 5 under 4? no?
01:13:994 (1,2,3) - Try compressing the notes more. no
01:26:027 (1,2) - Why 1.0 and not 0.8? Make 0.8? nazi'd
01:28:500 (1) - Weird slider- same for any other sliders that look like this. I guess it's fine if you can't find a better design :/ yep, it follows the lower note too :3
01:36:577 (1,2,3) - Again why 1.0. I think it plays best if you kept it at 0.8. copy pastah!
01:47:126 (1) - Too quiet and it's odd hearing the hitsounds drop so suddenly. the song.
01:52:071 (2) - Move 1/4th back? no
01:52:401 (3) - Move 1/2th back? no
01:53:721 (8) - Unsnapped - FIX :| i didn't know if it was un-ed... ok snapped!
01:56:686 (2) - Weird slider, too fast, don't like how it plays really following the sound.
02:10:697 (1) - Make symmetrical? =w=b
02:17:291 (1,2,3) - Compress more nope
02:19:928 (1) - meh. I don't like the blending when you start a slider end touching another part of the slider. i didn't blend it XP

Too many things wrong with this difficulty. I will probably need to recheck it with changes done to point out more.

Ultimate Dream

SPOILER

Modder Comments

I dislike the 1/2th portions of this. I just didn't find the patterns to be that enjoyable to look at. I didn't like most of the 1/4th parts at the beginning of the song. I felt that the first deathstreams fit well, but the following deathstream just felt like you were just pushing it to be difficult rather than following the nuances of the song. But then again this diff was not designed for me. Feel free to get a second, third, and fourth opinion on what I say.

00:31:467 (2,3,4,5) - 2,3 and 4,5 shouldn't have different spacings. jump!
01:06:247 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Okay I'm going to mention this. I don't like increasing the pacing just to immediately slow down again. It doesn't make rhythmical sense. Either increase the pacing for all the notes or don't increase the pacing at all. the notes still calm lol
01:14:653 (3,4,5) - Please fix the overlap. okay
01:15:478 (1) - Why is this crooked? 8) coolness
01:20:423 (1,2,1) - This is very awkward. Don't switch velocities like that. Start regular velocity here 01:20:423 -
i'll leave someone more skilled than I to critique the deathstreams. streams
01:52:071 (2) - Move 1/4th back? Eternal Miko!
01:57:016 (13,14,15) - This is awkward. Delete note 14 and space out? no?
01:58:994 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - So much clap spam' refer taikosu.
I don't really think the beat is that intense through here. I don't think the deathstreams fit all that much through this part.
02:07:566 (1,2,3) - I think you should just leave the blue tick sounds out of this. The remaining notes can be a jump possibly. idk. i don't understand...
02:19:928 (1) - Same opinion as in Complex Dream same comment then.
02:23:719 (1,2,1) - Same comment about velocities same responses then.

Conclusion
Meh. It's very unlikely I will star this. You will probably find a lot of my preferences undesirable, and even then there's still things that I feel need to be done. I will recheck, but I can't say I will be able to determine all the things that needs to be done to make me happy or to consider this beatmap as flawless. It's a working progress though and I pointed out a lot of the issues.

PROGUY wrote:

Hi again
From #modreqs.

[General]
First Dream's BPM should be 182. i need to use tick 0.5, well... i don't have any choice instead lowering the tick...
Taiko Dream's Combo1 should be 255, 255, 0 like the other diffs. :\ i'm already did it

[First Dream]
00:08:884 (2,3) Remove 3 and change 2 to a slider that ends where 3 was. i'll consider this
00:16:137 (1,2,3) Make it more triangular, like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/347482 :3
00:29:983 (2) Slider head, add clap. Slider tail, remove clap. whistle instead.
00:37:895 (6) Move this one to 224,72.
00:38:555 (7) Move this one to 336,24. (Followed by rearranging the notes that come after it)
01:06:906 (2,3) Remove 3 and change 2 to a slider that ends where 3 was. :3
01:11:522 What's with this empty spot? Add a slider or something here. nil.
01:12:675 (1) Remove this. ^
01:19:928 (1) ^ ^
01:15:478 (1) This spinner should end at 01:19:434. ^
01:33:939 (1) Try something like this instead: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/347497 similar but different. thanks for telling me ^^
01:43:500 (2) Remove this. nil
01:44:160 (4) ^ nil
01:49:763 (1) Remove this and insert Break here. nil
02:04:599 (2) Remove this. ^
02:05:258 (4) ^ ^
02:12:840 (2,3) Remove 3 and change 2 to a slider that ends where 3 was. :3
02:14:818 Again add something here. nil
02:15:972 (1) Remove this. nil
02:18:774 (1) This spinner should end at 02:22:730. ^
02:23:225 (1) Remove this. ^

[Generic Dream]
HP Drain +1 :3
Your keysounds are inconsistent and I don't like how you alternate between claps and whistles at intervals at certain points. Also please make more eye-pleasing patterns and sliders. It's really hard to point out how each section should look like at the moment. :(

[Complex Dream]
HP Drain +1
I don't like how this map kinda follows the old-style mapping from 2007 and 2008. Please play more on the recent maps made from late 2009 onwards and be inspired from how the techniques are used. mixing between 2-era of my mapping, which is 2011 style like this and 2012 which currently i'm still improving within..
00:03:857 (8,1) Distance between these notes should be about x1, or at least x0.95. :(
01:13:994 (1,2,3) Turn this into a slider, where it starts at 1, reverses at 2, then ends at 3. :(
02:17:291 (1,2,3) ^ :(

[Ultimate Dream]
In addition to what I've explained in Complex Dream (Yep, same old-style as Complex Dream), you need to add more new combo constantly in this difficulty only to prevent player's health from dropping too quickly. HardRock style of Complex Dream

...Maybe I just thought of something: You may need to do the same for your easier maps too since the style you used in the harder maps may be how weird they are. no.

I hope this helps

OnosakiHito wrote:

Sneeked just by the way in.
Here you have a little taiko mod from me.

[Generel]
The downloaded difficultys dosen't match the beatmap Listening. i don't get it~

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/28547


[Taiko]

- Overall it's fine but I want to say somethhing about the kiai time.

01:26:027~01:36:577~01:41:851~01:47:126
You have begun with really simple patterns rising up in three steps up to a really hard stream. That is fine as long as there is not such a huge level spread like in your kiai. The beginning of the kiai is way easier as other patterns before and the part at 01:36:577~01:41:851 isn't a real transition to this insane stream at 01:41:851~01:47:126. It is probably considert as unrankable, but I'm not sure about this. maybe i'm going to make more dense the kiai part
Anyway, I suggest you to make the first and second part way harder so it fits more to the overall of the map's patterns, so you also avoid this huge level spread.
If you want to make this part easier, you should rather make an easier diff. as chosing suddenly the way of easy-mapping in a hard map.

01:47:126 - cut the kiai here, fits better and also we have a low sequenze here. ok~
01:47:621 (x) - one note here, d prefereable because of hearable low beat. ok
01:57:675 - here you can start the kiai again. ok
01:57:675~02:05:588 - Same as above. Make this part harder please else overall it dosen't fit well. 1/1 -> 1/4 = no no changed from muzu-ish into suika-ish part
02:18:774 - Just saying, this is harder as the kiai part. One more reason to change the above said suggestions. actually the spellcard part means this part is final power which gives more harder than similar part pre-kiai

Good luck.

XK2238 wrote:

1st try, now gimme supporter.