As requested,
[
General]
- Change title to Magic
World (TV Size) to keep consistency with the ranked map
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/23461.
- Similar with source
To Aru Majutsu no Index II for consistency.
Only title should be changed, source is fine if you want to keep it.- I would really prefer a 192kbs mp3. I'm sure there's a 320kbs mp3 / loseless one (depends on if there is an OST) out there for TV size. Try looking for it then reencoding to 192kbs?
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Really confused with the slider velocity. What's with 0.72, 0.88 and 0.98? Just wondering. It doesn't really make a different gameplay wise.
- yuca have 0 video offset. Please change to -448 like the others.Bold, must/should be fixed.
[
Easy]
00:52:450 (2) - Don't see why you didn't curve this one considering you curved 00:49:117 (2), so place curve it as well.
01:21:398 (3) - This slider feel like it should be like this
http://puu.sh/7LyZ. Fit better with the singing then a simple curve slider.
I would like to see a bit more curved slider like these two 01:03:327 (1,2) and similar patterns. But it's fine if you don't want to.
[
yuca]
+ 1 hp & od for better difficulty spread
00:01:748 (3,4) - A short slider really fit better with how the singer is singing this and I don't really see anything in the instrument that warrants two hit circle so I suggest you change it.
00:08:415 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Stacking the (2) in both combo flows better. Also, I feel beat placement could be more interesting. You could try this
http://puu.sh/7LAc.
01:19:468 (4) - This is the only kick slider (slider more than one repeat) you use out of the whole map. I suggest changing it. since it was unexpected for me. If not, please place it like this, so that it points to the next note and feel like there should be a extra repeat for this slider.
http://puu.sh/7LAXLooks good.
[
Hard]
00:07:889 (1,2) - I prefer if you do slider > hit circle here as these notes are right after a spinner and it hard to time perfectly to get a 300 on a hit circle while it much easier on a slider. I also feel it has slightly nicer flow.
http://puu.sh/7LBj00:09:468 (1,2,3) - Put a whistle on the repeat because (2,3), the begin of both sliders is following the instrument so by adding a whistle on the repeat the transition from instrument > vocal sounds better. Also sound better for me.
00:56:310 (1,2,3,4) - I feel it's more interesting and fit the flow nicer if you put red point on the slider like this
http://puu.sh/7LCs.
Pretty nice.
[
Insane]
00:05:608 (1) - Adjust the last anchor point without grid snap so that the point is at the center of the end circle
http://puu.sh/7LCL. Adjust the following notes accordingly.
00:36:310 (6,7) - Seem like you silence (5%) the end of both slider. Imo, this mean you should have use a hit circle instead and it play better for me as well. So change both to hit circle and remove the unused timing points.
Pretty fun, but I feel you should have used higher slider velocity. It feel like i was playing with 0.75x velocity the whole way through.
Deserves a star, good luck on rank!