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xsrsbsns

Komeiji Yuki wrote:

[General]
BG 1024X701 ? 個人覺得有點差太多就是 不打算换 :(

[Easy]
01:04:555 (2) - 提早到01:04:380開始你覺得如何 no 跟之后的一样

圖看起來不錯了 所以給個星:3
mod沒有幫助的話可以不用給kd
Good Luck 谢谢 mod&star :)

_Gezo_ wrote:

[General]
BG : Taiko is OK, but not bg_standard. It's 1024x701. Resize it to 1024x768. sorry, keeping it

[Easy]
While testing it, I felt that it was going harder as the song progresses, maybe because of the 1/2 stuff near the end.
Try staying to 1/1 and put some 1/2s (Our little newbie who wants to be a pro should learn somewhere heh ?)
Otherwise, this is a pretty good map, no spacing problems. if anything, I would make front part harder, not the opposite :3 most likely neither though

[Hard]
00:25:433 (1) - May be confusing for first play idk..
00:57:888 (4,1) - Dat jump... Put 00:58:415 (1) - closer to 00:57:888 (4) the one and only small jump in the diff.. fine imo

[Insane]
00:32:626 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - That looks asymmetrical. fixed
00:36:310 (6,7) - Lolwut that jump yes dat jump
01:08:942 (3) - I don't know if this is possible since it's almost at the end >> fixed

thanks for modding yo :)
pianiac
aaa
wmfchris

_Gezo_ wrote:

[Pangko]
00:25:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42)

You should put some more k (1/1 might work) since it feels empty. Otherwise, try varying your patterns (I feel it more a Muzukashii than a Oni).

This isn't a bad map overall, but you should challenge more people (Unless you did it on purpose for DT and stuff)
^ I don't see the purpose to make it hard just because it's easy. Fitting the song is the best solution always.

will mod soon 0.0
Yuzeyun

wmfchris wrote:

_Gezo_ wrote:

[Pangko]
00:25:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42)

You should put some more k (1/1 might work) since it feels empty. Otherwise, try varying your patterns (I feel it more a Muzukashii than a Oni).

This isn't a bad map overall, but you should challenge more people (Unless you did it on purpose for DT and stuff)
^ I don't see the purpose to make it hard just because it's easy. Fitting the song is the best solution always.

will mod soon 0.0
I didn't mean to make it hard but I found it somewhat boring (Or I must be used to hard maps :P)

I said that it feels, not that it is so it's up to him to change it or not :P
Raging Bull
General:
Odd request but add Alazy to tags? I think that can be Alace's second alias I guess since he names quite a few guest diffs with that.

Easy:
00:35:257 (1,2) - Swap NC. NC should happen at 00:36:661 (2) instead. It also makes it consistent with 00:29:643 (5) if you do.
Nothing bothered me much.

Yuca:
What diff is a yuca? >_> Add yuca's normal or add something like "Normal by yuca" in OP?
00:14:205 (1) - Note seems too fast after a spinner for beginners, perhaps shorten the spinner by 1/1?
00:36:134 (4) - Usnapped slider end.
00:46:310 (1) - Personally I don't like how fast the note is after the spinner...but It feels like it fits and the slider won't do as well imo. Idk if you wanna do anything to this.
00:58:415 (5) - I would say delete this note and move the spinner here (don't extend). It sounds better imo because 5 is when she holds a note, not the next beat. Plus if you do this, there would be recovery time to hit next note for beginners.
01:15:784 (4) - I think spacing it out would be better. The hitburst from 3 might cover up 4's AR so it might make beginners click late or earlier.
01:19:468 (4) - I think this kick slider is confusing. Beginners would probably expect only one repeat and because of how 01:18:064 (2,3) - had only one repeat. I suggest using only one repeat and add a note at 01:20:169 (x). It will be less confusing.
01:25:784 (1) - Change this kick slider into 2 1/2 sliders? Removes the kick slider difficulty while still providing same beats.
01:26:661 (1,2,3,4,5) - Star looks kinda weird btw. It looks kinda "flat" See? You could do another pattern or try to fix the star if you like it.

Hard:
Seems nice

Insane:
00:36:310 (6,7) - Not really fond of these because :|. Idk. 1/4 slider jumps don't look really nice imo. Plus they kinda lose the stream feeling since you don't click fast anymore. Maybe add a kick slider at 00:36:135 (5)? And end it where 7 ends?

Pangko:
Just curious, why is it called Pangko and not Alazy taiko?
y u c a

Raging Bull wrote:

General:


Yuca:
What diff is a yuca? >_> Add yuca's normal or add something like "Normal by yuca" in OP?
00:14:205 (1) - Note seems too fast after a spinner for beginners, perhaps shorten the spinner by 1/1?
00:36:134 (4) - Usnapped slider end. fix
00:46:310 (1) - Personally I don't like how fast the note is after the spinner...but It feels like it fits and the slider won't do as well imo. Idk if you wanna do anything to this.
00:58:415 (5) - I would say delete this note and move the spinner here (don't extend). It sounds better imo because 5 is when she holds a note, not the next beat. Plus if you do this, there would be recovery time to hit next note for beginners.
01:15:784 (4) - I think spacing it out would be better. The hitburst from 3 might cover up 4's AR so it might make beginners click late or earlier.
01:19:468 (4) - I think this kick slider is confusing. Beginners would probably expect only one repeat and because of how 01:18:064 (2,3) - had only one repeat. I suggest using only one repeat and add a note at 01:20:169 (x). It will be less confusing.
01:25:784 (1) - Change this kick slider into 2 1/2 sliders? Removes the kick slider difficulty while still providing same beats.
01:26:661 (1,2,3,4,5) - Star looks kinda weird btw. It looks kinda "flat" See? You could do another pattern or try to fix the star if you like it.
aaaaaaaaaaa so long englishhhh

Download: Kurosaki Maon - Magic world (TV Size) (xsrsbsns) [yuca].osu
Raging Bull

y u c a wrote:

aaaaaaaaaaa so long englishhhh
._.
wmfchris

Raging Bull wrote:

Pangko:
Just curious, why is it called Pangko and not Alazy taiko?
Pang = fat = Alace

modding here

[Pangko]
no problem.

[General]
The BG resolution (1024*701) is far from a 4:3 one and cause distortion of the image.

[Insane]
00:18:766 (4) - Finish here as there's accent in the music?
00:23:854 (2) - place around (264,332)
01:25:959 (2) - down 2 grids lv4 to make it symmetrical

nice sounding arrangement especially the claps~

[Hard]
00:18:766 (3) - Finish?
01:11:222 (8) - Remove whistle here? A little thought here: In [Insane], the whistle slider connects the two phrases but here, the whistle slider ends the phrase so whistle would not be suitable. Maybe you can make it softer instead of removing it.

[y u k a]
bakaaaaaaaa

[Easy]
fine.

looks ready, good luck ~ >_<
y u c a

wmfchris wrote:

Pang = fat = Alace
wwwwwwww
[y u k a]
bakaaaaaaaa
................
Yuzeyun

wmfchris wrote:

Pang = fat = Alace
wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Topic Starter
xsrsbsns

Raging Bull wrote:

General:
Odd request but add Alazy to tags? I think that can be Alace's second alias I guess since he names quite a few guest diffs with that. Alace is the ign. Alazy is just a diff name, so no need for that. Also, when I want to search specifically for Alazy diffs, I'd be mad if Pangkos show up as well. He also doesn't tag that in his mapsets.

Easy:
00:35:257 (1,2) - Swap NC. NC should happen at 00:36:661 (2) instead. It also makes it consistent with 00:29:643 (5) if you do. Fixed. Wonder how I missed this.

Yuca:
What diff is a yuca? moe diff >_> Add yuca's normal or add something like "Normal by yuca" in OP?
I'd like to keep this, there's only one 4 star diff in the mapset.

Insane:
00:36:310 (6,7) - Not really fond of these because :|. Idk. 1/4 slider jumps don't look really nice imo. Plus they kinda lose the stream feeling since you don't click fast anymore. Maybe add a kick slider at 00:36:135 (5)? And end it where 7 ends?
I don't know what a kickslider is lol, plus I like this, although I think I'll gonna get some 1s for this.
It's also not *supposed* to be full 1/4 streams from (5) onwards, but 1/2 notes.


Pangko:
Just curious, why is it called Pangko and not Alazy taiko? Your questions have been answered in some posts above ;D

Thanks for modding! :)

wmfchris wrote:

[General]
The BG resolution (1024*701) is far from a 4:3 one and cause distortion of the image.
Sigh, guess I'll fix this laaaater since all of you have said this..

[Insane]
00:18:766 (4) - Finish here as there's accent in the music? Done
00:23:854 (2) - place around (264,332) Fixed
01:25:959 (2) - down 2 grids lv4 to make it symmetrical Fixed

[Hard]
00:18:766 (3) - Finish? Nah
01:11:222 (8) - Remove whistle here? A little thought here: In [Insane], the whistle slider connects the two phrases but here, the whistle slider ends the phrase so whistle would not be suitable. Maybe you can make it softer instead of removing it. Whoa I don't think that far orz. But I think it's fine :3

looks ready, good luck ~ >_<

Thanks for modding and star! :)

wmfchris wrote:

[y u k a]
bakaaaaaaaa


baka da www
Crimmi
Modding, CrimmiStyle!!

[General]

Your BG is 1024 x 701, make it 1024 x 768?
The Title is wrong, it's supposed to be "Magic Infinity World" (Magic ∞ World) as i've researched it on Wikipedia

[Easy]

No problems here.

[yuca]

No problems here.

[Hard]

2 sec lead is a bit fast, try 2.5 sec lead in, imo.

[Insane]

No problems here.
Topic Starter
xsrsbsns

Crimmi wrote:

[General]

The Title is wrong, it's supposed to be "Magic Infinity World" (Magic ∞ World) as i've researched it on Wikipedia

The real title is "Magic∞world" (lower case w and without spaces), but osu doesn't allow the infinity symbol so it'd be natural that the correct title is the one I'm using.

There are 4 ranked mapsets of "SUPER STREAM" on osu (real title "SUPER∞STREAM").


Thanks for checking! :)
y u c a

Crimmi wrote:

Modding, CrimmiStyle!!

[General]

Your BG is 1024 x 701, make it 1024 x 768?
The Title is wrong, it's supposed to be "Magic Infinity World" (Magic ∞ World) as i've researched it on Wikipedia
its same wiki that you found http://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E3%81%A8% ... E6.AD.8CCD
just japanese ver. i think tittle is fine


xsrsbsns wrote:

wmfchris wrote:

[y u k a]
bakaaaaaaaa


baka da www
honto ni F12了.................
/me slaps xsrsbsnsヾ(*`Д´*)ノヾ(*`Д´*)ノ
e almost same time post gomen Orz..
Metro
good map!

[y u c a]

01:19:468 (4) - remove one repeat. as it's one more than the music it'll be confusing for beginners.
xierbaliti
-Insane-
01:10:871 (5) - 不太理解这个跳 求解释

没发现什么恶俗之处 改好我会bubble
winber1
sorry for late mod

Insane

00:05:608 (1) - hmm sounds better if you silence the end of this slider imo
00:36:135 (5,6,7,1) - silence these slider ends really disoriented me a bit, tho i still hit them properly. maybe it's just me, but i like it better it they weren't silenced ._.

Hard


00:15:433 (x,x) - it sounds a lot better to me if you had a note here at 00:15:433 and at 00:15:784, but not at 00:15:608 imo. it just follows the music better imo even if there's that interesting sound at 00:15:608 -
00:35:082 (x) - i like it better if a note was here (obviuosly with soft hitsounds).

yuca


00:45:082 (1) - i would add one repeat and move combo 1 closer to combo 2.
01:19:468 (4) - i would just turn this into a slider that starts at 01:19:468 and ends at 01:19:994 -
01:27:012 (2,3,4) - center around y-axis...?

Easy looks fine.

really nice map! :3
nothing really to say.
Alace
y u c a

winber1 wrote:


yuca


00:45:082 (1) - i would add one repeat and move combo 1 closer to combo 2.
01:19:468 (4) - i would just turn this into a slider that starts at 01:19:468 and ends at 01:19:994 - fix~
01:27:012 (2,3,4) - center around y-axis...?fix~
thx mod!

Download: Kurosaki Maon - Magic world (TV Size) (xsrsbsns) [yuca].osu
Gamu
hi~

I could not find the problem

Ranked GoGo~

Star~
Topic Starter
xsrsbsns

Metro wrote:

good map!

[y u c a]
01:19:468 (4) - remove one repeat. as it's one more than the music it'll be confusing for beginners.
Thanks for mod ^ and irc mod and star :)

winber1 wrote:

Hard[/b]
00:15:433 (x,x) - it sounds a lot better to me if you had a note here at 00:15:433 Added.
Others not changed, thanks for modding!
:)

-Gamu- wrote:

Ranked GoGo~
Star~
arigato :)

xierbaliti wrote:

-Insane-
01:10:871 (5) - 不太理解这个跳 求解释

没发现什么恶俗之处 改好我会bubble
hmm.. 我还是觉得那jump适合呀 也满喜欢的, 所以没去改.. 希望能接受
想问 BG 1024x701 可以吗? 还有不知AR9会较好么
Fixed a few things on [Easy]
Megurine Luka
lol已经快要bubble了啊~
看来来晚了>~<

Have my star then.
merchat7
As requested,

[General]

- Change title to Magic World (TV Size) to keep consistency with the ranked map http://osu.ppy.sh/s/23461.
- Similar with source To Aru Majutsu no Index II for consistency. Only title should be changed, source is fine if you want to keep it.
- I would really prefer a 192kbs mp3. I'm sure there's a 320kbs mp3 / loseless one (depends on if there is an OST) out there for TV size. Try looking for it then reencoding to 192kbs?
- :o :? Really confused with the slider velocity. What's with 0.72, 0.88 and 0.98? Just wondering. It doesn't really make a different gameplay wise.
- yuca have 0 video offset. Please change to -448 like the others.

Bold, must/should be fixed.

[Easy]

00:52:450 (2) - Don't see why you didn't curve this one considering you curved 00:49:117 (2), so place curve it as well.
01:21:398 (3) - This slider feel like it should be like this http://puu.sh/7LyZ. Fit better with the singing then a simple curve slider.

I would like to see a bit more curved slider like these two 01:03:327 (1,2) and similar patterns. But it's fine if you don't want to.

[yuca]

+ 1 hp & od for better difficulty spread

00:01:748 (3,4) - A short slider really fit better with how the singer is singing this and I don't really see anything in the instrument that warrants two hit circle so I suggest you change it.
00:08:415 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Stacking the (2) in both combo flows better. Also, I feel beat placement could be more interesting. You could try this http://puu.sh/7LAc.
01:19:468 (4) - This is the only kick slider (slider more than one repeat) you use out of the whole map. I suggest changing it. since it was unexpected for me. If not, please place it like this, so that it points to the next note and feel like there should be a extra repeat for this slider. http://puu.sh/7LAX

Looks good.

[Hard]

00:07:889 (1,2) - I prefer if you do slider > hit circle here as these notes are right after a spinner and it hard to time perfectly to get a 300 on a hit circle while it much easier on a slider. I also feel it has slightly nicer flow. http://puu.sh/7LBj
00:09:468 (1,2,3) - Put a whistle on the repeat because (2,3), the begin of both sliders is following the instrument so by adding a whistle on the repeat the transition from instrument > vocal sounds better. Also sound better for me.
00:56:310 (1,2,3,4) - I feel it's more interesting and fit the flow nicer if you put red point on the slider like this http://puu.sh/7LCs.

Pretty nice.

[Insane]

00:05:608 (1) - Adjust the last anchor point without grid snap so that the point is at the center of the end circle http://puu.sh/7LCL. Adjust the following notes accordingly.
00:36:310 (6,7) - Seem like you silence (5%) the end of both slider. Imo, this mean you should have use a hit circle instead and it play better for me as well. So change both to hit circle and remove the unused timing points.

Pretty fun, but I feel you should have used higher slider velocity. It feel like i was playing with 0.75x velocity the whole way through.

Deserves a star, good luck on rank!
y u c a

merchat7 wrote:

[yuca]

+ 1 hp & od for better difficulty spread

00:01:748 (3,4) - A short slider really fit better with how the singer is singing this and I don't really see anything in the instrument that warrants two hit circle so I suggest you change it. k
00:08:415 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Stacking the (2) in both combo flows better. Also, I feel beat placement could be more interesting. You could try this http://puu.sh/7LAc. please look other mod
01:19:468 (4) - This is the only kick slider (slider more than one repeat) you use out of the whole map. I suggest changing it. since it was unexpected for me. If not, please place it like this, so that it points to the next note and feel like there should be a extra repeat for this slider. http://puu.sh/7LAX

Looks good.
thx mod~

Download: Kurosaki Maon - Magic world (TV Size) (xsrsbsns) [yuca].osu
Topic Starter
xsrsbsns

merchat7 wrote:

[General]
- Change title to Magic World (TV Size) to keep consistency with the ranked map http://osu.ppy.sh/s/23461. I do not wish to keep consistency with wrong titles lol
- Similar with source To Aru Majutsu no Index II for consistency. Only title should be changed, source is fine if you want to keep it. Same as above explanation is here viewtopic.php?p=433641#p433641
- I would really prefer a 192kbs mp3. I'm sure there's a 320kbs mp3 / loseless one (depends on if there is an OST) out there for TV size. Try looking for it then reencoding to 192kbs? Not necessary
- :o :? Really confused with the slider velocity. What's with 0.72, 0.88 and 0.98? Just wondering. It doesn't really make a different gameplay wise. Habit of using multiples of .16 (after 2x)
- yuca have 0 video offset. Please change to -448 like the others. Fixed

[Easy]
00:52:450 (2) - Don't see why you didn't curve this one considering you curved 00:49:117 (2), so place curve it as well. Doesn't really matter, but changed anyways
01:21:398 (3) - This slider feel like it should be like this http://puu.sh/7LyZ. Fit better with the singing then a simple curve slider. Done

I would like to see a bit more curved slider like these two 01:03:327 (1,2) and similar patterns. But it's fine if you don't want to. Changed a few

[Hard]
00:07:889 (1,2) - I prefer if you do slider > hit circle here as these notes are right after a spinner and it hard to time perfectly to get a 300 on a hit circle while it much easier on a slider. I also feel it has slightly nicer flow. http://puu.sh/7LBj Changed
00:09:468 (1,2,3) - Put a whistle on the repeat because (2,3), the begin of both sliders is following the instrument so by adding a whistle on the repeat the transition from instrument > vocal sounds better. Also sound better for me. Nah
00:56:310 (1,2,3,4) - I feel it's more interesting and fit the flow nicer if you put red point on the slider like this http://puu.sh/7LCs. Done

[Insane]
00:05:608 (1) - Adjust the last anchor point without grid snap so that the point is at the center of the end circle http://puu.sh/7LCL. Adjust the following notes accordingly. I don't know but meddled with them
00:36:310 (6,7) - Seem like you silence (5%) the end of both slider. Imo, this mean you should have use a hit circle instead and it play better for me as well. So change both to hit circle and remove the unused timing points. Nah

Pretty fun, but I feel you should have used higher slider velocity. It feel like i was playing with 0.75x velocity the whole way through.

Deserves a star, good luck on rank! Thanks for modding thoroughly and star! :)
MoodyRPG
Easy
00:45:959 (4) - Delete note
01:22:977 (1) - Too close to the previous object,put this spinner here 01:23:327 and end here 01:25:433

yuca
01:26:661 (1) - Maybe remove new combo?

Hard
Ok

Insane
Ok

Good Luck
Topic Starter
xsrsbsns
^ Nothing changed for my diff.

Thanks for modding! :)
xierbaliti
ok, after a little change..

bubbled!
Metro
yay!
Topic Starter
xsrsbsns
thanks xier :3

Metro wrote:

yay!
L_P
walau 大哥找mod的技巧教下
Topic Starter
xsrsbsns
啥技巧 =.= 就去spam queue而已xD(喂
whymeman
Good job on your first beatmap....... Ranked!
y u c a
gratz~~!
The 08 team_Bourdon
Congratulations~!!! xsrsb XD
Suzully
Gratz~! :)
xierbaliti
grats!
Gamu
(*・x・)/。・:*:・゚´★゚・:*:・。☆Congratulations ;*・'゜☆v(*'-^*);*・'゜☆
HeatKai
Congrats~!
RhaiizoN
/me late

woo ur 1st beatmap gets RANKED!
Gratz xsrsb! :oops:
Metro
gratz :)
Topic Starter
xsrsbsns
> whymeman
thanks for the rank!

arigato minna (・ω・)
[-Meiton-]
Great map :D
L_P
wooooohooooo!!!! yeah!
Gon
grats!
Louis Cyphre
BG Size is wrong 1024 x 701
Topic Starter
xsrsbsns
Lawl

Thanks again gaiz~
ziin

Louis Cyphre wrote:

BG Size is wrong 1024 x 701
it's fine, backgrounds just have to be at or above 16:10.
Shiirn
actually, ziin, they need to be under 1024x768. There is no explicitly required resolution.
Topic Starter
xsrsbsns
> ziin, Shiirn
Much thanks, glad to have this reaffirmed.
ziin

Shiirn wrote:

actually, ziin, they need to be under 1024x768. There is no explicitly required resolution.
I've seen 16:9 backgrounds changed before, though since we have tv size videos it matters little. You are correct though, there is no minimum because it's one of those vague rules that doesn't need to be noted.
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