1. Abyss (4.64 stars, 416 notes)
2. Bathys (3.09 stars, 266 notes)
3. Surface (0.97 stars, 154 notes)

• (osz updates):

1. 21/08/2011: big update to fix a (big) problem with the SB + optimization.
2. 22/08/2011: added missing approachcircle.
3. 27/08/2011: added custom hitsounds
4. 22/09/2011: added missing reverse-arrow
5. 23/09/2011: fixed typo (non capitalized "i")
6. 28/09/2011: changed a script (almost unnoticeable change :I ) + New Colourhax :J
7. 29/12/2011: fixed a faulty SB script

Sandpig wrote:

hitsounds might be used here

http://puu.sh/4FY5

deadbeat wrote:

http://puu.sh/5Z9A
it looks like you have 2 SB elements over each other. can make out what its meant to say D:

deadbeat wrote:

also not sure, but i think fail-background.png needs to be 800x600
great mapset though. the SB is really good

Soaprman wrote:

Hey, look at this awesome map.
Nice thing you did with the clap sound. Also, I like what you did with the combo colors! I was going to suggest it myself until I noticed you did it.
/o/

Offsets sound a bit early to me. Try these changes:
21,325 to 21,331
47,324 to 47,332
135,989 to 136,003
You were right, but your offsets feel a bit too late for me. i did a +6, +6, +9 and now it feels great.

Use 1/8 to resnap. Just remember that using 1/8 snap interval is NOT RECOMMENDED unless you are a very experienced beatmapper.
Oh you!

Surface

00:28:991 (4) - The slider ticks sound awkward on this. Try listening to them at 25/50%. They sound weird but they actually fit the 1/8 weirdness.
00:36:916 (2) - Same here. ^

Bathys

02:19:322 (6) - whistle here? music kind of wants normal-whistle-normal-whistle. Yep, also done at 02:28:669 like Abyss.

Abyss

00:29:330 (5,6,7,8) - Not sure how I feel about these. They fit the music but this doesn't happen anywhere else in the map so they kind of stick out. Probably leave them how they are... just felt like saying this.
Unfortunately, the whole 1/8 late section sticks out xD I know these two are 1/8, but using sliders didn't please me enough.
02:19:336 (6) - whistle here? music kind of repeat comment. K
02:28:669 (10) - whistle here? K
02:47:336 (8) - whistle here? Nah, it's slightly different from the previous one, so let's have a bit of change in here.
02:50:003 (7) - whistle here? There is one already °°

After you respond to this I will be ready to bubble this map. In my heart. Because I don't have the power to bubble it on the site.
♥

p3n wrote:

The SB is just incredible! As expected didn't find anything "wrong" (except for the unsnapped slider ending) and my suggestions are just that. I'd love to give 2 stars (for the great SB and for the nice mapset) but ppl seem to have accuracy issues lately...they just can't hit the "give kd" button even if they use most of my suggestions I'll be back after some more modding to throw another one!

p3n wrote:

[Surface]
Imo it plays and feels much better if you keep the accentuation on the bass lines (00:21:330 (1,2,3,4)) throughout the whole part as there is no other "rhythm" to follow in a piano solo. It also made playing the easiest diff much more...well...easy (for me at least):
00:28:997 (4)* - shorten to 00:29:330 and add circle @00:30:080 http://puu.sh/62pI
00:36:914 (2)* - shorten to 00:37:247 and add circle @00:37:914 http://puu.sh/62pU I know these two sliders are weird, but please bear with me, i somehow like how the ticks sound there.
01:24:330 (2), 01:26:996 (2), 01:29:663 (2) - this is a big MAYBE, it is fine as is imo but to keep it very consistent you may try shortening the sliders to the big white ticks and adding a repeat http://puu.sh/62qw Changed them, but in a different way (after a little chat with ShadowLord). They should be waaaaay better now.

02:15:998 (1) - ending point doesn't map anything, maybe remove the repeat and add a 2nd slider from to 02:18:664 (2)? Sounds and plays much better imo http://puu.sh/62rF I totally agree here, this was a mistake. I did exactly what you said, with some bit of repositioning.

(*), (also applies to 00:34:580 (4)) - The bass beeing 1/8 late felt like bad timing without playing it at 25% (and it is pretty much spot on). I wanted to put some notes ~1/16 earlier (just between the melody and bass). I was hitting those notes about 25-40ms early on my first go. So even if the bass is mapped properly...it still felt a bit late. After 4 or 5 plays I was hitting ~8-9ms early in the first part, ~4ms late in the 2nd and finally 3ms early in the last part. I guess it may be the missing "beat" and the kinda "freestyle" piano that confused me here but probably still worth looking at? I already rechecked the timingggg ;_; Anyway i did again using 25% everywhere and i tweaked it again. I'm 98% sure that now this is the correct one.


[Bathys]
00:29:330 (5) - slider ending is not snapped (and again it felt like it is ~1/16 late but really isn't :o ) It's snapped using 1/6.
02:27:998 (4) - I don't have a problem with kicksliders in "normal" diffs. This particular setup is perfectly readable imo (but ppl will bitch about this anyway...) Considering that i used them only for those two patterns, i changed them to make them more consistent with the rest of the map


[Abyss]
00:29:330 (5,6,7,8) - I know they actually map the offset between melody and bass line but they play really awkward and they sound "bad" even with autoplay :cry: Yet again it feels/plays better to have a single note exactly in the middle of the two notes @00:29:380 and @00:30:040 but that would be unsnapped or require another timing section. This is really tough... I blame the creator of the song ;__; I can't really think of anything better...

Last part after KIAI is just great! /o/

The SB is just incredible! As expected didn't find anything "wrong" (except for the unsnapped slider ending) and my suggestions are just that. I'd love to give 2 stars (for the great SB and for the nice mapset) but ppl seem to have accuracy issues lately...they just can't hit the "give kd" button even if they use most of my suggestions :roll: I'll be back after some more modding to throw another one! xD

ShadowLord wrote:

[General]
end kiai 03:29:998 here? On all diffs? I heard if you don't end it before the song is finished, it can bug the menu's If that's the case, added. I didn't know about it.

[Surface]

01:24:330 (2,3) - Nonono! This is to hard for an easy! :( Even the stacks, but I guess those are readable, but this a little to hard., almost no time to react.
01:26:996 (2,3) - ^
01:29:663 (2,1) - ^ See reply to p3n
02:22:998 (1,2) - ^ I can't understand how is this one related to the others. I know it's pretty much used only there in the map, but still :<

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1. Letterbox During Breaks is on, and even though there aren't any you couuuld turn it off. But don't bother doing that if you don't want to, it's not really needed
2. Why is the last kiai so long? The effects of the kiai are not shown since there's only SB in that section. You could make it shorter :V
3. You coooould lower OD in all difficulties by one tick. The thing is that, from my past experience, when OD is high than AR you need to be much more accurate and players have even complained about timing (saying that it was wrong, when it was perfect). I'd rather have it lowered than seeing stupid comments like that in the thread later

narakucrimson wrote:

1. Letterbox During Breaks is on, and even though there aren't any you couuuld turn it off. But don't bother doing that if you don't want to, it's not really needed I'd do that, but let me go with the "Don't change things that work fine or something may break"
2. Why is the last kiai so long? The effects of the kiai are not shown since there's only SB in that section. You could make it shorter :V Dude, the way it is now makes the main menu look cooler while listening to the song!
3. You coooould lower OD in all difficulties by one tick. The thing is that, from my past experience, when OD is high than AR you need to be much more accurate and players have even complained about timing (saying that it was wrong, when it was perfect). I'd rather have it lowered than seeing stupid comments like that in the thread later I know, but i prefer doing this in slow songs anyway because i find it a way to keep a tiny bit of challenge (since there's no need to keep up with "speed", you have to be more accurate)

Blue Dragon wrote:

how can anyone vote 1 this piece of art ;__;

Blue Dragon wrote:

how can anyone vote 1 this piece of art ;__;