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Hatsune miku - Kimi ga shinuno wo nagame to iru yo

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Hmaya
36 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Hmaya
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on lundi 11 juin 2012 at 16:18:06

Artist: Hatsune miku
Title: Kimi ga shinuno wo nagamete iru yo
BPM: 178
Filesize: 9594kb
Play Time: 04:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Extra (4,9 stars, 903 notes)
  2. Taiko (5 stars, 1030 notes)
Download: Hatsune miku - Kimi ga shinuno wo nagamete iru yo
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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02/05/2012: - worst sliders and stacking problems for stream and other patterns --> Fixed
- A few jump pattern --> Changed

12/05/2012: taiko DONE, BG added
Need a nice modder for both o/

07/06/2012: sliders redrawn and fixed minor spacing issues and combo problems.
08/06/2012: redrawn other sliders and fixed some placement issues
09/06/2012: changed 1 slider pattern and added some hitsounds and fixed some sound level issues
11/06/2012: new update, minor changes done

I still need a modder for taiko diff o/ and any guest diff for hard/normal/easy are welcome
Last edited by Hmaya , edited 21 times in total.
Noways
13 posts
Joined January 2012
Noways
Yopla; pas mal dans l'ensemble;
41.671 : les doublets suivis d'une triplette ça passe pas va falloir changer ça.
43.019: les sliders sont trop collés, on ne vois pas grand chose, augmente le spacing ou modifie les allez-retours.
1.07.288: tu devrais espacer un peu plus la triplette, on ne s'y attend pas.
1.11.165: le spacing sur la dernière note est mal réglé.
1.21.277: espace davantage les sliders.
2.13.196: tu as un retour en arrière sur ce passage de la rafale de sliders.
Hmaya
36 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Hmaya
Coriigé !
Merci pour le coup de main (y)
Laurier
1,786 posts
Joined February 2011
Laurier
hi owo/

some advice

Extra
00:20:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - Making stream : don't use grid snap and you can make more good form.http://puu.sh/sxcn
00:23:974 (4) - end at 00:24:311 is better
00:28:524 (1) - stack correctly.
00:40:154 (1,1) - move x72y304
00:40:828 (1) - reove new combo. 00:39:648 (3,4,1,2,1,1) - please use same new combo pattern.
01:08:468 (1) - end at 01:08:637
01:26:671 (1) -slider making. how about this form? http://puu.sh/sxeR.you can make more good sliders.you can remake another sliders too
01:48:581 (1,1,1,1) - move center is better
01:59:368 (1) - remake too http://puu.sh/sxfT
02:05:602 (1) - the slider is unrankble now. dont stack slider head and end
02:08:130 (2) - stack on 02:07:288 (2) head
02:10:490 (1) - stack \/

it's few advice. You can find the same thing as the contents written in here at other places.
please find and fix them.
Hmaya
36 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Hmaya
Map edited ~
I think it should be better acording to what you said now, Thanks again :3
Marcin
osu! Alumni
4,944 posts
Joined March 2011
Marcin
[General]
I saw this background somewhere,
http://osu.ppy.sh/b/106463 Here, it's just changed colours - but in my opinion you should change to something not used.

[Extra]
New Combos - what the fuck did you just do with them !?, so i have big job here:
00:14:873 (2) - NC here and here 00:16:221 (2) ,
or
00:12:176 (1) , 00:13:525 (1) - - delete new combos
00:23:300 (2) - You can use just 2 curve points instead of 3
00:25:322 (1) - ^
00:36:109 (3) - ^
00:47:569 (1) - ^
00:25:996 (1) - RNC
00:33:075 (1) - ^
00:39:648 (1) - ^
00:43:524 (1) - ^
00:43:693 (1) - ^
00:43:862 (1) - ^
00:44:620 (1) - ^
00:46:558 (1) - ^
00:46:895 (1) - ^
00:47:232 (1) - ^
00:47:569 (1) - ^
00:50:772 (1,2) - ^ and space them with 3 clicks before
00:52:794 (1) - ^
00:53:300 (1,2,3) - ^ and space them
00:55:322 (1) - ^
00:57:682 (1) - ^
00:58:356 (1) - ^
00:59:199 (1) - ^
00:59:704 (1) - ^
01:05:097 (1) - ^
01:08:805 (1) - ^
01:10:828 (1) - ^
01:11:165 (1) - ^
01:13:524 (1) - ^
01:15:547 (1) - ^
01:11:333 (2) - NC
... etc. etc.... - i won't list them all, because post may be really long, apply this to next NC problems, and then ask me for recheck. I think you know the rules
00:31:727 (1,2,3) - This one is other than, 00:31:053 (1,2,3)
00:34:086 (3) - this one looks strange...
00:28:524 (1,2) - Spacing
00:35:772 (1,2,3) - ^
00:45:378 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:03:749 (3,4) - ^
01:11:839 (2) - ^
01:12:682 (4) - ^
01:08:805 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 2 triangles? otherwise remove second NC
Hmaya
36 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Hmaya
Hello !
First thanks for modding !
Well yes you saw this somewhere indeed but I havn't picked this picture from the map you've given. I've picked this pic from konachan and I didn't changed it at all. since the storyboard is done, I would be bored is I had to change the bg e_e

As far as combos are concerned, all is fixed, ... I think... but maybe you should check :3 I might have forgot some points
As far as spacing is concerned, I did my best to fix it all acording to what you said and I modified some patterns like those "2 triangles"

I hope it will be ok

btw, I'm not planning to map easier diff yet so if anyone is interested in a guest diff, he's welcome.
Marcin
osu! Alumni
4,944 posts
Joined March 2011
Marcin
00:23:974 (4) - Hmm looks strange when click overlaps edges...
00:28:524 (1) - ~opinion - I know it's insane-like diff - but it's hard to follow this one
00:58:693 (1,2) - Wrong placement. (I mean, not on the same line.)
01:01:390 (1,2,3,4) - ~~suggestion - i don't really see this pattern. maybe make this in other direction ?
02:00:041 (1) - ~opinion - move slider a little bit - wrong spaced to (1) slider...
02:15:040 (1) - RNC?
02:30:884 (2) - NC?
02:34:759 (1,2,3,4,5) - Strange arrangement
02:33:242 (3,4) - Spacing
02:46:894 (6) - Strange slider...
02:50:602 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ~~suggestion - strange (I mean pattern is fine but placing is strange..)https://dl.dropbox.com/u/21125662/compilation/_00380.jpg see?
03:04:422 (2,3) - Spacing
03:14:872 (3) - finish?
03:25:659 (1) - ^
03:32:400 (4) - strange slider
04:05:097 (1) - soft ?
04:23:974 (3,4) - Spacing (I know it's for purpose but you know.. next combo should be more spaced..)



BTW2 i spotted red lines - are you sure you want use them? (you can use 1/8 divisor - so you can make this low bpm's INSTEAD of red lines...)
BTW don't you think about kudosu me :D?
Hmaya
36 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Hmaya
Thank you again, I fixed this all :3 I'm giving you 2 kudosus for this help and assist in-game.

I don't want to lower bpm because the song is fast and the real bpm of the song is truly 178. putting twice as much lower would make 1/8 used but it wouldn't fit the song. so I'll just keep it like this.
Strawberry
osu! Alumni
1,536 posts
Joined October 2010
Strawberry
Good mapset.Just from some suggestions so feel free to ignore some points if you feel it isn't necessary.:3
Ok let's go ><

[Extra]
00:20:940 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - make them rounded?
Code
280,301,20940,5,0
249,305,21025,1,0
220,295,21109,1,0
196,276,21193,1,0
181,249,21277,5,0
177,218,21362,1,0
184,189,21446,1,0
201,164,21530,1,0
226,148,21614,5,0
255,142,21699,1,0
284,148,21783,1,0
309,163,21867,1,0
322,185,21952,1,8
00:23:974 (4) - a bit overlap to 00:23:805 (3) - 178,235,23974,2,8,B|167:140|279:103|331:208,1,200,8|0
00:24:480 (1) - spacing?
00:34:929 (1) - add a repeat so cause the slider end at 00:35:097 -
01:14:873 (1,2,3) - to stack them more perfect.
01:21:277 (1,2) - Make them at a same inclination?
01:21:446 (2,3) - so closed.
01:22:963 - ~01:23:300 - add any note or slider?The drum is countinuing,It's a bit empty imo.
01:32:064 - reduce volume to 60~80%? It's noisy.
01:48:581 (1) - add finish.
01:56:503 (1) - reduce the volume to 60~80%?
02:03:580 (4) - remove the finish at repeat.
02:10:153 (1) - add finish.
02:12:849 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - add whistle in the beginning of them? :3 sounds good I think.
02:16:894 (3) - add finish.
02:17:568 (1) - ^
02:23:636 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - same as 02:12:849 -
02:23:973 (3) - add NC?
02:28:355 (1) - remove NC.
02:31:726 (1) - add finish in the beginning of the slider.
02:42:512 (1) - ^
03:03:411 (1,2) - reduce some volume..
03:39:141 (1) - the end point should at x:128 y:80
04:19:928 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - same as 02:12:849 -
04:26:374 (1) - add finish.

These all i can do. ;3 GL! Star!
Hmaya
36 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Hmaya
Thank for your star :3
I followed your advice pretty at 100% exept one point
I didn't changed this pattern 04:20:265 (1,2,1,2) - cause your idea occures already twice in the map, since it is the last chorus, it has to be a bit different :3

Kudos !
RikiH_
1,149 posts
Joined February 2011
RikiH_
Hi from #Modreqs o/
Sorry for my bad english.
I'm a noob modder but I hope I'm helpful. Unfortunately I can't mod taiko :C

Extra:

There are a lot of unsnapped notes °_° Go on Timing > Resnap All Notes
00:20:940 - Add a note here?
01:05:435 (1) - I think this way is better
http://i46.tinypic.com/kc3eo.png
01:08:468 (1) - The same. Remove the slider thick from the slider D:
01:09:817 (1,2) - The same.
01:17:054 (1) - Stack this with 01:16:558 (2)
02:16:220 (1) - Move this to x:408 y:112
03:08:636 (3) - This slider has a strange shape. I think this way is better...
http://i46.tinypic.com/vgvuu.png
03:32:230 (3) - Move this to x:256 y:96
03:42:426 - Add a note here?
04:02:061 (1) - This way is better!
http://i45.tinypic.com/o6xsg0.png
04:04:757 (1) - Move this 1 grid left


Again: I hope I'm helpful :°
If you want check out my map t/81697

Thanks, bye! o/
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
GiNa
Add "It's Watching You Die" in the Tags because it's the English translation title
Also add "vocaloid" "vocaloid2" "Camellia" in the Tags.
Camellia = かめりあ = the producer

I believe the title of this song is actually
Kimi ga Shinuno wo Nagamete Iru yo

And the artist is
Hatsune Miku

Read this to change both title and artist: viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443
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