I like this song
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[General]
Your BG has a resolution of 1065x768, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.
The combo colors are inconsistent through all diffs. Make them the same, please.
Audio lead-in of 2 seconds should be enough.
You can delete the .osb-file.
[Another]
OD 8?
You didn't use hitsounds very much, maybe add some more (even custom hitsounds maybe?).
00:01:285 - add circle under the end of the previous slider?
00:02:657 - ^
00:04:028 - ^
00:05:399 - ^
00:06:942 - add circle
00:08:142 - add circle under the previous slider?
00:09:514 - ^
00:33:171 - from this point until 01:17:057 your spacial placement of hitobject looks really random, I can't detect any system behind it. It still plays well, but doesn't look good. Try arranging them more in patterns like you did from 02:22:886 to 03:06:773.
00:46:886 - until 00:49:628: either you add a clap on every 1st and every 3rd beat in every measure or you remove the claps from 00:52:371 to 00:54:943.
01:16:371 (3,4,5) - whistles on start
01:26:486 (1) - RNC (you did it this way the whole time, why suddenly change it?)
01:26:657 (2) - NC
01:28:372 (2) - add clap on start
01:29:743 (2) - ^
01:31:114 (2) - ^
01:32:486 (2) - ^
01:33:857 (2) - ^
01:35:229 (1) - add clap on end
01:36:600 (1) - ^
01:37:629 (1,2,3) - add clap on start
01:37:972 - 35% volume
01:38:315 - 45% volume
01:38:657 - 55% volume
01:38:657 (4) - add fnish on start
01:39:343 - 35% or 25% volume
01:49:286 (7,8) - whistles on start
02:00:258 (4,5,6) - whistles on start
02:00:943 - 55% volume
02:11:572 - soft sample set
02:11:915 - normal sample set with 35% or 25% volume again
02:14:658 (5) - NC
02:22:458 (1) - whistle on the whole thing
02:28:372 - continue using claps on every 1st end every 3rd beat of every measure!
02:43:458 - maybe only 40% volume for this stream?
02:46:887 (7,8) - this reapeatslider-circle usage makes no sense to me
02:57:858 (3,4) - ^
03:05:401 - 40% volume?
03:08:144 (9) - maybe NC
03:17:744 (1) - finish
[Hyper]
Set a BG.
More hitsounds?
00:16:714 (1,1) - this angle of 90° looks ugly, rotate 00:18:085 (1) - by -90° maybe?
01:17:057 (1) - delete this circle, extend spinner until this point and add a finish to the spinner
01:29:400 (3,4) - hm, not sure about this stack
01:29:400 (3) - NC
01:32:143 (4) - ^
01:34:886 (4) - ^
01:37:972 - 35% volume
01:38:315 - 45% volume
01:38:657 - 55% volume
01:39:000 (1) - finish on start
01:39:343 - 35% or 25% volume
01:41:915 (2) - NC
01:47:400 (2) - ^
01:51:343 (5) - ^
01:56:829 (5) - ^
01:59:572 (3) - ^
02:00:772 (1,1) - why did you put NCs here?
02:00:943 (1) - finish
02:11:572 - soft sample set
02:11:915 - normal sample set with 35% or 25% volume again
02:22:886 -
REMAKE ALL SLIDERS UNTIL 02:43:458
03:17:744 (1) - finish
[Beginner]
Add a BG.
AR 4, please (or at least 3).
More hitsounds?
00:22:200 (1) - finish
01:17:057 - finish
02:00:943 - ^
02:17:401 (1,1) - you should consider replacing this double spinner with only one long one
02:19:801 - 30% volume
03:17:744 - finish
Your sliders in this diff look really random...
That's it, I hope there are some helpful points.