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UI-70 & Demetori - Yuuga ni Sakase, Sumizome no Sakura (Shor

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Mategas
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Mategas
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jueves, 01 de diciembre de 2011 at 11:50:45 p.m.

Artist: UI-70 & Demetori
Title: Yuuga ni Sakase, Sumizome no Sakura (Short Ver.)
Source: Touhou
Tags: Yuyuko Saigyouji iMercurial Border of Life
BPM: 91,67
Filesize: 878kb
Play Time: 00:39
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0,83 stars, 33 notes)
  2. Hard (3,24 stars, 57 notes)
  3. Normal (2,2 stars, 43 notes)
  4. Spectral Song (4,13 stars, 58 notes)
Download: UI-70 & Demetori - Yuuga ni Sakase, Sumizome no Sakura (Short Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 2nd beatmap

A short cover of UI-70 and Demetori - Border of Life song


Thanks iMercurial for Guest Diff

Map ready, waiting for modding

Full Version: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fipcwjy2688

Don't expect the classic Demetori "super insane" map because it is a very slow song.

Update 1
-Added BG for Easy difficulty too.

Update 2
-Normal difficulty changed

Update 3
-Changes on Normal diff..
-Map ready, waiting for modding

Update 4
Full Submision REDOWNLOAD IF YOU DOWNLOADED BEFORE 28/10/2011
- MP3 Changes (Bitrate and Volume)
- Major Changes on both diffs.

Update 5
- Fixes on Easy (Spacing, slider velocity rate. offset)
- Normal difficulty made again from 0. (WiP, I need add hitsounds)
- Hard difficulty added (WiP, 0%)
- Some fixes on the tags too.

Update 6
- Fixed hitsounds on Easy and Normal
- Hard difficulty done

Update 7
- Changed tags
- Changed BPM
- Changed spacing
- Spectral Song difficulty added. (Mapped by iMercurial)

Update 8
- Changed Tags.
- Minor changes on Easy and Normal.
- Distance Snaping increased on Hard, almost all elements moved.
- Changes on Storyboard.
Full Submision REDOWNLOAD IF YOU DOWNLOADED BEFORE 02/12/2011
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Mategas
90 posts
Joined January 2010
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Mategas
I don't know why but I'm trying to raise the number of stars of Normal difficulty but I can't, I set all to maximum (AR, OD, etc) and still being 1 star D=
Why this happens?
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eikkaleyd
624 posts
Joined July 2010
eikkaleyd
1st!

Mategas wrote:

I don't know why but I'm trying to raise the number of stars of Normal difficulty but I can't, I set all to maximum (AR, OD, etc) and still being 1 star D=
Why this happens?
;) Do not use AR, OD, etc to raise the number of stars. Try to put more notes in it, and there'll be more stars.
Crok425
262 posts
Joined October 2010
Crok425
A la dificultad normal ponele sonido Soft... no suena bien con el sonido normal... ademas, tratá de agregar una diff más, lo mejor de un beatmap es tener varias diffs, maximo 3, mejor serian más, pero eso es a tu criterio. ¿Acaso no te dieron ganas de hacer la versión full? XD

En fin, la musica es bastante linda, es bueno que gente haga beatmaps así ^^.

PD: ¿Como hago el aviso sobre el full submission que me dijiste?...y podrias darme un kudosu pliz? ^^
Mategas
90 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
Mategas

Crok425 wrote:

A la dificultad normal ponele sonido Soft... no suena bien con el sonido normal... ademas, tratá de agregar una diff más, lo mejor de un beatmap es tener varias diffs, maximo 3, mejor serian más, pero eso es a tu criterio. ¿Acaso no te dieron ganas de hacer la versión full? XD

En fin, la musica es bastante linda, es bueno que gente haga beatmaps así ^^.

PD: ¿Como hago el aviso sobre el full submission que me dijiste?...y podrias darme un kudosu pliz? ^^
Gracias.. no quise mapear la versión completa porque dura 6 o 7 minutos y es una canción muy muy pesada (o sea, Rock del pesado) y iba a terminar siendo un mapa de 1500 de combo super insane, así que preferí hacer el inicio solamente.

Realmente no sé si hacerle otra dificultad es bastante difícil porque la canción en si es bastante lenta..
Crok425
262 posts
Joined October 2010
Crok425

Mategas wrote:

Crok425 wrote:

A la dificultad normal ponele sonido Soft... no suena bien con el sonido normal... ademas, tratá de agregar una diff más, lo mejor de un beatmap es tener varias diffs, maximo 3, mejor serian más, pero eso es a tu criterio. ¿Acaso no te dieron ganas de hacer la versión full? XD

En fin, la musica es bastante linda, es bueno que gente haga beatmaps así ^^.

PD: ¿Como hago el aviso sobre el full submission que me dijiste?...y podrias darme un kudosu pliz? ^^
Gracias.. no quise mapear la versión completa porque dura 6 o 7 minutos y es una canción muy muy pesada (o sea, Rock del pesado) y iba a terminar siendo un mapa de 1500 de combo super insane, así que preferí hacer el inicio solamente.

Realmente no sé si hacerle otra dificultad es bastante difícil porque la canción en si es bastante lenta..
Para eso está la opción de 1/# en la sección de compose... eso ayuda para agregar mas notas... intenta un poco con eso...
wmfchris
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Joined March 2008
wmfchris
[General]
- The average bitrate exceeds 192 kbps? (~220 as calculated) The rankable range is 128~192 kbps. Too low kbps gives noise while too high bitrate occupies too much space (though your song is short, but this is a standard)
- The song is far too short from rankable (at least around 1 min), but you can take this as self's fun/own practice.
- Tags: Touhou Demetori UI-70 Yuyuko Saigyouji
They are duplicated from Artist and source.
- Try to use purple - pink combo colour?
- wrong offset, try 1154. Note that offset must be unique.
- Set preview point: timing -> set current position as preview point.
- The mp3 is too soft. Try to make it louder by softwares like Audacity.

[Normal]
- You don't need such high difficulty settings. Set HP drain rate, spinner rate, OD and AR to 4~5.

General problems:
- Spacings are in messy. In most cases spacing should be proportional to the time between two notes (you can check this by the spacing multiple at right-top corner), then this increase the ease of reading of the difficulty.
For [Normal], the spacing setting is far too hard and somehow like a hard.
- Sounding is nesscary. Some soft whistle will make the song sounds much much better,
- New combo. Try to make new combo per phrases. For example 00:21:577 (1,2,3) - they belongs to the same sentence, but 00:24:874 starts another sentences so you should NC it here instead of NC it in next note.

Try to make a easy-normal(new)-hard mapset and fix the above stuff, then ask for rechecks.
Mategas
90 posts
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Topic Starter
Mategas

wmfchris wrote:

[General]
- The average bitrate exceeds 192 kbps? (~220 as calculated) The rankable range is 128~192 kbps. Too low kbps gives noise while too high bitrate occupies too much space (though your song is short, but this is a standard) FIXED
- The song is far too short from rankable (at least around 1 min), but you can take this as self's fun/own practice. I cannot do anything to fix that. But I saw some short songs ranked.. so why not rank this?
- Tags: Touhou Demetori UI-70 Yuyuko Saigyouji FIXED
They are duplicated from Artist and source.
- Try to use purple - pink combo colour? FIXED
- wrong offset, try 1154. Note that offset must be unique. FIXED
- Set preview point: timing -> set current position as preview point. FIXED
- The mp3 is too soft. Try to make it louder by softwares like Audacity. FIXED

[Normal]
- You don't need such high difficulty settings. Set HP drain rate, spinner rate, OD and AR to 4~5. FIXED

General problems:
- Spacings are in messy. In most cases spacing should be proportional to the time between two notes (you can check this by the spacing multiple at right-top corner), then this increase the ease of reading of the difficulty. FIXED
For [Normal], the spacing setting is far too hard and somehow like a hard. FIXED
- Sounding is nesscary. Some soft whistle will make the song sounds much much better, FIXED
- New combo. Try to make new combo per phrases. For example 00:21:577 (1,2,3) - they belongs to the same sentence, but 00:24:874 starts another sentences so you should NC it here instead of NC it in next note. Some FIXED

Try to make a easy-normal(new)-hard mapset and fix the above stuff, then ask for rechecks. Working on Hard difficulty
Crok425
262 posts
Joined October 2010
Crok425
Eso es simple, esta canción es demasiado corta, una canción debe tener almenos mas de 1 minuto de largo. Mira que el que estoy haciendo ahora es de... bueno... mas de 6 minutos, pero se entiende el punto, trata de buscar otra canción de Touhou o una misma a esta pero que sea un poco mas larga, siempre hay fans que alargan canciónes... usa una de esas y si va a ser rankeada ^^

EDIT: ... Me lo descargue para ver un poco... y te digo que necesita un poco de trabajo en el offset.

PD: Dame un kudosu plz.
Crok425
262 posts
Joined October 2010
Crok425
Por cierto... para que un mapa sea rankeado necesita 3 diffs... si tiene 2 solo va a ser aprovado.
Mategas
90 posts
Joined January 2010
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Mategas
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/35952

Español
Un mapa que dura 39 segundos y tiene 2 dificultades. Sé que no se deberían usar mapas rankeados para justificarse pero quiero demostrar que mi mapa ES rankeable. Igual pienso hacer ese hard para que quede un poco más completo.

English
A map of 39 seconds of drain and 2 difficulties. I know I shouldn't use ranked maps to justify my map but I want to show that my map IS rankable. But I still making the hard to make the map more complete
Crok425
262 posts
Joined October 2010
Crok425
If you want... podria hacer la canción mas larga, puedo hacerlo en el Audacity o en el MixMeister.
eikkaleyd
624 posts
Joined July 2010
eikkaleyd
:) Come for modding

[general]
It's a very short and quiet song, so you made all the diffs very easy. Try to put more notes in Normal and Hard diff.

[Easy]
00.39.518 (3) it should be on 00.39.682

[Normal]
00.14.463 (2) too far, and add reserve
00.20.067 (6) delete
00.22.375 (3) you can think of changing it into a slider
00.30.616 (6) the same
00.30.946 (6) too close
00.39.518 (4) the same as [easy]

[Hard]
HP Drain -1
00.13.144 add a circle near (1)
00.14.463 (4) change into a slider
00.19.408 (4) add a circle
00.39.518 (4) the same as [easy]
00.40.507 (5) should be on 00.40.671

Good luck~
Mercurial
Mercurial
Che Mate, te puedo hacer un guest? :3
wmfchris
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wmfchris
here we go.

[General]
you can see that combo colour 3 and 4 are very similar each other. Try to interchange colour 4 and colour 5 gives a larger contrast, then it's easier for player to distinguish the combo.
00:07:869 - seems the gituar sound's not on tick?
00:39:518 - BPM should be lower here, ask some timing expert

[Hard]
00:01:276 (1,1) - whistle?
00:09:847 (2,3,1) - (2) down 1 grid, (3,1) whistle
00:20:726 (3) - whistle
00:26:990 - only this part in the song is hard relativly, comparing with the overall difficulty it shouldn't be so hard, and I don't notice the change in song to support the jump as well
00:31:276 (3) - whistle

[Normal]
00:11:825 (1,2) - try to stack their ending well?
00:20:726 (3) - whistle

General issues:
- much better than last time.
- timing's still a problem, maybe you need to find some timing expert.
- I don't prefer clapping here, it doesn't fit well with the peaceful pace of the song. I suggest to use more whistle especially on the gituar accent.

ask for recheck if you need it.
Qliphoth_old
Qliphoth_old
Solo una cosa... si es un cover... poné "Border of Life" en tags...

No Kd.
jossieP
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Joined May 2010
jossieP
......
no es demasiado corto?
pense que habia quebrado el file xd

Qliphoth_old
Qliphoth_old
Why Graveyard? Revivilo.
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