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Simple Plan - Your Love Is a Lie

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Slowmotion_old
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sábado, 10 de setembro de 2011 at 23:04:40

Artist: Simple Plan
Title: Your Love Is a Lie
Tags: cesc Wiinter
BPM: 160
Filesize: 5370kb
Play Time: 03:37
Difficulties Available:
  1. cesc x Wiinter (1,77 stars, 189 notes)
  2. Hard (4,93 stars, 626 notes)
Download: Simple Plan - Your Love Is a Lie
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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storyboard by ZLOdeuka

Special Thanks For :
Beuchi Chan ( sb mod )


Ready for Mat/Bat Mod ><

Deleted the sb,change the tags
please redownload de map,
AdRon Zh3Ro
Rofl...

IRC stuff...
Galkan
Map is pretty decent, it has some errors, which I pointed on IRC modding, but it's very good so far. Good luck ;)

+Star
nimi
hit sounds ffu, precisa de mais imo
mas enfim.
00:17:640 (5) - new combo
00:30:015 (9) - ^
00:41:077 (7) - tira esse FINISH iaueheaiuha, soa estranho
00:41:452 (8) - ^
00:56:452 (9) - new combo
00:57:858 (16) - http://puu.sh/GRp
00:58:140 (1) - esse spinner é MUITO random, principalmente com o vazio que tem depois dele. sugiro mudar isso
01:25:890 (7) - new combo
01:46:515 (1) - sou contra esse spinner também, maaas menos do que o outro
02:09:015 (11,12,13) - mudar esse spacing pra algo assim http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/47485 fica melhor imo, assim tá meio amontuado
02:10:140 (1) - mesma coisa do 00:58:140
02:23:640 (1,2,3,4,5) - pra que usar esse spacing feio? ;.; seja mais criativo
02:31:515 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:33:015 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:34:515 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ porra, não acaba nunca isso?
02:43:515 (5,6,7,8,9) - tipa assim fi. tudo bem, é bonitinho, jump, formato legal. mas isso tá MUITO confuso >.> ainda mais com aquelas notas super juntas depois dele. eeeu não concordo com isso. se quer usar jumps distribua eles pelo mapa inteiro, não apenas no fim porque tu teve a ideia quando o mapa já tava acabando u_û
02:52:515 (1) - nada pessoal, mas o que era pra ser esse slider? o-o
02:58:50 - porque esse kiai aqui? owo
03:27:765 (5) - spacing esse 5 tá feio
03:31:702 (9) - new combo
03:37:515 (1,2,3,4,5) - e morra por ter feito esses jumps do caralho no fim do mapa ¬¬

só isso. boa sorte ^^
cesc
irc mod + star

*c'mon Sloooow, let me see other diffs here ;)
Topic Starter
Slowmotion_old

cesc wrote:

irc mod + star

*c'mon Sloooow, let me see other diffs here ;)

I will make new diff for you cesc :3
Topic Starter
Slowmotion_old

Wiinter wrote:

hit sounds ffu, precisa de mais imo
mas enfim.
00:17:640 (5) - new combo feito
00:30:015 (9) - ^ feito
00:41:077 (7) - tira esse FINISH iaueheaiuha, soa estranho antes finish do que whistle né?
00:41:452 (8) - ^ feito
00:56:452 (9) - new combo feito
00:57:858 (16) - http://puu.sh/GRp mesmo você explicando não entendi porra nenhuma
00:58:140 (1) - esse spinner é MUITO random, principalmente com o vazio que tem depois dele. sugiro mudar isso obrigado o/
01:25:890 (7) - new combo feito
01:46:515 (1) - sou contra esse spinner também, maaas menos do que o outro coitadinho :/ ja tirei
02:09:015 (11,12,13) - mudar esse spacing pra algo assim http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/47485 fica melhor imo, assim tá meio amontuado concordo xD
02:10:140 (1) - mesma coisa do 00:58:140 feito
02:23:640 (1,2,3,4,5) - pra que usar esse spacing feio? ;.; seja mais criativo feito
02:31:515 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ feito
02:33:015 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ feito
02:34:515 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ porra, não acaba nunca isso?><
02:43:515 (5,6,7,8,9) - tipa assim fi. tudo bem, é bonitinho, jump, formato legal. mas isso tá MUITO confuso >.> ainda mais com aquelas notas super juntas depois dele. eeeu não concordo com isso. se quer usar jumps distribua eles pelo mapa inteiro, não apenas no fim porque tu teve a ideia quando o mapa já tava acabando u_û verdade fia ja ajeitei
02:52:515 (1) - nada pessoal, mas o que era pra ser esse slider? o-o de acordo com o cesc os streams não combinavam muito então preste atenção ao sons da bateria e a simetria das bolinhas do slider que você vai entender
02:58:50 - porque esse kiai aqui? owo fica bonitinho :3
03:27:765 (5) - spacing esse 5 tá feio verdade
03:31:702 (9) - new combo feito
03:37:515 (1,2,3,4,5) - e morra por ter feito esses jumps do caralho no fim do mapa ¬¬ também te amo fia

só isso. boa sorte ^^
nyah
Tomboy_old_1
Arruma esse map, depois eu olho, por enquanto no star :?
Guerra
lie
Kubu
star, but it need break D:
Coy
star

gl :]
ZLOdeuka-
unless I'm missing something write me~

cool song

S T A R ~

Download: 24584 Simple Plan - Your Love Is A Lie.rar
ZLOdeuka-
mikhe
[Hard]
02:52.515 (1) This slider seems ramdonly =/, change form?

In general is good, nice rythm.

Star~
Ultimate
Ingame testing and improving.

Don't be too predictive, try to be more loose =D.
The map is a bit square, but it actually fits the song. Also like the SB.
If you're working on your next map, please inform me so i can be at help with the mapping design (if you would like that).

star + kudo star
Topic Starter
Slowmotion_old

Ultimate wrote:

Ingame testing and improving.

Don't be too predictive, try to be more loose =D.
The map is a bit square, but it actually fits the song. Also like the SB.
If you're working on your next map, please inform me so i can be at help with the mapping design (if you would like that).ok i will

star + kudo star


Thanks for all o/
Tshabalala
:lol:
Bittersweet
*chega e taca uma star em camera lenta*

boa sorte :3
Kite
General
Offset is a bit too late, try -5 till -10 on offset eventually -8 (1512)
Combo colors blend in too much with the storyboard and background picture making it really hard to see at some points, consider changing them
EDIT : gave some suggestion on colors

Reduce HP drain by 1 tick?

Hard
00:48:770 (1) - remove new combo and place it here instead 00:49:520 (4)?
01:13:145 (5) - move down 1 grid?
01:19:520 (1,2,3,4) - you should unstack those IMO, with current colors hard to read
01:53:270 - add a beat here? :o sounds and plays nicer IMO
03:12:582 (1) - remove new combo?

Nice map so far, was fun to play :p
Great storyboard
ouranhshc
Hard
00:17:637 (1) - remove new combo
00:30:012 (1) - ^
00:34:137 (7) - 1 grid up
00:39:762 (12) - ^?
00:49:512 (4) - new combo?
00:54:012 (4) - line up with (3)?
01:03:387 (1) - line up with (11)?
01:33:012 (3) - make symmetrical to (1), (don't forget to adjust everythiing else after this)
02:01:887 (6) - new combo
02:32:074 (4,5) - make symmetrical to (1,2)
03:11:074 (4) - 1 grid left
03:12:574 (1) - why is this new combo here

Normal
You have unsnapped slider ends
EDIT:
00:14:637 (3) - spacing
00:34:512 (1) - still broken
00:54:012 (5) - line up with (2,4)
01:02:262 (7,8) - line up with (4)
01:04:512 (3) - line up with (2)
01:12:012 (1,2) - line up with (3,4)
01:45:012 (3) - line up with (2), make sure to adjust every thing after this
01:46:512 (1,2,3,4) - line up with (5) of the previous combo

EDIT2: you need an easier diff

call me back so i can recheck normal. also Preview Points
Topic Starter
Slowmotion_old

ouranhshc wrote:

Hard
00:17:637 (1) - remove new combo
00:30:012 (1) - ^
00:34:137 (7) - 1 grid up
00:39:762 (12) - ^?
00:49:512 (4) - new combo?
00:54:012 (4) - line up with (3)?
01:03:387 (1) - line up with (11)?
01:33:012 (3) - make symmetrical to (1), (don't forget to adjust everythiing else after this)
02:01:887 (6) - new combo
02:32:074 (4,5) - make symmetrical to (1,2)
03:11:074 (4) - 1 grid left
03:12:574 (1) - why is this new combo here

Normal
You have unsnapped slider ends


call me back so i can recheck normal. also Preview Points


i've resnapped the sliders ends :3
fabriciorby
IRC Mod e star






Ainda passarei made of fire, hm
Topic Starter
Slowmotion_old
espero que passe :3
Nelsonjd
Nice map <3 Star~
Kotya
*_______*
Topic Starter
Slowmotion_old

Kotya wrote:

*_______*
*-----*
The 08 team_Bourdon
Hi~ ;)

Normal
-Slider Velocity set at 1.10? maybe better than 1.40?
-Cricle Size +1?
-if you can.. make it at 3star~

00:19:137 (4,5) - Delete this note, and add slider?
00:27:012 (5,6,7) - ^ add slider and do 1 tick back?
00:31:137 (7,8) - Delete note, add slider?
00:38:637 (5,6,7) - ^ and do 1 tick back?
00:53:637 (4,5) - ^
01:12:012 (1) - too close at the front spinner?
01:14:449 (3) - delete this~ and 01:14:824 (4) - this slider start at here
01:37:512 (2) - down one grid?
01:37:887 (3) - left one grid?
01:38:637 (5) - new combo?
01:40:512 (1) - delete new combo
01:43:512 (1) - ^
02:10:137 (1) - is too ugly~ maybe can change other style?

Hard
00:19:324 (15) - change to slider? 00:19:887 ending
00:14:824 (7) - new combo?
00:17:637 (5) - ^
00:18:574 (6) - ^
00:23:449 (5) - ^
00:27:012 (6) - ^
00:29:637 (7) - ^
00:35:637 (6) - new combo~
00:38:637 (7) - ^
00:41:449 (1) - ^?
00:44:637 (7) - ^
00:46:137 (2) - delete new combo
00:46:512 (1) - new combo
00:47:637 (1) - ^
00:51:012 (7) - ^
00:53:637 (3,4) - change to slider?
00:54:762 (1) - Overlap with 00:54:012 (4) -
00:57:762 (7) - new combo
01:02:074 (7) - ^
01:14:637 (4) - ^
01:18:012 (5) - ^
01:20:262 (6) - ^
01:21:012 (9) - ^
01:26:824 (3) - ^
01:30:012 (5) - new combo
01:35:824 (6) - ^
01:38:637 (7) - ^
01:39:012 (9) - change to slider, ending at 01:39:199
01:39:199 (10) - start at 01:39:387, at 01:39:762 do a 1 tick back and add clap
01:42:199 (7) - new combo
01:50:637 (5) - ^
01:53:824 (8) - ^
01:55:137 (13) - ^
01:55:512 (1) - delete new combo
01:56:637 (7) - new combo
02:03:012 (4) - ^
02:08:262 (7) - ^
02:11:637 (7) - ^
02:23:637 (1) - too close for front spinner??
02:43:512 (5) - new combo
02:44:449 (6) - ^
02:52:512 (1) - very ugly for this slider :( and this slider ending is 02:54:387
02:54:762 (x) - add a note?
02:56:637 (5) - new combo
03:01:137 (9) - ^
03:01:512 (1) - delete new combo
03:02:824 (6) - new combo
03:07:137 (4) - ^
03:11:262 (5) - ^
03:36:574 (6) - ^

----------------
Nice song >w<
i <3 it~
but on this map's slider make me boring :(
Good luck to you :D
and starrr~~~~ 8-)
vivere
Star <3
Verdisphena

vivere wrote:

Star <3
Kaoru Evans
:3
Fenya
(viv te voy a matar =_=)
Fabi
Star! You have a lot of work to do hehe.
Offspring__old
Star bro :D
cesc
Here you are the Easy Collab from Wiinchan and me..maybe we need a SB for the names? °°

SPOILER
00:12:762 - 00:36:762 ~ cesc
00:37:137 - 00:48:762 ~ wiinchan
00:49:512 - 01:13:324 ~ cesc (Chorus)
01:16:512 - 01:25:512 ~ BREAK
01:25:887 - 01:46:512 ~ wiinchan
01:49:512 - 02:01:324 ~ cesc
02:02:262 - 02:25:137 ~ wiinchan (Chorus)
02:25:512 - 02:41:262 ~ cesc
02:41:637 - 02:55:512 ~ BREAK
02:55:512 - 02:58:512 ~ cesc
02:58:887 - 03:24:012 ~ wiinchan (Chorus)
03:25:512 - END ~ cesc

And this is the file for you with Hitsounds and all:

Download: Simple Plan - Your Love Is A Lie (Slowmotion) [cesc ♥ Wiinter].osu
nimi
vim pra dar star e já tinha dado 8D memória fail
Mastodonio
Nice song,star ;)
wmfchris
[Hard]
00:03:199 (8) - right 1 grid
00:06:012 (7,8) - unevne spacing, (7) down 1 grid, (8) left 1 grid
00:13:512 (1,2,3) - down 1 grid
00:33:012 (4,5,6,7) - up 1 grid
01:12:387 (3,4) - down 1 grid
01:24:762 (2,3) - right 1 grid like before?
01:32:262 (1) - up 1 grid
01:36:949 (7) - ^
01:45:387 (4) - down 1 grid
02:24:387 (3) - left 1 grid
nice sounding, just some suggestions to make it show symmetry better

[cesc's]
nice as always.

star~
Hyguys
belo progresso com o map. espero que seja ranked .
boa sorte com o map o!
vivere
Hi Slow :3

[General]:

Open your .Osu file and change this:

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,150,0
Combo2 : 240,5,5
For this:
[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,0,255
Combo2 : 240,5,5

Fix this in normal and hard

: lol

02:00:012- 2 grids to left
02:00:949- 2 grids to right

[Hard]:

00:49:512 (1)- Finish. Sounds much better imo
00:55:512 (6)- Finish. Only in the beginning

01:59:637 (4)- Finish

02:01:137 (5)- Change this slider for 3 circles, for example: You can? :$

I give you a Star :>
Pesar

ganbatte ne!
Rukario
General:
- 'Beatmap by Z black.png', well because I don't see a diff created by him on the mapset, please delete this image from the folder and full submit.
- All the diffs MUST have the same preview point. Currently there is no previe point set for either diff.
- 'cesc 3 Wiinter' in here the countdown is missing. Also I can see in the .osu file it should be 'cesc <3 Wiinter'. Maybe make something else than the <3.
- Please disable letterboxing during breaks because in cesc' diff there is SB in the break. Also looks better.
- In the Hard diff the tags 'cesc' and 'Wiinter' are missing.
- Shouldn't there be a SB element for 'cesc 3 Wiinter'?
- The first combo colour of the two diffs are different. Open both .osu files in Notepad and make them the same.

cesc 3 Wiinter:
Please Tick Rate 1.
00:13:137 (1) - Remove New Combo, 00:13:512 (2) - Make New Combo
00:33:762 (1) - I can't allow notes being so close after spinners in the easiest diff. Please make the spinner shorter.
01:32:262 (7) - Why don't you split this into two repeat sliders? Seems a bit boring now.
02:01:137 (4) - Add a repeat here so the kiai fountain doesn't feel weird.
02:10:887 (1) - I can't allow notes being so close after spinners in the easiest diff. For this one I can only suggest to remove it and map something else to it.
02:37:512 (1) - Let me make a prettier version of this really nice slider^^. You gotta put in the code for that slider in the .osu file, in the hitobject section.
304,152,157512,6,2,B|296:72|240:24|112:16|32:80|88:264|256:323|256:323|424:264|480:80|400:16|272:24|216:72|208:152,1,1100,6|6
03:04:512 - This emptyness feels really weird. Please consider mapping something here.
03:38:168 - Please end the kiai here if you already make a timing section.

Hard:
01:11:637 (1) - Remove this note and make the spinner end on this time.
02:23:637 (1) - ^

Well this was quite a nice mapset, but there is really General stuff which is not right at all which is why I can't star this either.
nimi
wtf pro 3 no nome da diff er. antes era ♥ aí virou <3 e agora tá 3? sloooooww vai arrumar isso seu puto i.i e me lembre de dar mod no resto do mapa quando ler isso >_>"
Topic Starter
Slowmotion_old

Wiinter wrote:

wtf pro 3 no nome da diff er. antes era ♥ aí virou <3 e agora tá 3? sloooooww vai arrumar isso seu puto i.i e me lembre de dar mod no resto do mapa quando ler isso >_>"

o não dava pra dar upload com o coração
ZLOdeuka-
Explain that this is my SB plz~
SargentPie
Add more difficulties. You might be working on more difficulties already, but It seems that 2 stars is too easy for me, but 5 starts is too hard (for me).

Also, in the 2 star beatmap, maybe you should make the beat sounds louder. I dunno if you were going for the atmosphere of the song or you wanted the sound to be barely noticeable, but I think that the beat sounds give the song the osu! personality it needs. I acknowledge that the beat sounds get louder at some point in the song, but even for the soft sounds, make them louder.

Why are there 6 spinners in the 2 star beatmap? I actually saw the editing tip "use spinners sparingly!" in the editor! Remove the spinners that are in the middle of the chorus. They just disrupt the gameplay.

I quickly scanned the beatmap for hard, and I think the same requests apply for that map. I can't really give any more specific advice since I can't play those leveled beatmaps, but the previous advice will probably do.

I'll star it because It's a good song and others should know about it.
Andrea
[cesc x Wiinter]

This difficulty is missing a preview point. Please make sure to add one.


01:00:762 (6) - New combo.
01:01:512 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:38:262 (x) - End your kiai time here.


[Hard]

This difficulty is missing a preview point. Please make sure to add one.

Disable the Letterbox during breaks.


00:06:199 (8,9,10) - Respace correctly.
03:38:262 (x) - End your kiai time here.


Not bad.
Topic Starter
Slowmotion_old

osuplayer111 wrote:

[cesc x Wiinter]

This difficulty is missing a preview point. Please make sure to add one.
where?

01:00:762 (6) - New combo.
01:01:512 (1) - Remove new combo.Done
03:38:262 (x) - End your kiai time here.[/color] Done

[Hard]

This difficulty is missing a preview point. Please make sure to add one.

Disable the Letterbox during breaks.
Done

00:06:199 (8,9,10) - Respace correctly.
03:38:262 (x) - End your kiai time here.[/color]Done

Not bad.
Andrea
For set a preview point do like this.
Topic Starter
Slowmotion_old

osuplayer111 wrote:

For set a preview point do like this.

in this place?
Andrea
Yeah I showed you the correct position where to set the preview point.
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