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Porno Graffiti - Hitori no Yoru (TV Size)

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Topic Starter
Mianki
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 1. joulukuuta 2011 at 19:45:23

Artist: Porno Graffitti
Title: Hitori no Yoru (TV Size)
Source: Great Teacher Onizuka
Tags: lanttu GTO OnosakiHito
BPM: 176,09
Filesize: 7936kb
Play Time: 01:38
Difficulties Available:
  1. Great Preschooler (2,82 stars, 109 notes)
  2. Great Student (4,58 stars, 246 notes)
  3. Great Teacher (5 stars, 310 notes)
  4. Ono's Great Oni (4,94 stars, 566 notes)
Download: Porno Graffitti - Hitori no Yoru (TV Size)
Download: Porno Graffitti - Hitori no Yoru (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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GTO 2nd opening

Great Preschooler made by awesome Lanttu
Ono's Great Oni made by awesome OnosakiHito


Great Preschooler = Easy
Great Student = Normal
Great Teacher = Insane
Lanttu
[Great Student]
00:35:627 (1) - Tämmöset sliderit ei ole sallittuja, teacherissäki oli yksi samanlainen, kanttis tehdä niille jotain. :3

Aloitanki sitten sen easyn~>

//EDIT HEI JOO JA MUUTEN, Bändin nimi on Porno Graffitti kahdella teellä ja great treacher onizuka on tageissa tarpeettomia~ o/

Olen puolessa välissä diffini kanssa!
Lanttu
ömnömnömn heitän nyt tuplapostin, anteeks~

Download: Porno Graffiti - Hitori No Yoru [TV-Size] (Mianki) [Great LANTTU].osu
Toivottavast kelpaa. ;u; *köh* Joo ja kehitä sille sitten joku parempi nimi please, itse en keksiny mitään.
Topic Starter
Mianki
Aight, sliders fixed and added Lanttu's diff ^^
wmfchris
Spacing in all diff seems fine to me.

so star.

Sorry that I'm extremely busy these day that I can't make a taiko diff >_<
IceBeam
[Lanttu]
00:29:150 (1) - Remove NC please.
01:06:305 (2,3) - You may skip this,but I was nearly to missclick.If you move (2) and (3) to previous red tick it will perfectly fit with lyrics.Not a mistake at all,just that's how I feel.
So cute patterns..

[G.Student]
00:02:222 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'd like this pattern to be symmetrical.
00:24:719 (9) - Move to 00:25:060?
00:31:195 (2) - You don't need the last repeat.

[G.Teacher]
00:14:663 (1) - Absolutely no need to make a spinner,map this part.
00:54:034 (8) - What the..completely stacked sliders aren't allowed,fix this.
I'm not sure if 1/4 streams fit well,otherwise seems fine.

Good luck to you.
Topic Starter
Mianki

IceBeam wrote:

[Lanttu]
00:29:150 (1) - Remove NC please. Fixed
01:06:305 (2,3) - You may skip this,but I was nearly to missclick.If you move (2) and (3) to previous red tick it will perfectly fit with lyrics.Not a mistake at all,just that's how I feel. I feel the sam way :D, fixed
So cute patterns..

[G.Student]
00:02:222 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'd like this pattern to be symmetrical. Fixed
00:24:719 (9) - Move to 00:25:060? Fixed
00:31:195 (2) - You don't need the last repeat. Fixed

[G.Teacher]
00:14:663 (1) - Absolutely no need to make a spinner,map this part. Mapped
00:54:034 (8) - What the..completely stacked sliders aren't allowed,fix this. Fixed
I'm not sure if 1/4 streams fit well,otherwise seems fine.

Good luck to you.
Lanttu

IceBeam wrote:

[Lanttu]
00:29:150 (1) - Remove NC please. Oki~
01:06:305 (2,3) - You may skip this,but I was nearly to missclick.If you move (2) and (3) to previous red tick it will perfectly fit with lyrics.Not a mistake at all,just that's how I feel.Hmm, yeah that works quite well. Changed~ ・u ・
So cute patterns.. XD
ATTACH[Porno Graffitti - Hitori No Yoru [TV-Size] (Mianki) [Great Preschooler Lanttu].osu]



Aaaa Mianki edited mine diff too, I'm too slow. XD Well feel free to use this or use the one you edited~

Download: Porno Graffitti - Hitori No Yoru [TV-Size] (Mianki) [Great Preschooler Lanttu].osu
Garven
Fun song~

[General]
Please remove audio from video.

[Great Preschooler Lanttu]
Reduce OD by one. Doesn't make sense to have slower circles but higher need for accuracy.
Kind of fast-paced for the easiest, but it works for the difficulty itself.
00:23:185 (2,3) - Although it is like a normal, if you could keep most of your elements newbie-friendly it would be appreciated (so if you could, maybe not stack? :3 )
01:06:135 (2,3) - Maybe move 1 and 2 down a grid to reduce overlap? Bleh, but 3 is sticking into the HP bar, nooooo
01:27:439 (1) - Hrm, the slider after this is rather soon for the easiest difficulty. Maybe end it at 01:29:314 - (don't forget to adjust Kiai) and add new notes at 01:30:166 - ?
<3

[Great Student]
Reduce OD by one. Doesn't make sense to have slower circles but higher need for accuracy.
00:21:310 (7,1) - This was an odd spot to have a jump, even with the new combo. It'd make more sense between the 1 and the 2.
00:47:216 (5) - Kind of expected the 5 to be at 00:47:046 - then a beat at 00:47:728 -
01:00:169 (9,1,2) - Aaah, stick with the vocal or the drums only. I got so confused on the rhythm here. ;_;
01:25:735 (5,1) - This small jump is just kinda confusing too. I'd keep this snapped.
01:27:269 (1) - Maybe end this at 01:29:314 - ?
Fun diff here.

[Great Teacher]
00:09:380 (4,5) - Not much of a fan of stacks in the middle of a streamish part then continuing on like nothing happened. Feels interruptive of flow.
00:23:015 (5,6,7) - Think you can make this part more interesting rhythmically?
00:34:604 (5) - I was expecting maybe two more normal beats and a 3-repeat slider. 5 felt awkward to me.
00:55:397 (7,8) - This felt disruptive to the flow as well.
01:36:983 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Eeh, just do a normal stream. Slider train doesn't fit here imo.
Lanttu

Garven wrote:

[Great Preschooler Lanttu]
Reduce OD by one. Doesn't make sense to have slower circles but higher need for accuracy.
Kind of fast-paced for the easiest, but it works for the difficulty itself. Oki~
00:23:185 (2,3) - Although it is like a normal, if you could keep most of your elements newbie-friendly it would be appreciated (so if you could, maybe not stack? :3 ) Aww, ok. ;u;
01:06:135 (2,3) - Maybe move 1 and 2 down a grid to reduce overlap? Bleh, but 3 is sticking into the HP bar, nooooo Moved everything a bit~
01:27:439 (1) - Hrm, the slider after this is rather soon for the easiest difficulty. Maybe end it at 01:29:314 - (don't forget to adjust Kiai) and add new notes at 01:30:166 - ? Shortened the spinner but I didn't add the note, couldn't get it to fit. ;u;
Download: Porno Graffitti - Hitori No Yoru [TV-Size] (Mianki) [Great Preschooler Lanttu].osu
Topic Starter
Mianki

Garven wrote:

Fun song~

[General]
Please remove audio from video. Fixed thanks to Garven :D

[Great Preschooler Lanttu] Lanttu fixed this
Reduce OD by one. Doesn't make sense to have slower circles but higher need for accuracy.
Kind of fast-paced for the easiest, but it works for the difficulty itself.
00:23:185 (2,3) - Although it is like a normal, if you could keep most of your elements newbie-friendly it would be appreciated (so if you could, maybe not stack? :3 )
01:06:135 (2,3) - Maybe move 1 and 2 down a grid to reduce overlap? Bleh, but 3 is sticking into the HP bar, nooooo
01:27:439 (1) - Hrm, the slider after this is rather soon for the easiest difficulty. Maybe end it at 01:29:314 - (don't forget to adjust Kiai) and add new notes at 01:30:166 - ?
<3

[Great Student]
Reduce OD by one. Doesn't make sense to have slower circles but higher need for accuracy. Fixed
00:21:310 (7,1) - This was an odd spot to have a jump, even with the new combo. It'd make more sense between the 1 and the 2. Fixed
00:47:216 (5) - Kind of expected the 5 to be at 00:47:046 - then a beat at 00:47:728 - Fixed
01:00:169 (9,1,2) - Aaah, stick with the vocal or the drums only. I got so confused on the rhythm here. ;_; Added one reverse arrow to 9, it should follow the lyrics now :D
01:25:735 (5,1) - This small jump is just kinda confusing too. I'd keep this snapped. Fixed
01:27:269 (1) - Maybe end this at 01:29:314 - ? Fixed
Fun diff here.

[Great Teacher]
00:09:380 (4,5) - Not much of a fan of stacks in the middle of a streamish part then continuing on like nothing happened. Feels interruptive of flow. Fixed
00:23:015 (5,6,7) - Think you can make this part more interesting rhythmically? Changed it a bit
00:34:604 (5) - I was expecting maybe two more normal beats and a 3-repeat slider. 5 felt awkward to me. Fixed
00:55:397 (7,8) - This felt disruptive to the flow as well. Fixed
01:36:983 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Eeh, just do a normal stream. Slider train doesn't fit here imo. Fixed
Sallad4ever
Hi Mianki :)

[General]
- for the sake of consistency, please change the [TV-Size] to (TV Size) look here, you can also consult with Lanttu I'm sure he knows how to do it
- if you're going to add a scorebar-color, also include the rest of the set (scorebar-bg, scorebar-ki, scorebar-kidanger,etc) this is to prevent collision with other skin like this

- increase the volume for all section by 2 or 1 tick, the current volume is still too little
- whoops Great Teacher diff doesn't have Lanttu on the tags

[Great Prechooler Lanttu]
Remove Lanttu from the diff name, Great Preschooler is enough (Lanttu is already on the tags so don't worry)
01:17:895 (4) - not a big problem but the blanket is not perfect try move the anchor point a up a bit
01:19:258 (1) - similar place with 01:13:804 (1) so I suggest to make it into slider too (you can just ctrl+r 01:19:258 (1,2) )

[Great Student]
00:32:048 (3,4) - it's better if you move this to 00:31:877, don't forget to fix the spacing if you do follow this
00:39:547 (4) - because the previous notes follow the vocal, I always end up release my hold very early. Maybe remove 2 repeats from this slider then add circle on 00:40:399 and 00:40:569 ? it's your choice my friend
01:38:177 (8) - add finish?

[Great Teacher]
some streams feels like they're just randomly placed there, like 00:46:535 (3,4,5,6,7), 01:00:681 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11), 00:58:806 (8,9,10,11) - (not a stream but still not good) etc. This not a good idea. Try following the lyric and use more slider
00:05:289 (x) - if you hear closely there is a drum sound here so, add a circle here too?

The other 2 diff are nice, but I'm not too fond of the last diff, the beginning are fun but when the streams appear it's not fun any more :cry:
Keep working on it and Good luck
star
Lanttu

Sallad4ever wrote:

you can also consult with Lanttu I'm sure She knows how to do it :3

[Great Prechooler Lanttu]
Remove Lanttu from the diff name, Great Preschooler is enough (Lanttu is already on the tags so don't worry) Awwww, I can't be a Preschooler anymore. ;~;
01:17:895 (4) - not a big problem but the blanket is not perfect try move the anchor point a up a bit Moved~
01:19:258 (1) - similar place with 01:13:804 (1) so I suggest to make it into slider too (you can just ctrl+r 01:19:258 (1,2) ) Did something, I hope it's fine this way. ;u;
Download: Porno Graffitti - Hitori No Yoru [TV-Size] (Mianki) [Great Preschooler].osu
Yusu Aoi
Hi^^

Great Preschooler Lanttu:
Nothing found ^^

Great Student:
Nothing?? :O

Great Teacher:
00:56:590 don't know why but I dont like this jump between note (4) and slider (5) ;P


Nice nice ^^

Star:)
Mukku
Greato Mapper Mianki!

Star
Topic Starter
Mianki

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hi Mianki :)

[General]
- for the sake of consistency, please change the [TV-Size] to (TV Size) look here, you can also consult with Lanttu I'm sure he knows how to do it Fixed
- if you're going to add a scorebar-color, also include the rest of the set (scorebar-bg, scorebar-ki, scorebar-kidanger,etc) this is to prevent collision with other skin like this Removed
- increase the volume for all section by 2 or 1 tick, the current volume is still too little Increased by 1
- whoops Great Teacher diff doesn't have Lanttu on the tags Fixed

[Great Prechooler Lanttu]
Remove Lanttu from the diff name, Great Preschooler is enough (Lanttu is already on the tags so don't worry)
01:17:895 (4) - not a big problem but the blanket is not perfect try move the anchor point a up a bit
01:19:258 (1) - similar place with 01:13:804 (1) so I suggest to make it into slider too (you can just ctrl+r 01:19:258 (1,2) )

[Great Student]
00:32:048 (3,4) - it's better if you move this to 00:31:877, don't forget to fix the spacing if you do follow this Fixed
00:39:547 (4) - because the previous notes follow the vocal, I always end up release my hold very early. Maybe remove 2 repeats from this slider then add circle on 00:40:399 and 00:40:569 ? it's your choice my friend Did what you suggested :P
01:38:177 (8) - add finish? Fixed

[Great Teacher]
some streams feels like they're just randomly placed there, like 00:46:535 (3,4,5,6,7), 01:00:681 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11), 00:58:806 (8,9,10,11) - (not a stream but still not good) etc. This not a good idea. Try following the lyric and use more slider All fixed
00:05:289 (x) - if you hear closely there is a drum sound here so, add a circle here too? Added

The other 2 diff are nice, but I'm not too fond of the last diff, the beginning are fun but when the streams appear it's not fun any more :cry:
Keep working on it and Good luck
star

ShiroKitty wrote:

Hi^^

Great Preschooler Lanttu:
Nothing found ^^

Great Student:
Nothing?? :O

Great Teacher:
00:56:590 don't know why but I dont like this jump between note (4) and slider (5) ;P I'll keep it ^^


Nice nice ^^

Star:)
heintsi
Tähti :)
Vass_Bass
Hii~

Great Preschooler
00:16:538 (1) - 2 grids down
01:04:260 (2,3) - 1 grid right

Great Student
01:07:328 (5) - 1 grid right

Great Teacher
00:10:062 (7) - do it simmetrical
00:19:265 (1) - ^
00:30:173 (1) - ^
00:38:354 (6) - ^

Other is good, star ^^
Luvdic
Great teacher:

00:05:289 (11,1) - Jump should have been between 00:04:948 (10,11) - instead of these two >_>
00:47:216 (5,6,7,8) - I have my doubts about these... If others people suggest the same, then i strongly recommend to change them so they are easier to read.
01:36:983 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Lol, these could have a better circle shape xD. but if youre too lazy ignore this.

Great student:

00:11:084 (2) - Awful try of this? :l

Anyways, i suggest to change it drastically, or make it more perfect, so people like me wouldnt think about that... :T
00:13:129 (5) - Extend slider so it starts at 00:12:959, and ends at the same spot.

Preschooler:

01:05:623 (1,2) - I dislike these notes being in 1/2 all of the sudden :l
Topic Starter
Mianki

Vass_Bass wrote:

Hii~

Great Preschooler
00:16:538 (1) - 2 grids down
01:04:260 (2,3) - 1 grid right

Great Student
01:07:328 (5) - 1 grid right Fixed

Great Teacher
00:10:062 (7) - do it simmetrical Fixed
00:19:265 (1) - ^ Fixed
00:30:173 (1) - ^ Fixed
00:38:354 (6) - ^ Fixed

Other is good, star ^^

ErufenRito wrote:

Great teacher:

00:05:289 (11,1) - Jump should have been between 00:04:948 (10,11) - instead of these two >_> Made there rising jumps, but I'm keeping the 11,1 jump :P
00:47:216 (5,6,7,8) - I have my doubts about these... If others people suggest the same, then i strongly recommend to change them so they are easier to read. Changed a bit
01:36:983 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Lol, these could have a better circle shape xD. but if youre too lazy ignore this. Fixed

Great student:

00:11:084 (2) - Awful try of this? :l Fixed

Anyways, i suggest to change it drastically, or make it more perfect, so people like me wouldnt think about that... :T
00:13:129 (5) - Extend slider so it starts at 00:12:959, and ends at the same spot. Fixed

Preschooler:

01:05:623 (1,2) - I dislike these notes being in 1/2 all of the sudden :l
I'll let Lanttu fix her diffs :P
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