This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011년 1월 12일 수요일 at 오후 7:40:48

Artist: Demetori
Title: The Maid and the Pocket Watch of Blood
Source: Touhou
Tags: lepidopodus Izayoi Sakuya Embodiment of Scarlet Devil
BPM: 178
Filesize: 8471kb
Play Time: 05:14
Difficulties Available:

1. lepidon! - Taiko Oni (4.72 stars, 1779 notes)
2. Time Stop (5 stars, 1149 notes)

Download: Demetori - The Maid and the Pocket Watch of Blood
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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For Approved!!

BG Change. So redownload before 1/12

미완성

Download: Demetori - Maid and Bloody watch (brikel) [BPM (Mikansei)].osu

Hak

Mp3 cut the end so redownload

star!

☆

hi

my modding

[General]
Audio Sample Volume -2

[Time Stop]
00:01:784 (1) - change finish
00:02:122 (3) - add finish
00:04:488 (1) - Start Notes change finish
00:02:460 (1) - Star Notes remove clap and End Notes add whistle
00:03:136 (5) - ^
00:03:474 (6) - End Notes remove clap
00:04:488 (1) - Star Notes change finish
00:05:840 (7) - remove clap
00:06:347 (9) - End Notes remove clap
00:06:347 (9) - Start Notes change clap and End Notes add whistle
00:08:543 (6) - remove clap
00:09:219 (8) - ^
00:09:895 (1) - Start Notes change finish
00:10:571 (4) - remove clap
00:14:605 (10) - ^
00:44:438 (6) - Start Notes add finish
00:45:771 (1) - Start Notes change finish
00:48:491 (1) - Start Notes remove clap
00:51:189 (1) - ^
00:56:585 (1) - Stat Notes change finish
00:57:091 (3) - add clap
00:57:260 (4) - Start Notes remove clap
00:57:766 (5) - add clap
00:57:935 (6) - remove clap
00:58:103 (7) - End Notes add clap
00:58:609 (8) - remove clap
01:07:378 (3) - Start Notes change finish
01:10:728 (2) - Start Notes remove clap
01:14:078 (1) - ^
01:13:408 (4) - remove clap
01:18:098 (2) - Start Notes chagne finish
01:39:170 (1) - change finish
01:39:533 (3) - add finish
01:39:715 (4) - Start Notes remove clap
01:59:446 (1,2,3) - remove clap
02:00:817 (1) - change finish?
02:33:626 (1) - remove clap
02:33:963 (3) - End Notes remove clap
02:34:976 (6) - remove clap
02:35:483 (9) - End Notes remove clap
02:36:327 (1) - Start Notes remove clap
02:36:833 (2) - End Notes remove clap
02:37:677 (6) - Start Notes remove clap
02:55:031 (1) - Start Ntoes add finish
02:59:361 (10) - End Notes add clap
03:14:583 (2) - remove clap
03:28:772 (1) - Start Notes change finish
03:29:440 (4) - ^
03:50:019 (1) - Start Notes add finish
03:52:687 (1) - ^
03:55:343 (3) - add finish
03:57:832 (5) - End Notes add finish
04:03:299 (2) - add finish
04:05:943 (2) - Start Notes add finish
04:11:233 (3) - ^
04:16:522 (9) - add finish

+star

일단 필요해보이는거 정리했고..
clap 정리가 되면 다시 불러줘..

I tried out 31's timing...

...in the end I had to time everything myself again lol:

Download: Demetori - The Maid and the Pocket Watch of Blood (brikel) [Zek's Red Lines].osu

Zekira wrote:

I tried out 31's timing...

...in the end I had to time everything myself again lol:

OH Thanks

Lol make sure to remove the timing diffs. once you get this on Pending.

Zekira wrote:

Lol make sure to remove the timing diffs. once you get this on Pending.

Oh sorry;;; It's my mistake

Moding:

General:
- About hitsounds: claps here and obviously do not fit (sounds a bit sloppy). Need something like a long "Boom"
- Reduce the volume of audio on 7 (cut ear, it's not ok)

Timing:
- How much do you time sections ._.
Perhaps, then mod timing too. But it sounds norms

Time Stop:
00:24:595 -> but not too much of Velocity? 2,00 (1,5x) can reduce at least to 1.3?
00:40:604 (1) - move on the grid to the right (you have no equal triangles)
00:42:437 (9) - move on the grid to the right (this is not a triangle)
01:06:678 (1) - not even heard that the slider is not exactly in rhythm. But when you try to move, discover that all the bits you have shifted to n-share of milliseconds. Question - why? Fix it urgently
01:10:720 (2) - spacing (but acceptable)
01:59:243 (4) - spacing 1/2
2:00:993 (2) - spacing (given this slide from #1)
02:01:326 (3) - spacing
02:24:804 (6) - spacing
02:30:771 (12) - take away the circle, and in its place move the spinner (so you can get a bit more intuitive to remake this place)
02:52:447 (1) - "- my suggestion: do after #11 (02:52:280) triple immediately and then up to you
02:53:445 (6,7) - do not like these 2 circles =/
03:05:886 (Timing) - you have brought down the rhythm, I talked about this earlier. Manually move every circle on the time scale and urgently
03:24:323 (5,6) - =/
03:45:446 (2,3,4) - spacing
03:49:799 (11,12) - again, these di
03:50:533 (2) - spacing (move very close to #1)
04:12:945 - spacing 1/1
05:12:494 - all shot down ._.

Not bad for approved map. I like to play
It is important to fix - bit on a time scale (preferably each circle separately, including a triple)
Well, good luck. Complete the map. Star

Famfrit wrote:

Moding:

General:
- About hitsounds: claps here and obviously do not fit (sounds a bit sloppy). Need something like a long "Boom"
- Reduce the volume of audio on 7 (cut ear, it's not ok)

Timing:
- How much do you time sections ._.
Perhaps, then mod timing too. But it sounds norms

Time Stop:
00:24:595 -> but not too much of Velocity? 2,00 (1,5x) can reduce at least to 1.3?
00:40:604 (1) - move on the grid to the right (you have no equal triangles)
00:42:437 (9) - move on the grid to the right (this is not a triangle)
01:06:678 (1) - not even heard that the slider is not exactly in rhythm. But when you try to move, discover that all the bits you have shifted to n-share of milliseconds. Question - why? Fix it urgently
01:10:720 (2) - spacing (but acceptable)
01:59:243 (4) - spacing 1/2
2:00:993 (2) - spacing (given this slide from #1)
02:01:326 (3) - spacing
02:24:804 (6) - spacing
02:30:771 (12) - take away the circle, and in its place move the spinner (so you can get a bit more intuitive to remake this place)
02:52:447 (1) - "- my suggestion: do after #11 (02:52:280) triple immediately and then up to you
02:53:445 (6,7) - do not like these 2 circles =/
03:05:886 (Timing) - you have brought down the rhythm, I talked about this earlier. Manually move every circle on the time scale and urgently
03:24:323 (5,6) - =/
03:45:446 (2,3,4) - spacing
03:49:799 (11,12) - again, these di
03:50:533 (2) - spacing (move very close to #1)
04:12:945 - spacing 1/1
05:12:494 - all shot down ._.

Not bad for approved map. I like to play
It is important to fix - bit on a time scale (preferably each circle separately, including a triple)
Well, good luck. Complete the map. Star

Lol. I can't fix now..and i do not resnap the zekira's timing.

Famfrit wrote:

Moding:

General:
- About hitsounds: claps here and obviously do not fit (sounds a bit sloppy). Need something like a long "Boom"
- Reduce the volume of audio on 7 (cut ear, it's not ok)

Timing:
- How much do you time sections ._.
Perhaps, then mod timing too. But it sounds norms

Time Stop:
00:24:595 -> but not too much of Velocity? 2,00 (1,5x) can reduce at least to 1.3?
00:40:604 (1) - move on the grid to the right (you have no equal triangles)
00:42:437 (9) - move on the grid to the right (this is not a triangle)
01:06:678 (1) - not even heard that the slider is not exactly in rhythm. But when you try to move, discover that all the bits you have shifted to n-share of milliseconds. Question - why? Fix it urgently
01:10:720 (2) - spacing (but acceptable)
01:59:243 (4) - spacing 1/2
2:00:993 (2) - spacing (given this slide from #1)
02:01:326 (3) - spacing
02:24:804 (6) - spacing
02:30:771 (12) - take away the circle, and in its place move the spinner (so you can get a bit more intuitive to remake this place)
02:52:447 (1) - "- my suggestion: do after #11 (02:52:280) triple immediately and then up to you
02:53:445 (6,7) - do not like these 2 circles =/
03:05:886 (Timing) - you have brought down the rhythm, I talked about this earlier. Manually move every circle on the time scale and urgently
03:24:323 (5,6) - =/
03:45:446 (2,3,4) - spacing
03:49:799 (11,12) - again, these di
03:50:533 (2) - spacing (move very close to #1)
04:12:945 - spacing 1/1
05:12:494 - all shot down ._.

Not bad for approved map. I like to play
It is important to fix - bit on a time scale (preferably each circle separately, including a triple)
Well, good luck. Complete the map. Star

OK All Clear

tag Sakuya? >w<
doe sit need mroe breaks?

1:11:390 (5) up 1 grid?
2:53:613 (s) add a note and start spinner 1/4 beat later?
3:24:406 (s) ^ ?
3:55:200 (2) left 1 grid
3:55:945 (6,7) spacing not enough?
5:13:618 (6) left 1 grid

nice song and star~~~

wmfchris wrote:

tag Sakuya? >w<
doe sit need mroe breaks?

1:11:390 (5) up 1 grid?
2:53:613 (s) add a note and start spinner 1/4 beat later?
3:24:406 (s) ^ ?
3:55:200 (2) left 1 grid
3:55:945 (6,7) spacing not enough?
5:13:618 (6) left 1 grid

nice song and star~~~

Thx

Why is lepidopodus on tags?

Add 'izayoi' to tags as well.

Could you reduce volume a bit?
Hitsounds hurt my ears.

Also,you have a 5 minute song,it's hard by itself,there's so many notes with only 1 break.
I'm not sure if it's neccesary for Approved maps,but if you still want people to pass it,I suggest you to lower the stats a bit,but it's up to you,think about it.

00:07:300 - Move this finish back to 00:07:188?
00:15:281 (1) - Finish?
00:16:622 (7) - How about adding finish here and 00:17:125 (8).
00:20:644 (1) - Finish.
00:35:271 (1) - ^
00:44:437 (6) - ^
00:51:193 (1) - ^
00:53:889 (1) - Well,if you used finish here,why don't you add them to 00:48:496 (1) and 00:51:193 (1) as well?
00:59:282 (1) - Finish.
01:12:731 - ^
01:14:072 (1) - Finish?
01:15:413 (6) - ^
01:20:778 - ^
01:23:457 - ^
01:42:273 (1) - Finish.
01:44:955 (1) - ^
01:53:008 (1) - ^
01:55:705 (1) - ^
01:58:739 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern seems way off timing.
02:04:089 - Finish.
02:06:771 - ^
02:12:113 (1) - ^
02:14:795 - ^
02:17:477 (1) - ^
Geez,only 2-nd minute.
Please follow finish like this up to the end,it's easy to point out,so you want have problems with it.
Claps seem almost silenced to me(I can't really notice them through the playing),so I can't suggest something new,but I like you Clap work.

I've checked till the end,technically it's fine.
I don't like to be nazi,so I don't have much to suggest here,just one thing you may like(1/4 SD):
05:05:660 (1) - Finish this spinner at 05:07:080
05:07:790 (1) - Add a circle.
05:08:145 (1) - Keep this one.
05:08:322 - Add a note here,and start spinner from 05:08:500(end - 05:09:920)
05:10:630 (1) - Add a circle.
05:10:985 (1) - Keep this one.
05:11:162 - Add a note here,and start spinner from 05:11:340(end - 05:12:050)

That's it,and star~

Zekira wrote:

Why is lepidopodus on tags?

Add 'izayoi' to tags as well.

Ah....
lepi's taiko don't make now.

IceBeam wrote:

Could you reduce volume a bit?
Hitsounds hurt my ears.

Also,you have a 5 minute song,it's hard by itself,there's so many notes with only 1 break.
I'm not sure if it's neccesary for Approved maps,but if you still want people to pass it,I suggest you to lower the stats a bit,but it's up to you,think about it.

00:07:300 - Move this finish back to 00:07:188?
00:15:281 (1) - Finish?
00:16:622 (7) - How about adding finish here and 00:17:125 (8).
00:20:644 (1) - Finish.
00:35:271 (1) - ^
00:44:437 (6) - ^
00:51:193 (1) - ^
00:53:889 (1) - Well,if you used finish here,why don't you add them to 00:48:496 (1) and 00:51:193 (1) as well?
00:59:282 (1) - Finish.
01:12:731 - ^
01:14:072 (1) - Finish?
01:15:413 (6) - ^
01:20:778 - ^
01:23:457 - ^
01:42:273 (1) - Finish.
01:44:955 (1) - ^
01:53:008 (1) - ^
01:55:705 (1) - ^
01:58:739 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern seems way off timing.
02:04:089 - Finish.
02:06:771 - ^
02:12:113 (1) - ^
02:14:795 - ^
02:17:477 (1) - ^
Geez,only 2-nd minute.
Please follow finish like this up to the end,it's easy to point out,so you want have problems with it.
Claps seem almost silenced to me(I can't really notice them through the playing),so I can't suggest something new,but I like you Clap work.

I've checked till the end,technically it's fine.
I don't like to be nazi,so I don't have much to suggest here,just one thing you may like(1/4 SD):
05:05:660 (1) - Finish this spinner at 05:07:080
05:07:790 (1) - Add a circle.
05:08:145 (1) - Keep this one.
05:08:322 - Add a note here,and start spinner from 05:08:500(end - 05:09:920)
05:10:630 (1) - Add a circle.
05:10:985 (1) - Keep this one.
05:11:162 - Add a note here,and start spinner from 05:11:340(end - 05:12:050)

That's it,and star~

Ok All clear. Thanks~

Annyeonghaseyo

[General]
1) Your BG (Maid and Bloody watch.jpg) need to resize to 800x600 (current 880x660)
2) Add "embodiment", "of", "scarlet", and "devil". Since that song from Touhou 06 Embodiment of Scarlet Devil

[Time Stop]
Apporach Rate is too high! Otherwise people can't see!

02:54:953 (1) - Well, it's very horrid for pro player if this object is too near from spinner, especially for song with high BPM
03:07:052 (1) - ^
03:09:886 (1) - ^
04:19:126 (1) - End at red tick has a wrong sound, extend it into 04:21:350
05:05:660 (1) - End at 05:07:080?
05:08:322 (1) - End at 05:09:920?
05:13:079 (2,3,4,5,6) - Evil jumps, wow

Nice song
STAR

Leorda wrote:

Annyeonghaseyo

[General]
1) Your BG (Maid and Bloody watch.jpg) need to resize to 800x600 (current 880x660)
2) Add "embodiment", "of", "scarlet", and "devil". Since that song from Touhou 06 Embodiment of Scarlet Devil

[Time Stop]
Apporach Rate is too high! Otherwise people can't see!

02:54:953 (1) - Well, it's very horrid for pro player if this object is too near from spinner, especially for song with high BPM
03:07:052 (1) - ^
03:09:886 (1) - ^
04:19:126 (1) - End at red tick has a wrong sound, extend it into 04:21:350
05:05:660 (1) - End at 05:07:080?
05:08:322 (1) - End at 05:09:920?
05:13:079 (2,3,4,5,6) - Evil jumps, wow

Nice song
STAR

lol there is no things for spinners changing. So i don't changed that. But another is good. Thx Leorda

다 찍기는 찍었는데 마음에 썩 들지는 않네요
일단 드리고 생각날 때마다 조금식 고치...기는 하려나 ;;

Download: Demetori - The Maid and the Pocket Watch of Blood (brikel) [lepidon! - Taiko Oni].osu

lepidopodus wrote:

다 찍기는 찍었는데 마음에 썩 들지는 않네요
일단 드리고 생각날 때마다 조금식 고치...기는 하려나 ;;

일단은 앞에가 약간 어색하네요..
뭐 태고 플레이어가아니라 정확하진 않지만..

아 깜박하게 있는데

태고맵 HP drain 1 낮추어 주세요...

<Time Stop>
Claps sound better if placed on white ticks
Use less copy&paste on sliders please, I see little variety from the beginning to the end
Add more break please
Lower overall and hp drain a bit

ignorethis wrote:

<Time Stop>
Claps sound better if placed on white ticks
Use less copy&paste on sliders please, I see little variety from the beginning to the end
Add more break please
Lower overall and hp drain a bit

Um... maybe All clear

앞부분은 별로 안이상하다고 생각했습니다만

Anyway minor fix.

EDIT: 이곡 타이밍 바꿀 일 있으면 부르세요, 1/3하고 비정형 박자 섞여서 그냥 스냅하면 망합니다.

Download: Demetori - The Maid and the Pocket Watch of Blood (brikel) [lepidon! - Taiko Oni].osu

Cool song, star

리치!

Mitsuki- wrote:

리치!

론!!

별을 뿌리러 왔소!
맵 잼이씀!

give you star ☆~

어.. 죄송하지만 HP drain 한칸만 더 낮춰주세요.

Shows that i forgot to put to not link me approval maps, but since i forgot i'll make a exception this time, so here we go!
[General]
Unstable BPM? i see so many red lines...

Bah, couldn't find anything, oh well have a star then, pretty nice map and flows well too, with a consistent rythm

Sakura Hana wrote:

Shows that i forgot to put to not link me approval maps, but since i forgot i'll make a exception this time, so here we go!
[General]
Unstable BPM? i see so many red lines...

Bah, couldn't find anything, oh well have a star then, pretty nice map and flows well too, with a consistent rythm

Oh Thx......

ㅇㄷㅇ
ㅋㅋ

So much red.

[Time Stop]
00:24:595 - I didn't feel why you wanted to use 1.3x sliders during this part in the song. Feels like a more subdued part rather than something that's driving the song forward quicker. Especially since when you hit 00:45:294 - it really doesn't feel like the song slowed down at all, but that's what the sliders are doing.

Otherwise, the map is quite well-constructed. G'jorb.

Garven wrote:

So much red.

[Time Stop]
00:24:595 - I didn't feel why you wanted to use 1.3x sliders during this part in the song. Feels like a more subdued part rather than something that's driving the song forward quicker. Especially since when you hit 00:45:294 - it really doesn't feel like the song slowed down at all, but that's what the sliders are doing.

Otherwise, the map is quite well-constructed. G'jorb.

At first. i only use 1.0x sliders, but it's a monotonous pattern.
so i use 1.3x slider at change sound part and next to the spinner.
And...... The red line...I couldn't do anything lol

...

NeVeR_DiE wrote:

Awesome map!!Star~

lol Thx

[lepidon! - Taiko Oni]
I'm not good at Taiko or Taiko modding, but this looks OK to me.

[Time Stop]
00:44:437 (6,1) - Intentionally close together?
02:43:901 (10,1) - ^
Nice pentagrams, by the way.

I really don't have anything else to say, since these kinds of maps are way out of my league. I can't see anything too wrong with them, though. Star.

K2J wrote:

[lepidon! - Taiko Oni]
I'm not good at Taiko or Taiko modding, but this looks OK to me.

[Time Stop]
00:44:437 (6,1) - Intentionally close together?
02:43:901 (10,1) - ^
Nice pentagrams, by the way.

I really don't have anything else to say, since these kinds of maps are way out of my league. I can't see anything too wrong with them, though. Star.

Thx.. but... I don't change that pattern Sorry...

Why are people surprised at so much red ._.

Come on guys get used to it T_T

Star

reeeeeeeeed line

04:32:81 173.5 BPM
I lol'd at this part

Anyway still checking, sorry

minyeob wrote:

reeeeeeeeed line

04:32:81 173.5 BPM
I lol'd at this part

Anyway still checking, sorry

괜찮... 어프로맵이니 좀 오래걸릴수있지

ㅋ