Alrighty then:
[General]
So... you only did half of one difficulty for this entire set? =_=
[Storyboard]
00:48:525 - The transition to this image is way too sudden. Made the fade time longer please.
02:38:870 - ^
For each difficulty, please make the fade to black where the difficulty ends instead of just at the end of the song.
[Kenezz & Igna Easy] Should this be Kenezz & Igna's Easy?
00:31:974 (1,2) - Stacks tend to confuse newer players, and adding a slider on the bottom of it is doubly confusing. Please don't.
01:24:043 (3) - New combo
01:28:181 (5) - ^
01:29:560 (1) - ^
01:29:560 (1) - Hrm, instead of a kick slider, perhaps use a long slider? Just a suggestion here
01:37:146 (4,5) - Another stack I'd rather not see in an easy.
01:42:319 (3) - This might be confusing as to when it will end. Perhaps try mapping something else?
01:54:388 (1,2,3,4) - Considering how the difficulty has been paced up until here, I think this rhythm is a little inappropriate. May be better with long sliders go with the flute. Also the stacking at the end of the runs is kinda...
01:57:146 (7) - Yeah, please map something else instead of this really long kick slider. Also new combo.
02:02:663 (6) - ^
02:08:525 (7) - New combo. Lots of stacking during this section that you may want to revise.
02:38:870 (1) - Kiiinda soon after a spinner. It's really iffy, though comparing to the rest of the difficulty (and star rating) you may want to consider shortening the spinner (02:37:491 - seems to be okay, but then the spinner is kind of short... may be better off mapping through the spinner)
[Lunet's Normal]
The claps don't fit well with this song at all. >>
00:04:388 (1,2) - Uh, spacing.
00:31:974 (1,2,3) - Why this, then 00:44:388 (2,3,4) - ?
01:05:077 (6) - New combo
01:06:456 (8,9) - Raise these two one grid
01:18:870 (6) - New combo
01:24:388 (3) - Kinda boring just sitting there for so long...
01:29:560 (7) - New combo
01:34:043 (3,5) - Think you can reduce the overlap of these two sliders? Looks really bad as it is.
01:38:181 (1,2) - Strange that you didn't continue the same rhythm up to here, but if you're not going to, move the 2 further away.
01:40:250 (4,5,6) - Check your spacing here
01:50:250 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I remember when I was newer, patterns like this were so frustrating since it was really hard to read where the next hit was going with so much on the screen. Please consider a different pattern.
01:51:974 (7) - New combo
01:59:905 (7,1,2,3,4) - Same comment as before
02:03:008 (7) - New combo
02:05:767 (11) - New combo?
02:21:974 (1) - You seem to float around with your distance spacing a bit at this part and I'm not sure why.
02:43:008 (9,1) - Spacing
02:47:146 (8) - New combo
02:58:181 (8) - New combo
03:00:939 (1) - Reaaally big spacing suddenly compared to what the song feels like.
03:03:698 (7) - New combo
03:05:077 (9,1) - Spacing
03:09:215 (7) - New combo
03:14:732 (7) - New combo
03:16:112 (9) - I really wouldn't recommend having a slider that looks identical to the previous one with half the speed on a normal.
03:31:284 (3) - ^
03:28:525 (1,2,3) - Can you have these fade out with the volume instead of just staying stagnant and sticking out compared to the music?
[Natteke]
01:21:629 (1) - Kinda weird that you did the normal spacing at this part in the song, then when it comes up again at 01:27:146 (1) - you're at the half spacing now. Can you make that a little more consistent?
why the preview point set at 0:00...
, si me pillas otro dia con mas tiempo le doy un mod mas dedicado para ver si le doy bubble o no