This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 10. kesäkuuta 2010 at 11:14:37

Artist: Itou Kanako
Title: Toaru Ryuu no Koi no Uta
Source: Dra+Koi
Tags: nitroplus
BPM: 149,98
Filesize: 9788kb
Play Time: 02:25
Difficulties Available:

1. Love Song (4,92 stars, 280 notes)
2. Romantic Poem (4,58 stars, 174 notes)
3. Sweet Lullaby (2,43 stars, 104 notes)

Download: Itou Kanako - Toaru Ryuu no Koi no Uta
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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From a nitroplus visual novel named Dra+Koi. ・w・
Short edit by myself because the original song was almost 5 minutes long.

June 10; Edit

[General]
I love the skin. It works really well with the background, though consider filling in the numbers with color. It's hard to tell on the fly when you're getting off tempo or make missed when everything that pops up is white - the font borders just aren't enough of a different to tell while playing.
The kiai makes these light colors very bright. Maybe not use it at all or use it for strategic star fountains and that's it? Up to you.
Higher quality MP3 here. Don't forget to check your hit sound volume and the off set.


[romantic poem]
00:42:850 [2] I'd recommend unstacking these hits after the sliders. The patterns you use up to this point indicate that there is a fast hit right at the end of sliders, and suddenly you go into a 3/4 waltz-like rhythm and I kept reading it wrong naturally. I had to think and remember that the circles are on the beat instead of swung.
00:44:050 [4] ^
00:46:450 [4] This one might be fine to keep it stacked after the first two if you do the spacing thing. At least that rhythm will now be with the player and it will be more intuitive.
02:22:850 You may as well add a soft finish to this spinner. The music also does a cymbal crash here.

[love song]
Lower the OD by 3-4 ticks. At max OD, even auto play slowly dies with this few notes. I'd suggest 4 ticks so players can at least have a chance of recovering some health from a mistake. during the beginning.
01:04:250 [2, 3, 4] Rhythmically speaking, this set of beats does not make sense in the context of the song. I'd delete 3 and leave 2 and 4.
01:08:650 [2] Remove clap
01:08:750 [3] ^
01:18:850 [3] Remove finish
01:19:250 [4] ^
01:19:450 Add a finish to this spinner

I'm liking this map. It's nice and relaxing mostly flows really well.

Garven wrote:

[General]
I love the skin. It works really well with the background, though consider filling in the numbers with color. It's hard to tell on the fly when you're getting off tempo or make missed when everything that pops up is white - the font borders just aren't enough of a different to tell while playing. Thank you~♥ But would you please let me know what numbers did you mean? There're lot's of them in the skin. ;w;

Updated~
The kiai makes these light colors very bright. Maybe not use it at all or use it for strategic star fountains and that's it? Up to you. Star fountains it is, then~
Higher quality MP3 here. Don't forget to check your hit sound volume and the off set. Ahhh, the mp3 I'm currently using has been shortened in the middle, I'm afraid if I shorten this full mp3 to the same length the quality goes down same way as the current one is. ;A; Nevermind, got it edited, is it better now? ;w;

[romantic poem]
00:42:850 [2] I'd recommend unstacking these hits after the sliders. The patterns you use up to this point indicate that there is a fast hit right at the end of sliders, and suddenly you go into a 3/4 waltz-like rhythm and I kept reading it wrong naturally. I had to think and remember that the circles are on the beat instead of swung. Changed, better now?
00:44:050 [4] ^
00:46:450 [4] This one might be fine to keep it stacked after the first two if you do the spacing thing. At least that rhythm will now be with the player and it will be more intuitive. ~
02:22:850 You may as well add a soft finish to this spinner. The music also does a cymbal crash here. OK~

[love song]
Lower the OD by 3-4 ticks. At max OD, even auto play slowly dies with this few notes. I'd suggest 4 ticks so players can at least have a chance of recovering some health from a mistake. during the beginning. I lowered both HP drain and OD by two ticks, is it good?
01:04:250 [2, 3, 4] Rhythmically speaking, this set of beats does not make sense in the context of the song. I'd delete 3 and leave 2 and 4. OK~
01:08:650 [2] Remove clap OK~
01:08:750 [3] ^
01:18:850 [3] Remove finish OK~
01:19:250 [4] ^
01:19:450 Add a finish to this spinner OK~

I'm liking this map. It's nice and relaxing mostly flows really well.
Thank you very much~♥

Didn't found any problems, nice map ^^
Star~

Mianki wrote:

Didn't found any problems, nice map ^^
Star~

Kiitos~ ♥ :>

Just some suggestions.

[General]
- Sorry I don't like peoples who force me to do an Easy diff because of my Normal have 4.00 star or 3+, But your [romantic poem] seem too hard for beginner really (I don't see the star of the diff though), then can you make easier diff more then this?

[romantic poem]
- HP Drain Rate -1?

[love song]
- Overall Difficulty +1 or +2?

starr ~

star~

orioncomet wrote:

Just some suggestions.

[General]
- Sorry I don't like peoples who force me to do an Easy diff because of my Normal have 4.00 star or 3+, But your [romantic poem] seem too hard for beginner really (I don't see the star of the diff though), then can you make easier diff more then this? I knew someone would say about this. ;w; I really don't think the easier difficulty is worth of 4,5 stars, don't understand why it's so high. But I guess I'll do one more difficulty, then.

[romantic poem]
- HP Drain Rate -1? OK~

[love song]
- Overall Difficulty +1 or +2? +1

starr ~

Thank you and Thank you scar1410~♥ ^^

For a lower difficulty star rating, lower the gauges like overall difficulty etc., don't make beats close together on the time line (generally stick with white ticks), and lower slider velocity. I also find that lots of sliders makes for an easier time as well. If you do pursue an easier difficulty, good luck!

Well, easy difficulty added now. Pretty please I'd really appreciate if someone helped me with better difficulty names. ;w;

sweet lullaby

02:21:250(3) - remove whistle and add finish

romantic poem
nice

love song
00:59:450(2) - move one grid right
01:00:650(4) - ^
01:04:450(3) - ^
01:40:850(4) - new combo

star~

H-boy wrote:

sweet lullaby

02:21:250(3) - remove whistle and add finish OK~

romantic poem
nice

love song
00:59:450(2) - move one grid right I'd like to keep the pattern centered. ;w;
01:00:650(4) - ^
01:04:450(3) - ^ ^
01:40:850(4) - new combo OK~

star~

Thank you~~♥ ^^

Moi!

[General]
Would be nice if uppercase the diff name. Example : Sweet Lullaby, Romantic Poem, and Love Song

[Skin]
1) The lifebar is looks ugly, you need a scorebar-bg.png
2) Your spinner-circle is waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too confusing, because there's no dot in middle of spinner-circle
Example :


If you see the black circle in middle you have to add a dot
This need a dot in the middle of spinner, here I gave it to you


If you already save this image, put that dot into the middle of spinner

[romantic poem]
02:11:450 (x) - Add note?

PERFECT SONG
KUDOSU STAR

Leorda wrote:

Moi! Moi<3

[General]
Would be nice if uppercase the diff name. Example : Sweet Lullaby, Romantic Poem, and Love Song OK~

[Skin]
1) The lifebar is looks ugly, you need a scorebar-bg.png Added~
2) Your spinner-circle is waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too confusing, because there's no dot in middle of spinner-circle Is it better now? The black circle looked really rough so I added a white dot. ;w;

[romantic poem]
02:11:450 (x) - Add note? OK~

PERFECT SONG
KUDOSU STAR ajkdshfj awww<3 ;A;

T-thank you so much♥ ;w;

Great map, i love it !

~Star ^^

I think you should add more combo color.
Don't use Blue like yours,it's hard to see.

[Sweet Lullaby]
Good.
[Romantic Poem]
OA+1
00:44:050 (4) - new combo,it's hard to see.
[Love Song]
OA+1

star.

soulfear wrote:

I think you should add more combo color.
Don't use Blue like yours,it's hard to see. I think the colors are just fine and I can see them well. ;_; But if someone other disagrees with me then I will change them.

[Sweet Lullaby]
Good. ♥
[Romantic Poem]
OA+1 OK~
00:44:050 (4) - new combo,it's hard to see. I- I really don't think new combo fits here. ._.;
[Love Song]
OA+1 OK~

star.

Thank you♥ ;w;

you have unnecessary transparence in some .png files, crop it plz

Love Song
00:43:250 (4) - new combo, cuz the spacing change
00:48:050 (5) - same
00:49:250 (9) - same
00:52:850 (6) - same
01:43:250 (4) - same

Romantic Poem
if this suposed to be normal, look at this there are two Insane@.@
and dont put jumps in normal
01:19:250 (1) - end point here 01:20:450 - like in Love Song and Sweet Lullaby ^^

really like this map
Star!

call me back when you fix it

Lissette wrote:

you have unnecessary transparence in some .png files, crop it plz Cropped~
Love Song
00:43:250 (4) - new combo, cuz the spacing change OK~
00:48:050 (5) - same
00:49:250 (9) - same
00:52:850 (6) - same
01:43:250 (4) - same

Romantic Poem
if this suposed to be normal, look at this there are two Insane@.@ Oughhhgh @_@;; But it doesn't feel like insane at all to me. ;_;
and dont put jumps in normal Took off the jumps..
01:19:250 (1) - end point here 01:20:450 - like in Love Song and Sweet Lullaby ^^ OK~

really like this map ♥
Star!

call me back when you fix it :)

Thank you~♥ ;w;

can you fullsubmit? i cant import the beatmap >.<

Lissette wrote:

can you fullsubmit? i cant import the beatmap >.<

Oughh ;A; Sure, fullsubmitted.

Lanttu wrote:

Lissette wrote:

can you fullsubmit? i cant import the beatmap >.<

Oughh ;A; Sure, fullsubmitted.

still can't import, I tried in other PC and couldn't either >.<

Lissette wrote:

still can't import, I tried in other PC and couldn't either >.<

Full upload for the fourth time, seriously what I'm going to do if it's not working? ;___;

much better!

Proto-Bubble +kudosu star 'cuz i really like this map :3

some nazi mod on Romantic Poem
01:40:450 (3,4) - put these two a bit closer ^^

Lissette wrote:

much better!

Proto-Bubble +kudosu star 'cuz i really like this map :3 Adsfjdh~ ♥ ;w;

some nazi mod on Romantic Poem
01:40:450 (3,4) - put these two a bit closer ^^ OK~

Thank you very much~♥ *w*

offset : 22866

yaya wrote:

offset : 22866

Fixed. Thank you~ ・w・

Red = Major Issue, you should fix this
Purple = Issue, It's better if you fix this, and can sometimes pass if justified
Blue = Minor issue, you can ignore if you dont want to change
Green = Feedback / Comments
Black = Suggestion

[General]
I dont see why you dont use kiai, but use kiai fountains, although it does look pretty
I like your difficulty names ^^

[Sweet Lullaby]
No tags?
No problems found

[Romantic Poem]
00:42:866 (2,4) - Umm try moving theese 1 or 2 grids down?
No problems found

[Love Song]
No problems found

Ok so this means +Star

Sakura301 wrote:

[General]
I dont see why you dont use kiai, but use kiai fountains, although it does look pretty It's because with such a light colors it would be kind of blinding I guess. X)
I like your difficulty names ^^

[Sweet Lullaby]
No tags? Added one tag~ ;w;
No problems found

[Romantic Poem]
00:42:866 (2,4) - Umm try moving theese 1 or 2 grids down? OK~
No problems found

[Love Song]
No problems found

Ok so this means +Star

Thank you~ ^w^

a reminder from #mod...

Title: To Aru Kyuu no Koi no Uta

NOT

Title: Toaru Ryuuno Koi no Uta

YGOkid8 wrote:

a reminder from #mod...

Title: To Aru Ryuu no Koi no Uta

NOT

Title: Toaru Ryuuno Koi no Uta

Fixed, thank you~♥ ^^

Star~

Lanttu, you totally made my day. This map is something... awesome. Skinning, flawless map outline, hitsounds, storyboard... it's just beautiful. And the song... grr, I love it.

Please cut the unmapped space of the mp3.

[Romantic Poem]

02:20:866 (2) - One tick up. I had to do nazi, it's just differing from the whole

[Love Song]

01:04:466 (3,4) - A little spacing issue.

This mapset is totally amazing and needs more support than a regular star. Have a pink one too.
I'm glad that we have good appearing mappers like you.

fartownik wrote:

Lanttu, you totally made my day. This map is something... awesome. Skinning, flawless map outline, hitsounds, storyboard... it's just beautiful. And the song... grr, I love it.

Please cut the unmapped space of the mp3. Cut~

[Romantic Poem]

02:20:866 (2) - One tick up. I had to do nazi, it's just differing from the whole :D I can't believe I haven't noticed a mistake like that. ^^; Fixed~

[Love Song]

01:04:466 (3,4) - A little spacing issue. Fixed~

This mapset is totally amazing and needs more support than a regular star. Have a pink one too.
I'm glad that we have good appearing mappers like you. Y-you have no idea how happy this whole post made me feel now. ;3;

Thank you so much♥ ;w;

Fuuko's mod DEKIMASHITA! <33'

I seriously didn't expect this map to be this great...eh. I will rate it 10, for sure, once it get ranked.

General:

Can't you add more tags? Such as "Dragon".
01:03:666 - Make the effects you used for the sb here, too?
01:13:266 - ^
01:46:866 - ^
01:56:466 - ^
02:06:066 - ^

Sweet Lullaby:

00:51:666 (1,2,3,4) - Add whistle on the return and the end of the sliders like 00:56:466 (1,2).

Romantic Poem

01:55:266 (3) - Move the second and third square one grid right.

Love Song:

00:56:466 (1) - Move the fourth square one grid down.
00:57:666 (4) - Move the fourth square one grid up.

Eh...super ultra star, GO!
<3

Fuuko wrote:

Fuuko's mod DEKIMASHITA! <33'

I seriously didn't expect this map to be this great...eh. I will rate it 10, for sure, once it get ranked. ♥ ;w;

General:

Can't you add more tags? Such as "Dragon". Dragon added, I seriously suck at coming up with tags, sorry. XD;
01:03:666 - Make the effects you used for the sb here, too? OK~


Sweet Lullaby:

00:51:666 (1,2,3,4) - Add whistle on the return and the end of the sliders like 00:56:466 (1,2). OK~

Romantic Poem

01:55:266 (3) - Move the second and third square one grid right. OK~

Love Song:

00:56:466 (1) - Move the fourth square one grid down. OK~
00:57:666 (4) - Move the fourth square one grid up. OK~

Eh...super ultra star, GO!
<3

Thank you very much~♥ ^3^

you should make a [N] or [H] diff.

soulfear wrote:

you should make a [N] or [H] diff.

Bu-but I think that Romantic Poem plays like hard difficulty though it's marked [I].. ;_;

I have no words... ;A;♥

Star~

Sutsuka wrote:

I have no words... ;A;♥

Star~

Thank you I wuw you~♥ ;w;

Let's begin...
[:]You can change
[>>]You ned to change

Romantic Poem
>>2:21:866 Spacing(one grid to left)

Nice, nice...

adron zhero wrote:

Let's begin...
[:]You can change
[>>]You ned to change

Romantic Poem
>>2:21:866 Spacing(one grid to left) It's for the symmetry, so no change. ^^;

Nice, nice...

Thank you~♥ ;w;

Skin
The numbers don't seem to be centred on the hit circles properly.
The skin is really nice, though, especially the spinner. =]

Sweet Lullaby
Good Normal.

Romantic Poem
00:58:866 (1) - Remove one repeat.

Love Song
I'm impressed. =]

00:46:466 (8) - Unstack.
01:18:066 (1,3) - Swap.

strager wrote:

Skin
The numbers don't seem to be centred on the hit circles properly. Now that you say it, I kind of see it, too. But unfortunately, I.. kind of don't have a chance to do anything about it right now. ;__;
The skin is really nice, though, especially the spinner. =] ~<3

Sweet Lullaby
Good Normal.

Romantic Poem
00:58:866 (1) - Remove one repeat. OK~

Love Song
I'm impressed. =]

00:46:466 (8) - Unstack. OK~
01:18:066 (1,3) - Swap. OK~

Thank you~♥ ^^

Such a calm song. ^^ I still suck at mapping so for me it's ok. ^^ star ofc.

This is one of the best maps on osu!.

so awesome :O

HNNNGGGHFgsfkjsjfk, thank you so much~♥ ;u;

Pretty skin

Sweet Lullaby
Fine

Romantic Poem
02:14:466 (3) - Unrankable overlap...

Love Song
Fine

Nice sweet map, with few problems to be seen Take this star, you deserve it~

Agent Spin Here wrote:

Pretty skin

Sweet Lullaby
Fine

Romantic Poem
02:14:466 (3) - Unrankable overlap... Fixed~

Love Song
Fine

Nice sweet map, with few problems to be seen :) Take this star, you deserve it~

Thank you very much~♥ ;w;