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FictionJunction YUUKA - Kioku no Mori

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Lissette
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, December 18, 2009 at 9:52:58 AM

Artist: FictionJunction YUUKA
Title: Kioku no Mori
Source: Tsubasa Chronicle Shunraiki
Tags: Yuki Kajiura Everlasting Songs Lizbeth
BPM: 154
Filesize: 8600kb
Play Time: 03:38
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.7 stars, 396 notes)
  2. Insane (4.91 stars, 486 notes)
  3. Lizbeth's Normal (3.91 stars, 166 notes)
Download: FictionJunction YUUKA - Kioku no Mori
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Hi, this is one of my favorites songs of the TRC's OST
Hope you like the Beatmap
Comments are welcome :)

Other Beatmaps of Tsubasa Chronicle's OST here: forum/viewtopic.php?f=53&t=17543
Enjoy!
Lizbeth
Hitsounds on normal coming soon..tomorrow probably n_nU
also star :)
dkey
Kajiura Yuki \^o^/ Tsubasa
Mafiamaster
All difficulties~
-20 to offset. (23,142) Then resnap.

Hard~
01:53:94 (1) - Suggestion: Imo, it would sound better if the finish sound was on the spinner before this note instead of on this note.
03:04:14 (3,4,5,6) - Stack right on top of the endpoint. During gameplay, it looks kind of sloppy atm.

Insane~

I see some parts that look a lot like Hard.
Redo both breaks. They'll lengthen a bit.
01:21:19 (1,2,3,4,5) - Can you make this evenly spaced? ;_;
02:50:02 (2) - Remove finish
02:50:82 (2) - ^

I hope some of your Tsubasa maps can get ranked soon ._.
Since you know... you and Lizbeth have a lot pending.
Topic Starter
Lissette

Mafiamaster wrote:

All difficulties~
-20 to offset. (23,142) Then resnap.Fixed

Hard~
01:53:94 (1) - Suggestion: Imo, it would sound better if the finish sound was on the spinner before this note instead of on this note.yeah, sounds better
03:04:14 (3,4,5,6) - Stack right on top of the endpoint. During gameplay, it looks kind of sloppy atm. Fixed

Insane~

I see some parts that look a lot like Hard.
Redo both breaks. They'll lengthen a bit.
01:21:19 (1,2,3,4,5) - Can you make this evenly spaced? ;_;
02:50:02 (2) - Remove finish
02:50:82 (2) - ^
Fixed

I hope some of your Tsubasa maps can get ranked soon ._.
Since you know... you and Lizbeth have a lot pending.yeah T.T
Thanks for your time. I like your modding n_n
eee
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WyndII
Hi hi! XD
Easy
Fine~

Hard
Fine~~

Insane
01:50:46 (1,1,1,1) - I don't like the next spinners, it doesn't match the song >.< Replace it?

hmm I think, I just said a suggestion lol
anyway hope it will help you get your map ranked XD
STAR~~
Topic Starter
Lissette
Thanks for modding eee and WyndII :D

eee wrote:

I'm guessing hitsounds weren't added, soooo, not hitsound mod She will add it soon
[Lizbeth]
00:20:04 (4) - new combo, cause a couple of seconds later has them like this.
00:44:59 (4) - ^
01:13:03 (1) - remove new combo
Fixed

[Hard]
fix breaks Fixed
I can't even find the slightest of problems

[Insane]
01:06:79 (1) - finish? Nice, done n_n
02:34:46 (1) - remove new combo? Fixed
02:34:02-02:46:538 - I love this part Thanks n///n

this map was pretty cool, have a star, I liked it
Ekaru
Normal:

Fine

Hard:

Fine, but try to cut down on the spinners in between notes.

Insane:

No comment. I stink at this. D:
Lesjuh
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Topic Starter
Lissette
I finally got time to fix this, thanks for checking lesjuh, glad you like it....

lesjuh wrote:

01:49:53 (1,1,1,1,1) - Watch autoplay carefully. Spinners where autoplay can't get 2000 points on are unrankable. fix this.
if you see this part in auto, you can notice that the last spinner get 2000 extra bonus, the others spinners are equals, the thing is,that it can't be seen 'cuz the next spinner start right away.... but if i'm wrong I'll fix it n_n
gdeath
'cos my study,i'm late >w<

[Overall]
how about cancel Countdown?i never use it x.x~nazi~

[Lizbeth's Normal]
00:25:09 (4) - move 1 grid to the right(level 3)~nazi~
01:03:66 (1) - I'd make this spinner totally quiet

[Hard]
01:03:75 (1) - I'd make this spinner totally quiet
01:44:96 (3) - move 1 grid to the left and 1 grid to the up~nazi~
01:26:35 (1) - make it start on 01:26:25
02:17:49 (2,2) - whistle?
02:27:42 (2) - ^
02:44:76 (1) - how about add finish on the end of slider?
03:23:14 (3,4) - move 1 grid to the right(level 3)~nazi~(are you intentional?)

[Insane]
00:48:95 (8) - reinsert break
01:26:35 (1) - make it start on 01:26:25

i like this song~
starry*
Topic Starter
Lissette

gdeath wrote:

'cos my study,i'm late >w<

[Overall]
how about cancel Countdown?i never use it x.x~nazi~

[Lizbeth's Normal]
00:25:09 (4) - move 1 grid to the right(level 3)~nazi~
01:03:66 (1) - I'd make this spinner totally quiet

[Hard]
01:03:75 (1) - I'd make this spinner totally quiet
01:44:96 (3) - move 1 grid to the left and 1 grid to the up~nazi~
01:26:35 (1) - make it start on 01:26:25
02:17:49 (2,2) - whistle?
02:27:42 (2) - ^
02:44:76 (1) - how about add finish on the end of slider?
03:23:14 (3,4) - move 1 grid to the right(level 3)~nazi~(are you intentional?)

[Insane]
00:48:95 (8) - reinsert break
01:26:35 (1) - make it start on 01:26:25

i like this song~
starry*
Hi... I finally fixed this, I'm busy with my studies too n_nU
thanks a lot ofr modding gdeath, glad you like it!!
Diasios
Normal:

00:37:167 (3) = finish

Hard:

01:14:960 (3,4,5) = i don't like it D:

Insane:

01:49:586 (1, 1, 1, 1, 1) = make only 1 spinner

starred
anonymous_old
Lizabeth's Normal
SPOILER

00:37:167 (3) : Finish, Clap, or Whistle sound needed here.

Hard
SPOILER

01:03:75 : Make this spinner silent, or remove it.
02:17:49 : Whistle-sound needed.

Insane
SPOILER

no visible faults.
GabrielRKF
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Topic Starter
Lissette

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

Another Tsubasa incredible map ^^

//Lizbeth's Normal//
  1. 00:43:791(3) - Just a detail but it's better turn this slider to the other side.
  2. 01:32:492(1) - I think that this clap section is really cool, but¹ would be better if you used on similar parts too. But² I now that this is not possible because not every note on the similar parts are on the white tick. BUT³, It may be possible if you only use the half of the claps. This way, you are gonna be able to use clap section on the rest of the song ^^
I'll let lizbeth decide this, BUT sounds cool to me XD

//Hard// -Nice circles on the beggining :D
  1. 02:49:635(1,2,1,2,3) - too mach finishes ona soft part =/ Fixed finishes here
  2. 03:26:648(3) - Unnatural sliders, I think. I breaking the new combo that should be there. Isn't better take it off and make normal notes (or more sliders, at last?)I like this part :p
//Insane// - FUN!
  1. No probs here :]
really cool \o/

*star*
Thanks for modding, and glad you like it :D
yaya
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Topic Starter
Lissette

osu_CN_yaya wrote:

[hard]

02:01:71 - add a note here .
02:01:90 - add a 1/2 beat slider.
02:03:07 (5) - delete this note.and this spinner 02:03:07 (5) start at 02:03:07.
02:04:14 - this spinner start at 02:04:245, finish at 02:05:609 . sounds better . right?
02:43:20 (11) - right 1
02:51:68 (2) - delete..02:51:87 (4) - delete. and replace that 3 notes. thanks

[insane]

01:25:09 (3,4) - down some grids.
01:25:86 (5) - place it at mid. looks fine .
02:01:90 - do here like [hard] if you want .
02:13:01 (4) - i think this one . 3 times return is better . because 02:13:79 (5) - is there.
02:20:41 - add a note .
02:20:60 - ^

if you change what i said . plz post.
All Fixed

Thanks for the help, i liked your mod
Armin
-Lizbeth's Normal

01:07:557 Whistle
01:07:947 Remove whistle
01:08:726 Whistle at the end
01:09:895 Whistle
01:10:284 Remove whistle
01:29:375 (reverse arrow) whistle?
01:39:505 Finish at the start?
01:45:739 Finish?

-Hard
00:23:142 Whistle or Finish? (like in Lizbeth's Normal)
00:41:843 Whistle?
01:16:616 Whistle?
01:26:258 Clap?
01:27:817 (1,2,3,4,5,6) Hitsounds please n_n
01:33:077 Whistle
01:39:310 Whistle at the start

-Insane
The same suggestions in [Hard]

Sorry, but I didn't find other of wrong. Anyway, this is really a solid map.
Starred
Lizbeth

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

Another Tsubasa incredible map ^^

//Lizbeth's Normal//
01:32:492(1) - I think that this clap section is really cool, but¹ would be better if you used on similar parts too. But² I now that this is not possible because not every note on the similar parts are on the white tick. BUT³, It may be possible if you only use the half of the claps. This way, you are gonna be able to use clap section on the rest of the song ^^[/list]
very good idea.. but i did better, i place circle were it's needed and now the sequence of claps is complete.

thanks

also thanks Armin, all fixed. except the ones affected by roxkyuubiforever modding n_n
v2b
insane:
01:10:86 (2,3,4,5,6) - hard to read,maybe dont stack all of them?
02:27:03 (1,2) - wrong spacing


star :)
Topic Starter
Lissette

v2b wrote:

insane:
01:10:86 (2,3,4,5,6) - hard to read,maybe dont stack all of them? i like them stacked >.<
02:27:03 (1,2) - wrong spacing Fixed


star :)
Thanks for modding :)
Zekira
Offset: 1315 and resnap.

Other than that, is it just me or is there a lack of hitsounds?
Topic Starter
Lissette

Zekira wrote:

Offset: 1315 and resnap.

Other than that, is it just me or is there a lack of hitsounds?
Fixed, you are very good with offset ^^

thnx!
kino77
Sorry for the late mod
Great map~

[Lizbeth's Normal]
01:13:59(4)-End here 01:14:56?
01:22:74(3)-Move to 01:22:65?
02:13:78(7)-Remove this one?sounds weird...
02:16:70(x)-Add a note here for the lyric?
02:27:61(x)-^

[Hard]
02:10:67(1)-Clap?
03:25:47(3)-^

Star~
Tanmak
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Andrea
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Reduce the mp3 if you can please.
Set a preview point for all diff's.

[Lizbeth's Normal]

No problems found.

[Hard]

I suggest at start to lower volume a bit and increase slowly.

00:35:60 (1) - Here you can increase a bit the volume.
02:01:89 (9) - New combo.
02:02:28 (1) - Remove new combo.


[Insane]

From the start of the map look suggestions on Hard.

01:10:86 (2) - Too close from (1).
02:01:89 (9) - New combo.
02:02:28 (1) - Remove new combo.
Amodeus
everything seems right.

Great beatmap!

Starred
DJPop
~Normal~
00:45:92 (1) - suggest to start on 0046:509

~Hard~
01:16:60 (1) - on red tick
01:38:23 (1) - start on white tick
02:09:78 (1) - ^
03:10:66 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - spacings should be the same (vertical line)
03:20:40 (2) - not on the same level with (1) & (3)

~Insane~
01:16:60 (1) - on red tick
01:29:17 (5) - move up a bit (not symmetric)
01:33:06 (1,2) - too far imo
01:38:23 (1) - start on white tick
02:04:13 (1) - start on red tick
03:15:14 (7,1,2) - too far imo


+Star
Topic Starter
Lissette
Thanks everyone for modding and starrin'

kds 4 ya!
Crazy Jay
little mod
[Normal]
how about change like this?

nice map
+star:D

Zekira
You asked me to remod it, yes?

...but since I didn't find anything previously, I doubt I'll find anything again.

...and I was right. o_o
Lokamp
Lizbeth's Normal
00:29:036 (1) - finish here

Hard
03:08:032 (4) - new combo here

Insane
[General] this mode is VERY similar to the Hard one... maybe don't change the whole map, but maybe try create something original for this mode!

A smart hitsound-placing like on this map merits a little star... ;3
La Valse
star ~ :)
Nachy
[Lizbeth's Normal]
Cool

[Hard]
Fun
02:44:075 (1) - Move slightly down/1 grid down? Just in proportion of lining it up like on previous notes, you can ignore this if it's intended.

[Insane]
Awesome

Star'd
Topic Starter
Lissette
Thanks for modding and starrin' you guys \(^v^)/
Nharox
[Insane]

01:09:302 (6) - New combo for better recognizing of the jump. :P
01:37:159 (1-6) - Jumps like these don't fit very good but it's okay.

Rest is good, but 21 spinners? Seriously, that's a tad too much imo.

[Hard]

02:53:133 (1-3) - Eww, look at the spacing. Line it better with the same distance between the notes.
There are some other spacing problems too, you might check some of them with the AIMod (Ctrl+Shift+A). ;)

Btw. there isn't a big difference between [Hard] and [Insane]. Some spots have the same spacing with less jumps, only 55 less objects and still 21 spinners. :P Remove some of the streams and go through the map again. I'd change that, not sure what BATs say.

[Lizbeth's Normal]

Good. :)
Takuma
You should probably follow Nharox's post, but either way I'm willing to bubble this. If you DO decide to change what he said, call me back and I'll rebubble this.
Topic Starter
Lissette

Nharox wrote:

Btw. there isn't a big difference between [Hard] and [Insane]. Some spots have the same spacing with less jumps, only 55 less objects and still 21 spinners. :P Remove some of the streams and go through the map again. I'd change that, not sure what BATs say.
Thanks for modding, and you're right
i did some changes on hard

Takuma wrote:

You should probably follow Nharox's post, but either way I'm willing to bubble this. If you DO decide to change what he said, call me back and I'll rebubble this.
bubble popped T.T
Starrodkirby86
Revived :O
Andrea
[Normal]

01:38:032 (6,1) - Spacing.

[Insane]

02:58:058 (1,2,3) - I found this spacing a bit hard to read.
03:23:091 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^


Fix and I'll bubble. :3
Topic Starter
Lissette

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Normal]

01:38:032 (6,1) - Spacing.

[Insane]

02:58:058 (1,2,3) - I found this spacing a bit hard to read.
03:23:091 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^


Fix and I'll bubble. :3
Fixed, hope that is fine now ^^
thnx for the recheck
Andrea
After the fix on Normal, now there is a new problem.

01:40:027 (3,1) - This is like a jump for a normal and isn't ok. Fix this spacing and I'll bubble definitely.
Topic Starter
Lissette

osuplayer111 wrote:

After the fix on Normal, now there is a new problem.

01:40:027 (3,1) - This is like a jump for a normal and isn't ok. Fix this spacing and I'll bubble definitely.
o.o Fixed, thnx for rechecking
Andrea
Merry Christmas, Lissette. <3
Topic Starter
Lissette
Thanks!! :)
Mizuki Setsuna
Gambateh!
I'm looking forward for ur beatmap.
^~^
Sure
How long does it take to be ranked from bubbled?
STAR~
Skyripper
sorry for the delay!

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