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Jordin Sparks - Walking On Snow

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naruti
219 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
naruti
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, August 23, 2013 at 4:51:42 PM

Artist: Jordin Sparks
Title: Walking On Snow
BPM: 123
Filesize: 10683kb
Play Time: 03:06
Difficulties Available:
  1. Running on Snow (4.81 stars, 438 notes)
  2. Senbon's Standing on Snow (4.27 stars, 302 notes)
  3. Ultimate's Walking on Snow (4.29 stars, 315 notes)
  4. x3ns0r's Jogging on Snow (4.38 stars, 306 notes)
  5. Yes Sleeps on Snow (2.46 stars, 132 notes)
Download: Jordin Sparks - Walking On Snow
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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i know, it took me 2 years to finish this song....

Special thx to:
-Ultimate
-Senbon
-Yes
-x3ns0r

everything is done <3
now you can give out stars XD

Yes Sleeps on snow [easy] <yes>
Senbon's Standing on snow [easy normal] <Senbon>
Ultimate's Walking on Snow [normal] <Ultimate>
x3ns0r's Jogging on Snow [normal hard] <Xens0r>
Running on Snow [hard] <Naruti>
Last edited by naruti , edited 112 times in total.
Senbon
480 posts
Joined September 2008
Senbon
I give another star. XD
Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder

Senbon wrote:

I give another star. XD
You should mod it too~
Offset 20 might be better?
Add some hitsounds
XepherX3
625 posts
Joined September 2008
XepherX3
See last post
Last edited by XepherX3 , edited 3 times in total.
Eddycted
132 posts
Joined October 2008
Eddycted
Suggestions~

00:09:77 (1) - I would make the symetrical (like 00:13:67 (4))
00:51:47 (9) - New combo
01:38:55 (9) - ^
01:54:16 (8) - ^

Cool song, naruti. Have a star. <3
naruti
219 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
naruti

animask wrote:

Offset 20 might be better?
Add some hitsounds
ultimate wanted to do the hitsounds so later
about the offset i wait because i get a lot of different offsets

x3ns0r wrote:

as said on IRC

Offset > 2
[checked in mediaplayer on - 0.05x speed (0:00:00:002 is the spot the song starts)]

my diff( very early version but to give the idea 8-) )
[attachment=0:5de2d]Jordin Sparks - Walking On Snow (naruti) [skiing on snow(x3ns0r)].osu[/attachment:5de2d]
same thing as animask i wait with the offset
please delete it and pm it to me so senbon cant test your beatmap
it has to be a battle ^^ for max effort

Eddycted wrote:

Suggestions~
00:09:77 (1) - I would make the symetrical (like 00:13:67 (4))
00:51:47 (9) - New combo
01:38:55 (9) - ^
01:54:16 (8) - ^
Cool song, naruti. Have a star. <3
fixed
SteRRuM
678 posts
Joined October 2008
SteRRuM
Hi!
[Timing]
BPM: 123,00, (fine)
Offset: 7 810.
Resnap all notes.
thethorndog
33 posts
Joined April 2009
thethorndog
liek it, you just need to add a little bit more at the end
Ultimate
382 posts
Joined December 2008
Ultimate
Naruti, i'm only suggesting these modifications. If you do not wish to use them, then dont.

Timing: 123,000 = fine
Offset: 718 i guess = fine

Running On Snow:

00:09:25 (3) - 1* right
00:33:40 (6,7) - 1* right
00:41:44 (9,10) - 1* up
00:49:98 (6,7) - 2* left, 1* down
02:07:30 (5) - 2* down
02:08:27 (7) - 2* up
02:11:20 (13) - 2 down
02:56:57 (1,2,3,4) - 1* left
02:58:76 (3) - 1* up
03:02:42 (9) - 1* up
03:06:32 (9,10) - 1* right, 1* up

* = LvL 3 grid

~ You dont have hitsounds yet, so i'm not gonna mod that xD.
~ Like the song, like the map. Here's a star =D
Ultimate
382 posts
Joined December 2008
Ultimate
Here is the Storyboard you asked for. It's a verry smooth SB, couse its a slow song.
Can't wait for the diffs to be uploaded, lets hope Senbon hurry's up xD.
Oh p.s. i've also put in some sprites from my template. Hope you like them.

Download: Ultimate's SB & template bits.zip
Ttyl man,

Ultimate
XepherX3
625 posts
Joined September 2008
XepherX3

Ultimate wrote:

Here is the Storyboard you asked for. It's a verry smooth SB, couse its a slow song.
Can't wait for the diffs to be uploaded, lets hope Senbon hurry's up xD.
Oh p.s. i've also put in some sprites from my template. Hope you like them.

ATTACH[Ultimate's SB & template bits.zip]
Ttyl man,

Ultimate
nice SB 8-)

i added a overlay that looks kinda cool too
SPOILER
naruti
219 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
naruti
all difficulty's added
let the modding begin
my personal top 3
#1 Ultimate
#2 Senbon
#3 X3ns0r

please no hard feelings its judged on the map not on person
Infra_old
3 posts
Joined April 2009
Infra_old
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Last edited by Infra_old , edited 1 time in total.
jericho2442
osu! Alumni
1,918 posts
Joined March 2009
jericho2442
nice map and a star for you :)

also i give my vote to ultimate's map XD
XepherX3
625 posts
Joined September 2008
XepherX3
Update:

changed offset to 14 ms
re-alligned hitcircles
resnapped hitcircles

Download: Jordin Sparks - Walking On Snow (naruti) [x3ns0r normal].osu


image for the SB
SPOILER

Mashley
2,042 posts
Joined September 2008
Mashley
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
[Senbon]
Hi Senbon~
00:18:55 (5) - Add a break after this?
or fill it up with something
00:34:40 (7,8) - Spacing is a bit weird here
00:41:96 (9) - Add a clap on the 2nd repeat.
00:45:13 (3) - Remove clap
00:45:38 (4) - Add clap at beginning of slider?
02:21:47 (11) - Add a break after this?
02:51:23 (9) - Add finish at the end
02:58:79 (6) - Move this up a little?

[Running on snow]
Add hitsounds...
02:13:64 (1,2,3) - Add claps at the end of these sliders?

[Ultimate]
01:01:47 (7) - Re-add break here

[x3ns0r]
Rename it to hard?
00:11:47 (1) - Remove clap on beginning
00:15:13 (5) - Add a break after this?
01:39:28 (4) - Feels a little weird being there
02:19:04 (1) - End on next red tick?
02:36:27 (1) - Inherit timing section please
Senbon
480 posts
Joined September 2008
Senbon

Agent Spin Here wrote:

Your storyboard is painful. PLEASE get rid of it. Isn't kiai good enough?
Why are there 2 normals? I think you should change difficulty names to:
'Senson's Standing on Snow'
'Ultimate's Walking on Snow'
'x3ns0r's Jogging on Snow'
'naruti's Running on Snow'

Senon's Normal
This is bad.
Claps are underused. When there is a clap in the music, put on one the note. I have done it every other clap in the beginning. I just removed some and fixed one.
00:19:28 - Is there meant to be a break here or something? ...there was a break there.
00:29:28 (4) - Remove one reverse? Sure
00:44:16 - Note here? Done
00:47:33 (1) - New combo Done
00:47:57 (2) - Start this 1/2 later No. It'd be so typical and boring.
00:49:52 (3) - ^ ^
00:53:43 (5) - ^ ^
00:56:60 (3) - 1/2 earlier Done
01:06:35 (1) - Remove the reverse and make the path 3/4 longer Done
01:35:62 (1) - New combo Sure
01:38:30 - Note here. Done
02:20:99 (9) - New combo Done
02:21:72 - Uh, what. lolwut who remove my breaks
02:34:65 (1,1,1) - Remove new combos. '1,2,3,4' in lyrics should have those numbers on the hitcircles :3 kay done
02:40:01 (5,6,7) - No 1/4 plz ;_; ????? triplet? I removed a note anyways.
02:53:91 (1) - New combo Done
02:54:65 - Note here to make it flow. Done
02:57:82 (5) - Kinda confusing, feels like it's going to reverse much less than it does. fixd

[Senbon]
Hi Senbon~
00:18:55 (5) - Add a break after this? done
or fill it up with something
00:34:40 (7,8) - Spacing is a bit weird here fixd (5) was too close
00:41:96 (9) - Add a clap on the 2nd repeat. done, but can't be single. :\
00:45:13 (3) - Remove clap done
00:45:38 (4) - Add clap at beginning of slider? I like the whistle..
02:21:47 (11) - Add a break after this? done
02:51:23 (9) - Add finish at the end done, but can't be single :\
02:58:79 (6) - Move this up a little? dunno what that is now since the other mod xP
Download: Jordin Sparks - Walking On Snow (naruti) [Senbon's Normal].osu
Ultimate
382 posts
Joined December 2008
Ultimate
Yo Naruti, here is ya file man ^^... adjusted and everything =D

Download: Jordin Sparks - Walking On Snow (naruti) [Running On Snow].osu
~ Sorry it took this long, had to work allot.. :/

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Download: Jordin Sparks - Walking On Snow (naruti) [Ultimate's Walking on Snow].osu
~ Also updated my diff, some spacing errors, hitsounds etc..

Talk to ya soon man!
Ultimate

XepherX3
625 posts
Joined September 2008
XepherX3
Diff Update:
Download: Jordin Sparks - Walking On Snow (naruti) [x3ns0r's Jogging on Snow].osu
applied following changes:

00:11:47 (1) - Remove clap on beginning <removed
00:15:13 (5) - Add a break after this? <added
01:39:28 (4) - Feels a little weird being there <[removed
02:19:04 (1) - End on next red tick? <[moved
02:36:27 (1) - Inherit timing section please <adjusted

Naruti please update it 8-)
Mukku
1,434 posts
Joined February 2009
Mukku
I was introduced to this map by heintsi and it ROCKS!
Doomsday
Featured Artist
1,962 posts
Joined July 2008
Doomsday
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

timing seems fine to me

not sure why that SB effect isn't on the 2nd to last chorus. i think it should have it on that chorus, unless you were just making the last chorus more epic or something

[SENBON'S STANDING ON SNOW]

apart from some nazi spacing issues, seems fine to me

[ULTIMATE'S WALKING ON SNOW]

all good

[X3NS0R'S JOGGING ON SNOW]

seems fine enough.

[RUNNING ON SNOW]

looks good. the spacing at the end seemed odd but it was playable so i can let that slide

nice map. that SB did a StrangeProgram on me though and made me miss in Running on Snow D:.

star'd
naruti
219 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
naruti
all fixed
@ mukku
THX
@ doomsday
should i give a kudosu for that 0_o
thx for the star i hope ultimate wil read it XD
Ultimate
382 posts
Joined December 2008
Ultimate

Doomsday93 wrote:

nice map. that SB did a StrangeProgram on me though and made me miss in Running on Snow D:.

star'd
That is actually my intention, the storyboard follows the beat so it aint wrong, but it makes you wanna click faster (or later).
So when you follow the storyboard on Running on snow,,, you're screwed:P.
The map itselfs is pretty easy, so this just boosts up the hardness a bit, hehe.

Naruti, i hope you're reading this. Can you remove this timing section for me: 02:51:96, the kiai mode must continue here
KatanAnime
58 posts
Joined November 2008
KatanAnime
nice map
Doomsday
Featured Artist
1,962 posts
Joined July 2008
Doomsday
just to say, that effect on that spinner is a nice touch. its perfectly rankable. nice effect

naruti wrote:

should i give a kudosu for that 0_o
if my mod helped you, then yes. if it didn't, then no
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Yes_old
standing on snow.
00:10:01 (6) - add clap at 00:10:25
00:13:67 (1) - ^ at 00:14:16
00:12:21 (2) - clap
00:25:86 (7) - clap?
00:27:82 (2) - clap beginning of slider
00:29:28 (4) - clap at 00:29:77
01:43:18 (3) - i think it would sound nice if you extend this to 01:43:67
02:49:77 (4) - [nazi] allign with end of sliderrr?
02:59:04 (9) - too far?

running on snow.
00:31:72 (2) - clap
00:32:45 (4) - clap end of slider
00:33:67 (7) - clap
01:33:91 (1) - timing section here is so soft!!
02:19:03 (11) - i think it would sound nice if you make this only have one return, and then at 02:20:01 have a slider but at 0.5x speed until 02:21:47. dunno if it makes sense. haha
02:30:50 (1) - i think end of slider is too loud
02:34:16 (1,2,3,4) - i don't like shape. maybe put each note at the corner of the maps for jumps?

ultimate.
02:08:06 (7) - new combo for beginning of new song line?

x3ns0r.
00:33:67 (6) - clap
00:48:06 (4) - clap at end
00:49:28 (1) - clap
00:52:20 (3) - ^
00:53:18 (6) - clap at beginning
00:53:91 (2) - clap at end
00:55:13 (5) - ^
00:56:11 (4) - ^
00:57:08 (8) - ^
00:58:06 - i think you should add a note here and then move spinner so it starts after
01:06:84 (2) - clap
01:08:79 (8) - ^
01:09:28 (10) - finish at end?
01:15:62 (5,6) - clap
01:16:59 (8) -
01:18:06 (2) - clap on end
01:19:52 (4) - clap beginning
01:23:42 (2) - ^
01:24:16 (4) - clap end
01:28:30 (5) -

I think you get the idea. It would sound good with claps every other white tick (on 1/4). Also for the last chorus part, the other difficulties have Kaia time so I think it would be nice if you add it for that part too n-n

Nice maps (:
Senbon
480 posts
Joined September 2008
Senbon

Yes wrote:

standing on snow.
00:10:01 (6) - add clap at 00:10:25 Ok, ok.. I'll put these in before someone else complains.
00:13:67 (1) - ^ at 00:14:16 Done
00:12:21 (2) - clap Done
00:25:86 (7) - clap? Done
00:27:82 (2) - clap beginning of slider Done
00:29:28 (4) - clap at 00:29:77 Done
01:43:18 (3) - i think it would sound nice if you extend this to 01:43:67 Done
02:49:77 (4) - [nazi] allign with end of sliderrr? One of the ugly sliders.
02:59:04 (9) - too far? ^
I also converted some sliders to beizer.. I don't know why I used linear.

Download: Jordin Sparks - Walking On Snow (naruti) [Senbon's Standing on Snow].osu
naruti
219 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
naruti
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
livender
80 posts
Joined December 2008
livender
Thanks Naruti for Upgrading your map's Life Drain makes it harder for me to Concentrate
Starred
stenut
35 posts
Joined November 2008
stenut
star star i like it~ :oops:
XepherX3
625 posts
Joined September 2008
XepherX3
Fixed my diff

added claps and finishes
moved some hitcircles
added made by SB

Download: Jordin Sparks - Walking On Snow (naruti) [x3ns0r's Jogging on Snow].osu

for the storyboard
SPOILER

heintsi
1,126 posts
Joined January 2009
heintsi
just a fast star~~ XD so rhythmic map
not really fan of song but map is cool
Luneko
842 posts
Joined June 2009
Luneko
Nice map :D
Star*
cyanberryio
424 posts
Joined August 2008
cyanberryio
Liked Running on Snow! :D STARRED! :D
Hanyuu
2,223 posts
Joined February 2009
Hanyuu
good job naruti it was fun =)

but you could nazi yourself on "running on snow" to make it more pretty
Senbon
480 posts
Joined September 2008
Senbon
hey nooo it's graveyarded :(
naruti
219 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
naruti
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Ultimate
382 posts
Joined December 2008
Ultimate

naruti wrote:

Senbon wrote:

hey nooo it's graveyarded :(
JUst wait til my pc is fixed ^^ then its ungraveyarded

I was like wtf:P but ok, we wait ^^
Symbolic
519 posts
Joined June 2008
Symbolic
[Senbon's Standing on Snow]

Couldn't find anything :D


[Ultimate's Walking on Snow]

01:35:86 (5) - New combo.
01:51:47 (6) - ^
02:08:06 (7) - ^
02:08:55 (1) - Remove new combo.


[x3ns0r's Jogging on Snow]

00:10:50 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:11:23 (3) - New combo.
00:19:77 (2) - Clap on endpoint.
00:47:33 (2,4,6) - Let these sliders have the same angle all.
01:32:94 (6) - Shorten this 1/2, sounds better.


[Running On Snow]

Make difficultyname Running on Snow so that "on" isn't capitallized (same as the other diffs).

02:54:40 (2,3) - Remove this jump, it doesn't fit, you could fix it by replacing 3 with 4.
02:58:06 (5,1) - Jump doesn't fit, fix it.
02:58:55 (2,3) - ^


Why do x3ns0r's difficulty and Senbon's difficulty don't have the same sprite-image on the end as Ultimate's and naruti's?

Very nice map and song,
Starred *
RemmyX25
osu! Alumni
3,087 posts
Here since the beginning
RemmyX25
Revived
naruti
219 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
naruti

RemmyX25 wrote:

Revived
thx :)

Symbolic wrote:

[Running On Snow]

Make difficultyname Running on Snow so that "on" isn't capitallized (same as the other diffs).
fixed
02:54:40 (2,3) - Remove this jump, it doesn't fit, you could fix it by replacing 3 with 4.done
02:58:06 (5,1) - Jump doesn't fit, fix it.done
02:58:55 (2,3) - ^done


Why do x3ns0r's difficulty and Senbon's difficulty don't have the same sprite-image on the end as Ultimate's and naruti's?
euhm ultimate??
Very nice map and song,thank you :)
Starred *
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Yes_old
easy easy easy

Download: Jordin Sparks - Walking On Snow (naruti) [Yes].osu
Sure
4,220 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
[General]
Set a preview time at every diffs.

[Senbon]
00:45:38 (5) - why include whistle?
01:38:06 (1) - no hard jump plz
02:40:01 (5,6,7) - these are a little bit close each other
02:53:91 (5) - spacing

[Ultimate]
Don't put audio timing point right on note. If player click it fast, it makes weird sound.

[x3ns0r]
01:06:23 - This timing point. Move to 01:02:69 ~ 01:05:37 in this section.
It will help to remove pulse effect. This is Kiai time tip.
02:05:13 - ^ same suggestion.
02:16:35 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - I suggest more separated gadually increasing volume.
SPOILER
136233,-100,4,1,0,75,0,0
136721,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0
137209,-100,4,1,0,85,0,0
137696,-100,4,1,0,90,0,0
138184,-100,4,1,0,95,0,0
138672,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0

Other 2 diffs are seems good for me.
Nice song and maps!
star ^^
naruti
219 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
naruti

ykcarrot wrote:

[General]
Set a preview time at every diffs.

[Senbon]
00:45:38 (5) - why include whistle?
01:38:06 (1) - no hard jump plz
02:40:01 (5,6,7) - these are a little bit close each other
02:53:91 (5) - spacing

[Ultimate]
Don't put audio timing point right on note. If player click it fast, it makes weird sound.

[x3ns0r]
01:06:23 - This timing point. Move to 01:02:69 ~ 01:05:37 in this section.
It will help to remove pulse effect. This is Kiai time tip.
02:05:13 - ^ same suggestion.
02:16:35 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - I suggest more separated gadually increasing volume.
SPOILER
136233,-100,4,1,0,75,0,0
136721,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0
137209,-100,4,1,0,85,0,0
137696,-100,4,1,0,90,0,0
138184,-100,4,1,0,95,0,0
138672,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0

Other 2 diffs are seems good for me.
Nice song and maps!
star ^^
i wil contact senbon and x3nc0r but what do you mean with
Set a preview time at every diffs
Sure
4,220 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure

Azure_Kyte wrote:

The preview point is the point in each diff where the music starts when you select it. You know when you choose a beatmap from the song select screen and it usually starts playing at a certain point in the song? That's what the preview time does. I think it also determines the preview played on the website, as well.

So find a point in the song which would fit well and go to Timing (the program menu one, not the editor one) > Set Current position as preview. Save and repeat the process with the other difficulties.
Senbon
480 posts
Joined September 2008
Senbon

ykcarrot wrote:

[General]
Set a preview time at every diffs.

[Senbon]
00:45:38 (5) - why include whistle? i dunno... i remove it then.
01:38:06 (1) - no hard jump plz fixed
02:40:01 (5,6,7) - these are a little bit close each other fixed
02:53:91 (5) - spacing fixed
I'm kinda annoyed by some of the double claps I have and some that can't be there 'cause of the ugly doubles.. I dunno how to get rid of it because it selects two repeats instead of one all the time.

I also fixed more hitsounds~! :P

[General]

If you can add any tags if possible? o.o

[Yes Sleeps on Snow]

00:44:16 (1) - IMO, kind of bland without hit sounds and such many repeats. :( Maybe cut down by two repeats and fill in?
01:18:79 (3) - Clap on end?
01:20:25 (4) - ^

nice <3

Download: Jordin Sparks - Walking On Snow (naruti) [Senbon's Standing on Snow].osu
naruti
219 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
naruti

Senbon wrote:

ykcarrot wrote:

[General]
Set a preview time at every diffs.

[Senbon]
00:45:38 (5) - why include whistle? i dunno... i remove it then.
01:38:06 (1) - no hard jump plz fixed
02:40:01 (5,6,7) - these are a little bit close each other fixed
02:53:91 (5) - spacing fixed
I'm kinda annoyed by some of the double claps I have and some that can't be there 'cause of the ugly doubles.. I dunno how to get rid of it because it selects two repeats instead of one all the time.

I also fixed more hitsounds~! :P

[General]

If you can add any tags if possible? o.o

[Yes Sleeps on Snow]

00:44:16 (1) - IMO, kind of bland without hit sounds and such many repeats. :( Maybe cut down by two repeats and fill in?
01:18:79 (3) - Clap on end?
01:20:25 (4) - ^

nice <3
Good job
and what kind of tags?
suggestions
Beuchi
osu! Alumni
2,288 posts
Joined February 2009
Beuchi
So nice map and song, congrats naruti, you deserve a little star~

*gives star*~
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
[Yes Sleeps on Snow] (man, that's gotta suck)

00:58:55 (1) - I'd adjust this a bit to line up with 2.
01:42:45 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing.

It's pretty good, in general just watch out for the 1/1 note spacing (sometimes it's 1 grid, sometimes 2, but it's not that big of a deal, as long as it's consistent within a phrase/combo/stream/whatever).

[Senbon's Standing on Snow] (nice boots?)

00:12:69 - Consider adding a note here.
00:34:40 (7,8) - Move 7 one grid right, 8 one grid up.
00:54:65 (6,7,8,9,1) - Horizontal spacing is slightly smaller than vertical spacing.
01:19:52 (5,6) - Too close.
01:23:43 (1,2,3) - Spacing.
01:25:62 (6,7,8) - ^
01:51:47 (8) - New combo for consistency.
02:11:23 (6,7) - I'd consider moving these down and left a bit to make an equilateral triangle across 5,6,7.
02:18:06 (5) - Move down a bit to line up with 3?
02:34:16 (1) - Any reason for this timing section?

Same comment for Yes sleeping (must be really cold) applies here.

[Ultimate's Walking on Snow]

01:06:35 (1) - Move this timing section ahead by 1/4 or so in case the player hits the note early.
01:40:25 (6) - Endpoint up by 1 grid to line up with 7?
02:34:16 (1,2,3,4,1) - Move the timing sections earlier.

I liked this beatmap a lot. Very smooth-feeling. Awesome.

[x3ns0r's Jogging on Snow]

00:21:23 (1) - Fine in editor, weird in play mode.
00:44:89 (4,5) - Line up endpoints?
01:20:50 (6,7,8) - Unrankable.
01:38:79 (3,4) - Spacing throws you off a bit.
02:00:01 (10) - Up 1 grid.
02:05:13 (1) - Timing section needs to be earlier.
02:13:42 (1,1) - ^
02:16:35 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Too many claps, I think.

(felt pretty awesome too, this one)

[Running on Snow] (oh no, we don't know who's running on snow! Everyone panic)

00:13:67 (4) - 1 grid right for symmetry with 3.
00:30:98 (1) - 1 grid left to line up with 12?
00:44:89 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Move the timing sections earlier.
00:47:08 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Alignment's a bit weird.
00:58:54 (1,2,3,4) - 2,3 significantly closer than others.
01:10:25 (14) - 1 grid down.
01:18:06 (2) - 1 grid right.
01:42:20 (1,2,3,4) - Realign a bit.
02:12:69 (3) - Move the timing section.
02:43:18 (4) - 1 grid right.
03:01:23 (5,6) - 1 grid left.
03:03:42 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Timing sections.
03:06:11 (3) - 1 grid right.

Nice song overall, starred. :)
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