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Sakakibara Yui - Chu x Chu!!

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Snowy Dream
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Snowy Dream
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年7月21日 at 2:45:35

Artist: Sakakibara Yui
Title: Chu x Chu!!
Source: Chu x Chu Idol
Tags: Video game galgame pink vampire Komeiji Yuki
BPM: 170
Filesize: 6061kb
Play Time: 03:46
Difficulties Available:
  1. Audience (3.08 stars, 243 notes)
  2. Idol (4.96 stars, 652 notes)
  3. Relaxing (4.37 stars, 363 notes)
Download: Sakakibara Yui - Chu x Chu!!
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 3rd map~
Chu x Chu!!
[Audience](Easy) By Snowy Dream
[Relaxing](Normal+) By Snowy Dream
[Idol](Insane) By Snowy Dream
[StoryBoard] By Komeiji Yuki
Last edited by Snowy Dream , edited 111 times in total.
Sumisola
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Joined June 2010
Sumisola
不是有图了么？star~ :)
bakabaka
517 posts
Joined March 2010
bakabaka
觸觸 :O
Ballance
osu!painter
449 posts
Joined September 2009
Ballance
star
_Kiva
981 posts
Joined January 2010
_Kiva
Godlike mapper. Star
Kotone
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Kotone
觸X觸!!
ririco
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
ririco
:)
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
tentacle x tencacle 0w0

[general]
THREE .osb file (one of them is blank), delete two of them
delete chu x chu from source and OP from tags
tag the related anime/game instead
ummmm... chu.jpg and chuchu! jpg is just the same?

[Chu!]
00:34:080 (4,5) - left 1 grid
00:53:668 (3,4,...) - (4) down 1 grid, pattern like this will be better? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/59864 (look at the timeline only)
00:59:668 (5) - left 1 grid
01:00:021 (1,4,5) - whistle at ending of (1,5), remove whistle at (4)?
01:02:315 (4) - left+up 1 grid
01:31:433 (4,5) - (4) left 1 grid, (5) up 1 grid
01:33:727 (1) - 1/2 slider seems better?
01:50:515 (11,1) - (11) clap, (1) finish
01:57:374 (5) - down 1 grid, last point of thie slider right 1 grid
02:15:327 (1,2,3,4) - uneven spacing

-> spacing還是要多加留意，可能的話每個combo內的spacing最好維持差不多，像03:19:080 (6,7,8)這種誤差有1個grid大的就改了吧
-> sounding我自己不太好 感覺雖要別人幫忙~ whistle可以換另一個，另外clap可以更穩定一些
Snowy Dream
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Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

wmfchris wrote:

tentacle x tencacle 0w0

[general]
THREE .osb file (one of them is blank), delete two of them
delete chu x chu from source and OP from tags
tag the related anime/game instead
ummmm... chu.jpg and chuchu! jpg is just the same?

[Chu!]
00:34:080 (4,5) - left 1 grid
00:53:668 (3,4,...) - (4) down 1 grid, pattern like this will be better? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/59864 (look at the timeline only)
00:59:668 (5) - left 1 grid
01:00:021 (1,4,5) - whistle at ending of (1,5), remove whistle at (4)?
01:02:315 (4) - left+up 1 grid
01:31:433 (4,5) - (4) left 1 grid, (5) up 1 grid
01:33:727 (1) - 1/2 slider seems better?
01:50:515 (11,1) - (11) clap, (1) finish
01:57:374 (5) - down 1 grid, last point of thie slider right 1 grid
02:15:327 (1,2,3,4) - uneven spacing

-> spacing還是要多加留意，可能的話每個combo內的spacing最好維持差不多，像03:19:080 (6,7,8)這種誤差有1個grid大的就改了吧
-> sounding我自己不太好 感覺雖要別人幫忙~ whistle可以換另一個，另外clap可以更穩定一些
:) Thanks wmf~
All fixed
HakuNoKaemi
3,828 posts
Joined October 2009
HakuNoKaemi
[General]
Waiting for guest? just request in some guest diff queue or via IRC
[Chu]
- 1 HP and - 1 OD for Hard :D
But the start say "I am Normal" and the spacing is so different without even slider velocity change .-., let's adjust it
Copypaste this part :D
SPOILER
128,192,5492,1,0
368,192,5845,1,4
256,144,6198,6,0,B|312:112|376:144,1,120
480,192,6903,1,2
376,256,7256,1,0
312,256,7433,1,0
256,256,7609,1,0
256,136,7962,2,0,B|176:136,2,60,2|0|0
256,256,8668,1,0
256,136,9021,6,0,B|312:96|368:136,1,120,0|2
368,256,9727,2,0,B|312:296|256:256,1,120,0|2
136,248,10433,1,0
104,200,10609,1,0
136,152,10786,1,0
192,152,10962,2,0,B|224:96,1,60,0|2
344,104,11492,5,0
296,216,11845,2,0,B|256:168,2,60
256,328,12550,1,8
256,328,12903,1,0
216,216,13256,2,0,B|256:168,2,60
208,96,13962,2,8,B|224:64|256:56|288:64|304:96,1,120,8|2
368,192,14668,6,0,B|416:128|472:192,2,120,0|0|8
256,232,15727,1,0
144,192,16080,2,0,B|96:128|40:192,2,120,0|0|8
208,88,17139,1,0
256,56,17315,1,0
304,96,17492,1,8
344,208,17845,6,0,B|344:280,1,60,2|0
288,288,18198,2,0,B|288:224,1,60,2|0
232,200,18550,2,0,B|232:280,1,60,2|0
176,288,18903,1,2
104,192,19256,6,0,B|16:192,2,60,0|0|8
160,88,19962,1,0
216,96,20139,1,0
280,104,20315,1,8
400,120,20668,1,0
416,176,20845,1,0
400,232,21021,1,8
↑Spacing adjusted and some slider are more symmetric
00:24:198 (1,2) - Adjust Spacing
00:25:609 (5) - 3 grid up
00:44:315 (4) - end 1/4 earlier (at 00:44:668)
00:45:198 (6) - Add Hit Circle
00:54:727 (7) - ^
00:54:903 (1,2) - 2 grid down
kiai section from 02:01:962 to 02:25:962 ?
02:08:315 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - it can be graphically good... but is confusing >.<
to adjust (in sequence)
SPOILER
02:09:021 (6) - Delete
02:09:374 (7)(was 8) - ^
02:09:727 (8)(was 10) - ^
02:10:080 (9)(was 12) - ^
02:41:492 (7) - try to make spacing consistent at x1.0 and only change it on jumps ( after a jump return to 1.0x ), why? Hard should have consistent spacing, little variation for symmetry, large for jump..

call me for recheck :?

won't star for now
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[General]
Waiting for guest? just request in some guest diff queue or via IRC
02:41:492 (7) - try to make spacing consistent at x1.0 and only change it on jumps ( after a jump return to 1.0x ), why? Hard should have consistent spacing, little variation for symmetry, large for jump..
eh,It's WIP,I'll make a normal or an easy diff..
Why do you think it's a hard diff? :?
HakuNoKaemi
3,828 posts
Joined October 2009
HakuNoKaemi

Snowy Dream wrote:

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[General]
Waiting for guest? just request in some guest diff queue or via IRC
02:41:492 (7) - try to make spacing consistent at x1.0 and only change it on jumps ( after a jump return to 1.0x ), why? Hard should have consistent spacing, little variation for symmetry, large for jump..
eh,It's WIP,I'll make a normal or an easy diff..
Why do you think it's a hard diff? :?
i said that you should use 1 general spacing on it, and the other only for jump and antijump.You used more than 4 or 5 spacing type....
The song don't vary on speed
It's an hard because: the jump you're using are not too hard, you used more a 1.0x spacing in the map ( and please make it consistent ), not too long stream, not too hard pattern

For the codes:
1) Start edidting your song
2) File > Edit .osu in notepad
3) Copy all the Code
4) find the rows that have "5492" with the find option
5) select that row till the one that have "21021" in the 3rd position
6) Paste the Code
7) Close and Save
8) Press "esc" and reenter the diff's to see the changes

then please use x1.0 spacing in all the diff... ( only the end if you apply the code i prepared )
HakuNoKaemi
3,828 posts
Joined October 2009
HakuNoKaemi
No Kudosu for this ( you arleady gived me 2 kudosu :D )
from 02:45:378 - onward, please use x1.0 distance snap
the various stream you used aren't following the music, i do not see what to follow for doing them

Now i can star :D
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

No Kudosu for this ( you arleady gived me 2 kudosu :D )
from 02:45:378 - onward, please use x1.0 distance snap
the various stream you used aren't following the music, i do not see what to follow for doing them

Now i can star :D
Thanks very much :)
CCHV-16
49 posts
Joined August 2010
CCHV-16
整体音量略微降低点
00:26:496 (2,3,4,5,6) - 没什么问题但是感觉摆的不好看
00:47:143 (1,2,3) - 微调一下成这样的
00:48:378 (4,5,6,7,8) - 要么这里全部1.2要么前面全部1.3
00:49:790 (1) - SPIN收尾在00:51:378是不是会好点
00:53:143 (2) - 下一格右一格
00:53:672 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 摆成圆弧的造型把，滑条也带点弧度，这种带棱角的椭圆看起来不怎么美观
00:55:966 (2) - 上1右1
00:58:437 (1,2) - 为什么这里不弄成2.0间距了
00:59:496 (4) - 右一格
01:12:025 (2) - 右一格
01:16:437 (9) - 右一格
01:28:966 (2) - 距离
01:30:202 (1,2,3) - 为什么这里前后间距都是1.2但这里是1.0
01:37:790 (4,5) - 这两贴着感觉不美观，把5拉开点吧
01:39:731 (1,2,3,4) - 距离对对准啊
01:48:731 (4) - 左一下一
01:50:672 (1) - 距离
01:51:378 (1) - 取消new combo
01:54:378 (7) - 开最密网格线右一上一
01:56:849 (2) - 左一
02:06:731 (3) - 上一
02:10:260 (1,2) - 1.2间距
02:09:202 (6,7,8) - 距离太坑爹
02:11:319 (4) - 微调一下，别和6粘在一起，不美观
02:16:437 (5,6,7) - 和之前那个一样的微调
02:19:084 (1) - 下一
02:37:613 (2) - 下一
02:39:202 (8) - 上一左一
02:41:143 (6) - 这个做成弯的，这一整串摆成圆弧比较好看
02:49:260 (3) - 下一右一
02:49:260 (3) - 这个前后间距1.4
P.S：为什么就这一串要摆1.4间距
02:57:025 (1,2) - 下三
03:00:907 (3) - 中间的白点右一
03:03:907 (7,1) - 距离调回1.2
这里的跳应该下在03:13:084 (7,1) - 而不是03:13:790 (1,2)这里吧
03:15:907 (9,1) - 距离
03:20:496 (2) - 左一格
03:24:378 (6) - 上一格
03:32:319 (1) - 上一格
03:38:672 (3) - 上一
03:43:084 (4) - 右一格
03:43:966 (1) - 坑爹距离
感觉有几个连打串造型好2...
SPACING问题比较多下开DS玩NOTE最好自己再看看有没有更合适的位置
还有后面音效没做完吗？
就一个难度么...其他难度在哪里啊混蛋
这歌好萌也~
请加油吧
star
_Kiva
981 posts
Joined January 2010
_Kiva
刚刚才发现这是 触X触 0A0
(Run away)
Komeiji Yuki
1,264 posts
Joined March 2010
Komeiji Yuki
http://www.mediafire.com/?pi9vfynndl9vbve

完成了

還有分段是憑我的直覺去分的(?

也許應該加到rule裡(笑

有重複的歌詞就沒做了 免得被modder挑三揀四lol

如果有一些歌詞想分開或結合的(或者想換顏色)

PM就可以了 :3


觸 x 觸 ~
Miu Matsuoka
662 posts
Joined May 2008
Miu Matsuoka
<3
xinhe
116 posts
Joined February 2010
xinhe
STRESS~这张我MOD不出什么东西～于是STAR
Mystica
798 posts
Joined January 2010
Mystica
Star for Chu X Chu
这两天刚好还在攻略这个gal XD
Sumisola
475 posts
Joined June 2010
Sumisola
你昨晚让我打的

[Relaxing]
01:50:319 (7,1) - 我突然发现者地方的spacing出问题了...你大意了

这难度没什么好mod的...没什么问题，挺好啊

[Chu!]
我说的都是小问题，你自己斟酌改不改

00:26:496 (2,3,4,5,6) - 重叠的note我觉得还是白线在上红线在下比较舒服（我的意思是3叠4上面）
02:21:555 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 同上，白线叠红线
03:13:790 (1,2) - 个人看法这里的跳不太爽

明显送分图.....这么多人mod过了其实也没什么大问题~
不过，我觉得你每一个combo用的distance还是有点差别，可是差别又不大，有种比较违和的感觉，比如00:45:025 (5,6,7) - 这里你用的是1.0的distance，00:47:143 (1,2,3) - 可是这里又用了1.3，虽然对读图是没什么影响，可是给人感觉不太好，你是不是没开Tiny作图啊？你用的是中格子？这样搞出来的图distance不太漂亮哦！

最后，其实这是张打着很舒服的图，把我上面说的这些distance啊spacing这些问题仔细检查一遍其实我觉得就行了~
虚幻~加油 :) :) :) （我好想给过星星了
Hellzero
687 posts
Joined April 2010
Hellzero
Relaxing
00:14:682 (1) - 1 grid left and 1 up
00:55:447 (3) - 1 grid left

Chu!
00:17:506 (6) - 1 grid up
00:20:329 (4) - 1 grid left
00:22:800 (3) - 1 grid down
00:29:506 (7) - 1 grif left
00:31:094 (4) - 1 grid left
00:33:741 (2,3,4) - what you thikn about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/66419
00:49:623 (8) - 1 grid right
00:57:035 (5) - 1 grid down
00:58:447 (1) - 1 grid up
01:16:623 (10) - 2 grid down
01:40:447 (3,4) - spacing
01:54:035 (6,7) - ^ (use tiny grid size)
01:56:859 (2,3,4) - ^
01:58:094 (6,7,8) - ^
02:04:800 (3) - 1 grid up
02:11:153 (3,4,5,6) - spacing
03:19:447 (8,9) - 1 grid right
03:36:917 (5) - 1 grid down and 1 left
03:42:565 (3) - 1 grid right

You have many spacing mistakes. Maybe I missed something. Any way recheck spacing.

Chu~ Star for you
Sandpig
847 posts
Joined September 2010
Sandpig
hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)

首先群众表示这图太触了（大雾

触x触

还有如果要RANK你需要一个3星的DIFF……你这个relaxing设置上是normal但是排列节奏上还是HARD，而且低ar感觉更难打


触!

首先总体说一下……

排图的时候我建议用grid level 4，而且紧邻的circle全图尽量用一样的distance spacing，现在的情况是一会挨着一会分开一会有一点重叠显得非常凌乱。
节奏方面感觉密度有点太一致了，很多感觉需要停顿的地方塞满了1/2。最后又突然塞了好多连打进去……送分么……
音效上我感觉很多地方可以用soft的，本来塞得很满还都是normal有砸墙的感觉……

00:30:212 - 我不明白为什么前边clap都在13拍上后面都在24拍上。
00:42:212 (1) - 这个slider超2的说……
00:57:035 (5,6,7,8) - 其实连续4个slider本身不2，但是用太多了，也就2了
01:06:917 - 为什么这里kiai突然没有了
01:13:976 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 建议距离加大做jump
01:18:917 (1,2) - 这种我建议还是soft...
01:21:917 (1) - 这个更要soft
02:23:329 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 距离加大
03:05:859 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 这地方我感觉该有点停顿了吧……可以跟着伴奏做


Relaxing

AR+1

00:23:153 (8,9) - 这俩建议别贴着……其实这个难度建议全程1.0x spacing...

其它的不好具体MOD……这个DIFF最大的问题就是slider和circle搭配非常怪异，很多时候我感觉不出来短的往返slider是往返几次，这和排列上的凌乱也有关系……总之再改改就是了……


我觉得你还是需要一个系统的下节奏的思路……1/2满不是出路啊……

先这样吧……
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream
不管了 反正重排了下'chu!'难度~
其他都fixed~
Neko_Ray
181 posts
Joined July 2010
Neko_Ray
Relaxing
1st Kiai Time should be ends here?: 69,035
00:11:859 (1): Finish to start
00:24:564 (1): ^
00:25:976 (4): ^
00:35:859 (5): Finish
00:37:270 (3): ^ to start
00:43:976 (3,4,5,6): Finish to the end ?
00:47:153 (1): Finish to start
01:33:741 (2): ^
01:35:153 (5): ^
01:44:682 (1): ^
01:46:447 (5): Finish
01:53:506 (1): ^ to start ?
01:54:212 (3): ^^ ?
01:54:917 (5): ^^ ?
01:55:623 (7): ^^ ?
03:39:388 (3,4): Finish to start

Chu!
Same hitsounds with Relaxing (i think so) and:
01:52:094 (2): Add repetition, delete that slider 01:52:800 (3) and add a circle 01:53:153 (X)

It's all :oops:
star~
Beren
962 posts
Joined September 2009
Beren
Hi from V.B.R's studio

[General]
音量太大

[SB]
有些淡出淡入数值不精确
3.jpg出现的时候没有使用white.jpg

[Audience]
00:23:859 (1) - move to 00:24:212
00:58:800 (x) - add note
02:03:741 (3) - move to 02:03:564
02:04:094 (4) - move to 02:03:917
02:04:447 (5) - move to 02:04:270
02:04:800 (x) - add note
02:08:859 (2) - move to 02:08:682
02:09:212 (3) - move to 02:09:035
02:10:094 (x) - add note
03:30:212 (6) - cut down one turn,end at 03:30:564
03:30:917 (7) - cut down one turn,end at 03:31:270

[Chu!]
KIAI有点多
00:32:329 (8) - cut down one turn
00:45:741 (8) - ^
03:08:329 (5) - dont fit any rhythm
03:17:682 (x) - add note

star
Mystica
798 posts
Joined January 2010
Mystica
我懒就找了个star数低的mod 而且这个貌似能骗2kds :)
Here comes my mod

[audience]
00:45:035 位置好尴尬的note
00:49:270 再补一个slider然后再spinner如何
01:09:035 kiai结束在break之前不就好嘛lol
01:30:917 NC？
02:17:554 左移两个看起来舒服lol
02:48:564 不来喷泉瞎眼么
03:35:153 kiai结束在这里？

[relaxing]
00:23:682 slider移开点.这个有点坑爹lol
00:56:329 只有这一个是3个折返么 后面打起来就会变得很坑...嘛 不过没问题.
01:36:564 这位置lol
02:07:623 坑爹slider
03:01:270 同上
slider tick rate为啥是2 我没看出意义至少lol
Kiai同上建议
这难度的折返slider是最坑爹的地方

[chu!]
00:20:682 NC?
00:37:270 ^
00:44:329 ^
01:15:212 ^
01:18:917 敢让人休息正常break么
02:21:035 N-W?
02:21:388 ^ (N-W其实变化可以有挺多的 可以尝试下lol
slider tick rate为啥是2 我没看出意义至少lol X2

[SB]
Fine. 没啥大问题

原来我都star过了lol
我说怎么听的歌曲那么熟悉 一看artist YUI姐姐我就哭了lol
总体来说很不错XD
Cirno
662 posts
Joined June 2010
Cirno
触x触!!
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
很好的送分图呢
viewtopic.php?f=60&t=47197&p=782502#p782502

[Audience]
00:19:976 (2,3,4) - 既然开了gird level4，这样的三角形请摆好点
03:03:035 (4,5,6) - ^
00:40:094 (3,4) - 还有这种slider包围circle，也请弄好看点
01:08:329 (5,6) - ^
01:28:094 (1,2) - ^
02:01:976 (1,2) - ^
00:47:153 (1,2,3) - 间距
02:17:859 (5,1) - ^
00:54:917 (4,5,6) - 这个新手吃得消么0.0
01:29:506 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:03:035 (7,8,9,10) - 最好换成slider
01:45:741 (1,2,3,4) - 这一段的节奏有点违和
02:49:270 (1,2,3) - 红线上的节奏对于新手来说很难读
03:12:212 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:54:564 (1,2,3) - 包围的不好看，然后你是想让1的末尾和3重叠么
03:08:682 (5,6) - 去掉6，延长5到原来6的位置

[Relaxing]
AR+1/2
00:34:094 (1,2,3,4,5) - 五边形么
00:57:741 (8) - 多一个折返
01:00:388 (5) - 去掉折返换成长slider
01:35:153 (5) - 换成1/2折返
02:01:270 (1) - 这减速...orz
02:19:623 (3) - 去掉折返，在02:20:153 添加一个circle
02:45:741 (2) - 像这种因为长slider导致hitsound断掉的情况可以试试用slidertick.wav

[Chu!]
00:10:447 (3,4,5,6) - 4和6太靠近了
00:11:506 (1,2,3) - 摆好看点
00:20:682 (5,6,7) - ^
02:58:447 (5,6) - ^
01:05:859 (5,6,7,8) - 6和7的位置换一下？不然太送分了
01:41:153 (5,6,7,8) - ^
01:09:035 (6,7,8,9) - ^ 这里是7和8
01:10:094 (1,2) - 必须摆好看点
01:36:035 (8,1) - 这种跳前面后面可以加几个，前面几个的DS不要太大，慢慢过渡
01:43:976 (7) - 换成1/2折返
02:03:035 (4,5,6,7,8) - 五边形？
02:17:859 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这种玩意儿前面就应该弄几个，当然前面的DS要小一点

不错的歌
star~
DerekMcD
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DerekMcD
*Star* Because I like this song.
hoLysoup
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Joined September 2009
hoLysoup
Hello! These are all suggestions. feel free to ignore anything :)
Uncheck letterbox :O

Audience:
01:03:212 (8,9) - Maybe remove these 2 beats cause there're too many beats for easy and just add a beat at 01:03:388
02:08:859 (3) - Remove this beat?
03:30:212 (6,7,8) - Space this part out more. It's too cramped and hard to see for beginners.

Relaxing:
This diff has the same slider speed as Chu! Maybe you wanna change that. But I'm not sure if it's that big of a deal.
00:23:682 (9) - Maybe space it out a bit more from previous slider? Or reverse it probably
00:52:800 (1) - Don't stack this?


Chu!:
Approach rate to maybe 8?
01:10:094 (1) - Maybe space it out more? :O
02:25:800 (10) - Add finish souNd?

:D
MikuVio_Coppola
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MikuVio_Coppola
看在我做的ava面子上 给个星
namazun_old
namazun_old
;)
Colin Hou
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Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. 没有特殊情况的话, KIAI部分统一一下
  2. video game从tags里移除 相对的可以把主要角色/游戏制作公司名字扔进去 (tags是用于帮助搜索用的关键词 video game是常见genre 是没有必要再重复出现的
  3. 00:05:417 (T) - 每个难度这个都有一根绿线... 请把这里的hitsounds移到红线上然后把这里的绿线删除
  4. 统一一下各难度的音量分配
[Chu!]:
  1. 作为Hard+难度OD6有点低, 连打并不长 而且基本都是1/2或1/4note 考虑+1OD AR8可能更好点, 看自己喜好吧...
  2. 02:37:182 (T) - 无用绿线
  3. 02:59:859 (T) - ^
  4. 03:11:415 (T) - ^
  5. 03:11:504 (T) - ^
  6. 03:22:445 (T) - ^
[Relaxing]:
  1. AR 建议6 OD 5~6
  2. 02:07:613 (T) - 无用绿线
  3. 03:46:447 (1) - 用soft-finish会好点
[Audience]:
  1. 02:07:878 (T) - 无用绿线
  2. 03:46:447 (1) - soft-finish?
star~ 最高难spacing感觉略挤了点
swish
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Joined February 2009
swish
:oops:
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:
  1. 没有特殊情况的话, KIAI部分统一一下
  2. video game从tags里移除 相对的可以把主要角色/游戏制作公司名字扔进去 (tags是用于帮助搜索用的关键词 video game是常见genre 是没有必要再重复出现的
  3. 00:05:417 (T) - 每个难度这个都有一根绿线... 请把这里的hitsounds移到红线上然后把这里的绿线删除
  4. 统一一下各难度的音量分配
[Chu!]:
  1. 作为Hard+难度OD6有点低, 连打并不长 而且基本都是1/2或1/4note 考虑+1OD AR8可能更好点, 看自己喜好吧...
  2. 02:37:182 (T) - 无用绿线
  3. 02:59:859 (T) - ^
  4. 03:11:415 (T) - ^
  5. 03:11:504 (T) - ^
  6. 03:22:445 (T) - ^
[Relaxing]:
  1. AR 建议6 OD 5~6
  2. 02:07:613 (T) - 无用绿线
  3. 03:46:447 (1) - 用soft-finish会好点
[Audience]:
  1. 02:07:878 (T) - 无用绿线
  2. 03:46:447 (1) - soft-finish?
star~ 最高难spacing感觉略挤了点
All fixed ~ :)
tag还不确定。。。
net45291
net45291
Chu Chu ~!
AoiX
674 posts
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AoiX
触X触
有段时间很中毒这首啊～
Nymph
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....表示新人看不出什么错误 就这点意见 不要kudo ><

Audience:
03:12:736 (3) - 退后从白线开始白线结束吧？红线感觉有些别扭

Relaxing:
00:06:207 (3) - New combo 这里挺适合New combo的

...无力啦 下潜(明明打的时候觉得有很多可以MOD 怎么写的时候完全想不起来..)
Snowy Dream
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Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

Nymph_ wrote:

....表示新人看不出什么错误 就这点意见 不要kudo ><

Audience:
03:12:736 (3) - 退后从白线开始白线结束吧？红线感觉有些别扭

Relaxing:
00:06:207 (3) - New combo 这里挺适合New combo的

...无力啦 下潜(明明打的时候觉得有很多可以MOD 怎么写的时候完全想不起来..)
不要什么kd ._.
在我看到这句话前我已经给了

...无力啦 下潜(明明打的时候觉得有很多可以MOD 怎么写的时候完全想不起来..)[/
想起来再给你个。。
Muffin Turtle
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Muffin Turtle
Good map, but here's some mistakes in Audience:
-00:25:00 (blue 2) If this is supposed to be with the cymbals, move it back 1 beat in 1/2 time. Also possibly add "finish" effect to fit with the cymbals.
-00:25:628 (blue 3) Delete this - it seems off, unless you're hearing some kind of beat that I'm not.
-00:26:00 (blue 4 slider) Change the clap effect on the first beat to finish effect.
-00:26:525 (blue 5 slider) Move this back one note
-00:35:00 (last beat of grey slider 5) Change sound to finish
-00:37:300 (pink 3) Change clap to finish
-00:50:00 (spinner) Too long, shorten by 4 beats
Other than that, good work :D Hope this helps.
Snowy Dream
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Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

Muffin Turtle wrote:

Good map, but here's some mistakes in Audience:
-00:25:00 (blue 2) If this is supposed to be with the cymbals, move it back 1 beat in 1/2 time. Also possibly add "finish" effect to fit with the cymbals.
-00:25:628 (blue 3) Delete this - it seems off, unless you're hearing some kind of beat that I'm not.
-00:26:00 (blue 4 slider) Change the clap effect on the first beat to finish effect.
-00:26:525 (blue 5 slider) Move this back one note
-00:35:00 (last beat of grey slider 5) Change sound to finish
-00:37:300 (pink 3) Change clap to finish
-00:50:00 (spinner) Too long, shorten by 4 beats
Other than that, good work :D Hope this helps.
;) Thanks a lot , fixed some.
KSHR
osu! Alumni
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KSHR
star~ fight!! ;)

p,s,
>please check "creater's word"... ><
_Kiva
981 posts
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_Kiva
太好了还没死
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Hi there


[Audience]
00:22:452 (6) - New combo
00:52:805 (1,2) - This object is overlapped by spinner-osu. Sometimes, beginners are slowly to read object, so this possibly hidden for them
00:58:452 (9,1) - Swap new combo?
01:42:217 (4) - New combo
02:01:981 (1) - The repeating slider is overlapped by spinner-osu
02:55:275 (2) - Add clap at head slider
03:16:099 (3) - I don't like this head slider is overlapped by previous slider


[Relaxing]
00:06:217 (3) - Add finish at head slider
00:41:158 (5) - Add finish at tail slider
01:30:570 (6) - Add whistle?
02:06:922 (5) - Remove this note? To make a good rhythm?
02:22:452 (5) - ^


[Idol]
00:06:217 - These part needs more clap hitsound


Once you done, forum PM me
Snowy Dream
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Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

Leorda wrote:

Hi there


[Audience]
00:22:452 (6) - New combo
00:52:805 (1,2) - This object is overlapped by spinner-osu. Sometimes, beginners are slowly to read object, so this possibly hidden for them
00:58:452 (9,1) - Swap new combo?
01:42:217 (4) - New combo
02:01:981 (1) - The repeating slider is overlapped by spinner-osu
02:55:275 (2) - Add clap at head slider
03:16:099 (3) - I don't like this head slider is overlapped by previous slider


[Relaxing]
00:06:217 (3) - Add finish at head slider
00:41:158 (5) - Add finish at tail slider
01:30:570 (6) - Add whistle?
02:06:922 (5) - Remove this note? To make a good rhythm?
02:22:452 (5) - ^


[Idol]
00:06:217 - These part needs more clap hitsound


Once you done, forum PM me

All changed!
inaba-tan
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inaba-tan
god
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Miya
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Miya
Artist is wrong. It should be Sakakibara Yui, not Yui Sakakibara. This is against the rule.
Just passing by. Bye~
Snowy Dream
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Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

Miya wrote:

Artist is wrong. It should be Sakakibara Yui, not Yui Sakakibara. This is against the rule.
Just passing by. Bye~
Q.Q I see
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Snowy Dream had remove "(Full ver.)" in title due to t/89198

Bubbled
Luvdic
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Joined July 2009
Luvdic
Just some stuff related to sb that you need to fix:

Because you have been changing the map's title/artists, osu! has automatically made new .osb files, and you didn't delete the old ones, currently you have 3 .osb files, so you have to delete the following files:

Sakakibara Yui - Chu x Chu!! (Full ver.) (Snowy Dream)
Yui Sakakibara - Chu x Chu!! (Full ver.) (Snowy Dream)

Also, your sb have a little unintentioned bug, at around 01:50:687 the file 2.jpg covers the white.jpg, and I'm pretty sure that it should be white.jpg covering 2.jpg, so you should fix the order of priority of your sb elements and check other parts in case there's another problem like this.

Your 3.jpg should start moving right after it appears, rather than having it still for a while, and then start moving.

And last, you should resize or scale your white.jpg so it fits perfectly your osu! play field screen

Yay sb mod /end
Snowy Dream
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Topic Starter
Snowy Dream
Thanks ErufenRito~
All fixed, will upload after poping
Ulysses
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Ulysses
01:50:687 - There's some flashes in SB,you should include an epilepsy warning.

And some unsnapped kiai times:

00:52:800
02:01:976
02:48:565
02:59:859
03:11:151

[Audience]

02:22:452 (6) - I am not sure about this placement in easy/normal diff.
:o
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Kurai
osu! Alumni
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Kurai
Popped, you need to fix those unsnapped kiai times ~!
Since I haven't modded the map, for a rebubble you should ask the bubbler.
Snowy Dream
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Snowy Dream
@.@......
Q.Q My mistake..
Let me try to fix all
Ulysses
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Ulysses
Keep going!
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