Also, how did you like my editing? Now that I go over it, it might have been a bit hard to understand.It's actually the first time I've seen anyone working out an edited version of my writings, so I can't really say for sure. Looking back however, I realize that my grammar and stuff aren't at the best that they can be, especially since some of these parts look rushed; someone looking after them is something I really appreciate.
Also, to be honest, I haven't actually published a fic of mine since around 4 years ago, though I HAVE been writing a lot (and haven't shared them anywhere), just not motivated enough to finish them, haha. I might put full effort on this one, however.
Also, if anyone knows the numerous indirect allusions that appeared in chaper 1, such as the Venus Shard, Loudo, and Rezo... well, lol.