1. Insane (4,96 stars, 278 notes)
2. Normal (2,25 stars, 120 notes)
3. Nyquill's Hard (4,84 stars, 272 notes)

MMzz wrote:

Can I taiko map, I love Incubus so much Q_Q


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Real wrote:

Awesome song ! <3

[Normal]

Couldn't find nothing wrong. D:

[Insane]

01:58:824 (3) - Change the 3 points in the middle, make them like this.
00:20:891 (2) - ^
00:44:159 (8) - This maybe?

SPOILER

108,92,44159,2,0,B|117:164|241:168|255:97,1,200,10|0

00:47:708 (1,2) - This maybe?

SPOILER

224,232,47708,6,0,B|151:197|192:84|270:104,1,200,2|0

332,52,48300,2,0,B|404:86|363:199|285:179,1,200,2|0

01:32:470 (3) - Use the same slider I made for 00:44:159 (8) - ? (Only if you're gonna use it.)

Teta wrote:

Irc mod: Changed 01:33:268 (4,5,6,7) - on Insane
Edit: Fully modded. Chat log:

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20:16 <Katsuri> : pronto
20:16 <Teta> : k
20:16 <Katsuri> : já mudei o offset e snappeei a sections..
20:17 <Teta> : no normal
20:17 <Teta> : 01:00:337 (1) - fica meio tenso de lado
20:17 <Teta> : deitado ficaria melhor imo
20:18 <Teta> : assim talvez? http://puu.sh/fnfd
20:18 <Katsuri> : De lado
20:19 <Katsuri> : sim, já arrumei
20:19 <Teta> : overlap fica meio feio in-game
20:19 <Teta> : 01:09:802 (1,2) -
20:20 <Katsuri> : http://puu.sh/fnfW
20:20 <Teta> : diminui a distancia por 0,04x mas fica melhor imo http://puu.sh/fnfU
20:20 <Katsuri> : o3o?
20:20 <Teta> : mas depois tem que subir 3
20:21 <Teta> : e mexer nos outros dois combos :c
20:21 <Teta> : a nao ser que queira deixar um jum no normal
20:21 <Katsuri> : http://puu.sh/fngz
20:21 <Teta> : ae
20:22 <Teta> : faz a mesma coisa no outro kiai c/p rs
20:22 <Katsuri> : ok
20:23 <Teta> : vish no hard 00:33:519 (5) - D:
20:23 <Teta> : coisas fora da grid :c
20:23 <Katsuri> : não ta offscreen
20:23 <Teta> : tipo
20:23 <Teta> : o sliderball circle fico offscreen
20:23 <Katsuri> : http://puu.sh/fnhk
20:23 <Teta> : o da minha skin pelo menos
20:24 <Katsuri> : http://puu.sh/fnhp
20:24 <Katsuri> : Mas não é errado isso, ou é?
20:24 <Teta> : acho que sim :c
20:24 <Katsuri> : xo ver
20:27 <Teta> : é isso, só, já que ja moddei o insane
20:27 <Teta> : vo colocar o log no meu post de antes, ai vc edita o seu tbm

Hello there sir

1. Emm, Normal Diff has a different preview time than others. Fix that please.
2. Waa, every diff has a lot of unsnapped green timing point. I'm sure you forget to snap it when you change the offset of the map.

1. 00:17:349 (2) - This note is closer to 00:18:138 (3) and break your spacing pattern imo. Consider to make them further like this > http://puu.sh/igqx
2. 00:30:462 (1) - I would like to add a finish overhere to make it consistant with your finish here 00:30:364 (7). Besides this spot really fit with the finish since it's the begining of new rythim.
3. 00:34:702 (5) - Hmm, same reason as 00:17:349 (2). I would like to make it like this > http://puu.sh/igrz
4. 01:00:337 (1) - Just want to mention that this slider is not perfectly symetrical. But fixing that will be hard. So, well..
5. 01:09:013 (3) - I will suggest you to add whislte too this whole slider since it's not consistant with whistle at 01:05:858 (3)
6. 01:53:185 (3) - ^ not consistant with 01:50:030 (3).

1. 00:15:771 (9) - I would like to add clap at the end since your next rythim (00:18:138 (5,6,7,8) - ) consist more clap than this.
2. 00:22:081 (10) - ^
3. 01:06:253 (1) - The end spot of this slider is good for a finish. Since i hear a cymbal sound at the back. Besides i don't like gap between your finish rythim at 01:02:703 (7) and 01:09:802 (1) . So, this finish will help to fix the gap.
4. 01:12:957 (1) - If you follow suggestion above, please add a finish to slider start here too.
5. 01:22:423 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - No hitsound? Really? I think you can add hitsound like you did on the first part.
6. 01:31:888 (1) - It's not blanketed properly. I suggest you make it more blanket like this one > http://puu.sh/igAJ
7. 01:40:367 (9) - This slider really suprise me. At my first try, i was surprise that the repeat land on blue tick thus making me got 50 at the next note. Besides your rythim doesn't consist slider like this. I suggest you decrease the slider length until the repeat reach 01:40:564. Then add a note overhere. It's flow more better imo.
8. 01:53:973 (1) - I would like to add a finish here at the start so it's consistant with 01:50:424 (10) and 01:46:875 (11)
9. 01:57:129 (1) - ^

1. 00:19:321 (1) - Well, since you have a finish on 00:13:011 (1) and 00:16:166 (1), I suggest you add a finish here too at the start to make it more consistent.
2. 00:32:927 (6) - Really, an unexpected jump. Your first part of this rythim doesn't consist jump like this. It really bad, and break the flow. I will sugest to create a pattern here that doesn't consist huge jump like this.
3. 00:42:589 (4,5,6,7,8) - I feel this clap pattern is awkward, since you don't have any clap pattern besides this thus making it an alone clap pattern in this rythim. Well, i would delete the clap since it's awkward.

Frozen Child wrote:

Normal :
00:14:194 (2) - Remove this slider and put a note here : 00:14:391 -
00:17:349 (2) - finish ?
00:31:941 - ^

Nyquill's hard
00:22:476 (1) - whistle
00:25:631 (1) - finish ?
00:27:208 (1) - new combo and finish
01:44:508 (1) - New combo


Insane
00:31:152 (7) - finish ?
00:38:843 (4) - whistle?
00:45:153 - ^
00:51:463 (3) - ^




00:32:730 (1) - ^
00:36:674 (7) - ^
00:38:251 (1) - whistle ?
00:51:463 - add a note ?
00:51:858 (1) - remove the clap and put a whistle

Sync wrote:

[General]
-- The spread itself is... questionable... I'd have wished you would have made it more varied than 2 insanes and a normal... Oh well

[Insane]
00:19:321 (1,2) - These sliders aren't following much of anything -- I mean, unless you can justify a valid reason for the repeats landing on upbeats, I'd highly, highly suggest finding a different way to map this part.

00:39:434 (5) - You should definitely add a hit circle here to follow the percussion. In fact, it'd work perfectly with the pattern you have going on now. I mean, you'd have to do a bit of rearranging afterwards, but it will be in good justice I believe. http://puu.sh/woY7 (don't mind the deleted BG; I accidentally deleted it after I checked the dimensions and didn't bother to redownload)

01:48:846 (4,5,6) - I'd tone this part down a bit to follow the vocals better. I would extend (5) 2 ticks (making it land on the red-tick), remove (6), and add a hit-circle at 01:49:635 (6). For extra incentive, you did the same thing at 01:52:199 (4) & 02:01:664 (3) and we all know consistency is good. It should look something like this: Timeline Reference

[Nyquill's Hard]
00:22:476 (1) - As described via IRC, the soft sampleset simply does not work in this difficulty due to the nature of the beat placement. Make it normal.

01:28:338 (1) ~ 01:46:875 (5) - What happened to the hitsounds? They just kind of disappeared...

01:30:705 (7) - Add a hit circle here -- I mean, it's practically following everything. The bass, the percussion, and the vocals.

01:36:226 (5) - Add another hit circle here to follow the percussion and to keep the beat going

01:42:536 (4) - ^ I think it's following the music as well..

02:06:199 (9) - This repeat slider doesn't really fit the map.. Sure, it fits the music just fine, but it's just another one of those "click and hold this slider until it's over" -- it's not intuitive. Instead, you should add a hit circle at 02:06:199 (9), a 1-beat slider at 02:06:397 (10) (and a new combo), and remove the overlapping note at 02:06:988 (11). It should look something like this on the timeline

02:07:777 (4) - This slider doesn't fit because there needs to be a beat on the red tick. Instead, make it a 1/2-beat slider and add a 1-beat slider at 02:08:171 (5). Organizing your beat placement in this fashion represents the music way better. Here's a timeline reference. the way t's now works better, because the rhythm will sound like a ending phrase, as the drums do.

[Normal]
00:22:476 (1) - Again, the soft sampleset doesn't work very well in this dfficulty...

00:56:196 (3) - This slider should be moved back two ticks or else it follows much of nothing. After that, make sure to extend it two ticks.

Call me back when you're ready for a recheck.

1. If you have a pause-overlay.jpg, perhaps you might want to add a fail-background image to go along with it.

1. 00:23:954 - Unused timing section.
2. 00:25:631 (1) - You may want to add a finish to the beginning of this slider to emphasize the start of a louder instrument in the song.
3. 00:38:251 (1) - Add a finish to the beginning of this slider; it's present in the music.
4. 00:54:027 (1) - Instead of a long reverse slider which may be hard for newer players to read, why not make a slider like the one at 00:53:041 (2)?
5. 00:58:957 (3) - Remove the whistle from the body of this slider.
6. 00:58:957 (3,1) - These two sliders overlap a bit.
7. 01:40:367 (3) - Make this slider straight. It's as close as you can get to the pattern like 01:36:423 (2,3).
8. 01:41:353 (1) - Why is this slider so short? It creates a big gap in the timeline to the next object. Not to mention that this isn't very intuitive. Make the beat placement similar to 01:35:043 (1,2,3).
9. 02:10:150 - Unused timing section.

1. 5 for both OD and HP drain is too low for a hard difficulty. Add +1 to at least one of them.
2. 01:02:703 (7,1) - Make it so that these don't overlap.
3. 01:45:691 (3) - This slider doesn't look so visually appealing. Try something like this.
4. 01:57:129 (1,3) - These are almost ever so slightly overlapping.
5. 02:10:150 - Unused timing section.

1. 00:25:631 (1) - Finish at the beginning of this slider.