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[General]TAG: add ur guest to tags + opening/ending (dunno what is it xD), also u can add
alice clara, names of the singers ==!
AudioLeadIn: 1004, make it 1000 (but 1500 is better for me)
Kiai: i remember u always used kiai o.o, add some 00:57:318 - 01:17:117 (same with Nymph's diff)
Combo Colours : #This colors looks prety similar to each other, which is not good for gameplay, so u better to chose between gameplay or art
#Jojo colors different from other diffs, btw this colors are better for me.
#Since u have only 1 BG make same combo colors set for every diff
[Insane]SPOILER- 00:28:555 (5,6) - mb change this to long slider ?
i dont hear any sound at red tick, and long slider perfectly fits with rhytm/vocal
or make it like this http://puu.sh/eS5G (http://puu.sh/eS66)
4 notes antijump(starts from 00:28:865) , which is also fits better with vocal and rhytm
- 00:32:578 (1,2,3,4,1) - dont like this part
123123 repeat slider should starts from 00:33:661 imo
also some overmapped notes for me
so my pattern suggestion for this part http://puu.sh/eS9i
if u agree than:
#00:34:744 (2) - place it at the end of repeat slider
#00:35:054 (1) - x:440 y:296, somekind of triangle~
- 00:37:426 (6) - delete note mb ?
- 00:40:469 (2) - dont like this note, sounds like forced overmap for me
- 00:41:449 (1) - change playback rate to 25% and u will hear that sound starts earlier than note, around 00:41:436
- 00:52:691 (3) - obviously + note, for better flow = =+
^ also dont forget to fix spacing
[S h i o n's Normal]SPOILER- 00:02:872 - 00:06:276 why custom clap only 1 per 4 white tick... make it every 2nd white tick as ussual, sounds better for me
spacing .....orz....why did u chose 0.85, why not 0.8 or 0.9 - 00:07:823 (1) - spacing
- 00:11:536 (7) - remove clap from tail, sounds bad
00:17:725 (1) - NC bug, add it manually - 00:12:465 (8) - dont stack this note, put it like puu.sh/eTvS and keep same pattern style for next part (note + slider),
- 00:47:740 (3) - +note ? vocal starts here
- 00:49:907 (5,1,2) - u lost rhytm in this part, try smth like this http://puu.sh/f61H
- 00:51:608 (2) - spacing
- 01:06:926 (7) - +note ( also some kind of useless time section here)
- 01:15:435 (3) - spacing
- 01:25:647 (1) - hmm spiner should ends in 01:26:420 (the last sound that i hear in this song), but its quite short spinner for normal diff, so maybe just finish it without spinner(add some sliders\notes)...
#Add slider tick for missing claps, cause now some parts sounds not so good .-.
[JoJo's Hard]SPOILER- 00:57:024 (4) - + note mb ?
- 01:03:831 (5) - slider sounds bad (especially clap at the tail), its breaking the rhytm, , try this http://puu.sh/f64n (1/3 snap), sounds much better and remove clap from 01:04:605 (6) -
- 01:08:782 (7,8) - also sounds bad, try this http://puu.sh/f64P (1/3 snap) start point at 01:08:679
- 01:25:801 (7) - delete clap from tail and add low volume finish (to fit background music)
- 01:26:420 (1) - lol, i also like this 1/8(1/6) fast repeat sliders, but simply ending with note is better imo xD (+ add some low volume finish)
nice diff \^.^/
just small suggestion, try to make less stream parts like 01:06:616 (5,6,7,8) - , cause its very hard to play especially on 193 bpm ==
[Nymph's Easy]SPOILER- 00:26:383 (4,6) - add SC1 clap (slider tail) volume not more than 40%
- 00:56:700 (5) - sounds more like finish than clap
- 01:25:779 (2) - try to add some low volume (20/25) finish to reverse arrow and tail, cause i totally hear some finishes on background
- 01:03:815 (2) - dont like this slider, all map have the same rhytm and then suddenly this slider breaking it >~<, i think its better to keep 1 rhymt for easy diff
- 01:13:714 (3) - ^
Im not agree with 80% NC so i wont write wall of NC text, i will leave it to NC moders xD
Good luck ></
193.90 bpm and 1/3 map, like a bad dream for me (/ω\)