This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年7月5日 at 23:26:09

Artist: Owl City
Title: Hello Seattle (Remix)
Tags: ocean eyes adam young synthpop
BPM: 125
Filesize: 8415kb
Play Time: 05:32
Difficulties Available:

1. Goodbye (5 stars, 922 notes)

Download: Owl City - Hello Seattle (Remix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hello Seattle I am a nuclear bomb.
Flying high, toward you.
I will devote myself to a greeting show.
And Ethan can't stopping me!

~MY 1ST MAP FOR APP~
And it's my 14th beatmap.

Oh, and this one is a remix version. To find the original version, here it is:
Owl City - Hello Seattle

1st post.

General
SliderMultiplier:2.79999990463257 <= 2.8
add "Adam Young" to the tags as a composer
oh... 84secs of ,hummmm, nothing? can you crop it? Really, it will be better:
- less size of map
- fix bug with pulsations in menu, cuz of late offset
- i don't want to wait 1min in multi if somebody will forget that his osu is working~

OTL
01:50:705 (5) - remove note, double checked, sounds off
02:06:785 (1,2, ... ,to the break) - nice pattern, but hitsounds sucks
you could try to add sliderbody whistles.. they'll be able to work cool here.
02:21:185 (1) - add slider body whistle
02:21:545 (2) - remove note
02:21:665 (3) - add clap, whistle
02:29:585 (5,1) - replace nc on (5)
02:30:785 (1,5) - make them a bit far from each other(as on pic, or as you want)02:59:585 (1) - hitsound is quiet, i wasn't sure that i was right, when played. add whistle? it'll help to determine miss or not.
03:00:545 (1) - ^
some similar beats later too... ^
also~ spacing in streams/ triples:
03:04:625 (2,3,4) - 0.6x, plays excellent
next stream(5 notes, not in stack) 03:09:185 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1.05x. Well. I was so confused... Reduce a bit or.. i don't know, i didn't expect it
as example : 03:24:545 (2,3,4,5,6) - 0.98x , i wasn't confused. huh. strange.
don't be afraid to add more whistles:
03:19:745 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - this pattern,as example. where I'd place whistles :
(1) - start
(2) - whistle
(3) - sliderbody, end
(1,2,3,4) - 4 whistles
... and many more!
03:43:745 (2) - imo, doesn't fit, sounds bad :
don't forget to fix hitsounds~
04:43:265 (1) - similar suggestion for similar slider
04:59:585 (1) - not sure in this sliderway, you know why~
05:02:705 (3) - this note is damn hidden
05:14:945 (1) - i see it again

well, song is very repetitive, your copy paste is fine here :3

well, it deserves a star ;3

[General]
Combo Color 可以的话我不推荐用这种很相似的颜色当combo color,特别是那两个粉的...而且你的皮肤也让我看不出他们的区别这会导致part很难读清.和胖胖讨论了一下觉得你最好换一个颜色o.o

[OTL] <I cant understand why you use this as diff's name...好歹你也起个有关的吧..这难度名有些毫无意义

01:27:425 (5) - 尾巴上面降点音量如何?
01:50:705 (5) - 还是往后移1/4比较好
02:41:105 (7,8) - 这两个的clap调个位置如何?
03:51:905 (3) - 既然前面加了whistle那么把这个也补上吧
04:03:185 (2,3,4,5) - 这边从xx xx x改成x x x 23加clap会比较好点...
04:08:345 (4,5) - 把他们移到1和2相对中间的位置?
04:10:745 (2) - 把这个移到04:10:505吧...音乐本身就有这个音...音效记得改
04:38:465 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 我觉得这段真心有点不适合...又听不出又看不出...
05:11:825 (4) - 没叠好
05:12:785 (4) - ^

that's all

From my queue

OTL

• - 難度名大丈夫嗎
  - 同意e姐可以換一套combo color
  - 可以玩的花樣其實有很多, 對稱算是中規中矩吧, 不過少了發揮空間, 特色相對就少了

01:31:265 (5) - New combo? 雖然個人認為前面的(2,3,4)間距擴大效果會更好
01:39:905 (T) - Normal hitsound set, 45% volume?
01:40:145 (T) - 切回Soft
01:41:585 (T) - Normal hitsound set, 40% volume
01:41:825 (T) - ^, 45% volume
01:42:185 (T) - Soft (若然覺得sliderslide太吵就往前面些放吧) 後面亦是如此, 我就不全寫了
01:46:385 (4,5,6,7) - 不用01:38:705 (4,5,6,7) 這裡的排放方式嗎? 個人覺得兩個統一會比較好
02:02:465 (7) - whistle?
02:06:785 (1,2,1,2) - 每1/1拍降個5~8%音量效果會好些
02:09:665 (1) - 分成兩段? 2/1拍稍長
02:14:225 (5) - 要玩對稱就把這個放回中間吧
02:15:665 (2,4) - 還不太適合出現whistle
02:19:505 (2,4) - ^ (後面亦是如此~
02:25:265 (2,3) - 個人認為空出這兩拍, 對後面vocal出來的一小段有加成效果
02:40:385 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 間距稍微縮短一些
02:41:225 (8) - 刪clap, 節奏太急促了
02:51:905 (1,2,3) - 我原本以為你不是會玩這種排列的人, 直到我膝蓋(略
03:45:065, 03:46:985 - add circles, 我覺得這邊讓人有個break之餘可以不用純1/2拍打節奏, 加點3/4更有趣
03:48:905, 03:50:345, 03:51:305 - ^
03:55:265 (1) - whistle
03:58:145 (1) - 開頭whistle
03:59:105 (1) - 這爆發切換比較違和...有沒有什麼緩衝方法, 比如這個1/8中間切normal然後音量從低至高
04:01:025 (5) - 換成3/4 slider不是更好麼
04:13:505 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 我好奇這東西可打程度到哪
04:26:945 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - hi BASARA (我只想到這張了
04:43:265 (1) - 結尾可切normal
04:50:945 (1,2,3,4,1) - 其實有點2
04:59:585 (1) - 開頭finish, 折返處開始換成5%音量
05:08:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 水平連打有點突兀, 這種較好: http://puu.sh/co8t
05:14:945 (1) - I saw you again~~
05:31:265 (6) - 最後這個slider可以再扭曲些

Hi.

enjoy my little pony mod

OTL
01:31:505 (6,7) - maybe slider here
01:52:625 - maybe note here
03:19:025 (3,4,5) - maybe slider here
03:55:265 (1,2,3) - maybe http://puu.sh/cuBj
05:05:345 (1,2) - eh..(1) delete new combo (2) - add new combo
05:31:265 (6) - maybe longer?

Looks really nice. Skin is awesome.

I'm new mapper..so..not sure about this mod, but i love this song.
Sorry for poor english

OTL
03:04:625 (2,3,4) - it's weird :c, change it if you want :3
03:16:385 - add note ? :3
03:17:345 - ^
03:22:145 - ^
03:23:105 - ^
03:41:825 - http://puu.sh/cuGf
03:52:625 - whistle
03:52:745 - Remove whistle
03:55:265 (1,2,3) - weeird.



General.

Nice map :33

hi from modreq

uh...long intro? xD

02:20:825 (3,4) - closer spacing
02:22:625 - Add note
02:22:745 (3) - Delete note
02:23:105 (1) - Delete NC
02:31:025 (2,3,4) - closer spacing?
02:35:585 (1) - move this lower to the center of the diamond
02:46:625 (3,4) - flip positions and lessen distance; might fit with the future pattern
02:57:305 (4,5) - position seems kinda random
03:12:305 (2) - flip vertically? for flow
03:55:745 (4) - I feel there should be a slider
04:06:785 (1,2,3,4) - a little messy, do the trapezoid again or something like that
05:23:105 (4) - Move to (256,368)

Gah, wonderful map
Great patterns
and really pretty

Hi JPY !
(Req from ingame =A=)

[General]

1. 建议把combo color 1和2换下位置？

[OTL]

1. 01:34:145 (2,3) - 有种SV突然变快SPACING突然加大的感觉..我觉得rank以后Points of Retry这里一定超高一条。=A=
2. 01:54:305 (5) - 这slider能用？我记得以前哪个蓝名告诉过我这样的是unrankable....(后面还有这样的=。= 我就不列出来了
3. 02:06:785 (1,2) - 2个来回就略坑了...再接这么大spacing真的大丈夫...?=。= 试试1来回结尾叠circle?
4. 02:16:385 (1,2) - 看到这spacing的时候我就开始觉得这张图不适合我这种叒B来mod了orz....(魂淡妮姆芙快来汁圆...
5. 03:58:864 (3,1) - 这个spacing为什么要这样?

Nice map. 感觉说了一堆废话= =

No kudos.

• Hi hi~ request from In-Game PM
  
  General :

1. 拜託!!! "Ocean Eyes" 應該是在Source吧 不是在Tags裡...
2. 為何diff名稱叫OTL... 這真是會讓人OTL啊...
   
   OTL :
   
3. 01:35:105 (5) - 我的話會NC
4. 01:38:705 (4) - ^
5. 02:01:985 (5) - ^
6. 02:09:185 (1) - NC有些多餘...
7. 02:52:385 (3) - 距離上個note太遠啦!~ Ctrl+R please!!~
8. 02:53:825 (1) - ^
9. 03:12:065 (1,2,3,1) - 改成這樣比較好 :
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 03:20:225 (3) - Ctrl+R
11. 03:22:025 (2) - 沒重疊好
12. 03:22:985 (2) - ^
13. 03:27:425 (1,2,3,1) - 跟03:12:065 (1,2,3,1) - 一樣的建議
14. 03:55:265 (1,2,3) - 不知為何 我覺得這裡要重疊比較好!!
15. 04:04:625 (5) - 加NC
16. 04:04:865 (1) - 刪除NC
17. 04:14:465 (1) - 改成往下吧 不然會重疊到
18. 04:42:785 (1) - 刪除NC
19. 04:56:345 (4,5) - Ctrl+R
20. 05:03:665 (1) - 刪除NC 很大的錯誤!
21. 05:32:225 (7) - 改成帶finish的note吧
    
    
    務必要閱讀~!

    紅色:是我覺得unrankable的 藍色:建議 但個人認為要改的 黑色:就單純建議

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你還真喜歡OWl City呢 ^^ 找不到什麼大問題lol
Star~ Good luck :3

路過

bossandy wrote:

拜託!!! "Ocean Eyes" 應該是在Source吧 不是在Tags裡...

Album Title doesn't belong in "Source" field, and other tips

Check this thread

Hi, from my queue

nice map, star

OTL

1. 作为APP太过简单
2. 01:31:745 (7) - whistle
3. 01:43:265 (5) - ^
4. 01:43:745 (1) - 没和前面的滑条叠好
5. 01:47:105 (7) - ^
6. 02:02:225 (6,7) - ^
7. 02:13:745 (2,3,4) - ctrl+r
8. 03:45:665 (1,2,1,2) - 上面这里NC错位了吧...
9. 03:59:105 (1) - 没和前面的滑条叠好?
10. 03:51:425 (1) - whistle
11. 04:23:345 (1,2,3) - 这里的3连, 间距逐渐减小, 然后逐渐增大, 如何
12. 05:32:225 (1) - 再加几条绿线渐弱

Good luck~

Thanks to all!
I'm afraid that I couldn't list all of my changes, sorry about that. However, I've read all of your modding carefully. And to make sure, I kudosu'd all of you~
Even though, I have to explain something about "why I do/do not changed" here:
Also thanks for other modders!! Fixed some and updated for now.

Sorry map is too good.
Approach 8 will be good.

Hi there mod for request~

Skin:

1. 因为skin要求成套的使用，所以如果你添加了follow circle的话，那么应该把followball也做上。
2. Approach circle在实际测试的时候感觉并不好，可能因为太宽了导致有些影响读图，可以的话最好弄细一点。

General:

1. 我真的不认为在前面留出长达1分24秒，占了整个曲子长度近1/4的前奏是个好的选择……强烈建议剪曲，个人感觉01:09:905 - 之前的部分完全可以剪掉。
2. 感觉offset在-10到-15ms，试试调一下吧……
3. 考虑加个静音的sliderslide？

Goodbye:

1. 02:06:785 - 从开始有note开始到这里感觉音乐本身的音量至少提高了一半，所以建议把初始的hitsounds音量再压低一点，然后这一段的音量提升做到和音乐同步，效果会感觉更好一点吧？否则随着音量的提升，在开始时很清晰的hitsounds变得越来越不明显了感觉有点别扭。
2. 02:37:265 (4,1) - 跳的再大一点？
3. 02:39:185 (4,1) - 同上，(1)我觉得放到256:108会比较好
4. 02:40:985 (6) - 考虑删掉？
5. 02:43:745 (3) - 向后挪动一格到蓝线并且和(4)叠到一起去？
6. 02:56:585 (8) - 考虑删掉？
7. 03:05:825 (3,4) - 把whistle放到(4)上？
8. 03:21:185 (3,4) - 同上
9. 03:46:025 - 加个note和(1)叠上？
10. 03:47:825 (2) - 向后挪到蓝线并且和后面(3)叠？
11. 03:49:865 - 加note
12. 04:07:265 (3,4) - whistle放到(4)
13. 04:19:265 (4) - 下一组nc从这里开始？
14. 04:23:105 (4) - 同上
15. 04:51:665 (4) - 头部加个whistle?
16. 04:55:505 (4) - 加whistle?
17. 04:59:345 (7) - 同上
18. 05:06:785 (3,4) - whistle放(4)

ok就这些了～～～加油的说～

路过 支持 顶

❤ 好吧既然是app的我就尽我能力mod吧

这难度名称怎么是拜拜。。。明明是hello啊。。。

这前面不map。。。。。好长啊

01:46:625 (5,6) - 这两个我觉得都变成二连会比较带感
02:52:385 (3) - 这个不要CtrlR一下么。。。
02:53:825 (1) - 这个更是。。。
03:25:505 (1,2) - 这样好看嘛？http://puu.sh/ihNa
03:27:425 (1) - 如果照我上面的改了的话这个要移动一下了否则会有overlap，后面的3也要对称好
04:38:465 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 这一大串虽然很文艺但是我觉得可玩性不高。。。

hitsound 里面就不喜欢哨子。。。。
完全对称 OvO 给你星星好了

這個skin... 很瞎眼 star

Heeeeey

Beautiful map, would love to see this approved <333

From #Modreq
[Goodbye]
這難度名...呃
HP drain+1, AR-1
01:24:545,01:27:425,01:27:905 - 這幾條線聲量用30~40就可以,不然太吵了
01:25:265 (3) - whistle
01:31:745 (3) - ^
01:32:945 (3) - ^
01:36:785 (3) - ^
02:09:185 (1) - Delete NC
02:13:505 (1) - ^
02:14:465 (6) - NC
02:15:185 (8) - 這個這樣放很難按到...'
02:31:265 (4) - 1 grid left
02:52:265 (2) - Delete這個note吧...
02:54:185 (2) - ^
03:51:905 (3) - Whistle
04:38:465 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 呃很難按,,,

Good luck~

01:43:265 (5) - spacing，下来一点比较好
02:26:945 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 说句实话，这个打起来很蛋疼
02:31:025 (2,3,4) - 歪的
03:03:425 (1) - 和后面的换NC？这里NC怪怪的
05:13:985 (1) - 这里开始怎么也不跟前面换个方向啥的


hmm 怎么说呢有些地方的spacing变换的有点出乎意料:)没啥依据的感觉

就是有种纯粹为了迁就造型梗的做法啦:D不过问题不大

我又偷懒了，在神mapper的帖里偷偷懒无所谓的吧哈哈哈【远目

Fixed some and uploaded, thanks for your modding and helping!

Hi ~ Mod request from 2kd.

Just suggestions:

[General]

深蓝色、紫色和背景略接近。。考虑改浅一些？

[Goodbye]

02:38:465 (1,2,3,4) - 距离拉大一些？
03:51:425 (1,2,3) - 顺时针转120°?
04:08:345 (4,5,1) - 这个距离有点坑。。可以把(2,3)和(4,5)拉进一些？
04:34:865 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这6段全换个角度？这样 http://puu.sh/sxFM
05:14:945 (1) - ctrl+h一下？
05:32:345 (1) - 这个转盘太长了吧。。(改成5个转盘？

NC: (这都无关紧要)
01:27:425 (1) - NC?
01:35:105 (1) - ^
03:08:225 (6) - ^
03:14:945 (5) - ^
03:18:785 (2) - ^
03:24:545 (2) - ^

02:09:185 (1) - Remove NC?
04:42:785 (1) - ^

That's all I can find. GL~

As your request.

[Goodbye]
03:45:065 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - The combo scheme here is kind of inconsistent.
03:54:785 (3) - This kind of ruins the symmetry of the combo. What about changing the pattern to this?
04:08:705 (1) - This anti-jump might get confusing. Perhaps you can change the combo to this?
04:31:025 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This part is great! Very fun.
04:34:865 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same as above.
04:50:945 (1,2,3,4) - These sliders seem out of place and don't fit the song at this part - unlike 03:12:065 (1,2,3).
04:56:705 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above.

That's all. Good map

Edit:
Bubble # 1 after some more discussion on IRC.

Thank you very much~

　Nuked for fake guest diff.

I think this will no longer go for APP due to today's rule changes
oops

Maps like these that have been bubbled prior to the rule change can still go for Approval.

Yo

[Goodbye]
AR -1
Tick rate 2

02:16:745 (2,3) - Move these down and right one grid to adjust for stacking.
03:23:585 (1) - Considering the recent changes regarding squished sliders like this, you may want to smooth this out a bit more.

Nice. Nice.

Edit:

Rebubbled. Have to pop since the tick rate was changed, sorry.

Bubble #1!

spboxer3 wrote:

Insane

• 
  Settings
  (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  

1. 02:11:585 - 看你吧 我認為break可以結束在這
2. 04:45:185 - 如果上面的改了 我認為這個應該也要改人家跟你打招呼打一半你就开始打图了 人家多伤心T^T

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)

1. 01:27:665 - 這個tick出現的不適合... 把這個靜音了吧好吧
2. 03:42:785 (1) - 這兩個tick靜音了吧 不適合阿这个确实静音好很多

mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. 02:16:385 (1,2) - 偏移了? 如果是故意的我會認為02:16:385 (1) - 往左移動一格比較好(size 4)嘉文老兄刚刚叫我这么做的 打图的时候好看很多 虽然这里看怪怪的
2. 02:42:305 (1,1) - 被spinner完後的文字蓋住了 這樣會讓player難以看到有点道理
3. 02:51:905 (1,2,3) - 我一直覺得這種的jump不合flow 建議reverse 當然 這只是我的看法 你要不要做要跟我說一下
4. 02:53:825 (1,2,3) - 03:19:745 (1,2,3) - 等等的都是还是不要了 故意的
5. 04:07:745 (1,2,3) - 我從間距上看不太出來節奏. 建議想辦法把04:07:745 (1) - 向右移動些 如果你改了這個 勢必的04:08:945 (2,3) - 也應該把距離加大些 因為你是用04:07:745 (1) -轉180∘的.恩...其实这里改了很多次了都没法令人满意 一个人说好 另外一个人又说不好了...姑且是拉开了点
   另外04:09:665 (1) - 和04:10:385 (4,5,1) - 也根据这个note进行了调整 你说的那几个note是上下对称 我这图主要左右对称 所以那几个反而不用改

Thanks a lot~

謝謝謝謝╮(￣▽￣")╭

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

所以说怎么不把难度名改成Hello

你辦完事以后還說hello? 之所以寫goodbye就是打圖打到fail直接滾蛋了(slap

why WIP

Some stuff before approving :

02:28:865- It would be better ıf you add whistle
02:32:705- ^
02:36:545- ^
03:05:825- ^ ?
03:21:185- whistle, but u should remove whistle > 03:21:425-
04:47:105- ^
04:50:945 (1,2)- whistle beginning
04:54:785- ^
05:06:305- whistle, im sure

I want to give star
Nice map and song
More Owl City maps !!

Thanks. I'll see if there are any necessities before approving.

we added one tag and fixed spacing in one place.

Approved!

Hello Seattle, I'm approved, you're a worm (?

Why worm? I don't get it... D:
Thanks a lot Aleks!!

Gratz JPY >w</

欧耶~终于app了~恭喜恭喜~

好!

App map,
I should have a try.

ITGOTAPPROVED,YESS !♥♥

At first i was like "eeeh" but after some plays i really got into it (:
Congratz!

Great work on this, JPY. Congratulations on the approval.