Guest
home
beatmaps
rankings
community
store
help
forum
  1. Forums
  2. Beatmaps
  3. Ranked Beatmaps (Archived)
  4. Beatmap Graveyard

YUI - tomorrow's way

posted
Total Posts
57
Saya-Honmei_old
Topic Starter
Saya-Honmei_old
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年3月30日 at 下午 01:22:44

Artist: YUI
Title: tomorrow's way
Tags: ertyukjh010 Saya's song Saya no Uta MAD
BPM: 160
Filesize: 19820kb
Play Time: 02:02
Difficulties Available:
  1. ERT's Normal (2.92 stars, 142 notes)
  2. Hard (4.63 stars, 227 notes)
  3. Saya (4.97 stars, 327 notes)
Download: YUI - tomorrow's way
Download: YUI - tomorrow's way (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
"これは 始まり" My 1st Map.
沙耶の唄 END2のMAD - ふたりだけの譚詩曲 "それは世界を侵す恋"
YUI - Tomorrow's way

ERT's Normal - Done by ertyukjh010
Hard - Done
Saya - Done
Last edited by Saya-Honmei_old , edited 40 times in total.
-Yukionna-
7 posts
Joined April 2011
-Yukionna-
魂淡~~你要的星~
Awu_old_1
7 posts
Joined July 2010
Awu_old_1
船长- -,沙耶啊..
Uan
Former osu! Champion: OWC#1
176 posts
Joined August 2009
Uan
Good map~:P
S.T.A.R!!
Evil_Twilight
587 posts
Joined July 2010
Evil_Twilight
求hard diff >_<

我覺得kiai time放 01:23:440 到 0.:50:065就好
bakabaka
517 posts
Joined March 2010
bakabaka
Star :3~
Saya-Honmei_old
Topic Starter
Saya-Honmei_old

Evil_Twilight wrote:

求hard diff >_<

我覺得kiai time放 01:23:440 到 0.:50:065就好

恩 照你的建議做了~!

有人想做難度是俺的榮幸XD 交給你了>_>!
Evil_Twilight
587 posts
Joined July 2010
Evil_Twilight
完成
雖然有點不太滿意Q.Q

Download: YUI - tomorrow's way (Saya-Honmei) [E_T's Hard].osu
Saya-Honmei_old
Topic Starter
Saya-Honmei_old

Evil_Twilight wrote:

完成
雖然有點不太滿意Q.Q


.....好快 上個班就出現了XD
Lunatic
4 posts
Joined March 2011
Lunatic
好图！
YY10000
17 posts
Joined October 2010
YY10000
魂淡你敢放BG出来么>_>
没妹子玩毛OSU啊
恩。。NOTE还是蛮舒服的
lorvd
26 posts
Joined March 2010
lorvd
哼
[Loli]Dark
14 posts
Joined April 2010
[Loli]Dark
先給你星再說=W=
xiaoli1429
4 posts
Joined November 2010
xiaoli1429
还可以吧-w-
Saya-Honmei_old
Topic Starter
Saya-Honmei_old

YY10000 wrote:

魂淡你敢放BG出来么>_>
没妹子玩毛OSU啊
恩。。NOTE还是蛮舒服的

呃 重傳了 現在BG大概能顯示了 >_>...
Coo_Gumi
3 posts
Joined April 2011
Coo_Gumi
:)
whl1991
2 posts
Joined February 2011
whl1991
支持船长大人:D
Saya-Honmei_old
Topic Starter
Saya-Honmei_old

whl1991 wrote:

支持船长大人:D

誰? (炸
Ibuki Fuuko
2 posts
Joined February 2011
Ibuki Fuuko
star之=w=
ReviveFullHP
12 posts
Joined January 2011
ReviveFullHP
我是来给星星的
iceey-o-
13 posts
Joined January 2010
iceey-o-
星星一个星~~~加油~
deatbird80
1 post
Joined June 2010
deatbird80
clannad阿~~~~~~~~ 俺認識你這麼久了 你做的圖 俺當然要給你很多
star~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

everybody this map is great!!

繼續加油!!!! 俺期待你很多張圖嘿!!!!!!!!!!!!! >ˇ<
abc81825
abc81825
給個星星而已
算了反正星星也不能吃，就施捨給妳吧，不用感謝我了
人...家才不會給你星星什麼的
Last edited by abc81825 , edited 1 time in total.
osuAyyy
4 posts
Joined January 2011
osuAyyy
yoooo
soulfear
947 posts
Joined January 2010
soulfear
:)
Metallugy
5 posts
Joined April 2010
Metallugy
建議在+個normal難度
Saya-Honmei_old
Topic Starter
Saya-Honmei_old

Metallugy wrote:

建議在+個normal難度

恩 介紹中有寫 Normal難度0% XD.... (還沒動工) 等星星稍為多點再做 看有沒有人想做N難度
FenaSFF
2 posts
Joined May 2011
FenaSFF
给星星~~~~~好图
asdfgedc456
1 post
Joined February 2011
asdfgedc456
星星～ 8-)
sell an apple
19 posts
Joined April 2011
sell an apple
好图~好歌~真心喜欢 :)
给星星啦~~~
【凑字数凑字数凑字数凑字数XDD】
S h i o n
1,053 posts
Joined July 2010
S h i o n
nice song

:)
- TZU -
9 posts
Joined July 2011
- TZU -
http://puu.sh/a544
幫你做了ＳＢ　只有圖　沒有字幕
把他放進Songs就可以了吧 ;3
不行再找我ＸＤ
ertyukjh010
1,415 posts
Joined December 2009
ertyukjh010
GD來了

記得別忘了在所有難度的TAG加上我ID =3=

Download: YUI - tomorrow's way (Saya-Honmei) [ERT's Normal].osu
Saya-Honmei_old
Topic Starter
Saya-Honmei_old

Evil_Twilight wrote:

完成
雖然有點不太滿意Q.Q

這圖閒置太久 現在再開lol 先把你的難度撤掉QAQ" 因為我也有點不滿意(炸
看你要不要改一下或重作-..-"
Saya-Honmei_old
Topic Starter
Saya-Honmei_old

Aki_Zombies wrote:

http://puu.sh/a544
幫你做了ＳＢ　只有圖　沒有字幕
把他放進Songs就可以了吧 ;3
不行再找我ＸＤ

*.*...無視掉了 ,這影片可是這首歌的靈魂阿
ertyukjh010
1,415 posts
Joined December 2009
ertyukjh010
Saya 的 Hard 還沒做完=3=

而且AR和OD您都調太高了= =（果然觸手做圖都會這樣 :)

還有TAG呢QAQ

順帶自己難度做1次修正：

Download: YUI - tomorrow's way (Saya-Honmei) [ERT's Normal].osu
Saya-Honmei_old
Topic Starter
Saya-Honmei_old

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Saya 的 Hard 還沒做完=3=

而且AR和OD您都調太高了= =（果然觸手做圖都會這樣 :)

還有TAG呢QAQ

順帶自己難度做1次修正：

OKOK

Hard OD6 AR8剛好吧=口=?
spboxer3
Global Moderator
3,616 posts
Joined November 2009
spboxer3

[general]

  1. 歌曲不能用320kbps的 最高192kbps
  2. Preview Time需要一致
  3. Source 需要一致
  4. Combo顏色最好一致
  5. kiai time最好一致

[ERT's Normal]

  1. 00:15:940 (2) - 圖形壞了
  2. 00:24:940 (3) - 彎好些
  3. 00:57:940 (2) - clap and reclap for(4)
  4. 01:17:440 (1,2,3,4,1) - 間距不平均

[Hard]

  1. 00:46:877 (4,5,1) - 讓(1)在(4,5)的正中間吧
  2. 01:05:440 (1) - 這種圖形最好彎好一些 現在這樣太不明顯了

[Saya]

  1. 未用到的綠線:
    01:22:315 -

  2. 00:50:252 (1,2,3,4) - 沒有平行
  3. 01:22:502 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 這弧度最好調整下
  4. 01:39:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
  5. 01:54:565 (2,3,4) - 不平均間距


紅色是unrankable的 一定要改 藍色的是需要討論的問題 黑色就只是建議

ok 結束了~

good luck~
Saya-Honmei_old
Topic Starter
Saya-Honmei_old

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Saya 的 Hard 還沒做完=3=

而且AR和OD您都調太高了= =（果然觸手做圖都會這樣 :)

還有TAG呢QAQ

順帶自己難度做1次修正：
忘記之前音檔是用320k 換成192k off些微差異 擅自幫你改off&對齊綠線了:P 還有麻煩重新下載lol...
Saya-Honmei_old
Topic Starter
Saya-Honmei_old

spboxer3 wrote:

[general]

  1. 歌曲不能用320kbps的 最高192kbps
  2. Preview Time需要一致
  3. Source 需要一致
  4. Combo顏色最好一致
  5. kiai time最好一致

[ERT's Normal]

  1. 00:15:940 (2) - 圖形壞了
  2. 00:24:940 (3) - 彎好些
  3. 00:57:940 (2) - clap and reclap for(4)
  4. 01:17:440 (1,2,3,4,1) - 間距不平均

[Hard]

  1. 00:46:877 (4,5,1) - 讓(1)在(4,5)的正中間吧
  2. 01:05:440 (1) - 這種圖形最好彎好一些 現在這樣太不明顯了

[Saya]

  1. 未用到的綠線:
    01:22:315 -

  2. 00:50:252 (1,2,3,4) - 沒有平行
  3. 01:22:502 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 這弧度最好調整下
  4. 01:39:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
  5. 01:54:565 (2,3,4) - 不平均間距


紅色是unrankable的 一定要改 藍色的是需要討論的問題 黑色就只是建議

ok 結束了~

good luck~
Saya & Hard的建議全部採用 :)
ertyukjh010
1,415 posts
Joined December 2009
ertyukjh010

spboxer3 wrote:

[ERT's Normal]

  1. 00:15:940 (2) - 圖形壞了 我覺得還好0.0
  2. 00:24:940 (3) - 彎好些 這個好一點吧→http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/217139
  3. 00:57:940 (2) - clap and reclap for(4) 好難聽= =您確定沒寫錯0.0?
  4. 01:17:440 (1,2,3,4,1) - 間距不平均
Done
謝謝您的Mod :)

Download: YUI - tomorrow's way (Saya-Honmei) [ERT's Normal].osu
bakabaka
517 posts
Joined March 2010
bakabaka
[general]
offset : 6980 [6994 (-14)]


(下面的時間點是沒改過offset的)

[Saya]
00:12:056 - 這個slider讓他有弧度一點吧 , http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/218214
00:27:619 - whistle
00:27:994 - 刪whistle
00:33:994 - ^
00:34:369 - whistle
01:18:994 - 取消nc 改到 01:18:619 - nc ?
01:27:806 - 這個slider感覺折返太多次的 , 大概三連擊就比較好了
01:46:369 - ^ , 感覺五連擊就夠了

[Hard]
00:27:994 - 刪whistle
00:28:369 - whistle?
00:33:619 - whistle
00:33:994 - 刪whistle

[ERT's Normal]
01:00:994- 刪finish
01:02:494 -finish

nice song :3
Saya-Honmei_old
Topic Starter
Saya-Honmei_old

bakabaka wrote:

[general]
offset : 6980 [6994 (-14)]


(下面的時間點是沒改過offset的)

[Saya]
00:12:056 - 這個slider讓他有弧度一點吧 , http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/218214
00:27:619 - whistle
00:27:994 - 刪whistle
00:33:994 - ^
00:34:369 - whistle
01:18:994 - 取消nc 改到 01:18:619 - nc ?
01:27:806 - 這個slider感覺折返太多次的 , 大概三連擊就比較好了
01:46:369 - ^ , 感覺五連擊就夠了

[Hard]
00:27:994 - 刪whistle
00:28:369 - whistle?
00:33:619 - whistle
00:33:994 - 刪whistle

nice song :3
建議全採用:D 另外ERT難度再次擅自修改OFF&對齊綠線O_O
ertyukjh010
1,415 posts
Joined December 2009
ertyukjh010

bakabaka wrote:

[ERT's Normal]
01:00:994- 刪finish =w=b
01:02:494 -finish =w=b
謝謝MOD :)

Download: YUI - tomorrow's way (Saya-Honmei) [ERT's Normal].osu
LunarSakuya
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
LunarSakuya
About the source...我以为这是从一个 日本drama 叫 Hinokio xD
safawu
61 posts
Joined September 2009
safawu
被ert拉来的...
不懂mod._.随便写点当参考吧...

[Saya]
01:24:605 (5) - 弧度再大一点,和前后相比这个有点过于平坦了
01:27:417 (1) - 为啥这里要NC 0.0
01:53:105 (6) - 间距

[Hard]
00:14:105 (2) - NC放到这?
01:23:480 (1) - slider是故意做成不对称的吗?
01:26:480 (1,2,3) - 这三个slider换种对称整齐的排列方式可能更美观一点
01:39:980 (5) - 弧偏左歪了,骨架中间那个点往右移一格(264,48)
01:53:480 (1) - 同上,最上面那个点往右移一格


[ERT's Normal]
01:11:855 (2,3) - 以斜45度角作为对称轴的话,这两个slider不对称,如果是渐进斜向上的话就不用改了(slider太短建议改对称美观)

发现很多地方(尤其是slider)二分拍叠了好多,个人觉得还是拆开比较好,否则会给人偷懒的感觉的说...
NC的标法感觉有点奇怪?..这个我也不怎么懂...无视我吧

真心很不错的图,没什么大问题,赞一个
想给星,ERT硬不让给...你就怪他去吧XD
ertyukjh010
1,415 posts
Joined December 2009
ertyukjh010
謝謝safawu :)

Download: YUI - tomorrow's way (Saya-Honmei) [ERT's Normal].osu
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
Hi, from my queue

requested by ERT

I like saya no uta too~ it's one of the two GALs I've ever played


Tags

  1. 加上saya's song
ERT's Normal

  1. 00:11:480 (2) - 第三个点 2 grids left
  2. 00:24:980 (3) - 第二个点移到(120,32) 第三个点往下一格
  3. 01:07:730 (4) - clap
  4. 01:10:730 (4) - 头上clap
  5. 01:26:480 (1) - 第三个点移到(456,280)
  6. 01:34:730 (4) - 这个滑条最后一个点重新摆下
Hard

  1. 00:11:480 (3,4,5) - 这样? http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot039-13.jpg
  2. 00:20:480 (1) - 开始 00:20:105?
  3. 00:42:792 (3) - 移到 (448,168) 做成三角形如何
  4. 01:01:917 (5) - 滑条一个reverse, 01:02:292 - 这里加个圈
  5. 01:51:792 (3) - 1 grid up?
Saya

  1. 00:47:105 (7) - 这个clap去掉
  2. 01:00:980 (1) - 中间的点往右上半格
  3. 01:01:355 (2) - 用(1)复制, 然后按ctrl+R
  4. 01:01:730 (3) - 用(2)复制, 然后按ctrl+H ctrl+J
  5. 01:37:355 (6) - 这个滑条摆成和(5)的approach circle平行, 比较好看
  6. 01:59:105 (5,1) - whistle移到(1)上
  7. 02:06:980 (1) - 这个note用30% volume
  8. 02:07:355 (2) - 这个20%
  9. 02:07:730 (3) - 这个25%
Good luck~
ertyukjh010
1,415 posts
Joined December 2009
ertyukjh010

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Hi, from my queue

ERT's Normal

  1. 00:11:480 (2) - 第三个点 2 grids left Done
  2. 00:24:980 (3) - 第二个点移到(120,32) 第三个点往下一格 Done
  3. 01:07:730 (4) - clap Done
  4. 01:10:730 (4) - 头上clap Done
  5. 01:26:480 (1) - 第三个点移到(456,280) 座標您寫第1點了
  6. 01:34:730 (4) - 这个滑条最后一个点重新摆下 這樣都給您看到++
謝謝MOD，我趕快拉Saya回來給KD（炸

Download: YUI - tomorrow's way (Saya-Honmei) [ERT's Normal].osu
Saya-Honmei_old
Topic Starter
Saya-Honmei_old
以上的兩位mod 已做出修改 :) :)
ax_pokl
ax_pokl
[General]
好图
颜色调深一点，背景视频颜色又花又淡。
[Saya]
00:58:917 (2,3,4,5) - 这个太吓人了，稍微近一点。
[Normal]
Circle size一定要+1
[Hard]
这个难度和Saya差不多么？


无力吐槽。

From ax_pokl's modding Queue
Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Nymph
喵T_T 还债..

General:
VIDEO画质惨到一定地步了 源画质也这么差么

Normal难度的source不一致 Uta没大写u

……source我觉得不能这么写 Saya no Uta MAD不算source的吧 放进TAG应该更合适 我CLANNAD和狼与香辛料的MAD都不能写它们2个进SOURCE SOURCE要求是MP3的source.


ERT's Normal:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:07:730 (1,2,3) - 这样放节奏真的好么 00:11:480 (2)的节奏同样放到这里来应该更适合
01:30:605 (2) - 这里空着不是很舒服 你看看这么下节奏如何
01:42:605 (2,3) - 我个人是建议normal最好不要下这样的节奏 slider直接白线起也没什么不好

Hitsound
01:14:480 (1) - 这为什么会有个whistle呢 很突然的
01:19:730 (3) - 这也是 一直用clap突然出2个whistle 满违和的（到这发现后面也有用了whistle 我个人感觉太零散的whistle不如不加 不过这个就见仁见智了 所以后面我就不发表意见啦


Hard:
Issue
AR8? AR7就可以了 8也特高了 对于这样的hard

Beatmap design/suggestion
01:08:480 (3) - 这减速太突然了 加个new combo帮助别人读这里吧
恩啊 挺好的


Saya:
感觉没啥好挑的 除了个别连打我觉得有点太勉强了 不过都playable吧


挺好的了 赶紧弄完了上吧
ertyukjh010
1,415 posts
Joined December 2009
ertyukjh010

Nymph wrote:

ERT's Normal:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:07:730 (1,2,3) - 这样放节奏真的好么 00:11:480 (2)的节奏同样放到这里来应该更适合
01:30:605 (2) - 这里空着不是很舒服 你看看这么下节奏如何ATTACH[-1.jpg]
01:42:605 (2,3) - 我个人是建议normal最好不要下这样的节奏 slider直接白线起也没什么不好 也還好吧，只出現了1次:P

Hitsound
01:14:480 (1) - 这为什么会有个whistle呢 很突然的
01:19:730 (3) - 这也是 一直用clap突然出2个whistle 满违和的（到这发现后面也有用了whistle 我个人感觉太零散的whistle不如不加 不过这个就见仁见智了 所以后面我就不发表意见啦 暫時先保留，我改天再重新看看所有whistle（我發現whistle的放置沒有規律= =
其他都改好，謝謝MOD

Download: YUI - tomorrow's way (Saya-Honmei) [ERT's Normal].osu
Saya-Honmei_old
Topic Starter
Saya-Honmei_old

Nymph wrote:

喵T_T 还债..

General:
VIDEO画质惨到一定地步了 源画质也这么差么

Normal难度的source不一致 Uta没大写u

……source我觉得不能这么写 Saya no Uta MAD不算source的吧 放进TAG应该更合适 我CLANNAD和狼与香辛料的MAD都不能写它们2个进SOURCE SOURCE要求是MP3的source.


Hard:
Issue
AR8? AR7就可以了 8也特高了 对于这样的hard

Beatmap design/suggestion
01:08:480 (3) - 这减速太突然了 加个new combo帮助别人读这里吧
恩啊 挺好的


Saya:
感觉没啥好挑的 除了个别连打我觉得有点太勉强了 不过都playable吧


挺好的了 赶紧弄完了上吧
影片檔重傳了~ 檔案多了4.2M @@~ 不過畫質大大提升 YA~多謝ww

Source的問題也修正了~ :)
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
[General]
- inconsistancy in tag
- I suppose [Saya] and [Hard] is mapped by same mapper so the kiai can be in unique.
- BG should has larger resolution, at least 800x600
- why not starting last kiai 01:47:480 - but 1/4 eariler <_<

[Saya]
00:18:980 (7,8) - I prefer no whistle here
00:21:917 - Feeling that the spinner ends here with the musical sound (1/6 tick), remove break
00:24:980 (4,5,6) - spacing ._.
00:33:605 (4) - remove whistle at beginning as well, this emphasizes the coming whistle-clap melody changes
01:08:105 (2,1) - remove whistle at (2) and beginning of (1)
01:17:292 (1,2,3,4) - Confusing placement, the spacing should proportional to time

1/2 spacing 穩定的時候就得穩定 00:59:855 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這樣就死定了 還有hitsound好像有點亂 kiai time該finish地方沒finish 沒finish的倒finish orz (歌曲的finish位置挺明顯的) 不過whistle用的不錯

[Hard]
00:21:917 - same as [Saya]
00:45:980 (3) - remove whistle at the beginning since it's a empty tick in the music
01:17:855 (2) - [Nazi] up 1 grid to make it symmetrical

如果結他有幾拍空掉的話不要下hitsound D:

[Normal]
AR, OD+1~2
不用大點的圈會死麼lol這是normal
01:34:730 (4) - sounds toooooo difficult for newbies as this is the easiest diff in this mapset

無力吐嘈 直接用大點的圈再做易一點啊

Hard is quite good ><
ertyukjh010
1,415 posts
Joined December 2009
ertyukjh010

wmfchris wrote:

[Normal]
AR, OD+1~2 Done
不用大點的圈會死麼lol這是normal 別吐糟大小=3=難度都已經是Easy級
01:34:730 (4) - sounds toooooo difficult for newbies as this is the easiest diff in this mapset 減少了1個折返
謝謝modding

Download: YUI - tomorrow's way (Saya-Honmei) [ERT's Normal].osu
Saya-Honmei_old
Topic Starter
Saya-Honmei_old

wmfchris wrote:

[General]
- inconsistancy in tag OK了
- I suppose [Saya] and [Hard] is mapped by same mapper so the kiai can be in unique. D:???
- BG should has larger resolution, at least 800x600 OK了
- why not starting last kiai 01:47:480 - but 1/4 eariler <_< Orz...英文不好 估狗翻譯出來好怪 是叫我吧kiai調到01:47:480結束嗎@_@?
[Saya]
00:18:980 (7,8) - I prefer no whistle here ok
00:21:917 - Feeling that the spinner ends here with the musical sound (1/6 tick), remove break ok
00:24:980 (4,5,6) - spacing ._. 看不出來怎麼了orz...
00:33:605 (4) - remove whistle at beginning as well, this emphasizes the coming whistle-clap melody changes ok
01:08:105 (2,1) - remove whistle at (2) and beginning of (1) ok
01:17:292 (1,2,3,4) - Confusing placement, the spacing should proportional to time 不知道要改到哪...總覺得打起來不會不順阿><...

1/2 spacing 穩定的時候就得穩定 00:59:855 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這樣就死定了 改成1.0間距了 還有hitsound好像有點亂 kiai time該finish地方沒finish 沒finish的倒finish orz (歌曲的finish位置挺明顯的) D:....聽不出來TUT... 不過whistle用的不錯

[Hard]
00:21:917 - same as [Saya] ok
00:45:980 (3) - remove whistle at the beginning since it's a empty tick in the music ok
01:17:855 (2) - [Nazi] up 1 grid to make it symmetrical ok

如果結他有幾拍空掉的話不要下hitsound D:
Hard is quite good ><
感謝mod :D
Please sign in to reply.

New reply

0
1 / 57