1. Setting difficultinya kurang pas. Jadiin gni deh : HP Drain = 4, AR=5, OD=4
2. 00:32:808 (3) - Mending jangan di stack deh. Kurang bagus liatnya. Terus dipasin juga g bisa.
3. 00:34:703 (3) - Kalo ngikutin saran di atas, mending ini juga jangan di stack.
4. 00:41:808 (1) - Kasih finish disini, soalnya pembukaan irama baru.
5. 00:45:755 (5) - Circle ini g masuk vokal. Coba pindahin ke 00:45:913. Terus kalo bisa jangan di stack jg :3
6. 00:47:176 (2) - Ini bisa disejajarin dengan 1. Pindahin deh startpointnya ke x:336 y:128 terus endpointnya ke x:404 y:192. Jangan lupa fix spacing dengan 3.
7. 00:48:440 (4) - Ini dibuat stack dengan 1 aja biar lebih bagus patternya. Fix spacing dengan 5 kalo ngikutin ini.
8. 00:59:334 (4) - Ini juga sebaiknya g usah di stack >.<
9. 01:07:861 (3) - Hapus clap dari sini, terus tambahin clap di endpoint slider ini 01:07:071 (2) - biar lebih konsisten.
10. 01:13:071 (5) - Circle ini juga off vocal. Pindahin ke 01:12:913. Jangan lupa perbaiki spacingnya.
11. 01:14:492 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Well, apa ini g kesusahan buat diff normal? Miya aja harus pake 2 jari buat ngikutin iramanya.
12. 01:17:019 (1,2,3,4) - Ini juga, mending disederhanain jadi 2 repeat slider gtu.
13. 01:24:755 (1,2) - Linear slider agak g enak diliat. Kenapa g dibuat spinner aja kayak yang di easy?

atk1992 wrote:

My mod

SPOILER

[Ota's Hard]
00:02:651 (5) - it seems unnecessary, del it,add a note at 00:03:282 or change 00:02:493 (4) to a slider end at 00:03:282
00:05:177 (5) - same as before
00:12:756 (5) - umm....
00:41:335 (5) - distance?
00:48:756 (5) - distance...
01:08:966 (8) - dis...oh,im not sure but is he do this distance on purpose?
01:26:019 (2) - begin at 01:25:861
01:28:545 (2) - move it to 01:28:387

this diff need some more mods i think

atk1992 wrote:

My mod

SPOILER

[General]
I love this song and TALS OF series,RANK it plz!

[EASY]
00:21:598 - move the green line at 00:21:698 to here or another place ok
01:08:019 - how about add a note here? ok

fine diff

[NORMAL]
00:18:124 (3) - cancel whistle-hittsound on the slider (and same misses in so other places as 00:43:387 (3),00:44:334 (4)) ok
00:32:808 (3) - hide it perfectly seems better no, I move it other place
01:24:755 (1) - try to turn the slider at 01:25:782 to follow the music? ok
01:27:282 (2) - as the same, turn it at 01:28:387 this part longer than before, I make repeat at 01:28:545

nice rhythm .but maybe a little difficult as a Normal-diff

[Ota's Hard]
00:02:651 (5) - it seems unnecessary, del it,add a note at 00:03:282 or change 00:02:493 (4) to a slider end at 00:03:282
00:05:177 (5) - same as before
00:12:756 (5) - umm....
00:41:335 (5) - distance?
00:48:756 (5) - distance...
01:08:966 (8) - dis...oh,im not sure but is he do this distance on purpose?
01:26:019 (2) - begin at 01:25:861
01:28:545 (2) - move it to 01:28:387

this diff need some more mods i think

[taiko]
sorry i cant mod taiko

that it, Good luck!

Miya wrote:

Mod request for new normal diff

Normal

1. Setting difficultinya kurang pas. Jadiin gni deh : HP Drain = 4, AR=5, OD=4 ok
2. 00:32:808 (3) - Mending jangan di stack deh. Kurang bagus liatnya. Terus dipasin juga g bisa. ok
3. 00:34:703 (3) - Kalo ngikutin saran di atas, mending ini juga jangan di stack. yang ini spacingnya lebih deket, jadi di-stack
4. 00:41:808 (1) - Kasih finish disini, soalnya pembukaan irama baru. aneh dengernya
5. 00:45:755 (5) - Circle ini g masuk vokal. Coba pindahin ke 00:45:913. Terus kalo bisa jangan di stack jg :3 part ini ngikutin gitar
6. 00:47:176 (2) - Ini bisa disejajarin dengan 1. Pindahin deh startpointnya ke x:336 y:128 terus endpointnya ke x:404 y:192. Jangan lupa fix spacing dengan 3. ok
7. 00:48:440 (4) - Ini dibuat stack dengan 1 aja biar lebih bagus patternya. Fix spacing dengan 5 kalo ngikutin ini. ok
8. 00:59:334 (4) - Ini juga sebaiknya g usah di stack >.< ok
9. 01:07:861 (3) - Hapus clap dari sini, terus tambahin clap di endpoint slider ini 01:07:071 (2) - biar lebih konsisten. ok
10. 01:13:071 (5) - Circle ini juga off vocal. Pindahin ke 01:12:913. Jangan lupa perbaiki spacingnya. remake
11. 01:14:492 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Well, apa ini g kesusahan buat diff normal? Miya aja harus pake 2 jari buat ngikutin iramanya. ok
12. 01:17:019 (1,2,3,4) - Ini juga, mending disederhanain jadi 2 repeat slider gtu. remake
13. 01:24:755 (1,2) - Linear slider agak g enak diliat. Kenapa g dibuat spinner aja kayak yang di easy? biar beda, dibetulin dikit

Well, itu aja. Miya rasa masih banyak pattern yg kurang solid. Perhatiin lagi ya. >.<
Ok deh, good luck shikyu!

Miya wrote:

Ota's Hard

1. 00:04:703 (2,3,4,5) - patternya g dibuat kayak 00:02:177 (2,3,4,5) - ? lebih konsisten. Daripada stack. Ok
2. 00:15:124 (1) - new combo disini? ^
3. 00:17:651 (2) - kasih whistle disini lebih bagus dan lebih konsisten deh. ^
4. 00:32:019 - Saran miya kasih circle disini, soalnya tiba2 pindah polarity jadi biru, jadi harus dipasang penghubung satu circle disini. Letaknya stack aja lagi dengan 1. ^
5. 00:42:440 - sama kayak atas, kasih circle disini jg. ^
6. 00:48:124 (4) - kasih clap? biar lebih konsisten kata miya. ^
7. 00:49:230 (6) - slider ini ga masuk beat kata miya. Coba dipendekin sampe 00:49:703 Sebenernya kalau didenger baik-baik ada suara gitarnya :3 tapi ok~
8. 00:50:966 (1) - ini juga, pendekin 1/4 beat trus pindah ke 00:50:966 ^
9. 00:52:072 (3) - kasih finish lebih bagus. a bit noisy,tapi ok~
10. 00:52:861 (2) - ^ ini juga, tapi di endpoint aja ^
11. 01:01:072 (1) - new combo? soalnya sebelumny waktu vokalny diteken new combo jg sih. Ok
12. 01:03:282 (1) - saran new combo jg. Penekanan vokal.^

atk1992 wrote:

SPOILER

[Ota's Hard]
00:02:651 (5) - it seems unnecessary, del it,add a note at 00:03:282 or change 00:02:493 (4) to a slider end at 00:03:282 If other modder say so,I'll change
00:05:177 (5) - same as before ^
00:12:756 (5) - umm.... Sorry,when you mod it,this part isn't done yet >< shikyu really BAKA,request mod when my part isn't done yet... ._.
00:41:335 (5) - distance? ^
00:48:756 (5) - distance... ^
01:08:966 (8) - dis...oh,im not sure but is he do this distance on purpose? ^
01:26:019 (2) - begin at 01:25:861 Ok
01:28:545 (2) - move it to 01:28:387 ^

this diff need some more mods i think I think so too~:3

No_Gu wrote:

hard
00:32:019 (1) - remove NC
00:44:334 (1) - finish
00:57:598 (1) - remove NC

change tick from 0.5 to 1.
0.5 is unrankable

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue by athiota33

easy
00:57:598 (1) - remove NC ok
01:09:598 (1) - finish no, doesn't follow the music

normal
00:16:545 (2) - NC and last note remove NC ok
00:41:808 (1) - finish instead of whistle ok
00:58:861 (3) - NC ok

mercury2004 wrote:

Sorry for late ;-;
G Class Mod.

Red: Means.You are breaking beatmapping rules. You should change it immediately.
Orange: Means. My Suggestion. It is okay whether you change it or not
Purple:Means. Highly Recommend you to change it, because of Bad Game play.

General
- Folder Fine

Easy Difficulty
Overall Difficulty -2
Approach Rate -1 ok
00:03:914 (1) - Soft Whistle these spinner[/color] ok
00:15:282 (3) - Better stick to the vocal. move it here 00:15:124 . For beginner it is very hard to catch this not on time with very low background audio it hit blue tick and I've ask someone to listen, better without change
00:20:335 (2) - ............^............... move it here 00:20:177 end the slider tail here 00:21:598. reason same as above I save this later. if other modder say same thing, I'll change it
00:41:808 (4) - add note ok
01:16:545 (3) - Move this note somewhere else. 300 hit cover them up and beginner easily miss that. not really covered with 300 hit
01:27:282 (1) - Soft Whistle this spinner ok

Normal Difficulty
00:19:861 (7) - remove this note and put the spinner? end the spinner here 00:21:598 (1) -
00:36:598 (?) 00:36:755 (?) - add note here?[/color] add note at 00:36:755

Overall. I give 9.5/10. Your note placement and hitsound perfectly fit into the music. This map really deserve star. Star~


If this mod proved to be not helpful. Don't kudos

mercury2004 wrote:

Ota's Hard Difficulty
HP Drain -1
00:02:651 (5) - remove note. This note do not rhythmic with the song at all. If you really want to place it. use slider at 4 instead
00:05:177 (5) - ^
00:12:756 (5) - ^
01:19:071 Your kiai time suppose to end here. Same as normal easy and taiki difficulty

wmfchris wrote:

taiko mod as requested

OD should be 5~6

00:09:598 - dk kd ok
00:13:072 - kkd ok
00:31:703 - finish? ok

that's all. Excellent work : D
what can you do make make it even better:
- 01:14:492 - in these stream apply finishes on accent like what you've done before
- there's no need to stick 100% to the music, a bit variation is perfectly fine :3
- make a more significant difference for different emotion in the song, like 01:04:545 the beginning of kiai it's stil the chorus and the notes arrangement seems nothing special as the kiai part~ :3

8/10

1. Song folder - remove osb. file
2. Song Setup - Colours - It is not unified. Easy,Normal or Ota's Hard. unify it ?
3. Audio Lead-in - +500ms in all diff

1. 00:18:756 (3,1,2) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/aou0
2. 00:49:703 (1) - spacing too far. (1.46x)
3. 00:53:492 (2) - ^ (1.11x) x408,y104 ?
4. 00:56:966 (4) - add NC and 00:57:598 - remove NC
5. 00:57:913 (2) - I think I do not match BGM. slider end 00:58:071. or change circle 00:57:913only. ( i like circle )
6. 01:05:176 (2) - spacing too far (1.12x) 01:04:545 (1) - x256,y200 01:05:176 (2) - x328,y256
7. 01:06:755 (2,3) - ^ 2:x288,y152 3:x352,y224
8. 01:19:703 (2) - add NC

1. 00:14:019 (6) - add NC and 00:15:282 - remove NC and 00:16:545 - add NC
2. 00:19:072 (6) - add NC
3. 00:33:282 (1) - Suggestion of the rhythm and NC http://puu.sh/aoxI
4. 00:42:755 (2) - grid x160,y104. ( because next spacing close (1.02x) )
5. 00:44:334 (4) - add NC
6. 00:49:387 (1) - spinner start 00:49:229
7. 00:59:334 (2) - I think that I do not match rhythm. tick move 00:59:492
8. 01:00:124 (3,4) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/aozh
9. 01:06:755 (1) - remove NC and 01:07:071 - add NC
10. 01:11:808 (7) - add NC
11. 01:21:598 (4) - add NC and 01:21:913 - remove NC ?
12. 01:27:282 (2) - add NC ( hp drain follow)

1. 00:11:966 (2,3) - I think that I do not match rhythm. remove. and change 00:11:966~00:12:756 slider
2. 00:15:282 (4,5) - ^ remove and 00:15:282~00:15:914 slider
3. 00:44:808 (3) - add one repeat ?
4. 00:45:440 (4) - add NC
5. 00:49:229 (6) - ^
6. 00:51:519 - add note ?
7. 00:51:598 - ^
8. 01:13:861 (7,8) - Please neatly stacked with 01:13:387 (6)

kosiga wrote:

hi~ shikyu

from mod4mod queue ~

here my mod ~

[General]

1. Song folder - remove osb. file ok
2. Song Setup - Colours - It is not unified. Easy,Normal or Ota's Hard. unify it ? ok
3. Audio Lead-in - +500ms in all diff ok

[Easy]

1. 00:18:756 (3,1,2) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/aou0 ok
2. 00:49:703 (1) - spacing too far. (1.46x) ok
3. 00:53:492 (2) - ^ (1.11x) x408,y104 ? ok
4. 00:56:966 (4) - add NC and 00:57:598 - remove NC ok
5. 00:57:913 (2) - I think I do not match BGM. slider end 00:58:071. or change circle 00:57:913only. ( i like circle ) add circle
6. 01:05:176 (2) - spacing too far (1.12x) 01:04:545 (1) - x256,y200 01:05:176 (2) - x328,y256 ok
7. 01:06:755 (2,3) - ^ 2:x288,y152 3:x352,y224 ok
8. 01:19:703 (2) - add NC ok

[Normal]

1. 00:14:019 (6) - add NC and 00:15:282 - remove NC and 00:16:545 - add NC ok
2. 00:19:072 (6) - add NC ok
3. 00:33:282 (1) - Suggestion of the rhythm and NC http://puu.sh/aoxI I follow guitar here
4. 00:42:755 (2) - grid x160,y104. ( because next spacing close (1.02x) ) ok
5. 00:44:334 (4) - add NC ok
6. 00:49:387 (1) - spinner start 00:49:229 ok
7. 00:59:334 (2) - I think that I do not match rhythm. tick move 00:59:492 ok
8. 01:00:124 (3,4) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/aozh ok
9. 01:06:755 (1) - remove NC and 01:07:071 - add NC ok
10. 01:11:808 (7) - add NC ok
11. 01:21:598 (4) - add NC and 01:21:913 - remove NC ? sorry no
12. 01:27:282 (2) - add NC ( hp drain follow) ok

That' all ~

Good luck ~

kosiga wrote:

[Ota's Hard]

1. 00:11:966 (2,3) - I think that I do not match rhythm. remove. and change 00:11:966~00:12:756 slider
2. 00:15:282 (4,5) - ^ remove and 00:15:282~00:15:914 slider
3. 00:44:808 (3) - add one repeat ?
4. 00:45:440 (4) - add NC
5. 00:49:229 (6) - ^
6. 00:51:519 - add note ?
7. 00:51:598 - ^
8. 01:13:861 (7,8) - Please neatly stacked with 01:13:387 (6)

spboxer3 wrote:

[Easy]
need let 01:24:755 - BPM of 95.000
kiai finish at 01:19:703 - ?[/color] ok

[Normal]
kiai end 01:19:072 but It's 01:19:071 [uh... I think 01:19:703 - is better >_>] ok
00:34:229 (2,3) - too Hard partten for Normal~ ok
00:44:334 (1,2) - ^ ok
00:45:755 - to 00:46:545 - need something to add here ok
01:07:071 (1,2,3,4) - too Hard for Normal... ok
01:27:282 (1) - I guess back is at 01:28:386 - >_> ok

[Taiko]
kiai 01:04:547 - but It's 01:04:545 right? ok
01:19:703 - finish kiai? ok

00:04:703 (1,1,2) - confuse rhythm it follow sound perfectly
01:23:176 - add note? ok

(red is unranked rule black is just suggest so you can ignore them~)

Ok that's All
good lucky

spboxer3 wrote:

[Ota's Hard]
01:24:758 - BPM of 95.000 -> 01:24:755 -
01:24:755 (1) - Unsnap spinner
00:51:519 (2,3) - not fit in this way
00:54:440 (1) - finish at 00:54:755 -
00:58:229 (1) - finish at 00:58:545 -
01:19:071 (3,4,5,6,1) - uneven spacing
01:22:861 - to 01:24:758 - need something to add here I want to add something in here but,i don't know what should i add..>.>

Sander-Don wrote:

Here's your taiko mod by request~

d = red, k = blue, D = finisher red, K = finisher blue.

00:23:492 (2) - change to d ok
00:26:019 (2) - ^ ok
00:26:334 (1,2,3,4) - change to k ok
00:28:545 (2) - change to d ok
00:29:808 (1,2,3) - how about adding finish to these? ok
00:33:598 (2) - remove ok
00:41:492 (5) - change to k ok
00:42:124 add k ok
00:50:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - how about making this 1/3 to fit the music?
first, delete 00:51:045 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Then switch to 1/3 and add 00:51:071 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - all red.
finished result should look like this (keep in mind i'm zoomed in all the way. ok


00:53:334 add k ok
00:53:650 add d ok

That's all. The map doesn't fit the music nor vocals very well at all imo >.<;

Flow 1/5
Patterns 3/5
Creativity 2/5
Overall 2/5

Good luck on getting it ranked~

Leorda wrote:

Halo

General
* Inconsistent timing sections http://puu.sh/ayZa ok
* Inconsistent combo color http://puu.sh/ayZh ok
* Inconsistent kiai time http://puu.sh/ayZr ok

-------------------------------------------------------------------

Easy
00:58:545 (B) - Fill the object and pattern to this breaks, it's no good for adding a breaks without reason..... I made this part a break 'cause I've fill some intro parts at beginning and I think break in this part isn't problem at all
-------------------------------------------------------------------

Normal
00:35:492 (x) - Add note here? ok
00:42:755 (2) - Extend this slider to white tick? follow guitar here, it end at red tick
01:05:492 (3) - Could be weird if tail slider overlap the sliderpath (Nazi) it's okay
01:22:229 (2) - You use short slider with many repeating slider. This issue is tough to tell for beginners when it's end ok
01:27:282 (1) - Remove new combo? I feel unecessary for this I just follow stanza, if other say same thing I'll change it

-------------------------------------------------------------------

Good luck!

-Lennox- wrote:

Are you accepting a guest difficult? Would like to make a Insane diff here.

Edit: Get a timing pro. The timing is horrible.

Leorda wrote:

Ota's Hard
01:24:755 (1) - Unsnapped end spinner
01:22:370 (T) - Unsnapped inherited timing point
01:22:686 (T) - ^
01:22:863 (T) - ^
01:23:337 (T) - ^

• offset 01418 || BPM 190,000
  offset 21628 || BPM 189,980
  offset 84811 || BPM 108,600
  offset 87337 || BPM 092,500

-Lennox- wrote:

Asked CNF for help.

SPOILER

16:28 <-Lennox-> : Hey CNF. Are you good in timing? There is a map who needs help with the timing
16:31 <Card N'FoRcE> : what map?
16:31 <-Lennox-> : sek
16:31 <-Lennox-> : +sec
16:32 *-Lennox- is listening to (BACK-ON - With You feat. Me)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/38054]
16:33 <Card N'FoRcE> : the mp3 sounds really bad
16:33 <Card N'FoRcE> : where did he get it?
16:33 <-Lennox-> : idk. lol
16:33 <-Lennox-> : i guess via youtube converter
16:34 <Card N'FoRcE> : never do that please, it sounds horribly and may have timing issues due to distorsion
16:35 <-Lennox-> : good to know
16:36 <Card N'FoRcE> : try to get a better mp3 first, that way you'll be able to see if 190 is correct or not
16:36 <Card N'FoRcE> : no need to use multiple sections for 95
16:36 <Card N'FoRcE> : only 190 is fine as BPM
16:37 <-Lennox-> : It would be nice if you post this into the thread. The map creator is not like a real-life friend or something. i
16:37 <-Lennox-> : just have to do a guest diff for that map
16:37 <Card N'FoRcE> : sorry but i won't because i don't want to take part in osu!'s modding process anymore
16:38 <-Lennox-> : Is it okay if i take a screenshot from this? ( do post it into the thread ofc )
16:38 <Card N'FoRcE> : feel free to post it
16:38 <Card N'FoRcE> : go ahead
16:38 <-Lennox-> : okay thx
16:38 <Card N'FoRcE> : i think /savelog would work better btw+
16:38 <-Lennox-> : yea

Edit: Nevermind. Use Odaril's timing.

Odaril wrote:

I was asked to time this.

• offset 01418 || BPM 190,000
  offset 21628 || BPM 189,980
  offset 84811 || BPM 108,600
  offset 87337 || BPM 092,500

Touche wrote:

[EASY]

00:51:918 : Put this circle in 352,32 (x,y) actually I don't see why I have to put it there

[NORMAL]

00:13:076 : New combo ok
00:14:023 : Delete new combo ok

[Ota's HARD]

00:13:076 : New combo ok
00:14:023 : Delete new combo ok

[TAIKO]

Change the offset of 1,392 (Check the other diffs and put the same offset for TAIKO, all diffs with the same offset and bpm :3) ok
00:50:970~00:51:918 : A lot of D circles, put a little of K circles this I've try and it turn to be no good
01:05:496~01:06:128 : ^ change to slider instead

[OPINION]

So nice song :3 That's my play on the Taiko diff:



GO FOR THE RANK!

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo modding this map because of ur request

General:
shouldnt the title be BACK-ON feat. Me - With You? erm... most people write like that


Easy:
00:01:392(1,1) - i dont feel like these spinners should be here. use this pattern instead? not really, it better for beginner
[attachment=0:7d015]BACK-ON - With You feat. Me (shikyu) [test play].osu[/attachment:7d015]
00:30:128(2) - IMO this might be confusing for beginners. move it beside (1) to make it easier for beginners
00:40:865(1) - add a clap at the beginning and end to keep the rhythm going ok
00:58:549-01:02:970 - why a break here? try to add notes here ok
01:04:549(1,2) - add a clap at the end ok
01:06:128(1,2,3) - move the clap to the beginning apply at (2)
01:24:764(1,1) - same as 00:01:392 ^

Normal:
00:01:392(1,1) - like at easy i dont feel like these spinners should be here. add notes instead? same as easy
00:21:918 - the break here compared to easy is inconsistent delete notes at easy
01:24:764(1,1) - same as 00:01:392^
everything seems fine wat bothered me is the clap hitsounds near the beginning. there isn't

this is the best i can do. GL

01:03:286(1,1) - r u sure that this is okay for an insane diff? because IMO some players wont be able to reach that slider when the spinner's done.

Mok wrote:

[General]
All Kiai Times should be the same. Check Lennox's Kiai Time. it's same
If this is Tv Size, you should add it in the title of the song, or at least in the tags. ok

[Easy]
00:01:393 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end). ok
00:15:128 (3) - Make it better. ok
00:49:707 (1) - Remove New Combo. ok
01:22:237 (1) - ^. ok

[Normal]
I noticed that you stuck all the map in the center, try to space it out! I like it...
00:20:339 (2) - Move the slider, making the red sliderpoint be in x=256; y=104. Then make it a bit better. ok

[Ota]
00:19:865 (2,3,4) - Since it's hard, you can take this combo to x=416; y=84. ok

I really like this song, even if i've never seen this anime. actually... it's game OP

384,184,77183,6,0,B|416:248|400:312|320:392|240:312|224:248|256:184,1,360,8|0

Pereira006 wrote:

hello~~

General

all diff lead-in 500 this is just fair and bad will be better if 1000 or 1500 IMO ok

Some Suggestions
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Easy

I not think HP is fine will better if HP -1 IMO ok

00:11:497 at 00:21:602 this part you have lack hitsound expect 00:16:549 (1,2) and 00:21:602 (1) IMO you should more add hitsound i feel need it ok

00:40:865 (3) - try CTRL+H as i just clean overlaps little with 00:42:760 (3) I mean this http://puu.sh/ccAQ this just easy read and better game play IMO ok
00:51:918 (1) - I wanna this need change place as i play and catch 300 score and hitburst big and lot overlaps with 00:52:865 (1,2,3) IMO ok
00:55:707 (2) - change place too http://puu.sh/ccBx this just clean with (3) end slider then most better read IMO ok
00:58:707 (5) - New combo? I feel need it IMO ok
00:59:497 (6) - grid 1 left and 01:00:760 (7) - grid 1 up better IMO ok
01:06:128 (1) - remove the clap the end slider but add only start slider ok
01:07:391 (3) - ^ most better if you really wanna hitsound conscienty IMO ok
01:17:183 (1) - I can see my self is weird slider try this code ok

384,184,77183,6,0,B|416:248|400:312|320:392|240:312|224:248|256:184,1,360,8|0

stuff cool and flow is good
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Normal

00:32:813 (3) - grid 1 right? or intentional ? ok
01:17:183 (3) - new combo? ok
01:24:764 (1,1) - should be end the 1/1 White tick as this diff is your if guest diff so will be fine as they are wanna anyway easy and normal is your right? should be end same ok

everthing look good for me
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Ota's Hard

Can be Od-1 most better imo ok

stuff aswome

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that all i think and good luck sorry my suck eng anyway
bye bye

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Oh my, seems like there is no audio file present.

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Easy

• 00:11:497 (1,2) - I suggest doing something like this. I think it goes with the song a little better than what you have: ok

• 00:31:707 - I think it would be best to add a note here to match the vocals. ok
• 00:52:549 (1,2) - I think these two notes would sound/play better if you move them one white tick earlier. That way you would have something like this: ok

SPOILER

• 01:02:023 (1) - I think it would be best if you map through this spinner. The spinner seems odd and doesn't fit in very well. Here is one option: ok


Normal

• 00:14:023 (3,4,5) - These patterns don't go with the song and it seems pretty random to me. I would change it. Here is an option:

SPOILER

apply some
• 00:33:286 (1) - Move this to the earliest red tick. It seems pretty off. I follow guitar
• 00:35:813 (5) - Change the hitsounds to this (Claps = Red lines): it's better like that

• 00:46:549 (1,2) - In my opinion, this does not play well on a Normal. Try something like this:apply some

• 01:02:023 (1) - Again, I encourage you to map through this spinner (Same reason in easy)ok
• 01:05:496 (3) - Open up this slider. The way you have it now, it's pretty easy to slider break. ok


[Overall]
Overall, this map needs to be worked on. But, at this stage, it's natural. Also, the map does show potential.

Good luck on getting this ranked~

Rei_Fan49 wrote:

taiko mod only request via in-game

[Timing]
> BPM yang ke-2 : 189.25
> preview point : 64.545 , down beat : 64.549

[Taiko]
00:26:418 (2,3,4) - remove? soalnya ga ada di lagunya
00:28:076 (X) - add don ? ok
00:28:707 (X) - add katu? no, weird
00:29:023 (2) - remove? soalnya ga ada di lagunya ada kalo denger baik2
00:29:339 (X) - add don ? no
00:29:813 (1,2,3,4) - remove big ? di sini volume drum lebih besar
00:31:865 (X) - add don/katu ? ok

hmmm gw heran sama bpmnya ini ... 190 pas atau ngga bagian ini.. soalnya 1/3 juga masih sedikit offbeat

00:55:313 (4,11) - remove? buat variasi, masih enak didenger
01:04:945 (2) - remove? ok
01:09:365 (2,4) - remove? ok
01:17:102 (2) - remove? ok
01:19:289 (2) - move to 1/6 beat after 01:19:234 (1) - ok
01:20:299 (1) - snap to white tick ok
01:24:053 (2) - move to next blue tick move to white tick
01:24:764 (1) - remove 1 repeat and duplicate the same drum roll (1/4 after, and 1/4 shorter) --> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/212032, atau itu pasang denden aja daripada drumroll~ hmmm ngikut vocal, tapi jadi tanggung
01:27:291 (1) - shorten to white tick? ok

lol rly lagunya sedikit susah ditebak beatnya~

yap~ paling segitu aja lol~ good luck on your taiko~

1. 00:19:707 (4) - maybe move 1 grid right...
2. 00:34:234 (1) - 1 grid longer
3. 00:40:865 (3) - remove clap from the reverse arrow?
4. 00:49:707 (4) - ^
5. 00:51:918 (5) - kind of uncomfortable this rhythm orz... maybe a 1/1 slider at 00:51:602 is better..?
6. 00:57:602 (2,3,4) - maybe reverse slider?

1. 00:16:549 (1) - maybe move the top 3 points 1 grid down, and last one 1 grid right orz... looks better
2. 00:20:339 (2) - 2nd point (120,48), last point (344,144) looks better
3. 00:31:549 (1) - I think place at (280,192) is better
4. 00:33:286 (1) - this is off, 1/2 beat earlier... = =
5. 00:38:339 (4) - This slider is too close from the previous slider's reverse, can be confusing to beginners... so distance larger from the reverse arrow
6. 00:51:286 (1) - add whistle on reverse srrow ?
7. 01:00:128 (3) - how about (480,88)
8. 01:13:393 (2) - 1 grid down, left
9. 01:21:921 (5) - if you want to use 6 reverses, plz make this slider straight... bad movement it is...

1. 00:13:076 (1) - more curve
2. 00:15:286 (5) - whistle end
3. 00:32:813 (4) - maybe use 1/2 slider, 1/2 earlier?
4. 01:20:184 (2) - 1/2 earlier is better imo... = =

1. 00:01:549 (1) - different spinner? why?
2. 00:33:918 (1,2) - why do you use this jump T.T
3. um... this diff is better than others imo, that's all ^^

29yuto12 wrote:

hi
↓my mod↓
[Easy]
・00:13:076(1)
・00:34:234(1)
・00:39:918(2)
・00:45:918(3)
・01:11:182(1,2)
→These sliders center waypoint is delete. ok
ex)http://puu.sh/cBbn ⇒ http://puu.sh/cBby

・01:03:918(x) add note? ok
・01:13:077(4) new combo?(↓new combo = NC) not really need

[Normal]
・00:12:128(3) Slider start 00:11:970 here? ⇒ http://puu.sh/cF8f ok
・00:15:128(4) This slider center waypoint is delete. ok
・00:37:076(2,3,4,5) Like this? ⇒ http://puu.sh/cFg4 sorry, better old one
・00:55:392(2,3) Like this? ⇒ http://puu.sh/cFme it doesn't follow rhytm
・01:00:128(3,4,5) Like this? ⇒ http://puu.sh/cFnQ keep current
・
01:03:918(x) add note? ⇒ http://puu.sh/cFoc add at 01:03:602(x)
・01:04:973(2) Why distance snap 1.0x? change 1.1x ok
・01:06:760(5,6) Place change? ⇒ http://puu.sh/cFq9 ok
・01:10:234(3) This note is 00:10:076 here? no, weird

Sorry , I am poor at English ><;

Teru21 wrote:

Hi~ from my queue

[General]
o my... the audio is really bad.. how bout trying download about 3MB one? yours is 1MB only.. this sounds no good.. >_< stil searching good one T^T

[Normal]
01:00:128 (3) - x:480 y:88 ok
01:21:921 (5) - make it horizontal or vertical? ok

[Taiko]
01:03:918 (1) - k? ok
00:10:076 (1,2) - dk? no, sounds weird
00:11:813 (1,2) - kd? ^
00:12:286 (1,2,3) - dkd? ^
00:19:865 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
00:21:918 - k? ok
00:23:023 - d? ok
00:23:655 - ^ not really follow music
00:27:128 - ^ it has different rhytm than earlier
00:27:286 - delete ^
00:48:444 (1,2,3) - kdd? consistent with 00:47:181 rhytm
00:49:076 (1,2,3) - ^ change to something else

okay.. thats all :3 Good luck

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Hi, m4m from your queue


[Easy]

1. 00:19:707 (4) - maybe move 1 grid right... ok
2. 00:34:234 (1) - 1 grid longer what for?
3. 00:40:865 (3) - remove clap from the reverse arrow? no, it's uncosistent
4. 00:49:707 (4) - ^ there's no clap =="
5. 00:51:918 (5) - kind of uncomfortable this rhythm orz... maybe a 1/1 slider at 00:51:602 is better..? ok
6. 00:57:602 (2,3,4) - maybe reverse slider? ok

[Normal]

1. 00:16:549 (1) - maybe move the top 3 points 1 grid down, and last one 1 grid right orz... looks better ok
2. 00:20:339 (2) - 2nd point (120,48), last point (344,144) looks better ok
3. 00:31:549 (1) - I think place at (280,192) is better current placement still better
4. 00:33:286 (1) - this is off, 1/2 beat earlier... = = I follow guitar
5. 00:38:339 (4) - This slider is too close from the previous slider's reverse, can be confusing to beginners... so distance larger from the reverse arrow not really, previous slider already vanished before reach this note
6. 00:51:286 (1) - add whistle on reverse srrow ? ok
7. 01:00:128 (3) - how about (480,88) ok
8. 01:13:393 (2) - 1 grid down, left ok
9. 01:21:921 (5) - if you want to use 6 reverses, plz make this slider straight... bad movement it is... fixed

Good luck~

• 00:15:128 (7) - add circle here, make spinner start at 00:15:207 and let it end at the same point as now
  00:20:260 (1) - start spinner here, enlarge by 1/4
  00:32:497 (5) - maybe move this slider down few grids, all in a line doesn't feel good to me, adjust (6) and next (1) if you do so
  00:45:602 (5) - feels like there's a note missing, add one?
  
  like this

  
  00:47:497 (7) - move this one down, having two sliders of same shape at the same height makes it look boring (at least to me)
  
  what I suggest

  
  01:03:207 (1) - make spinner start here, enlarge by one 1/4 (move inherit section to 01:03:207 aswell)
  01:22:474 (1) - ^

• 00:11:970 (4) - distance looks too small, enlarge (like use 1.0x & rotate the slider a bit to make it point more to the top)
  
  suggesting this

  
  00:39:049 (1) - move spinner here, enlarge by 1/4
  00:40:865 (2,3,4,5,1) - change slider's shape a little bit and make the circles continue on that course
  
  try something like this

  
  00:49:234 (1) - move spinner here, enlarge by 1/4
  01:10:392 (5) - align shape little more with (6)'s approach circle

• 00:49:155 (1) - move spinner here, enlarge by 1/4 (move inherit section aswell)

• 00:15:128 (7) - add circle here, make spinner start at 00:15:207 and let it end at the same point as now Das würde das feeling komplett zerstören.. ich gehe hier mit dem "ahhhhh" und ignoriere gekonnt den hard-beat davor.
  00:20:260 (1) - start spinner here, enlarge by 1/4 Ehm.. nein?
  00:32:497 (5) - maybe move this slider down few grids, all in a line doesn't feel good to me, adjust (6) and next (1) if you do so Da du der erste bist der das meint, wird es auch nur DIR stören.. von mir aus spielt es sich gut und sieht auch gut aus.
  00:45:602 (5) - feels like there's a note missing, add one? Ich höre nichts in der musik was mir sagen würde das dort eine note hin gehört.
  
  like this

  
  00:47:497 (7) - move this one down, having two sliders of same shape at the same height makes it look boring (at least to me) Du bist selber ein symmetrie mapper, und willst dan anderenvorschreiben es sieht langweilig aus? Sinn?
  
  what I suggest

  
  01:03:207 (1) - make spinner start here, enlarge by one 1/4 (move inherit section to 01:03:207 aswell) Gute idee. Changed
  01:22:474 (1) - ^

Broetchen8441 wrote:

So doing some M4M here~

Ota's Hard:

• 00:11:970 (4) - distance looks too small, enlarge (like use 1.0x & rotate the slider a bit to make it point more to the top)
  
  suggesting this

  
  00:39:049 (1) - move spinner here, enlarge by 1/4
  00:40:865 (2,3,4,5,1) - change slider's shape a little bit and make the circles continue on that course
  
  try something like this

  
  00:49:234 (1) - move spinner here, enlarge by 1/4
  01:10:392 (5) - align shape little more with (6)'s approach circle

she said she fixed all

Normal:

I'm not that good at lowdiff-modding, I'd say use less 90°-sliderpoints overall

• 00:49:155 (1) - move spinner here, enlarge by 1/4 (move inherit section aswell) weird, really

Easy looks fine to me.

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

Can I guest, please please please?

• [General]

1. Please make all Audio track lead-ins all the same.
2. I find the Kiai Times inconsistent to diffs cause some require to be lessen and some do not. Please make them all the same.
   
   [Normal]
3. 00:37:067 (2,3) - Is this a jump? well if it is please try to get rid of it cause this is just a Normal diff.
4. Also lots of unsnapped notes, please fix all of them (File>Open AIMod>Snapping)
   
   [Ota's Hard]
5. unsnapped notes... please fix.
   
   [Lennox]
6. unsnapped notes... please fix.

that's all!~ I like the song \m/
Good luck!~

L_P wrote:

i cant wait anymore T.T
timing : bpm correct, but i suggest 1440 for the offset
remember to resnap the green inherit points / line .

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

Hello!~ Here's my mod and sorry for being very very late >< (a request from my queue)

[list][General]
[*]Please make all Audio track lead-ins all the same.
[*]I find the Kiai Times inconsistent to diffs cause some require to be lessen and some do not. Please make them all the same.
fixed

[Normal]
[*]00:37:067 (2,3) - Is this a jump? well if it is please try to get rid of it cause this is just a Normal diff. thanks for remind~, fixed
[*]Also lots of unsnapped notes, please fix all of them (File>Open AIMod>Snapping)

that's all!~ I like the song \m/
Good luck!~

-Lennox- wrote:

shikyu im sure you can fix the unsnapped note in my diff.

KingsAL2 wrote:

OMG many diff need to mod ORz

==General==
ENIII are too much for I ... Orz... STAR RATING SYSTEM SUCKS you can literally add ONLY 1 objects and make an I for the Star Rating, really. When reading spreads DON'T refer to star rating, refer to the difficulty name.

==feat. Haku==
-- Combo Problem --
-- Sound --
-- Spacing --
00:29:389 (2,3) - This simi junp is too bad D: Just 00:29:863 (3) - Cirl+R Intended symmetry maybe? you click without asking your mind to follow music?
-- Other(S) --
- Slider Tick Rate (-1) Some slider not fit for the slider tick When they add Variable tick rate i'll do it. Now tick rate 1 is more adapt Only for a tenth of the song, and slider tick 2 for half.
00:15:178 (5,6) - Make 6 perfectly put under 5 plz
00:21:652 (X) make those 20% timing section change to 40% and all 40% > 60%. (Just make all timing section higher 20% of the volume) Nope. Hitsound volume are better like this.
Where is the other note? OMG <- wtf?

==OVERALL==
LIKE : Love this song... Powerful.
UNLIKE : **** Timing =[ Can you fix it and resnap your note? Some of the note unsnap that you cant rank this map at all.

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

Adjusted the unsnapped notes.

Why you aren't using the timing i gaved you? you got my difficulty as proof.

KingsAL2 wrote:

==Ota's Hard==
-- Combo Problem --
00:58:282 (1) - remove NC
00:58:755 (2) - NC for htis
-- Sound --
00:39:019 (6) - missing clap
-- Spacing --
01:07:439 (2,3) - Spacing problem
-- Other(S) --
00:57:019 (1,2) - So fake for player... Can you make a slider for 1 and 2?
01:12:414 (2,3,4) - WTF?
01:15:652 (3) - ^ (Unsnap?)
01:24:812 (1) - Just start the spinner in 01:23:391

shikyu wrote:

wew... finally update mine
My mistake... I update new audio from my last comp, forget to update
Sorry for so much trouble

Hi there. Here's your mod request. <3

EASY

1. 00:35:246 - Fix the curve of this slider. Make it look like this: http://puu.sh/ecuS
   
   
2. 01:05:261 = 1 grid up.

NORMAL

2. 00:45:352 - Weird pattern (and the sound too). I recommend you delete (Slider 2), then add a note here 00:45:510
   
   
3. 00:59:562 - Add finish?
   
   
4. 01:07:156 - Not a good slider, try this one: http://puu.sh/ecww
   
   
5. 01:13:493 - Change Grid Level to 4, then move the red dot of the slider to left one box.
   
   
6. 01:20:735 - Weird slider. Try this: http://puu.sh/ecwZ

OTA'S HARD

1. Overall Difficulty -1
   
   
2. HP Drain Rate -1
   
   
3. 00:39:352 - Spinner should start in this part.
   
   
4. 00:51:036 - What is this? Try this one: http://puu.sh/ecxN

LENNOX

1. HP Drain Rate -1
   
   
2. 00:15:178 - This spinner seems lost. Remove it. Instead, add a hit circle with a finish hit sound.
   
   
3. 00:16:284 - If you followed my suggestion above, add a note here.
   
   
4. 00:33:983 - This is too far for the next note. Try to fix this and make sure it is near the next note.
   
   
5. 00:35:878 - ^
   
   
6. 00:43:457 - ^

FEAT. HAKYU

1. 00:07:284 - (3,4) What is this? Remove it. Just make one slider.
   
   
2. 00:10:284 - Just stack these notes from the previous slider's end.
   
   
3. 00:15:652 - This note is not stacked with the slider.
   
   
4. 00:49:299 - New combo.
   
   
5. 00:58:931 - (1,2) This note are not stacked with the slider.
   
   
6. 01:05:577 - Nice blanket. :3

That's all I can do. BTW, I love the Kiai Time on feat. Hakyu diff. <3

Philippines wrote:

OTA'S HARD

1. Overall Difficulty -1
   
   
2. HP Drain Rate -1
   
   
3. 00:39:352 - Spinner should start in this part.
   
   
4. 00:51:036 - What is this? Try this one: http://puu.sh/ecxN

That's all I can do. BTW, I love the Kiai Time on feat. Hakyu diff. <3
It's Haku not Hakyu lol....

Philippines wrote:

Hi there. Here's your mod request. <3

EASY

1. 00:35:246 - Fix the curve of this slider. Make it look like this: http://puu.sh/ecuS ok
   
   
2. 01:05:261 = 1 grid up. it have placed a line with slider's end point (1)

NORMAL

1. 00:45:352 - Weird pattern (and the sound too). I recommend you delete (Slider 2), then add a note here 00:45:510 I follow guitar
   
   
2. 00:59:562 - Add finish? no, weird...
   
   
3. 01:07:156 - Not a good slider, try this one: http://puu.sh/ecww change to something else
   
   
4. 01:13:493 - Change Grid Level to 4, then move the red dot of the slider to left one box. if I do that the tick doen't look symetrical
   
   
5. 01:20:735 - Weird slider. Try this: http://puu.sh/ecwZchange to something else

That's all I can do. BTW, I love the Kiai Time on feat. Hakyu diff. <3
lol...

1. Shouldn't the title be with you feat.Me?
   
   

1. 00:31:773 (1) - finish
2. 01:02:089 (1) - nc?
3. 00:57:668 (2) - finish to the end
4. 00:57:668 (2) - change to this:
   
5. 00:58:931 (1) - finish to the reverse
6. 01:02:089 (1) - finish to the beginning
7. 01:14:735 (1) - finish
8. 01:19:787 (1) - ^

1. 00:20:389 (2) - start slider here 00:20:231 - and end 00:21:336 - because the end is unsnapped if it is on 00:21:668
2. 00:21:668 - add a note
3. 00:32:246 (2) - start here 00:32:089 -
4. 00:36:825 (1) - finish
5. 00:46:931 (1) - ^
6. 00:49:299 (1) - start spinner here 00:49:457 - and end 00:50:720 -
7. 00:52:615 (3) - finish?
8. 00:57:983 (2) - finish to the end
9. 00:59:562 (2) - finish
10. 01:02:089 (6) - nc and finish
11. 01:04:608 (1) - snap it to the new timing
12. 01:07:156 (6) - nc
13. 01:09:366 (1) - don't overlap it with (8), please
14. 01:10:314 (3) - move to 01:10:156 - and stack with (2)
15. 01:14:735 (1) - finish
16. 01:19:787 (1) - ^
17. 01:21:998 (5) - no no no no >< make 1/1 reverse slider or something else

1. 00:20:231 (x) - add note
2. 00:20:231 (1) - move spinner here 00:20:389 -
3. 00:46:931 (1) - finish
4. 00:51:983 (1) - ^
5. 00:52:141 (2) - remove finish
6. 00:54:510 (1) - extend to 00:54:825 -
7. 00:57:036 (1) - finish
8. 00:57:510 (x) - add a note
9. 00:59:246 (2) - finish to the end

1. 00:31:773 (2) - finish
2. 00:36:825 (2) - ^
3. 00:41:878 (1) - ^
4. 00:46:773 (5) - ^ to the end
5. 00:46:773 (5) - nc
6. 00:54:352 (9) - finish to the end
7. 00:59:562 (1) - ^
8. 01:04:630 (1) - finish
9. 01:08:419 (1) - why slowdown?
10. 01:14:735 (2) - finish
11. 01:19:787 (T) - unsnapped timing section and whyyy slowdown?

1. Timing -> Resnap all notes

1. Timing -> Resnap all notes
2. 00:31:773 (1) - finish
3. 00:41:878 (3) - finish
4. 00:49:299 (9) - nc
5. 00:51:983 (13) - move nc here
6. 00:51:983 (13) - finish
7. 00:54:194 (10) - finish to the end
8. 00:56:878 (7) - finish to the reverse
9. 00:59:246 (3) - finish to the end
10. 01:02:089 (2) - finish
11. 01:04:630 (2) - ^
12. 01:05:577 (5,7) - overlap?...
13. 01:14:735 (2) - finish
14. 01:19:787 (2) - ^
15. 01:23:261 (1) - move it further

Reiji-RJ wrote:

Hello~

[General]

1. Shouldn't the title be with you feat.Me? update later
   
   

[Easy]

1. 00:31:773 (1) - finish ok
2. 01:02:089 (1) - nc? ok
3. 00:57:668 (2) - finish to the end ok
4. 00:57:668 (2) - change to this: ok
   
5. 00:58:931 (1) - finish to the reverse weird
6. 01:02:089 (1) - finish to the beginning ^
7. 01:14:735 (1) - finish ok
8. 01:19:787 (1) - ^ ok

[Normal]

1. 00:20:389 (2) - start slider here 00:20:231 - and end 00:21:336 - because the end is unsnapped if it is on 00:21:668 it seems off for me
2. 00:21:668 - add a note no
3. 00:32:246 (2) - start here 00:32:089 - I follow guitar
4. 00:36:825 (1) - finish weird
5. 00:46:931 (1) - ^ ^
6. 00:49:299 (1) - start spinner here 00:49:457 - and end 00:50:720 - ok
7. 00:52:615 (3) - finish? no
8. 00:57:983 (2) - finish to the end ok
9. 00:59:562 (2) - finish weird
10. 01:02:089 (6) - nc and finish nc
11. 01:04:608 (1) - snap it to the new timing fixed
12. 01:07:156 (6) - nc no, it has same rhytm with last notes
13. 01:09:366 (1) - don't overlap it with (8), please ok
14. 01:10:314 (3) - move to 01:10:156 - and stack with (2) I follow instrument
15. 01:14:735 (1) - finish ok
16. 01:19:787 (1) - ^ ok
17. 01:21:998 (5) - no no no no >< make 1/1 reverse slider or something else ok

Taiko

1. Timing -> Resnap all notes fixed

Nice map! Good luck~

shikyu wrote:

Reiji-RJ wrote:

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1. 00:20:389 (2) - start slider here 00:20:231 - and end 00:21:336 - because the end is unsnapped if it is on 00:21:668 it seems off for me

This beatmap has not been uploaded correctly!

Reiji-RJ wrote:

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1. 00:20:389 (2) - start slider here 00:20:231 - and end 00:21:336 - because the end is unsnapped if it is on 00:21:668 it seems off for me

Haku gave me that timing

This beatmap has not been uploaded correctly!I submit it now, updated
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Reiji-RJ wrote:

Ota's Hard

1. 00:20:231 (x) - add note
2. 00:20:231 (1) - move spinner here 00:20:389 -
3. 00:46:931 (1) - finish
4. 00:51:983 (1) - ^
5. 00:52:141 (2) - remove finish
6. 00:54:510 (1) - extend to 00:54:825 -
7. 00:57:036 (1) - finish
8. 00:57:510 (x) - add a note
9. 00:59:246 (2) - finish to the end

SPOILER

SPOILER

00:31:773 (1) - finish
00:41:878 (3) - finish
00:49:299 (9) - nc I'm following voice for NCs
00:51:983 (13) - move nc here I'm following Voice for NCs and Graphically better now
00:51:983 (13) - finish
[color=#00FF00]00:54:194 (10) - finish to the end
00:56:878 (7) - finish to the reverse
00:59:246 (3) - finish to the end
01:02:089 (2) - finish
01:04:630 (2) - ^
01:05:577 (5,7) - overlap?... It's wanted and you can see it's wanted >,<
01:14:735 (2) - finish
01:19:787 (2) - ^
01:23:261 (1) - move it further It's a trap...

K o g u r e wrote:

feat. Ota
00:31:777 (1) - This note overlapped looks ugly. Move it to x:256 y:320?
01:00:040 (4) - I dont think this fits nor the lyrics nor the music. Maybe put it like this:

K o g u r e wrote:

Hi~
From my queue:

Easy
00:01:445 (1) - Consider making these two sliders one slider, since its a map for begginers and they wouldnt expect a slider after another no, that'll make spinner longer and make player tired
01:24:844 (1) - Same here ^

Normal
00:11:551 (1) - No NC? ok
00:16:603 (1) - NAZI - In grid level 4, take notes from 00:16:603 (1) to 00:20:393 (2) and go 1 grid down. Do this so the slider in 00:15:972 (5) will be in the center of 00:16:603 (1) and you wont have spacing problems ok
00:33:356 (1) - No NC? ok
00:34:303 (2) - NC? ok
00:53:882 (5) - No NC? no, it has different ryhtm

Thats all i could find
Nice song and nice diffs u got there
Good Luck

goodbye wrote:

[feat. Ota]
00:21:672(T) - delete this meaningless green line. you can add NC1 at the red line. fixed

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00:11:551 (1) - remove nc ok
00:33:356 (1) - ^, and add nc in 00:34:303 (2) ok
01:02:093 (1) - finish at the end weird
01:04:540 (T) - I dont know this red line is necessary or not but at least you should delete the green one at the same time. no, I make all timing same (0.75x). It has same case as easy diff

[Easy]
00:21:577(T) - delete this green line ok
00:40:935 (3) - clap at the begin and the end ok
00:49:777 (4) - clap at the begin ok
01:00:514 (2) - spacing ok

Sync wrote:

feat. Ota
Other than the timing issues mentioned above, I found nothing wrong with this difficulty...other than unsnapped inherited timing sections, that is! Make sure to snap those.

Unsnapped inherited timing sections

00:06:496
00:11:549
00:11:707
01:19:791
01:22:476
01:22:950
01:23:266

Sync wrote:

General
-- Change Easy, Ota, and Haku's audio lead-in time to 1000. You can achieve this by opening the .osu file. fixed
-- Easy and Haku has combo colors that differ from the rest of your mapset. Be sure that combo colors are consistent throughout your map. fixed
-- Remove Haku's first kiai to have consistent Kiai sections throughout all of the difficulties. wait him do by himself
-- In Ota's difficulty, there are timing sections that differ from the rest of the mapset. (01:04:540 BPM 189.950, 01:04:634, BPM 189.950) fixed

Normal
00:33:356 (3) - Move this back one tick (1/2) I follow guitar
00:35:724 (4) - Move this back one tick ^
00:43:461 (3) - Move this back one tick and extend by one tick. ^
01:22:314 (x) - Unsnapped inherited timing section fixed

Easy
I'd suggest nazi-ing your own map for the sake of it looking better. Other than that, I found nothing wrong. ok

That is all. Good luck.

[feat. Haku]
00:05:235 (6) - remove whistle The one on the sliderslide?
00:32:566 (4) - why there is a whistle here? It's the remnant of an experiment, thank for pointing
00:58:935 (1) - not stack well
01:00:672 (8) - this sounds strange...use 1/2 slider repeat instead it? Nothing strange, simply following the voice while using a graphical pattern
01:01:303 (10) - clap at the end
01:07:002 (8) - not stack well
01:23:265 (1,2) - Dont you think they're too close to 12?I'd like to make a little jump here. hm, like that it's better, nuff' said (1. Archheard reason: I like it, 2. It's graphically good, 3. The song become slower there, so as well the snap ( it's like 1,4x in the 1x speed I used (the distance is counted from the last note section, so it's 0.7 in 2x) 4. You actually have some graphical sign while plaiying, as this appear when the last note is ended. note before the start.

General
-- Remove Haku's first kiai to have consistent Kiai sections throughout all of the difficulties.
It's called "fountain", and i want to use it.

feat. Haku
00:08:393 (2) - Add a whistle The whistle are not in the bell sounds, but in the synth.
00:18:498 (2) - Totally unpredictable and unfitting slider speed-up. I don't believe this should stay. Do as you wish. Now 1.75x
00:32:566 (4) - What on earth is this whistle doing here? Failed experiment remnant
I have to admit, this map is very unique. Well done.

[feat.Haku]
00:10:288 (3)　　　　Please use complete stack.Very confusing pattern. Why?, play it. I just stacked (3) under (2) end and not viceversa.
00:15:656 (6)　　　　^ Why?, play it. I just manually stacked (6) to continue (5)
00:29:882 (3)　　　　Ctrl+R Flow and Look better. nuff said
00:58:461 (x)　　　　I think the slider should start from here. As you saw in 00:56:882 (7,8) - , this slider follow voice better like this

[feat. Haku]
More than three unique slider speeds = unrankable nope, it was a guideline, plus we modders changed it to

Please don't change slider speeds more often than the music suggests. Changing speeds by small amounts to help fit objects is fine, but don't change the speeds of single stray sliders by noticeable amounts.

00:10:288 - Move this to x216 y100 Uhm... okay ...
00:58:383 - Ugly here between these to sliders ?.?