1. Hard (4,72 stars, 160 notes)
2. Insane (5 stars, 233 notes)
3. Riki's Normal (3,03 stars, 88 notes)

Modders list

RikiH_
-kevincela-
xxheroxx
Nemis
Roxas
Gabe
LunarSakuya
Gio96b
Jenny
kurohana
Snepif
cirno-
Lally
HelloSCV
masamune11
Chyo-Kun
xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx
Nanika133
phaZ
Revy
Maddy
kajiyatta
Pereira006
xxheroxx
KiyoshiX101
Chewin
Lally
Andrea
Melophobia
Chewin
those
Zarerion
Stefan
NoHitter
kanpakyin

-Kirito wrote:

hello, maps BPM Offset 14807 please

RikiH_ wrote:

Toh, troia.

http://puu.sh/R4qS

Poi te la moddo :>

RikiH_ wrote:

Modding lolol

Rosso = Unrankable
Blu = Dovresti fixare
Verde = Solo un suggerimento

General

- Devi aggiungere il Preview Point, sennò è unrankable D: FattoH.
- Bisogna mappare almeno l'80% dell'MP3, sennò è unrankable. Taglia l''mp3 poi cambialo Poi lo faccio.
- Aggiungi il kiai, se non sai dove metterlo fai come ho fatto io nella mia guest <3 Aggiunto.
- Aggiungi gli hitsounds Gli aggiungerà Roxas, anche se non vorrà fg
- Il BG deve essere 1024x768, il tuo è 1023x692. Occhio perchè è Unrankable Anche questo lo faccio dopo.
- Aggiungi almeno uno spinner per diff Fatto.

Hard

00:16:724 (1,2,3) - Stacka bene questi slider Ci ho provato, poi faccio meglio rotfl
00:20:132 (1,2,3) - Stessa cosa ^
00:23:114 (8) - Sposta in x:312 y: 344 FattoH.
00:26:310 (5) - Sposta in x: 256 y:112 così lo stacki con l'1 ^
00:35:896 (3) - CTRL + R? Come vuoi :C
00:46:760 (3) - Non mi piace molto questo slider, magari sostituiscilo con uno che abbia l'inizio in x:256 y:192 e la fine in x:256 y:320 , così il pattern è simmetrico DoneH.
00:52:938 (2) - Sposta questa nota da sotto lo slider :V Fatto.
01:19:565 (1,2) - Anche queste due note sono nascoste dallo slider, spostale. La regola è "Hitcircles must never be hidden under slidertracks. Whether a hitcircle is partially or completely under a slidertrack, it is confusing for the player to read. Insane difficulties are the only exception to this rule." ^

Insane

00:32:700 (3,4) - Perchè non stacki questi due slider rispettivamente con l'1 e col 2? Ho fatto a posta a metterli così.
01:12:110 (3) - Non mi piace per niente questo slider D: Cerca di farlo simmetrico a quello prima This ^
01:23:826 (3,4) - Stessa cosa di prima, stacka gli slider con quelli prima This ^

Le mappe mi piacciono, complimenti °_° Thanks :'D
Per gli hitsounds chiedi a Roxas che è molto più esperto di me D: Certo, ci penserà Rox lo schiavo negro. *patpat*

Lol ti do la stella Brava, troia. <3

EDIT: Mi sono reso conto che il verde che ho scelto non si legge, ma non ho voglia di cambiare colore. <3 Fottiti, tanto riesco a leggere rotfl.

Gabe wrote:

Delete Avicii in the source.
The real artist/title is; Avicii - Levels (Nightcore Mix)

nokds.

r2d4x6 wrote:

Hello,

I tried to download the beatmap, however, it doesn't work in game.

"Audio file could not be loaded successfully"

It say to check the "filename case" -
I can't help you more, i'm sorry. Just reported this "bug" :/

EDIT : Nevermind, just a little bug that I had. I restarted Osu! and now it's working. Sorry >.<'

r2d4x6 wrote:

Plop'

I think it would be better if you use the " Beat Snap Divisor 1/8 ", and move every circle one "line" behind ( Ctrl + A ... Hope you understand ... Don't know how to call it xD ). Tell me what do you think of the result .. >.>

Vakex96 wrote:

Good Beatmaps

Kiyro wrote:

Avicii - Levels (Nightcore Mix)

Kiyro wrote:

(Nightcore Mix)

GladiOol wrote:

Kiyro wrote:

Avicii - Levels (Nightcore Mix)

Kiyro wrote:

(Nightcore Mix)

1. Ci sono 2 .osb nella cartella,eliminali e full submitta
2. I preview time di tutte le diff sono diversi, ricorda di settarli tutti allo stesso punto!
3. Ci sono inoltre varie unsnapped inherited points,ricordati di snapparli tutti

1. 00:19:145 (3) - (nazi)Non allineato con 00:18:293 (2) -
2. 00:26:601 - Ti direi di aggiungere una nota qui,in quanto senza la mappa risulta vuota qui e quindi pittosto disagevole da giocare.
3. 00:28:518 (1) - Un piccolo suggerimento,potresti attribuire allo slider una curva per migliorare il dropoff avvenuto con 00:29:370 (2) - : risulterà molto naturale da giocare visto il suo flow migliorato!
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   256,168,28518,6,0,B|224:144|224:88|256:64,1,120

4. 00:42:152 (1) - Sposta il new combo su 00:41:299 (2) - : è meglio isolare 00:40:447 (1) - avendo un sintetizzatore tutto suo.
5. 00:46:412 (3) - Ad ora questo slider ci sta,ma io ti consiglierei piuttosto di ruotarlo in questo modo. Facendo così il flow con 00:45:560 (2) - scorrerà meglio,e a dirla tutta ci sta anche meglio esteticamente :3
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   340,364,46412,2,0,B|397:356|449:317,1,120
   468,224,47264,1,0
   396,168,47690,6,0,B|456:124|452:28|380:-8|308:8,1,240

6. 01:09:418 (2) - Piccola cosa graifca: non ho nulla contro questo slider,ma potresti migliorarlo come qui sotto:
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   256,160,69418,2,0,B|256:220|256:220|280:220|312:224|340:272|316:324|288:328|248:328,1,240

1. 00:16:163 (5,6) - Spostali entrambi a x:256 y:24 per farli rimanere equidistanti col precedente slider e per renderli un pattern triangolare bello da vedere
2. 00:19:571 (5,6) - Spostali entrambi a x:232 y:24 per farli rimanere equidistanti col precedente slider e per renderli un pattern triangolare bello da vedere
3. 00:30:435 (1,2,3,4) - Trasformali così,flowwano molto meglio rispetto al pattern attuale:
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   128,48,30435,5,0
   200,80,30648,2,0,B|232:112|280:112|312:80,1,125
   384,48,31074,1,0
   432,112,31287,2,0,B|400:144|400:192|432:224,1,125

4. 00:31:926 (1,2,3,4,5) - Altro suggerimento,sia ritmico che riguardo il pattern: guarda qui sotto e capirai cosa intendo:
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   104,312,31926,5,0
   104,312,32139,2,0,B|144:312|144:312|184:352|184:352|256:352,1,125
   256,240,32565,1,0
   299,352,32779,2,0,B|328:352|328:352|368:312|368:312|408:312,2,125
   256,240,33418,1,0

5. 00:44:708 (3) - Ctrl+R,questo jump non ci sta proprio D:
6. 01:28:377 (1) - Questo antijump spezza completamente il flow,ed è molto fastidioso da giocare. Potresti sistemare ciò posizionando/modificando il pattern in un altro modo,come in questa immagine.

1. 00:21:701 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Oh beh,questo jump non è sto granchè parlando di flow,che anzi è piuttosto innaturale. Io ti direi di modificarlo così,vedi poi se ti piace (imho,così flowwa MOLTO MEGLIO rispetto a prima):
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   256,40,21701,5,0
   200,240,21914,1,2
   312,136,22127,1,0
   200,136,22340,1,2
   312,240,22553,1,0
   256,344,22766,1,0
   160,192,22979,1,2
   352,192,23192,1,2

2. 00:25:110 (1) - Come detto prima,questo antijump non ci sta proprio bene,faresti prima a stackarlo con 00:25:323 (2) - :\
3. 00:25:962 (3) - ^
4. 00:29:370 (5,6,7,8) - Ancora,modifica l'ordine di questi cerchi in modo da flowware meglio con 00:28:518 (1,2,3,4) - ,come in questa immagine
5. 01:09:418 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Come sopra
6. 01:28:590 (2) - CTRL+R qui ci sta molto bene IMHO.
   A parte per vari jump abbastanza senza senso va più o meno bene

-kevincela- wrote:

Ohai

[Generale]

1. Ci sono 2 .osb nella cartella,eliminali e full submitta Fixed
2. I preview time di tutte le diff sono diversi, ricorda di settarli tutti allo stesso punto! Fixed
3. Ci sono inoltre varie unsnapped inherited points,ricordati di snapparli tutti

Appena ho voglia asd

[RikiH's Normal] Lascio decidere a Riki quali fixare e quali no.

1. 00:19:145 (3) - (nazi)Non allineato con 00:18:293 (2) -
2. 00:26:601 - Ti direi di aggiungere una nota qui,in quanto senza la mappa risulta vuota qui e quindi pittosto disagevole da giocare.
3. 00:28:518 (1) - Un piccolo suggerimento,potresti attribuire allo slider una curva per migliorare il dropoff avvenuto con 00:29:370 (2) - : risulterà molto naturale da giocare visto il suo flow migliorato!
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   256,168,28518,6,0,B|224:144|224:88|256:64,1,120

4. 00:42:152 (1) - Sposta il new combo su 00:41:299 (2) - : è meglio isolare 00:40:447 (1) - avendo un sintetizzatore tutto suo.
5. 00:46:412 (3) - Ad ora questo slider ci sta,ma io ti consiglierei piuttosto di ruotarlo in questo modo. Facendo così il flow con 00:45:560 (2) - scorrerà meglio,e a dirla tutta ci sta anche meglio esteticamente :3
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   340,364,46412,2,0,B|397:356|449:317,1,120
   468,224,47264,1,0
   396,168,47690,6,0,B|456:124|452:28|380:-8|308:8,1,240

6. 01:09:418 (2) - Piccola cosa graifca: non ho nulla contro questo slider,ma potresti migliorarlo come qui sotto:
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   256,160,69418,2,0,B|256:220|256:220|280:220|312:224|340:272|316:324|288:328|248:328,1,240

[Hard]

1. 00:16:163 (5,6) - Spostali entrambi a x:256 y:24 per farli rimanere equidistanti col precedente slider e per renderli un pattern triangolare bello da vedere Noh, mi piacciono così
2. 00:19:571 (5,6) - Spostali entrambi a x:232 y:24 per farli rimanere equidistanti col precedente slider e per renderli un pattern triangolare bello da vedere ^
3. 00:30:435 (1,2,3,4) - Trasformali così,flowwano molto meglio rispetto al pattern attuale: Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   128,48,30435,5,0
   200,80,30648,2,0,B|232:112|280:112|312:80,1,125
   384,48,31074,1,0
   432,112,31287,2,0,B|400:144|400:192|432:224,1,125

4. 00:31:926 (1,2,3,4,5) - Altro suggerimento,sia ritmico che riguardo il pattern: guarda qui sotto e capirai cosa intendo: Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   104,312,31926,5,0
   104,312,32139,2,0,B|144:312|144:312|184:352|184:352|256:352,1,125
   256,240,32565,1,0
   299,352,32779,2,0,B|328:352|328:352|368:312|368:312|408:312,2,125
   256,240,33418,1,0

5. 00:44:708 (3) - Ctrl+R,questo jump non ci sta proprio D: Fixed
6. 01:28:377 (1) - Questo antijump spezza completamente il flow,ed è molto fastidioso da giocare. Potresti sistemare ciò posizionando/modificando il pattern in un altro modo,come in questa immagine. Fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:21:701 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Oh beh,questo jump non è sto granchè parlando di flow,che anzi è piuttosto innaturale. Io ti direi di modificarlo così,vedi poi se ti piace (imho,così flowwa MOLTO MEGLIO rispetto a prima): Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   256,40,21701,5,0
   200,240,21914,1,2
   312,136,22127,1,0
   200,136,22340,1,2
   312,240,22553,1,0
   256,344,22766,1,0
   160,192,22979,1,2
   352,192,23192,1,2

2. 00:25:110 (1) - Come detto prima,questo antijump non ci sta proprio bene,faresti prima a stackarlo con 00:25:323 (2) - :\ Non pi piace stickato, ho fatto un po' a modo mio ma non mi convince tanto, poi magari cambio
3. 00:25:962 (3) - ^ ^
4. 00:29:370 (5,6,7,8) - Ancora,modifica l'ordine di questi cerchi in modo da flowware meglio con 00:28:518 (1,2,3,4) - ,come in questa immagine Fixed
5. 01:09:418 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Come sopra Fixed
6. 01:28:590 (2) - CTRL+R qui ci sta molto bene IMHO. Fixed
   A parte per vari jump abbastanza senza senso va più o meno bene

Richiamami in seguito quando hai finito tutto incluso hitsounds e hai ricevuto qualche mod,così mi addentro più nel dettaglio,sopratutto nella parte grafica Okay

• • Immagino che Aquinox sia colui che ha fatto questo remix, vero? Ad ogni modo, levalo dalla source e mettilo nelle tags.
  • Aggiungi "RikiH" nelle tags.
  • Ti consiglio di rendere consistente il kiai time fra le varie difficoltà, cioè fallo partire/finire negli stessi punti.
  • Converti il BG in .jpg per alleggerire la dimensione del file.
  • Preview Point: 00:27:027
  • Ci sono tante sezioni timing verdi non snappate in ogni difficoltà, sistemale mettendole perfettamente sui tick.

• • HP Drain Rate: 4
  • Approach Rate: 4
  • 00:14:033 (x) - Aggiungi un cerchio.
  • 00:14:459 (x) - ^ (ovviamente se preferisci al posto di questi due cerchi puoi aggiungere uno slider)
  • 00:28:518 (1) - Rimuovi la "New Combo".
  • 00:34:057 (3) - Aggiungi una "New Combo"
  • 00:35:335 (1) - Rimuovi la "New Combo".
  • 00:42:152 (1) - ^
  • 00:52:377 (1) - ^
  • 00:54:507 (1) - ^
  • 00:54:933 (1) - ^
  • 01:06:436 (1) - Fai partire questo spinner a 01:05:158 e aggiungi un "Finish", suona bene imo.
  • 01:18:365 (3) - Aggiungi una "New Combo"
  • 01:19:644 (1) - Rimuovi la "New Combo".
  • 01:23:052 (1) - ^
  • 01:32:425 (1) - ^
  • 01:32:851 (1) - ^

• • HP Drain Rate: 6
  • Overall Difficulty: 6
  • 00:14:033 (x) - Aggiungi un cerchio.
  • 00:14:246 (x) - ^
  • 00:14:459 (x) - ^
  • 00:24:471 (3) - Rimuovi la ripetizione dello slider.
  • 00:33:205 (5,6,7) - Ci sono due cerchi di troppo, eliminali.

• • HP Drain Rate: 8
  • 00:14:033 (x) - Aggiungi un cerchio.
  • 00:14:246 (x) - ^
  • 00:14:459 (x) - ^

xxheroxx wrote:

[General]

• • Immagino che Aquinox sia colui che ha fatto questo remix, vero? Ad ogni modo, levalo dalla source e mettilo nelle tags. Fixed
  • Aggiungi "RikiH" nelle tags. Fixed
  • Ti consiglio di rendere consistente il kiai time fra le varie difficoltà, cioè fallo partire/finire negli stessi punti. Fixed
  • Converti il BG in .jpg per alleggerire la dimensione del file. Nope, cala la qualità poi.
  • Preview Point: 00:27:027 Nope :V
  • Ci sono tante sezioni timing verdi non snappate in ogni difficoltà, sistemale mettendole perfettamente sui tick. Fixed

[RikiH's Normal]

• • HP Drain Rate: 4
  • Approach Rate: 4
  • 00:14:033 (x) - Aggiungi un cerchio.
  • 00:14:459 (x) - ^ (ovviamente se preferisci al posto di questi due cerchi puoi aggiungere uno slider)
  • 00:28:518 (1) - Rimuovi la "New Combo".
  • 00:34:057 (3) - Aggiungi una "New Combo"
  • 00:35:335 (1) - Rimuovi la "New Combo".
  • 00:42:152 (1) - ^
  • 00:52:377 (1) - ^
  • 00:54:507 (1) - ^
  • 00:54:933 (1) - ^
  • 01:06:436 (1) - Fai partire questo spinner a 01:05:158 e aggiungi un "Finish", suona bene imo.
  • 01:18:365 (3) - Aggiungi una "New Combo"
  • 01:19:644 (1) - Rimuovi la "New Combo".
  • 01:23:052 (1) - ^
  • 01:32:425 (1) - ^
  • 01:32:851 (1) - ^
  
  Lascio fare a Riki.

[Hard]

• • HP Drain Rate: 6 Fixed
  • Overall Difficulty: 6 Fixed
  • 00:14:033 (x) - Aggiungi un cerchio.
  • 00:14:246 (x) - ^
  • 00:14:459 (x) - ^ Aggiunto slider al posto dei 3 cerchi.
  • 00:24:471 (3) - Rimuovi la ripetizione dello slider. Fixed
  • 00:33:205 (5,6,7) - Ci sono due cerchi di troppo, eliminali. Fixed

[Insane]

• • HP Drain Rate: 8 Fixed
  • 00:14:033 (x) - Aggiungi un cerchio.
  • 00:14:246 (x) - ^
  • 00:14:459 (x) - ^ Aggiunto slider al posto dei 3 cerchi.

1. 00:19:145 (3) - (nazi)Non allineato con 00:18:293 (2) - Fixed
2. 00:26:601 - Ti direi di aggiungere una nota qui,in quanto senza la mappa risulta vuota qui e quindi pittosto disagevole da giocare. Dato che l'ho fatto anche prima, fixed
3. 00:28:518 (1) - Un piccolo suggerimento,potresti attribuire allo slider una curva per migliorare il dropoff avvenuto con 00:29:370 (2) - : risulterà molto naturale da giocare visto il suo flow migliorato!
   
   SPOILER

   Yep
   

   256,168,28518,6,0,B|224:144|224:88|256:64,1,120

4. 00:42:152 (1) - Sposta il new combo su 00:41:299 (2) - : è meglio isolare 00:40:447 (1) - avendo un sintetizzatore tutto suo. Sono un idiota, iniziare il kiai senza NC lol
5. 00:46:412 (3) - Ad ora questo slider ci sta,ma io ti consiglierei piuttosto di ruotarlo in questo modo. Facendo così il flow con 00:45:560 (2) - scorrerà meglio,e a dirla tutta ci sta anche meglio esteticamente :3 Meh, preferisco come è ora xD
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   340,364,46412,2,0,B|397:356|449:317,1,120
   468,224,47264,1,0
   396,168,47690,6,0,B|456:124|452:28|380:-8|308:8,1,240

6. 01:09:418 (2) - Piccola cosa graifca: non ho nulla contro questo slider,ma potresti migliorarlo come qui sotto: Un po' migliorato
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   256,160,69418,2,0,B|256:220|256:220|280:220|312:224|340:272|316:324|288:328|248:328,1,240

• • HP Drain Rate: 4
  • Approach Rate: 4 Fixati entrambi
  • 00:14:033 (x) - Aggiungi un cerchio. Non me gusta molto...
  • 00:14:459 (x) - ^ (ovviamente se preferisci al posto di questi due cerchi puoi aggiungere uno slider) Meh, se un altro modder me lo dice lo fixo
  • 00:28:518 (1) - Rimuovi la "New Combo". Why? D:
  • 00:34:057 (3) - Aggiungi una "New Combo" Sì
  • 00:35:335 (1) - Rimuovi la "New Combo". Yep
  • 00:42:152 (1) - ^ Va bene qui
  • 00:52:377 (1) - ^ ^
  • 00:54:507 (1) - ^ Tolta la NC
  • 00:54:933 (1) - ^ Idem
  • 01:06:436 (1) - Fai partire questo spinner a 01:05:158 e aggiungi un "Finish", suona bene imo. ...Done?
  • 01:18:365 (3) - Aggiungi una "New Combo"
  • 01:19:644 (1) - Rimuovi la "New Combo". Penso vada bene così
  • 01:23:052 (1) - ^
  • 01:32:425 (1) - ^
  • 01:32:851 (1) - ^

Nemis wrote:

[Hard]
00:16:802 (1,2,3) - Stackali come in 00:20:210 (1,2,3) - Fixed
00:36:400 (4) - Alzalo un po' in modo da poterlo distanziare dagli slider precedenti sotto Fixed
00:37:252 (1,2) - Dii conseguenza sposta anche questi più in alto Fixed
00:48:968 (1,2,3,4) - Stackali (anche se io ce li vedrei meglio così http://puu.sh/1a7bV ) Fixed
00:54:294 (1,2) - Rendili più aderenti Fixed
01:10:484 (4) - Spostalo di uno in basso, è maldistanziato Fixed
01:11:336 (1,2,3,4) - Maldistanziati e non simmetrici Fixed
01:13:466 (3,4) - Li avvicinerei, ma stan bene anche così Fixed
01:24:969 (1,2) - Rendili più aderenti con 01:25:821 (3,4) - Fixed
01:35:833 (3) - Stacka Fixed

[Insane]
00:25:110 (1,2,3,4) - Stacka i due beat allo slider oppure spostali, io faccio abbastanza fatica a prenderli Ho cambiato le forme degli slider, in modo da farli più corti e li ho allontanati
00:42:152 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Sistema la stella xD Se non lo sai per farla perfetta basta andare in Compose > Create Polygon Circles
Mapperei da 01:07:927 a 01:09:205 Nope, viene una merda lol
01:12:827 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Qui sarebbe meglio che nel secondo quadrato partissi da 01:13:892 (6) - anzichè da 01:13:679 (5) - Fixed
01:26:673 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Farei due triangoli http://puu.sh/1a7ma Mi piacciono più come sono ora
Da 01:31:786 trovo esagerata la slider velocity, però ci sta MAIH LOL [/size][/notice]

Buona fortuna

Nemis wrote:

[General]
La normal ha troppi slider di diversa forma per me, però va a gusti. Nella hard non mi convincono per niente alcuni jumps, essendo appunto un'hard non ce li vedo proprio... invece nella insane ci stanno benissimo

[RikiH's Normal]
00:35:335 (2) - Lo muoverei di un quadrato verso destra giusto per renderlo aderente con lo slider prima (00:34:057 (1) - Boh, ok
00:40:447 (1) - Toglierei la new combo, è abbastanza inutile avere solo uno slider in una combo (anche se nel ritmo quella new combo ci sta) NOH, poi inizia il kiai, non voglio iniziarlo senza una NC, e poi segue la musica
00:52:377 (4) - Togli la new combo, non c'è stata fin ora in quel punto! Done
01:09:418 (2) - Migliorerei un po' questa forma Fatto, meglio di così non saprei come farla xD
01:23:052 (4) - Toglierei la new combo Nah

Thank you bro

[Hard]
00:16:802 (1,2,3) - Stackali come in 00:20:210 (1,2,3) -
00:36:400 (4) - Alzalo un po' in modo da poterlo distanziare dagli slider precedenti sotto
00:37:252 (1,2) - Dii conseguenza sposta anche questi più in altoc
00:48:968 (1,2,3,4) - Stackali (anche se io ce li vedrei meglio così http://puu.sh/1a7bV
00:54:294 (1,2) - Rendili più aderenti
01:10:484 (4) - Spostalo di uno in basso, è maldistanziato
01:11:336 (1,2,3,4) - Maldistanziati e non simmetrici
01:13:466 (3,4) - Li avvicinerei, ma stan bene anche così
01:24:969 (1,2) - Rendili più aderenti con 01:25:821 (3,4) -
01:35:833 (3) - Stacka

[Insane]
00:25:110 (1,2,3,4) - Stacka i due beat allo slider oppure spostali, io faccio abbastanza fatica a prenderli
00:42:152 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Sistema la stella xD Se non lo sai per farla perfetta basta andare in Compose > Create Polygon Circles
Mapperei da 01:07:927 a 01:09:205
01:12:827 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Qui sarebbe meglio che nel secondo quadrato partissi da 01:13:892 (6) - anzichè da 01:13:679 (5) -
01:26:673 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Farei due triangoli http://puu.sh/1a7ma
Da 01:31:786 trovo esagerata la slider velocity, però ci sta

Buona fortuna

Roxas wrote:

Yo

[Generale]

Ci sono due .osb file, cancellali tutti e due visto che non c'è una storyboard, poi converti il bg in jpg (queste due cose sono obbligatorie) e full upload Appena ho voglia
Adda RikiH_ in tutte le tag di tutte le diff Già c'è...
Inconsistenza nel kiai in tutte le diff, controlla per bene Fixed
Ci sono delle linee verdi non snappate, niente di importante xD

[Riki's merdosa normal ♥]

00:31:926 (2) - Simmetrizza :V
00:34:057 (1) - ^

[Hard]

Aggiungi gli hitsounds come messi nella Insane Non sono capace. :V
00:46:838 (3) - Non capisco i due punti rossi rofl Tolti anche se non cambiava un cazzo
01:11:975 (3) - Fai per bene la simmetria ctrl+h Fatta

Alcuni pattern non sono buonissimi, ma non sono errori è un fatto di gusto

[Insane]

00:29:370 (5,6) - Togli whistle e aggiungili su 7 e 8 Fixed
01:09:631 - whistle qui a fine slider Messo sullo slider, non so come metterlo a fine slider D:
01:10:057 - ^ ^
01:12:827 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Da qua in poi hai sbagliato gli whistle seguili come prima lol Ma non son capace, non capisco che cambia D:

Good luck xD avevo scritto lick LOL

Gabe wrote:

Hi Kiyro~
Reply on what you haven't fixed and why you denied it.

When it's in Bold, it's because it's an important point;
When it's in Bold/Red, it means that it's really important/unrankable.

[General]

•I wonder why, the slider velocity are so high for Hard and Insane when the Normal difficulty has a Slider Velocity of 1.20. There's something wrong for sure here. Since the spread goes from 1.20 to 2.50 to 2.70.
By looking at the other difficulties (Hard, Insane) the SV is really too high. As said above, try to keep the spread at around.. 1,20 > 1,40 > 1,60. I make it 1.20 > 1.50 > 2.00
•Since the song is getting more calm to 01:29:017, the Kiai time should end there on every difficulty. Fixed.
•00:14:033 - On every difficulties, Why there's nothing here? We should be starting playing there. So add a slider from 00:14:033 to 00:14:459 or even, add two circles on both points. Nope. I don't like it.
•For Hard and Insane, the Hard difficulty does not have any hitsounds and the Insane's one are very inconsistent. Try to use the Normal's hitsounds for both Hard and Insane. Call me back after doing this. Insane's hitsounds fixed.

[Hard]

00:41:512 - Why is this Kiai time starting here? Fixed.
01:22:626 - Same as above ^ Fixed.
Remember that there's no hitsounds here. I'll add them as soon as possible

Objects mod

This box means that I am looking at flows and useless circle/slider that doesn't sound really good or even, doesn't fit well for the difficulty.
•00:19:145 (4,5,6) - Spacing error right here. Fixed.
•00:24:471 (3,1) - This can make so much problem because the cicle (1) to too much closer from the slider and it breaks the spacing. Fixed.
•01:15:170 (2,4) - These kind of slider are now unrankable, as I know.. Fixed.

[Insane]

HP Drain 8 is too high. Make it to 7 (-1) Fixed.
-1 to OD & AR Nope. It's to easy with Od 7 and Ar 8

Objects mod

This box means that I am looking at flows and useless circle/slider that doesn't sound really good or even, doesn't fit well for the difficulty.
•00:52:377 (1,6) - As I know, these kind of sliders are now unrankable. Try to change their forms. [/color]
•01:14:744 (1,2) - These sliders looks weird. Here's the code for the new sliders v . v If you need help for this, poke me ingame. Thanks :3

SPOILER

200,80,74744,6,0,B|184:24|256:-24|328:24|312:80,2,202.500007724762,2|0|0
312,304,75383,2,0,B|328:360|256:408|184:360|200:304,2,202.500007724762,2|0|0

As said in the General, call me back from an Hitsound mod.

LunarSakuya wrote:

hi ^^

General
You BG is over 1mb, you should probably recompress in photoshop or something Fixed

RikiH's Normal
00:14:033 - Add something here so the notes don't start at an awkward beat
00:37:465 (1) - you could extend the red point so the slider ball turns on the beat http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/456530
01:13:253 (3,4) - Try replacing by copy & pasting (1) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/456532
01:22:200 (1) - Finish

Hard
I'm guessing hitsounds aren't finished lol Lol i know.

00:14:033 - Add something ...okay D:
00:15:737 (4,5,6) - equal spacing please Not fixed
00:19:784 (7,6) - can't have 2 notes on the same spot, delete one Omg, fixed lol
00:33:418 (5,1,2,3,4) - Maybe lessen distance a bit so the difference is not too extreme for hard Fixed
00:36:400 (4) - Try to match the reverse end with 00:37:252 (1,2) - Fixed
00:48:968 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe stack the ends instead, players maybe confuse it for 1/2 rhythm Not fixed
00:54:933 (2) - Ctrl + J looks cooler imo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/456546 Fixed
01:11:336 (1,2,3,4) - Space out a little like the others Wtf D:

Insane
Mssing all the claps? Wut D:

00:14:033 - again, add something Fixed
01:17:087 (4,5) - Try replacing by copy & pasting (1) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/456554 if you want Nope :c
Nice symmetry & jumps xD Thanks :3

Good luck!!

Gio96b wrote:

Mod

Hard:
00:22:766 - Aggiugni un beat qui? Suona incompleto Wut, fixed D:
00:48:968 (1,2,3,4) - Fai combaciare la fine dello slider con l'inizio del seguente N O .
01:30:721 (5) - Bruttino questo slider xD Prova a migliorarlo Fixed.

• 00:14:033 (1) - I do not see a reason for the red point and the bend in the end here
  00:14:885 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not too sure if consistent distance suits the best here, for example, I get the impression of 7-8 having a stronger impact in the song than 1-6
  00:16:802 (1,2) - come on, this is a huge-ass mirrorjump without a reason, don't do this; there is no epic loud "BOOM"-ish sound in the song to justify that, just arrange it in a more calm way
  
  
  like that maybe?

  
  
  I like this because the sliderends are bent to point towards each other which gives it more of a belonging-together feel
  
  00:18:293 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same as for 00:14:885
  00:20:210 (1,2) - same as for 00:16:802
  00:21:701 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this feels like a good idea for the soundpattern of 00:14:885 / 00:18:293 ; maybe keep such an idea in mind and build other patterns based on the spacing-relations in this one (because pattern-recycling is meeh and not-so-nice)
  00:23:619 (1,2,3) - this seems more fine than 00:16:802 / 00:20:210, though I think you could replace 3 by a CTRL-J, CTRL-G-ed version of 1, also adding another circle on next 1's location to keep the slider-circle style of this pattern
  00:25:323 (2,4) - i don't enjoy these bumps in there; do not feel or see a reason in the song to add these (also, about the pattern, one-axis-patterns feel meeh and suchs; in adition, 2 and 4 get too close to each other with their reverse point locations which feels awkward to me but that is mostly artistic); they give a stucky feeling which is not too flow-improving
  00:27:451 (3) - if you want a slider here, it'd have to start on the white tick because there is the reasoned sound for it; replace the current start with a circle and arrange to your likings (though I do not really see the point behind that little snaky shape?)
  
  00:28:515 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - as for similar patterns before, I feel more impact in 7-8 than in the pairs of circles before, might do something about that
  00:31:919 (1,2,3,4) - 3-4 get another sound to them in the song so it feels "stronger" and thus they feel as if they should have more distance in-between them than 1-2, also, the current overlap is somewhat not-too nice because the sliders nearly blend over each other and that... lets say is not pretty
  00:33:834 (1,2) - no reason for the bumps in sliders here, also, the mirrorjump is kinda wide and if you want to have one, I suggest a CTRL-H one instead of CTRL-H/J combined; in general, sliders should lead into the objects following them which would be the case if you used CTRL-H here instead of CTRL-H/J
  00:37:238 (1,2,3,4) - that jump is huge, please scale it down, that's nearly the whole playfield without a specific reason
  00:38:727 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I find this too clustered; 1-2-3-4 will partly overlap 6 with their hitbursts and that is not a too good feeling; I suggest moving 2-3 a bit more down and widen their distance, putting 5 down aswell and placing 6 a bit different; after that, you can also arrange 7-8
  
  
  as in, this or smth

  
  
  This will not cause overlap-errors and gives more of a fluent and constructive feeling to me
  
  00:40:642 (1,2,3,4) - use changed 1-2-3-4 of previous combo in mirrored version here, suits better aswell imo
  
  00:44:046 (1,2) - still not a fan of the bumps and mirrorjumps of these, they lack flow as they do not lead into each other and their movement and shape are stucky
  00:46:387 (5,6,7,8) - I suggest scaling these more up so they do not overlap with the hitbursts and -circles of 1-2-3-4, also gives more of a growing feel which is pretty neat in this case
  00:47:451 (1,2) - mirrorstuff may be bettered out to lead into the respective next objects (1 -> 2, 2 -> next combo)
  00:48:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is a very harsh and evil pattern as it requires wide- and short movement to be switched continuously which is hard to do on cornerjumps, I suggest replacing this with something that flows more and is more consistent to not have people go like "oh DARN this pattern I can't get through this" because I assume that'll happen to many
  00:50:855 (1,2) - the usual about these slidercombos, I find them too wide and unflowy
  00:54:685 (3) - do not see the reason for snaky-ish slider here
  
  01:06:068 (1) - I think this spinner should start somewhere around ~01:06:812, on the big white tick
  01:09:365 (1,2) - I find these too upscaled in distance, as in similar mirrorpatterns
  01:14:684 (1) - this speedup here came very sudden and without any expectable feedback from the song, please do not do this, it does not seem fitting
  01:16:174 (1) - the overlap with previous 1-2 is pretty not-so-pretty so please change that and use another shape or smth
  01:17:450 (6) - bumpy slider seems unfitting as the ones before
  01:18:088 (1,2) - well this mirrorpattern is more k, guess you can keep that distance
  01:29:017 - the kiai is ending pretty suddenly, could you try to give it a better transition to nonkiai?
  01:31:705 (1,2) - the overlap is meeh here
  01:33:195 (1,2) - this is very highly scaled again, I suggest CTRL-G-ing 2 and adjusting the following circles so there is not such a huge distance in this pattern because the kiai also ended before
  01:35:110 (1,2,3) - this should be a very more downscaled pattern since the song is decrescending very strongly (meaning it gets less strong); also, 3 should not have a reverse arrow but end where the arrow currently is and you should add a 5% volume spinner behind it that ends at about 01:39:153 (big white tick around there)

• 00:14:033 (1) - bumpy slider makes no sense to me as mentioned in Insane
  00:15:098 (2,4) - well these snakies are more k than the ones in insane, though still, I find them a bit questionable
  00:16:163 (5,6) - I suggest CTRL-G-ing these because 4 points towards 6 and thus people will play that first, it makes more sense in flow.
  00:16:802 (1) - this is too closely spaced and will likely be hit too early; also, the overlap with 4 makes it feel awkward at the current position and I'd recommend you to have it take flow out of the 6-1 motion rather than point-to-point 6 and 1 and then go into 1's curve -> try to keep and ongoing, smooth movement
  00:16:802 (1,2,3) - not too much a fan of this stop-go movement here, why not space them out
  00:16:802 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - oh this is lazy; apply the same stuff as for mentioned above
  00:21:701 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I suggest variating in spacing here; keeping the same zig-zag-distance is somewhat boring and you had more variation in Insane aswell - don't upscale too much though
  00:27:666 (2) - use a CTRL-H/J-ed version of 1 instead of trying to rebuild, that works better for this kind of pattern
  00:29:583 (4) - ^
  00:32:565 (3) - compared to previous patterns, this circle is somewhat widely spaced, consider scaling it down
  00:33:418 (5) - ^
  00:33:844 (1,3) - these are not properly symmetrical, please work that out without gridsnap on
  00:35:548 (2,3,4) - the sliderbows here are clunchy, also, 4 is a bit uglyishly overlapped by 2-3 and their hitbursts
  00:37:891 (2) - CTRL-H 1 here
  
  00:40:660 (1,2) - no fan of this because of the big spacing and most likely a probable abuse of slider leniency by players (as in, they will jump out of the slider before it is finished and 300 it anyways)
  00:43:004 (4) - work this more out so it has the exact same shape as 2 (for that, CTRL-H it and play around with the sliderpoints until it overlaps it perfectly, 100%; turn gridsnap off for such stuff)
  00:43:643 (6,1) - that distance is wide; whole playfield in 1/1 is too far for a hard diff, consider CTRL-H for following part/pattern?
  00:45:560 (1,2) - these feel too clunhed because of the low distance and sharp angles between the red sliderpoints; stretch it more out and suchs - also, 2 should start 1/2 later and there should be a circle on where it currently starts (for rhythm and consistently in suchs, that is)
  00:47:477 (1,2) - no fan of this stop-go, but it should go k if you want to keep it; you should work the curves more out though, they feel unbalanced and too harsh at parts
  00:48:542 (3,1) - again, this distance is kinda wide for a "pause moment", also in a hard diff
  00:48:968 (1,2,3,4) - I'd like you to have more variation in slidershapes here, also, due to the distance in-between the objects, these might get misshit as 1/4 instead of 1/2-"breaks" from object to object
  00:50:246 (4,1) - again, a wide distance for a break moment
  00:50:885 (1,3,4) - Jenny does not enjoy one-axis-movement, consider a more bowy-flowy shape, also leading into the next combo
  00:51:098 (2) - clunchy red points are clunchy and do not make sense to Jenny, as in Insane, please consider change
  00:52:377 (1) - you could make this blanket 2 or smth, just a suggestion tho
  00:52:377 (1,2,3,4) - one-axis-pattern again, please change
  00:53:868 (4,1) - very wide movement again, not too sure if that fits
  
  01:06:010 (1) - same about the spinner as in Insane
  01:11:336 (1,2,3,4) - the distance between these is very inconsistent when compared to similar combos earlier, please change this so it is more consistent and readable, right now it looks like 1/3 spacing
  01:13:892 (5) - correct the shape without gridsnap so it has 100% the same form and flow like 2
  01:13:892 (5,6,1,2) - these feel too clustered, especcially because of their hitbursts; consider spacing out or arranging so they do not overlap/recycle each other's positions too much
  01:16:448 (2,4) - clunchy redpoints again
  
  About the little kiai here: I find the slider variation more appropriate here because the song turns into a more different tone, though, you might work on balancing your curves and shapes more out.
  01:24:969 (1,2) - let these blanket 3/4 correctly; for that, turn gridsnap off and play around with points
  
  01:29:869 (1,2) - the distance here is quite huge compared to the rest of the map but I thiiiink it could be k
  01:30:721 (5) - redpoints feel ugly again
  01:32:425 (2,1) - again huge distance for a "pause moment"
  01:34:555 (5) - redpoints
  01:35:833 (3) - as in Insane, a spinner with 5% soft-volume after this would do well

• 00:31:926 (2) - ^ that, and also, you can balance this more out and make it really symmetric
  00:34:057 (1) - symmetric needs more workout here aswell
  00:35:335 (2,3) - I suggest changing these so 3 starts on where 1 ended, gives a better feel
  
  00:43:856 (5) - that might be me but this feels too close to previous 3, move it further away; also, I suggest building an equal triangle out of 4's end, 5 and 1's starting point; a bit more systematics and aesthetics may suit well
  00:47:690 (1) - adjust this to blanket 2 and go better with its approach circle
  
  01:09:418 (2) - you could use the above-mentioned slidertick on this slider to continue your clappattern
  01:12:827 (2,3,4,5,6) - this square feels a bit clunched because of the angles between 2-3 and 4-5 which do not have the same amount of degrees as 3-4, 5-6; make it more equal
  01:14:957 (1) - a bit pickyness here but you could arrange it so the slidertick is exactly in the "peak" of the slider as in, where the red point is
  01:16:235 (2) - again, a custom slidertick with a clapsound would go well with this
  
  01:26:460 (2) - ^ (also, I like this shape)
  01:28:590 (1) - let this blanket 3's approach circle (as for everything with blanketting, turn gridsnap off here)
  01:29:869 (2,3) - I find these a bit too harsh, they do not lead into each other too well; consider change of angles here

Hard

kurohana wrote:

Hard

1. 00:24:471 (3) - Ctrl+G to remove spacing mistake
2. 01:11:336 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing

Well, that's short Good map, checked all diffs and couldn't find anything ^^
Good luck with rank :3

Snepif wrote:

Well there's not much to say about this map. The song is like 5 seconds mp3 repeating over and over and over and over AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER well you get the point xD

Manny wrote:

Snepif wrote:

Well there's not much to say about this map. The song is like 5 seconds mp3 repeating over and over and over and over AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER well you get the point xD

I FUCKING AGREE.
Kaira mappi di merda. *Runs*

Snepif wrote:

stavo parlando della canzone

not about the map

Snepif wrote:

Hello!
M4M I guess

[General]

The metronome is offbeat, the big white tick is where it shouldn't be, move the offset to 13180.
No need to resnap anything.
[/color]

From AIBat cuz i'm lazy:

Kiai Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

[Hard] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:41:299, ends on 00:55:323 Kiai #2: Starts on 01:22:200, ends on 01:29:017
[Insane] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:41:299, ends on 00:55:355 Kiai #2: Starts on 01:22:200, ends on 01:29:017
[RikiH's Normal] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:41:299, ends on 00:54:933 Kiai #2: Starts on 01:22:200, ends on 01:35:833

Make all of them equal please~~ Fixed





[Normal]

Mostly NC mod~~ don't pay attention to the "(1), (2), etc." because i changed them, only look at the times.

00:14:033 (1) - Add a note?
00:17:015 (1) - Remove NC
00:18:293 (2) - Add NC
00:20:423 (1) - Remove NC
00:21:701 (2) - Add NC
00:23:832 (1) - Remove NC
00:25:110 (2) - Add NC
00:30:648 (1) - Remove NC
00:31:926 (7) - Add NC
00:34:057 (2) - Remove NC
00:35:335 (1) - Add NC
00:36:187 (4) - Stack with 00:34:057 (2) - 's end
00:37:465 (1) - Remove NC
00:38:743 (2) - Add NC
00:40:447 (1) - Remove NC
00:44:282 (1) - Remove NC..
00:45:560 (7) - Add NC
00:47:690 (1) - Remove NC
00:48:968 (1) - Add NC. Also improve this blanket:
SPOILER00:51:098 (1) - Remove NC
00:52:377 (7) - Add NC

........... And keep moving the NCs to the big white ticks, okay?

01:28:164 (3) - Fix this blanket:
SPOILER
[Hard]

00:14:033 (1) - Weird... uhmm i don't like this but meh it's okay Stfu bitch
00:16:802 (1,2,3) - Make this perfectly symmetric Fixed
00:20:210 (1) - ^ Fixed
00:33:844 (1) - I don't think these sudden jumps fit at all... better make these jumps be a bit closer. Fixed
00:53:229 (3) - This slider looks ugly here... make it less sharp Fixed
01:25:821 (3) - Improve this blanket please Fixed
01:30:721 (5) - This slider has a ..... a something.. lol make it straight or something Fixed lol

[Insane]

00:14:033 (1) - Add whistle at the start Fixed
00:25:323 (2) - Add whistle on the red ticks Fixed
00:28:518 (1,4) - WTF this antijump? Separate 1 from 4 a loooooooooot Fixed
01:14:744 (1) - I don't understeand this sudden increase on SV..... don't do this... it doesn't fit at all Fixed
01:31:786 (1) - ^ Nope :v


Well there's not much to say about this map. The song is like 5 seconds mp3 repeating over and over and over and over AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER well you get the point xD
Also all symmetry so... yeah i wish it had more variation and less symmetry but meh can't do anything about that! I lol'd so much

Good luck!

Snepif wrote:

stavo parlando della canzone

not about the map

Kiyro wrote:

Mi sono ufficialmente offeso. :c

Manny wrote:

Snepif wrote:

stavo parlando della canzone

not about the map

LOL I know, but I NEED to insult Kaira. Makes me so happy. <3

Kiyro wrote:

Mi sono ufficialmente offeso. :c

POVERO, SI E' OFFESO. SONO COSI' DISPIACIUTA, GUARDA.
Sento che se mai dovessi chiederti di "mappare" qualcosa per me mi manderesti cortesemente a fanculo, ma vabbe'.

Ma comunque Snepif parla spagnolo, certo che capisce l'italiano, idiota.