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F.I.R. - Your Smile

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Aunxfb
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, 28 July, 2012 at 4:28:49 PM

Artist: F.I.R.
Title: Your Smile
BPM: 124
Filesize: 6196kb
Play Time: 03:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.42 stars, 366 notes)
  2. Normal (4.09 stars, 296 notes)
Download: F.I.R. - Your Smile
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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[Hard]-Completed
[Normal]-Completed
[Easy]-Coming Soon
popner
Your current timing is OK, you can try -2, but it didn't make a difference.
The artist should be F.I.R. See this.
Topic Starter
Aunxfb
Lol, okay, thks ^^
Edit: Artist name fixed, thks xD
Pagliaccio
SPOILER
15:35 Pagliaccio: : which one?
15:36 Aunxfb: : O.O u from modreqs?...
15:36 Pagliaccio: : y
15:36 Aunxfb: : xD Thks!! Here~>http://osu.ppy.sh/b/165836
15:37 Aunxfb: : only [Hard] diff is completed.
15:45 Pagliaccio: : hm. i don't recommend you use normal circle size for hard diff, and on low bpm maps it looks a lot empty.
15:46 Aunxfb: : D:
15:46 Aunxfb: : Any tips to fix that?
15:46 Pagliaccio: : also, here is some unrankable techniques
15:47 Pagliaccio: : http://puu.sh/Jh08
15:47 Pagliaccio: : use this one
15:47 Pagliaccio: : 00:35:065 (5,7) -
15:47 Pagliaccio: : this is unrankable
15:49 Aunxfb: : Um.. So, 00:27:323 (5) - is fine?
15:51 Pagliaccio: : yes, but the blanket a lot weird
15:52 Aunxfb: : lol xD, so How do I fix 00:35:065 (5,7) - ?(Or tell me the mistake I'm making ><)
15:52 Pagliaccio: : try something like this
15:52 Pagliaccio: : http://puu.sh/Jh3E
15:53 Pagliaccio: : http://puu.sh/Jh3Z
15:53 Aunxfb: : O.O, I read the guide but I guessed I missed that part :P
15:54 Pagliaccio: : http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_criteria
15:54 Aunxfb: : Btw, nice sliders you have there xD
15:56 Pagliaccio: : not so good as i make it now
15:56 Pagliaccio: : just an advice for you
15:56 Aunxfb: : It's still way nicer than mine :P
15:57 Aunxfb: : So, have you played the whole song?
15:57 Pagliaccio: : sure
15:58 Aunxfb: : anything too serious that it needed to be remapped?
15:58 Pagliaccio: : http://puu.sh/Jh6I
15:58 Pagliaccio: : better make this a simle square
15:59 Aunxfb: : The pattern's too confusing?
15:59 Pagliaccio: : y
16:01 Aunxfb: : xD, Anything else?
16:01 Pagliaccio: : http://puu.sh/Jh8y
16:01 Pagliaccio: : http://puu.sh/Jh8V
16:01 Pagliaccio: : imo this one is better
16:01 Pagliaccio: : 01:29:017 -
16:01 Pagliaccio: : here
16:02 Pagliaccio: : and
16:02 Pagliaccio: : yhe next pattern
16:02 Pagliaccio: : 01:31:920 (4) -
16:02 Pagliaccio: : too many reverse arrows i think
16:03 Pagliaccio: : http://puu.sh/Jha1
16:04 Pagliaccio: : ofc its just a suggestion
16:05 Pagliaccio: : 01:34:823 -
16:05 Pagliaccio: : here is an incorrect rythm
16:05 Aunxfb: : yea, I noticed something was off in that part too :P
16:05 Pagliaccio: : it must be something like this
16:05 Pagliaccio: : http://puu.sh/JhaK
16:07 Aunxfb: : Hm... never think of that
16:08 Aunxfb: : btw,... how do ya take screenshots that quickly? O.o
16:08 Pagliaccio: : using puush tool
16:09 Pagliaccio: : 02:24:904 (5) -
16:09 Aunxfb: : umm...Sorry for being noob ><, but how do I do that?...
16:09 Pagliaccio: : wrong position of spider
16:10 Pagliaccio: : it must be started from here 02:25:146 -
16:10 Pagliaccio: : http://puush.me/
16:11 Aunxfb: : ooh~ nice tool you got there :D
16:11 Pagliaccio: : 02:34:582 -
16:12 Pagliaccio: : http://puu.sh/Jhf0
16:12 Pagliaccio: : mabye you find this one sounds better
16:12 Pagliaccio: : 02:37:969 -
16:13 Pagliaccio: : http://puu.sh/JhfA
16:13 Pagliaccio: : 02:44:017 -
16:14 Pagliaccio: : here i think the 3 single beats with a lot bigger spacing is looks better and follow the music more
16:15 Aunxfb: : should I make it into a triangle?
16:15 Pagliaccio: : as you wish
16:16 Pagliaccio: : 02:51:275 (4) -
16:16 Pagliaccio: : another tons of reverse arrows
16:16 Aunxfb: : That's bad? ><
16:16 Pagliaccio: : it's better to avoid that
16:16 Pagliaccio: : too confusing
16:17 Aunxfb: : Ok!*takes note*
16:17 Pagliaccio: : you can make some slider formations
16:17 Pagliaccio: : wait a moment i show you
16:19 Pagliaccio: : http://puu.sh/JhiT
16:19 Pagliaccio: : like this
16:19 Pagliaccio: : or the "windmill" formation with 3 or more sliders
16:20 Pagliaccio: : 02:54:178 (3) -
16:20 Pagliaccio: : here again the wrong rythm, listen to music carefully
16:20 Aunxfb: : yea, it's the same part like the first chorus, I think you'll find it in the final chorus too ><
16:21 Pagliaccio: : 03:35:065 -
16:21 Pagliaccio: : this jumps
16:21 Pagliaccio: : you can use a bigger spacing
16:22 Pagliaccio: : it's following the music, just watch the position of beats, it must be readable and intuitive
16:24 Pagliaccio: : 03:39:904 (2) -
16:24 Pagliaccio: : http://puu.sh/Jhmt
16:24 Pagliaccio: : is better i think
16:24 Pagliaccio: : and the following beats must be jumps
16:26 Pagliaccio: : *suggestion*
16:26 Pagliaccio: : http://puu.sh/Jhnx
16:26 Pagliaccio: : in the end
16:26 Pagliaccio: : last two beats - jump
16:26 Pagliaccio: : so
16:26 Pagliaccio: : that's all i think
16:27 Pagliaccio: : i'm not a good modder)
16:27 Aunxfb: : Lol, that's not true at all, you should start a modding queue xD
16:28 Pagliaccio: : i'm too lazy for that
16:28 Pagliaccio: : ^^
16:28 Pagliaccio: : http://puu.sh/Jhpf
16:28 Pagliaccio: : something like this one i make in my map
16:29 Pagliaccio: : :madness:
16:29 Aunxfb: : lol, that looks nice xD
16:33 Aunxfb: : btw, I would like to give you a kudo as a token of my appreciation(You're actually kind enough to look at my map
16:33 Aunxfb: : xD), but can you tell me how? :P (till now I've only been giving kudo using the"give a kudo" button at forum...)
16:34 Pagliaccio: : ok, i'll put this log under the spoiler to the forum thread
as you wish :)
1491625364981
來自M4M @.@ 以下不喜歡的可以略過

Nornal

00:36:759 - 這裡我建議與後面得轉圈合併聽起來好一點 而且那轉圈太短了新手轉不來
00:55:146 (2) - 結束在00:55:388 -
00:57:082 (3) - 結束在00:57:323 -
01:19:944 - 改成點
01:20:307 - 這裡改成滑條拉到01:20:791 -
01:31:194 (2) - 這裡建議改成兩個note+一個滑條拉到01:32:404 -
01:31:557 - 第一個note
01:31:557 - 第二個
01:36:033 (6) - 可拿可不拿
01:40:146 - 這轉圈太短
02:10:146 - 一樣太短@.@
02:13:049 (4) - 有點多餘..
02:14:985 (5) - ^
02:39:904 (5) - 可拿可不拿


Hard

00:28:170 - 加個點
00:35:912 - ^
01:31:194 (3) - 同normal
01:40:146 - 太短
02:01:073 - 加點
02:08:815 - 加點
02:19:823 (5) - 連點怪怪得改成連點會好一些
02:21:759 - ^
02:54:420 (4) - 節奏很奇怪 建議重下這滑條
02:59:501 - 太短 試試改成點如何
03:15:711 - 到03:27:082 - 有一點空洞 建議可以放一些簡單的節奏 不然乾脆做成休息時間


加油!!
Topic Starter
Aunxfb

1491625364981 wrote:

來自M4M @.@ 以下不喜歡的可以略過

Nornal

00:36:759 - 這裡我建議與後面得轉圈合併聽起來好一點 而且那轉圈太短了新手轉不來<mod 被接受
00:55:146 (2) - 結束在00:55:388 - <mod 被接受
00:57:082 (3) - 結束在00:57:323 - <mod 被接受
01:19:944 - 改成點 <mod 被接受
01:20:307 - 這裡改成滑條拉到01:20:791 - <mod 被接受
01:31:194 (2) - 這裡建議改成兩個note+一個滑條拉到01:32:404 -<节奏好像没什么太大的影响,所以略过了 :P
01:31:557 - 第一個note^
01:31:557 - 第二個^
01:36:033 (6) - 可拿可不拿<略过了,那里空着有点不跟节奏
01:40:146 - 這轉圈太短<*
02:10:146 - 一樣太短@.@<*
02:13:049 (4) - 有點多餘..<mod 被接受
02:14:985 (5) - ^<mod 被接受
02:39:904 (5) - 可拿可不拿<略过了,那里空着有点不跟节奏



Hard

00:28:170 - 加個點<mod 被接受
00:35:912 - ^<^
01:31:194 (3) - 同normal<mod 被接受,另外在01:31:920 - 01:32:162 - 加了个三连击
01:40:146 - 太短<*
02:01:073 - 加點<mod 被接受
02:08:815 - 加點<^
02:19:823 (5) - 連點怪怪得改成連點會好一些<mod 被接受
02:21:759 - ^<^
02:54:420 (4) - 節奏很奇怪 建議重下這滑條<略过了,虽说没跟主唱,还蛮跟节奏的...
02:59:501 - 太短 試試改成點如何<*
03:15:711 - 到03:27:082 - 有一點空洞 建議可以放一些簡單的節奏 不然乾脆做成休息時間<略过,在这就是希望让感觉放慢些,不过如果有其他
modder提出可能会改改吧 :D


*关于转圈的问题,把overall difficulty 调低一格应该可行吧?不希望把它改长,改了好像不太跟节奏 TAT



加油!!
多谢了!! :)

P.S:其实[Normal]还没完成,不过还是被mod了 xD
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