1. Hard (4.5 stars, 531 notes)
2. Roxas' Normal (1.86 stars, 315 notes)

• BPM: 82.000
  Offset: 1695 (-5)

-Sekai- wrote:

Timing:

• BPM: 82.000
  Offset: 1695 (-5)

Sounds better to me o.o

popner wrote:

[Timing]
BPM: 81.975
offset: 1686 (-14ms)

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]
I still suggest offset 1686, current sounds a little off. sounds good

[Roxas' Normal]
00:17:797 (5,2) - stack these two sliders properly?
05:12:031 (2) - make a Kiai fountains here like Hard?
00:40:120 (1) - nazi - not seems so round..
00:45:610 - add a note here?
01:46:726 (4) - the wiggling doesn't looks good to me
03:26:268 (4) - ^
05:12:031 (2,1,2) - a little overlap. Try this pattern: http://puu.sh/Gttt
@roxasgrylls94

[Hard]
-1AR -1OD for slow BPM? 那就太简单了吧好歹也是hard。。。。
Check out all the green lines which start or end a Kiai, some of them are not on downbeat. 好的我一个一个来检查~
00:09:745 (4) - partly overlapped by HP bar 我想把血条删掉QAQ！！！ 因为是对称的所以我不想动
01:41:968 (2) - remove finish from head and add a finish on 01:41:236 (1)? Also remove whistle from (1). It is so to let finish on long white ticks. 嗯改掉了
01:47:824 (1) - ^ also keep the NC consistent? Choose one kind of NC setting, 01:47:824 (1) or 01:41:968 (2)
02:58:080 (1) - ^
03:03:935 (1) - ^ same issue in all Kiai sections 好的以上问题我会全图检查
03:10:523 (1) - move NC to 03:09:059 (7)? 可以，后面的也改了改
03:50:047 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - shorten them by 1/8 tick? They are easily read as 1/4 tick between sliders. A lot of 100 when I play them. 这个我要再问问了，我也是觉得一点点别扭。。。
04:11:639 (3) - the flow here is not so good since (3,4,5) is a reverse move. I think stack it on head of 04:12:737 (6) will be better. 我把转的方向改了改，这下就顺了
05:03:240 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - make these circles symmetric and stack 05:05:069 (6) and 05:03:240 (4)? 这个我被搞晕了。。。
05:06:176 (9) - player can't read the direction of this slider, try this: http://puu.sh/Gtk4 其实是能rank的吧？。。。我觉得没问题的，看看别人怎么说~
05:10:568 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - a little sudden, it is much more difficult than other parts imo. 咕~~(╯﹏╰)b 的确是呢。。。目前没想出好点子就先保留了。。。

That's all I can find. GL~

Strawberry wrote:

HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII~小草莓酱!
m4m ~!

*铺面没什么大问题 以下都是建议xD so feel free ignoring

[Hard]
01:33:907 (1) - 尾巴和血条有点叠到. 我要改血条！
01:40:128 (4,5,6) - 这三个slider的开头也加上whistle? 毕竟到了kiai， 只加了5的开头。。。
01:49:278 (4) - ctrl+R?
01:51:839 (2,3,4,5) - 摆这样感觉更好:3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/363734
02:25:874 (2,4) - ctrl+R? 没没没，我是按照DS摆的，我多善良！
02:31:363 (1) - 好漂亮的heart! 祝这图早日heart >< (跑题了! PIA 这个好~！我马上改成红色带火的去！
03:18:573 (8,9) - (nazi) 为了让03:17:475 (5,6,7,8) - 成为一个标准的菱形，建议(8)放在x:280 y:340 而⑨放在x:400 y:316 没太理解其实。。。感觉有点乱。。。我先这样放着吧还是
03:52:241 (4) - 尾巴的声音没消 这都能看出来！！！姥姥神人
03:55:169 (4) - ^这都能看出来！！！姥姥神人
04:08:710 (3) - (nazi)和04:09:808 (6) - 有点没叠好 有点改完了~！

[Normal]
`因为是第一个diff，所以建议note尺寸-1【translation: since it is the first difficulty, he suggests to reduce the note size by one】
`不建议1/4的slider在这个diff.. 【suggest not to put 1/4 sliders in this difficulty】
01:00:055 (1) - remove this note? 个人认为对于新人来说难了 【remove this note？ its kinda hard to a newbie】
01:43:971 (2) - ^ 【same as above】
02:04:465 (1) - ^【same as above】
02:16:176 (1) - ^【same as above】
03:23:513 (2) - ^【same as above】
05:20:622 (2) - ^【same as above】
02:40:878 (2,3,4,5,6) - confusion for beginners...
04:57:016 (2) - 移到04:57:016 - ？也是感觉有点难了 【move to 04:57:016 - ？its kinda hard....】
@RoxasGrylls94

无需多言 STARX3

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.
[Roxas' Normal]
00:17:797 (5,2) - stack these two sliders properly? Fixed
05:12:031 (2) - make a Kiai fountains here like Hard? Fixed
00:40:120 (1) - nazi - not seems so round.. Fixed
00:45:610 - add a note here? Fixed
01:46:726 (4) - the wiggling doesn't looks good to me ..Wiggling? (translator didn't translate the word ;w;
03:26:268 (4) - ^
05:12:031 (2,1,2) - a little overlap. Try this pattern: http://puu.sh/Gttt Fixed

That's all I can find. GL~

Strawberry wrote:

HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII~小草莓酱!

[Normal]
`因为是第一个diff，所以建议note尺寸-1【translation: since it is the first difficulty, he suggests to reduce the note size by one】 It would be worse..
`不建议1/4的slider在这个diff.. 【suggest not to put 1/4 sliders in this difficulty】 There are only a very few 1/4 sliders..
01:00:055 (1) - remove this note? 个人认为对于新人来说难了 【remove this note？ its kinda hard to a newbie】 Fixed
01:43:971 (2) - ^ 【same as above】 Fixed
02:04:465 (1) - ^【same as above】 Fixed
02:16:176 (1) - ^【same as above】 Fixed
03:23:513 (2) - ^【same as above】 Fixed
05:20:622 (2) - ^【same as above】 Fixed
02:40:878 (2,3,4,5,6) - confusion for beginners... Fixed
04:57:016 (2) - 移到04:57:016 - ？也是感觉有点难了 【move to 04:57:016 - ？its kinda hard....】 Fixed
@RoxasGrylls94

-Sekai- wrote:

good luck~

1. Audio Lead-in建议500ms到1000ms
2. Countdown建议关掉
3. 另外就是因为零碎的break比较多，所以Letterbox During Breaks也建议关掉
4. 最后是：两个diff的offset不同。。手动改一下
5. 5分多的drain time超出ranking规定上限太多了…………感觉可能会导致一些问题？
6. 感觉上Normal的Hitsound可以拿来做clap试试……嗯，2/4clap，原曲的2/4clap其实很重的，仅仅靠soft感觉张力不够
7. 另外Kiai的话不太一样呢，我个人比较倾向于Roxas的方案吧中间多个额外的小喷泉

1. HP-1, Despite the star rating is lower than 2....HP5 may be still too high because of those long sliders
2. 00:21:446 (1) - i may choose to start it at 00:21:629 - ,and add a reverse to 00:20:714 (3) -
   
3. 00:45:233 - silence the slider end?and keep 50% volumn on 00:45:599 (2) -
4. 01:35:370 - i'd like to add a note here with finish~~~
5. 01:52:937 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - imo...continuing notes may be too hard for normal diff....
6. 02:51:491 - add a note?
7. 05:36:175 (1) - the finishes since here to 05:43:494 (4) - may be not very suitable...

1. 00:05:344 (2) - 出屏幕了？
2. 00:27:851 - 这种地方我是真的很想加note。。否则节奏感觉太单调了…………但是类似的case实在太多了………………没法一个一个指出来怎么办……比如说00:29:314 - ，00:38:098 - 等等……………………
3. 00:59:140 (6,7,1) - 然后比如这段可以一直1/4节奏做下来的……
4. 唔……然后从头看到尾感觉就只是……节奏的改进建议把……kiai段感觉好很多。然后就是音效，如前面所言从第一个kiai后开始建议做上2/4clap这种……然后排列什么的倒是都没看到什么问题，slider做的很用心呢

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~M4M~~~

[General]

1. Audio Lead-in建议500ms到1000ms 好的~！
2. Countdown建议关掉 嗯我忘了。。。。
3. 另外就是因为零碎的break比较多，所以Letterbox During Breaks也建议关掉 嗯的确是
4. 最后是：两个diff的offset不同。。手动改一下 啊。。。【这个都是我自己改的居然不一致QAQ】
5. 5分多的drain time超出ranking规定上限太多了…………感觉可能会导致一些问题？ 不知道。。。够简单的图，刷分应该不会被说吧。。。
6. 感觉上Normal的Hitsound可以拿来做clap试试……嗯，2/4clap，原曲的2/4clap其实很重的，仅仅靠soft感觉张力不够 这个我会在考虑考虑
7. 另外Kiai的话不太一样呢，我个人比较倾向于Roxas的方案吧中间多个额外的小喷泉 貌似没差啊。。。。

[Roxas's Normal]

1. HP-1, Despite the star rating is lower than 2....HP5 may be still too high because of those long sliders
2. 00:21:446 (1) - i may choose to start it at 00:21:629 - ,and add a reverse to 00:20:714 (3) -
   
3. 00:45:233 - silence the slider end?and keep 50% volumn on 00:45:599 (2) -
4. 01:35:370 - i'd like to add a note here with finish~~~
5. 01:52:937 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - imo...continuing notes may be too hard for normal diff....
6. 02:51:491 - add a note?
7. 05:36:175 (1) - the finishes since here to 05:43:494 (4) - may be not very suitable...

[Hard]

1. 00:05:344 (2) - 出屏幕了？ QAQ我的皮肤还没改、、、
2. 00:27:851 - 这种地方我是真的很想加note。。否则节奏感觉太单调了…………但是类似的case实在太多了………………没法一个一个指出来怎么办……比如说00:29:314 - ，00:38:098 - 等等…………………… QAQ果然是做的太简单了吗。。。我觉得其实还好。。。吧。。。
3. 00:59:140 (6,7,1) - 然后比如这段可以一直1/4节奏做下来的…… 这个我想保留的。。。
4. 唔……然后从头看到尾感觉就只是……节奏的改进建议把……kiai段感觉好很多。然后就是音效，如前面所言从第一个kiai后开始建议做上2/4clap这种……然后排列什么的倒是都没看到什么问题，slider做的很用心呢
   其实我功夫全花在想slider了。。。节奏什么的我会再看

嗯，差不多就这样？节奏和音效有问题online直接叫我吧～～感觉不是forum post能一下子写清楚的～～总之加油的说！

Scorpiour wrote:

[Roxas's Normal]

1. HP-1, Despite the star rating is lower than 2....HP5 may be still too high because of those long sliders Fixed
2. 00:21:446 (1) - i may choose to start it at 00:21:629 - ,and add a reverse to 00:20:714 (3) - Fixed
   
3. 00:45:233 - silence the slider end?and keep 50% volumn on 00:45:599 (2) - Fixed
4. 01:35:370 - i'd like to add a note here with finish~~~ Fixed
5. 01:52:937 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - imo...continuing notes may be too hard for normal diff.... Not fixed sorry
6. 02:51:491 - add a note? Fixed
7. 05:36:175 (1) - the finishes since here to 05:43:494 (4) - may be not very suitable... Not fixed sorry

x847606653 wrote:

小草莓><,咱mod不出啥东西._.不好意思

tutuhaha wrote:

PreviewTime: 13395
在我看来你这个只需要两个颜色，一个深粉一个浅粉，搞这么多颜色变化还一点点mod的时候根本看不出来哪个是NC开始哪个是NC结尾....玩的时候也完全看不出来Orz
会被2的真的我做慢英文歌一般就俩颜色就够了
Hard
00:05:344 (2) - 碰到HP条了 拉条圈圈碰到也不可以啊。。。
00:17:055 (3) - 往左移一格 不要把。。。我是转过来的。。
00:19:616 (2) - 没完全覆盖好哦 这回好了！
00:42:672 (2,3,1) - 3尽量调整到2的尾巴到1的距离正中间，看着比较爽打着也比较爽 嗯好的
01:05:179 - 这里可以加个note或者后面的3的slider从这里开始 结果还是没加。。。我听起来别扭
02:42:342 (8,1) - 这里感觉其实不用太在意间距了1放正中间吧 【其实我都是复制粘贴过来的OJZ
谢谢mod~！

Normal
05:03:239 (2,3) - spacing

nazi之王2ha登场\:D/！！！！！！！！！！

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Roxa's Normal
Looks more like a Easy imo.
03:33:572 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/374150 - Looks better like this imo, just a nice looking shape fixed
05:42:026 (2) - Move it at x:408 y:192 you means x:404 lol

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Mod request! :3

General
I love the song. me too~

Roxa's Normal
Looks more like a Easy imo.
03:33:572 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/374150 - Looks better like this imo, just a nice looking shape
05:42:026 (2) - Move it at x:408 y:192

Hard
01:51:473 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/374157 - Shape <3 nice advice, but now its a star shape and i think its fine~
02:31:363 (1) - Stack better? :3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/374158 lol,i always wanna do that, but the truth is it is unrankable if i do that~
02:43:074 (1) - Stack better as well? :3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/374159 same
03:59:195 (2) - Add a circle? Like this - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/374160 yea it follows the rhythm, but i dont really wanna do that...
04:22:250 (1) - Make the slider start at 04:22:616 - fits to the voice good one, i likethat!
04:22:250 - Put the green timeline at 04:22:616 ok
05:06:166 (9) - Stack it precisely :3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/374165 same, unrankable stuff
05:09:094 (1) - Stack it to the end of the Slider ^

Comments
Not that "Pro mod", I like the map and the song - Good luck ranking it :3

Athena Tennos wrote:

A-tan's mod~~give hentai kichiku の baka o ne-chan♪~o_<!

[General]
♪~

[Roxas' Normal]
吧唧吧唧轰咚啪！~

[Hard]
02:31:363 (1) - and 02:43:074 (1) -

SPOILER

240,96,151363,38,0,B|248:0|120:-44|0:8|-24:112|12:228|80:308|164:360|256:392|256:392|348:360|432:308|500:228|536:112|512:8|392:-44|264:0|276:104,1,1375,2|0

288,248,162342,2,0,B|216:256|176:192,1,125
275,93,163074,38,0,B|264:0|392:-44|512:8|536:112|500:228|432:308|348:360|256:392|256:392|164:360|80:308|12:228|-24:112|0:8|120:-44|248:0|

05:06:166 (9) - 奇葩kichikuのhentai slider！~。。。。根本读图不能嘛！~。。。

SPOILER

260,104,306166,2,0,B|328:32|420:92|420:184|356:264|256:296|256:296|156:264|92:184|92:92|184:32|248:104,1,750

mod 完毕~
好鬼畜！！！~
Good Luck！~

Leorda wrote:

Yo


[General]
* Combo colour 1 and 2 are same. Please make it different colors ok i will do that


[Skinning]
* You need reversearrow.png and spinner-approachcircle.png for completing set of skin oh i forgot that...thanks
* Having a sliderb0 and sliderb1 only makes sliderball animated quickly and it's odd to look. Try adding more sliderb.png to make animated go smoothly
absolutely

[Roxas' Normal]
* AR +1?
* Set offset to 00:01:685 for consistency on each diff

03:11:986 (1) - Remove new combo?
04:19:689 (1,2,3,4) - This spacing are smaller than other spacing. Is this intentional?
05:09:094 (1) - Remove new combo?


[Hard]
01:26:588 (1,2) - Swap new combo fixed
02:57:347 (1) - This slider just like a 1/2 slider but slow slider makes me threw me off. Change this something different? actually i wanna keep it, it follows the rhythm
03:20:768 (1) - ^
04:54:455 (1,2) - Swap new combo fixed~


Nice song~

Leorda wrote:

[Roxas' Normal]
* AR +1?
* Set offset to 00:01:685 for consistency on each diff

03:11:986 (1) - Remove new combo?
04:19:689 (1,2,3,4) - This spacing are smaller than other spacing. Is this intentional?
05:09:094 (1) - Remove new combo?

Nice song~

RoxasGrylls94 wrote:

:oops:

Leorda wrote:

[Roxas' Normal]
* AR +1?
* Set offset to 00:01:685 for consistency on each diff

03:11:986 (1) - Remove new combo?
04:19:689 (1,2,3,4) - This spacing are smaller than other spacing. Is this intentional?
05:09:094 (1) - Remove new combo?

Nice song~

Thanks, all fixed, but offset is 00:01:685 yet D:

Diff updated http://puu.sh/KyUG

-Bakari- wrote:

hey! as requesed!
tsundere queue

[General]
different offsets o.o oh i finally get why its different...

[Normal]
AR - 6? why? D:
01:21:099 (1) - spacing. (there's some places with spacing errors, so please check your map) i won't point out them all. btw, in some patterns you doing it to keep symmetrical but it doesn't plays good :/
02:09:772 (5) - rythm here feels wrong. i suggest you end it on red line. and put circle for big white line. or you can end it on big line it would be fine too
02:21:483 (7) - ^
04:18:957 (7) - 1/1 sliderfits here better, imo
05:08:728 - how about circle here? http://puu.sh/KWfQ won't confuse players and also makes your map a bit easier to read :3
05:13:852 - ^ but it also will help to keep spacing consistent http://puu.sh/KWgr
05:44:226 (1) - put here soft section with 15-20% volume. end of slider sounds too loud :/

[Hard]
00:05:344 (2) - touches hp bar. i asked and its fine actually~
00:18:153 (5,2) - nazi \:D/ stack properly done~
01:50:009 (5,6,7,8) - hm.. i think it's better to put on of those awesome slowdown-sliders here >.< tried~ but the sliders are too short to do that...
02:50:759 (1) - finish? fits good, imo not really...
05:04:702 (5) - whistle? got it!

~~~~~~~~~~~

Another awesome map and awesome song.

-Bakari- wrote:

[Normal]
AR - 6? why? D:Where's the problem with AR6? °^°
01:21:099 (1) - spacing. (there's some places with spacing errors, so please check your map) i won't point out them all. btw, in some patterns you doing it to keep symmetrical but it doesn't plays good :/ Opened AImod, there's only that error, I don't think that if there are some part like 0.4x isn't bad sorry
02:09:772 (5) - rythm here feels wrong. i suggest you end it on red line. and put circle for big white line. or you can end it on big line it would be fine too Not fixed
02:21:483 (7) - ^ Not fixed
04:18:957 (7) - 1/1 sliderfits here better, imo Not fixed
05:08:728 - how about circle here? http://puu.sh/KWfQ won't confuse players and also makes your map a bit easier to read :3 Fixed
05:13:852 - ^ but it also will help to keep spacing consistent http://puu.sh/KWgr Not fixed
05:44:226 (1) - put here soft section with 15-20% volume. end of slider sounds too loud :/ Fixed

raririn wrote:

mod不出啥TAT
那就努力地nazi吧~

[General]
*缺少reversearrow.png spinner-approachcircle.png 忘了fullsub了。。。
*从Tag里去除Taylor Swift...王吃翔说不能重复 好
*这combocolor.../ \还是找别人确认下比较好吧 而且两个难度不一样 以第二个难度为准，还是稍微有点差别肉眼可见的...
*filesize太大？考虑去掉什么吧 这个是因为歌曲占了很大空间。。。

[Normal]
AR-1
没有snap好的绿线：01:29:525 01:31:538 01:31:904 【unsnapped green line】
00:01:684 (1) - 第一个tick位置(x=176,y=112) 第二个tick(x=232,y=116) 第三个(x=256,y=64) 第四个(x=280,y=116)
第五个(x=334,y=112) ∴歪了 【first tick (x=176,y=112) second(x=232,y=116)third(x=256,y=64)forth(x=280,y=116)fifth第五个(x=334,y=112)∴ shaped need to be fixed】
第三个tick的位置→x=(176+334)/2=255 (x=255,y=64) 【←how to adjust the third tick】
第四个tick的位置→x=334-(232-176)=278 (x=278,y=116)【←how to adjust the forth tick】
00:04:612 (2) - ^ 改完以后复制黏贴一下 【^copy and paste】
00:40:111 (1) - 最后一个tick拿到(x=312,y=112)【move the last tick to (x=312,y=112)】
01:29:516 (1) - 尾+whistle 【whistler at the tail】
01:35:371 - 从这里开始S不好吧……听不见什么…… 【its weird to use Soft here, i can't hear anything...】
02:09:772 (5) - 这个slider没问题吗？可能会被说干扰SV啥的吧？【idk weather this slider is good or not, because it make confuse ppl by its Slider Velocity】
02:21:117 (6) - (x=332,y=116)
02:26:606 (1) - spacing 嘛不过空了这么大【spacing】
02:41:977 (5) - whistle
03:52:974 (1) - 头的whistle放到尾上【move the whistler from head to tail】
后面找不出了/ \

[Hard]
AR+1？05:14:949 - 像这一串梗AR7读不太清楚...AR8 AR9都好啊 AR太高了我觉得会别扭，因为歌很慢的。。。
02:59:909 (5) - 第二个tick (x=260,y=120) 啊啊啊？确定没打错吗。。。
04:47:868 - orz这个转盘我不能300 小突然而已啦，可以300的

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

raririn wrote:

[Normal]
AR-1
没有snap好的绿线：01:29:525 01:31:538 01:31:904 【unsnapped green line】 All fixed
00:01:684 (1) - 第一个tick位置(x=176,y=112) 第二个tick(x=232,y=116) 第三个(x=256,y=64) 第四个(x=280,y=116)
第五个(x=334,y=112) ∴歪了 【first tick (x=176,y=112) second(x=232,y=116)third(x=256,y=64)forth(x=280,y=116)fifth第五个(x=334,y=112)∴ shaped need to be fixed】
第三个tick的位置→x=(176+334)/2=255 (x=255,y=64) 【←how to adjust the third tick】
第四个tick的位置→x=334-(232-176)=278 (x=278,y=116)【←how to adjust the forth tick】 I know how to do, I was only wrong XDD
00:04:612 (2) - ^ 改完以后复制黏贴一下 【^copy and paste】
00:40:111 (1) - 最后一个tick拿到(x=312,y=112)【move the last tick to (x=312,y=112)】 Fixed
01:29:516 (1) - 尾+whistle 【whistler at the tail】 Fixed
01:35:371 - 从这里开始S不好吧……听不见什么…… 【its weird to use Soft here, i can't hear anything...】 Not fixed
02:09:772 (5) - 这个slider没问题吗？可能会被说干扰SV啥的吧？【idk weather this slider is good or not, because it make confuse ppl by its Slider Velocity】 Not fixed, cause it's not so confusing to break combo, imo
02:21:117 (6) - (x=332,y=116) Fixed
02:26:606 (1) - spacing 嘛不过空了这么大【spacing】 Fixed (now is 0,74x
02:41:977 (5) - whistle Fixed
03:52:974 (1) - 头的whistle放到尾上【move the whistler from head to tail】 Not fixed cause the whistle follow high notes of guitar
后面找不出了/ \

1. Folder Size
   this folder size is 11.0 MB
   which is greater than the allowed size of 10.0 MB without video

1. 00:59:873 - add note
2. 01:05:179 - ^
3. 01:07:192 (5) - i think stack on 01:07:558 (6) - is better than
4. 01:11:035 - add note
5. 02:11:602 (4) - stack on 02:11:968 (5) -
6. 02:21:849 - add note
7. 03:07:411 (4) - move to x:144 y:229
8. 03:07:594 (5) - ^ use this
   

   100,274,187594,2,0,B|149:314|216:308,1,125

9. 03:24:977 - add note
10. 03:25:709 (4) - ^
11. 03:30:833 (4) - move to x:144 y:155
12. 03:31:016 (5) - ^ use this
    

    100,111,211016,2,0,B|158:85|221:109,1,125

13. 03:31:748 (6) - ^
    

    412,273,211748,2,0,B|353:298|290:274,1,125

• Snapping Unsnapped Inherited (Green) Sections
  
  

  1. 1. 01:29:526 - snap to 01:29:516
     2. 01:31:539 - snap to 01:31:529
     3. 01:31:905 - snap to 01:31:895
• 01:26:954 (1) - touch a HP Bar, you must fix it
• 02:31:364 (1) - ^
• 02:43:074 (1) - too longthat's all
  good luck

Wreath wrote:

hi, Strawberry and Roxas
sorry for late... no prob~

[General]

1. Folder Size
   this folder size is 11.0 MB
   which is greater than the allowed size of 10.0 MB without video

[Hard]

1. 00:59:873 - add note
2. 01:05:179 - ^
3. 01:07:192 (5) - i think stack on 01:07:558 (6) - is better than
4. 01:11:035 - add note
5. 02:11:602 (4) - stack on 02:11:968 (5) -
6. 02:21:849 - add note
7. 03:07:411 (4) - move to x:144 y:229
8. 03:07:594 (5) - ^ use this
   

   100,274,187594,2,0,B|149:314|216:308,1,125

9. 03:24:977 - add note
10. 03:25:709 (4) - ^
11. 03:30:833 (4) - move to x:144 y:155
12. 03:31:016 (5) - ^ use this
    

    100,111,211016,2,0,B|158:85|221:109,1,125

13. 03:31:748 (6) - ^
    

    412,273,211748,2,0,B|353:298|290:274,1,125

changed most of them, i am in a hurry so sorry about not replying one by one...

[Roxas's Normal]

• Snapping Unsnapped Inherited (Green) Sections
  
  

  1. 1. 01:29:526 - snap to 01:29:516
     2. 01:31:539 - snap to 01:31:529
     3. 01:31:905 - snap to 01:31:895
• 01:26:954 (1) - touch a HP Bar, you must fix it
• 02:31:364 (1) - ^
• 02:43:074 (1) - too long

@Roxas long time no see~

that's all
good luck

Steph De Chine wrote:

From Steph's Queue

首先看难度等级：2星当Normal有些委屈了，当Easy吧~
另外那个Hard完全就是Normal的难度啊

Normal
总体来说最大的问题：Normal对于它所属的星级来说难了点
Slider Velocity 2X对新手来说是不是太难了？【is a slider velocity of 2X kinda hard for newbies?】
你是特别喜欢四边形的摆放位置吗？为什么不弄些Polygon Circle呢？【do you really like mapping a square? why don't you try some polygon circles?】
02:59:543 (2,3) - 都往后缩短到红线上吧~这样容易点 【stack the note back to the red line? it will be much easier】
可能这幅图对你来说很容易，但是新手可能不会这么认为，因为他们的鼠标速度并没有你想象中的那么快（找了几个第一次玩osu!的同学测的）
【this diff is absolutely easy for you, but not for the newbies, since they can't control their cursor that well( I did let some first time players tried this map)】
@Roxas i think your diff is good as a normal, just look for some detailed parts~
Normal
00:15:225 (5) - 把这个拆成一个note和一个长度只有一半slider吧
00:18:153 (5) - 把这个拆成一个note和一个长度只有一半slider吧
02:31:364 (1) - 这个心形不好看，考虑给心尖那里做下瘦身运动 恩的确是更好看了
02:43:074 (1) - 这个也是 嗯
到了最后才有了点Hard的感觉……好困啊~~ 嘿嘿做的太简单了点，不过dt的话就好玩咯

但是确实还好听，谢谢草莓了~~