1. Easy (2.02 stars, 192 notes)
2. Hard (5 stars, 43 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 563 notes)
4. Normal (4.3 stars, 324 notes)
5. Suicide (5 stars, 733 notes)

happy623 wrote:

8-) from m4m queue
除了紅色是unrankable,其他都是建議w
開始ww

BPM應該是 : 132 / 264 ? 應該≒280 OAO

SPOILER

[General]
rules換了, Artist應該是Machigerita-P, 把gumi醬放在Tags那裡吧w FIXED
osu的mp3限制是128kbps - 192kbps, 超過了, 試找新的音源w FIXED
背景圖的尺寸限制為 1024*768 或 800*600 FIXED
Preview Point的位置必須一樣 FIXED
如果不做storyboard的話, 可以刪去osb檔 FIXED
每個diff的slider velocity最好不要一樣w EASY及NORMAL SV已REMAPPED

[Easy]
Easy必須要跟著snapping 所以請長時間打開以下這個w

如果想選用高BPM的話, 請使用低的Slider Velocity REMAPPED

[Normal]
跟Easy一樣跟著snapping做
高BPM, 低SV w REMAPPED

改好了可以再找我來個完整的remod 加油www

LunarSakuya wrote:

this is a cool song

General
- The Source and Artist need to be switched. I'll keep this 0.0
- Usually bpms are whole numbers. So try exactly 280bpm. (Though I kinda disagree with doubling the bpm with this kind of song but I think you're going for the challenge)FIXED

Easy
00:27:563 (1) - Move to x:160 y:168, the pattern will be centered~ FIXED
01:04:417 (2) - Finish on reverseFIXED
01:08:810 (1) - Avoid spinner spam, i suggest you map out these 3 spinners FIXED
02:03:556 (1) - FinishFIXED
03:00:337 (1) - ClapFIXED

Normal
- the SV is too fast here imo; lower SV maybe by half even. This will also help lower difficulty level/star rating.CHANGE TO 0.90

00:13:850 (1) - Finish on headFIXED
00:26:706 (1,1,1) - Space these out and avoid necessary antijumps, especially in a normal (if you fix, there are others like this)FIXED
00:29:706 (2) - Clap on head instead of tailFIXED
00:44:704 (1) - Finish on headFIXED
01:12:131 (1) - Clap; also, i'm not sure of this spinner spam like EasyREMAPPED
01:10:417 (1) - Finish on head. hear bg musicFIXED
01:13:845 (1) - ^FIXED
01:17:274 (1) - ^FIXED
01:18:988 (1) - FinishFIXED
01:34:844 (1) - Delete NCFIXED
02:58:837 (1) - ^FIXED

Hard
00:10:421 (1) - Finish on headFIXED
00:40:848 (1) - unrankable slider, the ball path needs to be visibleFIXED
00:54:239 (1) - Too short. Map this outFIXED
01:00:989 (1,2,1,2,1) - this is a pattern for Insanes imo, try to make it more gentleFIXED
01:46:414 (7) - NCFIXED
02:23:911 (1) - Save these 1/8ths for harder diffs; i suggest you use an easier type of sliderFIXED

Sunset
00:20:278 (5) - Ctrl + G, gives distance from (4)FIXED
00:59:703 (2,3) - Move further away or at least equalize distance between (2,3,4)FIXED
01:21:987 (10) - Please don't ever use this 1/16. A cool slider would do just fine.FIXED
01:39:558 (1) - Delete NCFIXED
02:03:556 (2) - NCFIXED
02:32:161 (4) - again, don't use 1/16 please FIXED
03:05:694 (2,3) - Give some more distance, maybe Ctrl + G (2)FIXED
03:06:980 (1) - Finish on headFIXED
03:10:408 (1) - ^FIXED
03:20:693 (1) - ^FIXED

Suicide
00:12:135 (1) - Move to y-axis like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/626929 FIXED
00:30:884 (8) - Finish on tailFIXED
00:37:098 (3) - NC to indicate sudden distance changeFIXED
00:40:848 (1) - unrankable, slider path needs to be seen!FIXED
01:04:524 (3) - NCFIXED
01:21:987 (10) - ^FIXED
01:33:344 (2,3) - Bring closer together to match spacing vs rhythmFIXED
02:16:841 (3) - Try not to go into the hp bar..FIXED
02:45:553 (13) - Ctrl + J might add some slider variety http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/626946FIXED
02:57:338 (2,3) - again, spacing vs. rhythm; bring closer togetherFIXED
this is indeed a suicide diff XD

Very creative sliders and a nice challenge xD Good luck!

uscobra wrote:

YO
The BPM should be 280, not 280.02. If there is a small decimal like that you should usually round- remember that in the future
Nice map, good luck!FIXED

0gre wrote:

I like your sense and mapping style ~ ★

THANKYOU !!

LnDSuv wrote:

I was working on this map for a while, but gave up.
I'll share the video, use it if you want: http://puu.sh/2a3rA
Also I think that my mp3 sounds better, try it out and decide yourself: http://puu.sh/2a3t2
Change the source to VOCALOID (or keep it clean). This is a rule.
Change Machigerita-P to MachigeritaP. Check other tags here: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm13547567 (I don't know japanese so I can't help).
GL with the map
inb4 the real bpm is 140

Thanks for the MP3 and the video very much, Your MP3 sounds better than I!
I changed the Artist name and Source, but i didn't change the BPM because i want to use a high BPM in this map,I'm sorry

Foreverends wrote:

根本吾似1st map QAQ
超級神mapper ;w;
btw timing提醒
個人認為offset在10434會更好更準

你先係超級神mapper啦OAO!
我轉左用LnDSuv嘅mp3所以offset變左

1. Every slider must have a clear and visible path to follow from start to end. Sliders which overlap themselves in a way that makes any section unreadable or ambiguous (including "burai sliders") cannot be used. This is so that no slider has an appearance that is confusing or impossible for the player to read. Additionally, the slider borders must never be covered up from the slider being packed in too tightly. However, sliders that cross over themselves are fine as long as the borders are clearly visible.
2. Slider anchors/nodes must not be used to manipulate slider speeds (whether they are normal nodes or red ones). Using extra nodes to make a slider "wiggle" is usually fine, but using so many that the slider gets scrunched up (which also makes the sliderball go crazy) or become a "hold slider" is abuse of the hitobject's intended use and is not allowed. AIMod (shortcut ctrl+shift+a) will also point out sliders that move in an "abnormal" way, so make sure to check that if you're unsure of a slider.

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Hello from my Modding Queue~
[Easy]
00:26:607 (1,1,1) - Why 3 new combos? Th re's no need to spam the new combos. >.<;
00:33:464 (1,1,1) - ^
00:40:321 (1,1,1) - ^
and so on.
New combo is a set of Hit Circles and Sliders that come one after another, have the same color and correspond to a specific part of a beatmap's song.
I changed a few of combo colour OAO
01:46:321 (1) - Work a bit more this slider. The shape needs more work.FIXED

02:39:453 (1,2,3,4) - Fix this, make it a square shape or something else. The current one looks random~FIXED

[Normal]
I see you did the same thing here with Combos and so on for all difficulties. As mentioned above the new combo spamming is not needed. At the moment I'm the only one who say that so you can ignore it. But consider fixing it if next mods say the same.
Overall the Normal is nice.

[Hard]
Please don't use Black color for combos! It's really hard to read with that background and so with 100% Background Dim like a lot people use.
00:16:428 (5,6,7,1) - This looks totally confusing. I suggest you to change the placing so it will be more clear and read-able while playing.FIXED
03:26:597 (1,1) - Those sliders are unrankable. Their path is not clear and they are also very fast which makes it very hard to read.FIXED

1. Every slider must have a clear and visible path to follow from start to end. Sliders which overlap themselves in a way that makes any section unreadable or ambiguous (including "burai sliders") cannot be used. This is so that no slider has an appearance that is confusing or impossible for the player to read. Additionally, the slider borders must never be covered up from the slider being packed in too tightly. However, sliders that cross over themselves are fine as long as the borders are clearly visible.
2. Slider anchors/nodes must not be used to manipulate slider speeds (whether they are normal nodes or red ones). Using extra nodes to make a slider "wiggle" is usually fine, but using so many that the slider gets scrunched up (which also makes the sliderball go crazy) or become a "hold slider" is abuse of the hitobject's intended use and is not allowed. AIMod (shortcut ctrl+shift+a) will also point out sliders that move in an "abnormal" way, so make sure to check that if you're unsure of a slider.

http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Standard_Ranking_Criteria

[Suicide]
AR +1 ~ AR 9 is not enough for this difficulty. :/ FIXED
01:27:892 (11,12,13,14) - This is unplayable for me~ FIXED
01:27:892 (1) - NC there I guess. The Combo is too long. FIXED

[Insane]
00:33:464 (1,1) - The distance between those two is too high for their beat distance even for "Insane". FIXED
01:34:321 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Fix this, the current shape doesn't look nice. Maybe try something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/648457 FIXED
The rest is fine I guess.


For some reason I didn't feel very comfortable with this map set even though your mapping style is different. Good luck with your map!
QAQ

yurunneram wrote:

Does this thing have an elipsey warning? I found the video pretty dizzying.

Easy
Oh wow, what a scary vid. Could've been a lower Slider V but dun think ya can change it now.
00:26:607 (1,1,1) - If you can try not to abuse NC but yea I see ur pattern so you may leave it there yea I NC them because of the pattern and the sound,so i don't fixed it sorry

00:40:321 (1,1,1) - ^ ^
01:00:892 (1,1,1) - ^ ^
01:48:893 (1,1,1) - ^ ^
02:58:311 (1,1,1) - ^ ^
02:39:025 - Add note? FIXED

Normal
00:20:607 (1) - Spacing uneven. I follow to the distance snap so no fix sorry,,
00:23:821 (4,1,2) - ^ ^
01:00:036 (1) - ^ ^
03:16:954 (4) - ^ ^

Hard
00:40:107 (3,4,1) - Should be on the same spot? FIXED,I like it:3
01:21:463 (3,4,5) - I would rather space it out... no fix here sorry
01:46:214 (6) - Didn't really notice this note. Delete? I think there should have a note because of the song , I remapped this part for eaiser to notice this notes~

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~ <3

Onisakura wrote:

Hi~
from #modreqs

[General]

Song's start at 00:10:321 , really?) cut this. if you need few sec at the beginning - use Lead-in: Song setup/Audio/Music Track Start at 00:10:321 because I want to show the full video, so no fix~
Remove Epilepsy Warning in Easy FIXED

Inconsistency Kiai Time

Now / Correct
01:22:316 - 01:32:607 / 01:22:321 - 01:32:607 FIXED


[Easy]

Unsnapped green sections:

SPOILER

01:22:316 - snap to 01:22:321 FIXED
01:36:029 - snap to 01:36:035 ^
03:00:023 - snap to 03:00:025 ^
03:26:593 - snap to 03:26:596 ^
03:27:450 - snap to 03:27:454 ^

00:15:035 - 00:16:750 - 00:18:464 - 00:21:892 - 00:23:607 - and 00:25:321 - "circle must have" i think) look's better FIXED, there are some same problem so I FIXED them too:3
00:28:321 (1) - edit start of the slider at 00:28:535 I think It's too hard in Easy
00:29:821 - add circle^
00:30:249 (2) - cut at 00:30:249 - 00:31:535 ^
00:32:178 (3) - move slider at 00:31:964 then, add circle at 00:33:249 ^
00:35:178 (1) - edit start of the slider at 00:35:392^
00:36:892 (2) - same thing, edit start of the slider at 00:36:678 ^
00:38:821 (3,4) - weird part, maybe should change on 1/4 tick slider with 3 reverse then add slider 00:40:107 - 00:40:749 and 00:40:749 (5) - remove (if u think this's weird, just listen) but yea, this epic part will be remove 00:40:321 (1,2,3) I want to keep this epic part sorry,,
02:03:458 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this is too boring I want to follow the pattern in Insane,Suicide OAO
ok so if u like it or u will needed - say me and i'll repost this stuff more in detail, because i see same problem on the entire bitmap



[Normal]

Unsnapped green sections:

SPOILER

01:22:316 - snap to 01:22:321 FIXED
01:32:601 - snap to 01:32:607 ^
01:34:315 - snap to 01:34:321 ^
01:36:029 - snap to 01:36:035 ^
02:23:169 - snap to 02:23:171 ^
02:23:812 - snap to 02:23:814 ^
02:58:309 - snap to 02:58:311 ^
03:00:023 - snap to 03:00:025 ^
03:26:593 - snap to 03:26:596 ^
03:27:450 - snap to 03:27:454 ^

02:03:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - same thing, boring part
maybe it will be looks like this: I want to follow the pattern in Insane,Suicide too QAQ


[Hard]

Unsnapped objects:

SPOILER

01:23:607 (4) - Unsnapped circle. FIXED
01:23:821 (5) - Unsnapped circle. ^
01:24:464 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). ^
01:25:321 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start). ^
01:26:821 (3) - Unsnapped circle. ^
01:27:464 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). ^
01:28:321 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start). ^
01:28:964 (4) - Unsnapped circle. ^
01:29:607 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). ^
01:30:464 (4) - Unsnapped circle. ^
01:31:321 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). ^
01:32:607 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). ^
01:33:464 (2) - Unsnapped circle. ^
01:34:321 (1) - Unsnapped circle. ^
01:34:750 (3) - Unsnapped circle. ^
01:34:964 (4) - Unsnapped circle. ^
01:35:607 (6) - Unsnapped circle. ^
01:39:464 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). ^
01:40:214 (4) - Unsnapped circle. ^
01:43:321 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). ^
01:44:607 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). ^
01:45:036 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). ^
01:45:357 (3) - Unsnapped circle. ^
01:45:571 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start). ^
01:45:893 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start). ^
01:46:321 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). ^
01:46:750 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). ^
01:47:071 (3) - Unsnapped circle. ^
01:47:393 (4) - Unsnapped circle. ^
01:47:607 (5) - Unsnapped circle. ^
01:47:821 (6) - Unsnapped circle. ^
01:48:464 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). ^
01:49:321 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). ^

Unsnapped green sections:

SPOILER

00:33:462 - snap to 00:33:464 FIXED
00:34:212 - snap to 00:34:214 ^
00:34:319 - snap to 00:34:321 ^
00:40:319 - snap to 00:40:321 ^
00:41:176 - snap to 00:41:178 ^
00:54:032 - snap to 00:54:035 ^
00:54:354 - snap to 00:54:357 ^
00:54:461 - snap to 00:54:464 ^
00:54:782 - snap to 00:54:785 ^
00:54:889 - snap to 00:54:892 ^
01:00:889 - snap to 01:00:892 ^
01:01:746 - snap to 01:01:749 ^
01:07:746 - snap to 01:07:749 ^
01:08:603 - snap to 01:08:607 ^
01:22:316 - snap to 01:22:320 ^
01:28:321 - snap to 01:28:319 ^
01:32:601 - snap to 01:32:605 ^
01:36:029 - snap to 01:36:034 ^
01:36:089 - snap to 01:36:105 ^
01:48:886 - snap to 01:48:891 ^
01:49:207 - snap to 01:49:212 ^
01:49:314 - snap to 01:49:319 ^
01:49:636 - snap to 01:49:641 ^
02:23:169 - snap to 02:23:171 ^
02:23:812 - snap to 02:23:814 ^
03:00:023 - snap to 03:00:025 ^
03:26:593 - snap to 03:26:596 ^
03:26:914 - snap to 03:26:918 ^
03:27:021 - snap to 03:27:025 ^
03:27:343 - snap to 03:27:346 ^
03:27:450 - snap to 03:27:454 ^

01:39:464 (2) - NC FIXED
02:30:671 (2) - NC FIXED
02:03:458 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - well, you know know what's the problem :3 So I will not write this thing below
I want to follow the pattern in Insane,Suicide too
[Insane]

Unsnapped green sections:

SPOILER

00:33:462 - snap to 00:33:464 FIXED
00:34:212 - snap to 00:34:214 ^
00:34:319 - snap to 00:34:321 ^
00:40:319 - snap to 00:40:321 ^
00:41:176 - snap to 00:41:178 ^
01:00:889 - snap to 01:00:892 ^
01:01:746 - snap to 01:01:749 ^
01:08:603 - snap to 01:08:607 ^
01:22:316 - snap to 01:22:321 ^
01:32:601 - snap to 01:32:607 ^
01:36:029 - snap to 01:36:035 ^
01:49:207 - snap to 01:49:214 ^
01:49:636 - snap to 01:49:642 ^
02:23:169 - snap to 02:23:171 ^
02:23:812 - snap to 02:23:814 ^
03:00:023 - snap to 03:00:025 ^
03:26:593 - snap to 03:26:596 ^
03:26:914 - snap to 03:26:918 ^
03:27:021 - snap to 03:27:025 ^
03:27:343 - snap to 03:27:346 ^
03:27:450 - snap to 03:27:454 ^

01:39:357 (2) - NC FIXED

[Suicide]

Unsnapped green sections:

SPOILER

00:33:462 - snap to 00:33:464 FIXED
00:34:319 - snap to 00:34:321 ^
00:40:319 - snap to 00:40:321 ^
00:41:176 - snap to 00:41:178 ^
01:00:889 - snap to 01:00:892 ^
01:01:746 - snap to 01:01:749 ^
01:07:746 - snap to 01:07:749 ^
01:08:603 - snap to 01:08:607 ^
01:22:316 - snap to 01:22:321 ^
01:32:601 - snap to 01:32:607 ^
01:36:029 - snap to 01:36:035 ^
01:48:886 - snap to 01:48:892 ^
01:49:207 - snap to 01:49:214 ^
01:49:314 - snap to 01:49:321 ^
01:49:636 - snap to 01:49:642 ^
02:23:169 - snap to 02:23:171 ^
02:23:812 - snap to 02:23:814 ^
03:00:023 - snap to 03:00:025 ^
03:26:593 - snap to 03:26:596 ^
03:27:021 - snap to 03:27:025 ^
03:27:450 - snap to 03:27:454 ^

01:39:249 (2) - NC FIXED

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Change what you think is right :3 And Good luck ^_^

Thank you >< I really forget the green sections

smallboat wrote:

嗨 您好~來幫你MOD:D
我從我們的Queue接你的case：）


Easy 音要對好@@"

SPOILER

00:27:464 (3) - 刪掉 加slider拉到00:27:892 這段NC 想留著這部份哦
00:30:035 (2) - 移到00:29:821會比較好吧?尾端是在00:31:535 認為Easy來說比較難掌握 所以沒FIX SORRY,,
00:32:178 (3) - 移到00:31:964 整個移^
00:35:178 (1) - 移到00:35:392 尾端00:36:035 ^
00:36:892 (2) - 移到00:36:678 尾端00:37:749^
00:38:178 (3) - 加note FIXED
這邊slider是在00:54:892 尾端00:55:964 Easy比較難掌握
這邊slider是在00:56:392 尾端00:58:321 ^

01:02:178 (4) - 加noteFIXED
01:03:892 (2) - ^FIXED
這邊slider是在01:04:321 尾端01:04:321 Easy比較難掌握
這邊slider是在01:06:249 尾端01:07:321 ^
01:09:035 (1) - 加slider 尾端大白線 之前的note刪掉 FIXED
01:09:892 (2) - 加noteFIXED
01:12:035 (3) - 加slider 尾端01:12:464 FIXED
01:13:321 (5) - 加note FIXED
01:15:464 (1) - 這邊也刪掉加slider吧 尾端01:15:892 FIXED
01:16:749 (3) - 加note FIXED
01:36:035 (3) - 畢竟是Easy 不要離轉盤太遠唷.. 距離這還可以
02:31:743 (1) - 加slider 尾端02:32:171 加note FIXED
02:36:454 (2) - 加note NO FIXED
02:34:739 (2,4) - 加note吧 FIXED
02:41:597 (2,4) - ^ FIXED
02:48:454 (2,4) - ^ FIXED
02:50:168 (2) - 加note NO FIXED
02:52:953 (3) - NC NO FIXED
02:55:311 (2) - 加note FIXED
03:00:025 (3) - 太遠.. 這按distance snap的,,
03:04:739 (2,4) - 加note 本來有哦
後面這些slider中間
應該都可放note吧? 都有拍子呢
就放下去吧 上面這些應該是不會超過3 想弄個比較簡單的, 而且不想跟normal太相近

Normal

SPOILER

唔 速度好多倍率..忽快忽慢..滑條容易滑過頭歐
可用Aimod檢查一下..建議調1~2種速度就好 Insane以上則不受此限.. FIXED, 現在用0.75,1.0這2種~

要注意03:00:025 (5) - 太近 或把note刪掉把轉輪放這
其它相同的地方也是是指轉盤太接近嗎? FIXED

Hard

SPOILER

建議平常timing速度倍率1.0就好(? 慢的話0.5~.75選一種 快的話1.1或1.3
這也是跟Normal一樣 好多種速度@@" FIXED, 現在用0.75,1.0,1.1這3種~

00:11:285 (5) - 這邊兩個note有一股看漏的感覺
而且跟背景顏色一致 看不太到圈圈 間距要定好 FIXED
00:16:321 (5) - +note +clap NO FIXED
00:16:964 (8) - 間距 NC FIXED
00:28:535 (4,5,6) - 間距~疊太多了..測試時好容易100.. FIXED
00:23:178 (5) - +note +clap NO FIXED
00:40:321 (1) - 好快! FIXED
01:00:892 (1) - ^ 1.10還好還好,,
01:04:427 (3) - ^ 這沒有變速 速度還可以吧
01:07:750 (1) - ^ (怎麼看到大黑的感覺..XD FIXED 之前沒發現這用了1.5...
01:12:035 (1) - 很難抓準點01:12:464 (2) 的時機 改? FIXED
01:21:892 (6) - 這邊好容易落空@@ FIXED
01:34:321 (1) - 排列再多點變化 FIXED
01:55:635 (7) - 加note +clap NO FIXED
01:59:064 (6) - ^ NO FIXED
02:17:385 (1) - 稍微移後面一點? FIXED
後面還ok 只是速度.. 忘了變速過份多了嘿..

ok 先mod這些 斟酌使用 如有問題可PM給我 謝謝:)

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