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S.I.D-Sound - Yeoraea

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hoLysoup
such low bpm for you
:>
-Neipezi
스타스트림님부탁으로..

[Timing Setup]
00:03:402 - 볼륨 20%
00:14:068 - 볼륨 25%
00:24:735 - 볼륨 30%
00:48:068 - 볼륨 35%
로 해보시는게 어떨까요..?

[Hard]
00:29:402 (6) - 에로우로 바꿔보는게 어떠신지요..

맵이 너무 완벽해서 별로 못잡았어요...:cry:...죄송합니다.. :cry:
jieusieu
이지랑 하드는 남자답게 스킵.


[노말]

00:06:068 (1) - 위로 한칸 오른쪽 두칸씩 움직여서 확실히 감싼다는 느낌을 내주세요
00:18:068 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/424184 이렇게 하시믄 00:19:402 (1,2) 와의 규칙성이 생기고 00:17:402 (3) 의 끝부분을 감쌀수 있게됨
02:56:735 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/424186 좀 조정하셔서 02:55:068 (3) 의 머리부분이 있던데를 가게 해주시면 좋을듯
03:22:735 (3,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/424187 뭔가 예쁜 예를 들고싶었지만 망.. 어쨌든 예쁘게 수정하시는게 나을것같아요
03:38:068 (3,4) - 조금 밑으로 내리셔서 03:39:402 (1) 에게 감싸지는 느낌이 더 들게 해주세여


똥모딩이니까 부담없이 무시하셔도 됩니다
HelloSCV
대부분 수정 했습니다 감사합니다

푸시가 없어서 이렇게 올리네요 양해좀 해주세요 :)

SPOILER
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: S.I.D.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 120068
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Yeoraeah
Artist:S.I.D Sound
Creator:Star Stream
Version:SCV's Normal
Source:
Tags:singer Roricheseul

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
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364,40,262402,2,0,B|408:16|452:32,1,90,0|2
496,108,263068,1,0
472,196,263402,5,0
388,224,263735,1,0
300,200,264068,1,2
268,116,264402,1,0
192,68,264735,2,0,B|104:36|4:56,2,180,0|2|0
156,152,266402,1,0
244,148,266735,2,0,B|348:144,1,90,2|0
424,148,267402,5,0
460,232,267735,2,0,B|460:280|488:328,2,90,0|2|0
372,248,268735,1,0
288,276,269068,1,0
196,276,269402,2,0,B|148:260|116:212,1,90,2|0
256,192,270068,12,0,272068
360,128,272735,5,4
284,176,273068,2,0,B|236:200|184:196,1,90,0|2
120,152,273735,1,0
48,100,274068,2,0,B|28:200|96:276,1,180,0|2
168,312,275068,1,0
256,324,275402,6,0,B|304:320|336:280,1,90
256,236,276068,2,0,B|288:192|280:140,1,90,2|0
192,168,276735,2,0,B|184:116|144:84,1,90
64,68,277402,1,2
28,152,277735,5,0
72,232,278068,2,0,B|152:264|196:360,1,180,0|2
256,292,279068,1,0
320,356,279402,2,0,B|362:262|442:230,1,180,0|2
448,140,280402,5,0
360,124,280735,2,0,B|320:100|264:100,1,90
276,192,281402,2,0,B|230:192|190:168,1,90,2|0
136,96,282068,2,0,B|100:132|92:176|104:228|152:248,1,180,0|2
240,276,283068,1,0
328,292,283402,5,0
404,240,283735,2,0,B|416:184|460:172,2,90,0|2|0
352,168,284735,1,0
292,104,285068,1,0
200,104,285402,1,2
140,168,285735,1,0
172,252,286068,6,0,B|256:184|336:252,1,180,0|2
256,296,287068,1,0
336,336,287402,2,0,B|252:404|172:336,1,180,0|2
96,288,288402,1,0
88,200,288735,6,0,B|128:120,1,90
204,168,289402,2,0,B|276:108,1,90,2|0
360,136,290068,1,0
392,220,290402,2,0,B|416:264|460:276,2,90,0|2|0
256,192,291402,12,0,293402
376,172,294068,6,0,B|336:268|236:288,1,180,0|2
156,276,295068,1,0
100,204,295402,1,0
136,120,295736,2,0,B|152:76|204:64,2,90,0|2|0
256,192,296735,12,0,299402
Leorda
Yo


[Robby's Easy]
03:07:402 (1) - The repeating slider is overlapped by spinner-osu, which is unrankable
03:28:735 (1) - ^


[SCV's Normal]
00:36:735 (3) - Make a parallel slider? Like 00:35:735 (2)? (nazi)
01:51:402 (4) - Move the 4th sliderpoint to move 1 grid down to make a perfect blanket combo (nazi)
03:28:735 (1) - The repeating slider is overlapped by spinner-osu, which is unrankable


[Hard]
01:51:235 (5) - Remove whistle at sliderbody, it's annoying


That's all I got, hope it's help!
HelloSCV
Alltur
모딩큐에서 왔어요~ Mostly suggestions~
노래 길지만.. 좋은 노래네용~ 적용하시거나/적용안하시거나 reply 해주시면 감사하겠습니다~

[General]
Clear.
콤보색을 기본적인 색 말고 다른색으로 해도 괜찮을 것 같습니다.
쉬운 난이도를 만드신 분은 Robby라는 분이신것 같은데 JS's Easy인 이유는 뭔가용?

[JS's Easy]
00:43:402 (1,2) - 대칭되는 슬라이더로? 물론 1번 슬라이더의 끝과 2번 슬라이더의 시작이 대칭.
01:44:735 (3,4) - 불규칙적인 간격이예요. 일단 쉬운 난이도니까 똑같은 간격으로..
02:07:401 (2,4) - 2번의 슬라이더의 잔상이 사라지고 있는 상태에서 4번 서클이 등장하는 것이 쉬운 난이도에 기준에 비해 조금 어려울 거라는 생각을 조금 해봅니다. 일단 음악의 BPM 자체도 느린 것 같으니..
02:50:068 (4) - nazi: x:120 y:148 위치에 놓아주심은 어떤가요?
02:54:068 (3) - nazi: 오른쪽으로 한칸.
02:56:735 (1,3) - nazi: 두개의 슬라이더 모양을 동일하게?
03:07:402 (1,2,3) - 이런식의 배치는 어떤가요?
03:12:068 (4) - 만약 윗 모딩이 적용 된다면, 이 서클은 현재 콤보의 2번 서클과 같은 위치로.
03:41:402 (2,3) - nazi: 두개의 슬라이더 모양을 동일하게?
04:49:402 (2) - nazi: 위로 한 칸.
04:54:068 (1,2) - 이 슬라이더와 서클 콤보 앞쪽에 스피너, 뒤쪽에 스피너가 있으니 스크린샷 처럼 중앙으로 노트들을 배치해서 더 쉽게 플레이어들이 플레이 할 수 있도록 하는 것은 어떤가요?

[SCV's normal]
00:08:068 (2,1) - 간격 맞춰주세요
00:19:735 (2,3) - 3번 슬라이더 끝이 2번 슬라이더에 가려서 보이지 않습니다. 노트가 슬라이더 경로에 숨겨지면 안되듯이, 슬라이더 끝도 콤보에 포함되고 슬라이더 끝이 90%이상 가려진 상태에서는 제 생각에는 바꾸는 편이 좋을 것 같네요.
00:58:068 (3) - nazi: 슬라이더 모양을 좀 향상 시켜주세요.
01:01:402 (3) - nazi: 슬라이더의 가운데 포인트를 약간 오른쪽 아래로 내려서 2번이 조금 더 blanket 되게 하는건 어떤가요?
03:11:402 (3,1) - 간격 맞춰주세요
04:33:735 (3,4) - 이런 형식의 슬라이더 모양은 어떤가요?
04:43:735 (2) - 슬라이더의 가운데 포인트를 남동쪽으로 놓아서 (갑자기 puush가 안되네요..) 2번으로 잘 연결되게..

[Hard]
00:39:735 (2,4) - 이 두 노트는 일부러 쌓아놓지 않으신건가요? 고의적인 배치였다면 이 부분은 무시해주세요.
01:13:402 (4,5) - 점프가 좀 크다고 생각합니다..
02:02:735 (4,1) - nazi: 4번 슬라이더 시작부분과 1번 슬라이더 경로가 조금 가깝네요 조금 떨어뜨려주는 건 어떤가요?
02:43:568 - 여기서 시작하는 노트없는 구간에 break를 넣어주시는 건 어떤가요? 일단 HP drain rate가 어느정도 되어서 그 부분에서 HP가 20%정도는 소모되는 것 같습니다.
03:30:735 (4,1) - 02:02:735와 동일

Good Luck!~
HelloSCV

Akashi_S wrote:

[SCV's normal]
00:08:068 (2,1) - 간격 맞춰주세요
00:19:735 (2,3) - 3번 슬라이더 끝이 2번 슬라이더에 가려서 보이지 않습니다. 노트가 슬라이더 경로에 숨겨지면 안되듯이, 슬라이더 끝도 콤보에 포함되고 슬라이더 끝이 90%이상 가려진 상태에서는 제 생각에는 바꾸는 편이 좋을 것 같네요. Fixed
00:58:068 (3) - nazi: 슬라이더 모양을 좀 향상 시켜주세요.Fixed
01:01:402 (3) - nazi: 슬라이더의 가운데 포인트를 약간 오른쪽 아래로 내려서 2번이 조금 더 blanket 되게 하는건 어떤가요? Fixed
03:11:402 (3,1) - 간격 맞춰주세요
04:33:735 (3,4) - 이런 형식의 슬라이더 모양은 어떤가요? Fixed
04:43:735 (2) - 슬라이더의 가운데 포인트를 남동쪽으로 놓아서 (갑자기 puush가 안되네요..) 2번으로 잘 연결되게.. Fixed
http://puu.sh/1eBri
Breeze
[SB]

  1. Since you've got 2 GD in this map, why not display the creator name of GD in their own GD?
[JS' Easy]

  • 00:03:402 - 00:14:068 - In this part, sliderslide sounds loud, maybe you can use an empty sliderslide sound during this period of time?
  1. 00:46:068 - Drag break to here fit music
  2. 02:43:402 - Drag break to here looked nice
[SCV's Normal]

  • 00:03:402 - 00:14:068 - Same to Easy
  1. 03:12:068 (3) - Slider end, you forget to add whistle here?
[Hard]

  1. 00:03:402 - 00:14:068 - Same to easy
  2. 00:46:068 - Drag break to here
  3. 01:10:068 - Remove this break make this map play more smooth imo
Others looked fine
Birdy
Really nice map already, small nazi suggestions incoming~

[Easy]
02:56:735 (1,3) - You could make these blanket the circle prettier ( http://puu.sh/1m9YV )

[Normal]
00:58:068 (3) - Please make more cute curve
02:09:402 (2) - Move slider tail one square up (grid lv 4)
04:47:402 (3) - One square down

[Hard]
00:23:402 (3) - Move sliderpoints a bit closer to slider center so it will be more round instead of this cubic shape
00:35:402 (1) - ^
00:56:735 (1) - ^
01:02:068 (1,3) - ^
etc. there's more of them too, just fix them a little bit... no big change needed but it looks uncomfortable anyway
02:02:735 (4) - Make this more symmetric with the next slider ( http://puu.sh/1mafm )
03:22:735 (3) - Move the middle sliderpoint to x:60 y:256 and slider end to x:162 y:299 (grid snap off)

Nice song and map, would like to see it ranked~
Guy
Hi~ request from via in-game

 

JS' Easy


 ● 00:24:735 (1) - move to y:304 and make an equilateral triangle. more beautiful
 ● 00:35:401 (1) - Slider form is ugly.. 2nd point move x:448 y:272 or 2nd point delete and make a newly beautiful slider.
 ● 01:50:068 (3) - use copy of (1) slider and Ctrl+H,Ctrl+J. To make parallel.
 ● 02:05:401 (1) - delete slider and add note to 02:05:402 - and add slider to 02:06:068 - end is 02:06:735 - . i think so better

 ● 02:16:068 (1) - ^ above reason

I think this diff needs more mod. slider form, placement.

 

SCV's Normal


 ● 00:04:735 (4) - like this slider form?
 ● 00:18:068 (4) - this slider is little ugly
 ● 04:46:068 (1,3) - make it with the center line symmetrically.

 

Hard


 ● 04:40:735 (3,4) - This slider is too much sharp. like this?

sorry, short mod~
good luck ;)
HelloSCV
Fixed thank you for all :D
http://puu.sh/1n6EG
Topic Starter
Star Stream
fixed/remapped some parts
and thanks for modding~
Kaburagi Kotetsu
Fixed!
thanks for modding~
 
http://puu.sh/1nnqM
Sonnyc
A great korean song <3 for osu
Sure
[General]
  1. Title : v10 부터는 유니코드가 지원 되니까 제목을 "여래아 (黎崍阿)"로 바꿔 주시면 좋을 듯 합니다.
    그리고 현행 로마자표기법을 따르면 "Yeoraea"가 맞습니다.
  2. Tags : 로리체슬이란 분이 보컬 하셨다는 건 알겠는데 "Singer"를 태그에 넣을 필요는 없습니다.
    태그에서 빼 주시고 Creator's Word에 보컬 누구라고 적어 주시면 됩니다.
    앨범명 : "Decibe1 Magic"을 태그에 추가 해 주세요. 그리고 JSSky님 이름 바꾸셨던데 바뀐 것도 태그에 넣어 주세요.
  3. 도입부(00:03:407 ~ 00:24:740) 히트사운드에 관한건데, soft-sliderslide 소리가 많이 거슬리는 편입니다. 무음으로 하시길 추천합니다.

[Storyboard]
  1. Lyrics.png : "Lyrics by Asgard"의 의미는 "작사자 : 아스가드"라는 의미입니다. "Subtitles by Asgard"로 바꿔 주세요.
  2. 각 난이도별로 매퍼가 다른데 .osb에 "Beatmap by Star Stream" 코드 하나만 넣었더군요. 난이도 별로 분리 시켜 주세요.

[Hard]
00:39:740 (2,4) - 의도적이라고 보기엔 일관성이 없어 보입니다. 같은 위치에 놓아 주세요.
01:51:240 (5) - 슬라이더바디에서 휘슬 제거
02:12:740 (3,4,5,6) - 흐름이랑 스페이싱이 조금 어색합니다. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/506284
03:01:740 (6) - x:64 / y:140
04:37:073 (2) - 화살표를 왼쪽방향으로


[SCV's Normal]
전체적으로 봤을 때 뉴콤보 패턴이 다운비트에서 시작 되는 쪽이 압도적으로 많더군요.
거기에 맞게 뉴콤보 모딩 들어갑니다. 가끔 가사에 맞춰 넣으셨더라고요?

00:19:407 (1) - x:160 / y:88
00:22:407 (2) - 조금 꺾어보세요. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/506298
00:29:073 (5) - http://puu.sh/1uRWQ
00:59:406 (1) - 스페이싱
01:50:407 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/506302
02:16:073 (1) - 다음 노트에 뉴콤보
02:18:073 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거
02:55:073 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/506303
02:59:073 (1) - 다음 노트에 뉴콤보
03:18:406 (2) - http://puu.sh/1uS0g
03:37:406 (2,3) - 서로 겹치지 않게 해보세요
04:19:073 (1) - 다음 노트에 뉴콤보
04:23:406 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거
04:24:740 (5) - 뉴콤보
04:37:740 (1) - 다음 노트에 뉴콤보
04:40:406 (1) - ^


[JS' Easy]
난이도 세팅값에서 노멀이랑 차이가 없으니 HP 2 / OD 2 로 낮춰 주세요.

00:24:740 - 여기부턴 힛사운드 볼륨을 조금 올려 주세요.
00:44:740 (2) - 반복 한 번 넣으면 다음 브레이크에 맞게 박자가 깔끔하게 떨어집니다.
02:32:740 - 도입부 약간 지나서처럼 볼륨을 올려 주세요.
03:41:407 (1) - 여기 뉴콤보는 조금 생뚱맞군요.
04:37:407 (1) - 지금까지 유지해온 리듬과 다르게 이질감이 많이 듭니다.


홧팅요 ;D
Kaburagi Kotetsu
all fixed
http://puu.sh/1uSMn

근데 이게 모딩내용 수정하고 보니깐 0.5 난이도가 되버려서

몇군데 박자 추가해버리게 됬네요.

그리고 Kotetsu's Easy를 하고 싶었지만

주변 사람들의 투표로 KK's Easy 가 됬습니다 엉엉
Kuroneko-sHerald
[Kiai]
Instead of a single kiai, I suggest to split in two part.
Example:
As it is now:
Kiai starts on 02:00:740, ends on 02:22:073

After:
Kiai starts on 02:00:740, ends on 02:05:407
starts on 02:11:407, ends on 02:22:073
And so on for the other kiai.

[Hard]
00:41:740 (3,4,5,6,7) - I suggest to remove (6) (no spacing fix) because it don't fit for me.
04:54:073 - lower the volume to 30% (or 20%)?

Well, only this.
BeatofIke
Map looks good! STAR!
Topic Starter
Star Stream
ykcarrot > 3번째 사항 빼고 전부 고쳤습니다
모딩 감사합니다
Kawayi Rika
For my Queue ~ We only fixed doubled osb file in osz.

Nothing issue,Relax korean song ~ Here you go :3




EDIT : sorry,i missing a point ~

Please remove these sb code and resubmit again ~

SPOILER
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Korean lyrics\Beatmap.png",320,240
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Korean lyrics\Lyrics.png",320,240

EDIT 2 : fixed,already ~ rebubbled ~
Kaburagi Kotetsu
아.. 매핑 기초도 없을때 만들었던 겟난이 있음에도 불구하고 버블을 받다니.. 크흑 감동이다

GORANKGO
Charles445
No 1/3 for the instruments in the bg?
I am disappoint.
ztrot
[Hard]

01:05:906 Object's end is not snapped!
02:57:906 Object's end is not snapped!
03:39:906 Object's end is not snapped!
04:43:906 Object's end is not snapped!

other than that everything is fine get back to me and I can rank this

okay aimod got a bit of a picky update these are fine
-Neipezi
스스님 랭크 축!
Sure
랭크 축하요~
Kaburagi Kotetsu
와우 여래아 랭크 축하드려요!

제 첫 겟난 랭크닷헤헿
Sonnyc
여래아가 한자라서 당황스러웠어요 ㅋ

랭 축 ~~
minyeob
한글 SB 신선해요 >~<
cRyo[iceeicee]
y no S.S diff :?
Grats!
bugread98

Sure wrote:

[General]
  1. Title : v10 부터는 유니코드가 지원 되니까 제목을 "여래아 (黎崍阿)"로 바꿔 주시면 좋을 듯 합니다.
    그리고 현행 로마자표기법을 따르면 "Yeoraea"가 맞습니다.
  2. Tags : 로리체슬이란 분이 보컬 하셨다는 건 알겠는데 "Singer"를 태그에 넣을 필요는 없습니다.
    태그에서 빼 주시고 Creator's Word에 보컬 누구라고 적어 주시면 됩니다.
    앨범명 : "Decibe1 Magic"을 태그에 추가 해 주세요. 그리고 JSSky님 이름 바꾸셨던데 바뀐 것도 태그에 넣어 주세요.
  3. 도입부(00:03:407 ~ 00:24:740) 히트사운드에 관한건데, soft-sliderslide 소리가 많이 거슬리는 편입니다. 무음으로 하시길 추천합니다.

[Storyboard]
  1. Lyrics.png : "Lyrics by Asgard"의 의미는 "작사자 : 아스가드"라는 의미입니다. "Subtitles by Asgard"로 바꿔 주세요.
  2. 각 난이도별로 매퍼가 다른데 .osb에 "Beatmap by Star Stream" 코드 하나만 넣었더군요. 난이도 별로 분리 시켜 주세요.

[Hard]
00:39:740 (2,4) - 의도적이라고 보기엔 일관성이 없어 보입니다. 같은 위치에 놓아 주세요.
01:51:240 (5) - 슬라이더바디에서 휘슬 제거
02:12:740 (3,4,5,6) - 흐름이랑 스페이싱이 조금 어색합니다. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/506284
03:01:740 (6) - x:64 / y:140
04:37:073 (2) - 화살표를 왼쪽방향으로


[SCV's Normal]
전체적으로 봤을 때 뉴콤보 패턴이 다운비트에서 시작 되는 쪽이 압도적으로 많더군요.
거기에 맞게 뉴콤보 모딩 들어갑니다. 가끔 가사에 맞춰 넣으셨더라고요?

00:19:407 (1) - x:160 / y:88
00:22:407 (2) - 조금 꺾어보세요. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/506298
00:29:073 (5) - http://puu.sh/1uRWQ
00:59:406 (1) - 스페이싱
01:50:407 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/506302
02:16:073 (1) - 다음 노트에 뉴콤보
02:18:073 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거
02:55:073 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/506303
02:59:073 (1) - 다음 노트에 뉴콤보
03:18:406 (2) - http://puu.sh/1uS0g
03:37:406 (2,3) - 서로 겹치지 않게 해보세요
04:19:073 (1) - 다음 노트에 뉴콤보
04:23:406 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거
04:24:740 (5) - 뉴콤보
04:37:740 (1) - 다음 노트에 뉴콤보
04:40:406 (1) - ^


[JS' Easy]
난이도 세팅값에서 노멀이랑 차이가 없으니 HP 2 / OD 2 로 낮춰 주세요.

00:24:740 - 여기부턴 힛사운드 볼륨을 조금 올려 주세요.
00:44:740 (2) - 반복 한 번 넣으면 다음 브레이크에 맞게 박자가 깔끔하게 떨어집니다.
02:32:740 - 도입부 약간 지나서처럼 볼륨을 올려 주세요.
03:41:407 (1) - 여기 뉴콤보는 조금 생뚱맞군요.
04:37:407 (1) - 지금까지 유지해온 리듬과 다르게 이질감이 많이 듭니다.


홧팅요 ;D
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