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Misty Rain - Sakura no Sakanu wa Eiketsu no [Taiko|Osu]

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Topic Starter
Loneight
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年4月6日 at 下午 12:01:59

Artist: Misty Rain
Title: Sakura no Sakanu wa Eiketsu no
Source: Touhou
Tags: qoot8123 Firce777 l1106188 toyosatomimi no miko true administrator th13 ten desires 10D shoutoku legend Zun
BPM: 152
Filesize: 7945kb
Play Time: 03:38
Difficulties Available:
  1. Firce777's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 1375 notes)
  2. Hard (4.81 stars, 435 notes)
  3. Lunatic (5 stars, 748 notes)
  4. Normal (3.04 stars, 223 notes)
  5. qoot8123's Taiko Muzukashii (4.71 stars, 756 notes)
Download: Misty Rain - Sakura no Sakanu wa Eiketsu no
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#7
Enjoy it :3

Normal ----- done by me
Hard ----- done by me
Lunatic ----- done by me
qoot8123's Taiko Muzukashii ----- done by qoot8123
Firce777's Taiko Oni ----- done by Firce777

Special thanks
qoot8123 does "Muzukashii" for this map
Firce777 does "Oni" for this map
Scorpiour bubbles this map!
Melophobia rebubbles this map
LKs bubbles#2 this map!!!
Garven rebubbles#2 this map !!!
Kawayi Rika ranks it!!!

Thanks them for modding or star
Kin
Flask
xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx
Numbers 596108
L_P
a3272509123 (thanks for 2 stars !!!)
Sonnyc (very thanks for 4 stars !!!)
Rotte
bakabaka
sherrie_fay
pimpG
spboxer3
Scorpiour
OnosakiHito
Melophobia
LKs
wmfchris
Garven
Flask
1st!!!1st!!!
Kin
M4M ~

Taiko Muzukashii :

In my opinion, this diff look sometimes like an oni diff
00:25:687 (1) - It's just a wrong color ~
00:41:279 (1) - maybe k ?
00:43:845 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - i think it's look a bit hard for muzu (not really sure)
00:58:845 (5) - k
02:21:937 (8,1) - switch k d
02:25:687 (1) - just a wrong color ~
02:28:450 (3) - k ?
02:50:950 (1) - wrong color ~
03:07:529 (4,5,6) - k k k ?
03:17:792 (1) - wrong color ~

Taiko Oni :

00:11:476 (8,9,10,11) - k k k k
00:13:943 (1,1) - switch d k or 00:13:845 (2,1,1,2,1) - dkkdk ?
00:32:397 (9) - k
00:34:766 (3) - ^
00:53:318 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2) - dkd kkd or dkddkkd
00:54:897 (1,1,2,3,1) - dkddk ?
00:55:588 - add kat
01:09:798 - ^
01:26:871 (2) - k
02:01:213 (2,1) - d k ?
02:35:752 (2,1) - kd ?
02:38:022 (2) - k ?
02:46:213 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - ddkdddkdk
03:20:456 (4,1,2,1) - dkdk
03:25:193 (2,3,4,1) - dkkd

Lunatic :

01:27:660 (2) - try something like this ? http://puu.sh/1d2dM
lol that all I can find in standard diff <_<
well if you want template BG for taiko diff, here you go : http://puu.sh/1d2v8
Topic Starter
Loneight

Flask wrote:

1st!!!1st!!!
恭喜您贏得了"頭香"稱號

Kin wrote:

M4M ~

Lunatic :

01:27:660 (2) - try something like this ? http://puu.sh/1d2dM :arrow: no , i want to keep it ~
lol that all I can find in standard diff <_<
well if you want template BG for taiko diff, here you go : http://puu.sh/1d2v8
Thank you for modding, star, and BGr~ :3 , but it still WIP

Upload!!!
Flask
哦耶我得了頭香稱號 Mod/M4M Request via In-Game PM

[General]
  1. Hard的Tags只有qoot8123耶OAO 加上別的其他diff有的tag吧
  2. Remove countdown on every diff plz
[Normal]
  1. 為毛前面那段的slidertick有聲音啊>_>嚇到了(?
  2. 00:24:897 (5) - 感覺這裡不需要finish Normal的聲音就夠了 所以remove finish change to N sound?
  3. 00:52:529 (2) - 沒finish嗎o.o
  4. 01:30:422 (3) - ^
  5. 02:20:948 (4) - ^
  6. 02:46:211 (4) - ^
  7. 01:57:263 (1,2,3) - 說起來這裡節奏變的很快 還是覺得應該用個slider+折返代替這三個才打的爽233
  8. 03:11:078 (1) - 這顆刪掉 音不明顯容易打不准._.
[Hard]
  1. 00:52:529 (1) - 沒finish嗎o.o
  2. 01:30:422 (1) - ^
  3. 02:20:948 (1) - ^
  4. 01:54:500 - 為毛break是從這裡開始orz Luna跟Nor都沒有啊o.o
  5. 02:49:369 (1,2,3) - 這三個連再一起讓我覺得很怪-_- 不如把(2)刪了然後擺一個note再白線上聽起來比較舒服
    這diff好棒啊-w-想吐槽都吐不了(?
[Lunatic]
  1. 00:07:529 - 擺個note 畢敬00:09:108 (3) - 這裡都有了lol
  2. 01:37:823 (4) - 上個clap
  3. 02:08:513 (2) - 總覺得這裡是1/4 slider的樣子 (3)也是1/4嘛就一起放(?
這歌好好聽>w<
Awesome map, take my star!!
Topic Starter
Loneight

Flask wrote:

哦耶我得了頭香稱號 Mod/M4M Request via In-Game PM
<3

[General]
  1. Hard的Tags只有qoot8123耶OAO 加上別的其他diff有的tag吧 :arrow: 改了~
  2. Remove countdown on every diff plz :arrow: KK!!
[Normal]
  1. 為毛前面那段的slidertick有聲音啊>_>嚇到了(? :arrow: 哪裡?!
  2. 00:24:897 (5) - 感覺這裡不需要finish Normal的聲音就夠了 所以remove finish change to N sound? :arrow: 保留! 覺得可以放
  3. 00:52:529 (2) - 沒finish嗎o.o :arrow: 嗯 咱聽起來是不需要
  4. 01:30:422 (3) - ^ :arrow: ^
  5. 02:20:948 (4) - ^ :arrow: ^
  6. 02:46:211 (4) - ^ :arrow: ^
  7. 01:57:263 (1,2,3) - 說起來這裡節奏變的很快 還是覺得應該用個slider+折返代替這三個才打的爽233 :arrow: 改了 >w<
  8. 03:11:078 (1) - 這顆刪掉 音不明顯容易打不准._. :arrow: KK!
[Hard]
  1. 00:52:529 (1) - 沒finish嗎o.o :arrow: 同Normal~
  2. 01:30:422 (1) - ^ :arrow: ^
  3. 02:20:948 (1) - ^ :arrow: ^
  4. 01:54:500 - 為毛break是從這裡開始orz Luna跟Nor都沒有啊o.o :arrow: 哎?! 原來咱不小心加到了
  5. 02:49:369 (1,2,3) - 這三個連再一起讓我覺得很怪-_- 不如把(2)刪了然後擺一個note再白線上聽起來比較舒服 :arrow: K~
    這diff好棒啊-w-想吐槽都吐不了(? :arrow: 這不是很多嗎 lol!
[Lunatic]
  1. 00:07:529 - 擺個note 畢敬00:09:108 (3) - 這裡都有了lol :arrow: 這邊沒音可以讓咱擺 ;w;
  2. 01:37:823 (4) - 上個clap :arrow: 好險你有點這個 , 這個咱本來放在1/6 好像壞掉變成這樣了
  3. 02:08:513 (2) - 總覺得這裡是1/4 slider的樣子 (3)也是1/4嘛就一起放(? :arrow: 不懂 ;w;
這歌好好聽>w< :arrow: 咱不可能做自己不喜歡聽的歌(被打
Awesome map, take my star!!
謝謝Flask醬的modding和star >w<
Upload!!!
bakabaka
wa ';3

Mod in Irc

SPOILER
18:49 l1106188: baka醬 早灣 >w<
18:50 l1106188: 咱想問說那個!! baka接受reqs嗎 ;w;
18:50 l1106188: *baka醬
18:50 bakabaka: MOD圖嗎:O
18:50 l1106188: 嗯嗯 ;w;
18:50 bakabaka: 我現在沒再玩~不知道會不會MOD QAQ
18:50 bakabaka: 先看看 >_<
18:52 bakabaka: np :3
18:55 l1106188: 嗯 >W<
18:55 l1106188: 咱剛剛去上廁所 對不起 ;w;
18:55 *l1106188 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/188370 Misty Rain - Sakura no Saka nu ha Eiketsu no]
18:56 l1106188: 做得有些渣 請見諒 ;w;
18:56 bakabaka: 不過l188神mapper~我不認為能MO到神馬QAQ
18:57 l1106188: 咱才不是神麻婆 baka醬才是神麻婆 , 咱一堆東西可以讓你噴 ;w;
18:58 bakabaka: 神圖QAQ
18:59 l1106188: 才不神 ;w;
19:00 bakabaka: note顏色跟BG好像~要瞎了QAQ
19:01 l1106188: lol!
19:01 l1106188: XDD
19:01 l1106188: 咱習慣combo跟背景用相近的 (被打 ..
19:06 bakabaka: 00:07:924 (1) - nc
19:07 l1106188: 好了 >w<
19:07 l1106188: 咱其實也有再考慮 (被打
19:08 bakabaka: 時間間隔太久~NC比較好w
19:08 bakabaka: 00:16:213 (1) - 這個要不要跟
19:09 bakabaka: 00:15:621 (4,5) - 成三角形
19:09 l1106188: 好了 :3
19:10 bakabaka: 00:16:608 (2,3,4) - 我覺得讓這個離前面那個遠點比較好:O
19:10 l1106188: 好了 :D
19:10 bakabaka: 00:17:397 (6) - ctrl+G ?
19:11 l1106188: 嗯 >w<
19:11 bakabaka: :3
19:11 l1106188: 好像到現在都接受 (被打
19:11 bakabaka: : o
19:13 bakabaka: 01:03:054 (2,3,4) - 感覺這三個有點難讀lol
19:13 l1106188: 那該怎麼辦 ;w;
19:14 bakabaka: 至少01:03:054 (1) - 這裡加個nc
19:14 bakabaka: 不然就3個全nc lol
19:15 l1106188: 刪掉01:03:186 - 呢 ?
19:16 bakabaka: 不要 比較好的感覺lol
19:16 bakabaka: 其實我覺得這裡開始~後面全加nc好像也可以ww
19:16 l1106188: lol!
19:17 bakabaka: 因為nc一半感覺不好~有變速又不能不NC lol
19:18 l1106188: 所以 意思是後面全部1個note1個NC嗎
19:19 bakabaka: 01:03:186 (3,4,2,2,2) -
19:19 bakabaka: lol
19:20 l1106188: lol 34 222 lol?!
19:20 l1106188: 部隊!
19:20 l1106188: lol 3,4,2,2,2 ?!
19:20 bakabaka: w
19:20 bakabaka: 其實不用也沒差w
19:20 bakabaka: 不過01:03:054 (2,1,1) - 這三個要想想呢 w
19:22 bakabaka: 01:41:474 (1,2,3) - 不擺正三角嗎:O?
19:23 l1106188: 嗯 跟著vocal的高低音 (被打
19:23 bakabaka: 恩
19:24 bakabaka: 01:57:263 (1) - 要不要把這往右上角移一些~感覺離前面三連打好近 :<
19:25 l1106188: x:432 y:72 呢?!
19:26 bakabaka: 其實讓01:57:263 (1,2,3,4) - 這根後面平行好像也不錯lol
19:27 l1106188: lol!
19:27 l1106188: 有點不懂 ;w;
19:27 bakabaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/481861這樣之類?
19:27 bakabaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/481861
19:28 l1106188: 嗯!
19:28 l1106188: 改好了 :D
19:28 bakabaka: 01:58:842 (1) - 感覺這樣疊不順手耶
19:30 l1106188: 那x:100 y:82呢
19:30 bakabaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/481862 要不要23位置交換~13位置調成正三角?
19:30 bakabaka: 因為原本那樣~換這不好看 01:59:434 (3,1,2,3) -
19:31 l1106188: k!
19:31 l1106188: 改好了 >w<
19:31 bakabaka: 如果是照我圖片那樣改的話~01:59:829 (1) - 這要不要NC lol
19:32 l1106188: 嗯!
19:32 bakabaka: 02:06:342 (9,1) - 鬼畜:3
19:33 l1106188: lol!
19:33 l1106188: XDD(被打
19:37 bakabaka: 沒惹QwQ
Topic Starter
Loneight

bakabaka wrote:

wa ';3

Mod in Irc

SPOILER
18:49 l1106188: baka醬 早灣 >w<
18:50 l1106188: 咱想問說那個!! baka接受reqs嗎 ;w;
18:50 l1106188: *baka醬
18:50 bakabaka: MOD圖嗎:O
18:50 l1106188: 嗯嗯 ;w;
18:50 bakabaka: 我現在沒再玩~不知道會不會MOD QAQ
18:50 bakabaka: 先看看 >_<
18:52 bakabaka: np :3
18:55 l1106188: 嗯 >W<
18:55 l1106188: 咱剛剛去上廁所 對不起 ;w;
18:55 *l1106188 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/188370 Misty Rain - Sakura no Saka nu ha Eiketsu no]
18:56 l1106188: 做得有些渣 請見諒 ;w;
18:56 bakabaka: 不過l188神mapper~我不認為能MO到神馬QAQ
18:57 l1106188: 咱才不是神麻婆 baka醬才是神麻婆 , 咱一堆東西可以讓你噴 ;w;
18:58 bakabaka: 神圖QAQ
18:59 l1106188: 才不神 ;w;
19:00 bakabaka: note顏色跟BG好像~要瞎了QAQ
19:01 l1106188: lol!
19:01 l1106188: XDD
19:01 l1106188: 咱習慣combo跟背景用相近的 (被打 ..
19:06 bakabaka: 00:07:924 (1) - nc
19:07 l1106188: 好了 >w<
19:07 l1106188: 咱其實也有再考慮 (被打
19:08 bakabaka: 時間間隔太久~NC比較好w
19:08 bakabaka: 00:16:213 (1) - 這個要不要跟
19:09 bakabaka: 00:15:621 (4,5) - 成三角形
19:09 l1106188: 好了 :3
19:10 bakabaka: 00:16:608 (2,3,4) - 我覺得讓這個離前面那個遠點比較好:O
19:10 l1106188: 好了 :D
19:10 bakabaka: 00:17:397 (6) - ctrl+G ?
19:11 l1106188: 嗯 >w<
19:11 bakabaka: :3
19:11 l1106188: 好像到現在都接受 (被打
19:11 bakabaka: : o
19:13 bakabaka: 01:03:054 (2,3,4) - 感覺這三個有點難讀lol
19:13 l1106188: 那該怎麼辦 ;w;
19:14 bakabaka: 至少01:03:054 (1) - 這裡加個nc
19:14 bakabaka: 不然就3個全nc lol
19:15 l1106188: 刪掉01:03:186 - 呢 ?
19:16 bakabaka: 不要 比較好的感覺lol
19:16 bakabaka: 其實我覺得這裡開始~後面全加nc好像也可以ww
19:16 l1106188: lol!
19:17 bakabaka: 因為nc一半感覺不好~有變速又不能不NC lol
19:18 l1106188: 所以 意思是後面全部1個note1個NC嗎
19:19 bakabaka: 01:03:186 (3,4,2,2,2) -
19:19 bakabaka: lol
19:20 l1106188: lol 34 222 lol?!
19:20 l1106188: 部隊!
19:20 l1106188: lol 3,4,2,2,2 ?!
19:20 bakabaka: w
19:20 bakabaka: 其實不用也沒差w
19:20 bakabaka: 不過01:03:054 (2,1,1) - 這三個要想想呢 w
19:22 bakabaka: 01:41:474 (1,2,3) - 不擺正三角嗎:O?
19:23 l1106188: 嗯 跟著vocal的高低音 (被打
19:23 bakabaka: 恩
19:24 bakabaka: 01:57:263 (1) - 要不要把這往右上角移一些~感覺離前面三連打好近 :<
19:25 l1106188: x:432 y:72 呢?!
19:26 bakabaka: 其實讓01:57:263 (1,2,3,4) - 這根後面平行好像也不錯lol
19:27 l1106188: lol!
19:27 l1106188: 有點不懂 ;w;
19:27 bakabaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/481861這樣之類?
19:27 bakabaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/481861
19:28 l1106188: 嗯!
19:28 l1106188: 改好了 :D
19:28 bakabaka: 01:58:842 (1) - 感覺這樣疊不順手耶
19:30 l1106188: 那x:100 y:82呢
19:30 bakabaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/481862 要不要23位置交換~13位置調成正三角?
19:30 bakabaka: 因為原本那樣~換這不好看 01:59:434 (3,1,2,3) -
19:31 l1106188: k!
19:31 l1106188: 改好了 >w<
19:31 bakabaka: 如果是照我圖片那樣改的話~01:59:829 (1) - 這要不要NC lol
19:32 l1106188: 嗯!
19:32 bakabaka: 02:06:342 (9,1) - 鬼畜:3
19:33 l1106188: lol!
19:33 l1106188: XDD(被打
19:37 bakabaka: 沒惹QwQ
謝謝baka醬的 modding >w<!
Kanari
Haii ~
You requested via in-game ~


[General]
- I think... combo colors can be better ~
Try these colors ~
[Colours]
Combo1 : 221,187,255
Combo2 : 157,157,255
Combo3 : 186,117,255
Combo4 : 85,85,255
Combo5 : 80,80,160


[Normal]
00:25:687 (1,1,1,1) - Space these objects a bit more?
03:23:315 (5) - Line with (3)


[Hard]
- HP Drain Rate +1 ?
00:07:529 - Add a circle.
01:54:204 - Insert break time.


[Lunatic]
01:54:204 - Insert break time.


Sorry for my poor mod.. ;w;
L18 so pro ~
Gogorank!
Good luck and star! >w<
Numbers 596108
Mod Request from forum-PM by l1106188

[qoot8123's Taiko Muzukashii]

Notes :

00:02:002 - Add a o
00:05:160 - Add a o
01:08:614 - Add a o
03:11:476 (1) - Too long.

[qoot8123's Taiko Oni]

Skipped. Read the rule of mine.
BCI
why hijiri in tags? this song totally can't come from Hijiri's theme, so remove
consider adding th13 ten desires 10D and shoutoku legend (write this in front of true administrator pls)

(trying for m4m but faled ;;) good luck, no kd
Topic Starter
Loneight

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Haii ~
You requested via in-game ~


[General]
- I think... combo colors can be better ~
Try these colors ~
[Colours]
Combo1 : 221,187,255
Combo2 : 157,157,255
Combo3 : 186,117,255
Combo4 : 85,85,255
Combo5 : 80,80,160

:arrow: i think color is okay :3

[Normal]
00:25:687 (1,1,1,1) - Space these objects a bit more? :arrow: k
03:23:315 (5) - Line with (3) :arrow: I change a little~


[Hard]
- HP Drain Rate +1 ? :arrow: k~
00:07:529 - Add a circle. :arrow: no~
01:54:204 - Insert break time. :arrow: k!


[Lunatic]
01:54:204 - Insert break time. :arrow: yeah!


Sorry for my poor mod.. ;w; :arrow: It is very helpful :D
L18 so pro ~ :arrow: I am not pro ;w;
Gogorank!
Good luck and star! >w<
Thank you for modding and star, Crystal :D

Numbers 596108 wrote:

Mod Request from forum-PM by l1106188

[qoot8123's Taiko Muzukashii]

Notes :

00:02:002 - Add a o
00:05:160 - Add a o
01:08:614 - Add a o
03:11:476 (1) - Too long.

[qoot8123's Taiko Oni]

Skipped. Read the rule of mine.
qoo say he have changed all ~

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

why hijiri in tags? this song totally can't come from Hijiri's theme, so remove
consider adding th13 ten desires 10D and shoutoku legend (write this in front of true administrator pls)

(trying for m4m but faled ;;) good luck, no kd
thank you, Ita. I think you have tried to mod my map, so give you KDs :3

Upload!!!
sherrie__fay
mod req via M4M queue 0w0

[Lunatic]
  1. 00:07:529 - +note
  2. 01:33:974 (2) - 没有包好
  3. 01:52:790 (2) - 可以左移一格(grid level 4
  4. 01:56:671 (1,2,3) - 试试挪到01:56:869 -
  5. 01:59:829 (1,2,3) - 后边再加两个note做成5连
[Hard]
  1. 00:07:529 - 为啥要不加note呢……故意空出来很难受啊
  2. 00:57:266 (1) - +reverse
  3. 00:58:845 (1) - ^
  4. 01:56:671 (1,2,3) - 同lunatic 试试挪到01:56:869 -
  5. 02:23:119 (2) - +whistle
  6. 02:50:948 (1) - +reverse
  7. 02:52:527 (1) - ^ 和前面一样,节奏太空了反而变得难抓了
[Normal]
  1. 00:07:529 - ……同前面和前面的前面 orz
  2. 00:18:187 (4) - 结尾去掉clap
  3. 02:49:369 (1) - 转盘尾的声音不好听
  4. 03:23:315 (5) - 结尾clap改whistle
  5. 03:35:157 (3) - ^
╰(*´︶`*)╯♡mod下试试拉~
Topic Starter
Loneight

sherrie__fay wrote:

mod req via M4M queue 0w0

[Lunatic]
  1. 00:07:529 - +note :arrow: hao~
  2. 01:33:974 (2) - 没有包好 :arrow: 咱看起來沒問題的說
  3. 01:52:790 (2) - 可以左移一格(grid level 4 :arrow: 不了~咱這邊為了保誠等三角形
  4. 01:56:671 (1,2,3) - 试试挪到01:56:869 - :arrow: 感覺怪怪的 對咱來說
  5. 01:59:829 (1,2,3) - 后边再加两个note做成5连 :arrow: ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:07:529 - 为啥要不加note呢……故意空出来很难受啊 :arrow: 本來想說 對音樂 看來很多人吐這點 所以改了~
  2. 00:57:266 (1) - +reverse :arrow: 不>~< 這樣flow 怪怪的
  3. 00:58:845 (1) - ^ :arrow: ^
  4. 01:56:671 (1,2,3) - 同lunatic 试试挪到01:56:869 - :arrow: no~
  5. 02:23:119 (2) - +whistle :arrow: +clap了~
  6. 02:50:948 (1) - +reverse :arrow: k!
  7. 02:52:527 (1) - ^ 和前面一样,节奏太空了反而变得难抓了 :arrow: 把這邊當一點休息 :3
[Normal]
  1. 00:07:529 - ……同前面和前面的前面 orz :arrow: kkk!!!
  2. 00:18:187 (4) - 结尾去掉clap :arrow: 不了 ;w;
  3. 02:49:369 (1) - 转盘尾的声音不好听 :arrow: 改小聲了~
  4. 03:23:315 (5) - 结尾clap改whistle :arrow: 不~
  5. 03:35:157 (3) - ^ :arrow: ^
╰(*´︶`*)╯♡mod下试试拉~
謝謝 fay姐的modding >w<!
Upload!!!
pimp
mod as requested i'm a bit late, sorry :?

normal

you are using too many curstom slider tick and the circles and slider starts are not that much hitsounded, actually it sounds good but you could consider making hitsounds in another logic because hitsounding affects gameplay in taiko mode

00:19:371 (1,2,3,4) - i think you shoud use the same pattern as 00:13:055 (1,2,3) - because they were suposed to be consistent imo... sounds really empty at 00:21:147, because you used a custom slider tick at 00:14:831...

hard

00:57:266 (1) - i think the slider end is unfitting, because this is a slow part of the song and it just ends like a common slider, i think it would feel better if you reduce slider speed and make it end at 00:58:450
00:58:845 (1) - ^
01:09:107 (2,3) - sounds bad imo, this part would be better as a spinner, or a long slider, or the same slider as 01:08:530 imo
01:37:132 (2) - feels like it should be a 1/2 beat slider with one repeat imo
01:53:317 (1,2) - same as 01:09:107 (2,3) -
01:56:671 (1,2,3) - remove this circles because they are the end of the previous measure, sounds better imo
02:50:948 (1,1,2) - same as 00:57:266 (1) -
03:00:157 (4) - would be better as a circle imo
03:01:736 (6) - ^
03:06:473 (4) - ^
03:08:052 (6) - ^

lunatic

00:57:266 (1) - would be better as a long slider with reduced slider speed to fit the slow down
00:58:845 (1) - ^
02:50:948 (1) - same as 00:57:266 (1)
02:52:527 (1) - ^

thats all i can find, sorry for delay :o

nice map as usual, good luck with ranking :)
Topic Starter
Loneight

pimpG wrote:

mod as requested i'm a bit late, sorry :?

normal

you are using too many curstom slider tick and the circles and slider starts are not that much hitsounded, actually it sounds good but you could consider making hitsounds in another logic because hitsounding affects gameplay in taiko mode :arrow: I think TK's hitsound will strange for some people who play TK, but it is fine for me

00:19:371 (1,2,3,4) - i think you shoud use the same pattern as 00:13:055 (1,2,3) - because they were suposed to be consistent imo... sounds really empty at 00:21:147, because you used a custom slider tick at 00:14:831... :arrow: oh! i deliberately change rhythm, so keep it :3

hard

00:57:266 (1) - i think the slider end is unfitting, because this is a slow part of the song and it just ends like a common slider, i think it would feel better if you reduce slider speed and make it end at 00:58:450 :arrow: no, if change, the slider will so long to play ;w;
00:58:845 (1) - ^ :arrow: ^
01:09:107 (2,3) - sounds bad imo, this part would be better as a spinner, or a long slider, or the same slider as 01:08:530 imo i change, but it isn't like you said
01:37:132 (2) - feels like it should be a 1/2 beat slider with one repeat imo no, >~<
01:53:317 (1,2) - same as 01:09:107 (2,3) - :arrow: same as 01:09:107 (2,3) -
01:56:671 (1,2,3) - remove this circles because they are the end of the previous measure, sounds better imo :arrow: k
02:50:948 (1,1,2) - same as 00:57:266 (1) - :arrow: same as 00:57:266 (1) -
03:00:157 (4) - would be better as a circle imo :arrow: no >~<
03:01:736 (6) - ^ :arrow: ^
03:06:473 (4) - ^ :arrow: ^
03:08:052 (6) - ^ :arrow: ^

lunatic

00:57:266 (1) - would be better as a long slider with reduced slider speed to fit the slow down
00:58:845 (1) - ^
02:50:948 (1) - same as 00:57:266 (1)
02:52:527 (1) - ^
:arrow: all change!

thats all i can find, sorry for delay :o :arrow: it's okay >w<

nice map as usual, good luck with ranking :)
Thank you for modding ~ pimpG :3
Upload!!!
Lan wings
到处贴IRC的Lan
01:14 l1106188: lol!
01:14 l1106188: 咱也想藍翼醬幫咱測圖 (逃
01:14 Lan_wings: 打多了个字
01:14 Lan_wings: 等会啊
01:14 Lan_wings: 先NP
01:14 *l1106188 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/178550 Misty Rain - Sakura no Saka nu ha Eiketsu no [Lunatic]]
01:32 Lan_wings: 来吧
01:33 l1106188: 嗯:3
01:35 Lan_wings: 节奏好难读._.
01:35 l1106188: w
01:35 l1106188: 嗯
01:37 l1106188: 咱打起來也有不順的感覺
01:37 l1106188: 但大致上不知道原因
01:37 Lan_wings: 00:13:746 (4,5) -
01:37 Lan_wings: 第一次的话稍微短一点的距离
01:38 Lan_wings: 然后逐渐拉大
01:38 Lan_wings: 00:09:502 (4,1) - 然后这种太坑了
01:38 l1106188: 咱知道 故意的 (逃
01:39 Lan_wings: 00:19:766 (2,3) - 这种节奏也是不好打的
01:39 Lan_wings: 建议做成两个slider
01:40 Lan_wings: 2种方法
01:40 Lan_wings: 一个是两个没有折返的slider
01:40 l1106188: 2 circle+1 slider呢?
01:40 Lan_wings: 一个是第一个slider加折返
01:40 Lan_wings: 然后后面一个长slider
01:41 Lan_wings: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/509685
01:41 Lan_wings: 这样
01:41 Lan_wings: 排列无视
01:41 Lan_wings: 00:23:713 (7) - 还有这些
01:41 l1106188: 不能2circle+1slider嘛 ;w;
01:42 Lan_wings: 不算很好打
01:42 Lan_wings: 也不好排列
01:42 Lan_wings: 所以不大推荐
01:42 Lan_wings: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/509687
01:42 Lan_wings: 真心觉得你拆开来效果要比合在一起好
01:43 Lan_wings: 一样都是跳
01:43 Lan_wings: 00:20:555 (5) - 像这样的slider多数都是用在stream里几个一起连着用的
01:44 l1106188: 咱知道了!
01:44 l1106188: 咱明天把這些sldier都改成2slider來去
01:44 Lan_wings: 你要是全部都拆开来效果好很多
01:44 Lan_wings: 而且两个slider可以做更多的排列
01:44 l1106188: 嗯 .. 咱怎麼沒想到 (望天
01:44 Lan_wings: 考虑下0108那图
01:44 Lan_wings: SH的
01:44 l1106188: lol!
01:44 Lan_wings: 参考下*
01:45 l1106188: 嗯 咱明天來改
01:45 *Lan_wings is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/120695 SOUND HOLIC - Earthquake Super Shock]
01:45 Lan_wings: 这个图
01:45 Lan_wings: 建议参考这里
01:46 Lan_wings: 有没发现节奏差不多=w=
01:46 l1106188: 嗯
01:46 Lan_wings: 前面那段
01:46 l1106188: 咱會改的 :3
01:46 l1106188: 藍翼醬要變kd嘛
01:46 Lan_wings: 加油=w=
01:46 l1106188: 還是要來個全mod (逃
01:46 Lan_wings: 不mod图现在
01:47 l1106188: 嗯 >w<
01:47 Lan_wings: 你要的话我就贴个irc
01:47 Lan_wings: 要sp的话*
01:47 l1106188: 貼吧:3
01:47 Lan_wings: 这年头mod难找
DarknessAngel
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General



  • (It seems you didn't notice some important things,you should fix them all.)
  1. qoot8123的難度的tags不同
  2. 只有Normal有02:57:197這個KIAI的結束點,其他難度加上或移除這條線,擇一

Lunatic



  • (Here are some suggestions you need to consider,please check them.)
  1. 01:09:765 (8,9) - (8)移到(72,188),(9)移到(92,164),這樣01:09:107 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9)貌似會好看點
  2. 02:38:316 (1) - 跳大一點,你之前的slider跳沒那麼小過
  3. 02:06:342 (9,1) - 這pattern跟02:15:816 (5,1)對照一下,我會認為02:06:342 (9,1)太confusing
    你一下跳一下又不跳,而1/2拍的間距又不大,很容易造成判斷上的失誤 (其實玩起來也有點卡)
    我知道這是一個梗,但是"梗"不好的話會變成"坑"
    我想到的方法是這樣
    每遇到像02:06:342 (9,1)的1/4跳(銜接點)就用一個顏色做警示,顏色最好是紅色,因為明顯 (所以你要多加個color)
    如果多加顏色的話很多combo都要改,會花點時間
    但是改掉的話除了有助於判斷外,這新NC顏色也為這圖創造個亮點
    我之所以提出這建議是因為,如果叫你減少折返的話,似乎會破壞你想表達的感覺,而且減少折返感覺不大實際
    (很難改啊OAQ)
    如果你改了的話歡迎求recheck,我想看看整張圖變成什麼樣:p
  4. 這難度沒有沒對齊的綠線\:D/

Hard



  • (Feel free to ignore suggestions about spacing if you don't agree with them at all,but please snap green sections which you did't snap.)
  1. 02:50:553 (1) - 間距太含蓄了lol,你在02:49:369 (1)放跳,然後02:50:553 (1)不跳就會造成confusing (雖然有NC)
    我建議放(150,190),反正有NC和鼓聲做強調,跳大點也沒差:p
  2. 03:38:315 (1,2,3) - 跳大一點 (建議1.4x),作為強調音樂中強烈的聲音
  3. unsnapped green sections
    01:39:108
    01:39:897
    01:40:687
    01:42:792
    01:43:055
    01:43:976
    01:44:108
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    01:44:634
    01:49:108
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    01:50:950
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    01:50:950
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  2. 所有綠線應該花不到5分鐘就能搞定,加油 \:D/

滿有梗的圖
快快rank吧 ~
~☆
Topic Starter
Loneight

Lan wings wrote:

到处贴IRC的Lan
01:14 l1106188: lol!
01:14 l1106188: 咱也想藍翼醬幫咱測圖 (逃
01:14 Lan_wings: 打多了个字
01:14 Lan_wings: 等会啊
01:14 Lan_wings: 先NP
01:14 *l1106188 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/178550 Misty Rain - Sakura no Saka nu ha Eiketsu no [Lunatic]]
01:32 Lan_wings: 来吧
01:33 l1106188: 嗯:3
01:35 Lan_wings: 节奏好难读._.
01:35 l1106188: w
01:35 l1106188: 嗯
01:37 l1106188: 咱打起來也有不順的感覺
01:37 l1106188: 但大致上不知道原因
01:37 Lan_wings: 00:13:746 (4,5) -
01:37 Lan_wings: 第一次的话稍微短一点的距离
01:38 Lan_wings: 然后逐渐拉大
01:38 Lan_wings: 00:09:502 (4,1) - 然后这种太坑了
01:38 l1106188: 咱知道 故意的 (逃
01:39 Lan_wings: 00:19:766 (2,3) - 这种节奏也是不好打的
01:39 Lan_wings: 建议做成两个slider
01:40 Lan_wings: 2种方法
01:40 Lan_wings: 一个是两个没有折返的slider
01:40 l1106188: 2 circle+1 slider呢?
01:40 Lan_wings: 一个是第一个slider加折返
01:40 Lan_wings: 然后后面一个长slider
01:41 Lan_wings: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/509685
01:41 Lan_wings: 这样
01:41 Lan_wings: 排列无视
01:41 Lan_wings: 00:23:713 (7) - 还有这些
01:41 l1106188: 不能2circle+1slider嘛 ;w;
01:42 Lan_wings: 不算很好打
01:42 Lan_wings: 也不好排列
01:42 Lan_wings: 所以不大推荐
01:42 Lan_wings: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/509687
01:42 Lan_wings: 真心觉得你拆开来效果要比合在一起好
01:43 Lan_wings: 一样都是跳
01:43 Lan_wings: 00:20:555 (5) - 像这样的slider多数都是用在stream里几个一起连着用的
01:44 l1106188: 咱知道了!
01:44 l1106188: 咱明天把這些sldier都改成2slider來去
01:44 Lan_wings: 你要是全部都拆开来效果好很多
01:44 Lan_wings: 而且两个slider可以做更多的排列
01:44 l1106188: 嗯 .. 咱怎麼沒想到 (望天
01:44 Lan_wings: 考虑下0108那图
01:44 Lan_wings: SH的
01:44 l1106188: lol!
01:44 Lan_wings: 参考下*
01:45 l1106188: 嗯 咱明天來改
01:45 *Lan_wings is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/120695 SOUND HOLIC - Earthquake Super Shock]
01:45 Lan_wings: 这个图
01:45 Lan_wings: 建议参考这里
01:46 Lan_wings: 有没发现节奏差不多=w=
01:46 l1106188: 嗯
01:46 Lan_wings: 前面那段
01:46 l1106188: 咱會改的 :3
01:46 l1106188: 藍翼醬要變kd嘛
01:46 Lan_wings: 加油=w=
01:46 l1106188: 還是要來個全mod (逃
01:46 Lan_wings: 不mod图现在
01:47 l1106188: 嗯 >w<
01:47 Lan_wings: 你要的话我就贴个irc
01:47 Lan_wings: 要sp的话*
01:47 l1106188: 貼吧:3
01:47 Lan_wings: 这年头mod难找
謝謝藍翼醬的IRC mod~

DarknessAngel wrote:

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Red words = Unrankable thing
Blue words = the thing I think it must be fixed
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General



  • (It seems you didn't notice some important things,you should fix them all.)
  1. qoot8123的難度的tags不同
  2. 只有Normal有02:57:197這個KIAI的結束點,其他難度加上或移除這條線,擇一

Lunatic



  • (Here are some suggestions you need to consider,please check them.)
  1. 01:09:765 (8,9) - (8)移到(72,188),(9)移到(92,164),這樣01:09:107 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9)貌似會好看點
  2. 02:38:316 (1) - 跳大一點,你之前的slider跳沒那麼小過
  3. 02:06:342 (9,1) - 這pattern跟02:15:816 (5,1)對照一下,我會認為02:06:342 (9,1)太confusing
    你一下跳一下又不跳,而1/2拍的間距又不大,很容易造成判斷上的失誤 (其實玩起來也有點卡)
    我知道這是一個梗,但是"梗"不好的話會變成"坑"
    我想到的方法是這樣
    每遇到像02:06:342 (9,1)的1/4跳(銜接點)就用一個顏色做警示,顏色最好是紅色,因為明顯 (所以你要多加個color)
    如果多加顏色的話很多combo都要改,會花點時間
    但是改掉的話除了有助於判斷外,這新NC顏色也為這圖創造個亮點
    我之所以提出這建議是因為,如果叫你減少折返的話,似乎會破壞你想表達的感覺,而且減少折返感覺不大實際
    (很難改啊OAQ)
    如果你改了的話歡迎求recheck,我想看看整張圖變成什麼樣:p
  4. 這難度沒有沒對齊的綠線\:D/
:arrow: 因為remap..所以無視掉了 ;w;

Hard



  • (Feel free to ignore suggestions about spacing if you don't agree with them at all,but please snap green sections which you did't snap.)
  1. 02:50:553 (1) - 間距太含蓄了lol,你在02:49:369 (1)放跳,然後02:50:553 (1)不跳就會造成confusing (雖然有NC)
    我建議放(150,190),反正有NC和鼓聲做強調,跳大點也沒差:p
  2. 03:38:315 (1,2,3) - 跳大一點 (建議1.4x),作為強調音樂中強烈的聲音
  3. unsnapped green sections
    01:39:108
    01:39:897
    01:40:687
    01:42:792
    01:43:055
    01:43:976
    01:44:108
    01:44:371
    01:44:634
    01:49:108
    01:49:371
    01:50:950
    01:52:529
    01:53:713
    03:36:935
    03:40:290
fixed~

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    01:44:371
    01:44:634
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    01:50:950
    01:52:529
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  2. 所有綠線應該花不到5分鐘就能搞定,加油 \:D/
:arrow: fixed~

滿有梗的圖
快快rank吧 ~
~☆
謝謝小闇醬的modding和star ~
Upload!!!
BCI
check tags again baka :/
Topic Starter
Loneight

BCI wrote:

check tags again baka :/
I'm not a baka (crying, and I didn't find any tags problem ?!;w;
edit:
oh i find!! changed :3~
L_P
General
得空的話做一套combo burst的skin吧 那樣子lunatic會比較美觀

[Normal]
00:00:424 (1) - 前面有點太冗了不如slider到這裡00:01:608 - 結束
00:02:002 - 開始 00:03:187 - 結束
00:03:581 - 開始 00:04:766 - 結束
00:05:160 - 這裡一樣


[Hard]
00:17:595 (4) - 為何不要像前面一樣做個小跳?

[lunatic]
00:09:798 (x) - 加note吧?
00:41:871 (2) - 尾巴clap
00:44:437 (7,1) - 建議這倆換NC吧 覺得這樣看比較清楚哦
01:31:409 (5) - 不如少一repeat 然後放note在01:31:211 (3) - 上重疊?
01:40:685 (1) - 少個repeat放短slider01:41:080 (2) - 開始
kiai方面個人是覺得02:00:421 (1) - 這邊才是正kiai,其他的不算叻
03:23:117 (3) - finish是不是放錯了...?有點怪
03:29:532 (3) - 這邊也是覺得怪怪的

沒什麼好吐槽的 這是我最大限度了 但是覺得某些stream可以換成0108slider跳,增加可玩性,
比如00:12:266 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - 之類的 還有 03:23:709 (1,2,3,4) - 之類的 (隨便挑的,要的話可以自己弄吧呵呵

這KD拿的不大心安啊...
Topic Starter
Loneight

L_P wrote:

General
得空的話做一套combo burst的skin吧 那樣子lunatic會比較美觀 :arrow: 咱不會..(淚奔

[Normal]
00:00:424 (1) - 前面有點太冗了不如slider到這裡00:01:608 - 結束
00:02:002 - 開始 00:03:187 - 結束
00:03:581 - 開始 00:04:766 - 結束
00:05:160 - 這裡一樣
:arrow: 有改~但不像L_P醬這樣做~

[Hard]
00:17:595 (4) - 為何不要像前面一樣做個小跳?

[lunatic]
00:09:798 (x) - 加note吧?
00:41:871 (2) - 尾巴clap
00:44:437 (7,1) - 建議這倆換NC吧 覺得這樣看比較清楚哦 :arrow: 咱在看看有沒有人說~
01:31:409 (5) - 不如少一repeat 然後放note在01:31:211 (3) - 上重疊? :arrow: 改了~不過不像L_P醬說的~
01:40:685 (1) - 少個repeat放短slider01:41:080 (2) - 開始 :arrow: 不懂的說~
kiai方面個人是覺得02:00:421 (1) - 這邊才是正kiai,其他的不算叻 :arrow: 這個咱會考慮的~
03:23:117 (3) - finish是不是放錯了...?有點怪 :arrow: 沒有放錯~:3
03:29:532 (3) - 這邊也是覺得怪怪的

沒什麼好吐槽的 這是我最大限度了 但是覺得某些stream可以換成0108slider跳,增加可玩性,
比如00:12:266 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - 之類的 還有 03:23:709 (1,2,3,4) - 之類的 (隨便挑的,要的話可以自己弄吧呵呵
:arrow: 改了~
這KD拿的不大心安啊... :arrow: 不會的說~
謝謝L_P醬的modding和star~
Upload!!!
a32
Hi~From in-game~~(Sorry for the long delay ;_;



[General]
SB好棒ww




[Normal]
  1. 01:31:211 - 这个clap貌似是多余的?ww
  2. 03:01:210 (2) - Ctrl+J?



[Hard]
  1. 01:09:107 (2) - 这里节奏变得比较大,建议加NC做提醒~(否则容易miss orz
  2. 01:40:685 (4,1,2,3,4) - 这个五边形不够好看ww
  3. 03:29:532 (3) - 这个finish有点违和 建议删掉...



[Lunatic]
  • 话说一开始的那一段貌似应该是5连打?
  1. 00:18:779 - delete clap?
  2. 00:44:042 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - 这里读图略困难orz 试试把NC改下?
  3. 00:57:167 (7) - 觉得可以加个note?
  4. 01:31:211 - 去掉clap然后在01:31:902加个带clap的note?
  5. 01:50:685 - finish?


很好的图~mod不出什么orz
射颗星 祝好运ww
Sonnyc
Hello~~ kinda late m4m,,

Normal:

00:17:002 (2) - Well, consider placing somewhere down, the touch of the HP is too many
02:14:632 (3) - Finish at the start?
02:37:527 (1) - Well, deleting seems better for me
02:52:527 (1) - ctrl+G and place (2) somewhere else. I think this way will make the flow better
03:29:433 (5) - Start at 03:29:630. I think the current rhythm is quite made-up

Hard:

00:14:634 (1) - 1 Grid Right will make distance with (3,4) the same
00:51:739 (3) - 1 Grid up
01:26:672 (4) - Though it hurts the distance to the next note, ctrl+G will make a better flow with before
02:06:638 (4) - 1 Grid down
02:50:553 (1) - Delete the NC, I think this is in the same music pattern
03:36:045, 03:36:144, 03:36:440, 03:36:538 - Add notes to follow the music?

Lunatic:

00:18:976 (1,4) - A long spacing unlike the stream looked a bit strange
00:25:292 (1,4) - ^ If you're not fixing, at least set it to 1.40 with (4,1)
00:33:976 (2) - Blanket the end of (1)
00:44:239 (6,7) - I believe this is really hard to read.
00:47:002 (3) - Blanket (2) perfectly?
02:04:369 (5,6,7) - Make spacing consistently. Jump(?) doesn't feel nice here
02:15:816 (6) - Blanket the end of (5)
02:41:079 (6) - ^

Very nice map~ I liked the flow and blankets of your map :D
Topic Starter
Loneight

a3272509123 wrote:

Hi~From in-game~~(Sorry for the long delay ;_;



[General]
SB好棒ww




[Normal]
  1. 01:31:211 - 这个clap貌似是多余的?ww
  2. 03:01:210 (2) - Ctrl+J?



[Hard]
  1. 01:09:107 (2) - 这里节奏变得比较大,建议加NC做提醒~(否则容易miss orz
  2. 01:40:685 (4,1,2,3,4) - 这个五边形不够好看ww
  3. 03:29:532 (3) - 这个finish有点违和 建议删掉... :arrow:改了~



[Lunatic]
  • 话说一开始的那一段貌似应该是5连打? :arrow: 似乎是 不過咱想簡化
  1. 00:18:779 - delete clap?
  2. 00:44:042 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - 这里读图略困难orz 试试把NC改下 在一個人說就改!!~?
  3. 00:57:167 (7) - 觉得可以加个note?
  4. 01:31:211 - 去掉clap然后在01:31:902加个带clap的note?
  5. 01:50:685 - finish?


很好的图~mod不出什么orz
射颗星 祝好运ww
謝謝a32醬的modding和star~!
Topic Starter
Loneight

Sonnyc wrote:

Hello~~ kinda late m4m,,

Normal:

00:17:002 (2) - Well, consider placing somewhere down, the touch of the HP is too many
02:14:632 (3) - Finish at the start?
02:37:527 (1) - Well, deleting seems better for me
02:52:527 (1) - ctrl+G and place (2) somewhere else. I think this way will make the flow better
03:29:433 (5) - Start at 03:29:630. I think the current rhythm is quite made-up :arrow: I think it's okay~

Hard:

00:14:634 (1) - 1 Grid Right will make distance with (3,4) the same
00:51:739 (3) - 1 Grid up
01:26:672 (4) - Though it hurts the distance to the next note, ctrl+G will make a better flow with before
02:06:638 (4) - 1 Grid down
02:50:553 (1) - Delete the NC, I think this is in the same music pattern
03:36:045, 03:36:144, 03:36:440, 03:36:538 - Add notes to follow the music?

Lunatic:

00:18:976 (1,4) - A long spacing unlike the stream looked a bit strange
00:25:292 (1,4) - ^ If you're not fixing, at least set it to 1.40 with (4,1)
00:33:976 (2) - Blanket the end of (1) :arrow: no, i want to keep its flow~
00:44:239 (6,7) - I believe this is really hard to read.
00:47:002 (3) - Blanket (2) perfectly?
02:04:369 (5,6,7) - Make spacing consistently. Jump(?) doesn't feel nice here
02:15:816 (6) - Blanket the end of (5) :arrow: no >~<
02:41:079 (6) - ^ :arrow: ^

Very nice map~ I liked the flow and blankets of your map :D
Thank you for modding and 4 stars !!! Sonnyc

Upload!!!
spboxer3
寒假mod project

※ Notice

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.

general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. BPM必須統一。
  2. 既然三個難度都是你做的 那kiai應該要做成一致
  3. previewtime: 不如設在這 01:58:842 - 你現在設的位置比較不激情 聽預覽時應該是把歌曲最精華的地方展現出來不是 :<?

  4. SB:
    在43055及43845處 是讓文字進入的時候但是效果明顯不夠好 應該是重音時剛好到定點才對
    57266,58845世界兩個字的進入時間不一樣 世應該要早些移出 讓界早點進來,而重音點必須是減速的 可是你的界跑掉了。
    (SB未完成)

Normal



  • Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:13:845 (2) - slider結尾加上whistle使音效平衡
  2. 00:17:002 (2) - ^

  3. 00:24:897 (5) - 使結尾用Normal的sampleset可以讓音效聽起來更有層次感 這地方只用soft不夠力

  4. 01:02:791 (2) - 為什麼是finish? 這地方下finish不和諧也沒有混合的感覺 改成clap會好得多

  5. 01:05:423 - 同樣給人不適合的感覺 finish多了有種吵雜的感覺

  6. 01:08:317 - ^建議改到01:08:844 -

  7. 02:14:632 - & 02:20:948 - 不感覺太過空曠? 用的whistle根本聽不到? 用sempleset: Normal, Additions: Soft吧 這樣這個重音不會太輕 又不會和finish重複 給人膩的感覺.

  8. 02:46:211 (4) - ^

  9. 03:38:315 (1) - 這三個點用drum音效會比soft更好些
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 02:09:895 (1) - 恩...nazi 轉3∘使02:08:316 (3,1) - 有完整的blanket不論slider頭還是尾

  2. 02:55:683 (1) - 這個我覺得應該與02:54:894 (2) - slider尾做出個完整的弧度(移動到x479,y196) 如果改了後頭的pattern全部都要移動

  3. 03:08:315 (1,2) - blanket歪了 需要自己校正

Hard



  • Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 01:00:423 - 到01:09:896 - 與Easy的建議一致

音效部分說一下吧 簡單來說finish太過了 大部分跟著vocal 不是說不好 但是太吵了, 如果一句句子給了好多逗點在中間 而那些逗點卻沒有在該斷句的地方 這樣感覺起來會讓人很不舒服, 你現在這段給人有這種感覺... 後頭當然也有 但是你自己聽一下吧


mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:57:266 (1) - 這個slider給人有種不夠持久的感覺 可以發現到這個slider是源由vocal的拖拍 可是slider卻這麼短 味道略顯不足

  2. 01:09:107 (1,2,3,4,5) - 直接連打了吧...這樣實在蛋疼阿節奏該慢不慢的而且間距過短, 這地方給人速度逐漸增加的感覺 所以若不用連打 至少間距也該加大 現在這樣太憋曲了 一點都不爽=。=...

  3. 02:06:737 (1,4) - nazi 這地方的stack沒有做好 為了譜面整潔 建議你把stack擺好

Lunatic


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. 03:03:577 - kiai沒對準節奏 需snap
Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 02:24:796 - 給人有種爆發點的位置錯誤的感覺 可以使用whistle+finish (vol 60%)試試看 感覺會好些

  2. 03:05:683 (3,1,2,3) - 全部降低音量吧 至少要50%以下 不然太吵感覺會有違和感
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:01:904 - ,00:03:483 - ,00:05:062 - ,00:06:641 - 需要個節奏 這地方明顯是5-plat的節奏而且又是最高難度...

  2. 00:44:437 (1,2,3) - 建議至少下拉1grid 連打不像slider 很容易就掉了

  3. 01:07:528 (1) - slider結尾沒有snap


qoot8123's Taiko Muzukashii



  • mapping
    (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:11:476 (10,11,12,13) - k k k k是否會比較好點? 使前後段有所區別 而且符合音樂本身的變化
  2. 01:29:535 - 是否考慮加個note? 這地方加個note並不會使map變的太難 也比較符合音樂

  3. 01:58:845 (4,5) - 把這兩個的大圓替換成小圓 用以強調01:59:437 (6) - 的重音

  4. 02:16:410 (2) - k比d給音樂的感覺更加適合,無論音高或是打法都比較適合

  5. 02:21:542 (6) - ^

  6. 02:43:055 (1,1,2,1,1) - 這地方跟歌聲會比做出鼓點來的適合 歌聲在這的存在感比爵士鼓大的多

  7. 03:01:213 (3) - d

  8. 03:33:187 (1) - 在這整段中 就這個位置是k 是故意的還是沒有注意到??
必須說的是 這張Taiko給我的感覺有些亂,一小節中4段節奏沒有相同的打法 給人有種比較隨意的感覺 就是想打什麼就怎麼打, 這樣不是說不好 只是要做到真的很神的難度是非常高的. 這張圖還需要一些改進 加油吧~

Firce777's Taiko Oni



  • mapping
    (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 01:08:845 (3) - 這個點過於confuse了 不斷加速而且前頭並沒有其它的提示(前面空了一段沒節奏的) 再說了 後頭的note減速會遭到前頭的加速note遮擋 這是不允許的
  2. 01:09:996 - 同樣 速度問題
必須說,這變速讓人感到非常不舒服 即使我贊同可以用變速 但是這變化量太過頭了 如果不改的平緩點我是不會泡的.
除了變速問題外 其它的地方做的真的很到位 真不愧是神觸777

~
Topic Starter
Loneight

spboxer3 wrote:

寒假mod project

※ Notice

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.

general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. BPM必須統一。
  2. 既然三個難度都是你做的 那kiai應該要做成一致
  3. previewtime: 不如設在這 01:58:842 - 你現在設的位置比較不激情 聽預覽時應該是把歌曲最精華的地方展現出來不是 :<?

  4. SB:
    在43055及43845處 是讓文字進入的時候但是效果明顯不夠好 應該是重音時剛好到定點才對
    57266,58845世界兩個字的進入時間不一樣 世應該要早些移出 讓界早點進來,而重音點必須是減速的 可是你的界跑掉了。
    (SB未完成)

Normal



  • Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:13:845 (2) - slider結尾加上whistle使音效平衡
  2. 00:17:002 (2) - ^

  3. 00:24:897 (5) - 使結尾用Normal的sampleset可以讓音效聽起來更有層次感 這地方只用soft不夠力

  4. 01:02:791 (2) - 為什麼是finish? 這地方下finish不和諧也沒有混合的感覺 改成clap會好得多

  5. 01:05:423 - 同樣給人不適合的感覺 finish多了有種吵雜的感覺

  6. 01:08:317 - ^建議改到01:08:844 - :arrow: 改完感覺挺奇怪的..所以沒改~

  7. 02:14:632 - & 02:20:948 - 不感覺太過空曠? 用的whistle根本聽不到? 用sempleset: Normal, Additions: Soft吧 這樣這個重音不會太輕 又不會和finish重複 給人膩的感覺.

  8. 02:46:211 (4) - ^

  9. 03:38:315 (1) - 這三個點用drum音效會比soft更好些
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 02:09:895 (1) - 恩...nazi 轉3∘使02:08:316 (3,1) - 有完整的blanket不論slider頭還是尾

  2. 02:55:683 (1) - 這個我覺得應該與02:54:894 (2) - slider尾做出個完整的弧度(移動到x479,y196) 如果改了後頭的pattern全部都要移動

  3. 03:08:315 (1,2) - blanket歪了 需要自己校正

Hard



  • Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 01:00:423 - 到01:09:896 - 與Easy的建議一致

音效部分說一下吧 簡單來說finish太過了 大部分跟著vocal 不是說不好 但是太吵了, 如果一句句子給了好多逗點在中間 而那些逗點卻沒有在該斷句的地方 這樣感覺起來會讓人很不舒服, 你現在這段給人有這種感覺... 後頭當然也有 但是你自己聽一下吧


mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:57:266 (1) - 這個slider給人有種不夠持久的感覺 可以發現到這個slider是源由vocal的拖拍 可是slider卻這麼短 味道略顯不足

  2. 01:09:107 (1,2,3,4,5) - 直接連打了吧...這樣實在蛋疼阿節奏該慢不慢的而且間距過短, 這地方給人速度逐漸增加的感覺 所以若不用連打 至少間距也該加大 現在這樣太憋曲了 一點都不爽=。=...

  3. 02:06:737 (1,4) - nazi 這地方的stack沒有做好 為了譜面整潔 建議你把stack擺好 :arrow:

Lunatic


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. 03:03:577 - kiai沒對準節奏 需snap :arrow: 嗯~
Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 02:24:796 - 給人有種爆發點的位置錯誤的感覺 可以使用whistle+finish (vol 60%)試試看 感覺會好些 :arrow: 改了~

  2. 03:05:683 (3,1,2,3) - 全部降低音量吧 至少要50%以下 不然太吵感覺會有違和感 :arrow: 改了~
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:01:904 - ,00:03:483 - ,00:05:062 - ,00:06:641 - 需要個節奏 這地方明顯是5-plat的節奏而且又是最高難度...

  2. 00:44:437 (1,2,3) - 建議至少下拉1grid 連打不像slider 很容易就掉了 :arrow: 好了

  3. 01:07:528 (1) - slider結尾沒有snap :arrow: 改了~


~
謝謝阿三醬的modding~
至於音效~Easy有改一些~Hard 跟Lunatic就不打算改了,因為總覺得某些少了finish, 就挺奇怪的, vocal明明有finish可是打下去卻是沒有finish的也是很奇怪的一件事情 .. 對於咱來說~


Upload!!!
edit: SB have done~
Firce777

Firce777's Taiko Oni



  • mapping
    (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 01:08:845 (3) - 這個點過於confuse了 不斷加速而且前頭並沒有其它的提示(前面空了一段沒節奏的) 再說了 後頭的note減速會遭到前頭的加速note遮擋 這是不允許的
    我在這邊用不斷加速的梗是因為這裏的旋律是逐漸增高的 為了配合歌 也跟著加速
  2. 01:09:996 - 同樣 速度問題
我才不會說我是不想讓別人開HR和HD才這樣搞的呢_(:3Jㄥ)_

必須說,這變速讓人感到非常不舒服 即使我贊同可以用變速 但是這變化量太過頭了 如果不改的平緩點我是不會泡的.
除了變速問題外 其它的地方做的真的很到位 真不愧是神觸777

為什麼你們就是不明白鬼畜的好呢?突然坑一下人的感覺多好啊_(:3Jㄥ)_
不過還是改的圓滑點了 thx for 準BAT的mod
Rotte
IRC
16:19 Rotte: 00:21:443 -
16:19 Rotte: 这里就可以加个circle嘛
16:20 Loneight: 噢 .
16:20 Loneight: 其實
16:20 Rotte: 00:27:167 - 又比如这里
16:20 Loneight: 前一個lunatic就是這麼做 233
16:20 Rotte: 诶?怎么
16:20 Loneight: 這是re後的lunatic
16:20 Rotte: 、...
16:20 Loneight: 前一個Lunatic這麼做知後
16:20 Loneight: 發現整個不順暢 ..
16:20 Rotte: 图的质量急需提升
16:20 Rotte: sb质量有了
16:20 Loneight: lol
16:21 Rotte: 事实嘛
16:21 Rotte: 作为L难度
16:21 Rotte: 尽可能不要丢掉节奏
16:21 Rotte: 排列是为了节奏诞生的
16:22 Rotte: ww
16:22 Loneight: lol
16:22 Rotte: 00:40:687 (3) - 这个挡住了血条
16:22 Loneight: 嘎!!?
16:22 Rotte: 整体图还算不错
16:23 Rotte: 注意节奏别缺失
16:23 Loneight: 感覺在家note 整體的排列又會re掉了 OTZ
16:24 Rotte: 所以说嘛
16:24 Rotte: 排列是为了节奏而存在的
16:25 Loneight: 應該說 lol
16:25 Loneight: 變成之前的lunatic (逃
16:25 Rotte: 00:40:687 (3) - 28-3 sb
16:25 Loneight: 話說之前的lunatic咱好像也沒保留 OTZ
16:25 Rotte: 建议变速
16:25 Rotte: 3过来之后可以考虑加速
16:26 Rotte: 时间是128495
16:26 Rotte: 时间是1:28:495
16:26 Rotte: 时间是1:28:495 -
16:27 Rotte: 92939 32-2
16:27 Rotte: 时间点稍微往前些
16:28 Rotte: 否则看起来有时间差
16:28 Loneight: 用out呢
16:28 Rotte: 33-2
16:28 Rotte: 歌词错误
16:28 Loneight: lol!?
16:28 Rotte: ni的音很短
16:29 Rotte: 前面ki的音是幹的
16:30 Loneight: lol
16:30 Loneight: okay 這邊咱想辦法改
16:30 Loneight: 剛剛好咱也想問小貓醬某個地方 ..
16:30 Loneight: 02:51:342 - 這裡的歌詞 咱覺得怪怪的 有錯誤嘛OAO
16:30 Rotte: 44-2
16:30 Rotte: 时间往前来电
16:31 Rotte: 点
16:31 Rotte: 有点时间差
16:33 Rotte: 想那个字的读音只有so的音
16:33 Rotte: 和刚才那个差不多
16:33 Loneight: 嗯
16:33 Rotte: 59-2
16:33 Loneight: 果然 233
16:33 Rotte: 时间差
16:33 Rotte: 往前一些
16:33 Rotte: 大概1/16的时间差
16:34 Rotte: 往前挪一点
16:34 Rotte: 或者整体挪动下即可
16:34 Rotte: 一般建议
16:34 Rotte: 用了F代码后
16:35 Rotte: 要使用F代码,建议出现的时间往前挪动1/16
16:36 Rotte: 191473
16:36 Rotte: 03:11:473 -
16:36 Rotte: 喷泉效果来一次
16:37 Rotte: 你的kiai好奇怪.......
16:37 Loneight: 這咱知道
16:38 Rotte: 01:09:896 -
16:38 Rotte: 这里咱才觉得是kiai
16:38 Rotte: 超燃
16:38 Loneight: lol
16:38 Rotte: 建议前面的kiai都去掉
16:38 Rotte: 02:00:421 - 这之前的
16:39 Loneight: 應該是不會動kiai time了 ;w;
16:39 Rotte: so
16:39 Rotte: 大概就这些
16:39 Rotte: 基本上没啥
16:39 Rotte: 小问题
16:39 Loneight: 嗯 :3
16:40 Loneight: po一下杯 咱給kd :3
16:40 Rotte: 02:00:421 -
16:40 Rotte: 从这之后的歌词建议换个颜色
16:41 Rotte: 整个歌曲的风格从这里变了

SB好哇
Topic Starter
Loneight

Rotte wrote:

IRC
16:19 Rotte: 00:21:443 -
16:19 Rotte: 这里就可以加个circle嘛
16:20 Loneight: 噢 .
16:20 Loneight: 其實
16:20 Rotte: 00:27:167 - 又比如这里
16:20 Loneight: 前一個lunatic就是這麼做 233
16:20 Rotte: 诶?怎么
16:20 Loneight: 這是re後的lunatic
16:20 Rotte: 、...
16:20 Loneight: 前一個Lunatic這麼做知後
16:20 Loneight: 發現整個不順暢 ..
16:20 Rotte: 图的质量急需提升
16:20 Rotte: sb质量有了
16:20 Loneight: lol
16:21 Rotte: 事实嘛
16:21 Rotte: 作为L难度
16:21 Rotte: 尽可能不要丢掉节奏
16:21 Rotte: 排列是为了节奏诞生的
16:22 Rotte: ww
16:22 Loneight: lol
16:22 Rotte: 00:40:687 (3) - 这个挡住了血条
16:22 Loneight: 嘎!!?
16:22 Rotte: 整体图还算不错
16:23 Rotte: 注意节奏别缺失
16:23 Loneight: 感覺在家note 整體的排列又會re掉了 OTZ
16:24 Rotte: 所以说嘛
16:24 Rotte: 排列是为了节奏而存在的
16:25 Loneight: 應該說 lol
16:25 Loneight: 變成之前的lunatic (逃
16:25 Rotte: 00:40:687 (3) - 28-3 sb
16:25 Loneight: 話說之前的lunatic咱好像也沒保留 OTZ
16:25 Rotte: 建议变速
16:25 Rotte: 3过来之后可以考虑加速
16:26 Rotte: 时间是128495
16:26 Rotte: 时间是1:28:495
16:26 Rotte: 时间是1:28:495 -
16:27 Rotte: 92939 32-2
16:27 Rotte: 时间点稍微往前些
16:28 Rotte: 否则看起来有时间差
16:28 Loneight: 用out呢
16:28 Rotte: 33-2
16:28 Rotte: 歌词错误
16:28 Loneight: lol!?
16:28 Rotte: ni的音很短
16:29 Rotte: 前面ki的音是幹的
16:30 Loneight: lol
16:30 Loneight: okay 這邊咱想辦法改
16:30 Loneight: 剛剛好咱也想問小貓醬某個地方 ..
16:30 Loneight: 02:51:342 - 這裡的歌詞 咱覺得怪怪的 有錯誤嘛OAO
16:30 Rotte: 44-2
16:30 Rotte: 时间往前来电
16:31 Rotte: 点
16:31 Rotte: 有点时间差
16:33 Rotte: 想那个字的读音只有so的音
16:33 Rotte: 和刚才那个差不多
16:33 Loneight: 嗯
16:33 Rotte: 59-2
16:33 Loneight: 果然 233
16:33 Rotte: 时间差
16:33 Rotte: 往前一些
16:33 Rotte: 大概1/16的时间差
16:34 Rotte: 往前挪一点
16:34 Rotte: 或者整体挪动下即可
16:34 Rotte: 一般建议
16:34 Rotte: 用了F代码后
16:35 Rotte: 要使用F代码,建议出现的时间往前挪动1/16
16:36 Rotte: 191473
16:36 Rotte: 03:11:473 -
16:36 Rotte: 喷泉效果来一次
16:37 Rotte: 你的kiai好奇怪.......
16:37 Loneight: 這咱知道
16:38 Rotte: 01:09:896 -
16:38 Rotte: 这里咱才觉得是kiai
16:38 Rotte: 超燃
16:38 Loneight: lol
16:38 Rotte: 建议前面的kiai都去掉
16:38 Rotte: 02:00:421 - 这之前的
16:39 Loneight: 應該是不會動kiai time了 ;w;
16:39 Rotte: so
16:39 Rotte: 大概就这些
16:39 Rotte: 基本上没啥
16:39 Rotte: 小问题
16:39 Loneight: 嗯 :3
16:40 Loneight: po一下杯 咱給kd :3
16:40 Rotte: 02:00:421 -
16:40 Rotte: 从这之后的歌词建议换个颜色
16:41 Rotte: 整个歌曲的风格从这里变了

SB好哇
謝謝小貓醬的SB modding 和 Star :3
Upload!!!
Scorpiour
Hi there~~ mod from queue~~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions


[General]
  1. Add ZUN to tags
[Storyboard]
  1. 00:00:424 - a sudden darken here is pretty weird, i suppose your "black.jpg" doesn't work correct. Check your layers plz~~
    my suggestion is move your "black.jpg" to foreground layer first, and change the start time to -2000 and set a end time for Scale codes.
[Normal]
  1. 00:25:687 (1,1,1,1) - how about an anti-jmp here? eg
  2. 00:36:147 (2) - suggest to remove it for difficulty issue >.< or change (2,3) to a slider?
  3. 00:52:529 (2) - add a finish to head for consistent hitsound?
  4. 00:56:081 (4) - finish on end is weird a bit...i can't hear any finish related sample in music here so suggest to delete the finish.
  5. 01:30:422 (3) - add a finish on head?
  6. 01:46:211 (3) - ^
  7. 01:52:527 (1) - remove finish on the end
  8. 02:14:632 (3) - ^
  9. 03:29:433 (5) - remove finish on head
[Hard]
  1. 00:06:739 (1,2,3) - compared with, i prefer the beats at 00:05:160 (1,2) - because there's nothing different between these two parts in music, and obviously the beats you chose prev is better.

    to myself, if some changes in beat for the following part are needed, i may choose this:
  2. 00:17:792 (1,2) - i suppose the stack here may break your flow~
  3. 00:20:555 (3,4) - also weird place.... stack (4) to (3)? or 00:20:950 (1) - ?
  4. 00:23:713 (3,4) - ^
  5. 01:09:107 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - maybe too hard for a hard diff...?
  6. 01:40:685 (4) - finish here maybe not suitable..
  7. 01:53:317 (1,2,3) - here, actually, the drum here is not 1/4 but 1/6....
  8. 01:59:829 (2,3,4) - suggest a repeat slider here, also for difficulty issue...
  9. 02:02:790 (3) - remove finish on the end?
  10. 02:06:638 (4) - stack to 02:06:737 (1) - ?
  11. 02:09:106 (4) - remove finish?
  12. 03:23:315 (1,2) - move them to next red tick separately?
  13. 03:35:946 (1,2) - ^
[Lunatic]
  1. 00:06:739 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - similar to hard, white-tick based beat here maybe not suitable
  2. 00:46:213 (1) - add a finish on head?
  3. 00:52:529 (1) - ^
  4. 03:23:117 (3) - weird finish here...suggest to remove...
that's all~~ i suppose we need a deeper discussion about the beats of instrumental parts in Hard/Luna diffs but anyway, nice work :>
give me a call when you're ready for further irc-recheck~
Topic Starter
Loneight

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~ mod from queue~~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions


[General]
  1. Add ZUN to tags
[Storyboard]
  1. 00:00:424 - a sudden darken here is pretty weird, i suppose your "black.jpg" doesn't work correct. Check your layers plz~~
    my suggestion is move your "black.jpg" to foreground layer first, and change the start time to -2000 and set a end time for Scale codes.
[Normal]
  1. 00:25:687 (1,1,1,1) - how about an anti-jmp here? eg
  2. 00:36:147 (2) - suggest to remove it for difficulty issue >.< or change (2,3) to a slider?
  3. 00:52:529 (2) - add a finish to head for consistent hitsound?
  4. 00:56:081 (4) - finish on end is weird a bit...i can't hear any finish related sample in music here so suggest to delete the finish.
  5. 01:30:422 (3) - add a finish on head?
  6. 01:46:211 (3) - ^
  7. 01:52:527 (1) - remove finish on the end
  8. 02:14:632 (3) - ^
  9. 03:29:433 (5) - remove finish on head
[Hard]
  1. 00:06:739 (1,2,3) - compared with, i prefer the beats at 00:05:160 (1,2) - because there's nothing different between these two parts in music, and obviously the beats you chose prev is better.

    to myself, if some changes in beat for the following part are needed, i may choose this:
  2. 00:17:792 (1,2) - i suppose the stack here may break your flow~
  3. 00:20:555 (3,4) - also weird place.... stack (4) to (3)? or 00:20:950 (1) - ?
  4. 00:23:713 (3,4) - ^
  5. 01:09:107 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - maybe too hard for a hard diff...?
  6. 01:40:685 (4) - finish here maybe not suitable..
  7. 01:53:317 (1,2,3) - here, actually, the drum here is not 1/4 but 1/6....
  8. 01:59:829 (2,3,4) - suggest a repeat slider here, also for difficulty issue...
  9. 02:02:790 (3) - remove finish on the end?
  10. 02:06:638 (4) - stack to 02:06:737 (1) - ?
  11. 02:09:106 (4) - remove finish?
  12. 03:23:315 (1,2) - move them to next red tick separately?
  13. 03:35:946 (1,2) - ^
[Lunatic]
  1. 00:06:739 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - similar to hard, white-tick based beat here maybe not suitable
  2. 00:46:213 (1) - add a finish on head?
  3. 00:52:529 (1) - ^
  4. 03:23:117 (3) - weird finish here...suggest to remove...
that's all~~ i suppose we need a deeper discussion about the beats of instrumental parts in Hard/Luna diffs but anyway, nice work :>
give me a call when you're ready for further irc-recheck~
All fixed :D ~
Thank you for modding, Scorp >w<!
Upload!!!
OnosakiHito
Requested Taiko Mod.

[Muzukashii]
01:09:107 (3) - Broken slider.
02:12:263 (2) - ^
02:37:527 (4) - ^
03:09:105~03:11:473 - remove the break here.
03:24:499 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - You may move on with the k d d k ddd D pattern.
01:00:423 - To be honest, I'm not sure if it is a good idea to have the same SV on this part. It is confusing when you play it since you can't figure out if it is 1/3 or 1/4. Good idea/solution, but rather something for Oni level. Consider this please.
01:53:711 (1,2,3) - These notes are not necessary. Could confuse players.
02:00:421 - Such SV changes are in a Muzukashii are improper so I suggest to delete them. Also the change is minimal so it has no real effect.
02:32:592 (1) - Better to move it to 02:32:691, so it fits better with the previous parts.
02:34:171 (1) - ^
02:35:750 (2) - ^
02:53:316 (3) - Maybe deleting this note is advisable.
02:57:262 - I suggets using d d k d pattern. Fits better with the 02:54:894 (2,1,1,2) - pattern and the transition is better. Also, you don't need to stick that much to the vocal in general, just as advice for the next map. Having a mix of beat and vocal is fine as well.

Map is overall fine, lacks maybe a bit of structure, but this shouldn't be a big problem here.
This muzukashii is harder as the average, but that's okay. Though, you should delete the SV changes.

[Oni]

00:03:581 (2) - Not D?
00:08:713~00:12:858 - Tbh, you can map this better Firce. How about following pattern constalation: http://puu.sh/1Wz6j The problem is that there are many kats at first but then they suddenly disappear at 00:09:897.
{
01:03:581 (2) -
01:05:160 (2) -
} I'm really not sure about these notes. Maybe it's better to make it just to normal hitcircles or find another solution? (same goes to similiar notes)
02:54:105 - The bar-line has a weird apperience. Try to change it if possible(you know how to).
03:24:104~03:36:736 - I like the stream but you need to delete one note somewhere. Using suddenly such a long stream dosen't fit to the whole map.
03:38:907 - kiai end

That's all for the Oni. Pretty solid Oni, I like it.

Hope I could help you guys. Good luck with it!
Topic Starter
Loneight

OnosakiHito wrote:

Requested Taiko Mod.

[Muzukashii]
01:09:107 (3) - Broken slider.
02:12:263 (2) - ^
02:37:527 (4) - ^
03:09:105~03:11:473 - remove the break here.
03:24:499 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - You may move on with the k d d k ddd D pattern.
01:00:423 - To be honest, I'm not sure if it is a good idea to have the same SV on this part. It is confusing when you play it since you can't figure out if it is 1/3 or 1/4. Good idea/solution, but rather something for Oni level. Consider this please.
01:53:711 (1,2,3) - These notes are not necessary. Could confuse players.
02:00:421 - Such SV changes are in a Muzukashii are improper so I suggest to delete them. Also the change is minimal so it has no real effect.
02:32:592 (1) - Better to move it to 02:32:691, so it fits better with the previous parts.
02:34:171 (1) - ^
02:35:750 (2) - ^
02:53:316 (3) - Maybe deleting this note is advisable.
02:57:262 - I suggets using d d k d pattern. Fits better with the 02:54:894 (2,1,1,2) - pattern and the transition is better. Also, you don't need to stick that much to the vocal in general, just as advice for the next map. Having a mix of beat and vocal is fine as well.

Map is overall fine, lacks maybe a bit of structure, but this shouldn't be a big problem here.
This muzukashii is harder as the average, but that's okay. Though, you should delete the SV changes.

[Oni]

00:03:581 (2) - Not D?
00:08:713~00:12:858 - Tbh, you can map this better Firce. How about following pattern constalation: http://puu.sh/1Wz6j The problem is that there are many kats at first but then they suddenly disappear at 00:09:897.
{
01:03:581 (2) -
01:05:160 (2) -
} I'm really not sure about these notes. Maybe it's better to make it just to normal hitcircles or find another solution? (same goes to similiar notes)
02:54:105 - The bar-line has a weird apperience. Try to change it if possible(you know how to).
03:24:104~03:36:736 - I like the stream but you need to delete one note somewhere. Using suddenly such a long stream dosen't fit to the whole map.
03:38:907 - kiai end

That's all for the Oni. Pretty solid Oni, I like it.

Hope I could help you guys. Good luck with it!
Thank you for Tk modding >w< Ono
they have fixed~

Upload!!!
Scorpiour
irc rechecked with mapper, fixed inconsistent tags and preview time, and changed several patterns in Lunatic.

bubbled~~
Topic Starter
Loneight

Scorpiour wrote:

irc rechecked with mapper, fixed inconsistent tags and preview time, and changed several patterns in Lunatic.

bubbled~~
Thank you very much daze ~ >w<! (hugs
Melophobia
The title is a bit wrong, change it to "Sakura no Sakanu wa Eiketsu no" please! I can rebubble after a quick check if you're willing to fix it up~
Topic Starter
Loneight

Melophobia wrote:

The title is a bit wrong, change it to "Sakura no Sakanu wa Eiketsu no" please! I can rebubble after a quick check if you're willing to fix it up~
Okay~ fixed !! >w<
Thank you !! Melophobia :3
Melophobia
Rebubbled!
Topic Starter
Loneight

Melophobia wrote:

Rebubbled!
Thank you very much daze >w<!
Flask
(no kd)
D: 把閃瞎眼提示打開



你沒看到從00:11:575 - ~ 00:12:167 - 多閃
前面沒看到人提過不過我覺得應該要tick ;w;
然後我覺得可以tag l1106188...這個就看你了 lol

這個問題不大 等BAT來再改就行! 可以找MMzz
Topic Starter
Loneight
:|

Flask wrote:

(no kd)
D: 把閃瞎眼提示打開



你沒看到從00:11:575 - ~ 00:12:167 - 多閃
前面沒看到人提過不過我覺得應該要tick ;w;
然後我覺得可以tag l1106188...這個就看你了 lol

這個問題不大 等BAT來再改就行! 可以找MMzz
咱覺得這閃程度還Okay, 如果有人再提的話咱就改 :3
嗯~ flask醬 謝謝你 >w<!
咱會盡力去找BAT的 :)

edit: 於是改了 D:
Melophobia
Changes were applied correctly. Rebubbled.

Next time please don't hesitate to change something just because of bubble. You're always free to ask the bubbler to rebubble. (but better to talk with him/her first.)
Topic Starter
Loneight

Melophobia wrote:

Changes were applied correctly. Rebubbled.

Next time please don't hesitate to change something just because of bubble. You're always free to ask the bubbler to rebubble. (but better to talk with him/her first.)
Okay! I will improve next time, thank you for rebubbled, Melophobia :3 (hugs
LKs
除了777太鼓 其他我都看了没问题

一会我去问一下太鼓的变速和SV问题
wmfchris
嘿嘿嘿嘿
Topic Starter
Loneight

LKs wrote:

除了777太鼓 其他我都看了没问题

一会我去问一下太鼓的变速和SV问题
嗯! LKs醬謝謝你 >w<

wmfchris wrote:

嘿嘿嘿嘿
wmf醬 loool, 這笑的 www
Firce777

wmfchris wrote:

嘿嘿嘿嘿
求不戳 我想看那個幹字阿
LKs
[Timing]

BPM 228 for kiai-times is not required. just keep it as 152 with 4/4 signture and use 1/3&1/6. Only when BPM changes(including gradual BPM change, irregular BPM change), or donwnbeat changes, could we set new timing sections. no new sections are needed if you can map it well by using Beat snap divisor with current BPM


you'd adjust SV in all diffs. sry for inconvenience caused by

---

and wmf may post taiko mod later
wmfchris
[Timing]
Such a BPM shift is unecessary. BPM152 2/3 beat handles the song at best.
人性呢
SPOILER
落楓飄紅(~~~) 0:46:46
01:00:423 - 我覺得BPM228不對
152 2/3
LKs(~~~) 0:47:46
。我沒看見紅線變化 對
這不用換BPM

[777]
00:09:108 - Like what you've done 00:07:529 - it's still preferrable to leave it blank here. Similarly you can remove the note at 00:10:489 - .
01:10:290 - I don't see any need to accelerate this section, comparing to 00:15:029 - .
01:53:711 - fitted the drum but it does connects to the next phrase in a very poor way. Consider that the drum is soft enough you can remove them.
02:00:421 - unecessary acceleration.
03:03:578 - From the music this phrase goes back to a lower and more calm state. If there was some sort of acceleration, this should be slowered, probably something like 03:00:420 - . 03:06:736 - is another phrase that should get slower then you can acclerate the bar note-by-note, which fits the drum sound in the song as well.
03:24:104 - No, thank you!

The 1/8 (1/6 before adjustment) drum do exist in the song, but the taiko hit is too loud and exaggerating them to the top. Besides the acceleration problem the pattern doesn't contain much problem, a bit repetitive though.
Topic Starter
Loneight

LKs wrote:

[Timing]

BPM 228 for kiai-times is not required. just keep it as 152 with 4/4 signture and use 1/3&1/6. Only when BPM changes(including gradual BPM change, irregular BPM change), or donwnbeat changes, could we set new timing sections. no new sections are needed if you can map it well by using Beat snap divisor with current BPM


you'd adjust SV in all diffs. sry for inconvenience caused by

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and wmf may post taiko mod later
Okay! I changed~
Topic Starter
Loneight

wmfchris wrote:

[Timing]
Such a BPM shift is unecessary. BPM152 2/3 beat handles the song at best.
人性呢
SPOILER
落楓飄紅(~~~) 0:46:46
01:00:423 - 我覺得BPM228不對
152 2/3
LKs(~~~) 0:47:46
。我沒看見紅線變化 對
這不用換BPM

[777]
00:09:108 - Like what you've done 00:07:529 - it's still preferrable to leave it blank here. Similarly you can remove the note at 00:10:489 - .
01:10:290 - I don't see any need to accelerate this section, comparing to 00:15:029 - .
01:53:711 - fitted the drum but it does connects to the next phrase in a very poor way. Consider that the drum is soft enough you can remove them.
02:00:421 - unecessary acceleration.
03:03:578 - From the music this phrase goes back to a lower and more calm state. If there was some sort of acceleration, this should be slowered, probably something like 03:00:420 - . 03:06:736 - is another phrase that should get slower then you can acclerate the bar note-by-note, which fits the drum sound in the song as well.
03:24:104 - No, thank you!

The 1/8 (1/6 before adjustment) drum do exist in the song, but the taiko hit is too loud and exaggerating them to the top. Besides the acceleration problem the pattern doesn't contain much problem, a bit repetitive though.
777 have fixed in IRC and qoo's tk diff also change bpm ~

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Firce777

Flask wrote:

猥瑣wmf 幹
LKs
rebubbled
Topic Starter
Loneight

LKs wrote:

rebubbled
Thank you, LKs醬! >w<
Garven
[General]
You've got something weird going on in the intro for the storyboard from 00:06:739 -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/658488
Use tick rate 1 please. The changes between the swing section and the normal section just sound horrible with rate 2. That or silence the offbeat ticks during the 1/3 section since you have tick sounds all over the place.
Go through your difficulties and make sure the kiai green line sections are snapped correctly please.

[Normal]
02:55:687 (1,1) - Please don't new combo spam
Really nice Normal. Good work.

[Hard]
00:09:897 (1) - The end of this slider is snapped incorrectly
02:06:345 (3,4,1) - This was... unexpected. Especially with that kind of spacing. I really don't recommend you do this as it sticks out against the mapping of the 2 minutes prior. That or at least use spacing like at 02:12:266 (1,2,3) -
02:53:713 (2,1) - I was kind of expecting this to have the weird overlap like at 02:50:950 (1,2) -
03:35:456 (2,1) - Wow, bad place for an anti-jump. Use normal spacing here please.

[Insane]
01:38:318 (1) - Please make these combos longer.
02:14:634 (1,2,3,4) - This spacing is a little off. Maybe try ctrl + g on the 2 and 3? If you do this, be careful fixing the hitsounds afterward.
02:15:424 (5,6) - This snapping just feels wrong in context of the rest of this kiai section.
02:17:792 (1,2) - I found if you ctrl + g these individually, the flow is much much better. Don't forget to fix the hitsounds. You might want to reposition the stream too.

Something that bugged me about the map in general was the 1/4 spacing. It seemed mostly random or dependant upon the patterns rather than any sort of musical cue when it came to when you used larger spacing as opposed to distance snapping. it made for kind of a frustrating play compared to the relatively smooth play of the Normal and Hard.

[Muzukashii]
HP drain felt a little low. I got full health at 50% of the song. Maybe raise it a bit?
Maybe raise the volume a little bit during the louder parts of the song? The taiko sounds start to blend in a little too much.

[Oni]
Remove the ・from the end of the unicode title
03:09:108 (1) - Using a spinner here feels wrong. It's just a lot of noise over a part that has zero sound from the band beyond the sustained chord. That's not a good representation of the music.
Topic Starter
Loneight

Garven wrote:

[General]
You've got something weird going on in the intro for the storyboard from 00:06:739 -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/658488
:arrow: but, I use 1024x768 test play to see there, no weird going on there
Use tick rate 1 please. The changes between the swing section and the normal section just sound horrible with rate 2. That or silence the offbeat ticks during the 1/3 section since you have tick sounds all over the place. :arrow: okay~
Go through your difficulties and make sure the kiai green line sections are snapped correctly please. :arrow: fixed

[Normal]
02:55:687 (1,1) - Please don't new combo spam :arrow: I want to follow like 01:39:897 (1) - , 01:02:002 (1) - >~<!
Really nice Normal. Good work.
thank you :3
[Hard]
00:09:897 (1) - The end of this slider is snapped incorrectly
02:06:345 (3,4,1) - This was... unexpected. Especially with that kind of spacing. I really don't recommend you do this as it sticks out against the mapping of the 2 minutes prior. That or at least use spacing like at 02:12:266 (1,2,3) -
02:53:713 (2,1) - I was kind of expecting this to have the weird overlap like at 02:50:950 (1,2) -
03:35:456 (2,1) - Wow, bad place for an anti-jump. Use normal spacing here please.
all fixed~
[Insane]
01:38:318 (1) - Please make these combos longer.
02:14:634 (1,2,3,4) - This spacing is a little off. Maybe try ctrl + g on the 2 and 3? If you do this, be careful fixing the hitsounds afterward.
02:15:424 (5,6) - This snapping just feels wrong in context of the rest of this kiai section.
02:17:792 (1,2) - I found if you ctrl + g these individually, the flow is much much better. Don't forget to fix the hitsounds. You might want to reposition the stream too. :arrow: I think flow is better for me, so keep it

Something that bugged me about the map in general was the 1/4 spacing. It seemed mostly random or dependant upon the patterns rather than any sort of musical cue when it came to when you used larger spacing as opposed to distance snapping. it made for kind of a frustrating play compared to the relatively smooth play of the Normal and Hard. :arrow: Okay, I will improve next time ~
thank you for modding, Garven ~!
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BCI

Garven wrote:

Use tick rate 1 please.
who are you and what's up with real Garven /me runs
Garven
[Normal]
02:56:476 (1) - Remove new combo

[Insane]
01:39:108 (1) - Remove new combo
01:40:687 (1) - ^
01:42:266 (1) - ^
01:43:845 (1) - ^
01:45:423 (1) - ^
01:47:002 (1) - ^
01:48:581 (1) - &
01:50:160 (1) - %
01:51:739 (1) - $
01:53:318 (1) - *

[Muzukashii]
REMOVE the ・ from the title. Not add it on ;_;
Topic Starter
Loneight

Garven wrote:

[Normal]
02:56:476 (1) - Remove new combo
:arrow: lol! I don't know why here have NC www, fixed~

[Insane]
01:39:108 (1) - Remove new combo :arrow: okay~
01:40:687 (1) - ^ :arrow: okay~
01:42:266 (1) - ^ :arrow: okay~
01:43:845 (1) - ^ :arrow: okay~
01:45:423 (1) - ^ :arrow: okay~
01:47:002 (1) - ^ :arrow: okay~
01:48:581 (1) - & :arrow: xD
01:50:160 (1) - % :arrow: lol
01:51:739 (1) - $ :arrow: :3
01:53:318 (1) - * :arrow: w

[Muzukashii]
REMOVE the ・ from the title. Not add it on ;_;
:arrow: fixed, but it is blank in my verison, lol
Thank you again!>w< Garven
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Garven
[Insane]
01:53:318 (2) - Ah whoops, I missed this. You need to make this longer. You can't have two sliders that look exactly the same but have different speeds without visible ticks.
Topic Starter
Loneight

Garven wrote:

[Insane]
01:53:318 (2) - Ah whoops, I missed this. You need to make this longer. You can't have two sliders that look exactly the same but have different speeds without visible ticks.
change it other way ~ thank you, Garven :3
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Garven
Ack, sorry, didn't notice the reply. Rebubbled!
Topic Starter
Loneight

Garven wrote:

Ack, sorry, didn't notice the reply. Rebubbled!
It's not your fault, I forget to tell you >~<
Thank you very much daze~ Garven :3
Garven
Oops, a couple things that AIBAT missed, sorry

[General]
Snap your kiai start/ends

[Lunatic]
03:05:160 (1) - Slider end not snapped
Topic Starter
Loneight

Garven wrote:

Oops, a couple things that AIBAT missed, sorry :arrow: lol, It's okay, my fault

[General]
Snap your kiai start/ends

[Lunatic]
03:05:160 (1) - Slider end not snapped
all fixed~thank you, Garven :3
edit: Upload!!! sorry, I forget ;w;
Garven
Update it and PM me and I'll recheck.

Edit: Rebub
Kawayi Rika
Amazing map and Cool SB ~ Nothing to say ~

Here you go <3


Flask
恭喜飛翔 幹 :3
Topic Starter
Loneight

Garven wrote:

Update it and PM me and I'll recheck.

Edit: Rebub
Thank you, Garven :)

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Amazing map and Cool SB ~ Nothing to say ~

Here you go <3
!!! thank you very much daze, Rika醬!! :D !!!!!

Flask wrote:

恭喜飛翔 幹 :3
謝謝 www
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恭喜~
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