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Nishino Kana - Missing You

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Topic Starter
Andrea
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on giovedì 18 ottobre 2012 at 21:29:59

Artist: Nishino Kana
Title: Missing You
Tags: osuplayer111 motto...
BPM: 98
Filesize: 8692kb
Play Time: 05:04
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,27 stars, 498 notes)
  2. Normal (2,41 stars, 327 notes)
Download: Nishino Kana - Missing You
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 164th Beatmap.

Have fun ^^


Mapset:

Hard - Done.
Normal - Done.
Konei
First o/
Lally
Good luck ~ :3

edit:
eccoti la mod >.<)/
[Hard]
01:21:867 - credo che ci stia meglio uno spin che va fino a qui : 01:23:704
01:48:500 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - prova a darli un altra forma :V magari farli affinche formino un cuore (?)
se segui il consiglio dovrai spostare anche 01:50:643 (1)
02:41:000 - add a circle poi posiziona 02:40:847 (6) sopra lo slider
03:11:765 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - stessa cosa di prima che potresti fare anche qui
03:44:214 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - potresti darli un altra forma
04:50:031 (6,7,8,9) - fai un arco più carino :3
05:04:112 (5) - rimuovila credo che sia meglio e fai iniziare lo spin da qui
Darksonic
This is epic, both map and song. I wanna see this ranked as soon as possible, please do it fast, good luck on the way <3
Aurele
Here's a suggestion: You're dedicating this beatmap for the love of your life (Who's Hatsaya?), If I was you, you could make ALL the difficulty by yourself. It's more cuter and means more than making other difficulties by others.
mancuso_JM_
I'm with Gabe, it is more cuter. When I dedicated my map to my ex-girlfriend (http://osu.ppy.sh/s/50365), I decided to map all the set by myself..
You can do like me, since the song is long you can map 2 difficulties or something.. Well, it is your decision but as Gabe said it is more cuter, really
btw, ask me for a mod when you finish this map :3
Topic Starter
Andrea
You guys are right.

I will make both difficulties by myself :3
Chewin
Okay, I will stop to map the normal <3
Go baka andrè *-*
Konei
Yay o/
Sekai
Andrea you should put "osuplayer111" and "Motto..." to the tags, since Missing you is in Motto's Album

Check here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kana_Nishino

EDIT: Fixed link QAQ the other one seems broken orzzzzzz
Topic Starter
Andrea
Added both, thank you :3
those
Nishino Kana deserves at least three diffs. If you planned on getting an Easy done, you should have one anyway o/
Topic Starter
Andrea
I don't think an Easy difficulty is needed here, so I will just make 2 difficulties.
those
Lol xxheroxx's Easy wasn't necessary? I feel bad for him. D:
Diasios
ç_ç


He doesn't want to make an Easy because he's lazy as always.
yanlu
oh...,gogo~ fight for her ! :|
Let her know your apology and get she's heart again.
cheer up~
Andrea QAQ!


anyway,the song is really touch the heart <3
riffy
Can I give you my star? :3
Topic Starter
Andrea
Finally moved to Pending :3

Thanks everyone for the support ><
Konei
Mod mood~


I recommend to change

I wanted to point out

Suggestion and else


[Normal]

00:43:602 (3,4) - Plays a bit bad imo, how about moving a bit?
01:24:928 (2) - Try whistle at start for piano :3
02:48:194 (2) - ^
02:53:704 (2) - Rotate like http://puu.sh/1g5Wp looks better imo
02:56:460 (4) - Same shape as previous 2?
04:26:153 (2) - Same as 01:24:928


[Hard]

02:05:643 (4) - NC? Music is going down here :3



This is too wonderful >.<
Super genius map again and go go Andrea~ :3
Frostmourne
:P

Normal
maybe reduce all volume (all both green line and red line) by 10% because soft hitnormal sounds quite a bit loud :\

01:10:541 (3) - clap at the start
01:50:643 (3) - move this one 1/2 beat back and extend to 01:51:255
01:51:867 (1,2,3) - maybe move these 3 notes back 1/2 beat
it will follow vocal completely if you change these changes
02:05:337 (1,2) - spacing
03:14:214 (3,1,2,3) - same as 01:51:867

Hard
01:21:255 (8) - finish
02:05:643 (4) - according to vocal , should be new combo here
02:44:521 (8) - finish
04:35:643 (1) - finish at the tail
h3k1ru

nice map, cute song :3
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks a lot guys, really helpful mods.

Updated :3
jericho2442
2 diff mapset? i thought for a reason so important it would atleast of been a longtime spent effort set O_o

make a proper spread atleast imo tbh this just looks lazy...which is well yea
Melophobia
As requested :D

[Hard]
00:50:949 - Since there's an extra snare drum here, Consider adding clap here. not sure if the custom clap can be matched well with snaredrum but it still sounds good to me.
01:13:908 (8,1) - Would look better if you added newcombo to (8) and removed it from (1) because this is symmetrical pattern. And it will be more fitting with the vocal
01:21:255 (8) - I guess you forget a finish here
01:24:622 (1,2,3) - It would make more sense and look much better imo if you spaced these notes evenly like this
http://puu.sh/1g5X8
01:49:724 (5,6,7,1) - They are placed a bit randomly to my eyes. How about making a pentagon like this? (never mind the messy pattern in the screen shot) Also the same thing to 03:12:990 (5,6,7,1) -
http://puu.sh/1g5KB
02:05:031 (3) - Why not stack this note with the previous (8)? it looks better imo :3
02:37:174 (8,1) - Switch these newcombos for the same reason as 01:13:908 (8,1) -
02:44:521 (8) - Add a finish
02:47:888 - ^ Same here, I think a finish sounds great for this section.
04:36:255 (2) - Considering that 02:58:297 (2) - has a clap, I guess you need to add it here as well.

[Normal]
00:50:949 (2) - For the same reason as Hard, Add a clap here
01:10:541 - ^
01:50:031 (2,3) - This rhythm feels a bit weird to me, It may be just me though. But I would suggest this rhythm instead.
http://puu.sh/1g68G
01:56:459 (2,3,4) - I prefer something like this. it may look a bit better
http://puu.sh/1g69v
02:33:807 (3) - Clap
02:39:623 (4,5) - Change them into a slider because of a long vocal?
02:45:133 (1) - move this slider leftward by 1grid?
02:47:888 - Same as Hard diff, How about adding a finish here?
02:55:235 (2) - Remove red anchor from this slider? it enables this slider to fit better with both the previous and next notes imo
http://puu.sh/1g6e2
03:13:297 (2,3) - Same suggestion as 01:50:031 (2,3) -

That's all~ perfect map as always!
good luck Andrea~
Topic Starter
Andrea

jericho2442 wrote:

2 diff mapset? i thought for a reason so important it would atleast of been a longtime spent effort set O_o

make a proper spread atleast imo tbh this just looks lazy...which is well yea
It's a 5 minutes song, just saying.
jericho2442
song length does not relate to difficulty spread, thats common knowledge explained to every mapper
deadbeat
could still make at least a Easy >_<
also i'll try this when i get home :D
Topic Starter
Andrea
Even if I would try to make an Easy, it's almost impossible to make it, since the BPM is really slow, the Normal feels already like an Easy, so.
jericho2442
also some advise on the hard. your using jumps where they are not called for in the song or the difficulty, which doesnt suit. stuff like 01:29:520 (1,2,3) - there is no musical reason why it should be a jump and its used just for pattern, this can look good but it can also give your map an extremely broken flow because you set a slow flowing pace then randomly make a user jump against the song for the reasoning of a pattern.

just some advise since i see this getting soo common in maps nowadays and there aint really any reason to use fake difficulty in a hard diff since its not meant to be really hard to play
Konei
I agree with Andrea lol.
I don't think an Easy is neccassary here at all.
deadbeat
i'll try it when i get home and see for myself :3
Sekai

Konei wrote:

I agree with Andrea lol.
I don't think an Easy is neccassary here at all.
Mythol
request~

[Normal]
00:57:684 (4) - I think 1/1 slider here fits much better!
01:28:296 - Add previous slider but flipped o.o? sounds really nice~01:38:704 (1) - I'd like to see repeat on this ;_;
01:46:357 (3) - NC?
02:00:439 (1) - Clap instead on repeat?
Same suggestions for the flipped parts ._.
03:52:480 (3) - 1/1 slider here? for smoother transition into red ticks o:
04:03:806 (2) - whistle?
04:05:337 (4) - Add repeat!
04:45:133 (1) - Just clap B(
05:01:051 (3) - ^
05:04:418 (1) - Spinner vol too high during spin~

[Hard]
00:53:704 (4) - Remove finish on repeat?
00:56:153 (7) - no finish o:
00:59:061 (6) - Triple here and shorten slider muuuuch better ></
01:08:398 (7) - NC?
Same for flipped^^^
04:05:184 (1) - I think spinner ending on 04:07:786 is better :/
04:31:663 (5) - Repeat instead of note for symmetry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! o.ob
05:03:806 (4) - Remove finish?
05:04:265 (1) - Spinner too loud during spin

Nice o.o/
Fumika
Kana >w<

Just suggestion !

[Normal]

00:50:031 (1) - like this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/465667 I think that will make a flow when play >w<
01:27:071 (2) - ^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/465679
02:13:297 (1) - ^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/465683

[Hard]

00:27:684 (1) - add whistle add start ?
00:29:520 (5) - ^ ?
00:32:582 (1) - ^
00:49:112 (1) - make like more beautiful curve this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/465754 ?
01:07:173 (5,6) - invert it ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/465757
02:12:378 (1) - like this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/465763
02:30:439 (5,6) - invert it ?
04:27:071 (3) - 1/4 reverse slider instead ?

That's all I got ;w; hope it will help you ><
Lally
[Normal]
irc mod
17:57 Lally: da qui 02:45:133 a qui 02:46:969 (4) - ci sta meglio uno spinn
17:59 Lally: 03:02:582 (x) slider piccolo suona meglio
18:00 Lally: 03:14:520 - anche qui
18:00 Lally: slider piccolo
18:04 Lally: 04:04:418 (3,4) - invece di fare 2 slider qui perche non ne fai uno a cuore?
18:09 Lally: o uno spinner non li vedo bene quei 2 slider QWQ
18:09 Andrea: D:
18:09 Lally: ups
18:09 Lally: no non era li D:
18:09 Lally: ups
18:09 Lally: XD fail baka me
Topic Starter
Andrea
Everything updated, thanks everyone. ^^

Doesn't matter what I do, she doesn't care about everything I do for her.
Topic Starter
Andrea
Do not mod this map anymore, it doesn't make sense. ^^

Thanks for everyone that helped me, I really appreciate that.
spboxer3

※ Notice

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.

general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. fine.

Normal



  • mapping
    (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 01:00:439 (4,5) - [nazi] try to make (4 ans 5's slider start) straight. It's have deviation now.
  2. 02:23:705 (4,5) - ^ looks it's copy pattern.

Hard



  • mapping
    (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:58:908 (5,6) - for this. used "xxx x" it's apparent rhythm better for me. for instrumental 00:58:908 (5) - it's bass and 00:59:214 - have boss too. for lyrics, 00:58:908 - and 00:59:061 - it's says "and". but "you" it's at 00:59:214 - .
  2. 02:22:174 (5,6) - ^

  3. 03:47:888 (1) - It's very odd to me when I played this part. the first: 03:47:888 - doesn't have any voice or instrumental. and second: 03:48:194 - It's a higher beat (downbeat/paragraph ). It's should be used hit object not only used slider reverse (hitsound only).

call me back when you fix my mod~ but please reply my mod post and used 2 color to reply it
Blue: you accept my mod item
Red: you deny my mod item and please reply the reason.

Edit: ok~so sad :(
let me know if you really need it
Mercurial
C'mon Andrea.
Flanster
Trust me, dont. He's not in the mood to even touch this map as you can see.
Topic Starter
Andrea
Fixed, thank you.
spboxer3
OK. that's try to get her back~

It's have 8 effective mod post. So it can get now, I think.

mod post link
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p/1843714 (Lally)
p/1845154 (Konei)
p/1845181 (Frostmourne)
p/1845184 (h3k1ru)
p/1845210 (Melophobia)
p/1845289 (Mythol)
p/1845357 (Netsukawa)
p/1845593 (me)
Aurele
>30 hours ago, bubbled.

Ohyeah, it's Andrea's map♥
Darksonic
LOL

Gogogogoggogogoggogo rank
Lizellota
lol....
riffy


Go go rank! <3

Btw, there's NO NEED to make [Easy] because Normal isn't that hard and song is so long. Just saying.

inb4: wave of haters soon
Breeze
To tell the truth, I don't know if "your her" play osu! or not, if she don't, I think this map won't make much sense for her, just a comfort for yourself. If you two are just struggling and suffering from each other for not a long time, it's better to do something practical to let her know how much you love her rather than making a beatmap to dedicate to her; If she plays this game oh well maybe it works, I'm sorry if this sentence sounds severe. I wish you are fine, my friend. Real life is more important than games, put more effort on her, pal. Take you two back, good luck forever.

This map is awesome

RANKED
kurohana
Wow, that's a speedrank O____O

Congratz Andrea :3
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
0,0 现充自重


edit: 好像理解错了233 :|

edit: 现充自重
B2IN
O.O !
IchiGUN
Nishino Kana *.*
Graz Andrea :D
Snowy Dream
> <!
Chewin
Andrè *-*
cRyo[iceeicee]
motto osuplayer111
:3
Lally
Andreuccio *-* wiiiii \( * u * )/
Sonnyc
Ehh,, 1 day rank, Gratz
Kawayi Rika
lol already rank ome andrea :3
Konei
Gratz ~ :D
Sekai
gratz \:D/

Topic Starter
Andrea
Thank you to all of you guys, without all of you this wouldn't happen.

I will always fight for her and never give up.

Anyway, to whoever is rating the map 1: I don't care at all, you can downrate it as much as you want, this map was made only for the person that I love more than everything ^^ So your negative vote doesn't matter at all for me.

People has no feelings.
Milkshake
hey Ib background
alacat
congrats o.o
pw384
1 day rank ;w; a new record
deadbeat

384059043 wrote:

1 day rank ;w; a new record
not really :/
none the less. gratz. still haven't played this yet ;__; been too busy. hopefully on sunday :p
Flask
Cool & Gratz!
Weez
wtf speedrank?? D: *reads beatmap info.....*
-kevincela-

Weez wrote:

wtf speedrank?? D: *reads beatmap info.....*
Same
Jenny
Hitting a map out because of something like that and ranking it within 3 days makes it so much worse.
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