Nathien wrote:

my first mod, so sorry if its not helpfull at all, but ill try at lest =)

Overall im not a fan of the whistlesound on long slidertracks. it sounds better if its only on one point, but thats up to you ^^

Easy:
00:49:130 (3) - the space between that hit and the last feels to short. Once u know how the song goes it works quite well, but maybe get a bit more space between them It's correctly snapped, so it's good

Normal:
Since you used quite fast sliders mb space everything according to the slider-speed? it feels a bit odd, having that fast sliders and compared to that quite small spaces between the circles.
00:47:304 (2) - think it sounds and "feels" better if you increase the sliderlength by one tick Yep, fixed

Hard:
This difficulty feels best right now, but in fact there is the same problem as in normal, the speed of the sliders and the space between them feels just to different. Makes the map difficult to play.
00:28:553 - think it sounds and "feels" better if you increase the sliderlength by one tick (copypaste! ^^) Fixed
00:47:303 (2) - same as above, increase the lenght by one tick Fixed

thats what i noticed, hope it might help at least a bit =)

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi from my mod Q~~

Hard

00:13:168 - end this slider on white tick and add 2 notes after
00:21:245 - replace on slider 1/1
00:33:553 - ^
00:22:976(2,3,4) - correct spacing
00:24:322(5,6) - stack better
01:01:245 - ^

• You have so many problems with spacing(( Plz check it all~
All fixed with AiMod's help

Normal

OD - 1

• Open AiMod and correct spacing

00:07:065 - put this note on Big white tick >.<
I just forgot to resnap it last time after changing the Offset, thx ^^"

Easy

• Open AiMod and correct spacing

00:24:322(4) - prolong this slider and end on white tick
00:27:015 - ^
00:36:630 - ^
00:41:245 - ^
00:51:630 - ^
And all sliders on kiai time check it~~ ^^^
Fixed

Good luck~

Konei wrote:

Random mod =w=~


Easy

Keep your claps consinstent, you should take every second white tick!

00:07:015 (1) add finish

00:08:553 (2) remove clap on end

00:08:938 (3) Clap on begin and end

00:11:630 (2) remove clap on end

00:12:015 (3) add clap

00:12:784 (5) add clap

00:13:168 (1) finish at start

00:14:322 (1) remove whistle on end

00:19:322 (1) finish on start

00:23:361 (2) remove this finish

00:25:091 (4) remove finish

00:25:476 (5) add finish

00:28:553 (1) You should not use 2 repeats in a Easy diff, so remove one and take a circle

00:31:630 (1) Finish

00:43:938 (1,2,3,4,1,2) These are fully different spaced, so take Distance snap, and correct this

00:52:784 Why this break? There is still sound and this is TV Size so you shouldn't take a random break.


Like I see this this has some work to do But I'm sure you can do it and improve it.


Good luck~~

Everything fixed, and thanks for the Hitsound Mod, I'm very bad with them
I deleted the break and replaced it too.

General

Remove audio of the video.
W-wha...? 2 mp3-files in the song folder? Oo haven't seen this yet... Remove one of them (i think the copy)

Easy

Normal

00:19:322 - 00:59:322 - Like easy
00:28:554 (1,2,3) - move them like this fix spacing after changing
00:38:169 (2) - i know what you wanted here, it has to end at 00:38:361
00:52:400 - add notes, wouldn't fit if Normal got more breaks as Easy ^^'

Hard

kurohana wrote:

Thank you for request \(^^)/

General

Remove audio of the video.
W-wha...? 2 mp3-files in the song folder? Oo haven't seen this yet... Remove one of them (i think the copy)

Thanks, I thought it was deleted.

Easy

00:15:476 - Add notes in this break, i see no real need for this >.<
00:19:322 - 00:59:322 - I think soft-hitsounds would fit better
00:29:707 (2) - delete note and repeat 00:28:553 (1) The actual note was suggested just before, I keep it, sry.
00:41:245 (4) - slider end at 00:42:207 I made it just before, I think white ticks would be better for an easy too
00:55:861 (4) - slider end at 00:57:399 Fixed
00:57:784 (1) - slider end at 00:58:938 Fixed

Normal

00:19:322 - 00:59:322 - Like easy Fixed
00:28:554 (1,2,3) - move them like this fix spacing after changing Fixed
00:38:169 (2) - i know what you wanted here, it has to end at 00:38:361 Fixed
00:52:400 - add notes, wouldn't fit if Normal got more breaks as Easy ^^'Fixed

Hard

Very confusing spacing Oo maybe check this by yourself. And don't use 0,5x for Hard, i think 0,8x or 1,0x would fit much better ^^
Oh and add notes to the break (It's the same like normal) I have resnapped everything in 0,8x

Good luck :3 Let me know if you checked Hard, i will recheck it ^^

TheVileOne wrote:

General
I got nostalgic when I played this mapset.


Tags need to be the same in all difficulties. Fixed

Source doesn't need to be in tags.
Artist doesn't need to be in tags.
Song's title doesn't need to be in tags.

Kiai should end here 01:16:822 - in all difficulties Fixed

Do you realize your combo colors are different in each difficulty? Fixed



Easy

This mapping brings me back to fond memories of 2010. It's mapped well.

00:14:707 (2) - How about centering between previous slider? Fixed
00:19:322 (1) - This looks like it was supposed to end 1/2th later. Fixed
00:22:399 (1) - You should make a habit of placing the last slider point in the middle of the end circle. You should do this especially when the slider is straight. Fixed
00:34:322 (4,1) - Move one unit to the left x should be 444. Also why is 3,4 1.1 instead of 1.0? Placing it at 1.0 doesn't seem to affect your patterns at all. You can move them all down to adjust for it. Fixed
00:36:630 (4) - Such a weird slider. I suggest you try this. http://puu.sh/QcQF Fixed
00:51:245 (2) - Remove clap? clap clap clap isn't really a hitsound pattern. Fixed
00:59:322 (1,2,3) - Nice placement of long sliders. Ironic or not ?
01:04:899 (1) - I don't suggest starting this combo on a red tick. Start the combo and the slider here 01:04:322 - . You can then end on that red tick. Fixed

Normal

Are you trying to bring back 2010? There are some adjustments that need to be made for this difficulty to play right. When you're making adjustments make sure that all the elements stay lined up and perfect. Here's my thoughts of this difficulty. It felt dated, and there is plenty of room for improvement. I can't really say that I got everything there is that could be made better in this difficulty as this map was exceptionally hard to mod. I would keep getting more opinions. If each person mentions a spacing adjustment that could be better then eventually all the spacings will be perfect.

00:07:015 (1,2,3) -0.65/0.66 exactly. alt + shift to change distance snap more accurately.
00:11:054 (3,1) - At least 0.6 snap.
00:20:861 (3,1) - I don't know why this has to be so close. At least 0.6 snap.
00:24:515 (6) - Use a more symmetrical L-slider. http://puu.sh/Qdh2
00:27:977 (5,1,2,3) - Random transition pattern? It shouldn't abruptly change directions like that in my opinion. Also 1,2,3 is poorly mapped to the beat, switching oddly from vocal to beat. Please move 00:28:938 (3) - 1/2th forward. That's where it needs to be.
00:33:554 (3,1) - Too close.
00:36:631 (5) - Isn't this supposed to be pointing towards the next combo?
00:36:631 (5,1) - use 1.0.
00:46:054 (5) - bad vocal to start a slider on. start it here 00:45:861 - and end it in the same place. That vocal is not worth mapping.
00:50:861 (2) - This should be a mirror of 1 IMO
00:52:015 (4) - finish doesn't sound good on a red tick. I think it sounds better extended to the white tick. Still don't recommend ending with a finish.
00:59:708 (2,3,4) - 0.65 looks better.
01:01:246 (5,6) - 0.7?
01:02:400 (1,2) - 1.0 plays better IMO.
01:04:323 (4,1) - At least 0.6.
01:04:900 (1) - This is crooked.
01:10:092 (5,6,7) - Stack is off. Make it perfect.
01:11:054 (7,1) - Too far of a gap. I suggest reducing to 1.2.
01:18:938 (3) - Move down 1 unit. y should be 320
Everything fixed.

Hard

Definitely late 2009 to 2010. It has all the symptoms. Unusually close distance snap, notoriously mapping to vocals, sliders that are faster than the distance snap, lots of straight sliders/patterns. It's not entirely wrong, but it's exactly what this mapset is. I am more amused by this mapset because of how its mapped than worried. You should at least avoid overlap and bad flow; those are things from 2010 you should leave out of your beatmap.

00:21:245 (8,1) - At least 0.8. 0.5 may be good for streams, but it doesn't work for gaps. These types of things you should avoid.
00:24:899 (6) - Make symmetrical. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/397687 Please keep spacing in the screenshot exactly like that. Gaps should be 0.8 Fixed
00:29:707 (3) - x should be 404
00:32:784 (1,2,3) - Not straight
00:44:130 (2) - This is awkward to hit. Please delete. You can keep the rest of the notes. My reason is the vocal here 00:44:226 -. If you delete and i really recommend you do, you should unstack the triple from the single. Fixed
00:45:091 (6,7) - 0.8 would be better.
00:47:303 (2) - Line this up better by moving to x 397 y 62. Fix spacing after as necessary.
01:05:476 (4,5,1) - This is very hard to read. you should turn into a repeat slider, repeating on the blue tick. It wil end where 1 is. Add note here after 01:06:245 -. Highly recommended.
01:07:399 (5,6,1,2,3) - So cluttered....
01:10:668 (9,2) - Could you fix this overlap?
01:23:938 (4) - Move right until square is perfect.
01:25:284 (3,1) - too close.

Conclusion

Less stars, more getting this modded. That's my suggestion.

I know it has to be more modded. But I'm actually in the modding queues and that are noob mappers who don't want beatmap with 3 or + mods, or modders who want Bubbled maps. There are few normal beatmap queues (but there are some, i know).
I can't use all of your mod for "Hard", I was remapping it when you modded, sorry.
Thanks for the mod

Hard

kurohana wrote:

Re-check \(^^)/

Hard

00:52:976 (1) - spacing
01:04:899 (1) - hidden under slider, move it
01:25:284 (3) - stack correctly

The slider are often very straight, maybe try some curves? But it's up to you.

Spacing is better now :3 good luck ^^

TheVileOne wrote:

I'll take my chances with my regular version with this recheck. I hope I helped.

General

Really should get this timing looked at.

Remove kyoukai senjou no horizon from tags.

Hard

Spacing to 0.8 didn't remove that 2010 feeling that the straight sliders create. It's not a bad thing. It does play a lot better now.

00:09:707 (5) - Add clap.
00:14:322 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move 2 grid 4 units to the left. Lines it up with 00:13:168 (4) -
00:32:784 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - This could be better. Here's what i suggest:
00:32:976 (2,3) - Remove claps.
00:33:553 (4) - Remove the clap on the end.
00:34:322 - Add note with clap.
Place notes like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/398511 The position of 5 is to create a triangle pattern with next two notes. I know there's some overlap and that perhaps may be fixed, but for right now get the pattern in place.
00:34:707 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is fun. It's works.
00:45:091 (5,6) - You should space 1.0. Stacking doesn't play well IMO. you should also start the next combo here 00:46:630 -. Look at this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/398516
00:46:630 (1,2) - This can also be a jump. You can probably space 2 any distance 2.0 snap and lower from 1.0. Space where it works best.
00:52:976 (1) - why start this pattern so close to the previous one? Before you do anything. Add a note here 00:52:784 - . Place it at x 436 y 40. You should start the next combo by stacking on this note.
00:57:591 (1) - You should start on the long white tick IMO. replace 00:58:391 -
01:00:284 (3) - Clap
01:00:861 (5) - ^ (Remove finish)
01:01:822 (7) - ^
01:06:630 (2,3,4,5) - Move two grid 4 units to the right to line up with 1.
01:08:553 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Awesome pattern
01:24:899 (2,3) - Not stacked right.

Lots of thing fixed, but I don't remember exactly what

Normal

Your hitsounds should be a lot better after this mod.

00:07:015 (1) - Start combo in the exact center of the screen.
00:07:015 (1,2,3) - 0.65 spacing. In other words, spacing should be exactly equal.
00:10:092 (1,2,3) - spacing should be equal. Turn grid snap off and make it all 0.65
00:11:054 (3,1) - Try 0.8. And space it more like a corner. http://puu.sh/QtFm
00:13:169 (4,5) - 0.8 too.
00:22:400 (1) - start this combo is an area that doesn't overlap with a slider.
00:27:400 (4) - end with whistle
00:27:977 (5) - ^
00:29:323 (4,5,6) - It looks better if this was exactly vertical
00:30:669 (7) - Replace first finish with whistle.
00:33:554 (3) - Remove finishes- they sound bad. Just have a whistle on the start instead?
00:37:784 (1,2,3,4,5) - Do this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/398548
00:38:938 (3) - How about remove the whistles and only add a clap to the start?
00:39:708 (4) - ^
00:40:092 (5) - End with whistle or finish?
00:41:246 (1) - Replace first whistle with finish?
00:45:861 (4) - start with clap.
00:46:631 - Add note with clap
00:46:823 (1) - Delete and add note here 00:47:015 - instead?
00:47:304 (2) - whistles don't fit. Remove?
00:49:131 (5) - Remove whistle from start?
00:50:092 (1) - whistle start, clap on end?
00:50:861 (2) - whistle start, finish on end?
00:51:631 (3) - whistle
00:52:015 (4) - reduce by 1/2th, whistle instead of finish to start.
00:52:784 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:53:169 (2) - New combo. Claps on both of those notes?
00:54:515 (4) - whistle
00:55:092 (1) - line up with 4.
00:55:861 (2) - whistle on body?
00:57:784 (1,2) - add finishes to this.
00:59:708 (2) - Add whistle to end?
01:00:284 (3) - replace finish with whistle.
01:01:438 (6) - Replace finish from start and add clap to start?
01:02:400 (1) - Line up with end of 6.
01:03:361 (3,4,1) - Awkward. Increase spacing please.
01:04:900 (1) - This is awkward coming off of previous note. You should move it half back. It plays a lot better there.
01:10:669 (6) - Unstack?
01:11:054 (7) - Slider just doesn't sound right since it's mapped to the beat. I think you should just delete and fix spacing with next combo.
01:16:823 (3) - Add clap

Lots of thing fixed, but I don't remember exactly what

Easy

I did this hitsounding in a rush. I can't guarantee that I didn't make a mistake somewhere.

00:14:707 (2) - You could adds a whistle on the end if you add a note with whistle here 00:15:861 - and add whistle to the start of 00:16:245 (2) - Fixed
00:23:361 (2) - whistle?
00:24:322 (4) - whistle on start
00:26:245 (2) - ^
00:27:015 (4) - ^
00:28:553 (1) - whistle on both ends?
00:32:784 (3) - start with whistle?
00:35:668 (3) - Perhaps reduce to the red tick? I prefer keep it on the white, easier to play
00:35:091 (2) - add whistle to start?
00:35:668 (3) - add whistle to end if it's on that red tick.
00:41:245 (4) - add finish to start.
00:50:091 (1) - start with whistle?
00:53:168 (1) - end with finish
00:55:091 (2) - New combo? It just seem fitting to me.
00:55:476 (3) - Whistle?
00:55:861 (4) - Start with whistle?
00:57:784 (1) - start with finish
01:00:861 (2,3) - You can remove the finishes from the end.
01:10:091 (2) - Start with whistle? also sounds better if you reduce to the red tick and add a repeat. Same reason as above.
01:19:322 (5,6,1) - I think a straight transition is best Fixed

Kiiwa wrote:

Hi~

Gerenal
Please find better MP3, even if this is 128KBS, it sounds bad..?The only problem was the voume, and if I take an other Audio file, it'll not fit with the background video, sorry. I have better quality, but it's FLAC and when I reencode it, it becomes like the actual audio file.
Kiai ends kind of randomly, consider ending at 01:20:861 - or 01:22:399 - or 01:23:938 - ? Fixed

Hard
No spinner in this diff. Please consider adding one like the one in Easy to add variation in score.
AR+1 please! It gets confusing with such low AR! Fixed
00:47:303 (2) - Extend end till 00:47:591 - Fixed
00:38:938 (3) - This design makes more sense http://puu.sh/QEoT Fixed
00:44:226 (2,3,4) - Dont stack. Unstack (2) from (3) and (4) atleast. Fixed
00:48:553 (5,6) - Spacing dosen't fit music Fixed
00:57:784 (1) - Change to http://puu.sh/QEqC Fixed

Normal
AR-1 OD-1 Fixed
00:14:708 (1) - Extend till 00:17:592 - and add finish Fixed
00:29:227 (3,4) - Don't use 1/4 in a Normal diff please. Fixed
01:10:092 (5) - Extend till 01:10:381 - Fixed

Easy
HDR+1 Fixed
00:19:322 (1) - Extend till 00:20:091 - Fixed
00:28:553 (1,2) - Don't stack like this in an Easy diff Fixed
00:49:130 (3,4) - Change to a slider Fixed
01:05:476 - Need note There's already the Slider's end here

nich95 wrote:

Hi, JudgeTheDude

My mod from your request

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

1. Kiai time in Normal diff is little different. Should move a green line in 00:59:323 to 00:59:322.Fixed, it was a problem with the offset, everything was Snapped with offset+1

Easy

1. 00:19:332 (1) - move slider end at 00:20:019 I prefer keeping it as the previous Slider. With placing them on white ticks, it's easier to play. Rythm is easier to take
2. 00:29:707 (2) - It shouldn't overlap with slider repeat of (1), because may make new players is surprise here. Fixed
3. 00:49:130 (3) - It's hard for Easy diff. Remove it. Fixed, I put a note at 00:49:322
4. 01:04:899 (2) - Slider start at 01:05:091.Fixed, better like that

Normal

1. 00:28:554 (1,2,3) - Use slider follow this. Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:47:015 (2,3) - Same as 00:28:554 (1,2,3) - I prefer keeping the actual notes.
3. 00:54:708 - Add a note? Fixed
4. 01:10:092 (5,6) - Same as 00:28:554 (1,2,3) - Fixed
5. 01:15:169 (3) - Don't overlap with slider end of (2). Fixed

Hard

1. 00:44:514 (3,4) - Don't overlap with (2) Already Fixed
2. 00:47:303 (2) - Slider end at 00:47:591AlreadyFixed

That's all that I can find them.

Good luck~

• 
  1. x 60 y 192
  2. x 160 y 192
  3. x 140 y 268
  4. x 240 y 268

• 
  1. x 116 y 192
  2. x 168 y 24
  3. x 344 y 40

• 
  1. x 356 y 72
  2. x 472 y 72
  3. x 472 y 276
  4. x 356 y 276

TheVileOne wrote:

Hopefully last recheck

Easy

This mod will require considerable restructuring. You may want to keep a backup of your difficulty.

00:15:861 (3) - Not aligned vertically. x > 320
00:16:245 (1) - You should fix the overlap with 00:14:707 (2) - Raising the point where the slider curves should do it. (These 00:17:784 (2,3,4,1) - will need to be repositioned, which isn't that big of a deal. You have plenty of room to place them. I even have a pattern in mind, but I think it will be better for you to figure a pattern here). Hint: Pick a pattern where this 00:19:322 (1,2,3) - starts and ends on the vertical line.
00:22:399 (1) - You shouldn't start this in that position, it isn't fitting for this reason. The vocal here 00:21:630 - is extended through the gap. So this often indicates a forward movement. there's a much more complicated reason as well, but it's much harder to explain. Let me suggest you remap it a bit.

Instructions

00:22:399 (1) - Move this here 00:22:784 - , replacing 00:23:361 (2) -. With that done, add a repeat to 00:20:861 (3) -. You could position it like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/399453 After that it's just a case of repositioning the notes until the spacing evens out.

Hitsound adjustments
00:20:861 (3) - Add whistle to the repeat just so it doesn't sound empty.

00:30:091 (3) - Add finish to start. Sounds like a significant beat.
00:36:660 (4) - Add whistle on end. A change of shape is in order. You should try this, so that the end works better with the next slider. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/399460

00:53:198 (1) - finish on start.
01:04:352 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - This is formless. You should remap this with more interesting patterns.
The combo after see what you can do with this http://puu.sh/QLYE

01:12:044 (2,3) - I think it would be better if you managed to reverse the position to right to left if you can....
01:14:737 (4) - new combo.
May I suggest that you not have a red tick transition here 01:14:737 (4,5,6) - . It doesn't sound the greatest. Try this? http://puu.sh/QM4S


Will update with other difficulties. I wanted to get the Easy out early.

wmfchris wrote:

[Hard]
I'll suggest HP6 for this hard.
00:08:765 (5,1) - swap new combo as the new phrase starts at 00:08:573 - actually
00:21:265 (8) - clap at the end corresponding to 00:19:919 (4) - , you may also want to curve the sldier with (4) as well: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/401260
01:10:111 (7) - align with (5,6), left 1 grid
01:12:611 (4) - again left 3 grids so that (1,2,3,4) gives a rectangle
like 1:10 above some details can be improved in the diff. On the other hand, the hitsound actually make sense but sometimes we're not sure whether their logic is consistant or not, like 00:27:419 (3) - with finishes and 00:29:150 (2) - without it.

[Normal]
00:43:381 (4) - fit the music and sounds smoother if you move this 1/2 later
00:57:804 (1) - actually this is inaccurate but using a single 3/4 slider would be too hard. Try to use repeating 3/4 slider then
00:59:342 (1,2,3,4) - they're too close each other (not in terms of spacing), it's hard to determine the spacing of (2,3) blablabla you can make better use of the area on the right...
The same hitsound questioning with hard, mostly about claps.

Some mappers/modders don't like linear mapping but this is not bad, and the song sounds nice as well. Good luck~

Nagisawa wrote:

Hi)
It's special mod from my que

[Hard]
~HP + 1 Fixed
~1/8? Why? For that: 00:52:996 (1) - Move this note out of the corner. also consider starting where 7 was. Ends on long white tick. Add finish to the end. Also the timeline is weird through here. I suggest a 1/8th transition. This plays more closely to the vocals IMO. http://puu.sh/R5V2 also look at this pattern http://puu.sh/R5WC
~use distance shap.

00:17:419 (4) - finish Fixed
00:24:727 - add note + clap A bit weird, we'll see with the next mod, but I put it.
00:39:727 (4) - delete note this and add here + whistle I didn't understand wha you want
01:03:381 (4,5,6) - hidden. fix it Fixed
01:16:265 (1) - nc Fixed
01:22:804 (1) - hidden. fix it Fixed

and so, comboburst

SPOILER

good luck)

pyransc wrote:

Some sugestion.

[Easy]
00:20:496 (2) - End this slider at 00:21:650 ?? Fixed
00:49:342 (3) - clap I keep the actual
00:50:111 (1) - remove whistle on secound circle There aren't any whistle on the second circle
00:51:265 (2) - clap I keep the actual
01:06:265 (5) - add whistle to secound circle Fixed
01:07:035 (6) - remove whistle on first circle I keep the actual
00:59:342 - inherited point audio 50% ?

[Normal]
00:07:035 (1) - remove finish add whistle I keep the actual
00:07:419 (2) - add whistle to first circle Fixed
00:08:958 (1) - clap Fixed
00:09:342 (2) - ^ I keep the actual
00:09:727 (3) - ^ Fixed
00:10:111 (1) - remove finish add whistle I keep the actual
00:10:496 (2) - add whistle to first circle Fixed
00:12:035 (1) - clap Fixed
00:12:419 (2) - ^ I keep the actual
00:12:804 (3) - ^ Fixed
00:14:342 (5) - whistle I keep the actual
00:44:150 (1) - start slider at 00:43:958 Fixed
00:47:035 (2) - add clap to secound circle Fixed
00:47:804 (3) - ^ Fixed
00:48:958 (5) - add clap to slider I added clap only on start and end

[Hard]
ok

shojimeguro wrote:

Easy&Normal
Nothing to say it seems PERFECT!
you already got mod from professional i think

Hard
beats seems to be in place
just put soud effect and everything will be good!

tha's all i can mod
i think your beatmap will be ranked soon

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[Easy]
00:51:650 (3,1) - try to avoid the overlap

[Normal]
00:17:611 - delete the break
00:59:727 (2) - end at wrong position
01:04:727 (1) - keep reverse no more than 4 times in Normal

[Hard]
General suggestion: Use more various patterns/sliders. Putting circles and sliders horizontally or vertically makes the map lack creativity and playability. One of the best way to improve patterns in your map is open other's map in editor and see how they put notes, and this is what I did when I made my first map.

GL~

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi, mod time~

Not much to found, only tiny stuff that can be improved and some can be ignored (sorry if something looks nazi >_<), here we go~

[General]

Unsnapped inherited timing points (green lines), some volume changes, and kiai time may be affected by this.

[Easy]

00:16:287 (1) - 1 grid left
00:41:287 (4) - This may be covered by the HP bar.

[Normal]

There's a lot of spacing changes, but as there's the same spacing in a same combo, I think that's fine.
00:08:018 (3) - Maybe align this with the end of previous slider (x:388 y:116)
00:14:364 (5) - 1 grid left
00:44:749 (2) - This looks better

Took the original slider, reversed (Ctrl+R/Edit -> Reverse selection) and rotated by 180°, putting it in x:64 y:184

00:55:903 (2) - 1 grid left
01:00:326 (3,4) - 1 grid down
01:22:826 (1) - You can make it like this:

1: x:96 y:88; 2: x:160 y:96; 3: x:172 y:160.

[Hard]

No spinners? I couldn't find a nice spot to put one, so I think it's fine.
00:53:787 (3) - Make this end in 00:53:980

That's all, good luck c:

Yu-Izanagi-12 wrote:

Why isn't this map ranked yet?
All honesty i couldn't find anything wrong

Aldwych wrote:

Salut , via M4M (un peux vieux mais bon j'accepte quand même).

[General]

Je trouve que le volume hitsound est beaucoup trop bas ( du fait que le volume de la musique lui lest fort), on entend a peine le whistle par exemple.
Essaie de garder le même volume entre chaque diff, par exemple sur ton kiaï :
En easy : 50%
En normal : 50%
En hard : 40%
Corrigé

[Easy]

Rien de spécial si ce n'est ce qui est référé au général

[Normal]

00:20:903 Ctrl + R et essaie de faire quelque chose de sympas avec le précédent cercle et slider.
00:36:672 Auh nom! Un peu plus courbé et régulier s'il te plait.
J'ai un peu tout remappé, donc ça a été corrigé

[Hard]

00:21:287 J'ai vu que tu as voulu faire une parallèle au dernier slider, mais je le trouve pas très beau, et si tu le faisait plus autour du précédent cercle? Ou alors le faire un plus courbé et plus joli?
01:02:441 Stack le sur le slider?
01:08:595 Ca manque d'un jump par la imo.
01:10:133 Tu as mis en soft ici en normal, pourquoi pas en hard?
01:16:287 ^ (Pour le jump)
01:16:864 Il sert a quoi ce TS?
01:25:710 Quel gachis ce blanc quand t'as un beau steam de fin ici.
J'ai un peu tout remappé, donc ça a été corrigé

Wala!

Sinon je reprendrais que m'as dit popner et wmfchris sur ma map :

C'est un peu trop "carré" et ancien tu utilise pas assez les slider courbés et ça manque un peu choses techniques, le fait que tout soit un peu horizontal et vertical la rend un peu ennuyante. Je te conseille d'ailler faire un tour ici : 61

Par contre y'a pas de fautes particulière et ça ne l'empêche pas d'être rankée hein.

Good luck.

Kin wrote:

Yop ~
Meme si c'était close je mod quand meme

Easy :

00:18:980 (6) - bouge le un grid en dessous pour faire une jolie droite
00:30:133 (3) - essaie quelque chose dans le genre : http://puu.sh/14JZP
00:51:672 (3,1) - La fin du 1 juste a coté du 3 comme ça, je le trouve pas très très jolie, peut etre qu'il serrait mieux si il est en plein mileux de ses 2 sliders 00:50:133 (1,2,3) -
01:17:826 (1) - spacing
01:22:826 (1) - essaie de faire un symetry parfaite

Normal :

00:48:595 (4) - essaie de le placer parfaitement sur la fin de ce slider 00:47:057 (2) -
01:03:403 (3) - essaie de le changer comme celui la, pour qu'il "entoure" parfaitement une parti du cercle : http://puu.sh/14Lor
01:11:672 (1) -spacing
01:16:287 (1,2,3) - pour une normal, évite 3 cercle comme, lorsque que c'est snappé sur du bleu, un slider back est meilleur : http://puu.sh/14Lt2

Hard :

01:25:710 (4,1) - c'est + jolie avec un slider comme ça non ? : http://puu.sh/14Lym

Good luck pour le ranking ~
et n'hésite pas à me PM pour un mod ou une guest diff

1. 01:04:749 - add note....feel better..
   
   1. 01:05:518 (4,5) - change to slider~?
2. 00:57:826 (1) - remove NC?~...
3. 01:02:441 (3) - NC?~...
   
   1. 01:04:364 (1) - remove NC~
4. 01:05:518 (3) - NC~

1. 00:10:518 (2,1) - change to the end of the sldier completely overlap with note1~
2. 00:19:364 (1,3) - symmetrical~try to copy one, then ctrl+J~
3. 00:38:210 (2,4) - change to the end of the sldier completely overlap with note4~
4. 00:46:672 (1) - remove NC?...~
   
   1. 00:47:057 - NC~
5. 01:23:980 (1,1) - the spinner's hitscore overlap the slider....try to move on it....

1. 00:29:172 (2) - try ctrl+R~
2. 00:32:249 (4) - try to make a slider?~
3. 01:15:133 (2,3) - change to the end of the sldier completely overlap with note3~
4. 01:18:210 (2,6) - move slider6 right one grid~

Athena Tennos wrote:

A-tan's mod~

[General]
♪~nice!~

[Easy]

1. 01:04:749 - add note....feel better.. Fixed
   
   1. 01:05:518 (4,5) - change to slider~? Fixed
2. 00:57:826 (1) - remove NC?~... Fixed
3. 01:02:441 (3) - NC?~... Fixed
   
   1. 01:04:364 (1) - remove NC~ Fixed
4. 01:05:518 (3) - NC~ Fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:10:518 (2,1) - change to the end of the sldier completely overlap with note1~ The 1 appears after the slider is played, so I don't think it's a problem, it's readable. I'll see with future mods
2. 00:19:364 (1,3) - symmetrical~try to copy one, then ctrl+J~ Already symetrical, but I have re-pasted it, in case of
3. 00:38:210 (2,4) - change to the end of the sldier completely overlap with note4~ The 4 appears after the slider is played, so I don't think it's a problem, I'll see with future mods, it's readable.
4. 00:46:672 (1) - remove NC?...~ Fixed
   
   1. 00:47:057 - NC~ Fixed
5. 01:23:980 (1,1) - the spinner's hitscore overlap the slider....try to move on it.... Fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:29:172 (2) - try ctrl+R~ Fixed
2. 00:32:249 (4) - try to make a slider?~ Fixed
3. 01:15:133 (2,3) - change to the end of the sldier completely overlap with note3~ That was just badly stacked
4. 01:18:210 (2,6) - move slider6 right one grid~ Fixed

very nice song!~but the rhythm a little singularly...;_;..
Good Luck~

1. Nothing is wrong but the BG looks so catchy to me xD

1. 00:33:210 (3) - mind to add finish? I'm following the song owo
2. 00:51:287 (1,2,3) -
   SPOILER

   
   
   Maybe, move down a little? it touches HPBar and score xD
3. 00:53:210 (1) - Why this slider ends at the blue tick? long white tick should be fit IMO
4. 01:10:133 - Why start from here you're using soft hitsound oAo I couldn't feel the soul of the song compare to 00:59:364
5. 01:17:826 (1,2,3,4) - I prefer these 4 should using normal hitsound instead soft ><

1. 00:10:518 (2,3) - Actually, I don't recommend overlap in Normal, it will becomes harder to seen
   SPOILER

   
   
   But I think it's okay for now besides, I couldn't find a better solution for you.. oTL
2. 00:39:749 (4,5) - ^
3. 00:43:210 (4) - use drum(normal hit) hitsound instead soft?

1. I think more space in this diff would be great? so some objects would not touch the other object/slider
2. 00:20:903 (7) - NC here? but not gray color please xP
3. 00:31:672 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I think this pattern is quite confusing... try playtest it with osu! skin default, it overlaps the other
4. 00:40:903 (3) - Move the current NC to here, it follow the downbeat and the vocal :3
5. 00:57:826 (1) - extend the slider til the blue tick, in this part it would be nice if you follow the vocal
6. 01:11:672 (1) - add finish~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hello ~ JudgeTheDude ~

High Priority map ready for mod ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. 'comboburst' size really large,try reduce some. Fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:13:210 (4) - This slider is not symmetry. Fixed
2. 00:31:672 (1) - Move to X:160 Y:244 looks better. Fixed
3. 00:44:268 (2) - Move 1 grid right. Fixed
4. 00:53:787 (3,4) - I guess you follow with lyrics,should change like this. Fixed
   

[Normal]

1. 00:52:056 (4,5) - Don't jump here,it's hard for beginner. Fixed
2. 00:55:903 (2) - Extend to 00:57:249 and remove whistle on end point. Fixed
3. 01:26:287 (1) - This slider suddenly spinner after,so extend spinner to 01:26:480 is fine. Fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:20:518 (2) - Change a circle + 2/1 slider is more better to here. I didn't know what you wanted, sorry
2. 00:41:287 (4) - This slider should end to 00:42:249. Fixed

That's all ~ i guess it's time to go ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

like this

1. 00:24:364 (4) - Comme tu suis principalement les vocal avec tout le reste du pattern (à savoir 00:22:441 (1,2,3)), il est plus logique de faire de même avec ce slider, c'est-à-dire, suivre le "wa". Pour ça, réduit le slidr de 1/2, comme ça :
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:43:980 (1,2,3,4) - C'est un peu vide et pas vraiment vivant sur ce patter, rajoute quelques hitsounds, pourquoir pas un whistle sur (2) et (4) ?

1. 00:53:210 (1,2,3) - Un rythme en 1/4 ? C'est peut-être un peu trop complexe pour une normal, les joueurs débutants sont pas vraiment habitué à ça, surtout que ici il est pas forcément évidant. Essaye de trouver une autre possibilité, ou alors change les 2 cercles en un seul slider ?

1. 00:24:364 (4) - Ajoute un new combo, ça fait trop de bleu d'un coup là ..
2. 00:50:133 (1,2,3,4) - Même remarque que dans la Easy, ajoute un whistle sur (2) et (4) ?
3. 00:52:826 (1,2,3,4,5) - Encore un vide dans les hitsounds.
   1. Whistle à la fin de (1)
   2. Whistle sur (2)
   3. Whistle à la fin de (3)
   4. Whistle au début de (4)
   5. Whistle sur (5)
4. 00:55:133 (1) - Whistle au début

Kurai wrote:

sup'

[Easy]

1. 00:24:364 (4) - Comme tu suis principalement les vocal avec tout le reste du pattern (à savoir 00:22:441 (1,2,3)), il est plus logique de faire de même avec ce slider, c'est-à-dire, suivre le "wa". Pour ça, réduit le slidr de 1/2, comme ça :
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:43:980 (1,2,3,4) - C'est un peu vide et pas vraiment vivant sur ce patter, rajoute quelques hitsounds, pourquoir pas un whistle sur (2) et (4) ?

[Normal]

1. 00:53:210 (1,2,3) - Un rythme en 1/4 ? C'est peut-être un peu trop complexe pour une normal, les joueurs débutants sont pas vraiment habitué à ça, surtout que ici il est pas forcément évidant. Essaye de trouver une autre possibilité, ou alors change les 2 cercles en un seul slider ?

[Hard]

1. 00:24:364 (4) - Ajoute un new combo, ça fait trop de bleu d'un coup là ..
2. 00:50:133 (1,2,3,4) - Même remarque que dans la Easy, ajoute un whistle sur (2) et (4) ?
3. 00:52:826 (1,2,3,4,5) - Encore un vide dans les hitsounds.
   1. Whistle à la fin de (1)
   2. Whistle sur (2)
   3. Whistle à la fin de (3)
   4. Whistle au début de (4)
   5. Whistle sur (5)
4. 00:55:133 (1) - Whistle au début