Jupiter wrote:

あまり実のあること言えないけど

[Insane]
00:04:430 (7) - move x:288 y:48
00:10:178 (7) - move x:256 y:176
00:24:549 - add note?
00:25:807 - ^
00:49:340 (3) - change whistle -> finish
00:49:699 (5) - slider start point. change whistle -> fisnish
02:00:657 - add note?
02:10:537 (1) - add finish
02:11:076 (3) - ^

気がついたところだけ書いといた！
Nice map!

Jupiter wrote:

[SakiK's Easy]
00:57:064 (1) - slider start point. add finish sorry,no
00:59:939 (4) - add finish no
01:08:561 (1) - ^ fix
01:09:998 (4) - slider start point. add finish
01:11:436 (2) - ^ fix
01:34:430 (3) - ^no
01:41:615 (4) - ^ fix
01:43:052 (6) - ^no
01:53:831 (2) - slider return point. add finishno
01:58:861 (1) - slider start point. add finish fix
02:01:735 (1) - ^ fix
02:10:358 (1) - change spinner end time 02:12:693 -> 02:12:334他の難易度に合わせてますー

CDFA wrote:

DUN ANGLE:
00:09:459 (3) - Well, this sure is an odd jump. Add an NC to signify the wtfjumpage? :> //well,I think it is fine
00:20:058 (3) - I know you're trying to stack this with (5), but it's counter-intuitive to just have that anti-jump there~. Make it a jump too >3<~. //but it flows well ><,so no change
01:12:873 (5) - Move the red sliderpoints lower so it's more of a lighting-bolt shape //how.. ?
01:51:495 (5) - Once-again, I don't like this anti-jump D: //hmm...[/olor]
02:11:615 - add note with finish here?

CDFA wrote:

EEEZZY:
00:38:382 (6) - like, midly unsymmetricfix
00:54:190 (4) - Not moe D::3

k

KayeSara wrote:

You can see the word "This beatmap has not been uploaded correctly!" if you download without video, you may upload it fully again.

CDFA wrote:

I have so many KOTOKO maps for some reason.

Overall:
Tick Rate 2?

Insane:
00:36:046 (2) - Don't put this under the slider D:! The slider hides the circle as well as makes it unclickable except for the few ms interval between the end of the previous slider and that note :>
00:54:549 (2) - ^
02:00:837 (2) - Make the curve a bit larger?
02:11:615 - add note with finish here?

1. 01:12:513 - Add a circle?
2. 01:12:873 (3,4,1) - The DS is different >.< fix it plz~~
3. 02:01:735 (1) - finish

1. 00:30:118 (4,1,2) - Make 00:31:915 (2) - 's head stack on 00:30:118 (4) - 's tail looks better~~~
2. 00:45:567 (1) - finish
3. 01:11:436 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Rotate 15 degrees looks better?? http://puu.sh/x2ui
   

   356,236,71436,5,0
   449,199,71795,1,8
   444,100,72154,1,0
   347,74,72513,1,8
   293,158,72873,6,0,B|248:190|246:289,1,100,0|8
   311,323,73591,2,0,B|355:290|357:191,1,100,0|8

4. 02:05:687 - Add a circle?
5. 02:11:436 (3) - 1 Grid right~~~

1. 00:16:106 (2,3,4) - DS is different >.< fix it plz~~
2. 00:21:046 - Add a circle?
3. 00:27:424 - ^
4. 01:01:196 - ^
5. 01:03:531 (3,4,5) - 1 Gird up~
6. 01:17:543 - Add a note?
7. 01:41:615 - Hmm... I think the correct beat is this >_<"
   
8. 01:55:807 - Add a note?
9. 01:55:897 - ^

1. 00:02:813 (2) - Ctrl + R??
2. 00:25:268 - Try this beat?? I think it's better~~ >w<
   
3. 00:50:956 (4) - finish
4. 01:05:507 (1) - Move to (X:208 Y:336) looks better!!
5. 01:17:004 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm...bad shape >_>... looks little ugly T_T....Remap it like 01:17:992 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ??
6. 01:23:831 (6) - Ctrl + R??
7. 01:27:244 (2,3,4,5,6) - How about this >_< looks more better IMO :> http://puu.sh/x2Hz
   

   200,224,87244,1,0
   312,144,87424,1,0
   232,144,87603,1,8
   344,224,87783,1,0
   272,64,87962,2,0,B|232:32|184:32,1,90

8. 01:41:615 - Try this beat??
   
9. 01:55:986 (1) - Move to (X:240 Y:224)~~~~ Make them to be a good six-side shape!! @w@
10. 01:57:244 (1,2,3,4) - Do some differents? looks more better and plays more fun :> http://puu.sh/x2Kr

1. 00:45:388 - 加個圈?
2. 00:45:567 (1) - finish
3. 00:46:825 (4) - ^
4. 01:01:915 (1) - 就拉直線吧~ 比較對稱也比較好看>_<
5. 01:12:873 (5) - ^
6. Nice diff~ 很對稱呢!! XP

12BARRY21 wrote:

<D.N.Angel>

1. 00:45:388 - 加個圈? //不，我想這樣子
2. 00:45:567 (1) - finish //k
3. 00:46:825 (4) - ^ //k
4. 01:01:915 (1) - 就拉直線吧~ 比較對稱也比較好看>_< //我這裡想用這種slider來達成hold住的效果:>
5. 01:12:873 (5) - ^ //因為改調很麻煩所以就不改了lol
6. Nice diff~ 很對稱呢!! XP // >w<

Good Luck!! >w<
Star~~ Love this song @w@

Vass_Bass wrote:

D.N.Angel
00:02:454 - 50% volume there
00:21:136 - finish
00:25:268 (2) - remove it and move slider 1/2 earlier /no
01:11:974 - note there //no
01:18:621 - 65% volume there

//I had the volume 10% lower except 70% soft - hitsound

Frostmourne wrote:

Hi , From my queue

SakiK's Easy
01:53:831 (2) - still not perfect linear slider , move a bit ok

Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi

SakiK's Easy
00:51:675 - add normal finish thereok
00:57:064 - ^add soft finish
01:01:376 (6) - ncok
01:06:765 (5,6) - wrong rythm, i suggest you remove (5) and try this:sorry no

SPOILER

01:17:903 (3) - whistle, not clapmm...change

lovhin456 wrote:

[Mythol's Normal]
- 00:15:028 ~ Remove the clap ? It doesn't fit imo

lovhin456 wrote:

Hello and sorry for the huge delay

[General]
- Fine

[Melo's Hard]
- 00:26:346 ~ Remove new combo then add new combo on the next note OK~

[Insane]
- Fine

[D.N.Angel]
- Fine

* Seems pretty good overall

• • Video Offset: -100ms
  • Open all .osu files and change...
  

  [Colours]
  Combo1 : 224,157,67
  Combo2 : 167,224,148
  Combo3 : 170,170,255
  Combo4 : 215,94,232

• • HP Drain Rate: 3
  • 00:07:214 (green timing section) - Move this at 00:07:304 (red tick).
  • 00:12:962 (green timing section) - Move this at 00:13:052 (red tick).
  • 00:18:262 (3) - Add "New Combo".
  • 00:36:945 (4) - ^
  • 00:42:693 (4) - ^
  • 00:50:867 (green timing section) - Move this at 00:50:956 (white tick).
  • 01:36:585 (2) - Delete this slider. Add a circle at 01:36:945 (white tick).
  • 01:38:022 (3) - Start this slider at 01:37:663 (white tick).
  • 02:07:483 (3) - Add "New Combo".
  • 02:08:921 (1) - Remove "New Combo".

• • HP Drain Rate: 4 (or 5)
  • 00:12:962 (green timing section) - Move this at 00:13:232 (white tick).
  • 00:50:867 (green timing section) - Move this at 00:50:956 (white tick).

• • 02:11:615 (3) - Delete this circle. start a slider here and end it at 02:12:154 (white tick).

• • 00:07:753 (green timing section) - Move this at 00:07:843 (white tick).
  • 00:13:501 (green timing section) - Move this at 00:13:591 (white tick).
  • 00:20:956 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 01:36:406 (2,3) - Delete (2). Start (3) at 01:36:406 (red tick).

• • 01:17:004 (4) - Delete this slider. Add a circle here, one at 01:17:184 (white tick) and another one at 01:17:274 (blue tick).

xxheroxx wrote:

[D.N.Angel]

• • 01:17:004 (4) - Delete this slider. Add a circle here, one at 01:17:184 (white tick) and another one at 01:17:274 (blue tick).

xxheroxx wrote:

[SakiK's Easy]

• • HP Drain Rate: 3change 2
  • 00:07:214 (green timing section) - Move this at 00:07:304 (red tick).
  • 00:12:962 (green timing section) - Move this at 00:13:052 (red tick).
  • 00:18:262 (3) - Add "New Combo".
  • 00:36:945 (4) - ^
  • 00:42:693 (4) - ^
  • 00:50:867 (green timing section) - Move this at 00:50:956 (white tick).
  • 01:36:585 (2) - Delete this slider. Add a circle at 01:36:945 (white tick).hm...change another pattern
  • 01:38:022 (3) - Start this slider at 01:37:663 (white tick).fix
  • 02:07:483 (3) - Add "New Combo".
  • 02:08:921 (1) - Remove "New Combo".

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
• You must fix this.
_____________________________________________
_____________________________________________

[General]

• • Video Offset: -100ms
  • Open all .osu files and change...
  

  [Colours]
  Combo1 : 224,157,67
  Combo2 : 167,224,148
  Combo3 : 170,170,255
  Combo4 : 215,94,232

[Mythol's Normal]

• • HP Drain Rate: 4 (or 5) 4~
  • 00:12:962 (green timing section) - Move this at 00:13:232 (white tick).
  • 00:50:867 (green timing section) - Move this at 00:50:956 (white tick).

[Insane]

• • 00:07:753 (green timing section) - Move this at 00:07:843 (white tick).
  • 00:13:501 (green timing section) - Move this at 00:13:591 (white tick).
  • 00:20:956 (x) - Add a circle. nah.
  • 01:36:406 (2,3) - Delete (2). Start (3) at 01:36:406 (red tick).

-Bakari- wrote:

[D.N.Angel]
big circles :< CS -1
OD - 1 :/

regenz wrote:

DN

are you sure to use AR9 i think AR 8 is enough and not confuse. (i think ar9 is too overdo for bpm 167)

//I can't find much difference between 8 or 9
but I consider the diff spread

Insane AR8,HP7,OD7
my diff AR9,HP7,OD8

it is better if I set AR9 to my diff
so I wanna keep this

and only 1 mod is same suggestion about hitsound in last part as insane and hard //hmm...ok,I add some finish by myself

start here 02:04:609 (1) -

i'm very tired plz check your self sorry.


Goodluck

Star because I really love guitar part of this song, and extra one because of this

http://puu.sh/DgPw

wooo I'm so HENTAI!

regenz wrote:

mod 4 mod ingame request with http://osu.ppy.sh/s/51037

General

Can you full submit again ?

i check with this trick. p/1553979

and this is result http://osu.ppy.sh/mt/49406
still not see thumbnails

AND

OMG this is very distract

http://puu.sh/DgPw

Mod

Insane

00:38:561 (1,2,3,4,5) - this jump and anti jump is very confuse
can you move 4 and 5 to other position or just nc at 00:39:280 (4) -
01:36:406 (2) - fin head
01:37:843 (3) - ^
02:11:436 (5) - delete?

02:04:609 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - just mod sound same as hard
suggest

SPOILER

02:05:148 (3) - fin
02:05:328 (4) - fin head
02:05:867 (1) - fin head
02:06:226 (2) - fin
02:06:585 (4) - fin head
02:06:945 (5) - fin
02:07:124 (6) - fin head
02:07:483 (1) - fin
02:07:663 (2) - fin
02:08:022 (4) - fin head
02:08:741 (1) - fin head
02:09:459 (3) - fin head
02:09:998 (5) - fin
02:10:178 (6) - fin head

Goodluck

Star because I really love guitar part of this song, and extra one because of this

http://puu.sh/DgPw

wooo I'm so HENTAI!

wmfchris wrote:

The beatmap has not been uploading correctly. Try to FULL submit the map again.

lovhin456 wrote:

Recheck

[Insane]
- 00:39:998 ~ If I'm not mistaken this reverse arrow gets a little covered by a previous note's hitburst OK

That's all

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hello ~ -Gamu- ~

Random mod for my Queue ~




That's all ~ Pretty nice map and song ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Garven wrote:

[DNA]
HP -1 or 2. It's way too high to recover from mistakes. //I think HP7 in an Insane is very common. :O
the diff is not that hard,I want to keep this.
Circle size -1. This is fairly easy. //the spacing will be too large if I do that ... I don't want to change this T.T
AR -1. 9 feels too fast for what you mapped.
//my thinking is,since my diff is more difficult than Gamu's Insane,AR9 is good for diff spread.
don't know whether you agree this. :O

Otherwise nice~

Garven wrote:

Not sure why the bubble is popped, but oh well.

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best

[Insane]
01:04:968 (5,6,7,1) - This flows really poorly with that strong up/down motion.
01:22:214 (6,1) - This jump is ill-placed, and also leading into a 1/4 triple at that point in the song is awkward. I'd change the placement and delete the 01:22:843 (2) -
01:36:406 (2) - This slider is kind of ugly looking with that red point. See if you can smooth it out with some tips from RJ's guide.

Garven wrote:

[Easy]
00:48:442 (1) - Maybe end this at 00:50:418 - to give more time. It's still too soon.

Garven wrote:

Rebubbled!