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Kitamura Eri - Happy Girl (TV Size)

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Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on segunda-feira, 13 de janeiro de 2014 at 23:03:30

Artist: Kitamura Eri
Title: Happy Girl (TV Size)
Source: Papa no Iukoto wo Kikinasai!
Tags: opening papakiki suzutsukikanade mitsuneko takanashi sora miu hina ikari_kyon
BPM: 145
Filesize: 14646kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,89 stars, 209 notes)
  2. i_k's Insane (4,95 stars, 280 notes)
  3. Mitsu's Normal (3,71 stars, 104 notes)
  4. SK's Easy (2,21 stars, 73 notes)
Download: Kitamura Eri - Happy Girl (TV Size)
Download: Kitamura Eri - Happy Girl (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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パパのいうことを聞きなさい!OP - Happy Girl

Re-download if you downloaded before 08/06/2012

Going for ranking!

Easy - Done by suzutsukikanade
Normal - Done by Mitsuneko
Hard - Done by me.
Finished, ready to mods!
Looking for BATs too, plzzz take a look on this! >3<
Starry_old
will mod later :3
Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako

Starry wrote:

will mod later :3
ok will wait
Reed R Gale
Was bored, Starry showed me this map, so I decided to make a difficulty for fun. So I'll put it here.

If you wanna use it (which I would love) just PM me, or poke me... or something.

EDIT: Made some changes per Starry's request/awesome guidance

Download: Itou Kanae, Aizawa Mai & Mikami Shiori - Fuwaffuwa no Mahou (TV Size) (KuronumaSawako) [Reed's Insane].osu
Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako

Reed R Gale wrote:

Was bored, Starry showed me this map, so I decided to make a difficulty for fun. So I'll put it here.

If you wanna use it (which I would love) just PM me, or poke me... or something.

EDIT: Made some changes per Starry's request/awesome guidance
ok will use
Fumika
Offset : 661

Sounds better.
Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako

Netsukawa wrote:

Offset : 661

Sounds better.
ow thx
Starry_old
Reed R Gale
Kiai Modes added.

Also, I think that the BPM should be 130.05

I've set my map in that timing, but if you want, I can change it back.

Cheers,

Reed R Gale

Download: Itou Kanae, Aizawa Mai & Mikami Shiori - Fuwaffuwa no Mahou (TV Size) (KuronumaSawako) [Reed's Insane].osu
Mitsuneko
Here's your normal. Hope you like it.
http://puu.sh/zOcn
Tur00
Hi, From Queue.

[General]
Use same offset in all diffs , Normal Have different offset.

[SK's Easy]

00:06:674 (1) - delete reverse arrow.
00:09:157 (2) - move this slider to 00:08:330 and add "whistle" in the 1st part of the slider
and delete the whistle in the last part.
00:09:985 - if you make ^ , here put a hitcircle with "whistle"
00:54:675 (1) - delete the reverse arrow and add finish in ther first part of the slider.
00:56:743 (2) - move this slider to 00:56:330 and delete the clap of the first part of the slider
and better add it in the second part.

Dont is more .. Good Map.

[Mitsu's Normal]

00:21:260 - add the break time .

Only It :C
This normal are very good :D

[Hard]

Too :C
I like this so much T_T
i skip it why i dont found nothing :C

Srry for this little modding u_u
Lizellota
Hi ~ from our q ~

[Hard]

00:30:675 - remove clap
00:30:881 (2) - add clap
01:03:157 - remove clap
01:03:364 (1) - add clap

[Mitsu's Normal]

00:26:536 - add finish?
00:33:156 (1) - ^
00:37:915 - add clap
00:39:777 - finish
00:46:398 - ^
01:07:294 (6) - clap
01:07:915 - finish
01:24:467 - ^

[Easy]

SliderMultiplier:1.00000000596046 -> 1

Nice map, Good luck~!
Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako

espiritur00 wrote:

Hi, From Queue.

[General]
Use same offset in all diffs , Normal Have different offset. Will wait Mitsuneko fix this

[SK's Easy]Will fix for her because she's not feeling good these days

00:06:674 (1) - delete reverse arrow. No because looks fine this way
00:09:157 (2) - move this slider to 00:08:330 and add "whistle" in the 1st part of the slider
and delete the whistle in the last part. No, plays weird when i do this so...
00:09:985 - if you make ^ , here put a hitcircle with "whistle" No, same reason
00:54:675 (1) - delete the reverse arrow and add finish in ther first part of the slider. Looks fine this way
00:56:743 (2) - move this slider to 00:56:330 and delete the clap of the first part of the slider
and better add it in the second part. No same reason as 00:54:675

Dont is more .. Good Map.

[Hard]

Too :C
I like this so much T_T Oh thanks :D
i skip it why i dont found nothing :C

Srry for this little modding u_u thanks for mod

KersiTyan wrote:

[Hard]

00:30:675 - remove clap No, feels weird if i do this so no
00:30:881 (2) - add clap No
01:03:157 - remove clap Ok
01:03:364 (1) - add clap Ok

[Easy]

SliderMultiplier:1.00000000596046 -> 1 Ok

Nice map, Good luck~! Thanks for mod!
RikiH_
Hi from my queue o/

Green = Suggestion
Blue = You should fix it
Red = You must fix it

SK's Easy

00:57:985 (3) - Maybe this way is better http://i46.tinypic.com/289wwg3.png
01:09:571 (3) - 2 grid left for making it symmetric with 01:07:916 (1)
01:10:812 (4) - If you follow my preceding suggestion move this note in x:168 y:220

Mitsu's Normal

00:57:984 (1) - I don't like this slider shape... try to improve it
01:07:915 (1) - Finish at the beginning
01:23:639 (4) - Finish at the end

Hard

00:13:709 (2) - CTRL + R
00:28:606 (6) - ^
00:48:675 (5) - ^

Good luck :)
suzutsukikanade
[quote="RikiH_"]SK's Easy

00:57:985 (3) - Maybe this way is better http://i46.tinypic.com/289wwg3.png Nice! Fixed
01:09:571 (3) - 2 grid left for making it symmetric with 01:07:916 (1) Fixed
01:10:812 (4) - If you follow my preceding suggestion move this note in x:168 y:220 Fixed

[quote]
http://puu.sh/J9OK
Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako

RikiH_ wrote:

Hi from my queue o/


Hard

00:13:709 (2) -
00:28:606 (6) - ^
00:48:675 (5) - ^

Good luck :)
No fixes sorry
jamxx
General
  • Combo color 6 is too dark.
Easy
  • 00:18:261 (1) - this spinner is too short for newbie.remove 00:17:847 (2) - and spinner start here.
    00:53:847 (1) - remove
Normal
  • HP,OD+1
    00:25:708 (2) - finish at slider end
    00:33:156 (1) - finish
    00:54:674 (1) - ^
    01:07:915 (1) - ^
    01:23:639 (4) - remove whistle and add finish
Hard
  • 00:24:881 (1,2,3,4,5) - distance...
    00:28:192 (5) - newcombo
    00:34:812 (5) - ^
    01:02:123 (4) - remove clap?
    this diff is Hard+.
nice map.
Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako

jamxx wrote:

General
  • Combo color 6 is too dark. Ok changed
Hard
  • 00:24:881 (1,2,3,4,5) - distance... This Jump is intentional
    00:28:192 (5) - newcombo Fixed
    00:34:812 (5) - ^ ^
    01:02:123 (4) - remove clap? Ok
    this diff is Hard+. Yes
nice map.
Thanks for mod!
-Neipezi
ahm.. excuse me..?
guest difficulty(Insane) can be done.. :?:
Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako

-Kirito wrote:

ahm.. excuse me..?
guest difficulty(Insane) can be done.. :?:
Well i don't have a Insane guest diff yet, but i think my hard is close to a one so will not add a one
pimp
ola o/

mod mais ou menos random

geral

inconsistencia no timing

a dificuldade do mitsuneko tem -1 offset de diferença entre as outras duas
bom, eu tenho costume de checar o timing quando modero um map, o seu timing ja é otimo,
eu sugiro offset -4, nao é uma grande diferença, voce pode manter seu offset atual se preferir

sk's easy

00:24:881 (1) - nao é uma grande mudança, mas eu acho q esse slider devia ser mais arredondado:


1o curve point x216 y192 (onde ele esta atualmente)
2o curve point x152 y200
3o curve point x140 y144

o spacing fica perfeito
..........
01:07:916 (1,2,3) - mover (2) para x432 y232?
ou mover (2) para x424 y232 e (3) para x424 y152 ?


mitsu's normal

00:19:501 spinner end here, just like sk's diff? sounds better
btw if you want to keep your current spinner end it still look like need to map the small break time
..........
01:05:225 (2) - i think you should remove this note
01:05:639 - i think you should add a note here

hard

00:18:261 - acho que o spinner devia começar nesse tick branco

its an awesome map :)

good luck
suzutsukikanade

pimpG wrote:

sk's easy

00:24:881 (1) - nao é uma grande mudança, mas eu acho q esse slider devia ser mais arredondado: Ok
http://puu.sh/MKv8

1o curve point x216 y192 (onde ele esta atualmente)
2o curve point x152 y200
3o curve point x140 y144

o spacing fica perfeito
..........
01:07:916 (1,2,3) - mover (2) para x432 y232?
ou mover (2) para x424 y232 e (3) para x424 y152 ? Ok

http://puu.sh/MLw6
pieguyn
hi there =w=

SK's Easy:

00:47:640 (2) - perhaps add clap from start and remove it from end? it might sound better if you start the clap pattern here :?
01:09:571 (3) - remove finish? since you didn't put one at the end of 00:54:675 (1) -

Mitsu's Normal:

00:16:605 (5) - add NC?
00:19:915 ~ 00:24:880 - add break here? such a long pause seems really weird...
00:54:674 (1) - add finish?
01:07:294 (6) - maybe add clap?
01:07:915 (1) - add finish on start?
01:17:846 (4) - add NC?
01:24:674 (1) - end it 3/4 later like in other diffs?

Hard:

00:39:778 (4) - add NC?
00:54:054 (3) - maybe use regular soft clap on the end? >< I'd recommend having the same hitsound since the sound in the music also repeats..

nice map, good luck~
Arnold0
From Let me TRY to mod your maps
As said in my queue I'm a newbie modder so my mod might be bad.

[General]
Since you have two gest diff, you should add the name of the two guest mapper in your tags.

[SK's Easy]
00:08:743 - Add note
00:15:364 - Add note
01:24:054 - Add a slider which end at 01:24:261 -

[Mitsu's Normal]
The offset in this diff is 6674 insted of 6675 in the two other diffs, you should change it and resnapp all notes.
From 00:19:916 - to 00:24:881 - Add a break here since there is 5 second without any notes

[Hard]
01:05:847 (5) - It seams you follow the vocals here so I think you should delete this note.

Good map, I don't find many things. Good luck with ranking :)
Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako

pimpG wrote:

ola o/

mod mais ou menos random

geral

inconsistencia no timing

a dificuldade do mitsuneko tem -1 offset de diferença entre as outras duas Fixado
bom, eu tenho costume de checar o timing quando modero um map, o seu timing ja é otimo,
eu sugiro offset -4, nao é uma grande diferença, voce pode manter seu offset atual se preferir Melhor deixar do jeito que está.

mitsu's normalfixando pra ele já q não encontro ele pra fixar a diff

00:19:501 spinner end here, just like sk's diff? sounds better
btw if you want to keep your current spinner end it still look like need to map the small break time
..........
01:05:225 (2) - i think you should remove this note
01:05:639 - i think you should add a note here
fixei tudo aquí
hard

00:18:261 - acho que o spinner devia começar nesse tick branco Não acho necessário.

its an awesome map :)

good luck :)

pieguy1372 wrote:

Mitsu's Normal:

00:16:605 (5) - add NC? Kay
00:19:915 ~ 00:24:880 - add break here? such a long pause seems really weird...Kay
00:54:674 (1) - add finish? Kay
01:07:294 (6) - maybe add clap? Kay
01:07:915 (1) - add finish on start? Kay
01:17:846 (4) - add NC? Okay
01:24:674 (1) - end it 3/4 later like in other diffs? Kay

Hard:

00:39:778 (4) - add NC? Kay
00:54:054 (3) - maybe use regular soft clap on the end? >< I'd recommend having the same hitsound since the sound in the music also repeats.. No, this sound good for me.

nice map, good luck~

Arnold0 wrote:

[General]
Since you have two gest diff, you should add the name of the two guest mapper in your tags. Their names are already here

[Mitsu's Normal]
The offset in this diff is 6674 insted of 6675 in the two other diffs, you should change it and resnapp all notes.
From 00:19:916 - to 00:24:881 - Add a break here since there is 5 second without any notes
All fixed
[Hard]
01:05:847 (5) - It seams you follow the vocals here so I think you should delete this note. No changes
Thx for mods all :D
Konei
Hah, is there a way this song can get boring? ;D

M4M for your Queue =w=~

Please notice I will point everything out that I notice. You should see:

red= unranable issue

blue= very recommend you to change this

purple= I wanted to point it out, but I'm not sure to change it

black = suggestions


General


Cancel Countdown? Doesn't really fit the song

Cancel letterboxes during breaks, because you use a video!

You don't use a SB, so you should delete the osb. file in your folder and full submit


Easy

00:48:468 (3) shortning this slider would fit the vocals better

00:53:847 (1,2) you should avoid using stacks on Easy, because beginners will be confused to click

01:07:916 (1,2,3) You can change this pattern like this: http://puu.sh/NqCQ

01:14:950 (3) Nazi~ Move wave point of the slider to x 24 y 148

01:17:019 (4) Move the wave point to x 228 y 272


Normal

The video isn't working - go in Design, insert background and put in new

00:16:606 (1,2) I see you follow the vocals, so I recommend you to change it like this: http://puu.sh/NqJQ

01:21:157 (1) give the head a finish?


Hard

01:16:812 (5,6) I think removing those two might be better because I can't here enough sound for them in the music


Very nice done map and funny hard :) :)

Good luck on ranking ;)
Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako

Konei wrote:

Hah, is there a way this song can get boring? ;D :)

M4M for your Queue =w=~

Please notice I will point everything out that I notice. You should see:

red= unranable issue

blue= very recommend you to change this

purple= I wanted to point it out, but I'm not sure to change it

black = suggestions


General


Cancel Countdown? Doesn't really fit the song Fixed

Cancel letterboxes during breaks, because you use a video! Fixed

You don't use a SB, so you should delete the osb. file in your folder and full submit Fixed


Normal

The video isn't working - go in Design, insert background and put in new Fixed, i think

00:16:606 (1,2) I see you follow the vocals, so I recommend you to change it like this: http://puu.sh/NqJQ Fixed

01:21:157 (1) give the head a finish? fixed


Hard

01:16:812 (5,6) I think removing those two might be better because I can't here enough sound for them in the music (5) - I'm following vocal/(6) - Just to make this more harder.


Very nice done map and funny hard :) :) Oh thanks!

Good luck on ranking ;)
Stefan
I will see if I gonna mod this.
Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako

Stefan wrote:

I will see if I gonna mod this.
Okay :D
suzutsukikanade

pieguy1372 wrote:

SK's Easy:

00:47:640 (2) - perhaps add clap from start and remove it from end? it might sound better if you start the clap pattern here :? Added clap in start and finish in the end
01:09:571 (3) - remove finish? since you didn't put one at the end of 00:54:675 (1) - Now added finish

Arnold0 wrote:

[SK's Easy]
00:08:743 - Add note No
00:15:364 - Add note No
01:24:054 - Add a slider which end at 01:24:261 - Ok

Konei wrote:

Easy

00:48:468 (3) shortning this slider would fit the vocals better No

00:53:847 (1,2) you should avoid using stacks on Easy, because beginners will be confused to click I think is fine because i didn't used much stacks here.

01:07:916 (1,2,3) You can change this pattern like this: http://puu.sh/NqCQ No changes

01:14:950 (3) Nazi~ Move wave point of the slider to x 24 y 148 Fixed

01:17:019 (4) Move the wave point to x 228 y 272 Fixed
http://puu.sh/Nwcn
Scorpiour
Hi there~~M4M

[General]
  1. Audio Lead-in is unnecessary, please remove it.
  2. 00:54:675 - i think it's better to set preview time to here
[Easy]
  1. 00:17:847 (2) - maybe a note here is enough
  2. 00:37:088 - no note here is weird because u chooose to follow vocal at 00:36:675 - .maybe u can move 00:37:295 (2) - to here and extend 1/2 length.
  3. 01:14:123 (2) - i'd like to use two notes here because of the stress at 01:14:537 - , a slider end is not suitable.
  4. 01:24:054 - uncomfortable blank
Generally..i don't like use slider end to start a downbeat like 00:09:985 - maybe u can pay more attention about that :>

[Normal]
  1. 00:18:261 - i suppose it's better to start spinner here and add a repeat to 00:17:433 (2) -
  2. 00:55:502 (3,4) - maybe the beat here could be improved? try this one~
[Hard]
  1. 00:09:571 (5,6) - i'd like to move them a tick prev to make a triplet with 00:09:364 (4) - and add a whistle to 00:09:364 (4) - ?
  2. 00:17:847 (4,5,6) - still triplet issue...i can't agree with the triplet position here.. i would like to move them to next red tick.
  3. 00:38:950 (2,3) - here should be two 1/2 beats...leave a slider end at blue tick is weird..
  4. 01:11:640 - from here to 01:12:054 - maybe u can put a stream~
  5. 01:23:640 (5,6) - this spacing is not good....
that's all~~and good luck with rank :)
Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako

Scorpiour wrote:

[General]
  1. Audio Lead-in is unnecessary, please remove it. Okay
  2. 00:54:675 - i think it's better to set preview time to here Okay
[Normal]
  1. 00:18:261 - i suppose it's better to start spinner here and add a repeat to 00:17:433 (2) - Fixed
  2. 00:55:502 (3,4) - maybe the beat here could be improved? try this one~ Fixed
[Hard]
  1. 00:09:571 (5,6) - i'd like to move them a tick prev to make a triplet with 00:09:364 (4) - and add a whistle to 00:09:364 (4) - ? Ok
  2. 00:17:847 (4,5,6) - still triplet issue...i can't agree with the triplet position here.. i would like to move them to next red tick. Fixed i think
  3. 00:38:950 (2,3) - here should be two 1/2 beats...leave a slider end at blue tick is weird..Have a idea to fix this, ok.
  4. 01:11:640 - from here to 01:12:054 - maybe u can put a stream~ Nice idea, fits with the music, but want to keep this for now.
  5. 01:23:640 (5,6) - this spacing is not good... EEEH? I think this anti-jump would look good here...but ok ok fixed spacing here.
that's all~~and good luck with rank :)
meiikyuu

hello ^^

SK's Easy
  1. 00:10:812 (3) - NC
  2. 00:18:261 (1) - extend the spinner to 00:19:916 - and add a finish sound to it
  3. 00:46:399 (1) - add finish at the beginning
nice

Mitsu's Normal
  1. 00:42:468 (5) - instead of this, maybe u can just add a single note at 00:42:675 - . but either way works
  2. 00:49:709 (1) - add finish at beginning?
  3. 01:05:433 (2) - one grid up
  4. 01:23:640 (4) - move last point one grid up
no big problems here~

Hard
  1. 00:10:399 (2,3) - unstack maybe?
  2. 00:26:537 (1) - woah , uneven slider xD i fixed it for u if you want:
    256,192,26537,6,0,B|192:248|88:192,1,170,4|8
  3. 00:27:364 (3,4) - stack with 00:26:537 (1) - more perfectly
  4. 00:39:261 (3,4) - unstack? some ppl might trip at this spot, idk xD
  5. 00:53:019 (1) - consider adding a finish
good luck! <3
DakeDekaane
Hi, mod time~ :3

I love the song, it was the 1st song I played in osu! (apart from tutorial), so, at least, you have a star from me, but it doesn't mean it is ready, I'm here to mod and destroy your map >:D

I was kidding, let's take this and put it on ranked. The next are suggestions, except if I underline some words

[SK's Easy]

00:12:054 (5) - In my opinion, this sounds better if you move to 00:12:468 - obviously deleting the reverse x3
00:17:847 (2) - 1/2 slider sounds weird to me, change this for a circle, or begin the slider here, or you could try this
or change the 1/2 repeat slider for a 1/1 single slider
00:31:295 (2) - This would be a trap for beginners, you could move it to 00:31:709 - , finishing in 00:31:916 -
00:36:468 - What about trying this?


I think that's all of my part, added to meiikyuu mod.

[Mitsu's Normal]

Delete 01:12:468 (3) - and move 01:11:847 (2) - to 01:12:054 -

[Hard]

I recommend HP drain 6.

That's all my mod, and if you want, I'd like to make a guest diff, if you want of course. (not Insane x3)
suzutsukikanade

meiikyuu wrote:

SK's Easy
  1. 00:10:812 (3) - NC Fine
  2. 00:18:261 (1) - extend the spinner to 00:19:916 - and add a finish sound to it Nice, fixed.
  3. 00:46:399 (1) - add finish at the beginning Nice
nice

DakeDekaane wrote:

[SK's Easy]

00:12:054 (5) - In my opinion, this sounds better if you move to 00:12:468 - obviously deleting the reverse x3 No, I'm trying to follow the instrumental here...
00:17:847 (2) - 1/2 slider sounds weird to me, change this for a circle, or begin the slider here, or you could try this
or change the 1/2 repeat slider for a 1/1 single slider Just added a circle
00:31:295 (2) - This would be a trap for beginners, you could move it to 00:31:709 - , finishing in 00:31:916 - I think this is fine for a easy.
00:36:468 - What about trying this? My rhythm is better.


I think that's all of my part, added to meiikyuu mod.
Fixed some, here baka

http://puu.sh/PaDY
Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako

meiikyuu wrote:


hello ^^ Hi Hi! :D



Mitsu's Normal
  1. 00:42:468 (5) - instead of this, maybe u can just add a single note at 00:42:675 - . but either way works No
  2. 00:49:709 (1) - add finish at beginning? Ok
  3. 01:05:433 (2) - one grid up OK
  4. 01:23:640 (4) - move last point one grid up Ok


    • no big problems here~

      Hard
    1. 00:10:399 (2,3) - unstack maybe? Hm...this works too, ok fixed.
    2. 00:26:537 (1) - woah , uneven slider xD i fixed it for u if you want: Ok fixed
      256,192,26537,6,0,B|192:248|88:192,1,170,4|8
    3. 00:27:364 (3,4) - stack with 00:26:537 (1) - more perfectly Fixed i think...
    4. 00:39:261 (3,4) - unstack? some ppl might trip at this spot, idk xD Ok fixed
    5. 00:53:019 (1) - consider adding a finish No
good luck! <3 Thanks <3

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi, mod time~ :3

I love the song, it was the 1st song I played in osu! (apart from tutorial), so, at least, you have a star from me, but it doesn't mean it is ready, I'm here to mod and destroy your map >:D

I was kidding, let's take this and put it on ranked. Destroy my map and you will see the hell :P Jodan yo~The next are suggestions, except if I underline some words

[Mitsu's Normal]

Delete 01:12:468 (3) - and move 01:11:847 (2) - to 01:12:054 - Okay

[Hard]

I recommend HP drain 6. Since this is the highest diff of the map, will keep HP 7 for now

That's all my mod, and if you want, I'd like to make a guest diff, if you want of course. (not Insane x3) Sorry but i'm not accepting guest diffs more...but thanks fo mod!
kurohana
Thank you for request \(^^)/

SK's Easy

01:00:468 (1) - clap at the end

Mitsu's Normal

00:57:157 (6) - clap at the end

Nice song, good luck ^^
Leorda
Hi there~


[SK's Easy]
00:41:019 (2) - Add clap at tail slider
00:42:675 (4) - Use custom clap please


[Mitsu's Normal]
* AR +1?

00:16:606 (1,2) - These pattern seems not beginner-friendly. Remove 1 repeating slider for each slider
00:39:778 (1) - Stack under slider makes confuse for beginners
00:57:157 (6) - Add clap at end slider?
01:05:433 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern are not beginner-friendly, IMO


[Hard]
00:19:502 (1) - Add clap
00:31:088 (3) - ^
01:19:916 (8) - Add clap at head slider


Be happy, ok?
Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako

Leorda wrote:

Hi there~ Hi~

[Mitsu's Normal]
* AR +1? Fixed

00:16:606 (1,2) - These pattern seems not beginner-friendly. Remove 1 repeating slider for each slider Fixed
00:39:778 (1) - Stack under slider makes confuse for beginners Fixed
00:57:157 (6) - Add clap at end slider? Fixed in previous mod
01:05:433 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern are not beginner-friendly, IMO Rearranged pattern


[Hard]
00:19:502 (1) - Add clap Fixed
00:31:088 (3) - ^ Fixed
01:19:916 (8) - Add clap at head slider Fixed


Be happy, ok? I'm always happy :D

kurohana wrote:

Thank you for request \(^^)/

Mitsu's Normal

00:57:157 (6) - clap at the end Fixed

Nice song, good luck ^^ Thanks
]

Thanks for mod all! :)
HanzeR
Happy happy girl~

I cant find much, your map is already great :)

[Hard]
00:26:537 (1) - Move the endpoint to x88 y188 to stack better with 00:25:192 (2) - . Then you will need to reposition the rest of the combo a bit

[Normal]
00:41:433 (4) - This slider looks ugly compared to all your other pretty ones, :o maybe try like this? http://puu.sh/R0ye

[Easy]
01:00:468 - remove nc, start here 01:01:295 instead maybe?

Really well done, good luck!!
Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako

HanzeR wrote:

Happy happy girl~

I cant find much, your map is already great :) Oh thanks :D

[Hard]
00:26:537 (1) - Move the endpoint to x88 y188 to stack better with 00:25:192 (2) - . Then you will need to reposition the rest of the combo a bit Okay

[Normal]
00:41:433 (4) - This slider looks ugly compared to all your other pretty ones, :o maybe try like this? http://puu.sh/R0ye Kay
Thanks for the mod :)
Kiiwa
Hi~

Hard
00:25:502 (3,4) - Spacing should be different from 00:24:881 (1,2) - Change spacing or add new combo to show this difference
00:37:709 (1) - Move this note so it makes same pattern as these two 00:36:468 (1,2,1,2) -
00:47:226 (2) - Place in center of X line
00:49:502 (8) - New combo 00:49:916 (1) - Remove new combo
00:54:054 (3) - These hitsounds should be the same as 00:42:468 (2,3) - and 01:07:088 (1,2) - change it please~
01:24:054 (6) - New combo

Other two diffs are fine~
Good luck ^~^
jossieP
http://puu.sh/V760

hope you like it ><
I failed on getting a higher star rating than your hard, it doesnt matter anyways
I have a little disagree on offset, video quality and kiai time o3o lets discuss on irc
:3~
Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako

Kiiwa wrote:

Hi~

Hard
00:25:502 (3,4) - Spacing should be different from 00:24:881 (1,2) - Change spacing or add new combo to show this difference Add NC...
00:37:709 (1) - Move this note so it makes same pattern as these two 00:36:468 (1,2,1,2) - I think is fine
00:47:226 (2) - Place in center of X line Fixed
00:49:502 (8) - New combo 00:49:916 (1) - Remove new combo Ok
00:54:054 (3) - These hitsounds should be the same as 00:42:468 (2,3) - and 01:07:088 (1,2) - change it please~ No
01:24:054 (6) - New combo Kay~

Other two diffs are fine~
Good luck ^~^
Thanks for mod~

ikari_kyon wrote:

http://puu.sh/V760

hope you like it ><
I failed on getting a higher star rating than your hard, it doesnt matter anyways
I have a little disagree on offset, video quality and kiai time o3o lets discuss on irc
:3~
Thanks for you diff~
added
jossieP
forgot to suscribe topic and add star /.\

edit: auto-updates /o/ http://puu.sh/W3eW
suzutsukikanade

kurohana wrote:

SK's Easy

01:00:468 (1) - clap at the end Kay

Leorda wrote:

[SK's Easy]
00:41:019 (2) - Add clap at tail slider Yeah
00:42:675 (4) - Use custom clap please No, fits with song

HanzeR wrote:

[Easy]
01:00:468 - remove nc, start here 01:01:295 instead maybe? Fine

http://puu.sh/W3Gf
sunshy_old
Good afternoon :)

For M4M~
Sry for my poor English~
Feel free to ignore anything you dislike.

[i_k's Insane]

`00:48:675 (1,2,3,4) - It makes me confused.

Nice map.

[Hard]

00:11:226 (4) - The spacing... maybe ↓ is better
00:46:399 (1,2,3) - I recommend to use 1/2 to match the strong rhythm. 1/1 silder feels dull....

Really good map! I got 99.6%ACC when I first time play it.

[Mitsu's Normal]

Open AIMOD and fix the two spacing warnings.
00:16:606 (1) - I think maybe ↓ is better
00:37:088 (2) - try this to match the rhyrhm? Don't forget to add clap.
00:46:399 (1) - maybe putting three notes is better..
01:21:157 (1,2,3) - ↓

[Easy]
Seems fine :3

Good luck with RANK~ :)
Tsukasa
Yay more happy girl mapsets~ I'd have 5 ranked TV sizes if this ever got ranked

I love you sawa-chan for making another set <3

And i'd love to annoy someone with another mapset

EDIT: I'd love to check this out but i'd be quite busy for a while due to a certain exam
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
hi~ for mod4mod ~


I_k's Insane

  1. 00:00:054 (1,2) - i think (1) move left for 4 grids, (2) right 4 grids looks better.
  2. 00:13:295 (1,2,3) - 3/4 sliders better maybe :p
  3. 00:15:778 (5) - i think only 2 circles here fits better to the vocal
  4. 00:16:606 (1) - rotate 7 degrees will look better ^^ 00:17:019 (2) ctrl+h
  5. 00:22:709 (3) - move right 1grid >_>
  6. 00:23:019 (1) - put here.? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405205
  7. 00:24:881 (2,3,4,5) - more spacing lol
  8. 00:53:640 (4) - i think http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405210 >_>
  9. 00:57:364 (4) - put here.? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405211
  10. i like this diff, different feeling from the ranked other happy girls wwwww
Hard

  1. 00:10:606 (3) - add reverse? spacing to (4) is too confusing
  2. 00:25:502 (1,2) - i think, as blue (1,2) is 3/4, pink (1,2) is 1/2 but same distance, it is a bit awkward to play, make them different will be better~
  3. 00:38:950 (2) - this slider feels like stacked a note at 00:39:261, so if you stack one 00:39:571 (4) i think players will misclick and miss ww better stack that on blue slider's head http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405213
  4. 01:08:123 (1) - bettter blanket http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405216
  5. 01:21:157 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - don't make big circle ^^b too hard for a Hard diff
Mitsu's Normal

  1. 00:25:709 (2,1) - blanket o.o
  2. 00:56:743 (5) - spacing.?
  3. 01:12:881 (3) - ^
  4. 01:19:295 (3) - as 01:18:468 skipped a sound too, starting this at 01:19:502 should be better for beginners to follow the rhythm.
SK's Easy

  1. 00:10:812 (1,2) - better some curve here ww
Good luck~
jossieP

Sunshine wrote:

[i_k's Insane]

`00:48:675 (1,2,3,4) - It makes me confused. any suggest :3?

Nice map. thanks ><

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

I_k's Insane

  1. 00:00:054 (1,2) - i think (1) move left for 4 grids, (2) right 4 grids looks better. ahm jump becomes so long, if its pointed again will change the shape
  2. 00:13:295 (1,2,3) - 3/4 sliders better maybe :p pattern sounds good on 1/2 ticks, plus there is a cymbal sound on red ticks, also I like this part like this <3
  3. 00:15:778 (5) - i think only 2 circles here fits better to the vocal sounds so suddenly empty, also the vocal change is on white tick
  4. 00:16:606 (1) - rotate 7 degrees will look better ^^ 00:17:019 (2) ctrl+h cant see a significative difference but yeah
  5. 00:22:709 (3) - move right 1grid >_> <v< ok
  6. 00:23:019 (1) - put here.? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405205 hmm dunno, overlap with others looks soft for me and it is stacked on 00:24:364 (6) -
  7. 00:24:881 (2,3,4,5) - more spacing lol is on x1.0 spacing /o/ any suggest?
  8. 00:53:640 (4) - i think http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405210 >_> already changed the shape of this boys, sawa-chan havent updated yet /o/ hey what is that slider ball xD???
  9. 00:57:364 (4) - put here.? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405211 eyup, tried some stuff about this slider but long space blanket looks nice, and dat slider ball >v>
  10. i like this diff, different feeling from the ranked other happy girls wwwww yeaaaahh bro, that is what I always try to make ;3!!
>>> to sawa-chan <3~ <<<
Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako

Sunshine wrote:

[Hard]

00:11:226 (4) - The spacing... maybe ↓ is better No, spacings seems fine so will keep this for now.
00:46:399 (1,2,3) - I recommend to use 1/2 to match the strong rhythm. 1/1 silder feels dull... No, i think 1/2 rhythm don't fit with the song.

Really good map! I got 99.6%ACC when I first time play it. Ohh thanks!

[Mitsu's Normal]

Open AIMOD and fix the two spacing warnings.
00:16:606 (1) - I think maybe ↓ is better Made something similar.
00:37:088 (2) - try this to match the rhyrhm? Don't forget to add clap. No, thinks this slider is fine.
00:46:399 (1) - maybe putting three notes is better.. No
01:21:157 (1,2,3) - ↓ Made something similar.

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Hard

  1. 00:10:606 (3) - add reverse? spacing to (4) is too confusing Just changed (4) place.
  2. 00:25:502 (1,2) - i think, as blue (1,2) is 3/4, pink (1,2) is 1/2 but same distance, it is a bit awkward to play, make them different will be better~ I think this is fine
  3. 00:38:950 (2) - this slider feels like stacked a note at 00:39:261, so if you stack one 00:39:571 (4) i think players will misclick and miss ww better stack that on blue slider's head http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405213 Fixed
  4. 01:08:123 (1) - bettter blanket http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405216 Okay
  5. 01:21:157 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - don't make big circle ^^b too hard for a Hard diff This is intentional
Mitsu's Normal

  1. 00:25:709 (2,1) - blanket o.o Fixed
  2. 00:56:743 (5) - spacing.? Fixed
  3. 01:12:881 (3) - ^ Fixed
  4. 01:19:295 (3) - as 01:18:468 skipped a sound too, starting this at 01:19:502 should be better for beginners to follow the rhythm. Fixed

Tsukasa wrote:

Yay more happy girl mapsets~ I'd have 5 ranked TV sizes if this ever got ranked

I love you sawa-chan for making another set <3

And i'd love to annoy someone with another mapset

EDIT: I'd love to check this out but i'd be quite busy for a while due to a certain exam
>ww< <333

Is okay, i hope you can check this out one day :D
TheVileOne
SK's Easy

Only cosmetic issues to point out.

00:25:709 (2,1) - Transition looks kind of bad.
00:33:157 (1,3) - These sliders aren't perfectly symmetrical. The center point is directly behind the middle slider tick.
00:41:019 (2,3,4,1) - You should clean up this corner by slanting the corner out. http://puu.sh/WR4r
00:54:675 (1) - Make symmetrical by making the distance between points 1 and 2 the same as the distance of 3 and 4. I'll help you out on this slider. The middle point needs to be at x 256, y 64. Make similar sliders/sliders you copied from the same too.
00:58:812 (4) - Highly recommend you flip vertically and fix spacing. It looks better and goes nicely into the next slider.
01:02:537 (3) - Nazi- Move center point under middle slider tick?
01:03:778 (4) - This does not fit the shape of the previous slider. You should try something like this. http://puu.sh/WReF Fixing spacing shouldn't be that much of an issue afterwards.

Mitsu's Normal

Solid difficulty. not much wrong.

00:09:157 (4) - Doesn't look good next to 00:09:985 (1) - . I highly suggest you make these sliders parallel.
00:17:226 (2) - Repeat is awfully close to that hitburst. I don't suggest having it so close.
00:26:950 (1,2,3) - Nazi- Exactly 1.2?
00:29:640 - Sounds empty without a note.
00:42:468 (5) - Should follow the end of previous slider better and be closer to parallel with the next slider. http://puu.sh/WRs3
00:48:675 (4) - I suggest you place this above the end of 3 instead of below it. It looks better that way. http://puu.sh/WRuq
01:04:606 (1,2) - The misalignment sort of bothers me. But it would involve you to move a lot of your patterns down to fix. I'm not sure if it's worth it.
01:17:847 (1) - Doesn't look that good so close to the curve of the previous slider. I suggest moving x 344 y 184
01:19:502 (3,4,5,1) - This part of the combo is kind of formless and doesn't look good. You should try a pattern. This is a suitable pattern IMO. http://puu.sh/WRDu
01:22:812 (4) - This would be better if it was moved down some. It would be a more natural flowing angle off of 3. If you didn't understand what you meant, here is a SS http://puu.sh/WRGr

Hard

I liked it. You should change everything I found though.

00:06:674 (1) - Move left 1 unit to fix spacing?
00:24:881 (1,2,1,2) - I don't agree with spacing 3/4th and 1/2th the same even if you change combo. The spacing of that 1/2th is unexpected when you first try it and really too fast in general. Just make all one combo and stack the 1/2th part. It plays better.
00:54:675 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is a rather boring way to start a kiai. I recommend you remap and use less repetition.

i_k's Insane

That one stream killed my ability to play it, and some of the spacing sequences played in an unusual way. Gaps in the beat are generally treated like jump sequences in normal insanes but in this one there's a lot of just regular snapped sequences, which tones down the speed. Some players might want a more intense pace, but there's nothing technically wrong with how you spaced things.

00:05:847 (1,2,3,4,1) - Small thing, but these spacings differ slightly. You should make this pattern perfect.
00:06:468 (4,1) - snap change plays weird. I think this would be better. http://puu.sh/WS3S
00:15:157 (1,2,3,4) - Make both spacings 1.0?
00:16:606 (1) - Weirdly sticks out of the end of the stream IMO.
00:18:675 (2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Awesome pattern
00:25:192 (3) - Slider could be better.
00:38:743 (1,2,3) - Stacking improperly. You can fix by moving 00:39:157 (2,3) - to x 332 y 268 Check snap afterwards.
00:40:192 (1,2,3) - Not stacking properly. Spacing isn't exactly 0.00. You will need to straighten the last two move points of the slider to be able to snap notes perfectly to 0.00.
00:53:640 (4) - This would be better if it were moved to x 256 y 144.


Good maps.
jossieP

TheVileOne wrote:

i_k's Insane

That one stream killed my ability to play it, and some of the spacing sequences played in an unusual way. Gaps in the beat are generally treated like jump sequences in normal insanes but in this one there's a lot of just regular snapped sequences, which tones down the speed. Some players might want a more intense pace, but there's nothing technically wrong with how you spaced things. cant get at all this, sorry bad engrish, you mean that I need more jumps :s?

00:05:847 (1,2,3,4,1) - Small thing, but these spacings differ slightly. You should make this pattern perfect. yeah, minor thing, anyways spaced to x1,50
00:06:468 (4,1) - snap change plays weird. I think this would be better. http://puu.sh/WS3S I think that a flow breaking goes better since the vocals starts here, but will consider if its pointed again
00:15:157 (1,2,3,4) - Make both spacings 1.0? nice nazi catch
00:16:606 (1) - Weirdly sticks out of the end of the stream IMO. hmm? sorry cant get x.x
00:18:675 (2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Awesome pattern thanks~
00:25:192 (3) - Slider could be better. any suggest?~
00:38:743 (1,2,3) - Stacking improperly. You can fix by moving 00:39:157 (2,3) - to x 332 y 268 Check snap afterwards. this is actually a bug of our dear posu editor, like the pointment as down, it get auto-moved or something, I always check this such of things and it makes like this, anyways auto-stack works so I though there is not major problem here, if it still pointed will consider change the pattern
00:40:192 (1,2,3) - Not stacking properly. Spacing isn't exactly 0.00. You will need to straighten the last two move points of the slider to be able to snap notes perfectly to 0.00. eyup~ bug
00:53:640 (4) - This would be better if it were moved to x 256 y 144. k, dunno why but k


Good maps.
>> happy update~ <<
suzutsukikanade

TheVileOne wrote:

SK's Easy

Only cosmetic issues to point out.

00:25:709 (2,1) - Transition looks kind of bad. Changed Pattern here.
00:33:157 (1,3) - These sliders aren't perfectly symmetrical. The center point is directly behind the middle slider tick. Fixed, i think...I do not know if they were perfectly symmetrical. But I tried my best to make them perfect.
00:41:019 (2,3,4,1) - You should clean up this corner by slanting the corner out. http://puu.sh/WR4r I think fixed.
00:54:675 (1) - Make symmetrical by making the distance between points 1 and 2 the same as the distance of 3 and 4. I'll help you out on this slider. The middle point needs to be at x 256, y 64. Make similar sliders/sliders you copied from the same too. Ok, thanks for help :D
00:58:812 (4) - Highly recommend you flip vertically and fix spacing. It looks better and goes nicely into the next slider. You're right, fixed!
01:02:537 (3) - Nazi- Move center point under middle slider tick? Okay
01:03:778 (4) - This does not fit the shape of the previous slider. You should try something like this. http://puu.sh/WReF Fixing spacing shouldn't be that much of an issue afterwards. Tried to make slider like this, isn't like the photo, but tried.
http://puu.sh/XyM7
Deni
From ★ ~ dubbadeni ' s Beginnner Modding Queue ~ ★
I'm a beginner, don't expect too much! ;)
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Easy

00:37:295 (2) - This slider doesnt fit to the beat or to her voice.
You can try this:
  • 1. Delete 00:37:295 (2) -
    2. Copy this slider 00:36:468 (1) - and then Insert it here 00:37:088
    3. Make a slider from 00:37:709 to 00:38:537
    4. After that It shoud look like this:
00:53:847 (1) - This circle is too close after that spinner before for Easy. (AiMod)
00:53:847 (1,2) - No Stacks in Easy please! That's too hard for beginner.

Normal

00:09:985 (1) - Why did you use 3 points and not only 2?
suzutsukikanade

dubbadeni wrote:

From ★ ~ dubbadeni ' s Beginnner Modding Queue ~ ★
I'm a beginner, don't expect too much! ;)
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Easy

00:37:295 (2) - This slider doesnt fit to the beat or to her voice. Yeah this slider fits with beat and vocals, just listen the music carefully.
You can try this:
  • 1. Delete 00:37:295 (2) -
    2. Copy this slider 00:36:468 (1) - and then Insert it here 00:37:088
    3. Make a slider from 00:37:709 to 00:38:537
    4. After that It shoud look like this:
00:53:847 (1) - This circle is too close after that spinner before for Easy. (AiMod) No, i think is fine.
00:53:847 (1,2) - No Stacks in Easy please! That's too hard for beginner. Didn't used much stacks, is fine that way.
Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako

TheVileOne wrote:

Mitsu's Normal

Solid difficulty. not much wrong.

00:09:157 (4) - Doesn't look good next to 00:09:985 (1) - . I highly suggest you make these sliders parallel. Fixed
00:17:226 (2) - Repeat is awfully close to that hitburst. I don't suggest having it so close. Okay
00:26:950 (1,2,3) - Nazi- Exactly 1.2? Okay
00:29:640 - Sounds empty without a note. I don't think it.
00:42:468 (5) - Should follow the end of previous slider better and be closer to parallel with the next slider. http://puu.sh/WRs3 Ok
00:48:675 (4) - I suggest you place this above the end of 3 instead of below it. It looks better that way. http://puu.sh/WRuq Okay
01:04:606 (1,2) - The misalignment sort of bothers me. But it would involve you to move a lot of your patterns down to fix. I'm not sure if it's worth it. ? Don't understand this sorry for my poor english
01:17:847 (1) - Doesn't look that good so close to the curve of the previous slider. I suggest moving x 344 y 184 Okay
01:19:502 (3,4,5,1) - This part of the combo is kind of formless and doesn't look good. You should try a pattern. This is a suitable pattern IMO. http://puu.sh/WRDu Ok
01:22:812 (4) - This would be better if it was moved down some. It would be a more natural flowing angle off of 3. If you didn't understand what you meant, here is a SS http://puu.sh/WRGr Ok

Hard

I liked it. You should change everything I found though.

00:06:674 (1) - Move left 1 unit to fix spacing? Ok
00:24:881 (1,2,1,2) - I don't agree with spacing 3/4th and 1/2th the same even if you change combo. The spacing of that 1/2th is unexpected when you first try it and really too fast in general. Just make all one combo and stack the 1/2th part. It plays better. Okay
00:54:675 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is a rather boring way to start a kiai. I recommend you remap and use less repetition. Remapped a bit...
Nichiyouki


Hi, KuronumaSawako

My mod from your request

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. Fine

SK's Easy

  1. 00:53:847 (1,2) - Don't stack.

Mitsu's Normal

  1. 01:05:433 (2,3,4) - Make to this be better.

Hard

  1. 00:09:468 (5) - The rhythm is strange. Please move it to 00:09:675 -.
  2. 00:16:295 - Add a note here?
  3. 00:37:709 (1,2) - Move (1) to like 00:36:468 (1,2) and 00:37:088 (1,2).
  4. 01:17:847 (2,3) - Spacing is closer than (7,1) and (4,5). Move (1,2) to x:488 y:184.

i_k's Insane

  1. I don't find the problem.

That's all that I can find them.

Good luck~
suzutsukikanade
No fix in my diff because i didn't used much stacks so i think is fine...
cmn_891127
Hi, KuronumaSawako~~

[i_k's Insane]
Tick Rate 2
00:22:606 (2,3,4) - (2) x:200 y:340, (2) x:256 y:348, (4) Ctrl+H

[Hard]
00:37:088 (1,2) - (1) x:444 y:48, move (2) with (1)
01:02:537 (5,6) - Ctrl+R

[Mitsu's Normal]
01:22:399 (3) - tail x:200 y:200

[SK's Easy]
01:03:778 (4) - x:376 y:136

Nice song and nice mapset~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Good luck!!!
R e v i v e
From my modding queue,,,

your map i think all diff it fine :)


Easy

Fine for me~

Normal

00:48:675 (4) - Spacing then add clap end of slider.

Hard

00:49:088 (6) - Add clap.

Insane

01:03:571 (4) - 1 grid left ?

And sorry about my noob mod skill lol
Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako

nich95 wrote:

Mitsu's Normal

  1. 01:05:433 (2,3,4) - Make to this be better. No, rhythm here seems fine.

Hard

  1. 00:09:468 (5) - The rhythm is strange. Please move it to 00:09:675 -. Fixed
  2. 00:16:295 - Add a note here? Fixed
  3. 00:37:709 (1,2) - Move (1) to like 00:36:468 (1,2) and 00:37:088 (1,2). Okay
  4. 01:17:847 (2,3) - Spacing is closer than (7,1) and (4,5). Move (1,2) to x:488 y:184. Okay


Good luck~ Thanks for mod

cmn_891127 wrote:

[Hard]
00:37:088 (1,2) - (1) x:444 y:48, move (2) with (1) Okay
01:02:537 (5,6) - Ctrl+R No, seems strange for me.

[Mitsu's Normal]
01:22:399 (3) - tail x:200 y:200 Okay

Nice song and nice mapset~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Thanks!
Good luck!!! Thanks for mod and star~

R e v i v e wrote:

Normal

00:48:675 (4) - Spacing then add clap end of slider. Fixed only clap in slider end, spacing is ok.

Hard

00:49:088 (6) - Add clap. Ok

And sorry about my noob mod skill lol rs i don't mind thanks for mod
Lally


[Hard]
01:12:881 (5) ~ new combo

[i_k's Insane]
01:19:502 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) ~ just fix position better

sorry for noob mod ;W;
Aurele
Hi, here's my mod from my one hour modding queue. Really sorry for the realy big delay.

Red/Bold = Must be fixed;
Bold = Something that should be fixed.

[Easy]
Pretty well constructed.
00:06:674 (1) - This slider could be improved by moving the last dot one grid down (So both start and ending will be aligned) and also, move the second dot, one grid down.
00:11:640 (2) - This circle has some problems with hitsounds. It's totally not consistent. Before, you added whistles to every big white line and now you're adding them to the second and fourth white line. So.. all I can say here is to add a whistle to this circle.
00:50:950 (2) - This circle can be easily be moved somewhere else. Since the previous slider is curved, the circle sould be somewhere around x:44 y:184.
00:53:847 (1,2) - Can you unstack these please? In fact, it's prefered to not stack circles/sliders on an easy difficulty. Beginner players can be confused.

[Normal]
I'm seeying nothing wrong here. It's pretty simple and clean.
01:14:123 (4,1) - These objects shouldn't be in the same y:axis. Maybe doing something like this would be better? If course, if you do this change, you must change the spacing for the other slider.

[Hard]
I really like this difficulty. Keep up the good work.
HP +1
00:09:985 (1) - I really think this slider shouldn't be stacked with the triplets before.. It may be confusing but not really. But still, getting them unstacked will be nice.
00:45:778 and 00:45:985 (6) - These two notes should have a normal clap like these 00:42:468 (2,3) - .
01:12:881 (5) - I agree with Lally. You should add a new combo here since the combo is really long and there's also some changes in the song.
01:18:675 (5) - I swear this note is not aligned with these circles 01:17:847 (1,2,3,4) - . So move this slider to x:360 y:344 to get them more aligned that it is right now.

[Insane]
IT'S IKARIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!1 :D
I had alot of problem with this difficulty because of the circle size. Also, this is really insane!!1

Every difficulty needs at least one spinner to make the difference between scores.
I wonder why you have mapped the beginning before 00:06:674. To make every difficulty consistent, delete everything after 00:06:674.

01:20:743 (7,8) - For a better flow, these circles should be reversed.
Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako

Lally wrote:



[Hard]
01:12:881 (5) ~ new combo No problem :D


sorry for noob mod ;W; Don't mind :D

Gabe wrote:

Hi, here's my mod from my one hour modding queue. Really sorry for the realy big delay. No problem :D

Red/Bold = Must be fixed;
Bold = Something that should be fixed.

[Easy]
Pretty well constructed.
00:06:674 (1) - This slider could be improved by moving the last dot one grid down (So both start and ending will be aligned) and also, move the second dot, one grid down. Ok
00:11:640 (2) - This circle has some problems with hitsounds. It's totally not consistent. Before, you added whistles to every big white line and now you're adding them to the second and fourth white line. So.. all I can say here is to add a whistle to this circle. Ok
00:50:950 (2) - This circle can be easily be moved somewhere else. Since the previous slider is curved, the circle sould be somewhere around x:44 y:184. Ok
00:53:847 (1,2) - Can you unstack these please? In fact, it's prefered to not stack circles/sliders on an easy difficulty. Beginner players can be confused. She don't want to unstack them so will keep this because she already said why she don't want to unstack them. Will talk to her in next so will talk to her about this stack

[Normal]
I'm seeying nothing wrong here. It's pretty simple and clean.
01:14:123 (4,1) - These objects shouldn't be in the same y:axis. Maybe doing something like this would be better? If course, if you do this change, you must change the spacing for the other slider. Ok

[Hard]
I really like this difficulty. Keep up the good work. Arigato *o*
HP +1
00:09:985 (1) - I really think this slider shouldn't be stacked with the triplets before.. It may be confusing but not really. But still, getting them unstacked will be nice. Stacked them intentionally.
00:45:778 and 00:45:985 (6) - These two notes should have a normal clap like these 00:42:468 (2,3) - . Ok
01:12:881 (5) - I agree with Lally. You should add a new combo here since the combo is really long and there's also some changes in the song. Fixed in previous mod
01:18:675 (5) - I swear this note is not aligned with these circles 01:17:847 (1,2,3,4) - . So move this slider to x:360 y:344 to get them more aligned that it is right now. Ok
Shizuroh
Hello~ Modding taim~

General
Maybe its a good idea to have a clap sound of S:C1 as slidertick for S:C2 so you can make that sound on sliderticks for example: 00:41:847 - at normal

Easy
00:54:675 (1,2) - maybe => (notice the claps too btw)

Normal
00:14:950 (4) - (nazi) Make it more curved please :3
00:55:502 (3) - make this slider 2 x 1/1 long :c and remove the circle at 00:56:330 (4) -
01:03:571 (3) - clap? :3
01:16:812 (3) - ^

Hard
00:09:571 (5,6,7,1) - Please don't stack a slider beneath a triplet, it doesn't play well
00:25:502 (1) - why new combo here?

Good luck with your map~ and I hope its going to get ranekd soon~
suzutsukikanade

SkyDevil wrote:

Easy
00:54:675 (1,2) - maybe => (notice the claps too btw) Can't understand this... :?
Rhythm change maybe?
Anyway, thanks for mod :)
Shizuroh

suzutsukikanade wrote:

SkyDevil wrote:

Easy
00:54:675 (1,2) - maybe => (notice the claps too btw) Can't understand this... :?
Rhythm change maybe?
Anyway, thanks for mod :)
I was wondering if you could change it to those sliders xD and also put some claps on it :3
Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako

SkyDevil wrote:

Hello~ Modding taim~

General
Maybe its a good idea to have a clap sound of S:C1 as slidertick for S:C2 so you can make that sound on sliderticks for example: 00:41:847 - at normal I really don't like put custom sliderticks in my maps, i just add if my guest wants.

Normal
00:14:950 (4) - (nazi) Make it more curved please :3 Ok
00:55:502 (3) - make this slider 2 x 1/1 long :c and remove the circle at 00:56:330 (4) - Sorry. but i think the current rhythm sounds fine for a normal.
01:03:571 (3) - clap? :3 OK
01:16:812 (3) - ^ Ok

Hard
00:09:571 (5,6,7,1) - Please don't stack a slider beneath a triplet, it doesn't play well Plays good for me and made this intentionally so...
00:25:502 (1) - why new combo here? Oh missed this, fixed

Good luck with your map~ and I hope its going to get ranekd soon~
Thanks for mod! :D
Piscis
Hi M4M!

[SK's Easy]
01:07:916 (1,3) - Overlap?
01:17:019 (4) - Remove finish to slider end.
01:18:261 (1) - ^

[Mitsu's Normal]
00:51:157 (1) - Start 00:51:364 ~ end 00:54:261.
01:09:571 (3) - Add finish to slider start.
01:11:226 (1) - ^

[Hard]
01:02:743 (6) - I think it does not match the song... Suggestion~

Good map!
ririco
Mod4Mod :3


SK's Easy:
  1. 00:06:674 (1) - Add a whistle on the reverse arrow
  2. 00:09:157 (2) - ^ but on the start of the slider
  3. 00:12:054 (3) - since there whistle on the note before it, so remove whistles on the start and end and add whistle on reverse sounds better >.<
  4. 00:13:295 (1) - same as i said here 00:06:674 (1) -
  5. 00:15:778 (2) - remove whistle on the end and add it on the start instead
  6. 00:18:261 (1) - let this spinner end here 00:19:502 - sounds better with the song :3
  7. 00:49:709 (1) - remove this nc seems useless to me and i mean really =3=
  8. 01:13:709 (1,3) - switch the nc then remove the nc here 01:18:261 (1) -
  9. 01:24:054 (4) - why whistle here? it dont follow anything so remove it

Mitsu's Normal:
  1. 00:18:261 (1) - same as i said on easy diff
  2. 00:49:709 (1) - remove this nc seems useless here orz
  3. 01:19:502 (3) - i see red sliderpoint maybe remove it?
That's all i can find here, this normal seems to be normal+ then original normal ><


Hard:
Good diff :3


That's all i can find >< good luck with ranking~
Sonnyc
This is a thrid mod 4 mod post :P

SK's Easy:

00:12:054 (3,1) - 1 Grid up, The distance is a bit close for me, imo
00:17:847 (2) - Put in the inner side of the slider? like (432,105)?
00:27:364 (2) - NC?
00:31:295 (2) - Delete whistle here
01:02:123 (2) - 1 Grid left? different distance here not looks good
01:03:778 (4) - x0.89 in intention?
01:13:709 (1) - Delete Whistle

Mitsu's Normal:

00:42:468 (5) - Since it's heading toward, 1 grid up to make a line with (4)
01:05:847 (2,3) - Make a better line

Hard:

00:14:950 (6) - NC?
00:43:916 (8) - Add Whistle at the start, due to your pattern
00:49:916 (2,3) - Ctrl+G each? Jumping here will not be a bad choice
00:54:054 (3) - Reduce 1/4, and add a Reverse

Good luck~
Fenya
Hi~ M4M~ :3

SK's Easy:
00:31:295 (2) - In the Easy is a bit complex for the newbie player than the notes in the ticks red~
00:36:468 (1) - http://puu.sh/1hAjo ?
00:38:950 (5,1) - Is a Easy~ Put like this: http://puu.sh/1hArB or http://puu.sh/1hAs4 :p
00:53:847 (1,2) - Unstack these notes, not suitable in a Easy
01:03:778 (4) - Spacing

Mitsu's Normal:
Missing work, some parts is so easy in other parts is hard, try fix it
Pls, Fix the spacing o_O
Your distance spacing is x0,8... You should change distance spacing to x1,0~
The big jumps in a normal, not suitable~
00:14:950 (4) - Put like this: http://puu.sh/1hAzC sounds better, imo :p
00:54:675 (1) - Too close with spinner, for the newbie player can be hard
00:55:502 (3) - This slider not have rhythm, pls, fix it :c
01:02:950 (3) - Put like this: http://puu.sh/1hAMG Sounds better, imo

Hard:
Some Jumps pointless
01:13:606 (5) - Note unnecessary
01:16:916 (6) - ^

That's all, sorry for my bad English :c
I hope you serve something, good luck~
Topic Starter
KuronumaSawako

Piscis wrote:

[Mitsu's Normal]
00:51:157 (1) - Start 00:51:364 ~ end 00:54:261. OK
01:09:571 (3) - Add finish to slider start. OK
01:11:226 (1) - ^ ^

[Hard]
01:02:743 (6) - I think it does not match the song... Suggestion~ No

Good map!

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Mitsu's Normal:
  1. 00:18:261 (1) - same as i said on easy diff OK
  2. 00:49:709 (1) - remove this nc seems useless here orz Ok
  3. 01:19:502 (3) - i see red sliderpoint maybe remove it? As this does not imply the format slider so for me no problem.
That's all i can find here, this normal seems to be normal+ then original normal ><

Sonnyc wrote:

This is a thrid mod 4 mod post :P :oops:

Mitsu's Normal:

00:42:468 (5) - Since it's heading toward, 1 grid up to make a line with (4) Ok
01:05:847 (2,3) - Make a better line Ok

Hard:

00:14:950 (6) - NC? Ok
00:43:916 (8) - Add Whistle at the start, due to your pattern Ok
00:49:916 (2,3) - Ctrl+G each? Jumping here will not be a bad choice Ok
00:54:054 (3) - Reduce 1/4, and add a Reverse Since this is following with the song is ok

Good luck~

Fenya wrote:

Hi~ M4M~ :3


Mitsu's Normal:
Missing work, some parts is so easy in other parts is hard, try fix it
Pls, Fix the spacing o_O For me spacing here is ok
Your distance spacing is x0,8... You should change distance spacing to x1,0~ Eh...DS is 1.2 not 0.8 :?
The big jumps in a normal, not suitable~ Don't see jumps here orz
00:14:950 (4) - Put like this: http://puu.sh/1hAzC sounds better, imo :p Ok
00:54:675 (1) - Too close with spinner, for the newbie player can be hard Well seems empty for me without this note...but ok i think you are right.
00:55:502 (3) - This slider not have rhythm, pls, fix it :c "Happy Happy Giiiirl" yes they have rhythm, following vocal for me.
01:02:950 (3) - Put like this: http://puu.sh/1hAMG Sounds better, imo Ok

Hard:
Some Jumps pointless Some jumps are made intentionally.
01:13:606 (5) - Note unnecessary Yes this note is needed here, follow the song.
01:16:916 (6) - ^ ^

That's all, sorry for my bad English :c Not really :)
Thanks all for mods will check your maps soon :)
Wax789
Hi Sawa-chan
from your M4M queue~
All mod is suggestion

[General]
00:54:675 - 01:24:468
In this kiai time, change volume 70%

[Mitsu's Normal]
01:04:606 - 01:07:502
Try this? http://puu.sh/1hZ6n
You should adjust to vocal in this part, I think

00:54:054 unnecessary inherited point...?
00:54:261 ^
delete it or add note!

[Hard]
00:46:399 (1) - make more symmetrical slider
00:47:640 (3) - ^

01:04:606 (1) - add clap to slider start
01:05:433 (3) - ^
01:06:054 (6) - add clap
01:06:261 (7) - add clap to slider reverse point

Good luck !
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