Scorpiour wrote:

[*]00:49:345 (1) - emm...seens it should start from prev red line....having the downbeat of kiai in the middle of a slider is...lol

so good luck with rank~~

kusano wrote:

00:34:936 (1) - ctrl+R likes me that would completely destroy the oval flow.
01:10:132 (1) - add clap? imo sounds out of place and especially inconsistant with the rest of the hitsounding

1. 00:43:676 (3) - There should be a new combo here to make combo consistant with 00:38:952 (1,2,3) -
2. 00:56:196 (5) - Alone whistle here at the start point sounds awkward imo. Try to add another whistle at this slider end to follow up your whistle at slider start.
3. 00:57:849 (2) - Hmm, it should be 1/2 tick backward. There's no rythim in 00:57:848- . Also if you add a circle at 00:58:085- it will create more interesting rythim than before.
4. 01:03:755 (1) - Same as 00:56:196 (5) , I think it's better to add another whistle at this slider end.
5. 01:05:407 (3) - Hmm. Same as before. This slider should start 1/2 backward. For me it's better to delete this slider, then add a note at 01:05:171- and add 1/2 slider at 01:05:644-. Don't forget to rearrage your hitsound if you do this.
6. 01:19:582 (1,4) - Aww, nazi, but can you move this circle 1 grid left so it will be symetrical with 01:22:416 (1,2) -
7. 01:22:889 (2) - Hmm, you should add another whistle too at this slider end.

1. I think it's best to rename this diff into Nyquill's Insane since the gap between sekai's hard and this diff is quite decent.
2. 00:12:495 (1) - Miss a whistle at this slider start?
3. 00:29:503 (6) - You should add new combo here to make the combo consistant with 00:14:385 (1,2,3,4,5) -
4. 00:30:684 (9,10) - You should add claps at these note to make it consistant to your previous clap rythim.
5. 00:36:353 (3) - There should be a whistle at this slider end to make it consistant with whistle at 00:34:936 (1) - start.
6. 01:12:022- Default finish hitsound is much better than whistle.
7. 01:13:911- ^
8. 01:17:691- ^
9. 01:22:415 (2,3) - Add whistle at these note like other diff? It's very good to hear imo.

log

20:17 *Miya is editing (Rumi Ookubo - Te wo Gyu Shite ne (TV Size))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/52212]
20:17 <Miya> : :3
20:17 <-Sekai-> : :O
20:17 <Miya> : combo 2 and 3 are very similar, please change on of them
20:18 <-Sekai-> : remove one of them?
20:18 <Miya> : change one of them
20:18 <Miya> : pink is work imo :3
20:18 <-Sekai-> : umm
20:19 <-Sekai-> : but there no pink in BG
20:19 <-Sekai-> : OAO
20:19 <Miya> : but there's is pinik in video
20:19 <Miya> : it fits with bg too imo
20:19 <Miya> : up to you
20:22 <Miya> : 00:29:503 (3,4) -
20:22 <Miya> : easy
20:22 <Miya> : how about adding whistle at both of this slider start?
20:22 <-Sekai-> : umm~
20:23 <-Sekai-> : sure
20:25 <Miya> : btw
20:25 <Miya> : no kiai? o.o
20:25 <-Sekai-> : yrs
20:25 <-Sekai-> : yes*
20:25 <Miya> : don't like it?
20:25 <-Sekai-> : just like Nymph's map
20:25 <-Sekai-> : =3=
20:26 <Miya> : 00:31:393 (5,1) - switch nc? >.<
20:27 <-Sekai-> : sure
20:27 <-Sekai-> : =w=
20:28 <Miya> : 00:31:393 (5,1) - nc here, to be consistant with previous rythim?
20:28 <-Sekai-> : umm
20:28 <-Sekai-> : it's same as before
20:28 <-Sekai-> : orz
20:29 <Miya> : no
20:29 <Miya> : 00:38:952 (1,2,3) -
20:29 <-Sekai-> : done
20:29 <Miya> : :3
20:29 <-Sekai-> : :3
20:29 <-Sekai-> : nice easy?
20:30 <Miya> : quiet nice
20:30 <Miya> : but still, you spam a lot of 1/1 Dx
20:30 <Miya> : although it's not a big problem
20:30 <-Sekai-> : o.o
20:30 <-Sekai-> : it's an easy diff orz
20:30 <Miya> : i know
20:30 <Miya> : but it's causing lacks of variation
20:31 <-Sekai-> : :/
20:31 <Miya> : not a big problem though
20:32 <Miya> : ups
20:32 <Miya> : 00:44:149 (2,3) - not symetrical
20:32 <Miya> : intended?
20:32 <-Sekai-> : yes
20:32 <-Sekai-> : orz
20:32 <Miya> : doesn't looks good imo
20:32 <Miya> : awkward
20:32 <-Sekai-> : :/
20:33 <-Sekai-> : so what do you think i should do
20:33 <Miya> : better to make it like this > http://puu.sh/BPa6
20:33 <Miya> : or this > http://puu.sh/BPaj
20:33 <-Sekai-> : ok
20:33 <-Sekai-> : changed it
20:34 <Miya> : :3
20:34 <-Sekai-> : :3
20:35 <Miya> : 01:08:716 (6,1) - switch combo? >.<
20:35 <-Sekai-> : sure
20:35 <-Sekai-> : it looks weird anyways
20:35 <-Sekai-> : xD
20:36 <Miya> : no, it's more consistant and nice to look imo o.o
20:36 <-Sekai-> : i mean the other one =3=
20:37 <Miya> : where? o.o
20:37 <-Sekai-> : before i switch combo
20:37 <-Sekai-> : o3o
20:37 <Miya> : >.<
20:38 <-Sekai-> : btw
20:38 <Miya> : yup?
20:38 <-Sekai-> : Nyquill is online if you want to irc mod with his diff later
20:38 <-Sekai-> : :3
20:38 <Miya> : owo
20:38 <Miya> : okay
20:38 <-Sekai-> : i guess ala is not online
20:38 <-Sekai-> : =3=
20:39 <Miya> : >.<
20:39 <Miya> : no problem, i will post in the forum
20:39 <-Sekai-> : thn ok :3
20:39 <-Sekai-> : then*
20:39 <Miya> : hard :3
20:40 <-Sekai-> : :3
20:42 <Miya> : hmm hmm
20:42 <Miya> : same comment as easy Dx
20:42 <-Sekai-> : o.o
20:42 <-Sekai-> : what D:
20:43 <Miya> : just look at my easy comment
20:44 <-Sekai-> : nc?
20:44 <-Sekai-> : =3=
20:44 <Miya> : nope
20:44 <Miya> : just forget about it >.<
20:44 <Miya> : btw
20:44 <-Sekai-> : =3=
20:44 <Miya> : 01:20:999 (4) - very good with default soft clap
20:45 <-Sekai-> : no
20:45 <-Sekai-> : D:
20:45 <-Sekai-> : it'll sound weird
20:45 <Miya> : i can hear a clap sounds it this note really >.<
20:45 <Miya> : 01:20:999 (4) -
20:45 <Miya> : try to listen it carefully
20:46 <-Sekai-> : sure added
20:46 <-Sekai-> : =3=
20:48 <Miya> : aw, sorry if my mod is long, so many chat and moderator makes me a bit confused Dx
20:48 <-Sekai-> : o.o
20:48 <-Sekai-> : orz it's ok
20:48 <-Sekai-> : and i just wanted to ask you if that's all for hard diff?
20:49 <Miya> : no
20:49 <Miya> : there's still lot Dx
20:49 <-Sekai-> : orz
20:50 <Miya> : 00:08:716 (1) - default finish please on this slider head
20:50 <Miya> : it's not consistant with your easy diff :<
20:51 <-Sekai-> : sure
20:51 <Miya> : ah wait, have to report someone again :<
20:51 <-Sekai-> : but i still think whistle will be better imo
20:51 <Miya> :
20:52 <Miya> : there's no hitsounds it that slider start
20:54 <-Sekai-> : Miya can irc mod with Nyquill
20:54 <-Sekai-> : he have exam in 1 hour D:
20:54 <Miya> : :<
20:54 <Miya> : ok then i will post in the forum later
20:55 <-Sekai-> : so no irc mod
20:55 <-Sekai-> : :<
20:56 <Miya> : :<
20:59 <Miya> : orz sorry
20:59 <Miya> : let's continue Dx
21:00 <Miya> : 00:29:503 (1,2,3) - whistle? :3
21:00 <-Sekai-> : :3
21:00 <-Sekai-> : sure
21:03 <Miya> : 00:49:345 (1) - why no default finish at this slder start? o.o
21:03 <-Sekai-> : hmm~
21:03 <-Sekai-> : claps fits there so that's why
21:03 <Miya> : not consistant with easy diff Dx
21:05 <-Sekai-> : sure added a finish
21:05 <Miya> : orz i can't concentrate
21:05 <Miya> : wait a minute
21:07 <Miya> : 01:20:999 (4) - oh yes, if you add clap here, it will be good if you set volume here to 30%
21:08 <-Sekai-> : sure
21:08 <-Sekai-> : =w=
21:10 <Miya> : 00:38:834- add a note?
21:11 <-Sekai-> : sure
21:11 <-Sekai-> : it's fits orz
21:11 <Miya> : 00:42:613- here too?
21:12 <Miya> : want to change some slider into triple in kiai?
21:12 <Miya> : i can help you if you want
21:12 <-Sekai-> : o.o
21:12 <-Sekai-> : sure
21:13 <Miya> : 00:50:999 (1) - this can be change to triplet
21:13 <-Sekai-> : D:
21:13 <-Sekai-> : but i liked this slider ;_;
21:13 <Miya> : 00:52:653 (6) - remove the repeat can be changed to triple too
21:13 <Miya> :
21:13 <Miya> : another pattern maybe? >.<
21:14 <-Sekai-> : umm~ ok
21:15 <-Sekai-> : 00:50:998 -
21:15 <-Sekai-> : changed into a triple
21:15 <Miya> : 00:52:888-00:53:124 can be changed into triplet too
21:16 <-Sekai-> : but 00:52:652 (8,1) -
21:16 <-Sekai-> : i want to keep them D:
21:17 <Miya> :
21:17 <Miya> : just remove the repeat
21:17 <Miya> : then add triplet
21:18 <-Sekai-> : =3=
21:18 <-Sekai-> : still no
21:18 <Miya> : ok
21:18 <Miya> : 00:54:779 (5) - this can be a triplet too
21:19 <-Sekai-> : sure
21:20 <Miya> : 00:56:668 (2) - this one too :3
21:20 <-Sekai-> : sure :O
21:21 <-Sekai-> : i gurss it's better orz
21:22 <Miya> : 00:58:675- add a note? :3
21:23 <-Sekai-> : so many triples
21:23 <-Sekai-> : orz
21:23 <Miya> : to be consistant o.o
21:23 <-Sekai-> : =v= ok
21:23 <Miya> : 01:04:345- you can add a note here too
21:24 <-Sekai-> : ok added it
21:24 <-Sekai-> : :3
21:28 <-Sekai-> : o.o Miya so silnce
21:28 <-Sekai-> : quite*
21:28 <Miya> : flame war in #malay Dx
21:29 <-Sekai-> : orz
21:29 <Miya> : 01:07:179- you can add a note too here? >.<
21:30 <Miya> : 01:11:786 (7) - ah, you can change a slider here into triplet too
21:33 <Miya> : umm have you change this slider sekai? 01:11:786 (7) -
21:33 <Miya> : o.o
21:34 <-Sekai-> : you should stop talking in #malay
21:34 <-Sekai-> : ._.
21:39 <Miya> : have you fixed what i said? Dx
21:39 <Miya> : you always dc orz
21:39 <-Sekai-> : orz
21:39 <-Sekai-> : about the sliders no
21:40 <Miya> : which? o.o
21:40 <-Sekai-> : 01:11:786 (7) -
21:41 <Miya> : 01:19:463- note here?
21:42 <-Sekai-> : no
21:42 <-Sekai-> : it's sounds better with just a note
21:42 <Miya> : 01:21:235 (5) - this can be changed to triple too
21:43 <-Sekai-> : ok
21:44 <-Sekai-> : added the triple
21:44 <Miya> : combo here is vocal oriented? o.o
21:45 <-Sekai-> : yeah
21:45 <-Sekai-> : it is =3=
21:45 <Miya> : i think it's a bit inconsistant :<
21:45 <-Sekai-> : :/
21:46 <-Sekai-> : i think Miya your not feeling well
21:46 <-Sekai-> : after that flam war
21:46 <Miya> : uh no, it's so many hl, i feel confused
21:46 <Miya> : @@
21:47 <-Sekai-> : oh :<
21:47 <-Sekai-> : so is that's all for hard
21:47 <Miya> : ah maybe that's all for now for your hard diff >.<
21:48 <Miya> : yup
21:48 <Miya> : i will mod other two diff later Dx
21:48 <-Sekai-> : umm~ i updated it
21:48 <Miya> : can't focus
21:48 <Miya> : orz
21:48 <Miya> : yup, please do it :3
21:48 <-Sekai-> : orz
21:48 <-Sekai-> : i did =w=

Miya wrote:

alacat's Normal

1. 00:43:676 (3) - There should be a new combo here to make combo consistant with 00:38:952 (1,2,3) -
2. 00:56:196 (5) - Alone whistle here at the start point sounds awkward imo. Try to add another whistle at this slider end to follow up your whistle at slider start.
3. 00:57:849 (2) - Hmm, it should be 1/2 tick backward. There's no rythim in 00:57:848- . Also if you add a circle at 00:58:085- it will create more interesting rythim than before.
4. 01:03:755 (1) - Same as 00:56:196 (5) , I think it's better to add another whistle at this slider end.
5. 01:05:407 (3) - Hmm. Same as before. This slider should start 1/2 backward. For me it's better to delete this slider, then add a note at 01:05:171- and add 1/2 slider at 01:05:644-. Don't forget to rearrage your hitsound if you do this.
6. 01:19:582 (1,4) - Aww, nazi, but can you move this circle 1 grid left so it will be symetrical with 01:22:416 (1,2) -
7. 01:22:889 (2) - Hmm, you should add another whistle too at this slider end.

Miya wrote:

Call me back after you have another 2 mods. :3

Miya wrote:

Nyquill's Hard
[list]
[*]00:36:353 (3) - There should be a whistle at this slider end to make it consistant with whistle at 00:34:936 (1) - start. rather remove that whistle instead

1. 00:12:495 (1) - this circle was overlapped with 00:11:078 (4) - 's slider-slide. move it to another place for make this circle more visible like this
2. 00:41:786 (1) - this new combo isn't really necessary in here. remove it?
3. 00:44:621 (4) - this 1/2 slider not really make sense in the end imo, be better if just a circle in here
4. 01:00:212 (6) - the new combo should begin in here imo, make the combo set same with before (1-2-3-4-5-1-2-3-4-5)
5. 01:22:416 (1,2) - i know you try to following the vocal, but I guess that more easier if delete (2) then, make slider (1) more longer until red tick. and remove new combo

1. 00:25:723 (3,4) - I guess (3)'s reverse in here is weird to hear. then, (4) should putting at 00:26:432 for more following the vocal. so, the rhythm can be better if like this?. add whistle in (3)'s end if you do this~
2. 00:34:227 (5) - oh well, add clap in the reverse? seems the sound similar with 00:38:007 (6) -
3. 00:44:621 (4) - same think with in easy diff
4. 01:05:171 (3) - add whistle sound? I think that would be fit with trumpet sound in bg music
5. 01:18:401 (4) - similar think with above

1. 00:04:936 (4) - add whistle in slider's beginning? that's fit with whistle sound at 00:04:464 (2) -
2. 00:08:716 (1) - add finish sound in slider's beginning, normal diff already do that
3. 00:38:007 (8) - change this slider into 1/2 beat? then add a reverse (like this). because the clap sound in the middle seems weird if without clap hitsound. after that, add clap in the reverse and the end
4. 00:44:621 (4) - same think with in easy diff

1. 00:15:330 (3) - add whistle sound? seems the sound similar with (1)
2. 00:34:227 (3) - add clap sound in slider's end? I know the clap sound not following the bg music, but that make the rhythm more better imo
3. 00:38:007 (3) - same think with in hard diff
4. 01:10:604 (x) - add a note with clap sound (soft-default)? because the clap sound in bg music ;_;
5. 01:17:691 (1) - add finish sound in slider's beginning? for cymbal sounder

-Bakari- wrote:

[alacat's Normal]
CS -1 looks the same with Easy :/mmm... nochange ;_;
00:03:046 (3,1) - aren't properly stacked ~_~ (just 0.5 grid x328 / x 329) fixed
01:04:464 (2,3) - meow? nochange ;_;
01:22:889 (2) - add reverse? ~_~ nochange ;_;

Yasora wrote:

Normal

1. 00:25:723 (3,4) - I guess (3)'s reverse in here is weird to hear. then, (4) should putting at 00:26:432 for more following the vocal. so, the rhythm can be better if like this?. add whistle in (3)'s end if you do this~mmm... nochange ;_;
2. 00:34:227 (5) - oh well, add clap in the reverse? seems the sound similar with 00:38:007 (6) - fixed
3. 00:44:621 (4) - same think with in easy diff fixed
4. 01:05:171 (3) - add whistle sound? I think that would be fit with trumpet sound in bg music fixed
5. 01:18:401 (4) - similar think with above fixed

1. New combos are very strange. Please look at Insane and follow a similar pattern

Shulin wrote:

[Normal]

00:01:157 - Why is there an inherited section here, just use the non inherited one.Because add to S:C2 finish on the slider's head.
00:44:621 (3) - Add finish. fixed
00:47:456 (1) - For a normal I think this should be longer. sorry.. no chage.
01:22:889 (2) - Keep the volume 30% for the slider end. fixed
01:00:448 (1) - I think ending it at 01:02:809 is better since it follows the synth like the previous bit. fixed
01:03:282 - Maybe add a note here if you do ^ fixed

Shulin wrote:

[Insane]
01:21:470 (1) - Replace with a note or extend to 1/2 at 01:21:707 - also silence / reduce volume of the end. are you ABSOLUTELY sure about this, because I'm hearing 1/3 and its a slider, so what rhythm the slider ends on doesn't screw the player up.

1. Clean~

1. 00:02:101 (3) - Whistle here is not consistant with your next whistle rythim. To make it consistant remove whistle here then add another whistle into this note 00:01:629 (2,4) -
2. 00:14:385 (4) - Because you add a new combo here at 00:07:771 (1) - to follow the new rythim from the music, i suggest you add a new combo here too to make it consistant. Otherwise just remove the new combo at 00:07:771 (1) -
3. 00:33:755 (4) - Nazi, but move the end point to 352,96 to make this slider more symetrical.

1. 00:14:385 (4) - I think it's better to use default soft clap at this slider start rather than whistle. It's more suit with the music.
2. 00:27:613 (1) - There should be a finish sound here too at slider start. It's not consistant with 00:19:582 (7) - and 00:23:834 (1) -
3. 00:35:172 (1) - Hmm, i think you need a whistle at this circle to make the whistle rythim more consistant.
4. 00:38:952 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - This combo is not consistant in the stanza. To make it consistant switch comboes on here 00:40:842 (3,1) - then here 00:42:731 (2,1) - . Perhaps you want to add another combo at 00:44:621 (4) - too make it more consistant.
5. 01:06:352- From this point there's no whistle hitsounds. Why you don't continue the whistle rythim? It's good imo. Try to add whistle rythim like i mention below :
   
   1. 01:06:353 (6) -
   2. 01:07:298 (8) - but at the slider start.
   3. 01:09:188 (3) -
   4. 01:12:968 (2) - at slider start.
   5. 01:13:912 (3) - at slider end.
   6. 01:21:471 (4) -
6. 01:22:889 (2) - It's better to add a whistle at the slider end like Sekai diff.

1. 00:04:936 (4) - Overused whistle sounds which not consistant to your whistle rythim. Remove it please.
2. 00:14:149 (7) - This one too. But it will better if you add a default clap here to cover the rythim from the music.
3. 00:34:700 (1,2) - Switch new comboes please. It's not consistant to your combo pattern.
4. 00:47:456 (1) - Orz, the finish sounds at this spinner end is not fit with the music. It really better if you use clap instead.
5. 00:58:558 (2,4) - This should be a triplet if i look into your triplet pattern. So add a note here 00:58:675-
6. 01:04:227 (5,1) - ^ add a note here 01:04:345-
7. 01:11:786 (7) - ^ should be a triplet.
8. 00:55:251 (7) - This should be a new combo. Not consistant with your combo pattern. Then remove new combo here 00:56:432 (1) - then add new combo here 00:57:141 (4) -
9. 00:58:322 (1) - If you follow my suggestion above, remove new combo here then add new combo here 00:59:031 (5) -
10. 01:00:448 (1,2) - After that switch new comboes here.
11. 01:02:574 (6,1) - After that switch new comboes on this one too.
12. etc, continue until finish. Agree with Shulin here. Don't follow vocal too much for new comboes, otherwise your combo will not consistant like this. Just follow new comboes every long white tick.

1. 01:20:998 (8) - Hmm, the clap at this slider end is overused imo. Better to remove it.
2. 01:23:124 (3) - Better to add whistle here like Sekai diff.

1. 00:34:227 (5) - I think the clap sound at the repeat is not fit with the song. It's better to remove it.

1. The new combo at the first part is not consistant. Please follow this mod :
   
   1. 00:04:227 (1) - Remove nc here
   2. 00:04:936 (4) - Add nc here
   3. 00:06:826 (1) - Remove nc
   4. 00:12:023 (1) - Remove nc
   5. 00:12:495 (2) - Add nc here
2. 00:25:723 (7,1) - Switch nc here please for consistencies.
3. 00:27:849 (6) - Nc here for the new vocal.
4. 00:54:542 (4,5,6) - Ctrl + R this please since the triplet is not start in the correct position. Rearrange the pattern and the hitsound if you do this.
5. 00:56:432 (4,5,6) - ^
6. 01:11:786 (7) - Change this to triplet to make the triplet pattern across the kiai time more consistant.
7. 01:14:385 (7) - Add nc here please for consistencies of your nc pattern.

1. 00:38:479 (4,5,6,7) - The stream is covered by the combo hitburst and hard too see the path. I think you should think about another pattern here for better gameplay.
2. 01:06:352 (1,2) - Don't stack this please, didn't expect it to be 1/4 because you use 1/2 and 1/1 at previous stack, so this is confusing.
3. 01:18:400 (3,4,5) - Hmm, it's better to not stack this slider too for your pattern consistencies.

1. 01:05:881 (6) - Remove the repeat and add a circle here 01:06:234-, 01:06:352-, to make triplet more consistant.
2. 01:11:550 (6,7,8) - Ctrl + R this please, the triplet is not start at the correct position. Rearrange the pattern and hitsound after you do this.