Kalibe
Kalibe wrote:
Hello.
general:
Change Audio Lead-In to 2000 ms just to be safe? Ok
[Recollection]
00:31:250 (4,5,6,7) - 00:31:250 (4,5,6,7) - These streams sounds weird, because it's sounds like normal 1/2 pattern. (Blue ticks are inadiuable a bit ) I don't think so actually, i think this streams fit well
00:05:676 (3) - Hm how about ctrl j this slider and do that ? I made that on purpose, no change http://puu.sh/lLeLK/0940cbd7ce.jpg
00:14:283 (1,2) - Sounds like a hitsounds spam and i don't think this clap emphasise music. I remove Claps on sliders and add 2 Whistles on red ticks. It's better imo. fixed the HS
00:16:004 (6,1) - Swap NC maybe? Reworking the NCs
00:17:726 (4,1) - ^
00:28:299 (4,5) - Fix blanket please. k
00:32:234 (2,3) - Linear flow is meh... Make this more smooth imo. Why? it's smooth enough as it is
00:35:676 (5,1) - Swap NC, cause of downbeat.
00:37:398 (4,1) - ^
00:42:808 (1,3) - ^
00:47:111 (4,5,6) - These circles are overmapped for me. I don't hear anything on blue ticks. Streams for emphasize Rei's trembling voice
00:49:201 (1,2) - Hm try this thingy ? Looks more clean imo. Not really my kind of style, sorry http://puu.sh/lLf51/8cd922d89f.jpg
00:50:676 (1,3) - Swap NC.
00:54:857 (1,2) - ^
00:58:791 (1,2) - ^
01:07:889 (2,3) - This spacing emphasis is odd to me. Because i hear the stronger beat is on white tick so 2 < 3 tho. Actual spacing while playing is not that noticeable tbh
01:10:716 (5,7) - Blue ticks are inaudiable. ^
01:34:692 (7) - If you want, you could NC this.
02:14:037 (5) - Missing NC.
02:18:955 (3) - Straight slider instead of curved? Nope
02:29:405 (5,7) - Inaudiable, put maybe Whitstle at least. putting whistles makes it sounds kinda weird
02:30:512 (2,3) - I think 2 < 3 in spacing emphasis. changed slightly
02:37:644 (1) - Move this to x: 424 y: 152 to have a better transision between stream and slider. I don't think that would be a necessity
02:37:644 (1,2) - Stack these : http://puu.sh/lLfow/c08829f32d.jpg k
03:55:348 (2,4) - Claps don't fit with music tho. Replace it with Whistles. k
Ok, that's all. This map needs more work, but i wish you luck. Good luck and Merry Christmas. o/ Thanks!
Pho
Pho wrote:
Hi o/ m4m thing
Bold: Fix quickly/unrankable issues
Purple: Questionable
Red: Highly recommend
[General][Recollection]
- Nothing~
That's it from me. Pretty nice map, the best one i've seen so far from you.
- 00:06:168 - Up to this point slider velocity is pretty high for the intro, please calm it down by ~0.2 I'll think about it
- 00:14:283 (1,2) - Silence the sldiertails (with soft-hitnormal). yea
- NC switches because emphasis is set on wrong beats:
00:14:037 (4,1) - 00:16:004 (6,1) - 00:17:726 (4,1) - 00:24:857 (5,3) - 00:27:070 (1,3) - 00:35:676 (5,1) - 00:37:398 (3,1) - 00:42:070 (2,3) -
00:50:676 (1,3) - 00:54:857 (1,2) - 00:58:791 (1,2) - 01:16:988 (3,1) - 01:28:545 (4,1) - 01:32:726 (4,1) -
02:35:676 (3,1) - etc.
Try to set NCs on the prominent beats first (that is, in this case, on the strong white ticks). Don't prioritise the vocals too much as they are not determining the measure of the song. I'll try to rework the NCs- 00:16:250 (1,2,3,4) - Definitely not lol. Please rework this rhythm, there#s no clicking action on the prominent beats. fi xD
- There are beats like 00:45:512 - which you skip very often to follow vocals more specifically, but I highly recommend you think about this again.
Leaving these beats out, especially the big white tick ones, makes your rhythm instable. Rei usually sings songs at a certain, but constant pace with little rhythm variations, and so should this map. I don't think I want to ignore vocal on this part (and other similar) but I'll take it into account- 01:24:857 - Certainly should not leave this beat out. honestly, when I mapping to the vocals, I tend to compeletely missed this kind of beat. I don't even notice it at the first place. Also, I believe if map this part, that makes it kinda inconsistent
- 01:50:430 - Turn the volume down by 10%, this section's pretty loud.
- 02:15:512 (7) - Slider + circle please, rhythm goes over pattern. Ok Also 02:16:988 - map this out: I'll think about it
- 02:36:414 (1) - Two circles would be better Variations
- 03:14:529 (3) - Ugh I can see why these sliders are valid but please try to mitigate their numbers. having sliders end on cymbal beats is generally a bad idea. Hmmmm, no change for now, but I'll consider this
- 03:52:398 (3) - Only finish on tail please. Yea
- 04:58:299 (3) - Only soft-hitnormal, too many normal-hitnormals in this combo. ?? I hope I did it right
- Copy the following code (ctrl+c) and insert it into your timing sections(f6 --> ctrl+v):
307152,-100,4,2,1,25,0,0
309119,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
311086,-100,4,2,1,15,0,0
313053,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
This is for the volume down on the last two spinners which I highly recommend to apply. cool!
Can call me back when you think it's ready, good luck! /o/ Thanks Phoo \o/
Warpyc
Thanks for the mod guys Warpyc wrote:
From Pulse modding queue
- 00:05:676 (3) - Ctrl+j and reposition for better flow http://puu.sh/lO7iJ/ebafcb1094.jpg Ah, no I like mine better
01:42:316 (2,3,4) - Make this tripple a blanket? That would give it too much movement, I don't think that would work
01:46:250 (3,4) - Increase the height and and spacing on this to make it symmetric, somewhat like this http://puu.sh/lO85Y/8830af42b6.jpg I want those two circles to be easy to click without too much compromise. Increasing the spacing would makes it more difficult to hit
02:08:381 (2) - Not sure if this was intended a blanket, if it wasn't you could make it one It's hard to make a perfect blanket with this kind of slider I'll try my best
02:26:824 (3) - What's going on with this slider? Something's not right here I know what you mean by that, but that's the most sensible place to put it that I could think of
There is a 1/4 beat from 03:45:512 - to 03:46:496 - since you seem to like those why dont you map this part with 1/4? That would be a overmap for me
03:56:332 (3) - Idk if this slider is supposed to have blanketed approach circle and slider end, if they are they need fixing otherwise make them blankets.I changed this a bit
04:23:873 - Missed strong beat? Not really, I left that out on purpose
04:20:922 (4) - Nazi blanket ok
04:48:217 (1,2) - ^ fxd
Overmapped stuff
this map also doesnt have any 1/4 sounds (some exceptions) thus I think the streams are unneeded but overmapping has become a subjective thing so do as you wish. I mean you hitsounded 1/2 but mapped 1/4 so it feels kind of weird as well
Overall nice map I wish you the best of luck for the future and a early happy christmas! I ended not changing much but Thank you anyway
Sorry for the late reply