Alright let's see what I can find.
General:why isn't there a lead in for all diffs? players need to get ready first before they start playing. suggest that you set the lead in to 2000.
the kiai time is inconsistent.
Easy:00:12:774(1) - how about making a curved slider to flow properly? it should be like
this.
00:15:116(3) - same as above but like
this.
00:17:457(1) - hmm maybe like
this? same reason as my 1st suggestion.
00:19:799(3) -
^NOTE: the reason i said these is because the straight sliders don't flow properly. putting curved sliders make a nice flow and a nice path for beginners.
00:24:921(1,1) - umm this is intentional right?
00:44:531(1) - delete a repeat and replace it for a circle. it'd be easier because beginners may not know when this slider will end since it has more than 1 repeat and it'd look a lot nicer if you can do
this to the notes.
00:48:043(1,2) - maybe make these 2 curved sliders like
this or something close to this. it would flow a lot nicer IMO, but make sure that the 2 sliders look the same.
00:53:604(2) - unstack this because beginners won't expect stacked notes or notes that are under the slider.
01:18:774(6) - how about making a curved slider so that i'd form a
blanket around (5)?
01:24:353 - re-snap this green line unless you have a reason why it's unsnapped.
02:17:494(1) - same as 00:12:774 but i'm sure you'll get the idea.
02:19:835(3) - ^
02:22:177(1) - ^
02:24:518(3) - ^
02:29:640(1,1) - same as 00:24:921
02:45:738(1) - same as 01:18:774.
this is the best i can come up with. if you can do something better than this please do.
03:09:152(1,2) - same as 00:53:604
03:21:152(6) - same as 01:18:774
Normal:00:01:214(1) - it'd look a lot fun if you can make this a curved slider.
01:00:921(2,3,1,2) - make these curved sliders like
this. it shows a nice flow from 1 slider to the other a lot funner IMO
01:09:116(1) - a curved slider like
this looks a lot nicer as it forms a blanket around (2)
02:08:128(1) - if you ask me this looks kind of hidden. so to make it easier, how about stacking this under the end of (3)?
02:39:884(1,1) - this is intentional right? are you sure amateurs can reach this in time?
03:26:713(3,4) - ^
Scorpiour:00:26:384(1) - remove the NC because it's still following instrumental.
00:26:970(3) - a NC here because the vocals start.
00:53:311(2,3) - make these sliders look the same as (1) because these 2 sliders are barely curved.
01:05:896(2) - i think it'd look a lot better if you can stack this under the end of (4).
02:21:591(1,2) - make it like
this. it looks a lot nicer because since the first (1,2) has that pattern, players might expect it again on the next combo.
02:37:250(4) - *nazi* slign this slider to (2). it looks odd when it's not aligned properly.
Hard:01:31:190(4) - a NC here because the lyrics change.
01:32:453(1,2) - remove the NC for (1) and add it for (2) if you follow the suggestion above.
Rin:00:53:604(4) - hmm try to move this down because it's touching the score?
02:01:979(3) - add a clap to keep consistency.
02:04:506(3) - ^
02:18:372(5) - i think it'd look nice if you can make a curved slider to form a blanket around (4)
03:26:713(1,2) - both of these sliders look nice, but it'd look even better if 1 of these slider look the same as the other.
This is the best i can do. this has got to be 1 of the longest mods i've done for an experienced mapper

. anyways GL
