Kodora wrote:

ok, doubleposting is cool. Mod as requested.

[General]

1. Change title to: REDALiCE ft. Ayumi Nomiya - Foughten Field (t+pazolite remix) But its so long!... Fine.
2. Add to tags: The Venerable Ancient Battlefield Suwa Foughten Field Yasaka Kanako Mountain of Faith MoF th10 Eh, Sure..?
3. Tickrate 0.5 is banned now. You can use tickrate 2 (and as for me it fits better here), and silence all sliderticks if you want. Drat! its banned? *sadness*
4. Slider velocity in all diffs is too awful. I suggest you decreace it, for now even in easiest diff in mapset it looks too fast. Requires too much remapping, idk what I was thinking two years ago, but keeping it as it is.
5. All diffs have no kiai time! I suggest you add it at least in 01:46:757 I just felt there was no exact time to place a kiai, since whole song's pace is similar, no part stood out enough for me to want to kiai it.

[Easy]

More looks like normal, but i like it, easy must not be too easy, especially in song like this. I blame the BPM!

100% volume sounds too much for me. Decrease it at least to 85%. tampered with.
Decrease slidervVelosity to at least 0.8, those sliders looks too fast for easiest diff in mapset. You already mentioned

1. 00:15:974 - add note? you ignore strong beat here :\ start off slow.. even for 2 combos
2. 00:59:801 (4,1) - too cruel jump for easiest diff imho Hm.. from what I see, I mapped to the grid to get the square shapes
3. 01:49:888 (2) - new combo? new combo to this note, and removed new combo to note before.
4. 01:56:670 (2,3,1) - i think it will be hard to newbies to read this, so i propose change it a bit: Changed with tweaks
5. 02:00:583 (2,3) - Pretty bad overlap, i dont like it. I can see why... but will keep for now (cuz idk what to do w/ it atm)
6. 02:02:409 - add note? missed strong beat hereWanted a gap before vocal
7. 02:15:453 (1,2,1) - again about triangle, try to make it like this: Again, changed with tweaks
   
   [Normal]
   
   Same about volune, sounds too loud. Played around with
   Decrease slider velosity to 1.20, sliders are too fast now. Already mentioned
   
   
   1. 00:56:670 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is not too cruel for a normal diff? imho those jumps can be cruel for newbies, but if you want, you can keep it.
   2. 01:05:018 (1,2) - Those antijump will be too hard for beginners imho. I used 1x spacing for this whole map, so I won't change "anti-jump" or "jump" suggestions, cuz even if they look like jumps, they're technically not
   3. 01:22:235 (3,4,5) - imho triples more ok in hard diffs, but its ok if you keep it. Bwahaha?
   4. 01:24:322 (3,4,5) - ^ ^
   5. 01:44:670 (1,2,3,4) - imho too cruel for normal pattern or 1/4 notes? either way, not changing...
   6. 01:50:931 (1) - Unstack them! Newbies cant read stacked noted. *evil laugh*
   7. 01:50:931 (1) - delete useless point on slider ^ slider point was used so it would stack~
   8. 01:53:018 (2) - ^ This map was created before those auto slider curves, I think, but man, picky!
   9. 01:53:801 (4) - ^^
   10. 01:53:801 (4,5) - this can be too hard for newbies, so i propose change it like this:Changed?
   11. 02:06:322 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - same. At least 02:06:974 (5,6,1) - can be just super confuse for newbiest. Try to unstack it!Yup, too hard! So i made first one a bit easier. . . next two, good luck to them!
   12. 02:12:322 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ same ._. ^
   [Hard]
   
   Same about volume k
   OD +1 for better balance between diffs? k
   
   
   • 00:14:801 (6) - Too confusing note. Stack it with 00:14:409 (3,4,5) - for better playability or change in other way. I went for how it sounded like, so, keeping as it is
     00:19:366 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this looks just... weird. imho. I don't think most of my "patterns" make sense either way...
   1. 00:24:322 (3,4) - so bad antijump as for me. I'm confused with the "anti jump" term you're implying... but not changing
   2. 00:25:105 (5,6,1) - so bad overlap ._. >_<, keeping
   3. 00:25:888 (2,3) - maybe push apart them?I wanted to overlap next notes, so dont wanna change this
   4. 00:27:714 (1,3,5,7) - Use more large spacing between those notes, it is just looks bad. stop picking on my evil "patterns of nonsense!"
   5. 00:30:322 (3,4) - more spacing please between those sliders Nah
   6. 00:31:496 (6,1) - stack them, looks better imho as new combo, I refuse.
   7. 00:33:322 (7,1) - more spacing here, please =/
   8. 00:34:496 (2,3) - dont like those antijump ._. still don't get your "anti-jump" term
   9. 00:34:757 (3,1,2,1) - Please, use more spacing between all those notes! Distance snap is your friend and enemy, not changed
   10. 00:37:496 (1,2,3,1) - ^ ^
   11. 00:39:453 (5) - umm, those slider can be confusing a bit... you can curve it in other way to avoid it. orz. followed the shape of rest of combo, so no change
   12. 00:41:931 (3,1) - try to keep line hire:I stacked this under prior note position, I do that a lot.
   13. 00:43:496 (4,1,2,1) - please, more spacing here Neva!
   14. 00:45:192 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - please, keep same distance between notes. For now it can confuse a lot.huh? they're 1/4 notes, I have to space them apart properly
   15. 00:46:235 (1) - Slider should ends at 00:47:148 mmm... second opinion plz
   16. 00:47:148 (1) - Should begins on white tick. ^ I know what you're getting at though.
   17. 00:57:909 (5,6) - spaced in so strange way for me.Its spaced properly if you notice they're 1/4 notes
   18. 00:58:887 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - more spacing between notesNope
   19. 01:25:888 (1,2) - bad overlap as for menot much I'll do about it, since I won't make it a jump or stack
   20. 01:26:931 (1,2) - ^ ^
   21. 01:28:888 (3) - i think better replace this note with slider, will more fits vocal I thought about it, but wouldn't know where to end the slider.
   22. 01:49:888 (3,4,5,6,1) - spacing ?
   23. 01:50:931 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - spacing ._. Nothing wrong here! just evil pattern
   24. 01:55:627 (4,5) - try to place it like this: Good suggestion, but I don't want to.
   25. 01:56:931 (8,9,1,2,3) - spacing pattern
   26. 02:01:366 (6) - this note is very hard to read, try to move it away from slider *evil laugh*
   27. 02:02:801 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
   28. 02:11:801 (3) - delete useless point on slider ?? I added a point instead, to make the curve more obvious
   29. 02:18:061 (2) - how about add slowdown to this slider? Will fits vocal as well, imho I know what you mean, but nah.
   Nice diff overrall, but spacing 1.0 is just unfit. Try to respace all places what i mentioned with more large spacing. 1x spacing for whole map, 1.5x for light jumps, 2x for jumps, grid flipping for patterns and extreme jumps. Hence, I'm not changing my mapping style.
   
   [Lunatic]
   
   Same about volume
   Stats look a bit cruel, but i like it, Keep this way :>
   
   
   1. 00:14:409 (5,6) - too close. use huge spacing please Moment I saw this, I knew you didn't check auto or look at map during test
   2. 00:35:540 (1) - Remove new combo? I dont see any reason for it here. Flip jump + vocal
   3. 00:43:496 (5,1,2) - keep same distance between those jumps please They're 1/4 notes, spacing is supposed to be different!
   4. 00:47:279 (9) - Delete those note and begin spinner on it for better rhythm.Nah.
   5. 01:03:322 (2) - delete useless point on sliderNope, needed slight curve
   6. 01:03:974 (5) - ^ ^
   7. 01:17:409 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - how about make something like a little square using 01:17:540 (1,2,3,4,5)? Too simple, I like my odd pattern instead.
   8. 01:18:714 (3,4,5,6) - maybe did something like this?^
   9. 01:27:974 (2) - add slowdown to those slider follow vocals?Refuse
   10. 01:31:366 - make 1/8 slider here follow drums? Nah, I decide to slow down map here
   11. 01:35:540 - ^ ^
   12. 01:39:974 (6,1) - stack? Or maybe use more large spacing between them.Done to trick players
   13. 01:48:322 (1,2,1,2) - same spacing between jumps
   14. 01:54:192 (1,2) - make some 1/16 1/8 sliders instead?? Nope, stream!
   15. 01:57:061 (4,1) - more huge distance between those notes please Purposely there to mess players up
   16. 02:11:148 (1,2) - ofc hitobjects under slidertracks are allowed, but anyway, as for me it looks just ugly, so i suggest you move it away from slider. My maps were never pretty~
   17. 02:14:801 (6,1) - stack them betterThey're not stacked though
   18. 02:16:496 (1,2,3,4) - more spacing between those notes please Huh? They're already 1.5x
   19. 02:19:627 (1,2,3,4,5) - make distance between those notes more huge? >:D Did increased spacing~

Good diff, but you can use more 1/8 and even 1/16 sliders in those song. Also, it will be awesome if you will map or ask for guest diff someone to make an Extra diff here. Good luck! Something harder? Like this osu.ppy.sh/s/50777 ?