1. Hotaru (5,16 stars, 620 notes)
2. Hyper (2,8 stars, 194 notes)

Bubblun wrote:

From #modreqs doing m4m.

General

SPOILER

The BG needs to be 1920x1080, 1366x768, or 1024x768. Please adjust the BG if you plan on ranking this. - Done

Hotaru

SPOILER

00:09:982 (1,2,3) - With the 3 slider landing on the vocals, it makes the first 2 notes seem awkward to play because they're mapped to the instruments instead. What I suggest is to place a circle, then a 1/2 slider where the end of the first 1/4 slider was. With my suggested rhythm it will be 'circle - 1/2 slider - 1/2 slider' - Done
00:16:984 (7,1) - I suggest an NC here because of the strong beat and it will also make 7 easier to read. It's sort of hard to read because of the jump, but it is justified, so an NC will allow the player to differentiate. - Done
00:29:433 (3) - I recommend you delete this note, and move 4 to where this note was on the timeline. The exaggeration will allow the player to snap to 4, despite being 1/4. That pause also adds some intuition in my opinion. modified the whole thing
00:43:126 (8) - I suggest an NC on this note for better readability. It's also justified by the strong beat, so you have multiple reasons to do so. - Done
01:08:644 (2,4) - Personal suggestion, but I think it would look nice if you made the other half of the 'heart' on the first slider, if that's what the second slider even is. I saw it as a heart, so that's why. lol - Done

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  od should be at least 7, i recommend 8
  you should add a preview point
  02:35:295 - are you planning on mapping past this? if not, you'll need to cut your mp3

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  00:30:055 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this section is overdone, there are other instances of this intensity in the song and the spacing is nowhere near as high as this
  00:58:686 (1) - the sv here is too high
  01:08:644 (2) - ^
  01:25:605 (1,2,1) - i don't think these should be stacked on top of the slider
  02:05:750 (5) - nc | 02:05:906 (1) - remove nc
  02:12:597 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this feels overdone as well, the song is winding down and this is your second hardest pattern.

Lulu- wrote:

Hi, M4M from #modreqs!

[General]
Delete the source, it's not a real source - Done
The title does not seem right, where did you get this mp3 from? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hUxvXv8Bp50 my bad forgot somthing on the title, Fixed
Delete the dashes in the tags - Fixed

[Hotaru]
00:30:055 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is way too overdone, tone this down appropriately - I understand but still there is some map that are even more overdone than this, personally I think it's just normal for an almost 5 stars to have that in, however I did something that should make it fine!
00:32:856 (3) - This slider kinda breaks the flow - Fixed
00:35:657 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part's flow overall is bad, you should always try to make your patterns guide the player to the next object instead of making the player have to move uncomfortably like here - Actually, I did that on purpose to add some difficulty, even moving uncomfortably there it still isn't that hard, I made it more leading to the next objects now
01:39:142 (3,4) - Move these and CTRL+G 4 - Did somthing similar
01:49:723 (2) - This slider breaks the flow again - Fixed
01:51:279 (1) - Start the spinner here and map the part before - Done
02:24:889 (2,3) - Don't overlap these - Dont know what you meant by not to overlap it but I tried something

Uhh, you should finish the map first before you ask for mods.
Your sliderart also often uses too many unnecessary sliderpoints, I'd recommend you experiment a bit more with the slidertail physics.
Another thing that you have to work on is maintaining the flow in and between your patterns, but that shouldn't take too long to learn. Looking at ranked maps in the editor and comparing them to your map is a great method. I did and I fixed some sliders (I couldn't touch to the heart I'm afraid to spoil it xD)
I'll recheck once you finished the map, just poke me ingame!
Good Luck!

spooky fish wrote:

General

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  od should be at least 7, i recommend 8 - I'll keep it 6 for now
  you should add a preview point - What do you mean?
  02:35:295 - are you planning on mapping past this? if not, you'll need to cut your mp3 - I'm going to map it yes

Hotaru

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  00:30:055 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this section is overdone, there are other instances of this intensity in the song and the spacing is nowhere near as high as this - Fixed
  ( 00:58:686 (1) - the sv here is too high 01:08:644 (2) - ^ ) - I lowered the first one as the player won't be prepared for it to be fast, but the second one I kept it as it is since it's almost the same instances of the song of the first so he'll be aware of it
  01:25:605 (1,2,1) - i don't think these should be stacked on top of the slider - Fixed
  02:05:750 (5) - nc | 02:05:906 (1) - remove nc - Done
  02:12:597 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this feels overdone as well, the song is winding down and this is your second hardest pattern. Should be better now

Mahm0ud wrote:

spooky fish wrote:

General

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  you should add a preview point - What do you mean?

Thanks for your mod! really apreciated ;D

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spooky fish wrote:

it's where the song starts playing when you hover over it in song select. the option is under timing-> set current position as preview point

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