00:23 Net0: Yo
00:23 Kicks: You were doing well on those jumps in the middle part. good job on that
00:23 Net0: Nope
00:23 Net0: I suck
00:23 Net0: hahaha
00:23 Net0: btw
00:23 Net0: fun song
00:23 Kicks: thanks
00:23 Net0: do you want me to mod it?
00:23 Kicks: there were a few things that I saw that I need to fix
00:24 Kicks: if you want to mod it, that'd be great!
00:24 Net0: If I can do it in here
00:24 Net0: than save the txt and send to the thread :3
00:24 Kicks: yeah, that';s fine
00:24 Net0: can it be now?
00:25 Kicks: just make sure you post the PMs so I can give you kudosu for your mod ^-^
00:25 Kicks: yeah
00:25 Net0: yeah like
00:25 Kicks: it can be now
00:25 Net0: I use the command
00:25 Net0: ./savelog
00:25 Net0: and then send it to the thread
00:25 Net0: it increases your star priority
00:25 Net0: :3
00:26 Kicks: that's neat!
00:26 Kicks: I don't really know how the whole modding side of mapping works lol. I'm still trying to learn that
00:26 Net0: Ok
00:26 Net0: I guide you haha
00:26 Net0: but for now
00:26 Net0: open editor
00:26 Net0: in your song
00:26 Net0: :3
00:26 Kicks: I'm in
00:26 Net0: 1. Offset: 0ms BPM: 190,00
00:27 Net0: This timing is fine
00:27 Net0: however
00:27 Net0: look at the slider in the beggining of your map
00:27 Kicks: yes?
00:27 Net0: Remember that if you want to do anything there
00:27 Net0: in the future
00:27 Net0: you have to change the slider velocity
00:28 Net0: kinda obvious stuf
00:28 Net0: but
00:28 Kicks: I thought I did
00:28 Kicks: it's set to a SV of .6
00:28 Net0: 00:00:078 -
00:28 Net0: I mean the real beggining of the song
00:28 Kicks: OH!
00:28 Net0: 00:50:526 (1) -
00:28 Net0: Before this slider
00:28 Net0: there's 50s
00:29 Net0: that in a future you might think "I should also map this part"
00:29 Net0: just a reminder
00:29 Net0: now
00:29 Kicks: ok
00:29 Net0: I believe that on timing
00:30 Net0: the only section it felt weird was this one
00:30 Net0: let me find it
00:30 Net0: rember when I draw
00:30 Net0: the "?"
00:31 Net0: 04:56:842 (1) -
00:31 Kicks: 02:50:526 (1) - here?
00:31 Net0: This slider
00:31 Net0: it should go faster
00:31 Kicks: oh, ok
00:31 Net0: And the one after
00:31 Net0: even faster
00:32 Net0: The point where the bpm go crazy are
00:32 Net0: 04:56:842 -
00:32 Net0: 04:58:105 -
00:33 Net0: You can see that
00:33 Net0: http://puu.sh/pCDWi.png
00:33 Net0: The slider is actually REALLY slow in this part
00:33 Net0: when it should be
00:33 Net0: WAY FAST
00:34 Net0: Also
00:34 Net0: http://puu.sh/pCDZP.png
00:34 Net0: You map lacks in terms of hitsound
00:34 Net0: The entire song is 50% volume
00:34 Net0: you have to emphazise some parts
00:34 Kicks: well what I do to make those faster is to make a new timing point and make a 1/16 slider. delete that timing point (which makes the slider stay the smaller size of the deleted timing point) and then drag it out
00:35 Kicks: ok. I did hit sound it, but I also turned it down
00:35 Kicks: what volume do you think I should set it to>?
00:35 Net0: depends on the part
00:35 Net0: this is really up to you
00:35 Net0: but I believe you can see that some parts of the songs
00:35 Net0: are transicions
00:36 Net0: and other chorus
00:36 Net0: that's a good start
00:36 Kicks: oh ok, I thought it was normal to just flatline the hitsounds volume.
00:36 Kicks: ok
00:36 Net0: I mean
00:36 Net0: if you think it's not necessary it's up to you
00:36 Net0: but a song like this
00:37 Net0: I would make crazy hitsounds and change volume in many ocasions
00:37 Net0: As to the tags
00:37 Net0: I believe you can link more stuff
00:37 Kicks: like what?
00:38 Net0: hardcore
00:38 Net0: Take tags from songs similar to this one
00:38 Net0: like Furioso
00:38 Kicks: hardcore is in the tags
00:39 Kicks: It's the first one isn't it
00:39 Kicks: ?
00:39 Net0: lol
00:39 Net0: I'm stupid sorry
00:39 Net0: hahahaha
00:39 Kicks: lol, it's k
00:39 Net0: btw
00:39 Net0: What's the source of this song?
00:39 Net0: I mean I can see the name
00:39 Net0: but what is it?
00:40 Kicks: it's an anthem to a hardcore event
00:40 Kicks: the album is called Harmony of Hardcore 2014
00:40 Kicks: is that what you mean?
00:40 Net0: Yeah
00:40 Net0: Like you can also tag stuff about this album
00:41 Net0: Tags are really fun
00:41 Kicks: ok
00:41 Kicks: lol
00:41 Net0: example
00:41 Net0: this map
00:41 *Net0 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/369349 Renard - Because Maybe! pt. 2 [Marathon]]
00:42 Net0: there's a tag written
00:42 Net0: banana
00:42 Net0: it's a joke from BD to fabriciorby
00:42 Kicks: well most of those tags are the titles of the songs in the beatmap
00:42 Net0: :3
00:42 Net0: let's move on
00:42 Kicks: ok
00:43 Net0: the mapping flows
00:43 Net0: Is really OK
00:43 Net0: I didn't felt lost
00:43 Net0: I like the idea of ugly sliders
00:43 Net0: it really matches the song
00:43 Kicks: I try really hard on good flow
00:43 Kicks: ugly?
00:43 Kicks: ;_;
00:43 Kicks: lol
00:43 Kicks: I sort of thought the same too
00:44 Net0: 01:10:736 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) -
00:44 Net0: This is a good start for a song
00:44 Net0: you make the cursor move less
00:44 Net0: creating an expetation to the player
00:44 Net0: about what's coming
00:44 Net0: good idea
00:45 Net0: now
00:45 Net0: there's one thing I don't like in your map
00:45 Kicks: yes?
00:45 Net0: TAKE THIS AS A SUGGESTION PLS
00:45 Kicks: OK
00:45 Net0: haha
00:46 Net0: I don't think your map should use as the main slider type
00:46 Net0: this type os slider
00:46 Net0: http://puu.sh/pCEzf.jpg
00:46 Net0: of*
00:46 Net0: Mainly because this sliders are used to show a smooth transition
00:46 Net0: Like
00:46 Net0: If you see a Camellia song
00:46 Net0: you will see really curved sliders
00:46 Net0: to show heavy beats and transitions
00:47 Net0: 01:20:842 (2,3,4,5) -
00:47 Net0: Like this really matches the song
00:47 Net0: but it doesn't look like the song
00:47 Net0: If that makes any sense to you
00:48 Kicks: it doesn't look like those shard snares. I gotcha
00:48 Kicks: sharp*
00:48 Net0: I'm not saying you can't use normal sliders
00:48 Net0: I'm just saying that I felt that most of the sliders were like that
00:49 Net0: and somehow the songs needs more sharp ones
00:49 Net0: like this
00:49 Net0: http://puu.sh/pCEGV.jpg
00:49 Net0: http://puu.sh/pCEHz.jpg
00:49 Net0: Btw Is mod policy that all the "compose" modding should be taken as suggestion
00:50 Net0: Is my*
00:50 Net0: ok next point
00:50 Kicks: ok
00:50 Net0: Before that
00:50 Net0: 01:27:473 (2) -
00:50 Net0: this one is a good slider for this song
00:51 Net0: 02:07:578 (3,4,5) -
00:51 Net0: you think that changing the angles of this would be ok?
00:52 Kicks: almost certainly.
00:52 Net0: like
00:52 Net0: increase 10°
00:52 Net0: for each one
00:52 Net0: should improve the flow
00:52 Net0: 02:12:000 (4) -
00:52 Net0: start a new combo
00:53 Net0: ok
00:53 Net0: this part here
00:53 Net0: 02:31:578 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) -
00:53 Net0: You have mapped in a stack way
00:53 Net0: in the beggining of the map
00:54 Net0: I believe this can and should be mapped in a different way
00:54 Net0: it's like
00:54 Net0: the map stopped the cursor movement
00:54 Kicks: ok yeah. I feel ya
00:56 Net0: 02:56:842 (1,2,3) -
00:56 Net0: the flow here
00:56 Net0: is weird
00:56 Net0: but that's just me
00:58 Net0: so far so good
00:58 Kicks: cool
00:59 Net0: 04:49:263 (1,2,1,2,3) -
00:59 Net0: This jumps are good
00:59 Net0: this one
00:59 Net0: felt weird
00:59 Net0: 04:50:210 (1,2,3) -
01:00 Net0: and the flow of this 04:50:210 (1,2,3) -
01:00 Net0: ops
01:01 Net0: not this
01:01 Net0: 04:51:157 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) -
01:01 Net0: This
01:01 Net0: is kinda weird
01:01 Net0: I got lost
01:04 Kicks: ok, fixed
01:04 Kicks: both the triangles and the got lost part
01:04 Net0: and that's it
01:05 Kicks: well that's swell
01:05 Net0: I like the map the way it is
01:05 Net0: swell?
01:05 Kicks: That's great!
01:05 Net0: Btw
01:05 Kicks: I use swell in a very joyful way
01:05 Net0: I'm not a BN so I don't mod focusing on ranking it, it's more like improving it
01:06 Net0: hope it helped you