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toby fox - Bring It In, Guys! & Last Goodbye

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年12月25日星期一 at 下午3:45:51

Artist: toby fox
Title: Bring It In, Guys! & Last Goodbye
Source: UNDERTALE
Tags: chiptune sahuang choikapo ost soundtrack radiation My Angel Azusa Compilation Anticipation Enemy Approaching Nyeh Heh Heh! sans snowy Snowdin Town Undyne An Ending Death by Glamour Another Medium Bergentrückung Fallen Down Once Upon a Time Hopes and Dreams SAVE the World
BPM: 175
Filesize: 28488kb
Play Time: 06:22
Difficulties Available:
  1. Finale (4.96 stars, 1012 notes)
Download: toby fox - Bring It In, Guys! & Last Goodbye
Download: toby fox - Bring It In, Guys! & Last Goodbye (no video)
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First rank xdd

Collab with sahuang
05:20:573 - 06:00:528

Modder
Kaitjuh
ProEzrea
wojcioool
_MiaoFUuU_
lazyboy007
Hey lululu
KuranteMelodii
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-N a n a k o-
Nerthar
- Angelia
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Naxess

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By IaKwaN Thanks you very much :D
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ppgamer
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Joined October 2015
ppgamer
This is epic!!!
(Sorry I can't mod Insane diff or higher and I can't check at story board :( )
Nakano Itsuki
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Nakano Itsuki
wa pro
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StarrStyx wrote:

wa pro
wa pro
Rieri
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Rieri
Amazing map, I'm surprised you don't have a ranked mapset yet :O

Finale
  1. First of all, it seems like the whole background is empty until 03:47:824 - maybe you should make it so that the bg shows
  2. 00:17:858 (1,3) - blanket this better
  3. 00:22:658 (1,2,3) - there's nothing to emphasize here, you should make the distance same as 00:21:972 (1,2,3) -
  4. 00:30:201 (1,2) - blanket
  5. 00:37:058 (1) - pull the tail a bit closer to 00:36:715 (4) - for better blanket
  6. 00:45:801 (4) - why nc?
  7. 00:49:401 (5) - NC here not 00:50:087 (1) - here
  8. How come you NC here 00:59:001 (1) - but not here 00:56:258 (5) - ?
  9. 01:01:058 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - hmm, I really don't understand what you're following here. You missed two notes that could have been mapped between these sliders 01:01:572 (6,8) -
  10. 01:12:545 (1,2,3,4) - same here
  11. 01:27:801 (1) - for this note, I would put a hitsound with an echo, sorta like this one. This is only a suggestion, but personally I think this sounds nice.
  12. 01:31:099 (1,1) - you choose to nc these but not this? 01:33:439 (3) - I recommend just not NC'ing there
  13. 02:44:346 (4,5,6,7,8) - woah, no wonder I broke combo here XD 02:44:437 (5) - getting rid of this could be a solution or you could turn 02:44:346 (4) - into a 1/4 slider
  14. 02:52:346 (2,3,4) - blanket
  15. 03:03:982 (2,3) - again, this gets hard to reach so I recommend making 03:04:255 (3) - into a 1/4 slider
  16. 03:30:157 - I see you tried to silence the end of the slider but actually we can still hear it. Maybe you could add the hitsound I gave you earlier and apply it on 03:28:989 - to cancel it out? I think it goes well too
  17. 04:56:906 (2) - nothing supports this repeat, make it into a low SV slider
  18. 05:20:573 (1) - Starting from here, you start abusing NC's here and there and I don't see any of them emphasizing anything.
  19. 05:29:906 (4,5,6,7) - this rhythm doesn't go well
  20. 05:43:240 (1,2,3,4) - The tension is building up, don't make all of them into sliders
  21. 05:49:906 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - yet again, tension is still building up, I think the DS could start to increase as well

Loved the hitsounds and the storyboard, just a little more work on this and bam, approved :D
Plus4j
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你做完這張時沒跟我講
ˋ^ˊ
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Hey lululu wrote:

你做完這張時沒跟我講
ˋ^ˊ
sorry XDD
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ProEzreal wrote:

Amazing map, I'm surprised you don't have a ranked mapset yet :O

Finale
  1. First of all, it seems like the whole background is empty until 03:47:824 - maybe you should make it so that the bg shows
  2. 00:17:858 (1,3) - blanket this better fixed
  3. 00:22:658 (1,2,3) - there's nothing to emphasize here, you should make the distance same as 00:21:972 (1,2,3) - fixed
  4. 00:30:201 (1,2) - blanket fixed
  5. 00:37:058 (1) - pull the tail a bit closer to 00:36:715 (4) - for better blanket fixed
  6. 00:45:801 (4) - why nc? fixed
  7. 00:49:401 (5) - NC here not 00:50:087 (1) - here fixed
  8. How come you NC here 00:59:001 (1) - but not here 00:56:258 (5) - ? fixed
  9. 01:01:058 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - hmm, I really don't understand what you're following here. You missed two notes that could have been mapped between these sliders 01:01:572 (6,8) - fixed????
  10. 01:12:545 (1,2,3,4) - same here fixed????
  11. 01:27:801 (1) - for this note, I would put a hitsound with an echo, sorta like this one. This is only a suggestion, but personally I think this sounds nice. added
  12. 01:31:099 (1,1) - you choose to nc these but not this? 01:33:439 (3) - I recommend just not NC'ing there fixed
  13. 02:44:346 (4,5,6,7,8) - woah, no wonder I broke combo here XD 02:44:437 (5) - getting rid of this could be a solution or you could turn 02:44:346 (4) - into a 1/4 slider fixed
  14. 02:52:346 (2,3,4) - blanket fixed
  15. 03:03:982 (2,3) - again, this gets hard to reach so I recommend making 03:04:255 (3) - into a 1/4 slider fixed
  16. 03:30:157 - I see you tried to silence the end of the slider but actually we can still hear it. Maybe you could add the hitsound I gave you earlier and apply it on 03:28:989 - to cancel it out? I think it goes well too fixed????
  17. 04:56:906 (2) - nothing supports this repeat, make it into a low SV slider fixed
  18. 05:20:573 (1) - Starting from here, you start abusing NC's here and there and I don't see any of them emphasizing anything. he said wait for 3 mods XD
  19. 05:29:906 (4,5,6,7) - this rhythm doesn't go well
  20. 05:43:240 (1,2,3,4) - The tension is building up, don't make all of them into sliders
  21. 05:49:906 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - yet again, tension is still building up, I think the DS could start to increase as well

Loved the hitsounds and the storyboard, just a little more work on this and bam, approved :D
Thanks for moding my map !!!!!
and i lower the video quality. the video take too many space but i don't know what can i put there
Kaitjuh
860 posts
Joined December 2012
Kaitjuh
This map is really great!

Smol Mod
Blanket fixes on:
00:11:515 (1,2) -
00:16:830 (3,4) - this one is just slightly off, so I'm kinda nazi'ing rn
00:25:058 (2,3) - slightly off too, you could use the approach circles as a blanket guide so to speak:

00:31:058 (4,1) -
00:42:201 (5,1) -
00:49:744 (2,3) -
00:54:887 (1,3) -
00:59:858 (8,9) -
01:08:087 (5,6) -
03:07:163 (3,2,3) -
04:16:073 (4,5) -
04:28:907 (4,1) -

Might wanna take care of the blankets asap to avoid getting these things in future mods x)

00:30:715 (2,4) - Stack?
01:47:920 (4,1) - This isn't properly stacked either
02:44:073 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - This spacing threw me off while playing. Maybe make this a consistently spaced stream?

Your normal-hitnormal2.wav hitsound is too short for a hitsound, as every hitsound has to be at least 100ms long.
For your video file, Remove the audio from it. The audio track will not be used, so all this does is add more filesize.

And lastly for your Storyboard remove the Black image and rescale your white image to 1366x768. This is the maximum image size allowed according to Ranking Criteria. The Black image is not needed, because as long as you have a white image you can color code it to black
 C,0,startTime,endTime,0,0,0
the 0,0,0 at the end is the color code which is black :^)

Also as a side note you might wanna add some tags like "chiptune" or name some leifmotifs that are present in the song :>
And maybe you could provide an external link in the description for a higher res video for the people who want it?

*Throws Stars*
*Runs*
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Kaitjuh wrote:

This map is really great!

Smol Mod
Blanket fixes on:
00:11:515 (1,2) - Fixed
00:16:830 (3,4) - this one is just slightly off, so I'm kinda nazi'ing rn Fixed
00:25:058 (2,3) - slightly off too, you could use the approach circles as a blanket guide so to speak: Fixed

00:31:058 (4,1) - Fixed
00:42:201 (5,1) - Fixed
00:49:744 (2,3) - Fixed
00:54:887 (1,3) - Fixed
00:59:858 (8,9) - Fixed
01:08:087 (5,6) - Fixed
03:07:163 (3,2,3) - Fixed
04:16:073 (4,5) - Fixed
04:28:907 (4,1) - Fixed

Might wanna take care of the blankets asap to avoid getting these things in future mods x)

00:30:715 (2,4) - Stack? Fixed
01:47:920 (4,1) - This isn't properly stacked either
02:44:073 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - This spacing threw me off while playing. Maybe make this a consistently spaced stream? Fixed

Your normal-hitnormal2.wav hitsound is too short for a hitsound, as every hitsound has to be at least 100ms long.
For your video file, Remove the audio from it. The audio track will not be used, so all this does is add more filesize.

And lastly for your Storyboard remove the Black image and rescale your white image to 1366x768. This is the maximum image size allowed according to Ranking Criteria. The Black image is not needed, because as long as you have a white image you can color code it to black
 C,0,startTime,endTime,0,0,0
the 0,0,0 at the end is the color code which is black :^) ???


Also as a side note you might wanna add some tags like "chiptune" or name some leifmotifs that are present in the song :> i don't know what to add QAQ
And maybe you could provide an external link in the description for a higher res video for the people who want it? ialready change it :D

*Throws Stars*
*Runs*
*take ur stars*
*runs*
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Lully
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Joined September 2013
Lully
wanted to mod this

but i dun want to anymore.

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star.
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CookieKivi wrote:

wanted to mod this

but i dun want to anymore.

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star.
Thanks For your stars :)
wojciooo
28 posts
Joined July 2013
wojciooo
combo
00:39:801 (3) - Nc
00:50:601 (4) - might be NC
00:56:944 (1) - maybe delete nc ? (but its ok if you let it be)
00:59:001 (4) - nc
01:15:115 (1) - remove nc and move it to next slider?
01:15:458 (2) - NC
01:23:687 (3) - nc
01:39:290 (2) - you could add here nc to make it look better
02:49:164 (3) - nc
03:44:557 (5) - maybe nc?
04:41:240 (9) - move nc here
06:04:708 (2) - nc maybe
02:50:255 (5) - and here might be nc


circles
00:41:172 (1,2) - maybe small jumps instead of stack?
00:45:458 (2,3) - i would change the pattern here
01:06:887 (4,1) - this overlap feels bad
03:11:346 (2,3) - overlap looks ugly
03:14:255 (2,3) - also here
03:28:189 (2,3) - overlap ;-;
04:27:740 (8,1) - guess what
03:32:099 (3) - maybe slider here?
04:07:148 (1) - i would make it more cricle like
Good map, good luck :>
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wojciooo wrote:

combo
00:39:801 (3) - Nc Fixed !!
00:50:601 (4) - might be NC Fixed !!
00:56:944 (1) - maybe delete nc ? (but its ok if you let it be) Fixed !!
00:59:001 (4) - ncFixed !!
01:15:115 (1) - remove nc and move it to next slider?Fixed !!
01:15:458 (2) - NCFixed !!
01:23:687 (3) - ncFixed !!
01:39:290 (2) - you could add here nc to make it look betterFixed !!
02:49:164 (3) - ncFixed !!
03:44:557 (5) - maybe nc?Fixed !!
04:41:240 (9) - move nc hereFixed !!
06:04:708 (2) - nc maybeFixed !!
02:50:255 (5) - and here might be ncFixed !!


circles
00:41:172 (1,2) - maybe small jumps instead of stack?ummm... i think i will keep it
00:45:458 (2,3) - i would change the pattern hereFixed !!
01:06:887 (4,1) - this overlap feels badFixed !!
03:11:346 (2,3) - overlap looks uglyFixed !!
03:14:255 (2,3) - also hereFixed !!
03:28:189 (2,3) - overlap ;-;Fixed !!
04:27:740 (8,1) - guess whatFixed !! XD
03:32:099 (3) - maybe slider here? sorry but... no ;w;
04:07:148 (1) - i would make it more cricle likeFixed !!
Good map, good luck :>
finding NM mod is very hard.Thanks for you help ;w;
AngeLNarancia
AngeLNarancia
This is so Beautiful!
Good map!
Waiting Ranked. uvu
Akasha-
Nomination Assessment Team
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Akasha-
OMG, video spoiler D:
remove it please
actually, this video quality is really bad

but this map is great, keep going
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Kuo Kyoka wrote:

OMG, video spoiler D:
remove it please
actually, this video quality is really bad

but this map is great, keep going
I know the video quality is bad I really want to make it better.but 24MB is maximum.but I won't remove the video even it was spoilers XD
sahuang
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sahuang

ProEzreal wrote:

05:20:573 (1) - Starting from here, you start abusing NC's here and there and I don't see any of them emphasizing anything.
i think so,so changed
05:29:906 (4,5,6,7) - this rhythm doesn't go well yes
05:43:240 (1,2,3,4) - The tension is building up, don't make all of them into sliders
05:49:906 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - yet again, tension is still building up, I think the DS could start to increase as well
remapped some of them,and ds is increased

wojciooo wrote:

combo
06:04:708 (2) - nc maybe
pls no,the bpm change is really small (<10),so no need to spam NC
thx

I also change some NC in the last part, cuz bpm change is so neglectable.

the code is from 05:20:573 - to the end of the song
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sahuang wrote:

ProEzreal wrote:

05:20:573 (1) - Starting from here, you start abusing NC's here and there and I don't see any of them emphasizing anything.
i think so,so changed
05:29:906 (4,5,6,7) - this rhythm doesn't go well yes
05:43:240 (1,2,3,4) - The tension is building up, don't make all of them into sliders
05:49:906 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - yet again, tension is still building up, I think the DS could start to increase as well
remapped some of them,and ds is increased

wojciooo wrote:

combo
06:04:708 (2) - nc maybe
pls no,the bpm change is really small (<10),so no need to spam NC
thx

I also change some NC in the last part, cuz bpm change is so neglectable.

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Hi NM（Forum req）

Finale

  1. 00:06:887 (1) - put it to x：312 y：136 to blanket with 00:06:372 (4) - and 00:07:402 (3) - put it to x：432 y:212
  2. 00:20:087 (4,2) - stack
  3. 00:30:201 (1,2,3) - ↑
  4. 00:38:430 (5) - NC and del NC 00:39:115 (1) -
  5. 00:42:715 (6) - 00:42:887 (1) - ↑
  6. 00:44:087 (5) - NC
  7. 00:46:658 (1,3) - stack
  8. 00:50:087 (3,3) - ↑
  9. 00:56:258 (1) - take it to x：408 y：292 blanket
  10. 00:59:001 (1,6) - stack at 00:59:001 (1) -
  11. 01:01:744 - 01:02:430 - suggest do not pass this rhythm tick like 01:05:858 (1,3,4) - ，and this part 01:00:372 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - NC need fixed
  12. 01:09:115 (2) - take it to x：192 y：384 blanket？
  13. 01:12:545 (1,3) - same
  14. 01:15:458 (1,3) - stack
  15. 01:48:066 (1) - ↑
  16. 02:07:374 (5,1) - stack
  17. 04:14:907 - add a red line because here is strong sound's begin（big white tick）,so 04:41:573 (2) - NC，check this part NC
  18. 04:16:073 (4,5) - this flow suggest change
  19. 04:18:240 (4,2) - stack
  20. 05:29:739 - i think here should be have click， so you can change rhythm place 05:29:406 (6,7) - ctrl+g,05:29:406 - don't forget hitsound

Nice map,star,good luck！
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_MiaoFUuU_ wrote:

Hi NM（Forum req）

Finale

  1. 00:06:887 (1) - put it to x：312 y：136 to blanket with 00:06:372 (4) - and 00:07:402 (3) - put it to x：432 y:212
  2. 00:20:087 (4,2) - stack
  3. 00:30:201 (1,2,3) - ↑
  4. 00:38:430 (5) - NC and del NC 00:39:115 (1) -
  5. 00:42:715 (6) - 00:42:887 (1) - ↑
  6. 00:44:087 (5) - NC
  7. 00:46:658 (1,3) - stack
  8. 00:50:087 (3,3) - ↑
  9. 00:56:258 (1) - take it to x：408 y：292 blanket
  10. 00:59:001 (1,6) - stack at 00:59:001 (1) -
  11. 01:01:744 - 01:02:430 - suggest do not pass this rhythm tick like 01:05:858 (1,3,4) - ，and this part 01:00:372 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - NC need fixed
  12. 01:09:115 (2) - take it to x：192 y：384 blanket？
  13. 01:12:545 (1,3) - same
  14. 01:15:458 (1,3) - stack
  15. 01:48:066 (1) - ↑
  16. 02:07:374 (5,1) - stack
  17. 04:14:907 - add a red line because here is strong sound's begin（big white tick）,so 04:41:573 (2) - NC，check this part NC
  18. 04:16:073 (4,5) - this flow suggest change
  19. 04:18:240 (4,2) - stack
  20. 05:29:739 - i think here should be have click， so you can change rhythm place 05:29:406 (6,7) - ctrl+g,05:29:406 - don't forget hitsound

Nice map,star,good luck！
all fixed Thanks for your mod!! :)
lazygirl
506 posts
Joined February 2016
lazygirl
Hey from modding queue for NM!

00:55:401 (2,3) - blanket
00:59:858 (5,6,3) - banket
01:06:887 (4) - missing clap
01:30:514 (1) - damn that melody's so good
02:17:891 (5,1) - these two overlap a bit much but eh this is a 5* diff it's fine
02:21:528 (1) - I don't like this feels undermapped here ;p
02:24:437 (1) - ^
and same for 02:27:346 (1) -
03:04:800 (1,1) - maybe reduce stacking value to avoid this?
03:15:710 (2,4,5,6) - stacks weirdly
04:35:907 (5) - missing hitsound maybe on purpose doe ^^

SICK mapset. Take my stars :D
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lazyboy007 wrote:

Hey from modding queue for NM!

00:55:401 (2,3) - blanket fixed
00:59:858 (5,6,3) - banket can't banket anymore ;w;
01:06:887 (4) - missing clap fixed
01:30:514 (1) - damn that melody's so good Thanks lol
02:17:891 (5,1) - these two overlap a bit much but eh this is a 5* diff it's fine fixed
02:21:528 (1) - I don't like this feels undermapped here ;p I don't know what to map here :(
02:24:437 (1) - ^
and same for 02:27:346 (1) -
03:04:800 (1,1) - maybe reduce stacking value to avoid this? fixed
03:15:710 (2,4,5,6) - stacks weirdly fixed
04:35:907 (5) - missing hitsound maybe on purpose doe ^^ ?

SICK mapset. Take my stars :D
HOLY SHIT thanks for your 5 stars :)
Plus4j
Beatmap Nominator
1,091 posts
Joined March 2014
Plus4j
Hello from your game chat (NM)

:W: OWO OAO OUO ;w; Oxo OLO odo oHo

[Finale]
00:04:316 (2,3,4,5) - 距離太遠了，而且我覺得這不是個好擺放，follow如下圖，建議00:04:658 (5) - 把這個弄成直的
SPOILER
00:11:515 (1,2,3) - blanket沒弄好
00:26:601 (4) - 建議弄成直的
00:31:058 (4) - 滑條頭少了clap
00:49:744 (2,3) - blanket沒弄好
00:56:258 (1) - 這滑條沒有對稱也導致00:56:086 (4,1) - 這兩個blanket也沒弄好
01:08:601 (1) - 1滑條尾跟01:09:115 (2) - 這個距離跟01:09:458 (3,4) - 這兩個距離不一樣，弄成一樣的會比較好
01:05:172 (3,4,1) - ^
01:11:172 (6,1,2) - blanket沒弄好
01:11:344 (1) - 這裡的SV建議用0.8x這裡屬於比較慢的地方
01:30:514 (1) - 這邊開始如果是我我會把像這種的01:30:514 (1,2,3) - 每一段的第一個滑條弄得很快，第二個比較慢第三個就適當
02:45:891 (1,2,3,4) - 這裡造型沒做好，哪沒沒做好不用我說吧，你應該看得出來
02:48:800 (1,2) - 為何這邊有特別的NC?
03:15:346 (1,2,3) - 這裡造型也沒做好
03:28:989 (3) - 弄個藝術吧，直滑條這樣好乾
03:35:986 (1,2) - blanket沒弄好
03:47:824 (1,2,3) - 這邊犯了兩個我說的錯誤，可以往回看
03:53:041 (3) - 這波浪滑條也沒對稱
04:22:240 (7,1) - blanket沒弄好
04:28:907 (4,1) - ^
04:39:573 (3,4) - ^
04:42:240 (3,4,1) - 我想這邊是波浪讓兩個滑條blanket吧，但很明顯是失敗了
04:47:406 (3,4) - blanket沒弄好
04:56:240 (1,2) - ^
05:24:406 (1) - 這滑條為什麼這樣灣?我沒有看到任何這樣灣的用意
06:00:500 (1,2) - blanket沒弄好
06:01:480 (3,4) - ^
06:08:355 (1,1) - ^

總體來講滑條用得不錯，但很多造型沒弄好，還有小小的SV錯誤

這張圖很神奇的NC問題非常少
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Hey lululu wrote:

Hello from your game chat (NM)

:W: OWO OAO OUO ;w; Oxo OLO odo oHo

[Finale]
00:04:316 (2,3,4,5) - 距離太遠了，而且我覺得這不是個好擺放，follow如下圖，建議00:04:658 (5) - 把這個弄成直的 no
SPOILER
00:11:515 (1,2,3) - blanket沒弄好 K
00:26:601 (4) - 建議弄成直的no
00:31:058 (4) - 滑條頭少了clap K
00:49:744 (2,3) - blanket沒弄好 K
00:56:258 (1) - 這滑條沒有對稱也導致00:56:086 (4,1) - 這兩個blanket也沒弄好?
01:08:601 (1) - 1滑條尾跟01:09:115 (2) - 這個距離跟01:09:458 (3,4) - 這兩個距離不一樣，弄成一樣的會比較好 ?
01:05:172 (3,4,1) - ^ ?
01:11:172 (6,1,2) - blanket沒弄好 K
01:11:344 (1) - 這裡的SV建議用0.8x這裡屬於比較慢的地方 no
01:30:514 (1) - 這邊開始如果是我我會把像這種的01:30:514 (1,2,3) - 每一段的第一個滑條弄得很快，第二個比較慢第三個就適當 no,
02:45:891 (1,2,3,4) - 這裡造型沒做好，哪沒沒做好不用我說吧，你應該看得出來 K
02:48:800 (1,2) - 為何這邊有特別的NC? K
03:15:346 (1,2,3) - 這裡造型也沒做好?
03:28:989 (3) - 弄個藝術吧，直滑條這樣好乾 K
03:35:986 (1,2) - blanket沒弄好 K
03:47:824 (1,2,3) - 這邊犯了兩個我說的錯誤，可以往回看 no
03:53:041 (3) - 這波浪滑條也沒對稱 no
04:22:240 (7,1) - blanket沒弄好 K
04:28:907 (4,1) - ^ K
04:39:573 (3,4) - ^ K
04:42:240 (3,4,1) - 我想這邊是波浪讓兩個滑條blanket吧，但很明顯是失敗了 K
04:47:406 (3,4) - blanket沒弄好 K
04:56:240 (1,2) - ^ K
05:24:406 (1) - 這滑條為什麼這樣灣?我沒有看到任何這樣灣的用意
06:00:500 (1,2) - blanket沒弄好 K
06:01:480 (3,4) - ^ K
06:08:355 (1,1) - ^ K

總體來講滑條用得不錯，但很多造型沒弄好，還有小小的SV錯誤

這張圖很神奇的NC問題非常少
want to sleep zzz
-Atri-
3,049 posts
Joined March 2013
-Atri-
As requested

  1. Add "choikapo" to your tags since you ranked a map with old name
  2. 00:17:858 (1,2) - nazi, the blacket is slightly off
  3. 00:20:087 (4) - Turn into Circle+ 1/2 slider so follow the drum at the white tick
  4. 01:19:572 (1) - Maybe turn into 2 4/1 slider? having a long slider to have so many return arrows feels meh for me
  5. 01:25:058 (1) - ^
  6. 01:50:796 (5,6,1,2,3,1) - The 1/3 stream is easy to get missed because it can be misread as 1/4 as 01:49:821 (2,3,4) - , same goes to 01:54:502 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1) - and later patterns
  7. 03:04:800 (1) - Remove NC?
  8. 05:47:906 (5) - 05:49:239 (5) - NC? to make consistency

Sorry for short mod

GL~
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KuranteMelodii wrote:

As requested

  1. Add "choikapo" to your tags since you ranked a map with old name fixed !
  2. 00:17:858 (1,2) - nazi, the blacket is slightly off fixed !
  3. 00:20:087 (4) - Turn into Circle+ 1/2 slider so follow the drum at the white tick fixed !
  4. 01:19:572 (1) - Maybe turn into 2 4/1 slider? having a long slider to have so many return arrows feels meh for me that's alright
  5. 01:25:058 (1) - ^
  6. 01:50:796 (5,6,1,2,3,1) - The 1/3 stream is easy to get missed because it can be misread as 1/4 as 01:49:821 (2,3,4) - , same goes to 01:54:502 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1) - and later patterns fixed !
  7. 03:04:800 (1) - Remove NC? fixed !
  8. 05:47:906 (5) - 05:49:239 (5) - NC? to make consistency fixed !

Sorry for short mod

GL~
Thanks for your mod XD
ppgamer
85 posts
Joined October 2015
ppgamer
About your video. You should use vlc media player and follow these step: http://www.howtogeek.com/65505/how-to-s ... -with-vlc/ this should make your video use less memory without making your video render too bad!
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ppgamer wrote:

About your video. You should use vlc media player and follow these step: http://www.howtogeek.com/65505/how-to-s ... -with-vlc/ this should make your video use less memory without making your video render too bad!
Thanks!!!
i will do it before it rank :D
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
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Joined December 2011
yf_bmp
mark first
sahuang
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Joined December 2014
sahuang
remap
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MisterDinner
107 posts
Joined November 2014
MisterDinner
nm

rfef
this should be named something other than what it is, because death by glamour and that other thing are in here.
00:52:144 (1) - move this over so the end is overlapping the start of the previous slider
im really paying attention, i cant see anything, but this does have like 3 pages of mods.
02:09:129 (2) - place the start inside of the previous slider's bend
02:10:299 (1) - take this one , tilt in 90 degrees clockwise and then place it around the and of the previous
02:21:528 (1) - the sliders starting here shouldnt be here, since the part before follows the background, theres no reason to switch instrument if its still there.
06:04:708 (2) - snap the end to the next blue tick
you need to turn the tick rate up to be able to have that outro.

good map.
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558 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
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MisterDinner wrote:

nm

rfef
this should be named something other than what it is, because death by glamour and that other thing are in here.
00:52:144 (1) - move this over so the end is overlapping the start of the previous slider Fixed
im really paying attention, i cant see anything, but this does have like 3 pages of mods.
02:09:129 (2) - place the start inside of the previous slider's bend ? Why
02:10:299 (1) - take this one , tilt in 90 degrees clockwise and then place it around the and of the previous Fixed
02:21:528 (1) - the sliders starting here shouldnt be here, since the part before follows the background, theres no reason to switch instrument if its still there. I Think that's just the PV problem
06:04:708 (2) - snap the end to the next blue tickFixed
you need to turn the tick rate up to be able to have that outro.Fixed

good map.
About the title
-N a n a k o-
503 posts
Joined February 2012
-N a n a k o-
log
2016-09-09 22:52 [ Drop ]: hi
2016-09-09 22:52 [ Drop ]: OAOAOAOAOAOAOAOAOAOAOLLAOAOAO
2016-09-09 23:08 -N a n a k o-: hi
2016-09-09 23:08 [ Drop ]: can you mod now ;w;
2016-09-09 23:08 [ Drop ]: ?
2016-09-09 23:09 -N a n a k o-: mod what
2016-09-09 23:09 [ Drop ]: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/976159 toby fox - Bring It In, Guys! & Last Goodbye]
2016-09-09 23:10 -N a n a k o-: :o
2016-09-09 23:10 [ Drop ]: plz ;w;
2016-09-09 23:14 -N a n a k o-: 00:23:344 (1) - 我覺得呢到個DS太近, 因為前面個pattern起碼都明顯知道個Note個音係邊, 但係呢到就唔太明顯, 有機會令人早撳
2016-09-09 23:14 [ Drop ]: okay Fixed :3
2016-09-09 23:16 -N a n a k o-: how to mod your map
2016-09-09 23:17 -N a n a k o-: 01:55:477 (5,6,1) - 個人認為呢到整大個Distance比較靚仔
2016-09-09 23:18 [ Drop ]: okay :D
2016-09-09 23:18 -N a n a k o-: 01:56:257 (1) - sorry for 強迫症 QAQ, check out 01:55:672 (1) - this slider
2016-09-09 23:19 [ Drop ]: don't sorry
2016-09-09 23:19 [ Drop ]: it's my bad lol
2016-09-09 23:19 [ Drop ]: ficed !
2016-09-09 23:19 [ Drop ]: x
2016-09-09 23:19 -N a n a k o-: 02:00:158 (5) - 唔對住個6?
2016-09-09 23:20 -N a n a k o-: 02:17:346 (3,4) - bad flow
2016-09-09 23:20 [ Drop ]: yes XD
2016-09-09 23:21 [ Drop ]: okay
2016-09-09 23:22 -N a n a k o-: 03:08:437 (2) - stack with 7 will be better look
2016-09-09 23:23 -N a n a k o-: 03:17:437 (3) - stack?
2016-09-09 23:23 [ Drop ]: jmmm
2016-09-09 23:23 [ Drop ]: hmm
2016-09-09 23:24 [ Drop ]: i don't want to stack them XP
2016-09-09 23:24 -N a n a k o-: ok
2016-09-09 23:25 -N a n a k o-: 05:31:572 (2) - 點解無啦啦有Whistle
2016-09-09 23:26 [ Drop ]: a
2016-09-09 23:26 [ Drop ]: Sorry XD
2016-09-09 23:26 [ Drop ]: deleted Xp
2016-09-09 23:26 -N a n a k o-: can't mod too much
2016-09-09 23:26 -N a n a k o-: that's all
2016-09-09 23:27 [ Drop ]: okay\
2016-09-09 23:27 [ Drop ]: post that in thread :3
2016-09-09 23:27 -N a n a k o-: god mapper kapo
2016-09-09 23:27 [ Drop ]: D:

唔識mod
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558 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
[ Drop ]

-N a n a k o- wrote:

log
2016-09-09 22:52 [ Drop ]: hi
2016-09-09 22:52 [ Drop ]: OAOAOAOAOAOAOAOAOAOAOLLAOAOAO
2016-09-09 23:08 -N a n a k o-: hi
2016-09-09 23:08 [ Drop ]: can you mod now ;w;
2016-09-09 23:08 [ Drop ]: ?
2016-09-09 23:09 -N a n a k o-: mod what
2016-09-09 23:09 [ Drop ]: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/976159 toby fox - Bring It In, Guys! & Last Goodbye]
2016-09-09 23:10 -N a n a k o-: :o
2016-09-09 23:10 [ Drop ]: plz ;w;
2016-09-09 23:14 -N a n a k o-: 00:23:344 (1) - 我覺得呢到個DS太近, 因為前面個pattern起碼都明顯知道個Note個音係邊, 但係呢到就唔太明顯, 有機會令人早撳
2016-09-09 23:14 [ Drop ]: okay Fixed :3
2016-09-09 23:16 -N a n a k o-: how to mod your map
2016-09-09 23:17 -N a n a k o-: 01:55:477 (5,6,1) - 個人認為呢到整大個Distance比較靚仔
2016-09-09 23:18 [ Drop ]: okay :D
2016-09-09 23:18 -N a n a k o-: 01:56:257 (1) - sorry for 強迫症 QAQ, check out 01:55:672 (1) - this slider
2016-09-09 23:19 [ Drop ]: don't sorry
2016-09-09 23:19 [ Drop ]: it's my bad lol
2016-09-09 23:19 [ Drop ]: ficed !
2016-09-09 23:19 [ Drop ]: x
2016-09-09 23:19 -N a n a k o-: 02:00:158 (5) - 唔對住個6?
2016-09-09 23:20 -N a n a k o-: 02:17:346 (3,4) - bad flow
2016-09-09 23:20 [ Drop ]: yes XD
2016-09-09 23:21 [ Drop ]: okay
2016-09-09 23:22 -N a n a k o-: 03:08:437 (2) - stack with 7 will be better look
2016-09-09 23:23 -N a n a k o-: 03:17:437 (3) - stack?
2016-09-09 23:23 [ Drop ]: jmmm
2016-09-09 23:23 [ Drop ]: hmm
2016-09-09 23:24 [ Drop ]: i don't want to stack them XP
2016-09-09 23:24 -N a n a k o-: ok
2016-09-09 23:25 -N a n a k o-: 05:31:572 (2) - 點解無啦啦有Whistle
2016-09-09 23:26 [ Drop ]: a
2016-09-09 23:26 [ Drop ]: Sorry XD
2016-09-09 23:26 [ Drop ]: deleted Xp
2016-09-09 23:26 -N a n a k o-: can't mod too much
2016-09-09 23:26 -N a n a k o-: that's all
2016-09-09 23:27 [ Drop ]: okay\
2016-09-09 23:27 [ Drop ]: post that in thread :3
2016-09-09 23:27 -N a n a k o-: god mapper kapo
2016-09-09 23:27 [ Drop ]: D:

唔識mod
Thanks for our pro nnk mod
Nerthar
67 posts
Joined May 2014
Nerthar
First of all, I'd like to say that you did a very good job on this map, here's my mod, might be little, this is a fast check and those are mostly suggestion (especially about overlap fixing that don't look good), so take what you want :o

Finale
00:05:172 (7,3) - Blanket could be better if you move 00:04:658 (5,6,7) - a bit more on the right
00:18:372 (3,4,5) - More like this ? http://puu.sh/r7sCH/f57adc0e1a.jpg
00:18:887 (4) - NC
00:19:230 (1) - Remove NC
00:25:058 (2) - Ctrl+Shift+R, Selection Centre, 20°
00:27:458 (1,2,3,4) - Move this a bit on the right so 1 doesn't overlap with 00:27:115 (5) -
00:56:086 (4,1) - Blanket could be a little bit better
01:12:545 (1,3,4) - A bit moved to the right, so 1 is in the middle of 01:12:030 (3,4) -
From 01:16:830 (1) - to 01:27:801 (1) - , it feels really empty for a 5*, you should consider reworking it and maybe following a bit of 1/2 beat
01:30:514 (1,2,3) - Spacing those a bit ? Maybe 1.0x or 1.1x
01:31:684 (1,2,3) - ^
01:32:854 (1,2,3) - ^, won't point this anymore
01:39:875 - 02:07:764 - Increasing a little bit SV ? Maybe 1.1x ? (I'd understand if you don't tbh)
Didn't find anything between 2 and 4:30 mins, this part was pretty cool
04:44:906 (3,4) - Space a bit from 04:45:573 (1) -
04:45:573 (1,2) - Isn't it confusing ?
06:06:317 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - This part looks cool, but what about placing circles instead of long sliders that don't always make sense ? (Or maybe reducing sliders length
sahuang
2,294 posts
Joined December 2014
sahuang
Long sliders in the end are really cool, so no need to change :)
Nerthar
67 posts
Joined May 2014
Nerthar

sahuang wrote:

Long sliders in the end are really cool, so no need to change :)
Yup I agree, was jusht wondering if anything could be mapped instead, and didn't find anything tbh
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558 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
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Nerthar wrote:

First of all, I'd like to say that you did a very good job on this map, here's my mod, might be little, this is a fast check and those are mostly suggestion (especially about overlap fixing that don't look good), so take what you want :o

Finale
00:05:172 (7,3) - Blanket could be better if you move 00:04:658 (5,6,7) - a bit more on the right Fixed
00:18:372 (3,4,5) - More like this ? http://puu.sh/r7sCH/f57adc0e1a.jpgFixed
00:18:887 (4) - NC Why
00:19:230 (1) - Remove NC Why
00:25:058 (2) - Ctrl+Shift+R, Selection Centre, 20°Fixed,another way
00:27:458 (1,2,3,4) - Move this a bit on the right so 1 doesn't overlap with 00:27:115 (5) - Fixed
00:56:086 (4,1) - Blanket could be a little bit betterFixed
01:12:545 (1,3,4) - A bit moved to the right, so 1 is in the middle of 01:12:030 (3,4) - Fixed
From 01:16:830 (1) - to 01:27:801 (1) - , it feels really empty for a 5*, you should consider reworking it and maybe following a bit of 1/2 beat Just giving people a rest XD
01:30:514 (1,2,3) - Spacing those a bit ? Maybe 1.0x or 1.1x ummm probably no
01:31:684 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:32:854 (1,2,3) - ^, won't point this anymore ^
01:39:875 - 02:07:764 - Increasing a little bit SV ? Maybe 1.1x ? (I'd understand if you don't tbh) ^
Didn't find anything between 2 and 4:30 mins, this part was pretty cool
04:44:906 (3,4) - Space a bit from 04:45:573 (1) - Fixed
04:45:573 (1,2) - Isn't it confusing ? Fixed
06:06:317 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - This part looks cool, but what about placing circles instead of long sliders that don't always make sense ? (Or maybe reducing sliders length Same as sahuang said
Thanks for your mod :D
- Angelia
118 posts
Joined August 2013
- Angelia

辣鸡摸
00:11:344 (3) - 可以加一个clap 不过感觉这里整体声音很小 也没啥用
00:33:630 (1) - 这根绿线的声音调成30%吧 个人感觉。
00:44:258 (2) - 可能是幻听 感觉调成65%左右比较好 感觉有点声音大了
03:49:563 (3,1) - 打的时候感觉这两个靠在一起了 有点损美观的感觉
04:07:148 (1) - 推荐最后静音
05:36:239 (6) - ctrl+G
05:49:905 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 感觉这个跳不好 单纯的打不顺（是我太弱了吗）
06:22:551 (1) - 如果有精力的话改改这个滑条应该会更好(maybe-w-)
强

内心写照
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558 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
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- Angelia wrote:


辣鸡摸
00:11:344 (3) - 可以加一个clap 不过感觉这里整体声音很小 也没啥用 yeah
00:33:630 (1) - 这根绿线的声音调成30%吧 个人感觉。
00:44:258 (2) - 可能是幻听 感觉调成65%左右比较好 感觉有点声音大了
03:49:563 (3,1) - 打的时候感觉这两个靠在一起了 有点损美观的感觉
04:07:148 (1) - 推荐最后静音
05:36:239 (6) - ctrl+G
05:49:905 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 感觉这个跳不好 单纯的打不顺（是我太弱了吗）
06:22:551 (1) - 如果有精力的话改改这个滑条应该会更好(maybe-w-)
强

内心写照
Thanks for your mod!
LittleFox
69 posts
Joined May 2012
LittleFox
02:10:299 (1) - I guess this slider is way too out of the mapping area (Ingame is noticeable)
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558 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
[ Drop ]

LittleFox wrote:

02:10:299 (1) - I guess this slider is way too out of the mapping area (Ingame is noticeable)
it's not a problem if you can play it
sahuang
2,294 posts
Joined December 2014
sahuang
05:20:573 - till the end

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Kaitjuh
860 posts
Joined December 2012
Kaitjuh

LittleFox wrote:

02:10:299 (1) - I guess this slider is way too out of the mapping area (Ingame is noticeable)
As long as it's not offscreen it's not a problem iirc
On a standard sized window
GIDZ
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Joined January 2013
GIDZ
Hi
  1. 01:50:991 (1) - Remove NC, I misread and thought they were separate or smth
  2. 01:55:477 (5,6,7) - U sure u want to overlap these?
  3. 01:55:672 (1) - ^ and add NC at 01:56:257 (4) -
  4. 02:21:528 (1) - I think this slider is much better without overlapping
  5. 02:24:437 (1) - ^
  6. 02:30:255 (1) - Why suddenly no more shape here? :<
  7. 02:36:437 (2,3) - Why not stack on slider heads? The overlap looks bad imo.
  8. 02:44:527 (6,7,8) - I think u could curve this down a bit more cuz 02:44:346 (4,5,6) - are rly curved
  9. 03:07:890 (7,2) - why no stack ;-;
  10. 03:49:563 (3,1) - uhhh lol this overlap xd I could see it during gameplay
  11. 04:19:573 (3,4,5,6) - This plays poorly in a slow song imo, maybe ctrl G 04:19:739 (4,5) - ?
  12. 04:21:573 (5,6) - Why are these spaced further than 04:20:240 (1,2) - in the same combo?
  13. 04:24:740 (2,3,4,5,6) - Flow's a bit off here when playing imo, why not 04:24:907 (3,6) - ctrl G and 04:25:073 (4,5) - ctrl G?
  14. 04:27:240 (6,8) - I think these will flow better if curved
  15. 04:30:240 (3,4,5,6) - This doesnt flow well imo cuz 04:29:573 (1,2) - has linear flow, therefore I think the jumps should stick to linear flow as well. Maybe try http://puu.sh/soNw5/d129ec3fc8.jpg ?
  16. 04:34:240 (3,4) - Why suddenly large spacing here? Snare sound is at 04:34:573 - lol. Reduce spacing?
  17. 04:42:907 (1) - Missing whistle
  18. 05:41:906 (1) - Move this closer to 05:41:572 (6) - a bit? Looks better imo
  19. 05:46:239 (2) - Theres whistle on slider body lol
  20. 06:15:625 (1) - Remove the curl? :< Just to have a clearer slider path

GL~
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- G I D Z - wrote:

Hi
  1. 01:50:991 (1) - Remove NC, I misread and thought they were separate or smth
  2. 01:55:477 (5,6,7) - U sure u want to overlap these?
  3. 01:55:672 (1) - ^ and add NC at 01:56:257 (4) -
  4. 02:21:528 (1) - I think this slider is much better without overlapping
  5. 02:24:437 (1) - ^
  6. 02:30:255 (1) - Why suddenly no more shape here? :<
  7. 02:36:437 (2,3) - Why not stack on slider heads? The overlap looks bad imo.
  8. 02:44:527 (6,7,8) - I think u could curve this down a bit more cuz 02:44:346 (4,5,6) - are rly curved
  9. 03:07:890 (7,2) - why no stack ;-; 03:08:073 (1,2) - blanket /me run
  10. 03:49:563 (3,1) - uhhh lol this overlap xd I could see it during gameplay shiiiiii
  11. 04:19:573 (3,4,5,6) - This plays poorly in a slow song imo, maybe ctrl G 04:19:739 (4,5) - ?nope.i think i'll keep that
  12. 04:21:573 (5,6) - Why are these spaced further than 04:20:240 (1,2) - in the same combo?
  13. 04:24:740 (2,3,4,5,6) - Flow's a bit off here when playing imo, why not 04:24:907 (3,6) - ctrl G and 04:25:073 (4,5) - ctrl G?
  14. 04:27:240 (6,8) - I think these will flow better if curvedis beautiful <3
  15. 04:30:240 (3,4,5,6) - This doesnt flow well imo cuz 04:29:573 (1,2) - has linear flow, therefore I think the jumps should stick to linear flow as well. Maybe try http://puu.sh/soNw5/d129ec3fc8.jpg ?
  16. 04:34:240 (3,4) - Why suddenly large spacing here? Snare sound is at 04:34:573 - lol. Reduce spacing?
  17. 04:42:907 (1) - Missing whistle
  18. 05:41:906 (1) - Move this closer to 05:41:572 (6) - a bit? Looks better imo
  19. 05:46:239 (2) - Theres whistle on slider body lol
  20. 06:15:625 (1) - Remove the curl? :< Just to have a clearer slider path

GL~
others fixed,thx for your mod :3
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