1. Easy (1.34 stars, 218 notes)
2. Hard (3.41 stars, 524 notes)
3. Normal (2.19 stars, 349 notes)

w1dth wrote:

EASY

Song Setup

1.To lower the Approach Rate - Very high for easy difficulty -- done
2.Add Combo Colours -- is it fine now?
3.Add hitsound -- I don't really know how to do it, will figure out later

Design

Size your background 1365x768 recommended size of 1024x768 -- ?

Compose

00:25:312 (1,2,3) - Different distance -- Fixed
00:30:000 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Very Close -- Fixed
00:36:562 (1,2,3,4,5) - Starts on 00:37:500 -- Don't know if I understood right, probably fixed
00:39:843 (8) - Starts on 00:40:312 -- I don't understand but I think it's fine as it is
00:42:656 - Empty beat -- You mean to add a circle? If so, then fixed
00:47:812 (6) - closes 00:48:750 (1)
00:50:156 - Empty beat -- Fixed
00:54:375 (2) - Starts on 00:53:906 -- Don't really understand but I think it's fine now
00:57:656 - Empty beat -- Fixed
01:18:281 (4,5,6) - Different distance -- Fixed?
01:55:312 (2) - Closes 01:56:718 (3) -- Don't really get what you mean
02:38:906 (3) - Long slider -- Changed into repeat slider
02:41:250 (1) - Add circle -- Added
03:06:093 - Empty beat -- Added long slider to fit the music
03:13:593 - Empty beat -- ^
03:17:812 (4,5,1) - Different distance -- Fixed?
03:30:000 (1) - Add circle -- Added
03:36:093 - Empty beat -- Added a circle
03:37:968 (4) - Closes 03:37:031 (3) -- Don't really get what you mean

Normal

Song Setup

1.To lower the circle size -- You mean 3 -> 2 or visually? Lowered it visually (to 3.5).
2.Add hit sound -- Gotta learn how to do it

Design

Size your background 1365x768 recommended size of 1024x768

Compose

00:30:937 (4) - Not a smooth -- Fixed?
00:48:750 (6,1) - swap -- Done

00:50:625 (1) - Delete replay slider and add circle -- Done
00:17:812 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not a smooth -- Fixed?
00:55:312 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - does not match the rhythm -- Fixed?
00:58:593 (10) - Delete replay slider and add circle (does not match the rhythm) -- ^
01:15:937 (4) - Not a smooth -- Fixed
01:43:359 (1,2,3,4) - Different distance -- I think it goes well with lowered volume of the song
01:50:859 - Empty beat -- I think it's ok
01:50:156 (2,3,4) - does not match the rhythm -- ^
02:31:875 (1,2) - swap -- Done

03:00:703 (2,3,4) - not a smooth -- Fixed
03:05:859 (4,5,1,2) - Different distance -- I think it goes well with lowered volume of the song
03:13:359 (2,3,4,5) - Different distance -- ^
03:17:109 (1) - not a smooth -- Probably fixed
03:33:515 (1) - Delete replay slider and add circle (does not match the rhythm) -- Changed it a bit

Hard

Compose

00:17:578 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not a smooth -- Fixed
00:39:140 (4) - delete slider add circle(slider in circle part) -- Fixed?
00:40:312 (3,4,5) - does not match the rhythm (add 00:40:546 circle) -- Fixed
00:50:859 (3,4,5) - does not match the rhythm (use only 1 circle) -- Done
00:52:265 - Empty beat -- Fixed
00:54:609 (8,9,10) - does not match the rhythm -- Fixed?
00:57:421 (2,3,4) - does not match the rhythm -- Fixed?
01:22:968 (2) - does not match the rhythm (Starts at 01:22:968) -- Probably fixed
01:34:921 - Empty beat -- Fixed
01:37:734 (1) - does not match the rhythm (remap this part) -- Remapped.. kind of..
01:51:093 - Empty beat -- Fixed
01:55:078 - Empty beat -- Fixed
01:56:250 (1) or 01:55:781 (5) - not a smooth -- Fixed?
02:00:000 (4) - not a smooth -- Fixed?
02:34:921 - Empty beat -- Fixed
02:39:609 - Empty beat -- Fixed
02:41:250 (1,2,3,4) - does not match the rhythm -- Fixed
03:01:171 (4) - I think need move at 03:00:937 and increase slider -- Done
03:02:812 (1) - does not match the rhythm -- Fixed?
03:04:687 - Empty beat -- Fixed
03:22:734 (5) - does not match the rhythm -- Fixed?
03:28:125 - Empty beat -- Fixed
i think need add break at 03:45:00 -- Done

I recommend to increase grid size (press G) -- Thanks for the tip

Izect Ztenz wrote:

Hi -- Hello
Mod Reqs from I.ZMod STD & Mania Queue
Sorry for late mod just finishing my school assignment -- it's ok

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[Easy]00:51:103 - Add a note here (Clap) -- Done
01:33:291 - Add a note here -- Done
03:43:603 - Add a note here -- Done
[Normal]00:22:978 - until 00:29:541 - are you sure for this break time? -- Can't really think of anything to put in there yet
00:36:806 - Add a note here -- Done
00:51:572 (4) - make your slider like this -- Done

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Rendyindo wrote:

From my modding queue!
Sorry for late

Easy

00:51:572 (3,1) - Stack these (Maybe) -- I'd rather leave it as it is
01:19:228 (6,1) - ^ -- good idea
01:45:478 (5,2) - ^ -- ^
01:58:603 - Add a circle (clap) -- done
03:36:103 (2,4) - Stack these -- ^

Normal

00:52:041 (5) - NC? -- okay spent half a minute looking at editor wondering what NC means xD
03:35:166 (8) - ^ -- done

Hard

00:36:338 (1,3) - Stack these -- done
00:46:181 (4,7) - ^ -- ^
00:50:869 (3,5) - ^ -- ok
00:58:369 (6,8) - ^ -- ^
01:22:510 (1,3) - ^ -- done
03:04:931 - Add a circle -- ok
03:06:338 - ^ -- added
03:23:447 - ^ -- done

Overall you made a great job. -- And you did a nice mod, thanks.

Cooldue7 wrote:

Dziendobry z mojej kolejki (japiedziele pierwszy raz daje takiego porzadnego napisanego po polsku moda, tak przyzwyczajony jestem do angielskiej wersji ze nie wiem jak sie wszystko nazywa po polsku haha)

Easy

00:17:822 (1,3) - to nie jest za bardzo fajne takie jakby warstwy kiedy cos lezy na sobie nie wyglada zbytnio dobrze poniewaz sprawia ze twoja mapa bedzie wygladac dziwnie, i bedzie dawala uczucie dla gracza ze to tak nie powinno byc
00:18:760 (3,4) - ^ to samo co poprzednio tylko ze przesun to kolko na x:192 y:120
00:25:322 (1,3) - to tez jest troche dziwne ale nie az tak jak poprzednie
00:30:010 (1,3,5) - ^
00:32:353 (6,2) - ^
00:32:353 (6,3) - ^
00:35:166 (4,5,6) - ^
00:47:822 (6,7) - ^ no jest dosc duzo tych wiec nie bede ciagle nawijal o tym samym bo troche to takie nieplofesjonialne (tak jak pisownia tego slowa) bede mowil o czyms innym
sprawdz AiMod powinienes znalesc to w plikach w gornym lewym rogu, i zaznacz "Check distance snap" to pokaze ci odleglosc pomiedzy wszystkimi nutkami na Easy i na Normal zaden error czy ostrzezenie nie powinno sie wyswietlac, poniewaz muszisz zostac z oryginalnym DS nie mozesz tego zmieniac na Easy albo Normal powyzej chyba jest ok, i jeszcze twoje DS musi byc takie same przez calo mape naprzyklad tutaj 00:46:416 (4) - masz 0,89 a tutaj 00:54:385 (3) - juz 0,98 to nie moze sie zmieniac na Easy albo Normalu musi zostac takie same. Takie jakie sobie wybierzesz na poczatku z takim musisz zostac na koncu mapy, zobacz sobie inne mapy dla poruwnania robienie tego da ci tez moze poruwnanie o co mi teraz chodzi
03:15:947 (2,1) - staraj sie tez dawac jakis styl swoim sliderom zeby fajnie w siebie wchodzily masz tutaj przyklad
Dalej w mapie i poprzednio sa wszedzie takie same bledy a tez nie chce mi sie wszystkich wymieniac

Sprawdzilem tez pozostale Levele trudnosci i wszystko wyglada tak samo (nie ze tak samo zmapowane tylko te same bledy) doradzam ci zebys sie nie poddawal i zebys dalej prosil o mody, tylko ze za kazdym razem wyciagaj rozne rzeczy z tych modow spojrz na ich mapy czasami tez i zobacz jak one sa zrobione, jezeli bedziesz tak robil to jedene co ci pozniej zostanie to wiedza ktora bedziesz mogl wykorzystac dla wlasnych map w przyszlosci. Zycze ci powodzenia przyjacielu, i nie obraz sie jezeli sie nie spodziewales takiego moda od-mnie ja tez sczerze sie nie spodziewalem ale gdybym wszystkie bledy tutaj napisal to byla by moja mapa nie twoja teorytycznie.


Trzym sie. Powodzenia !!

Hokichi wrote:

Hey hey hey. What's up? Okay, here we go — Woof

[Easy]
00:30:010 (1) - Add hitsound at this slider's end — Added ✔
00:31:416 (3) - Add hitsound at this slider's start — ✔
01:17:822 (4,6) - Overlapped — Fixed ✔
03:32:822 (1,4) - Same — ✔
03:35:635 (1,4) - Same — ✔

Nice diff — Thanks

[Normal]
01:36:572 (7,1) - Overlapped — Fixed ✔
01:37:041 (1,3) - Same — ✔
01:44:306 (4,1) - Same — ✔

[Hard]
Nothing really... Nice diff — Thank you

Good Luck — ♥

Ars Novaa wrote:

Hello from my queue — Hi~

GENERAL

I notice you maintain a standard SV and volume for the entire map. You should change the SV and volume to match the rhythm of the map. A good start is to increase the SV and volume of your kiai periods and work from there. For now, 70% ( and 100% on your HARD ) is too loud . — Okay, I think volume is better now, though idk how to change slider velocity without ruining the whole map ;_;
I would recommend setting your Grid Settings to 4. VIEW -> GRID LEVEL -> 4 — I'm switching between various grid levels for various reasons

EASY

Reduce Overall Difficulty to 4 or less — Reduced OD to 3
00:18:760 (3) - I would change this to a reverse slider. Makes sense since at the reverse tick there is a strong piano note. http://puu.sh/oH6OT/93ac600251.jpg — ✔
I suggest you rework your combos such that a NC appears on every long white beat ( Strong parts of the song )
From this http://puu.sh/oH6XN/db12f45c46.jpg to this http://puu.sh/oH6Zq/6a8dab15fa.jpg — I should've done this a long time ago
00:29:072 (6,2) - These two overlap slightly , I suggest you reposition them to remove the overlap — ✔
00:36:103 (6) - Change this into a normal curve slider — Couldn't manage to fit it as a curve slider, changed to reverse slider instead
00:47:353 The absence of a note here really messes up the flow . — It did
01:21:572 - 01:22:041 ^ — ✔
01:33:291 (1) - Cancel NC — ✔
02:15:947 and 02:16:885 could use two hitcircles — ✔
03:20:166 (2,5) - Slight overlap — ✔
04:00:010 (5) - Delete this and add a spinner starting from 04:00:010 which ends at 04:03:760 — ✔

NORMAL

Same thing about the NC as above — ✔
Reduce Approach Rate to 5 or below — Reduced AR to 5
Reduce Overall Difficulty to 5 and below — Reduced OD to 5
I think you should increase the SV by a little bit. I'd say put it at 1.2x maybe ? As it is , the slider edges touch each other , and that doesn't look visually appealing — I don't know how to do it without ruining all the sliders
00:56:494 (2,5) - These 2 overlap — ✔
I think 01:28:603 , 01:29:072 , and 01:29:541 could use hitcircles — ✔
01:52:510 (5,1,2,3) - The placement of these notes would give the impression that 01:52:744 (1) - comes before 01:52:510 (5) - due to the former being closer to 01:52:041 (4) - than the latter — Fixed ✔
02:16:885 - In general , you should try not to leave any major beats empty — ✔
03:05:166 (3,4) - These two notes shouldn't overlap . Actually, you should try to keep overlaps to a minimum on EASY and NORMAL difficulties. — ✔
03:05:869 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - These bunch of notes are very clustered together . Its very easy for new players to misread the notes — Tried making it more readable

HARD

Personal Preference : I would map HARD difficulties with a beat snap divisor setting of 1/4 — Well.. okay
The audio is too loud here . — Fixed ✔
00:36:338 (1,2,3,4) - The arrangement of these notes look really messy . I would suggest switching the positions of 00:36:806 (2) - and 00:37:041 (3) - — ✔
You have a lot of missing notes which actually disrupts the flow of the song. For example, this section http://puu.sh/oHepa/8bf53f662d.jpg has many breaks in it whereas later on , this section http://puu.sh/oHerM/a48a074377.jpg is filled with them. — Filled the former section with sliders, as I intended to give players a little break from all that tapping
00:43:603 - There is a strong beat here. You should add in a hitcircle — ✔
01:16:181 (5,6) - I think what you are trying to create here is a blanket . If so, try putting the hitcircle further away from the slider like so http://puu.sh/oHeFS/a020a86ed7.jpg — ✔
01:20:635 Another break that shouldn't be there — ✔
01:29:775 (7,1) - and 01:31:416 (1,2) - Use my advice for blankets above — ✔

Alright I'll stop here for this difficulty. Main thing to look out for are your overlaps and your breaks in flow — Okay

Overall a decent map . There are some problems here and there but they can be fixed with help Good Luck! — Thanks ♥

Ayyri wrote:

Hello~ — Hii~

NM. from Bow Queue

Keep in mind, these are my suggestions, don't change something I mentioned unless it seems good to you!

Easy

00:47:353 (2) - Add normal clap here. You've used it so far to keep the rhythm. Sounds weird to not have it here too. — ✔
01:22:041 (4) - — ✔
01:22:978 - ^ — ✔
01:23:916 - ^ — ✔
01:33:291 (5,1) - You should move 01:33:291 (5) - before 01:33:760 (1) - It's not really suggested that you stack notes in an Easy. — ✔
01:37:041 (4) - Normal clap. Same reason as before. — ✔
02:00:010 - Finish. Have it match in sound with 01:00:010 (1) - — ✔
02:44:541 (5) - Add normal clap here. You've used it so far to keep the rhythm. Sounds weird to not have it here too. — ✔
03:05:166 (3) - Change clap from the tail to the head of the slider. — ✔
03:36:103 (2) - Add normal clap here. You've used it so far to keep the rhythm. Sounds weird to not have it here too. — ✔

Normal

Looks fine. — Ok

Hard

Also looks fine. — Ok

Kyubey wrote:

[Hard]
(...)for me it lacks quality and structure. things you should work on:

1. neatness (avoid unneeded overlaps and strange slider shapes) — Okay, removed a little bit of overlaps and unnecessary slider shapes, but most overlaps are there for reading difficulty. Because new players can't read, a challenge. And because I like my map like this.
   
   
2. rhythms (weird repeats while track is being pretty straight on, ignored beats like sliders on red ticks when you want to click on white one due to being louder and more powerful) — I don't know what's up with repeats, moved some sliders from red to white ticks as I saw to fit.
   
   
3. structure (map looks kinda random, with random patterns and doesn't look like a single construction with same thoughts being while mapping) — How about low ds parts? I don't think it really needs to be more not random, though I'll probably work on it if more people mention this.
   
   
4. Hitsounds are kinda plain too, you should try adding whistles, finished and make hitsound patterns that will be repeated in same place to make the map sound better — As below.
   
   
5. Also for loud beats on white ticks that aren't claps you can use normal sampleset — I'll do that after the map will be closer to being ok, don't want to do repetitive things yet as I may just throw this map away.

Lilyanna wrote:

Hi.
Easy

00:37:510 (1,3) - copy paste and make them look same for better aesthetic — ✔
00:47:822 (3,1) - if u blanket them together will look better — ✔
01:27:666 (3,1) - thi spacing is confusing for new players try stay with consistent spacing — ✔
01:38:916 (2) - better if u drag this down lets say move x163 y176 for cleaner pattern — ✔
01:48:760 (1,2,3,4,1) - try avoid using so much clickable notes — Tried to
02:31:885 (1,1) - stack — ✔
02:40:322 (4,5) - can be better blanket (turn off grid snap) — ✔

this is a picture

03:17:353 - any new player can miss read the next object because of this it feel missing a note and also the music didnt seem like needed a break — ✔


Normal

00:30:947 (4,3) - avoid overlaped notes — ✔
00:34:931 (3,3,4) - ^ — ✔
00:35:635 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - normal and easy should be made so simple for new players and yet u use so many tapping notes that sometimes imo u cant define the flow of the map
01:18:760 (1,2,3) - u could use the same pattern u did here 01:15:010 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - for rythm consistency — ✔
01:20:166 (3,3) - not good overlap ;w; i wont mention them anymore try avoid them — ✔
00:16:885 (1,2) - spacing is confusing for normal players use the DS for consistent spacing — ✔
03:38:447 (4,5) - ^ — ✔

Hard


02:40:556 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - u in creased spacing here it doesnt look needed and it looked big jumps for hard diff imo — ✔

03:05:635 - u couldv make this beat clickable like u did here 03:09:385 (1) - iv noticed few strong beats that need to be clickable so go through map and try make them emphasized — A circle for every big white now yay
03:20:869 (2,5,6) - overlaps same as before try avoid — ✔
in general u should avoid overlaps and fix the spacing issues.

I hope i helped sorry if i didnt. Good luck! — you did help