1. Lunna's Light (1,26 stars, 176 notes)
2. Snow (1,96 stars, 235 notes)

Yoges wrote:

Mod as you requested.

[General]
Diff names are probably not rankable. Ask a BN or any of the QATs Thanks!

[Snow]
00:09:871 (2,1) - Swap NC
00:18:599 (4,1) - ^
00:27:326 (3,1) - ^
00:54:053 (1) - More than 3 repeats on Easies and Normals are not allowed. I'd just do something like this
01:02:780 (1,2,3) - I think a rhythm pattern like this would be better since it's an Easy.
02:18:053 (3) - Rotate this 15 degrees clockwise through selection center. Ok!
02:25:689 (1,3) - Blanket's a bit off Fixed
02:50:780 (4) - Same as 00:54:053 For me is good

[Christmas]
00:21:326 (3,4,1) - That looks and plays really weird. It is good ingame
00:49:689 (1,2,3) - ^
00:56:235 (3,4) - That would just play a lot better if the 4 was on the 3s arc path Fixed
03:07:144 (3,4,5) - There is no need for that much spacing. It just throws you off. let the smallest jump

Lumael wrote:

Oi :3

General

-Me coloca nas tags? :3

Christmas

-CS 5 melhoraria a Spread, 5.7 é muito alto e é um número estranho ;w;
-00:07:689 - um circulo aqui ficaria legal pra seguir a cantora, e vc colocou um circulo aqui 00:04:417 (3) - aonde não

tinha nada, então seria legal colocar lá também que tem alguma coisa kkk
-00:32:235 (1,2,3,4,5) - esse ritmo não está seguindo a música muito bem, eu recomendo colocar um spinner de 00:32:235 -

até 00:36:053 - e retirar este 00:36:053 (1) - pra seguir melhor o ritmo. Esse spinner 00:36:053 (1) - não é necessário já

que a maior parte dele é um silêncio, se quiser um exemplo, olhe como eu fiz no Normal, acho que fica melhor daquela forma
-00:59:508 - tenta esse ritmo aqui http://puu.sh/kHGsy/f1642f1977.jpg
-01:06:053 (2,3) - seria melhor se o downbeat fosse clickavel 01:07:144 - , tente esse ritmo: http://puu.sh/kHGAw/c790262110.jpg
-01:59:508 (4,1) - swipe NC
-02:28:962 (4) - tente um 1/2 slider com um circulo, ficaria melhor, o downbeat é muito forte e vc está fazendo ele unclickable '-', e dessa forma tbm vai seguir a cantora melhor
-02:55:144 (1,2) - swipe NC
-03:07:144 (3,4,5) - spacing aqui é bem confuso pois ele parece com o de 1/2 mas é 1/4, pode ser até unrankeable dessa forma, melhor stakear

Normal

-01:58:417 (3,1) - Swipe NC e coloca NC aqui 02:00:053 -

Perfect *-*! \(o.o)/

@Yoges: sorry no changes '-'

KASUM1 wrote:

Hillow lumael my waifuuuu ♥

congratulations being gay ( with hoen )

[Normal]
maybe cs4 is hard for normal which is easy , try 3.5 or 3
00:47:508 (3,1) - maybe curve these the other way , because (3) is heading left and it's hard for beginners to react to (1)
01:09:326 (3) - ctrl+h and x:432 y:192 for better flow
01:46:417 (1) - this slider end should be clickable sounds better there's other things like this too figure them out
02:23:508 (3,4) - bad flow http://puu.sh/kIR60/8bc0ee803c.jpg something like this works
02:44:780 (2) - maybe curve this more to the left

[Christmas]
cs5 that's weird
so small >w<
00:39:871 (1,1) - why NC on the second slider
01:04:962 (1) - why NC?
01:08:235 (1) - ^
01:27:871 (1,2) - switch NC
01:32:235 (1,3) - ^
02:03:871 (6,1) - ^
02:23:508 (1) - remove NC

good mapset good luck with ranking that <3

Tarrasky wrote:

chat

21:49 Tarrasky: pronto
21:51 Hoen: '3'
21:51 Tarrasky: ah tipo
21:51 Tarrasky: tem mta coisa q eu lembro assim de raspão pq eu ja tinha moddado
21:51 Tarrasky: olha
21:51 Tarrasky: a artista é koreana certo?
21:52 Tarrasky: n é bom colocar o nome dela koreano nas tags n?
21:52 Hoen: sim
21:52 Hoen: Eu vou procurar o nome delas em koeano
21:52 Tarrasky: eu tinha 
21:52 Tarrasky: pera ta no histórico
21:53 Hoen: Ok
21:53 Tarrasky: 이하이
21:53 Tarrasky: https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%9D%B4%ED%95%98%EC%9D%B4
21:53 Tarrasky: i'm helping?
21:54 Hoen: Sim!
21:54 Hoen: USAHUSHA A CARA DA HI
21:54 Hoen: TA MUITO ENGRAÇADA
21:54 Hoen: EU RI
21:54 Tarrasky: eahueahu
21:55 Tarrasky: 00:54:053 (1) - 
21:55 Tarrasky: isso é bem confuso
21:55 Tarrasky: pq geralmente se vira só uma vez slider grande
21:55 Tarrasky: ah outra coisa
21:55 Tarrasky: isso n é Easy n?
21:56 Hoen: Não
21:56 Tarrasky: certeza?
21:56 Tarrasky: 2/1
21:56 Tarrasky: lento
21:56 Hoen: Pq aí o christmas teria que ser normal
21:56 Tarrasky: mas é um normal
21:56 Hoen: e o christmas tem jumps
21:56 Tarrasky: lol
21:56 Tarrasky: ah
21:56 Tarrasky: ok
21:56 Tarrasky: 01:06:326 (3) - 
21:56 Tarrasky: ?
21:56 Tarrasky: 01:04:962 (2,3) - 
21:56 Tarrasky: porque 1,0x distance?
21:57 Hoen: Não sei mas já ajeitei x.x
21:59 Tarrasky: ok
22:00 Tarrasky: ah algo bem geral agora
22:00 Tarrasky: eu não acho que esse mapa precise de kiai, sinceramente
22:00 Tarrasky: porque não é bem definido o momento do kiai
22:00 Tarrasky: 02:35:508 (1) - 
22:00 Tarrasky: no tempo q tem esse slider na normal
22:00 Tarrasky: eu sinto que preicisa de kiai ai tbm
22:01 Tarrasky: 02:25:689 (1,2,3,4) - aqui tbm me parece kiai, se for comparar com o seu 1
22:01 Tarrasky: 02:21:326 (1,2,3,4) - same /\
22:01 Tarrasky: não sei se kiai fica bonito nessa musica tão bonitinha
22:01 Tarrasky: talvez um kick kiai fique bom apenas
22:02 Tarrasky: minha opinião
22:02 Hoen: Acho que vou deixar o kiai do jeito que ta
22:02 Hoen: fica melhor
22:02 Tarrasky: ce q sabe
22:03 Tarrasky: 03:09:326 (1) - 
22:03 Tarrasky: acho que 1/1 ta bom
22:03 Tarrasky: e um circle em 03:10:962 -
22:04 Tarrasky: outro spin no final do mapa fica mt maneiro 
22:04 Tarrasky: tipo
22:04 Tarrasky: eu senti muito mal vendo um mapa com widescreen e outro sem
22:04 Tarrasky: dá um choque bem forte essa mudança
22:05 Tarrasky: eu acho q nessa diff
22:05 *Tarrasky is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/799071 Bom & Hi - All I Want For Christmas Is You [Christmas]]
22:05 Tarrasky: vc podia colocar ele cortado com skin como se fosse a outra diff
22:05 Hoen: 01:04:962 (2,3) - Se eu colocar 1,3x os dois ficam muito longe x.x
22:05 Hoen: Ok
22:05 Tarrasky: eu n acho
22:06 Tarrasky: pra mim ta mt stackado
22:06 Tarrasky: e confuso
22:06 Hoen: Olha o aimod
22:06 Tarrasky: ficou bonita a borda preta
22:06 Hoen: e coloca com 1.3x
22:06 Tarrasky: olhei
22:06 Tarrasky: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3839057
22:06 Tarrasky: pra mim ta ok
22:07 Hoen: http://puu.sh/kQtzC/462af7c4a1.png
22:09 Tarrasky: eu apenas coloquei 1,3x http://puu.sh/kQtED/4bcd1ca162.jpg
22:09 Tarrasky: dá para ver claramente a distância no objeto selecionado
22:09 Tarrasky: e lol esse seu print n faz sentido
22:10 Hoen: clica naquela caixinha http://puu.sh/kQtIp/6691167d21.jpg
22:10 Tarrasky: http://puu.sh/kQtIy/9a3569e6c7.jpg
22:10 Tarrasky: nunca vi esse erro
22:10 Tarrasky: nossa
22:10 Tarrasky: mas tipo
22:10 Tarrasky: n tem como ele estar longe
22:10 Tarrasky: vendo que vc está seguindo o 1,3x
22:10 Hoen: Ok
22:12 Hoen: Ok
22:12 Tarrasky: 03:13:689 (1) - 
22:12 Tarrasky: aqui ia ficar legal curvas seguindo o vocal
22:12 Tarrasky: mas n sei se rank critéria iria aceitar
22:13 Hoen: Eu coloquei um spin
22:13 Tarrasky: n tem mt o que falar do mapa
22:13 Tarrasky: outra diff agora
22:14 Hoen: Ok
22:15 Tarrasky: [não tenho certeza talvez seja ruim mas]
22:15 Tarrasky: 00:28:962 (2) - ctrl + G
22:15 Tarrasky: ?
22:16 Hoen: 00:28:962 (2,3) - ficaria estranho com esse
22:16 Tarrasky: vdd
22:16 Tarrasky: se fosse mecher teria q mecher nisso tbm
22:16 Tarrasky: então esquece
22:16 Tarrasky: 00:36:599 - breaktime?
22:16 Tarrasky: 5 de hp
22:16 Tarrasky: se bem que é um spin antes
22:16 Hoen: Ok
22:17 Tarrasky: talvez n precise
22:17 Tarrasky: por causa do spin
22:17 Tarrasky: fica a sua escolha
22:17 Hoen: não vou colocar pq o normal também não tem
22:18 Tarrasky: ok
22:18 Tarrasky: o normal tem esse tempo todo sem nada tbm?
22:18 Tarrasky: nem notei, ja que é mais lento
22:19 Tarrasky: a angulatura disso está muito acentuada, creio eu 00:54:053 (1,2) - 
22:19 Tarrasky: aqui ficou sutil 00:47:508 (3,4) - 
22:19 Tarrasky: n sei se esotu viajando
22:20 Tarrasky: 01:00:326 (4) - 
22:20 Hoen: é
22:20 Tarrasky: ISSO TA OVERMAP
22:20 Tarrasky: 01:00:326 (4) - OVERMAP DETECTED
22:21 Hoen: tirei kk
22:21 Tarrasky: tipo
22:21 Tarrasky: n bate no tick
22:21 Tarrasky: é um pouco antes o som de piano
22:21 Tarrasky: talvez um reverserslider arrumaria, já que n precisa bater reverseslider
22:22 Hoen: Foi isso oque eu fiz kk
22:22 Tarrasky: nice
22:25 Tarrasky: não fui mt fã dessa transição
22:25 Tarrasky: 01:12:599 (2,3,1) - embora n esteja errada
22:26 Hoen: Acho melhor deixar assim
22:26 Tarrasky: tu entendeu o q eu falei ai neh
22:26 Hoen: teria que mecher em muitas coisas pra mudar isso
22:26 Tarrasky: da pra deixar msm
22:26 Tarrasky: vdd
22:26 Tarrasky: 01:56:235 (3) - 
22:26 Tarrasky: ctrl + G?
22:27 Hoen: Yup
22:27 Tarrasky: 02:09:871 (1) - 
22:27 Tarrasky: deleta nc e add aqui 02:10:417 (2) - 
22:27 Tarrasky: follow melhor a musica
22:27 Tarrasky: se bem que esse nc n tem mt sentido eu acho
22:27 Hoen: Eu não sabia que esse NC existia
22:27 Hoen: kk
22:28 Tarrasky: 02:15:871 (1) - tem algo errado nesse som, ouvindo a bateria
22:28 Hoen: Ajeitei
22:29 Tarrasky: 02:21:326 (1,2) - essa sequência de slider retos fez esse slider reto ficar meio boring 02:23:508 (3) -, eu acho q ele podia ser curvado
22:29 Tarrasky: e tem mais aqui ainda, acho q curvado ele fica mt melhor 02:25:689 (1,2,3) - 
22:30 Hoen: Sim sim
22:30 Tarrasky: 02:30:598 (2,3) - lol tão perto
22:31 Tarrasky: 03:13:689 (1) - 
22:31 Tarrasky: arrume o tick para ficar retilinio ao som alto do vocal
22:31 Tarrasky: "como fazer isso?" simples
22:31 Tarrasky: 03:14:235 - pare aqui 
22:31 Tarrasky: olhe onde está o circle
22:31 Tarrasky: faça ele estar na quina da curva
22:32 Tarrasky: fica mt melhor
22:32 Tarrasky: mesma coisa do spin no final do mapa da Normal
22:32 Tarrasky: e é isso, espero ter ajudado
22:32 Hoen: Sim ajudou muito
22:32 Hoen: !!

1. The way you used artist is not correct. Official source is showing their name as BOM&HI not Bom & Hi, BOM & HI or anything, without gaps and all uppercase.
2. Tags Hi, Bom and Christmas are a duplicate from other metadata. These shouldn't be there because they have no function at all. Tags are for only and only for search function.
3. If you added Hi's Korean name, you should ad also Bom's Korean name: 박봄
4. Offset is incorrect, I'd say correct one could be around 1710. You can clearly notice it is off on 01:50:780 - . If possible, try to get the most accurate offset, eventually ask someone as my headphones are now broken, so I cannot determine it 100% correctly.
5. The mp3 used does have quite low quality. Let me compare the mp3s and explain why the bitrate is technically lower than 128kbps.
   
   Your mp3 (192kbps)

   
   96kbps

   
   Here, you may see the 128kbps does show higher frequencies than your mp3 does, that means the mp3 you are using does have less information. To exaplain clearly - each sound file does have infomations about which frequencies which play at certain time. To reduce file size, codecs like mp3 remove higher frequencies, that's because human ear doesn't hear frequencies higher than approximately 23-24kHz. However, regular human will definitely hear up to 20kHz, thus removing anything below it is quite edgy. However that's not the point, the point is the amount of removed frequencies depends on bitrate (kbps) chosen. If you choose 96kbps, it will cut a lot, but if you want to go back, it is impossible from the 96kbps mp3, that basically means, if you use higher bitrate than original, it will just use values that were not removed and those "additional" values to fill the file size regarding the bitrate will be null values, that means song that is 192kbps may have quality of 64kbps, but not vice versa. Here, I can continue with comparison.
   
   320kbps (Regular mp3 quality, which is usually sold on online markets)

   
   Real 192kbps

   
   If I consider the mp3 above is smaller than yours and does have 4kHz higher cap, it's definitely an issue here. Try using this mp3 (does have exactly same start and end, so there is no need to manipulate offset apart from that current offset is off as I already mentioned.
6. If you want to mute any sound files, you have to use file provided by ranking criteria. Replace both soft-sliderslide and soft-sliderslide2 with it.
7. Difficulty settings are not balanced for 2-diff set. AR is fine, OD has too big difference, HP is equal. I recommend these settings: Christmas - OD 6, HP 6 Normal - OD 4, HP 4. That makes less variable gap between difficulties and also makes HP of normal a bit more playable.
8. Obviously the background images could be accepted, but well, if 1366x768 version (which is the best for beatmaps) can be found, it should be used as well. May you replace them to give slightly more professional feel and better quality in overall? (Christmas) (Normal)

1. 00:04:417 (3) - This is rhythmically incorrect. It lands on no sound at all, which is not acceptable for a clickable object.
2. 00:01:690 (1) - I would not be sure about these sliders, which end on nothing as well. I can list some here, which I think could be better:
   
   1. 00:08:235 (4) -
   2. 00:25:689 (3) -
3. 00:22:962 (4) - This circle is definitely very off.
4. 00:56:235 (3,4) - The rhythm emphasis does not sound very cool, because while 00:57:871 - is clickable, 00:57:326 - is the strongest sound in the combo, but isn't clickable, it lands on the end of slider. You should probably use 2 1/2 sliders, one on 00:56:235 - and second on 00:57:326 - eventually use circles here, but 00:57:326 - is definitely a place for a click in comparison with others in combo.
5. 01:10:417 (4) - Same as previous, but this time it even lands on downbeat. Always be sure to make foreground clickable.
6. 01:14:780 (1) - Probably even worse variating where you actually have no impact on an important sound, especially on downbeat. On start of slider, you click, on end of slider, you still "play something" by releasing the button, tho it's not really best to map for anyway, but on repeat, you just hold, no action. This should be changed.
7. 01:32:235 (1) - Same as 01:10:417 (4) - .
8. 01:36:599 (1) - Same as previous.
9. 02:15:871 (1) - Same as previous.
10. 00:04:962 (1,2) - If I consider the rhythm of the song and the way you placed new combos, this should be swapped.
11. 02:10:417 (1,3) - Same as previous.
12. Flow of the whole map seems cool, but you are overusing jumps considering it is hard and considering the difficulty of Normal. Please, be sure to limit yourself and use jumps only on very important sounds, for example downbeat, sounds like 00:51:871 - and other significant sounds. I won't be able to accept this kind of variability, you may say this is "the way you do it", but I must consider it as an issue, it shouldn't be problem to make spacing more consistent and use jumps only on very important sounds, the flow is fine, so you just place those objects as previously, but with constant gaps, apart from those important sounds.

1. 01:58:962 (2) - This is rhythmically not correct. Making the downbeat clickable makes more sense as it is the most significant sound here. Especially for lower diffs, it's important to make important stuff clickable.
2. 02:11:508 (1) - Same as previous.
3. 02:16:417 (1) - Same as previous.
4. 02:49:144 (2) - Similar as previous, 02:49:689 - should be rather the slider and 02:49:144 - should be circle to divide the voice from the drum part. + To make strong sound clickable.
5. 01:58:417 (1) - The new combo is too late, it should start on 01:59:508 - because the downbeat should be rather clickable.
6. 02:02:780 (1,2) - You should swap the new combo because 02:03:871 - is definitely more significant than 02:02:780 - otherwise it breaks word in vocals + regular pattern.
7. 02:12:599 - Combo too, should be clickable as I said previously.
8. 03:00:599 (4,1) - The combo is longer than supposed to, you should swap these two new combos. Then you should also swap 03:04:962 (3,1) - for same reason.
9. 00:52:962 (3,4,1) - This pattern is kind of a disaster. Firstly, the stack should not be used for lower difficutly. You should keep one rhythm for stacking, which was 00:18:599 (4,1) - , but making it variable may seem quite confusing and lazy especially on normal difficulty. 2 repeats don't work that much. I feel like this part is missing some creativity, everything happens on 2 coordinates, respectively, there are 4 hits on 453;216 and 2 hits on 446;91 that makes it all too repetitive, just comming from one side to another back and back again. 2 slider would work much better.
10. 01:04:962 (2) - You shouldn't make any inconsistencies on lower diffs, so this should have 1,3x spacing from previous object as all other objects.

Lumael wrote:

@Wafu: fixed the two comments you did on my part of the collab ty

Update

osu file format v14

[General]
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PreviewTime: 40962
Countdown: 1
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:All I Want For Christmas Is You
TitleUnicode:All I Want For Christmas Is You
Artist:BOM&HI
ArtistUnicode:BOM&HI
Creator:Hoen
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Source:
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256,192,196437,12,0,201619,0:0:0:0:

Wafu wrote:

Timing is almost done, I will inform you with new offsets tomorrow.

Wafu wrote:

So, here I go.

SPOILER

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Some may seem to be duplicate, but these are to fix metronome on places where it was possible. Also, on places, where slider starts in different timing section than it ends on, you have to manually fix it in .osu file or eventually changing the pattern. If you don't know how to do this, update the map without fixing them and let me know

Wafu wrote:

I am confused..

ByBy13 wrote:

Wow it got qualified.Congratz on your first qualify o3o/

1. 01:58:402 (3,4) - Could be a slider and sound way better, it would also make more sense in terms of density if you compare this with the pattern on Christmas.
2. 02:42:558 - 02:46:955 - Why are you suddenly ignoring these beats? I can understand the first one if you tell me "because there are no vocals", that'd be """fine""", but the second one? Definitely a slider or even a circle you make more sense rather than leaving that as a blank space.
3. 02:50:791 (6) - You really don't want to do this.
4. 03:13:685 (1) - A Clap with 50% volume green line? That's too random and high. On a piano sound you're placing that... sound, I don't even know what that is. And after lowering that green line, 03:16:412 (1) - this spinner should have even less volume, you want to silence it!

1. 00:27:029 - Weird how you didn't place anything there.
2. 01:16:957 (3,4) - Hmmm... woah, this is... very weird. I wouldn't say anything if the spacing would have been on 01:16:412 (2,3) - because (3) is very emphasised, but... (4)? Doesn't seem very convincing.
3. 01:33:307 (1,2,3) - Same here.
4. 02:15:831 (6,1,2) - Again... the same. Just pay attention to what you are listening, don't map just because "it's pretty", that's a wrong idea.
5. 02:32:205 (4,5,6) - Considering how you are building 1/2 slider-patterns, this could be easily misread, you are supposed to put 1/4s closer, a'ight? You can see the difference right after this pattern on 02:35:478 (1,2) - , so doesn't seem intentional at all.
6. 02:49:672 - This part is bad, plays bad, sounds bad. Let me explain you everything. 02:49:973 (5) - is being mapped the same way as 02:50:518 (6) - , but why? They have different sound, so why would you map them the same way? And then, you have 02:51:609 (9,1) - that weird transition that flows pretty weird. And well... I'm not talking about the weird spacing in this pattern at all, but it's damn odd, too.
7. 03:13:685 (1,1) - The spinners attack again.

Yuii- wrote:

I was just wondering... why are soft-sliderslide.wav and soft-sliderslide2.wav not silenced properly nor reaching the 100ms length? I can observe a pretty tiny wave on the first ms. I am not sure if that's unrankable, just being a bit curious.

MkGuh wrote:

when rank? >///<

Net0 wrote:

Timing lord and Meme lord on same thread, have some stars :3