1. Serenity (7.23 stars, 1664 notes)

1. change difficulty name
2. maybe preview time is 02:31:166 here
3. it cant Two timing points exist at the same Time !
4. Turn off Widescreen and Letterbox during breaks

1. 00:17:758 ~ 00:19:034 - green line volume up to 35 and 00:19:997 - this green line down to 18
2. 02:09:098 (3) - change spinner?
3. 04:59:986 (1) - ^

_ Hatsune Miku wrote:

basic

1. change difficulty name I don't know what to change it to, yet
2. maybe preview time is 02:31:166 here I understand why that is, but I like the suspense right before it...I will change if necessary though
3. it cant Two timing points exist at the same Time ! I don't see it o-o
4. Turn off Widescreen and Letterbox during breaks no breaks \o

1. 00:17:758 ~ 00:19:034 - green line volume up to 35 and 00:19:997 - this green line down to 18 I didn't change it to 35 but to 30 and 00:19:997 is already at 18
2. 02:09:098 (3) - change spinner? I think it fits better my way
3. 04:59:986 (1) - ^ I most likely will do change that

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1. Calling the diff name as the song is kinda weird lol, maybe try to find a better diff name
2. at the beginning you can use some more whistles, sounds really empty atm, also reduce the volume of current ones a bit
3. 00:12:402 (1,2) - In general around the whole map you can see overlaps like this one, they are ¨fine¨ but tbg they looks really bad and is something that you want to avoid at your map, design its really important imo.
4. 00:16:171 (3) - there are also some objects that doesn't really follow nothing in the song, I'll highly suggest you to avoid this.
5. 00:16:485 (4,5) - same about design when doing a blanket use always the approach circle of previous/next object to archive a perfect one, also avoid overlapping objects like that.
6. 00:35:829 (1,2,3) - more about design your triangle patterns like this one looks really bad, mmm an easy way to archive perfect triangle or polygons is to use the tool at: Compose > Create polygon circles
7. 00:37:713 (1,2) - is the bad stack on purpose? not important but Im curious xD
8. 00:41:486 (5,1) - timing probably need future improvements, delete those objects and you will notice how off timing is
9. 00:45:886 (1,2,3,4,1) - same as 00:35:829 - also this one looks worst cause of the overlaps
10. 00:51:532 (1,2,3,4,5) - there are sections where your rhythm can improve alot, for example listen to the music and see how your objects follow it, you will notice that some strongs sounds dont have click actions, mmm to explain this better, try to follow all the strong sounds (active beats) as slider heads or circles (cause those need click actions) and try to follow the more low sounds (pasive beats) as slider tails or ignore them when mapping, following this will improve greatly the rhythm in the whole diff.
11. 00:54:046 (1) - also extended slider like this doesn't make much sense with the music, since there is a strong beat (audible ) at 00:54:360 - but nothing at the blue tick
12. 00:58:443 (7,8) - ya blankets are kinda a problem overall, but something easy to fix, if you use the approach circles to improve them, for example like this:
    
13. 01:09:098 - from here, all those normal whistles really make me dizzy xD, idk in this kind of piano songs is better if you use the default one or some custom one, if you still like the current one atleast consider to lower the volume by alot
14. 01:10:825 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - not a fan feel really forced when playing, cursor movements are really forced tbh.
15. 01:19:385 (4,5) - why? music don't suggest nothing to do anything like this, just keep the normal spacing at the stream, this kind of stream jumps are also really hated by most players
16. 01:27:946 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - still is 1/4 in the song, I dont see the reason to use 1/8
17. 01:29:516 (1) - this kind of sliders aren't rankables anymore, mainly cuz the part with all the red points, is basically unreadable and u need to guess how the slider will play, so yea you have to make the slider patch clearly
18. 01:34:071 (6,1) - looks like 1/2 pattern, not a fan of this kind of jumps, but is my personal opinion, atleast improve the flow between 01:34:071 (6,1) - since is really forced to play

Natsu wrote:

yo

General:

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You ask me just for some quick opinions I think so:

Diff:

1. Calling the diff name as the song is kinda weird lol, maybe try to find a better diff name Done
2. at the beginning you can use some more whistles, sounds really empty atm, also reduce the volume of current ones a bit Done
3. 00:12:402 (1,2) - In general around the whole map you can see overlaps like this one, they are ¨fine¨ but tbg they looks really bad and is something that you want to avoid at your map, design its really important imo. Okay, preferably no overlaps, got it
4. 00:16:171 (3) - there are also some objects that doesn't really follow nothing in the song, I'll highly suggest you to avoid this. Mkay
5. 00:16:485 (4,5) - same about design when doing a blanket use always the approach circle of previous/next object to archive a perfect one, also avoid overlapping objects like that. I don't see any major overlapping here, but Im guessing the tiniest outline touching each other, fixed and understood.
6. 00:35:829 (1,2,3) - more about design your triangle patterns like this one looks really bad, mmm an easy way to archive perfect triangle or polygons is to use the tool at: Compose > Create polygon circles fixed, and I did use that tool, only to be tweaked worse soon after causing and isosceles.x.x
7. 00:37:713 (1,2) - is the bad stack on purpose? not important but Im curious xD didn't expect that to be called a bad stack ._. Either way, blanketed instead
8. 00:41:486 (5,1) - timing probably need future improvements, delete those objects and you will notice how off timing is I see that the timing is off if i listen to it closely, but only closely, otherwise I would just think that's the right beat. Wouldn't people unconsciously just hit the notes in that rhythm since the actual fault comes from the song itself that's changing the tempo? Should I indefinitely follow by the song's rhythm and tempo no matter what?
9. 00:45:886 (1,2,3,4,1) - same as 00:35:829 - also this one looks worst cause of the overlaps fixed
10. 00:51:532 (1,2,3,4,5) - there are sections where your rhythm can improve alot, for example listen to the music and see how your objects follow it, you will notice that some strongs sounds dont have click actions, mmm to explain this better, try to follow all the strong sounds (active beats) as slider heads or circles (cause those need click actions) and try to follow the more low sounds (pasive beats) as slider tails or ignore them when mapping, following this will improve greatly the rhythm in the whole diff. Okay, but I've seen many maps that follow this concept of placing notes on the passive beats, and aside to that, I was thinking that placing the notes right on the rhythm every time seems boring and less creative... (my opinion)
11. 00:54:046 (1) - also extended slider like this doesn't make much sense with the music, since there is a strong beat (audible ) at 00:54:360 - but nothing at the blue tick fixed
12. 00:58:443 (7,8) - ya blankets are kinda a problem overall, but something easy to fix, if you use the approach circles to improve them, for example like this:
    Yep I see that, didn't think I had to be that meticulous about it, will fix em all
13. 01:09:098 - from here, all those normal whistles really make me dizzy xD, idk in this kind of piano songs is better if you use the default one or some custom one, if you still like the current one atleast consider to lower the volume by alot Forgot to add in custom hitwhistles!
14. 01:10:825 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - not a fan feel really forced when playing, cursor movements are really forced tbh. fixed ish, will think of something if else.
15. 01:19:385 (4,5) - why? music don't suggest nothing to do anything like this, just keep the normal spacing at the stream, this kind of stream jumps are also really hated by most players fixed
16. 01:27:946 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - still is 1/4 in the song, I dont see the reason to use 1/8 fixed
17. 01:29:516 (1) - this kind of sliders aren't rankables anymore, mainly cuz the part with all the red points, is basically unreadable and u need to guess how the slider will play, so yea you have to make the slider patch clearly fixed
18. 01:34:071 (6,1) - looks like 1/2 pattern, not a fan of this kind of jumps, but is my personal opinion, atleast improve the flow between 01:34:071 (6,1) - since is really forced to playfixed

well basically, work more with design, rhythm spacing and flow is a bit questionable at some places, also timing is really off at some parts and you should ask someone for revision, also take in mind that suggestions apply to the whole beatmap and those are some examples.

GL with this

1. AiMod~~~

1. i bet that you have to improve about the hitsounding a lot
2. 00:03:784 (2,3,4) - blanket this
3. 00:06:611 (1) - try to remove NC. it will be better
4. 00:18:454 (3,4) - yep. blanket
5. 00:30:799 (4) - move this to 340|144
6. 00:40:230 (2) - head whistle
7. 00:41:486 (5) - whistle
8. 00:52:632 (2) - head whistle
9. 00:54:988 (3) - tail whistle
10. 01:00:328 (5) - whistle
11. 01:02:849 (1) - whistle head
12. 01:12:710 (2) - not a proper stack on (6) and you have to copy paste again for (3) :p
13. 02:00:145 (2,1) - blanket~~~
14. 02:52:291 (5) - unusual slider whistle here. remove
15. 03:27:040 (1,2) - improve this blanket bit

-Hakurei- wrote:

hi

[General]

1. AiMod~~~

[i'm crying right now from the intro...]

1. i bet that you have to improve about the hitsounding a lot
2. 00:03:784 (2,3,4) - blanket this done
3. 00:06:611 (1) - try to remove NC. it will be better NCed it on the next slider
4. 00:18:454 (3,4) - yep. blanket already blanketed
5. 00:30:799 (4) - move this to 340|144 done
6. 00:40:230 (2) - head whistle forgot to add hitsounds for these after i replaced them but done
7. 00:41:486 (5) - whistle ^
8. 00:52:632 (2) - head whistle I don't see how this is a head whistle, i placed it tail.
9. 00:54:988 (3) - tail whistle done
10. 01:00:328 (5) - whistle ^
11. 01:02:849 (1) - whistle head ^
12. 01:12:710 (2) - not a proper stack on (6) and you have to copy paste again for (3) :p fixed the stack but i dont understand the c/p ;o
13. 02:00:145 (2,1) - blanket~~~ already blanketed
14. 02:52:291 (5) - unusual slider whistle here. remove fixed, dunno how that got there.
15. 03:27:040 (1,2) - improve this blanket bit already did

quite lazy to do a full mod, sorry for that D:. clearly, this diff needs more mod tbh. GL!

-Hakurei- wrote:

and you forgot the kudos

02:58 _Asymmetry: hi!
02:59 Sonnyc: Hi there~
02:59 Sonnyc: dling the map, please wait for it
03:01 _Asymmetry: mmkay
03:06 Sonnyc: Seems the map is nice, will do a mod before commenting
03:06 Sonnyc: 00:26:383 (3) - Try to avoid the red anchor meeting with the previous curve. This can be confusing.
03:07 _Asymmetry: aha okay
03:07 Sonnyc: 00:54:031 (1) - Personally reducing 1/4 to make the rhythm consistent with 00:54:502 (2,3) - feels better.
03:08 Sonnyc: 01:00:155 (4,5,6,7) - This placement felt less effective. Maybe you were intending a mini jump at (4,5), but anyways making this usage more noticable like 00:57:172 (2,3,4,5,6) - will play better.
03:08 Sonnyc: 01:02:849 (1) - Sure about the 5/4? Reduve 1/4 I guess.
03:09 Sonnyc: 01:09:804 (2) - Nice progressive increase of spacing, but this note didn't suit well along the music.
03:09 _Asymmetry: oh i made it longer because the note on the song kinda drags
03:09 Sonnyc: 01:12:318 (7) - ^
03:10 Sonnyc: 01:19:386 (4,5) - Personally didn't liked this sharp stream, but it's up to you.
03:10 Sonnyc: 01:40:511 (4,1) - 01:40:825 (2,3) - Potential confusion of spacing. Rather adding a note at 01:41:218 - will be better in reading.
03:12 Sonnyc: 01:47:422 (1,2) - High potential confusion due to the same spacing of 01:47:030 (4,1) - . I'd personally recommend moving 01:47:579 (2) - slightly far to make 1/2 more noticable.
03:12 Sonnyc: 01:50:563 (3,4) - Spacing could be better.
03:12 Sonnyc: 01:55:119 (4,5) - ^
03:13 Sonnyc: 02:10:982 (4,1) - Placing far each other is better to read.
03:14 Sonnyc: 02:21:663 (5,6) - 02:21:977 (1,2) - High spacing confusion.
03:14 Sonnyc: 02:30:302 - Hit sound is nearly inaudible this section. This isn't allowed, better tune up to volume.
03:15 Sonnyc: 02:32:501 (1,2,3,4,5) - There was a huge cursor move this part, and then suddenly a slow down at 02:33:129 (5,6) - . This wasn't effective enough considering the music.
03:15 _Asymmetry: 02:21:663 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - these parts i made them messy on purpose because the piano goes all sharp and flat and stuff
03:15 _Asymmetry: not sure if that's okay though
03:16 Sonnyc: That pattern is not okay since 02:21:899 (6) - is in the blue tick.
03:16 Sonnyc: This is something regarding the snap polarity issue
03:17 Sonnyc: clicking objects in blue tick is usually not a common thing in this game, so mappers should make those objects highly readable intuitively.
03:17 _Asymmetry: okay will fix
03:17 _Asymmetry: theres also a same part like that near the end
03:18 Sonnyc: So as you could feel my mods til now, spacing is a big issue, and deciding where to place is important.
03:18 Sonnyc: The basics of mapping is to maintaining the distance all along, since that is the most natural thing to do.
03:18 Sonnyc: But breaking the distance is one of the secrets of mapping as you can know.
03:19 _Asymmetry: breaking the distance is a secret of mapping?
03:19 _Asymmetry: as in it's okay to do sometimes?
03:19 Sonnyc: it usually makes a natural pattern and a better flow than simply just maintaining distances
03:20 _Asymmetry: okay got that.
03:20 Sonnyc: I can see you've also used some arbitrary distances here, and it's okay
03:20 Sonnyc: but when keeping distances, please do maintain them
03:20 Sonnyc: 03:17:133 (2,3,4) - is another example.
03:21 _Asymmetry: 03:16:646 (1,2,3,4) -
03:21 _Asymmetry: okay
03:21 _Asymmetry: i actually thought it'd be more fancy to not keep the same distance
03:21 _Asymmetry: since its a hard song and all xD
03:21 _Asymmetry: but i can also see how that looks less professional
03:22 Sonnyc: It's something you have to think a lot about.
03:22 Sonnyc: Breaking distance have potential to look fancy
03:22 Sonnyc: but it also has chances to just make things unpolished.
03:22 _Asymmetry: if the song allows it right
03:22 Sonnyc: That's why I mostly recommend to keep distance when you've got no idea what you're doing.
03:23 _Asymmetry: i hope i have an idea what im doing :3
03:24 Sonnyc: 04:44:594 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - I'm pretty sure this is not something natural in flow haha
03:24 Sonnyc: Anyways nice usage of sliders!
03:25 _Asymmetry: hah the jumps xd
03:25 _Asymmetry: thank you
03:27 Sonnyc: I think you can keep "flow" more in mind, if you plan future mappings. Well flow usages were overall neat this map, but rather felt simple.
03:27 Sonnyc: Some complex flows can be used if you can stack gather mapping experience.
03:27 Sonnyc: umm gotta go now

Euny wrote:

제비님이 저걸 포스팅을 하셔야 sp나 쿠도스를 얻어요

모딩하러곧 올게요 한국어도 가능하죠?

TheOnlyLeon wrote:

Lol, ok I remember the ancient map of this, AR 8 5 stars, and just really stacked streams. From my queue.

SERENITY

01:10:040 - (9,10,11,12) This feels out of place to hit, I'd straight up remove 11 to make this play more smoothly with the melody. While i don't entirely disagree with you, if I remove that one circle it contradicts with other similar beats ahead which all have a circle there. It feels lonely and empty for me

01:14:202 - (2) I don't like the jerky motion this causes, from sitting on the head of 1 to slowly dragging along 2 while it goes back and forth, Make the tail of 2 aim downwards to keep roughly similar motion to slider 1.done

01:14:595 - (5,6,1) The track this is mapped to is almost inaudible, which is often fine however the note the 1 slider is mapping starts at the same time circle 5 is hit, drop 5 and 6 and extend slider 1 to better match the song. done

01:15:851 - (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) ahaha, no. This doesn't even make sense with the song, it comes out of nowhere and completely fucks up the flow of the song, AND it's a huge pain in the ass to play, reminds me of the bad parts of the big black. Make this either a stack of circles or half the number of sliders while extending them because at least that would make sense with the music. just changed entirely

01:20:406 - (4,5) This is very backwards, you have almost inaudible notes for slider heads and very powerful notes on the slider tails, find a way to offset this, I don't care how it's done but the strong notes need to be clickable here.I feel its fine

01:24:647 - (1-8) This drastic change in speed doesn't make sense, again you're mapping powerfully to subtle hits that some people probably couldn't even tell are there, if you really want to keep this pattern use some custom hitsounds to at least make it SOUND like the sudden speed up is justified, add some loud hits to the slider heads and it should be fine, otherwise this should be a basic stream, you could even make a spaced one as long as it wasn't insane. added hitsounds

01:32:226 - (7,8,9) Broken DS here, Move the three slightly closer to the tail of 6. fixed

01:34:228 - (1-8) Completely unnecessary, this is what I refer to as bullshit difficulty, because you're fabricating difficulty through making a normal pattern awkward for no reason other than to pad difficulty. Make this a figure eight pattern like it looked like it should've been, don't change directions sharply like that whit to reason to do so. I had no intentions of making this pattern to feed the difficulty. I've done this because it worked. Until this point I thought the piano pitch goes up and down twice which is why i made the cursor movements go up and down twice, but it seems it only goes up only to come down straight back, I fixed it but not with as the 8 shape, if I understood correctly.

Surprisingly long section with nothing I can point at, anyways

02:25:118 - (1-16) This pattern kind of fits...... but half way the pattern breaks for a beat then starts again from the original intensity without continuing to grow, Cut this segment in half and try to mimic the effect of the music, what's there right now doesn't match. The violin still grows, the piano in the background still grows, I see where this one note's being held on the red tick, but they're still growing overall.

02:34:071 - (1) Is the NC here really necessary? Not an issue but seems pointless to me. dunno how tht got there, fixed

02:44:752 - (9) Move this note somewhere else, playing at this speed people will panic and hit it too early because of it being hidden for part of it's life by being a perfect overlap, almost anywhere else is fine just make sure players can see it at all times. done

02:57:160 - (1-4,1-4,1-4) Same as earlier, this isn't how the song sounds nor does it work with the music, either make this a stream or longer sliders, so that it follows the music properly. fixed

04:04:384 - (1) Following the pattern you've been keeping here, there should be a slider here instead of continuing the building stream, intentional or overlooked?
Intentional, I've done it the same way on the first part 02:20:092 (1) - of streams, since it has a sudden change in tone making it build up even more, I decided to skip the slider to give it no break.

Ok, maybe I got tired halfway through this mod and that's why the second half is kinda empty, but honestly mistakes aside this is pretty nice, compared to the shitmap 7+'s I'm used to seeing this is refreshing, cause for the most part it's mapped relatively well despite the insane difficulty level, which has always been hard to pull off (for me anyways). GJ and, while it still needs a lot of work, I'd be happy to see this ranked. GL.

AlchanyMan wrote:

Let me give this a mod.

Serenity

Ctrl+Shift+A goes a long way.

01:04:104 feels like it would be better at 01:04:182 No that doesn't make too much sense

01:03:540 flows better as a single hitcircle circle or a slider both are fine

01:31:872 - Pick it up a bit higher oh yeah, fixed

01:32:501 - Move this a bit farther to 01:32:658,01:32:815 to 01:32:972,01:33:286 to 01:33:433 and turn into a hitcircle,and maybe add a whistle to it. I'll keep it my way

01:40:747 & 01:40:825 - Move both farther to 01:40:825 and 01:40:982 respectively.Change the slider now at 01:40:982 to a single slider instead of a repeat slider.Also,just a suggestion,I'd move the new combo now at 01:40:825,remove it,and put a new one at 01:41:611. I left it the way it is, but I did add a NC somewhere near.
01:45:066 - Change to a single slider and move to 01:45:233. done

01:46:166 to 01:47:344 - I would combine the smaller streams into larger ones,but if you think the flow fits,you could keep it in. I'll keep em

02:06:584 to 02:08:783 - Do something about this.It feels...off.But...if I need to be specific,
Move 02:06:584 to 02:06:889
Move 02:06:889 to 02:07:056
Add a slider (maybe) to 02:06:584 until 02:06:741
Move the stream at 02:07:056 until 02:07:213 to 02:07:213,combine it with the hitcircle at 2:07:370.and move the new stream to the other hitcircle at 02:07:527.
Move the new combo from 02:07:448 to 02:07:527
Add a spaced note around 02:07:684
Move the hitcircle at 02:07:998 to 02:08:077 and delete the new combo
Move the stream at 02:07:684 until 02:07:841,and move the first note to 02:07:841
Move the notes at 02:08:077 and 02:08:155 so that they match up with the stream at 02:07:841 until 02:07:998
Add a new combo at 02:08:312
Delete the hitcircle at 02:08:391
Space out hitcircles now at 02:08:312 and 02:08:469
^^^^^^ I think this whole part is perfectly fine the way it is. I like the anticipation it builds up in the first two notes. 02:06:585 (3,4) -
Everything else is good!Mostly cleaned up.Excited for ranking!

Alliiiiiiiance wrote:

Sorry in advance for my english mistakes!

General
• Nice map with nice pattern but maybe you could try to add a little more symmetry? c:

Serenity
Design & stuff
• This combo seemed "hasty" 01:03:540 (2,3,4) tweaked offsets
Sliders
• 00:39:280 (2) As you're following the violin you could delete
the next slider and make this one longer, until 00:39:986 for example I enjoy it the way it is
• 02:40:825 (2,3) The fact that the end of those two is hidden may be a problem I think it's plenty readable but will tweak because since you pointed it out, it doesn't look good no mo
• 03:44:144 (3) Felt like it wasn't in the rhythm definitely in rhythm

Hitsounds
• Don't know if there is enough of them, maybe you could add more whistles

Hey I wasn't an enormous help because the diff is really hard for me! But I hope this can help even a bit!

Lolicore_Komari wrote:

From 1:1 Chat Req

[Serenity]

00:08:810 (5) - 개인적인 의견인데 이거 밑에 사진처럼 바꾸는게 더 부드러워질거같기도 하고.. x

추천

00:12:040 (4) - 이거 반시계방향으로 머리는 냅두고 좀 돌려보세요 한 25도 정도? x

00:18:436 (3,4) - 이거 밑에 사진처럼 바꾸면 더 부드러워질듯 x

추천

00:26:383 (3) - 이 뒤로 나오는 슬라이더틱소리 좀 거슬리는데 아예 커스텀힛사로 슬라이더틱소리 지워버리는건 ? 하나구해서 지울께요

00:37:719 (1) - 이거 끝에가 아쉬운데 더블클릭을 해서 직각을 줘버리던 좀더 곡선으로 꺾어버리던 하는게 나아보입니다. 지금상태는 좀 애매해요 수정

00:46:495 (5) - 갑자기 여기부터 00:47:757 (1) - 여기까지 변속준 이유라도 ? 이 뒤부터도 이곳이랑 같은 빠르기면 딱히 문제될건 없어보이지만 여기만 좀 빠르니까 이상하네요 수정. 오프셋 만지작거리다 까먹고 지나쳤네요

00:54:973 (3) - 이것보단 차라리 00:54:031 (1) - 이거 복붙시켜서 저위치에 대칭시키는것도 나쁘진 않을듯x

00:57:643 (3,4,5,6) - 뭔가 개연성없네요 점프가, 3번자리를 4번쪽 있는 단타위치에 두고 4단타로 만드는것도 나쁘진 않아보이는데x

01:00:155 (4,5,6,7) - ^ 첫번째 패턴 이어서

추가로 저기에 01:00:469 (6,7) - 여기엔 딱히 뭔가 노트찍을만한 음색이 안보이는데 굳이 넣은 이유라도 ?

01:03:545 (2,3,4) - 이거 2 3번 슬라이더 끝에는 5% 볼륨으로 묵음처리해도 괜찮을듯 묵음이였는데 오프셋이 바뀌고나서 약간 빗나갔네요

01:19:150 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 뭔가 연타모양이 못생겼어요. 차라리 저 뒤랑 이어서 u자모양으로 곡선처리하는게 더 나아보임 수정

01:19:778 (1,2,3) - 밑에 사진처럼 바꿔보시는건 어떤가요 ? 수정

추천

01:21:506 (4,5,6) - 노래를 들어보면 4번 노트 5 6번 슬라보다는 차라리 4 5번 슬라 6번 노트가 더 노래랑은 어울려요.

01:24:962 (4,6) - 피니쉬 지워주세요, 그리고 01:25:433 (8) - 여기에 피니쉬 추가 흠 별론데요

01:27:631 (5,6,7,8) - 이거 좀더 굽혀주세요. 너무 뻣뻣해서 못생겨보이네요 수정

01:38:862 (6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3) - 직선을 만드려면 확실히 뻗어주시고 곡선으로 굽히려면 확실히 굽혀주세요수정

01:48:443 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - ^

01:40:040 (1) - 이거 지워도 될거같아요노래에선 안들리지만 잘 어울리는거같아서 되도록이면 놥두고싶네요

01:41:218 (3) - ^ 수정

01:43:260 (2) - ^x

01:54:412 (2) - ^없애면 허전한? 일단은 놔둠

01:44:752 (7,8,9) - 앞 연타랑 간격 맞춰주세요. 일부러 줄인것처럼 보이진 않아서..수정

02:04:386 (3,4,5,6,1) - 점프가 개연성이 없고 너무 치기 어려워 보입니다. 붙이는게 더 나아보여요생각해볼께요

02:18:836 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 동선이 어색한데 .. 다른모양으로 바꿔보시는건ㅌ

02:22:683 (10) - 뉴콤 추가해주세요쑤정

02:22:683 (10,11,12,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 이런 박자면 뭔가 치기 좀 어색한데 .. 리피트를 더 넣거나 아예 빼버리시는건..?x

02:24:962 (15) - 갑자기 1/8 숏슬라... 어색해요 옹 못봤네요 수정.

02:35:014 (1,2,3) - 깔끔하게 끊어줘야되는데 질질 끌어버리는 느낌이 드네요. 개인적 의견이지만

02:48:522 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ?? 굳이 이런모양 넣으실 필요가 있었나요? 심지어 이거 일직선도아님 수정

02:53:548 (4,1,2,3,4) - 연타는 조금만 더 펼쳐보시는게 x

02:54:176 (5,6,7) - 이런 무리배치는 별로 추천하지 않습니다.x

03:53:389 (1,1) - ^x

04:40:667 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^x

03:37:942 (9,1) - ?? 앞에 노트하나 더붙여주시는게 치기 더 편할듯x

03:38:926 (3,4,5,6) - 연타간격 통일해주세요 흐음 일부러 그랬는데 생각해보께요

03:55:588 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 연타가 나올만한 음은 아닌거같습니다. 첫 후렴부분하고 매치

03:57:473 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^

03:59:358 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^

04:14:437 (1) - 이거 뒤로 한칸 밀고 그자리에 노트두시는게 더 나아보여요x

04:17:264 (3,4) - 4번노트 3번슬라 끝에 겹치는게 더 나을듯수정

04:34:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 이런배치가 나올만한 이유를 저는 못찾겠습니다 따라라라 나오기전의 준비의 느낌?

04:53:389 (1) - 뉴콤 빼주세요 나이스캐치 수정

힛사 잘넣으시네여

굿럭

• - bolded difficulties are the ones that I modded; timestamp of what I modded is included in this case because it’s a Marathon map

1. 00:08:810 (5,6) – Use the same slider shape here; don’t think I didn’t notice (╯°Д°）╯︵/(.□ . )
2. 00:18:436 (3) – I think making this a circle instead will help emphasize the piano more
3. 00:47:757 (1) – I don’t know if it’s just me, but this looks blanketed a little awkwardly
4. 00:56:544 (5) – new combo here instead of at 00:56:858 (1)
5. 01:02:849 (1) – This slider feels a little too long; shorten it into a 1/1 slider
6. 01:11:768 (1,2) – I’m not entirely familiar with extras, but this seems a little too much. Also I don’t think it flows well; maybe reverse (Ctrl + G) the (1) slider?
7. 01:30:459 (2,3) - Use the same slider shapes here so that it’s more visually pleasing
8. 02:24:490 (9) – NC here? Combo count starts to get really high here
9. 02:36:270 (6) – New combo here instead of at 02:36:899 (1)
10. 02:43:967 (5) – New combo here instead of at 02:43:652 (1)
11. 03:24:186 (1) – Why is this mapped to a 1/8 beat? It feels like it ends a little late. Make it end on 03:25:128 instead
12. 03:34:604 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I feel like this part may be a little bit overmapped, considering the piano stream doesn’t start until 03:35:507 (6)
13. 03:54:332 (1) – Make this blanket 03:54:803 (3) more nicely
14. 04:47:421 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) – I’d move these a little bit more closely to the centre; having them on the edge of the map seems a little overkill to me, especially with how fast the song is going
15. 04:51:976 (1) – Again, I think you should reverse (Ctrl + G) this
16. 04:59:986 (2) – New combo here instead of at 04:59:672 (1)

Doormat wrote:

Hello, from my queue. Sorry for the wait! I forgot I had a queue to finish woops-

Oh dear it’s 7.2 stars may the lord have mercy on my soul ;w; I’m going to assume the streams are okay for the most part, but I’ll still point out things that I think are a little crazy

Difficulties looked at: Serenity – 0:00:957 to 05:03:127

• - bolded difficulties are the ones that I modded; timestamp of what I modded is included in this case because it’s a Marathon map

Serenity

1. 00:08:810 (5,6) – Use the same slider shape here; don’t think I didn’t notice (╯°Д°）╯︵/(.□ . ) >__ ; fixedd
2. 00:18:436 (3) – I think making this a circle instead will help emphasize the piano more done
3. 00:47:757 (1) – I don’t know if it’s just me, but this looks blanketed a little awkwardly wasn't sure either, fixed for sure now though
4. 00:56:544 (5) – new combo here instead of at 00:56:858 (1) won't fit the pattern
5. 01:02:849 (1) – This slider feels a little too long; shorten it into a 1/1 slider There's an almost inaudible pair of drum hit at that tick and i like it the way it is
6. 01:11:768 (1,2) – I’m not entirely familiar with extras, but this seems a little too much. Also I don’t think it flows well; maybe reverse (Ctrl + G) the (1) slider? x
7. 01:30:459 (2,3) - Use the same slider shapes here so that it’s more visually pleasing mm caught that too huhmm fixed
8. 02:24:490 (9) – NC here? Combo count starts to get really high here done
9. 02:36:270 (6) – New combo here instead of at 02:36:899 (1) done
10. 02:43:967 (5) – New combo here instead of at 02:43:652 (1) ^
11. 03:24:186 (1) – Why is this mapped to a 1/8 beat? It feels like it ends a little late. Make it end on 03:25:128 instead fixed
12. 03:34:604 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I feel like this part may be a little bit overmapped, considering the piano stream doesn’t start until 03:35:507 (6) mini arpeggio
13. 03:54:332 (1) – Make this blanket 03:54:803 (3) more nicely mm done
14. 04:47:421 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) – I’d move these a little bit more closely to the centre; having them on the edge of the map seems a little overkill to me, especially with how fast the song is going just carrying on the momentum from seconds before
15. 04:51:976 (1) – Again, I think you should reverse (Ctrl + G) this x
16. 04:59:986 (2) – New combo here instead of at 04:59:672 (1) done

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Well, that’s about all I can find. Hope this helps you out, and best of luck

i hate pp wrote:

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01:39:407 (3) - Curve this towards the right done
01:52:090 (6) - This isnt on a tick and is very hard to read x
01:58:491 (2) - Dont make sliders overlap like this especially at high bpm like this, hard to read x
02:09:093 (3) - End this on the previous blue tick so theres more time to snap haven't gotten any sliderbreak
03:37:942 (9,1) - Make this more readable x
04:06:427 (2,3,4) - Be consistent with the stream spacing if youre going to break it apart its meant to be spaced, but adjusted
04:09:411 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - No x
04:14:437 (1) - Not enough recovery time what recovery time?
04:44:595 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ..... the song calls me to do so

God help you