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Majikaru Patishie Kosaki Chan (CV:Hanazawa Kana) - Magical*S

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wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
wcx19911123
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年7月3日 at 10:23:01

Artist: Majikaru Patishie Kosaki Chan (CV:Hanazawa Kana)
Title: Magical*Styling
Source: マジカルパティシエ小咲ちゃん!!
Tags: ニセコイ:
BPM: 162
Filesize: 2397kb
Play Time: 01:13
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4.3 stars, 262 notes)
  2. Kuuhaku`s Normal+ (2.33 stars, 141 notes)
  3. Mochi's Hard (3.13 stars, 194 notes)
  4. Moecho's Styling (4.46 stars, 256 notes)
  5. Normal (1.96 stars, 137 notes)
Download: Majikaru Patishie Kosaki Chan (CV:Hanazawa Kana) - Magical*Styling
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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need confirmed metadata information and a high quality video atm
Last edited by wcx19911123 , edited 12 times in total.
Euny
2,274 posts
Joined January 2014
Euny

as your request!♥ came from my queue


  • General
  1. where is bg lol
  2. probably producing. anyways, your mapset need to easy or normal.
  3. offset is pretty early. seems need to audio lead in
  • Insane
  1. put hitsound.
  2. 00:21:145 (5) - how about move it 77/199 for better ds with 00:20:959 (4,1) - these?
  3. 00:27:070 (6) - same reason by above. i recommend move it to 368/120 for better flow
  4. 00:33:737 (2) - i recommend this timeline. its more fit for vocal. also playful.

    just for sample
  5. 00:35:404 (3) - put note in here. it makes up to this part.
  6. 00:37:811 (2) - same as above i think you missed put in here.
  7. 00:39:107 (1) - i think its kiai begin.
that's it :)
call me when you other diffs done. i'll mod again.
Hard
696 posts
Joined February 2013
Hard
yo.

From my queue

[Insane]
  1. since this is WIP i won't add anything about bg and stuff. it'll be there when you go for rank. i'm sure.
  2. 00:01:655 (5,6,7) - to emphasize the flute in the background I suggest you somehow make a jump at 7 but not from 5 -> 6. So keep the spacing normal first and then go to 7. else this feels slightly overmapped, tbh
  3. 00:04:618 (6,7) - again maybe reduce the spacing for those 2
  4. 00:05:914 (4) - ctrl + g for some circular flow maybe? it would play better, i guess
  5. 00:24:618 (2,3,4) - how about you use the same spacing for all those 3 notes? that's better for looks and the feeling while playing
  6. 00:34:247 (3,4,1) - this sudden 1/2 jump could be a bit too sudden and difficult to read. i wouldn't recommend this.
  7. 00:36:099 (4,1) - ^
  8. hm that's all. overall i think you sometimes did a bit too much as the song doesn't suggest big jumps. it feels more gentle and not as fast as you have to go with your right hand but this may just be my opinion.
Everything
81 posts
Joined September 2013
Everything
Hi! From my modding queue

00:34:710 (4,1) - extremely huge jump, and it's a half beat ( ; o ; )
00:33:322 (1,2,3,4) - It's kind of sound choppy to me. (maybe hitsounds need)
00:34:803 (1,2,3,4) - ^ same as above
all for now. It's very short, sorry D: I know it's WIP but hopefully you add hitsounds and other necessities in the progress. If you want, you can call me back when you have other difficulties available :)
Magenta
16 posts
Joined August 2013
Magenta
From mod queue! Avoiding what other's have suggested.

Mod
There's some distance spacing and flow issues throughout I think, but it might change based on previous people mods so I won't detail them for now. Some specific things that stood out a lot though.

00:33:877 (2) - I'd suggest something like below instead, it follows the vocals better I think.



00:38:044 (2,3) - There's no need for this double, there's nothing in the music for it. Could change to something like below instead.


Let me know when you've done other diffs, added BG, hitsounds etc and I'll mod again.
KuroSenpai112
114 posts
Joined December 2013
KuroSenpai112
Hi there from queue, sorry for the long wait!

[General]
Add Kiai time from 00:39:247 to 00:51:007 and 00:51:099 to 1:02:581 for both diffs.

[Insane]
00:24:803 (3) - it would be better if this note had consistent spacing with (1) and (2). You can keep the jump between (3) and (4) since vocals are emphasized.
00:34:618 (4, 1) - decrease the distance between these two
00:47:581 (4, 5, 6) - consistent spacing here would be better imo.
Throughout the map there are spacing issues but since this a WIP map, feel free to message me again for another mod later.

[Hard]
Nothing to say here, well mapped.
Kuuhaku
104 posts
Joined October 2011
Kuuhaku
大队长，我约个normal
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osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 39155
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 2.3

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TitleUnicode:マジカル☆スタイリング
Artist:Majikaru Patishie Kosaki Chan (CV:Hanazawa Kana)
ArtistUnicode:マジカルパティシエ小咲ちゃん（CV:花澤香菜）
Creator:wcx19911123
Version:Kuuhaku`s Normal+
Source:マジカルパティシエ小咲ちゃん!!
Tags:ニセコイ:
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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Moecho
267 posts
Joined October 2014
Moecho
finished
不过我先等你加些自定义的音效吧 我现在大概下好了

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TitleUnicode:マジカル☆スタイリング
Artist:Majikaru Patishie Kosaki Chan (CV:Hanazawa Kana)
ArtistUnicode:マジカルパティシエ小咲ちゃん（CV:花澤香菜）
Creator:wcx19911123
Version:Moecho's Styling
Source:マジカルパティシエ小咲ちゃん!!
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HappyRocket88
4,322 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88


Hi From my queue. As I have lost my skill to mod insane, I'll provide you a mod for the Mochi's Hard. Good luck with your map. n.n7

General

  1. The offset should be in 359. o.o

Mochi's hard

Overall, pretty interesting hard. You've done a very nice job. Are you an experienced mapper or what? xD

  1. 00:00:729 (2) This would look enjoyable if you add a New combo here. :3
  2. 00:13:136 (2) This can be more lineal
  3. 00:29:340 What about adding a note here to put a tiny stream here?
  4. 00:46:470 (1,2,3) This could look a little bit better blanket them. o3o
DahplA
1,099 posts
Joined March 2014
DahplA
Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding Team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.

Moecho's Styling
  1. 00:01:099 (2) - Fix blanket
  2. 00:06:285 (5) - Fix stack slightly
  3. 00:28:877 (1,2,3,4) - I think the distance of 3,4 should be more than 2,3 since there's more emphasis there
  4. 00:30:359 (1) - You need to fix this curve so it blankets better
  5. 00:42:859 (4,5,6,7) - This part is sort of pushing it. I don't feel there's a need for a stream-ish part here.
  6. 01:08:877 (1) - I think you can increase distance spacing because it's finish
Insane
  1. This isn't a difficulty specific comment, but you may need to add another difficulty because the spread from Hard to Insane is way more than Insane to Styling.
  2. 00:00:359 (1) - Not really a huge fan of this slider. I suggest a normal curved slider, but your choice in the end
  3. 00:18:136 (6) - I don't think this is needed here. I can't hear any particular noise on the 1/8 ticks
  4. 00:19:988 (1,3) - For these parts where you emphasize the vocals, I believe the distance spacing should be similar on both. Also, you can make a good triangle with 00:19:988 (1,2,3) - if you move 3 closer. It might conflict with 00:21:099 (4,5) - however, so it's your choice.
  5. 00:22:210 (3) - Fix blanket
  6. 00:33:877 (2,3,4,2,3,4) - This set of notes is a bit of a hard rhythm to hit.
  7. 00:54:433 (3) - This angle at the end doesn't look very appealing, and in my opinion there's nothing really special about this note to make a change in slider shape
Mochi's Hard
  1. 00:27:025 (4) - Improve this blanket (specifically the slider end)

^_^
Moecho
267 posts
Joined October 2014
Moecho

DahplA wrote:

Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding Team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.

Moecho's Styling
  1. 00:01:099 (2) - Fix blanket nothing wrong with this blanket, it would look too curved
  2. 00:06:285 (5) - Fix stack slightly what
  3. 00:28:877 (1,2,3,4) - I think the distance of 3,4 should be more than 2,3 since there's more emphasis there for me there is barely any noticable emphasis change here, so doesn't matter
  4. 00:30:359 (1) - You need to fix this curve so it blankets better the blanket is fine
  5. 00:42:859 (4,5,6,7) - This part is sort of pushing it. I don't feel there's a need for a stream-ish part here. no need but fun to play, and the background music does support it
  6. 01:08:877 (1) - I think you can increase distance spacing because it's finish no, tripple in before compensates this emphasis

^_^
All deny, I write reason on each
Bara-
11,978 posts
Joined April 2013
Bara-


[General]
You need a BG, Combo colors, hitsounds etc. (which is fine as this is still WIP)

[Mochi's Hard]
  1. 00:09:618 (3,4) - Try to blanket them, it'll look better
  2. 00:24:433 (1) - I don't really like the way (2) follows after this slider. Try making the slider curve down instead of up so it'll feel better
  3. 01:00:914 (4) - The jump feels a little awkward, Ctrl G this slider to make it feel more clam (as the song itself is quite calm)
Great diff!

[Insane]
  1. 00:00:359 (1) - The flow seems a little weird to me, try to do the following. Ctrl G this slider, and move to 256:144, this feels much better flow-wise
  2. 00:03:599 (1) - I'm no fan of such stacks, it is better to read and looks nicer if you move (1) to 272:264, so it implies it's 1/4 (and not a 1/2 stack)
  3. 00:10:173 (2) - This slider feels really weird, make it a 1/2 slider instead of a 3/4 slider (or silence the end), the 3/4 end feels really weird and unfitting
  4. 00:18:136 (6) - Uhm, I don't hear any sound whcih implies the usage of this slider
Rest of the diff seems perfectly fine

Wow, such a bad mod this has been

I hope you can find the correct meta-data so you can rank this map, it's very good!
Good luck!
Exa
446 posts
Joined January 2015
Exa
[Normal]


00:06:655 (1,2) - It's easy to avoid such overlaps. Make your map as clean as possible.
00:22:210 - There is a noticeable beat here.
00:33:322 (7) - Use a slider here.
00:48:136 (1,2) - Not a perfect blanket.
01:08:877 (7,1) - They must have a time gap of 750ms.

[Kuuhaku`s Normal+]


00:12:581 (2,3) - Not a perfect blanket. You can leave it be though.
00:14:062 (5,6) - Not a perfect blanket.
00:22:951 (6,1) - Not a perfect blanket.
00:24:062 (2,3) - Bad overlap, it may affect readability.
00:24:433 (3,4) - Not a perfect blanket.
01:01:285 (3,1) - You can avoid that overlap.
01:02:581 (1,2) - Make sure your transitions are smooth and not forceful.
01:05:914 (1,2) - Not a perfect blanket.

[Mochi's Hard]


00:11:840 (3,1,2) - Blanket those nicely.
00:16:099 (2,4) - Not a perfect blanket.
00:38:136 (6,7) - I would stack 7 with the end of 6.
00:43:507 (1,2) - Not a perfect blanket.
00:56:655 (5,1) - Too big of a jump, also followed by a stream. It is too hard.
01:06:655 (3) - Ctrl+G this one.
01:07:025 (4,1) - Not a perfect blanket.
01:08:970 (1) - Start the spinner at 01:08:970 -.
- Set AR to 8.

[Insane]


00:03:322 (6,2) - Blanket those.
00:05:729 (3,4) - Bad transition.
00:20:359 (2,3) - You use that kind of flow a lot. Avoid abusing it.
00:27:025 (5,6) - Why have an anti-jump here?
00:28:507 (5,6) - You also tend to stop the flow for no apparent reason.
00:29:433 (3,4) - Bad transition.
00:29:618 (4,6) - Blanket.
00:34:433 - There is a playable beat here. Better the vocals as well in this part.
00:35:544 - Same goes for this one.
00:43:322 (5,1) - Bad transition.
00:47:210 (3) - Ctrl+G this for better flow. Mind the big jump that will form if you do that though.
00:54:433 (3) - Such a weird slider formation, it's not clear what you are trying to do here.
01:01:377 (1) - Start the spinner 01:01:470 - here.
01:08:970 (1) - Start the spinner 01:09:062 - here.

[Moecho's Styling]


00:14:803 (3,4,5,6) - Either stack or space more those for better readability.
00:29:433 (4,5) - This jump does not play well due to the sudden change of pace and flow.
00:32:766 (5) - Ask a BN about this slider. It might no fly on the qualification process.
00:42:210 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - You have overmapped this part. There are huge jump here.
00:53:877 (7) - I would delete that. The flow is much better without it..

[General]

- How about using custom colors?
- Moecho's Styling is a quality difficulty, don't let it dishonored.
- Normal, Hard and Insane need a lot of polishing.

I see potential in this mapset, keep developing it.
Ask me in-game for any questions you might have.
Ciyus Miapah
3,028 posts
Joined June 2013
Ciyus Miapah
looks this map still WIP so i cant mod Hitsounding on your insane, but okay for it

Insane:
00:01:840 (6) - x100y296 (it looks a bit overlap) or can move to x148y296 (overlap style)
00:08:692 (3,2) - maybe you can blanket this one (yeah just blanket 2)
00:24:803 (3) - move to x308y352 better movement
00:30:914 (3) - make like this or anything else http://puu.sh/iwETw/8378a959c0.jpg
00:33:877 (2,3,4,1) - looks this pattern is off a bit, you need to add circle on 00:33:692 - it will become better polarization (and that part has very strong vocal and instrument sound)
00:44:247 (4,5) - move up by 3 grid (tiny grid) you will get what i mean

looks only this i can say
didnt really know much about metadata and other things related sorry

okay good luck with map! :3
RzHr
267 posts
Joined July 2013
RzHr
From my ModQ :)


General
- BG?
- AudioLeadIn 2000
- Add more combo colours?

Normal
- Kiai & HS?
- 00:10:544 (2) - make it curved on 00:10:822 - ? i think the sound appear there
- 00:19:062 (2) - not curved yet on 00:19:247 -
- 00:33:877 (1) - imo, sounds better if it start on 00:33:692 -
- 00:39:247 (1) - ctrl+j
- 01:01:285 (4) - don't overlap?
- 01:04:247 (5) - Curve on 01:04:618 - ?
- 01:09:062 (1) - sounds end here, imo .-. 01:13:322 -

Kuuhaku's Normal+
- i think there is a lot of repetitive pattern
- 00:00:729 (2) - NC
- 00:01:470 (3) - ctrl+j
- 00:05:359 (5,7) - not blanket properly
- 00:06:655 (1) - ctrl+j
- 00:07:210 (2) - make it curved on 00:07:210 (2) -
- 00:08:136 (1) - ctrl+j
- 00:08:691 (2) - curved on 00:08:877 -
- 00:12:581 (2,3) - (2) tail not blanket with (3)
- 00:14:062 (5,6,1,2) - blanket them properly
- 00:16:285 (4,5) - ^
- 00:17:766 (6,7) - ^
- 00:18:507 (1,2) - (1) head not blanket with (2)
- 00:21:099 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - blanket?
- 00:24:433 (3,4) - blanket properly
- 00:25:914 (1,3) - ^
- 00:27:396 (5,6,7) - ^
- 00:35:729 (5) - ctrl+j
- 00:39:247 (1,3) - not blanket properly
- 00:40:729 (5,6,7) - ^
- 00:45:173 (1,3) - ^
- 00:51:099 (1,3) - ^
- 00:52:581 (5,7) - ^
- 00:58:322 (4,7) - ^
- 01:05:914 (1,2) - ^
- 01:07:396 (4) - ctrl+j
- 01:09:062 (1) - spinner end on 01:13:322 -

Mochi's Hard
- Kiai & HS?
- 00:00:729 (2) - NC
- 00:09:618 (3,4) - not blanket properly
- 00:28:877 (1,2) - stack properly
- 00:43:507 (1,2) - blanket
- 00:43:507 (1,3) - make it a parallel blanket? :>
- 00:53:322 (6) - make it curve on 00:53:507 - to follow the drum sound
- 01:03:507 (2,3,1) - Blanket
- 01:08:136 (3) - 416,264
- 01:08:970 (1) - spinner end on 01:13:322 -

Insane
- Kiai & HS?
- 00:08:692 (3) - 64,264
- 00:21:470 (1,3) - not a perfect blanket
- 00:29:618 (4) - 337,257
- 00:30:359 (1) - 176,376
- 00:44:803 (6) - 432,16
- 01:08:970 (1) - end on 01:13:322 -

Moecho's Styling
- Kiai?
- Disable Widescreen Support
- 00:32:766 (5) - add F on tail, btw... 1/12BSD? .-.
- 00:42:488 (2,3,4,5,6) - feel overmapped & doesn't fit, imo.
- 00:57:951 (5,1,3) - not a perfect blanket i think

Sorry for my bad english :cry:
GL :D
Blizs
898 posts
Joined November 2013
Blizs
you need a BG ? :3
Kuuhaku
104 posts
Joined October 2011
Kuuhaku

Exa wrote:

[Kuuhaku`s Normal+]


00:12:581 (2,3) - Not a perfect blanket. You can leave it be though. Well,I don`t use grid snap...
00:14:062 (5,6) - Not a perfect blanket. As above
00:22:951 (6,1) - Not a perfect blanket. ^
00:24:062 (2,3) - Bad overlap, it may affect readability. Yes,thanks,fixed
00:24:433 (3,4) - Not a perfect blanket. It does look bad,fixed
01:01:285 (3,1) - You can avoid that overlap. How to?Actually I don`t know how to make it better...
01:02:581 (1,2) - Make sure your transitions are smooth and not forceful. Nice idea,I`ve made a lot of changes which look much better than before and,of course,smooth enough~
01:05:914 (1,2) - Not a perfect blanket. I`ve remapped this beatmap from 01:02:581 (1,2) -
Thanks for modding
Kuuhaku
104 posts
Joined October 2011
Kuuhaku

RzHr wrote:

Kuuhaku's Normal+
- i think there is a lot of repetitive pattern In some ways,I think so...
- 00:00:729 (2) - NC But I don`t always use NC on downbeats,sorry
- 00:01:470 (3) - ctrl+j Nope,if so,this beatmap will be more repetitive...
- 00:05:359 (5,7) - not blanket properly fixed
- 00:06:655 (1) - ctrl+j I`ve got a better idea after I tried this opinion
- 00:07:210 (2) - make it curved on 00:07:210 (2) - Since I`ve remapped this beatmap from 00:06:655 to 00:09:062,this opinion is out of date =w=
- 00:08:136 (1) - ctrl+j As above
- 00:08:691 (2) - curved on 00:08:877 - As above
- 00:12:581 (2,3) - (2) tail not blanket with (3) Refuse,I mainly use this pattern in this diff
- 00:14:062 (5,6,1,2) - blanket them properly Well,I don`t use grid snap
- 00:16:285 (4,5) - ^ As above
- 00:17:766 (6,7) - ^ As above
- 00:18:507 (1,2) - (1) head not blanket with (2) I`m not sure whether to change or not...
- 00:21:099 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - blanket? no
- 00:24:433 (3,4) - blanket properly ^
- 00:25:914 (1,3) - ^^
- 00:27:396 (5,6,7) - ^^
- 00:35:729 (5) - ctrl+j ^
- 00:39:247 (1,3) - not blanket properly ^
- 00:40:729 (5,6,7) - ^ fixed
- 00:45:173 (1,3) - ^ no
- 00:51:099 (1,3) - ^
- 00:52:581 (5,7) - ^
- 00:58:322 (4,7) - ^
- 01:05:914 (1,2) - ^ fixed
- 01:07:396 (4) - ctrl+j
- 01:09:062 (1) - spinner end on 01:13:322 - fixed
others all refuse...
thanks for modding
Blizs
898 posts
Joined November 2013
Blizs
Hi wcx :3~~

from F Ant's Priority Queue !!

Normal

  1. 00:22:951 (3,4,5) - Hmm... it's a bit confusing. The player will hesitate about when to click 00:23:507 (4) - because 00:23:692 (5) - looks closer to 00:22:951 (3) - than 00:22:951 (3) - . And the player will click 00:23:507 (4) - earlier (1 beat) or click 00:23:692 (5) - first. I sugest to change 00:22:951 (3,4) - into 3/2 slider like this => http://puu.sh/iArmd/3f6e99e1da.jpg
  2. 00:33:877 (1) - Since I see you mainly follow the vocal, I think it's unreadable because there's no transition from vocal to instrument here. I suggest to add note for vocal on 00:33:692 - .
  3. 00:37:581 - I think it's not really a good Idea to ignore the vocal here. I suggest to add a circle here.

Kuuhaku`s Normal+

  1. I think it's should be Kuuhaku's Normal+ not Kuuhaku`s Normal+
  2. 00:09:247 (1) - I think this spinner should started at 00:09:618 - because I think it will more reasonable to put a spinner. If you do this, add a circle at 00:09:247 - to keep the flow. and the spinner should ended at 00:11:099 - to make it more longer. And I don't know the reason why did you end the spinner at 00:10:729 - because I hear nothing special there. And I suggest to delete 00:11:099 (1,2,3) - to make some space between spinner and notes so the player can prepare for notes after spinning. It's still Notmal+ not Hard at all.
  3. 00:16:840 (5) - Finish on the head looks not really fit here because I hear the emhasis was on 00:17:025 - not 00:16:840 - .
  4. 00:29:988 (4) - I see this slider was just mirrored from 00:29:247 (1) - . So I think this slider at least consistent with 00:29:247 (1) - . A note stacked on the head looks a bit confusing here because 00:29:247 (1) - wasn't use any notes stacking on it's head. I suggest to change 00:29:618 (2,3) - to a 1/2 slider. It's more readable.
  5. 00:36:285 (1,1,2,3) - Nah... this pat is similar to Hard diff (or maybe higher). A 1/2 snap between spinner and notes was really hard. and after that extended sliders plays x_x. This part really killing even for Normal+. Try this pattern from 00:36:285 - to 00:38:692 - => http://puu.sh/iAuq5/2f7ba347c0.jpg . It's more fit to Normal Diff.
  6. Differen Snap on stacking between 00:42:581 (2,3) - and 00:43:877 (4,5) - Was really unreadable. If I can suggest something, I'll suggest to not stack them at all.
  7. 00:44:803 (6,1,3) - This is a complex part. The overlap between them looks really bad and looks deceiving. Highly recommend to avoid the overlaping.
  8. 00:50:359 (1) - Delete this to give the player more time to prepare before clicking after spinner.
  9. 00:54:433 (1) - The way its overlapped looks a bit unreadable. I suggest to move it in other way=> http://puu.sh/iAuTO/a2a73e9192.jpg .
  10. 00:57:581 (2,3,4) - The way the overlapped looks not really good. Try to avoid this.
  11. 01:03:322 (2,3) - Maybe you can switch their position and snap so we can make the vocal as click here.
  12. 01:09:062 (1) - I think this spinner should ended at 01:13:229 - since there was where you put the green line and the part where the pitch increasing ended in the song.

Mochi's Hard

  1. 00:17:396 (2,3) - How about put the circle stacking on 00:16:655 (4) - 's head rather than put the slider's end stackin on it ? I think it's more visible rather than you put the circle there.
  2. 00:48:692 - I think it's not a really good idea to ignore the vocal decreasing point here since you didn't ignore it on 00:49:433 - . Try this pattern on 00:48:136 (1,2,3) - => http://puu.sh/iAvTO/e4aab15eac.jpg . The way I make (1) a long slider was to improve the long vocal there.
  3. 00:50:544 - I think you can add a circle here. I'm afraid if 00:49:988 (2,3,4) - will be read as http://puu.sh/iAvEV/78d77d9f63.jpg .

Insane

  1. 00:03:322 (6,1,2) - I think put a jump stream in Insane not really a good idea especially on this part. When I play it I think it was 1/2 T.T. How about this one ? => http://puu.sh/iAwnC/b59a356358.jpg
  2. 00:37:766 (1,2,3) - I think use an extended slider is more fit here rather than this because the vocal on 00:37:766 - was a long vocal. And use an extended slider looks more readable here.
  3. 00:40:729 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Like I said about jump stream before. (I prefer like 00:53:507 (5,6,7) - 's pattern.)

Moecho's Styling

  1. 00:32:766 (5) - 1/12 x_x.... But since it's not crazy 1/2 clicks I think it's okay :3
  2. 00:42:210 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This part become really hard from the part before it and make the spread between it looks awkward. And I hear nothing special that have a big effect in the song. This part just a same part with the parts around it in the song. I can understand if this part just like 00:50:359 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - that have some streams on the song and pitch increasing on it.
  3. 01:08:970 (1) - and this spinner looks better ended at 01:13:229 - because here was the main point of pitch increasing in the song.

That's all :3
Hope it help ;)

oh... and I've made a BG :3 tell me if you don't like it or I must do anything about this ;)
I don't know if it's good or not :3

Good Luck ;)
Shiranai
2,186 posts
Joined August 2012
Shiranai
Helloooo from my queue~
Some small sugestion from me,

[General]
  1. Add hitsound please, bg and video like you said on description, you know that unrankble right
  2. Add more tags
[Normal]
  1. 00:33:322 (7,1) - Swap nc for consistency on making new combo after two measurment
  2. 00:22:025 (2,3,4) - The transition rhythm on those notes kinda bad imo, because (3,4) like too empty while play. How about try this rhythm instead? http://puu.sh/iGLva/225ed93ec4.jpg
  3. 00:33:692 - Add note there? It's odd when you miss strong beat there, and I guess it's better to follow the vocal there imo, so new player is not confused because the music change to new part
  4. 01:01:285 (4) - ❤
  5. 01:09:062 (1) - I think add more green lines there to adjust the volume would be good imo
[Kuuhaku`s Normal+]
  1. You did a typo there lol, check again your spelling. And in my opinion, because of the fast SV in this diff is not friendly enough to new player, I think this diff should be re-named as Kuuhaku's Light Hard, so player is much aware that this diff is some what like a Hard
  2. 00:01:470 (3,4) - In my opinion, the flow will much better if you do a ctrl+g on (4), because when (3) goes upward to (4) then goes back again downward it's kinda make the flow kinda odd
  3. 00:04:803 (4,5,6) - Based on the music, the rhythm on those one kinda odd imo. I think you can reduce the repeat on (4) and try this rhythm instead? http://puu.sh/iGMnQ/56bcb6dfff.jpg
  4. 00:07:951 (3,1) - The rhythm on that one is also odd, because I think (1) is not represent anything based on the song imo. How about try this rhythm instead? http://puu.sh/iGMx9/bbeaead69e.jpg
  5. 00:11:099 (1,2,3) - How about a bit re-arrange the placing on those three? I think you can improve the flow here, by making something like this http://puu.sh/iGMHs/673e7f42ea.jpg
  6. 00:14:618 (6,1,2) - That overlapping looks bad and too cramped imo, furthermore it's like you just force the placing that one, I think you need a bit movement there
  7. 00:15:544 (2,3,4) - The flow kinda poor there, the movement just too cramped imo
  8. 00:24:433 (3,4,5) - To avoid overlap with (2), you can move those three to x:43 y:215 http://puu.sh/iGMXh/04b7390b96.jpg
  9. 00:37:766 (1,2,3) - Those slider end stacking, make it hard to read while playing, and furthermore you have same stacking here 00:42:581 (2,3) - and here 00:43:877 (4,5) - for diffrent rhythm. So probably re-thinking on that kind of thing
  10. 00:42:581 (2,3) - Avoid slider end stacking there, to prevent confusing rhythm like this one 00:37:766 (1,2,3) -
  11. 00:43:877 (4,5) - Here also try to avoid slider end stacking
  12. 00:59:988 - Add cicrle there might be better, to fill the emptyness and try to follow drum sound on that one
  13. 01:00:914 (2) - To prevent overlap, you can try move that one to x:207 y:120, then try move this one 01:01:285 (3) - to x:327 y:27 http://puu.sh/iGNjW/12e917d7bb.jpg
  14. 01:02:581 (1) - Make that slider a less curve so it'll make a blanket with 01:01:285 (3) - ,it's something like this http://puu.sh/iGNoS/26a5ec3647.jpg
  15. 01:04:247 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - Looks slopy and it's feel too crowded and cramped when play imo, try a bit re-arrange and avoid that overlaps
  16. 01:09:062 (1) - Based on musicality, that spinner better end here 01:13:229

    Try to avoid using slider end stacking for better readability

[Mochi's Hard]
  1. Add hitsound please, you know that unrankble right
  2. 00:11:840 (3,4) - Menurut aku kak, dari pada dibuat jump mending dibuat anti jump aja deh yang kaya gini 00:10:173 (4,5) - 00:23:692 (3,4,1) - kayanya lebih ngefeel
  3. 00:24:433 (1) - Coba diflip ctrl+j deh kak, flownya bisa diimprove buat (1,2) di sana?
  4. 00:49:988 (2,3,4) - Streamnya ganjil, coba tambah circle lagi di sini 00:50:544 -?
[Insane]
  1. Add hitsound please, you know that unrankble right
  2. 00:09:618 (1) - Rotate 10 degree and move to x:364 y:77 might looks better for the whole stream http://puu.sh/iGOrN/14e44c0775.jpg
  3. 00:18:136 (6) - Kinda overmap imo, I'm not sure what are you mapped there
  4. 01:08:044 - Add more note there? it's like a triplet might sounds good following that drums spam like this 01:08:322 (5,6,7) -
[]
Overall is good, goodluck :)
RVMathew
991 posts
Joined December 2013
RVMathew
Hi there. Sorry for my very late reply.

Note that what I say is my opinion, so you do not have to follow what I say.

Changes are separated into boxes.

Video and background
You asked for a video, and I managed to find one. You may have to find someone else who can try and reduce the filesize while at the same time improving the quality.
http://puu.sh/iLneL/43b44c2527.mp4

Background: You can either use this one: http://gallery.minitokyo.net/download/666825, or do a screenshot of the op and use that as the background.
Metadata
1) Add Tags, including guest mappers, Nisekoi 2nd season etc.

2) I am not sure myself, but I think that the artist will be Kosaki Onodera(CV: Kana Hanazawa), since it is a character based theme song, and most maps on osu which use character based theme songs uses the character's name followed by the voice actor's name.

Hitsounds
May I suggest some hitsounds to liven up your beatmap? This may be useful for the Normal+ difficulty, but you can use for your difficulties if you want to.

After 00:12:580
- Hitclap: http://puu.sh/iLoiA/f28e421b82.wav
- Hitwhistle: http://puu.sh/iLoC8/f7c3ac96fb.wav
-

Normal
Seems fine to me.

Kuuhaku`s Normal+
1) Circle size: Compared to the normal difficulty, which has a circle size of 3.5, this one has a circle size of 3. Since a normal+ difficulty can be considered as a light hard, you can either change the CS to 3.5 to match the normal difficulty, or change it to 4.0. I would personally like it to be circle size 3.5 :cry: , but you can change it according to your preference.

2) Overall difficulty is lower than normal (OD 4 compared to you difficulty which is OD 3). I would up the overall difficulty to either 4 or 5.

3) 00:00:729 Make it a new combo.

4) 00:09:247 The spinner should not start here as right now it does not work with the rhythm well. I suggest moving it so that the spinner starts at 00:09:617 and then ends at 00:10:728. If you do this change then at 00:09:247 do a repeating slider like this.
SPOILER

5) 00:11:840 Should not be a new combo. Speaking of combo, when you are finished, redo the combos and either make new combo's every 4 or 8 beats. Some of the combo's do not seem consistent.

6) 00:12:581 After this point, the hitsounding is off. For example you do not use claps every 2nd and 4th beats, and you abuse the finish hitsound in the wrong way.
- Claps: Every 2nd and 4th beat.
- Add hitfinishes at times such as: 00:12:581 00:24:433 00:39:247 00:51:099 to name a few.
- Add hitwhistles where you see fit.

7) 00:15:729 Just move the back end of slider 4 a little bit down like so; the mid section is touching slider 2 right now so it does not look that good.
SPOILER

8) 00:20:822 The blanket does not look good right now. Try and fix it like this.
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9) 00:59:988 There should be a note added here. Make this a new combo as well.
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10) 01:13:229 The spinner should end here.

11) 00:39:247 Add kiai time till 00:51:007 and then add kiai time from 00:51:099 to 01:01:285. This is for consistency between all difficulties.

Mochi's (Momochikun's) Hard
00:50:266: This area is giving me trouble as it does not feel like a perfect fit to the rhythm although it does work. Try extending the slider at 00:49:988 so it ends at 00:50:359. If this one does not work your current one will be fine.

Insane
1) This applies to Moecho's difficulty as well. 00:00:359 The slider length does not feel right as in it does not go well with the rhythm. I would either reduce the slider length so the slider ends at 00:00:544 or just use a note and place it on top of the next slider.

2) 00:03:599 Did not expect that jump when playing. It does work so you can keep it for now.

3) 00:55:822 I think that this way looks better and has flow in mind.
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Moecho's Styling
1) Suggestion for difficulty name: 1) Magical Pâtissière Moecho-Chan 2) Magical Girl Moecho

2) 01:13:229 Spinner should end here. In addition make sure the timing point also is at 01:13:229

3) 00:00:359 The slider length does not feel right as in it does not go well with the rhythm. I would either reduce the slider length so the slider ends at 00:00:544 or just use a note and place it on top of the next slider.

4) 00:11:840 New combo. Just make sure that every combo is either 4 or 8 beats long after everything is done.

5) 00:39:247 Add kiai time till 00:51:007 and then add kiai time from 00:51:099 to 01:01:285. This is for consistency between all difficulties.

Final thoughts: As of now everything is on the right track. Just make sure that for all of the difficulties, you either go with a new combo every 4 or 8 beats, because right now it is not consistent. I preferred the Normal and Hard difficulty.

Good luck and sorry for the late reply.
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