This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, 27 January 2015 at 2:18:30 AM

Artist: Twintails
Title: Twintails Dreamer!
Source: 俺、ツインテールになります。
BPM: 198
Filesize: 21050kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.59 stars, 92 notes)
2. Hard (3.32 stars, 201 notes)
3. Normal (2.13 stars, 130 notes)

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Modding time!

[Hard]

00:25:398 (1) - Switch 2 and 1 around, check your distance snap.

00:27:671 (4) - Try doing like so;

SPOILER

00:28:580 (2) - Make the slider shorter until the end is on the white tick

00:29:490 (5) - Random slow slider?

00:32:368 (1) - Try this;

SPOILER

00:43:733 (2) - Try this;

SPOILER

00:51:157 (1,2) - Two ticks forward

01:01:308 (1) - Try;

SPOILER

01:02:521 (5) - Move one tick forward, 1 less repeater

01:07:369 (6) - This fits more;

SPOILER

01:10:551 - Move spinner 2 forward, add a note

01:12:975 - ^

01:17:369 (4) - This should make it better

SPOILER

01:19:490 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - Make all the sliders in this part end and start on white ticks, it will sound better, trust me

01:24:945 - add note

01:25:096 - add note

01:26:687 (1) - remove spinner here

thx

Hey you posted in my modding que, so here i am!

EASY

00:11:005 - This is a easy difficulty, don't stack notes yet
00:12:672 - This spinner is a bit soon after the previous slider, maybe make it longer to compensate for that
00:30:551 - i say move this to around x:236 y:172 to remove the stacking
00:41:005 - move this to x:160 y:312
00:51:308 - add another reverse arrow to this slider
00:57:217 - move this slider to 00:56:763 and then add a circle at 00:57:217
01:01:763 - move this to x:400 y:224
01:19:187 - dont put objects so soon after spinners in low diffs, either replace the spinner with a slider or remove it completely
01:25:702 - don't make ninja spinners please

NORMAL

First off, what really caught my attention in the beginning was that the longer sliders were curved, but the shorter ones had a sharp angle / corner in them. I don't really like this as it doesn't make the map feel consistent so i recommend changing either one type of them to the other so the map feels more like a whole

00:12:369 - you can extend this to 00:14:642 to prevent a ninja spinner feel
00:30:551 - i recommend moving this to around x:124 y:224 to get a better flow
Entire song - the stacking isn't nessecary, overall a nice difficulty though

HARD

00:12:369 - again, lengthen the spinner to 00:14:642
01:11:611 - [1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6] move this entire combo down a bit so that hit object 6 doesn't almost fall off the screen
01:17:975 - don't do ninja spinners, for this one just make a nice longer slider
01:26:763 - maybe add a circle at x:256 y:192

Some jumps in hard are a little bit long, which is good but be careful with that as it's only hard, not insane.
I also say that you maybe get someone to GD a insane difficulty because that will make the mapset feel more professional.
Also i say that you put the hp drain down, or put OD down by 1.

Good luck getting this ranked!

i took most of the advice thanks for the mod

General

1. Are you using the video? I don't see it them lol
2. You need add more tags man, like album name (if this song have...) songwritter, etc

Easy

1. 00:11:308 (3) - Remove the reverse arrow, sounds a bit off with the music, when you do that, add a note here in 00:12:369 with a finish
2. 00:47:672 (3) - Extend this slider 1/1, here in 00:48:278
3. 01:03:278 (2) - Add a finish here
4. 01:04:490 (3) - Spacing
5. 01:21:914 (1,2) - This sounds off in my opinion, extend these sliders to the next white tick, like this
6. 01:25:702 (1) - Replace this finish for a whistle

Normal

1. The SV is the same like Easy, well is not a big deal but in your future maps try to rise more the SV in Normal difficulties
2. Disable the Countdown
3. 00:30:551 (4) - Remove this clap because sounds loud
4. 00:31:308 (1) - Try this rhythm
5. 01:02:066 (4) - Remove the clap please
6. 01:11:763 (7) - Add a new combo to keep your pattern
7. 01:26:611 (x) - Same suggestion about this spinner

Hard

1. 00:35:096 (5) - Try this
2. 00:45:096 (x) - Add a note here with a finish please
3. 00:52:521 - So, you're using Kiai in this difficulty, why you don't use kiai in the others difficulties maybe?
4. 01:09:187 (2) - Spacing
5. 01:26:611 (x) - Same suggestion about this spinner

Well the map needs more work, some rhythms are so confusing when you play, so, don't give up and work more harder to get your map ranked

Good luck

Hitsound Mod request from my Modding Queue

osuu~
Here is my mod as request :


that's it, if u want a quick recheck, u can catch me in-game... ^^
GL for hitsounding....
i honestly dont really like the current hitsound XD since you are trying to make your own rhythm yet it doesnt feels right along with the music itself ^^'

From my modding queue!




Sorry if the normal and hard mode mods look copy and pasted, but that's how they are. They have the same problems, however hard has less problems than normal. Your biggest problem is the slider lengths will all difficulties and missed beats. Sorry if this mod REALLY disappointed you, but I can't do much until the timing, spacing, and combos have been fixed. However, your map is really ONLY has those problems. Fix all of those then I can help a lot more. Speaking of which, I give you ticket so you can have me mod your map (even if my queue is closed) later when you have fixed these problems. Just post in my queue and say "I'm ready for more " and I will come mod it again. However, make SURE you have fixed the problems I have listed before calling. Don't give up mapping and good luck on your map! Also try and get a background for your map.

yo thanks alot for the mod

Xelasto wrote:

From my modding queue!

Easy

00:01:308 (2,1) - Stack perfectly
00:03:430 - Add a note here
00:03:884 (2) - Make this slider longer
00:05:854 - Add a note
00:07:066 - ^
00:07:521 (2,3) - Move 3 so 2 and 3 blanket each other (I'm assuming you know what blanketing is)
00:08:278 - Add a note
00:08:581 (3) - Make this slider longer by 2 ticks on the timeline
00:24:945 (2) - Move this to 00:24:945 and add a note at 00:25:702.
00:26:460 (3,4) - Don't let these touch.
00:28:581 (1) - Make this slider longer by 2 ticks on the timeline
00:31:308 (1) - Make this slider shorter on the grid.
00:32:672 (2) - Get rid of the repeat.
00:33:733 (3) - Make this slider shorter on the grid.
00:37:672 (2) - Make this slider shorter by 2 ticks on the timeline.
00:38:581 - Add a note
00:41:308 (2) - This is just way too long
00:46:308 (2) - Make shorter on grid
00:48:884 (1) - Make this longer.
00:54:339 - Add a note
00:56:763 (3,4) - The placement on the timeline is all wrong. Move them to match the song
00:57:672 (5) - Make this a slider like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2604831
00:58:430 (1) - Make longer by two ticks on timeline
01:04:036 - Add note
01:04:490 (3) - Make shorter on the grid.
01:07:672 - Add note
01:14:036 (2) - Make shorter on grid.
01:17:369 (2) - Get rid of repeat
01:18:430 (3,4) - Make these 2 a slider.
01:18:960 (1) - Move this back 2 ticks on the timeline.
01:19:793 - Add note
01:24:945 (4) - Shorten by 2 ticks on timeline.
HP drain should be 2, circle size 3, Approach rate 3, and overall difficulty 2.

Sadly, the length of nearly all the sliders are all wrong, and you are also missing a lot of beats . The combos are also not so good. You should really get some more mods. Sorry.

ive apllied these changes though im not quite sure what you mean by make shorter on grid. ive also gotten rid of most of the sharp angled sliders

Normal

It'll take me forever to list all the problems, so I will only say the general problems from now on.

Alot of slider lengths are still too long or too short.
00:12:369 - This should be a note, then a slider comes after it.
The spacing is all wrong (use distance snap)
There are quite a few missed beats, especially at the end.
Some combos are still wrong.
Some notes are not snapped (Check AImod)

im having trouble working out the timing and lengthes of sliders

Hard

Some slider lengths are still too long or too short.
The spacing is still wrong (use distance snap)
01:05:324 (3) - Sliders like these aren't necessary
Some combos are still wrong.
Some notes are not snapped (Check AImod)

ive play tested the hard alot and it doesnt feel good to play so i might redo the entire thing :/

Sorry if the normal and hard mode mods look copy and pasted, but that's how they are. They have the same problems, however hard has less problems than normal. Your biggest problem is the slider lengths will all difficulties and missed beats. Sorry if this mod REALLY disappointed you, but I can't do much until the timing, spacing, and combos have been fixed. However, your map is really ONLY has those problems. Fix all of those then I can help a lot more. Speaking of which, I give you ticket so you can have me mod your map (even if my queue is closed) later when you have fixed these problems. Just post in my queue and say "I'm ready for more " and I will come mod it again. However, make SURE you have fixed the problems I have listed before calling. Don't give up mapping and good luck on your map! Also try and get a background for your map.

mod hasn't disapointed me hope you can help me out in the future though ty