Petit Rabbit's - Daydream cafe · forum

Momochikun

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Momochikun 2014-03-27T11:04:15+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, October 12, 2014 at 3:47:23 AM

Artist: Petit Rabbit's
Title: Daydream cafe
Source: ご注文はうさぎですか？
Tags: Is the Order a Rabbit ? Gochuumon wa Usagi Desu ka? opening white fox Ayane Sakura Inori Minase Risa Taneda Satomi Satou Maaya Uchida sekai sekai-nyan kantokun
BPM: 150
Filesize: 17629kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

Insane (3.72 stars, 288 notes)
Kanto's Hard (3.08 stars, 232 notes)
Normal (1.86 stars, 131 notes)
Sekai's Easy (1.36 stars, 99 notes)

Download: Petit Rabbit's - Daydream cafe
Download: Petit Rabbit's - Daydream cafe (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#21 ご注文はうさぎですか？ OP
Moe usagi anime _(:3 」∠)_ , mp3 by Vicho
Hard - Kantokun
Easy - Sekai

Enjoy ~

||Click Here for the ED||

Last edited by Momochikun 2014-10-11T19:50:21+00:00, edited 21 times in total.

Fumika

1,425 posts

Joined November 2011

Fumika 2014-03-27T12:22:10+00:00

BPM : 150 , offset : 1205

dityasan123

4 posts

Joined October 2012

dityasan123 2014-04-06T07:31:43+00:00

Anyone have lyric of this song?

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2014-04-20T04:01:08+00:00

I want make gd...My daydream cafe's hard is give to others... XD
offset 1582 it must be 1582
[Insane]
00:07:205 (3,4,5,6,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529314 ? this rhythme show the bass
00:14:205 (3) - Ctrl+G?
00:15:205 (3,4,1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529323
00:24:205 (2,5,6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529325
00:27:005 (4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529327
00:30:005 (5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529332
00:35:005 (1) - Ctrl+G
00:35:605 (2) - 332,284
00:36:605 (3,4,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529335
00:39:405 (5,7) - swap?
00:40:405 (3,4) - swap
00:53:405 (3) - Ctrl+G?
01:16:605 (1) - Ctrl+G?
>01:17:005 (2) - 196,300
01:19:805 (1) - Ctrl+J
01:27:605 (5,6) - same with 01:26:405 (1,2,3,4) -
[Normal]
01:12:005 (2) - not blanked well
[Sekai's Easy]
S:C1 please
00:06:805 (5) - couldn't understand
00:55:805 (3,1) - ^ try 3 add a reverse and add a note at 00:57:405 -
00:58:605 (5) - Shorter 1/2?
00:44:805 (4) - not blanked well
There are some edge adhesion like 00:33:605 (1,2) - ,I think if divide if overlap

Meg

1,619 posts

Joined August 2012

Meg 2014-04-20T11:10:07+00:00

from in-game chat
a little.
General

Tags : add "kantokun"
Song setup's design : remove "widescreen support" (Easy and hard)
maybe offset isn't a little correct...? I think 1595~1600 Ask other modder.

Sekai's Easy

00:10:805 (4) - x:288 y140
00:14:005 (4) - NC･･･because Accent
00:58:605 (3) - start 00:58:805 -
01:11:605 (5) - add NC

Normal

00:12:605 (1) - remove NC
01:12:005 (2) - x:64 y:296
01:23:605 (4) - I think ↓ is good. but not important
image

Kanto's Hard

OD7→OD6
why is not there kiai times on this diff?
00:11:193 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think hard to see..?
00:18:793 (4,1,2) - Ctrl+G
00:32:393 (1) - remove NC
01:18:293 (4) - hard to play.
01:28:193 (1,2,3) - a little far...?

Insane

00:18:405 (1) - let's beautifully. x:149 y:26
00:28:605 (1) - Ctrl+G
00:41:205 (3) - x:220 y:328
01:12:005 (4) - NC. and 01:12:805 (1) - add NC
01:16:605 (1) - I think is not good flow.
SPOILER

good luck!!

KantoKun

1,114 posts

Joined December 2011

KantoKun 2014-04-21T09:18:57+00:00

iMage-- wrote:
from in-game chat

Kanto's Hard
OD7→OD6
why is not there kiai times on this diff? need more epic www
00:11:193 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think hard to see..? test first before modding , hard to see only in edit mode ;w;
00:18:793 (4,1,2) - Ctrl+G fix
00:32:393 (1) - remove NC ^
01:18:293 (4) - hard to play. ^
01:28:193 (1,2,3) - a little far...? just want hard part in this diff
good luck!!

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Gochuumon.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 58493
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.199999

[Metadata]
Title:Daydream cafe (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Daydream café (TV Size)
Artist:Petit Rabbit's
ArtistUnicode:Petit Rabbit's
Creator:Momochikun
Version:Kanto's Hard
Source:ご注文はうさぎですか？
Tags:Gochuumon wa Usagi Desu ka? opening white fox Ayane Sakura Inori Minase Risa Taneda Satomi Satou Maaya Uchida sekai sekai-nyan
BeatmapID:407288
BeatmapSetID:160559

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Moe BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Frostings

913 posts

Joined May 2013

Frostings 2014-05-01T23:26:36+00:00

hi there ~ from my queue

small suggestion (feel free to ignore)
highly recommend (please consider)
unrankable (must fix)

[General]
Hard offset doesn't match with rest of difficulties

[Insane]
00:06:205 (1,2,3) - try this for circular flow + layout improvement http://puu.sh/8vm6g.jpg
00:08:005 (1,2) - maybe try http://puu.sh/8vmxP.jpg for better flow, and then ctrl + G 00:08:805 (3,4) - (only if you like circular flow)
00:42:205 (1) - i don't think NC is needed here because 00:41:605 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - these are linked
00:49:205 (1,3) - swap NC to get New combo on downbeat (long white tick)
^ also if you do above 00:50:205 (1) - remove NC here and swap NC 00:50:805 (1,2) - here and remove NC here 00:51:605 (1) -
01:09:405 (1) - maybe remove NC? unless some sort of effect?
01:22:405 (1) - ^
awesome difficulty!

[Hard]
missing kiai time !
00:01:005 (1,2,3) - unsnapped !
00:05:593 (1,3,1) - swap New Combo
00:32:393 (1) - remove NC
01:17:993 (3,4,1) - maybe a little overmapped? simpler might be better http://puu.sh/8vnYR.jpg
01:28:193 (1,2,3) - huge sudden spike in difficulty. I think you should make the jumps smaller or you'll make some people mad

[Normal]
00:34:805 (2,3) - blanket? http://puu.sh/8vo8h.jpg
00:47:805 (3,4) - also maybe better blanket here
00:59:205 (2) - NC? for start of kiai
01:11:405 (1,2) - blanket -> also 01:12:005 (2) - NC for kiai

[Easy]
00:05:605 - You're missing the main vocals in this part. try simplifying the rhythm while hitting the main vocals: http://puu.sh/8voLw.jpg
00:08:005 (1,2,3,4) - same as above. try http://puu.sh/8voXZ.jpg
00:30:405 - above try http://puu.sh/8vp68.jpg
00:35:005 - try mapping this tick, there's very strong vocal there
00:36:005 - above
00:38:205 - above
00:44:605 - ^
01:05:605 - try this rhythm http://puu.sh/8vpsa.jpg
01:15:205 - http://puu.sh/8vpxK.jpg
01:18:405 - http://puu.sh/8vpDh.jpg

hope it helps

Natsu

8,076 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-05-09T01:21:35+00:00

Hi

Mod Info:

Suggestions
You should consider
Unrankable

General:

weird BG dimensions <:
Inconsistency in PreviewTime, blame kantokun
Inconsistency in timing sections, blame kantokun
Inconsistency in Kiai Times, Blame Kantokun
Kantokun stop breaking all <3
stack leniency 3 is too low, use 5 instead? some stacks like 00:04:805 (1,2) - (Insane) are really hard to notice orz

Insane:

00:03:605 (4,5,1,2,1,2) - this combo spam is not even necessary, since the circles have almost the same spacing between them, plus this is a common pattern that can be readed properly without the spam and you know combo spam mess up the overall HP drain in the whole diff,that's why is better if you remove the unnecessary ones
00:10:005 (2,3,4) - - the rhythm here is not nice, also the jump from 2 to 3 doesn't have any clue from the music, If you notice the vocal at 00:10:205 should be mapped as slider head or a circle, since the stress in that vocal is really important, same goes for 00:10:805 -, about 00:10:405 and 00:10:605 doesn't have a prominent sound in the music, try this:
00:11:205 (1) - nazi, stack this 00:11:205 (1) - with 00:12:005 (2) - properly
00:13:705 even if this is rankable, personally I don't agree with 5% volume sections, as a player I need a indicator of finishing the slider, since is a rhythm game <:, maybe use 15% instead?, also you didn't use a 5% here 01:11:305
00:16:705 remove this circle? it doesn't have a prominent sound in the music, plus is the only one you used in this section. I feel it a bit random
00:21:605 (4) - stack this in 00:20:805 (1) - head? will improve the design, also it will play better, IMO
00:28:005 (3,1) - blanket pls
00:35:805 (3) - this is to close from 00:35:005 (1) - try to add more spacing like you did with 00:35:005 (1,2) -
00:38:205 (1,2,3,4) - this spacing is so confused, since it looks almost the same, but in the time line you have a big gap in 00:38:205 (1,2) - then 1/2 pattern in 00:38:605 (2,3) - and 1/4 jump in 00:38:805 (3,4) - try to rearrange the pattern to keep a more readable spacing <:
00:50:105 add a circle? since you're following the vocals, I don't see a reason to ignore this one
00:59:205 this should be NC, since the chorus of the song is starting here orz
01:12:005 same as above
01:28:705 add a spinner? it fit the song, also for variable scores

Hard:

you should use kiai like the other diffs, IMO
AR8 is too much for how you mapped this hard and the low bpm
OD7 also is too much for a hard diff and is making a bad spread with the normal diff, use OD6 pls
00:01:005 (1,2,3) - Unsnapped circles, also you have a wrong timing xD
why this have almost the same SV as the Insane?
00:09:393 (1,2,3) - use the same spacing between them? this will play a lot more comfortable IMO
00:23:993 (1) - try to stack this in the previous 00:22:993 (2) - tail, for better design?
00:24:593 (3,4,5) - I don't agree with this rhythm, since you're not stressing the strongs beats 00:24:793 - and 00:25:193 -, maybe try this instead:
00:30:393 (1,2) - this blanket is really off, use the approach circle of (2) to improve it
00:43:393 maybe just me, but I feel you should map this beat properly, since the vocal stress is really high there
01:06:393 (3) - mm not a fan of this kind of overlaps, is not better if you stack 01:06:393 (3) - with the previous 01:05:593 (1) - tail
01:25:793 missing NC, since you did a NC before in a similar section and the antijump need one too, IMO
01:28:693 same as Insane

Normal:

OD4 for better diff spread, actually the jump from normal to hard is really huge
00:15:205 (2,3) - spacing, if is on purpose this only minijump is a bit surprising and feel a bit random to get in a first play for a low skilled player
00:10:805 (5,1) - this blanket is really off, use the approach circle of (5) to improve it
00:13:705 unnecessary green line, better remove it :p
00:34:805 (2,3) - I'm sure you can make a better blanket here
00:51:405 (3) - maybe is a mistake? but try to stack this 00:51:405 (3) - with 00:53:205 (2,3) - for better design, also actually doesn't look nice
00:59:205 same as Insane, this should be NC, since the chorus is starting here
01:11:405 (1,2) - you can do a better blanket here too <:
01:12:005 same as 00:59:205

Easy;

00:01:605 (1,2,3) - I don't get what are you following here, since you can do a better rhythm who fit better the song at this point, maybe similar like this:
00:06:405 (4) - nothing in the music here, this is another section where you can improve your rhythm, since actually is a bit confused to say what are you following in this diff <:
00:09:605 same here this slider is starting with nothing in the music :l
00:16:005 (3) - same here with this slider end you are not getting any prominent sound from the music, remove the repeat and add a 1/2 slider, like this:
00:44:005 (2,3) - use a single slider instead, this part is kinda confused to play for a non experienced player
00:58:605 (3) - starting the chorus of the song in a slider end, doesn't fit the music properly, try 2 circles instead so you can have a better empathise in 00:59:205 -, also you will fix your combo pattern
01:11:305 unnecessary green line, pls remove it :3
01:15:205 (1) - this slider doesn't fit the music, for example the repeat is landing in a non prominent sound, try this instead:
01:18:405 similar as above, for this one try this:

GL

RandF

1,249 posts

Joined March 2013

RandF 2014-05-13T13:06:13+00:00

From my queue~

[General]

add guest name "Kantokun" for tags~
tags suggetion:
gochiusa
is the order a rabbit?

[Normal]

00:37:005 (1) - I prefer not to use reverse
00:56:405 (2,3) - because of not good flow of 00:55:805 (1) - , stack is a little difficult
00:57:205 (4) - instead, add a circle at 00:57:405

[Insane]

00:01:605 (1) - not reverse pattern is better, imo
00:12:605 (1,2) - I prefer the following
00:14:205 (3,1) - I suggest to decrease DS more
00:24:205 (2) - curve more for good flow
00:35:605 (2,3) - exchange their position
01:05:005 (1) - how about short slider?
01:10:205 (1,2) - I prefer this

[Sekai's Easy]

00:35:605 (3) - I prefer not to use reverse slider
01:25:005 (1) - not suit to vocal. delete?

[Kanto's Hard]

00:11:193 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - nice!
01:25:793 (3) - NC?

that's my latest favorite anime<3
~Good Luck~

Melophobia

osu! Alumni

2,230 posts

Joined September 2011

Melophobia 2014-05-26T11:51:17+00:00

[General]
You might as well add the translated source into the tags.

[Insane]
00:26:605 (3,4,5) - The volume setting of these notes are much higher than they need to be, considering there's no background music here. Same for 01:11:405 (1) - .
00:34:605 (4,5,1) - This jump is kind of uncomfortable to play imo because these notes are aligned. I'd suggest you to do something like this. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1645857
01:08:405 - Maybe add a drum-clap here? The percussion is somewhat different from the rest so i'd emphasize it with a different hitsound.
01:28:205 (1,2,3) - Instead of letting these 3 notes have finishes, how about removing finishes from each note and using normal sampleset for these 3? Having a finish only on (3) creates a good emphasis at the very last of the difficulty and the echo of normal finish would fit better with the melody imo.

[Hard]
01:05:605 - Add a finish here? Either normal or soft would be fine.
01:08:405 - Add a drum-clap here to differentiate the percussion which is somewhat different from the others. Same for 01:21:205 - .
01:26:005 - You probably forget to add a drum-clap here.
01:28:205 (1,2,3) - I'm afraid this jump is too large considering the level of this difficulty. And this is the very last of the difficulty so it's not a good place to put something too hard imo.
01:28:205 (1,2,3) - Same as Insane.

[Normal]
00:35:005 (3) - Make this slider more curved for a better blanket. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1645981

[Easy]
00:58:205 - Add a finish here.
00:58:605 (3) - How about shortening this slider by 1/2 beat and starting it from 00:58:805 - ? There's a significant sound on the white tick and i want you to follow it.
01:11:005 - Add a finish here.

KantoKun

1,114 posts

Joined December 2011

KantoKun 2014-05-26T12:41:41+00:00

SPOILER

Frostings wrote:
hi there ~ from my queue

[Hard]
missing kiai time !
00:01:005 (1,2,3) - unsnapped !
00:05:593 (1,3,1) - swap New Combo
00:32:393 (1) - remove NC
01:17:993 (3,4,1) - maybe a little overmapped? simpler might be better http://puu.sh/8vnYR.jpg
01:28:193 (1,2,3) - huge sudden spike in difficulty. I think you should make the jumps smaller or you'll make some people mad [/color}

SPOILER

Natsu wrote:
Hi

Inconsistency in PreviewTime, blame kantokun =[]=!!
Inconsistency in timing sections, blame kantokun =[]=!!
Inconsistency in Kiai Times, Blame Kantokun =[]=!!
Kantokun stop breaking all <3 =[]=!!

Hard:

you should use kiai like the other diffs, IMO fixed
AR8 is too much for how you mapped this hard and the low bpm ^
OD7 also is too much for a hard diff and is making a bad spread with the normal diff, use OD6 pls OK fixed
00:01:005 (1,2,3) - Unsnapped circles, also you have a wrong timing xD
why this have almost the same SV as the Insane? insane is 1.5x , hard sv : 1.4 is very slow for me , blame insane :p
00:09:393 (1,2,3) - use the same spacing between them? this will play a lot more comfortable IMO fixed
00:23:993 (1) - try to stack this in the previous 00:22:993 (2) - tail, for better design? no ;___;
00:24:593 (3,4,5) - I don't agree with this rhythm, since you're not stressing the strongs beats 00:24:793 - and 00:25:193 -, maybe try this instead: ok fixed
00:30:393 (1,2) - this blanket is really off, use the approach circle of (2) to improve it OK
00:43:393 maybe just me, but I feel you should map this beat properly, since the vocal stress is really high there no comment...
01:06:393 (3) - mm not a fan of this kind of overlaps, is not better if you stack 01:06:393 (3) - with the previous 01:05:593 (1) - tail OK!
01:25:793 missing NC, since you did a NC before in a similar section and the antijump need one too, IMO ^!!
01:28:693 same as Insane short spinner is hard to play by mouse but OK!!
GL thanks!!

SPOILER

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~

[Kanto's Hard]
00:11:193 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - nice! thanks!!
01:25:793 (3) - NC? fixed on Natsu modding!!
that's my latest favorite anime<3
~Good Luck~

SPOILER

Melophobia wrote:
[General]
You might as well add the translated source into the tags.

[Hard]
01:05:605 - Add a finish here? Either normal or soft would be fine. fixed!!
01:08:405 - Add a drum-clap here to differentiate the percussion which is somewhat different from the others. Same for 01:21:205 - . ^
01:26:005 - You probably forget to add a drum-clap here. ^
01:28:205 (1,2,3) - I'm afraid this jump is too large considering the level of this difficulty. And this is the very last of the difficulty so it's not a good place to put something too hard imo. ^
01:28:205 (1,2,3) - Same as Insane. OK!!

SPOILER

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Momochikun

1,944 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Momochikun 2014-05-26T13:57:41+00:00

Thanks for the mod melo ! fixed everything except for that drum-clap on Insane diff, i think they didn't fit really well there ><
Updated Easy too since Sekai is busy lately and she told me to fix her diff.

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,061 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2014-05-30T12:39:15+00:00

Yo, as requested.

[General]

Disable the widescreen support since it makes no sense to keep them enabled. As we all know, it's for widescreen SB only!
Seems like your BG size is bit diffferent from the recommended one. See for yourself, hopefuly you can fix that!

[Sekai's Easy]

Your rhythm feels quite choppy, it may be rather hard for beginners to deal with it and to play it properly. Reducing OD may help them to stay alive. Have some mercy, be gentle with the beginners!
00:02:280 (2,1) - minor - the overlap is quite obvious and doesn't look really neat. Try to avoid it, since it looks out of your style and makes map appear quite messy, wich isn't so good.
00:12:880 (3,1) - (1) is way too close, so players may simpli ignore (4) and click (1) right away! It happens due to yoor flow, which feels broken and a bit unnatural here. Try to make this pattern more intuitively playable! Here's an example
Note: although I gave you an example, it would be better to re-arrange the whole pattern to make it more playable!
00:43:880 - would be better to have the vocals here emphasized with an 1/2 slider. Just like you did it with the previous slider. Here, have an example to understand my suggestion better.
00:51:880 (3,1) - the 3/2 gap doesn't plays really good. Replacing 00:51:880 (3) - with an 1/2 slider would fit + you could fix the blanket.
Note: why does the 3/2 gap feels confusing? See this for more details!
01:24:480 (3,4) - that is the only 1/2 pattern in the whole diff and I really doubt its playability. Consider avoiding it, if it is possible, so the rhythm will be more consistent and playable!

To be honest, I've got a feeling that you could do it better. Nice hitsounds and neat comboing but your rhythm and flow need some more work. I believe, that you can do it on your own, however, feel free to poke me for a detailed flow-mod if you agree with me!

[Normal]

00:12:480 (1) - replacing the slider with 1/1 slider and a circle would be great and fit with the drums better. After the changes, the whole pattern will look like [urlhttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1658903]this[/url].
Note: putting a new combo on 00:13:280 will help you to represent the vocals and it also looks really cool.
00:25:480 (3) - Ohh. the slider does not fit with the vocals well. Consider using two 1/2 sliders instead, they will fit with that "pyon~pyon" really cool and give you consistent and enjoyable rhythm! Here, have an example!
Note: 01:24:480 (1) - pretty similar thing, huh?
00:55:680 (1,2,3) - minor - the overlap feels out of your style. You didn't used anything like this earlier and it looks rather unpolished, consider avoiding this one to keep your pattrens more readable and neat!

Good job with the diff, I do like what you've got here, but getting a few more mods wouldn't hurt just to make sure that those minor rhythm mistakes are gone/playable.

[Kanto's Hard]

00:07:880 (1,2) - the DS here is different from what you've used previously and it makes the pattern rather confusing. There's no any reason to change DS, so it feels more like a spacing mistake. Please, consider fixing that!
00:21:480 (3,4) - x3.0 DS jump here does not feel necessary. The song is quite calm at this part, therefore using this huge DS for this pattern should be avoided.
00:31:280 (4,1) - and here, jump could fit, but you keep the DS consistent. Try to place a jump, so the vocals will be emphasized.
Note: seems like you misunderstand the idea of jumps. Jumps should be placed only when there's something that needs to be pointed out somehow, therefore jumps represent the music. Placing jumps when the music is calm and consistent is confusing and NOT recommended to anyone because it makes patterns unplayable.

So yeah, the jumps seem to be the most iimportant problem of this diff, imo. Please, consider fixing them and if you have any problems with them - feel free to contact me!

[Insane]

00:26:480 (3) - guess, this needs a new combo since it actually feels like you're missing one and it's hard to read the rhythm changes without a new combo here!
Note: 00:59:080 (3) - 01:11:880 (4) - same again. This time it's also a beginning of kiai, which means that NC here is really necessary!

The mapset in general is not bad, but your guest diffs could need some more modding because they've got some issues, which I'd really like to see fixed. Keep up the good work!

~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

Rare

1,118 posts

Joined August 2010

Rare 2014-05-31T10:53:13+00:00

from my modding queue
there is a little difference because of the update.

Rare's Modding
[Easy]
00:04:680 (1,2,3,4,5) - pref this http://puu.sh/98M1F.jpg
00:32:480 (4) - remove whistle to head then add to whistle to end because there is an accent on the end.
00:38:480 (3) - not fit to clap here. pref remove.
00:39:880 (1,2,3) - not good flow. try this pattern. http://puu.sh/98MqP.jpg
00:49:480 (1,2,3,1) - try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1661877
01:05:480 (1,2) - not fit to music. try this http://puu.sh/98MH2.jpg
01:08:680 (1) - 1/2 slider is better.
01:11:180 - don't need green line

[Normal]
00:31:680 (4) - pref NC because i think you change follow vocal from music.
00:57:080 (4) - you had better aligned with the (3).
01:06:280 (3,4,5,6) - if you follow vocal, pls try this. http://puu.sh/98Nfm.jpg

[Hard]
00:13:580 - don't need line
00:19:079 (1) - unsapped to end.
00:26:480 (1,2,3) - noisy a bit. pref 40~45%.
00:29:080 (2,3) - Ctrl+G? i think flow becomes better. http://puu.sh/98NsA.jpg
00:52:880 (1,2) - i don't like very much there clap. pref remove clap.
00:59:080 (1) - why did you add to sampleset-normal to head?
01:11:680 (2,3) - same as 00:52:880 (1,2) -
01:28:080 (1,2,3) - little noisy.

[Insane]
00:16:680 (1) - pref add whistle to end.
00:25:480 (1,2,3) - i want to prepare the spacing.
00:48:680 (3,4,5,6,1) - overmapping imo. pref don't use stream here.
00:52:980 - add note
00:55:680 (1) - not fit to music end clap.
01:21:180 (3) - little overmap. pref change to note to 01:21:280 -here.
01:25:880 (1) - why suddenly speed up here? not fit to music.

Sinch's Testplay
[Sekai’s Easy]
looks like normal.
00:52:480 (1,2) - little weird.
00:56:880 (1) - little weird too, but you don't have to fix.
01:05:480 (1,2) - same as above.
01:17:880 (3) - same as above
01:24:880 (3) - nazi, i don't need repeat.

[Normal]
01:19:680 (3) - pref this pattern http://puu.sh/98OTn.jpg

[Kanto’s Hard]
looks like harder, also SV is little high.

[Insane]
nothing to say.

KantoKun

1,114 posts

Joined December 2011

KantoKun 2014-05-31T23:55:44+00:00

SPOILER

-Bakari- wrote:
Yo, as requested.

Good job with the diff, I do like what you've got here, but getting a few more mods wouldn't hurt just to make sure that those minor rhythm mistakes are gone/playable. [/list]

[Kanto's Hard]
00:07:880 (1,2) - the DS here is different from what you've used previously and it makes the pattern rather confusing. There's no any reason to change DS, so it feels more like a spacing mistake. Please, consider fixing that! OK
00:21:480 (3,4) - x3.0 DS jump here does not feel necessary. The song is quite calm at this part, therefore using this huge DS for this pattern should be avoided. fixed
00:31:280 (4,1) - and here, jump could fit, but you keep the DS consistent. Try to place a jump, so the vocals will be emphasized.
Note: seems like you misunderstand the idea of jumps. Jumps should be placed only when there's something that needs to be pointed out somehow, therefore jumps represent the music. Placing jumps when the music is calm and consistent is confusing and NOT recommended to anyone because it makes patterns unplayable.

So yeah, the jumps seem to be the most iimportant problem of this diff, imo. Please, consider fixing them and if you have any problems with them - feel free to contact me!
~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

SPOILER

Rare wrote:
from my modding queue
there is a little difference because of the update.

Rare's Modding

[Hard]
00:13:580 - don't need line ??
00:19:079 (1) - unsapped to end.[/color]
00:26:480 (1,2,3) - noisy a bit. pref 40~45%.
00:29:080 (2,3) - Ctrl+G? i think flow becomes better. http://puu.sh/98NsA.jpg OK fixed
00:52:880 (1,2) - i don't like very much there clap. pref remove clap.
00:59:080 (1) - why did you add to sampleset-normal to head? normal-hitfinish
01:11:680 (2,3) - same as 00:52:880 (1,2) - OK
01:28:080 (1,2,3) - little noisy. melo suggest me to make that wwww

Sinch's Testplay

[Kanto’s Hard]
looks like harder, also SV is little high. www

SPOILER

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TitleUnicode:Daydream café (TV Size)
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ArtistUnicode:Petit Rabbit's
Creator:Momochikun
Version:Kanto's Hard
Source:ご注文はうさぎですか？
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Momochikun

1,944 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Momochikun 2014-06-02T14:51:08+00:00

-Bakari- wrote:
Yo, as requested.

[General]
Disable the widescreen support since it makes no sense to keep them enabled. As we all know, it's for widescreen SB only!
Seems like your BG size is bit diffferent from the recommended one. See for yourself, hopefuly you can fix that!
Done both !

[Normal]
00:12:480 (1) - replacing the slider with 1/1 slider and a circle would be great and fit with the drums better. After the changes, the whole pattern will look like [urlhttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1658903]this[/url]. yep fixed
Note: putting a new combo on 00:13:280 will help you to represent the vocals and it also looks really cool.
00:25:480 (3) - Ohh. the slider does not fit with the vocals well. Consider using two 1/2 sliders instead, they will fit with that "pyon~pyon" really cool and give you consistent and enjoyable rhythm! Here, have an example! somehow it's play weird ><
Note: 01:24:480 (1) - pretty similar thing, huh?
00:55:680 (1,2,3) - minor - the overlap feels out of your style. You didn't used anything like this earlier and it looks rather unpolished, consider avoiding this one to keep your pattrens more readable and neat! ok

Good job with the diff, I do like what you've got here, but getting a few more mods wouldn't hurt just to make sure that those minor rhythm mistakes are gone/playable.

[Insane]
00:26:480 (3) - guess, this needs a new combo since it actually feels like you're missing one and it's hard to read the rhythm changes without a new combo here it was did on personal purpose :3
Note: 00:59:080 (3) - 01:11:880 (4) - same again. This time it's also a beginning of kiai, which means that NC here is really necessary!
The mapset in general is not bad, but your guest diffs could need some more modding because they've got some issues, which I'd really like to see fixed. Keep up the good work!

~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

Rare wrote:
from my modding queue
there is a little difference because of the update.

[Normal]
00:31:680 (4) - pref NC because i think you change follow vocal from music. i set my NC per 2 stanz here
00:57:080 (4) - you had better aligned with the (3). k
01:06:280 (3,4,5,6) - if you follow vocal, pls try this. http://puu.sh/98Nfm.jpg prefer mine ><

[Insane]
00:16:680 (1) - pref add whistle to end ok nice !
00:25:480 (1,2,3) - i want to prepare the spacing.
00:48:680 (3,4,5,6,1) - overmapping imo. pref don't use stream here. but the vocal goes all way 1/4 ;w;
00:52:980 - add note why.. ?
00:55:680 (1) - not fit to music end clap. removed
01:21:180 (3) - little overmap. pref change to note to 01:21:280 -here. hmm yeah agree
01:25:880 (1) - why suddenly speed up here? not fit to music.

Sinch's Testplay
[Normal]
01:19:680 (3) - pref this pattern http://puu.sh/98OTn.jpg ok !

Thanks a lot ~ updated !

edit : thanks for checking wkyik !, also thanks for mod chata, fix stuffs on my Insane :3

Last edited by Momochikun 2014-06-11T13:17:57+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2014-06-02T16:07:50+00:00

as your req
mod too poor and can't find any mistake so no kd plzzzz

[Hard]
00:19:079 (1) - object end unsnap orz~~~

Abe Nana

1,148 posts

Joined March 2011

Abe Nana 2014-06-10T14:03:40+00:00

Hi. From -Chata- & K.P's Modding Queue∩(＞‿＜*)∩

[General]

Preview Point putting it on here. you'll get better IMO 00:58:480
add "OP" in tags for searching in-game

[Sekai's Easy]

00:09:080 (3,4) - Make more blanket. Is now doesn't keep spacing.
00:15:880 (3) - Same as first suggestion.
01:05:480 (1) - It doesn't fit with song. You can try like this http://puu.sh/9ngYK/08a8aab135.jpg

[Normal]

00:10:680 (5,1) - 00:12:280 (2,1) - Swap a new combo. Is now not good visually in my opinion.
00:22:880 (4,5) - Ctrl + G. It doesn't fit with song. If you change the order of slider and circle. Same as 00:15:880 (3,4,5)
00:31:680 (4) - Add a new combo here. Following so far your new combo pattern.
00:58:480 (1,2) - Swap a new combo. Emphasis on the beginning of the KIAI. Get be nice in my opinion.
01:03:680 (4) - Same as just above. Or can you follow first suggestion
01:04:280 (5) - Not fit with song also boring. How about this? http://puu.sh/9nisY/3b24c6346a.jpg
01:11:280 (1,2) - Same as 00:58:480 (1,2)

[Kanto's Hard]

00:00:880 (1,2,3) - Is it meaningful? Do not place the other 3 difficults. And containing the Anti-jump starting point is be hard to first playing
01:08:280 (4) - Not good Drum's clap x3x.
It is nice. I can't find any problem

[Insane]

01:03:680 (5,1) - Swap a new combo get nice IMO
Lovely difficulty.

It's over. Sorry to my poor mod.

ミ☆
\ Good luck! /

-Nanaka-

815 posts

Joined July 2013

-Nanaka- 2014-06-17T22:18:08+00:00

Pretty my angel

I'm sorry for being late

[Sekai]
OD+1?

00:15:880 (3) - ??? Rhythm is unstable
SPOILER
01:05:480 (1,2) - Not fit Either below 01:18:280 (1,2,3) - The same as here
SPOILER

[Nomarl]
fine

[Kanto]

00:12:080 (6) - bad flow 00:12:280 (7) - Stack?
01:11:680 (2,3) - not fit Clap...If you put Sampleset Drum Clap
01:28:580 (1) - I will be surprised of this spinner speed suddenly,RemoveSpinner

[Insane]
Test play

SPOILER

00:25:080 (5,6) - Ctrl+G The more fun you have
00:28:480 (1) - Beautiful little more!
SPOILER
01:01:480 (3,4,5,6) - I felt uncomfortable in jump,How about this?
SPOILER
01:07:680 (4) - Ctrl+J In the same coordinate! x248 y94
01:26:580 (2,4) - umm kick slider...？ usually is not?
SPOILER

Beautiful map set

fight♪。゜+.o((◕ฺ∀ ◕✿ฺ))o
mod time: 2 hours

alacat

osu! Alumni

3,872 posts

Joined May 2011

alacat 2014-08-31T14:13:07+00:00

Melophobia

osu! Alumni

2,230 posts

Joined September 2011

Melophobia 2014-09-15T16:12:39+00:00

Remove (TV Size) from the title and everything should be fine. Also you probably forgot to add the translated source. lol

EDIT: Additionally consider adding audio lead-in manually, currently it starts quite fast.

Melophobia

osu! Alumni

2,230 posts

Joined September 2011

Melophobia 2014-10-09T11:40:43+00:00

Sorry for the delay. ;_;;

Flask

Beatmap Nominator

3,466 posts

Joined July 2011

Flask 2014-10-11T08:44:00+00:00

[General]

There are two 'is the order a rabbit" in tags, we only one of them so remove the other one

[Insane]

00:35:946 (4) - The vocal here is kinda high-pitch, but you just place it with a smaller spacing (than 00:35:546 (2,3) - ). Try to place it with larger spacing to follow the vocal and emphasize it?
00:59:146 (3) - It's the start of kiai time here, a new combo might be great to separate the kiai part and the previous part I think
01:25:746 (1,2) - Make them parallel with each other, you can move (1)'s second node to x:220, y:60

[Normal]

01:05:946 (2) - This whistle sounds weird to me, perhaps it's because there is also a clap there. Better to remove it.

01:11:946 (2) - Holy shit so nazi move the last node to x:84 y:184 to get a better blanket
01:16:346 (2,3) - This blanket also can be improve though
01:23:946 - I feel like you shouldn't miss this point, the vocal goes intense here, so you should place something there to follow that. Perhaps you can add a reverse at 01:24:146 (5) -, and move it to 01:23:946 -. That won't be that hard I think, since they're just sliders, and the song itself is slow enough.

[Sekai's Easy]

00:11:946 (2,3) - Parallel with each other pls
01:02:346 (1,2,3) - It's hard to beat the rhythm like this correctly I think, try the rhythm like this: (this is the easiest and the fittest rhythm I can do, you can change to something easier in your way too)
01:23:346 (1,2,3) - eh
SPOILER

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