1. Hard (4,16 stars, 128 notes)
2. Normal (2,76 stars, 94 notes)

DnJeiser wrote:

Я хотел бы инсейн диффу сделать, можно?

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  wow ,a well mapped one.
  But the distance can be increase in some part.
  A nice StorBoard,it's fearsome indeed.
  These are my suggestions for you imo.

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  00:06:039 (1,2) - i think pulled apart a little bit.and so does 00:19:911 (1) -
  
  00:18:871 (2,3) - why not a consistancy of DS1.0x or higher.
  
  00:59:449 (2) - umm,make a blank with (3) here ?
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  01:02:917 (5,6) - i'd prefer a pair of sliders like this.
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  01:06:385 (6) - I just like to put a slider here,and also ,a clap on the head
  
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  01:07:079 (1,2,3) - another idea for SB , maybe apply a same effect like 01:07:079 (1) - to 01:07:773 (2) - and make the pic of the man bigger and bigger
  since the song need a fearsome feeling.
  
  01:27:888 (2,3) - try this pattern?
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  01:20:952 (1,2,3,4) - maybe this pattern can express the footprints of the stepping unknow shadow
  
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  Nice one.

TicClick wrote:

обязательно надо было обрезать самую классную часть, которая начинается дальше. Ещё мне кажется, что правильные артист и тайтл — Receptor и Lullaby соответственно.

mancuso_JM_ wrote:

Hi! From your queue! I'd like to do M4M with you

[General:]

• The Mp3 ends abruptly, in my opinion you should add a fade-out on it or do something like that to fix the problem, but actually sounds pretty bad.
• Uninherited Timing Point: The BPM is inconsistent between the difficulties and this is completely unranked. Make sure to use 86.50 in both difficulties because this BPM is the correct one (the used in Normal is just doubled)
(Make sure to use SV: 1.40 and Slider Tick Rate 2 in Normal after to change that)

[Normal:]

• 00:06:039 (1,2) - Add a Whistle in both Slider ends, it will follow the music closer, especially the piano.
• 00:17:831 (3,6) - Add Whistle in these notes too. If you listen the music properly you'll notice that the piano has a higher pitch in these Notes.
• 00:40:721 (3) - *Nazi* I think a Curve Slider will fit even better with the pattern. You should give it a try (maybe copy/pasting (1), etc.)
• 00:53:206 (1,2) - Hmm.. This pattern flow a bit weird actually. I think would be better if you try something like this instead

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• 01:01:530 (1,2) - Something like above, doing a Ctrl+G in (2) and moving this Slider some grids up you will be fixing the problem.
• 01:07:773 (2) - Add a Whistle at the head and tail of this Slider (? Actually sounds pretty empty, and I think if you add whistles here they will follow the music properly.

Last thing: For a variety in this Score you should add a Spinner. Following the music, you can maybe add a Spinner since 01:08:640 to 01:12:628

[Hard:]

• Settings:
--> Actually, for a better spread I'd reduce everything by tick (but not the Circle Size). In addition, AR8 is not needed for the low BPM and Slider Velocity, the OD in 7 doesn't represent really well the difficult of the map itself. (AR,OD,HP -1)

• 01:09:333 - For the variety in the Score, I think you can add a Spinner since here to 01:12:628.

- It looks mapped correct, I didn't like that much how you use the spacing in this difficulty, I think you could use more the distance snap sometimes. Anyways it doesn't flow that bad, but you could double check that by yourself.

The timing sounds weird actually, I think other check on it would be the best option.
That's all from me! Hope this can helps you!
Good Luck with your mapset!!

pife1 wrote:

Hi.
From your M4M
This map need a KIAI time?

In the Normal:
00:19:911 (1,2,3) - I think this part will be better like this
Image

Just it's a advice
00:43:148 (3) - Here, I have a question: this slider should be curved look like 00:42:108 (1) ?
00:56:674 (2) - Here also, this slider could be curved like 00:55:981 (1)

In the hard:
00:03:264 (1) - ctrl g
01:18:871 (2) - move to x:164 y: 28
01:19:565 (3) - ^ x: 232 y: 120
01:20:258 (4) - ^ x: 344 y: 60

I wrote these coordinates because of after break time the combo color is black and the sb is black too, that produce a bit of confusing or also you could apply new combo there

That's all , I am curious this song where is it from? because of produce some fear

Kenterz9 wrote:

From your request ~

Sorry, I haven't got anything to say, just that it's scary =D

So take a star =3

Good Luck *u*

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